
And Did Those Feet, in Ancient Time
Two Englishmen, Graham and Charlie, find themselves in Ponyville. My first story and I'm open to feedback/criticism
Graham, a middle aged hardware salesman from Peckham, and Charlie, a young school teacher from Dover, are stuck together in Equestria. Despite having little in common, the two will be spending a lot of time together as the only humans around.
(This is my first story, advice on how I can improve would be greatly appreciated)
21748 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
9 Chapters:
- Chapter 1 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2914
- Chapter 2 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1623
- Chapter 3 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2214
- Chapter 4 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1672
- Chapter 5 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3551
- Chapter 6 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2420
- Chapter 7 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2345
- Chapter 8 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1790
- Chapter 9 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3219