And Did Those Feet, in Ancient Time

by TheLuckyPucker
Two Englishmen, Graham and Charlie, find themselves in Ponyville. My first story and I'm open to feedback/criticism

Graham, a middle aged hardware salesman from Peckham, and Charlie, a young school teacher from Dover, are stuck together in Equestria. Despite having little in common, the two will be spending a lot of time together as the only humans around.

(This is my first story, advice on how I can improve would be greatly appreciated)

Teen
Complete
Random
Alternate Universe
Human
Comedy
 

21748 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

9 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  2. Chapter 2 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  3. Chapter 3 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  4. Chapter 4 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  5. Chapter 5 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  6. Chapter 6 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  7. Chapter 7 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  8. Chapter 8 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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  9. Chapter 9 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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