Chapters Prologue
Ponyville 8/27/2013 Twilight's library 4 PM
"Hey Fluttershy are you ready to go yet?" Asked Rainbow Dash as she enters Fluttershy's Cottage.
"Just a second I need to feed the critters.",Replied Fluttershy as she gives some birds seed to the birds and nuts to the squirrels.
"We gotta hurry Twilight's gonna be super mad if we're late again."
"I know Dash I'm just sad that Applejack,Rarity,and Pinkie aren't here right now."
"Oh come on Flutter Pinkie helping Applejack in Applelosa and Rarity is in Canterlot they aren't dead."
"I guess you're right lets go."
They quickly flew out of the door and headed towards town.
PONYILLE GARDEN
Carrot Top was finishing her carrot farm when they was a loud bang.
"What? Who's there? Show yourself!"
"I know someone here."
Then a figure came out
"Oh it's only you. Wait? Why are you holding a knife? Wha- AAAHHHHH!!!
Golden Oaks Library
"Sorry we're late Twilight we were I was just waiting for Fluttershy to Finnish her feeding routine." Said Rainbow
"It's ok girls were only going to Canterlot." Replied Twilight
"Well what are we waiting for let's go" said Rainbow heading out the door.
Then there was a scream.
"AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!"
"What was that?" Asked Fluttershy as she hides behind Twilight.
"It sound likes its coming from the local garden lets go." Said Rainbow "lets go check it out."
They flew to the garden and when they open the door there was no noise what so ever.
"Carrot Top? It's me Twilight. Are you alright?"
"Guys I think we need to see this." Said Fluttershy as she points to something.
"What do you want us to se-AHH."
"I think we need to get Celestia NOW." Said Twilight.
BAU HEADQUARTER QUANTICO VIRGINIA EARTH
"Alright Garcia what do we have today?" Asked Aaron and he sit down.
"Well this is first time were doing this kind of case but the President requested us to go to D.C."
"Why is that?" Asked Reid.
"Well Princess Celestia from the Planet Equine is requesting us to go to her land and help them solve a case involving multiple murder." Explained Garcia
"Equestria wait do we even have jurisdiction over there?" Asked Morgan as he scratches he's head.
"No we don't but the Princess and the President made a agreement that the FBI now has full jurisdiction over there now since they hardly have any murder there in so many years." Said Garcia as she handled out photos
"Now lets get starts JJ explain." Said Aaron as he looked at he's iPad
"Well ok then. Ok we have three victim so far there names are Angel Flour age 24, Sally Green age 24 and our newest victim Carrot Top age 25.
"So our victims are all females with a age in their mid-twenties and are they all near the same area?" Asked David Rossi as he takes a sip of he's coffee.
"Ah yes all of them live in a small town called Ponyville about 30 miles away from any other towns and cities."
"So this mean the killer is local alright wheels up in ten lets go."
Quotes- Winston Churchill said "the farther backward you can look the farther forward you can see."
BAU JET
"Alright then me and Rossi well go to the local station, Reid,Morgan and Prentiss go to the crime scene and JJ try to find out sown facts from the locals.
"Garcia can you send us the pictures from the other murder scenes?" Asked Rossi
"Sure thing just give me a few minutes and ill get right back to ya." Replied Garcia through the computer.
(I'm not going to show the pictures since there's hardly any on the Internet and some pictures I found are kind of too gorey so go picture it yourself oh and these humans characters are for the show Criminal Minds on CBS so I suggest you look it up or watch the show so know the characters also this is before season 9)
D.C PENTAGON BASEMENT PORTAL
"Ok you're allowed to bring the weapons to Equestria and you're badge but there no other humans there yet but the ponies know what human look like." Explained the scientist as he opens up the portal. "I already send in three SUV and a temporary FOB in the crime scene and please be nice to them were the first federal humans going."
"Alright then were ready."
After three minutes of them being in the portal they ended up in a room filled with humans tech and a purple pony with wings and a horn looking right at them and which it seemed two Pegasus ponies at the back with four ponies in which it looks like there wearing some sort of horse armor.
"Hello there my name is Princess Twilight Sparkles and I'm the co-ruler here in Equestria and you must be part of the FBI."
"Ah yes we are I'm SSA agent Aaron Hotchner this is my team SSA agent David Rossi he said pointing at Rossi.
"I'm Dr.Spencer Reid and your are a alicorn yes?"
"How do you know?" Asked Twilight.
"He's our human dictionary and atlas oh I'm sorry in SSA agent Derek Morgan.
"SSA agent Emily Prentiss"
"And I'm SSA Jennifer Joure or JJ I'm the one you were sending the letter to."
"Oh uhh I do suppose you want to see the crime scene now it's all clear from any ponies thanks to the royal guards sent here by
"Oh yes me and Rossi are going to stay here and can you direct Reid,Morgan and Prentiss to the scene." Answered Aaron.
"Oh sure girls guards let take them there."
When they arrived at the scene many ponies where trying to look at the murder and they keep yelling the same thing
"FIND THE KILLER BRING THEM DOWN."
"JJ talk to these ponies and try to calm them down." Said Morgan as he went through the door.
When they came to the room there was no other CSU here just the body on the floor.
"Ok Twilight we need a team who can put the body in disposal and also I need to know did any one here touch the scene." Asked Prentiss
"Ok ill let you get started." Replied Twilight as she walks to the two Pegasus and started talking
"How do we know there good at what they do they could even be murderer themselves." Said Rainbow
"I know what you think of them Rainbow but Celestia knows there the best of the best they solved about more than 500 cases."
"500!" Said Fluttershy "my goodness the humans world is so violent"
"Yeah and now it had spread to Equestria." Said Twilight
(Like I said this story is going to be hard since there's multiple OC and other characters)
Author's Note
Ok I need the readers help I need a name for the murderer and his bio as well leave a comment of it Ty's. And also my proofreader and his family just came back from vacation so he's gonna proofread this and the edit version well be here in about a couple of days sory of u can't read this.
"Ok Reid what can you tell us about the unsub right now?" Asked Morgan.
"Well the throat was cut exactly in the middle by a knife and the blade wounds is more deeper in the left so this tells us that he's a lefty and look the victims hands are cut as well"
"So that could be from self defense the victim did have a hoe with her" said Prentiss.
"Maybe but look at the slashes from the blades it's exactly align with both hands so the u sub did this while the victim is already dead." Explained Reid.
"Can that be he's signature?" Asked Morgan.
"It's possible it looks like the wounds form a duel blade criss crossing each other" said Prentiss.
"Hey guys I just noticed something." Said Reid.
"What is it?"
"The victims tongue is missing and the their ha- I mean hooves are cut so this unsub isn't good with women."
"Ok Prentiss I need you to call Garcia and check on the files Equestria sent to the FBI I need to know if these women live close to each other and do they have any connection at all." Said Morgan.
"Alright ill be back in a sec" said Prentiss as she walks away and grabbing her cell "huh looks like multi universe signal works"
RING RING
"Hello Madame Emily how can I assist you today."
"Hey Garcia did the Equestrian guards sent the data about the victim to you yet?"
"Oh yeah it's already in the computer why?"
"Uh I need you to run some data did the victims know each other?" Asked Prentiss.
"It's a small town they all know each other."
"How about if they have any personal connection before they moved here?"
"Uhh no they all moved from different places and Carrot Top lived here her whole life." Said Garcia.
"Alright thanks." Said Prentiss as she hangs up her phone.
"Reid,Morgan I got nothing these victims has nothing in common."
"Alright then Twilight can you come over here for a sec." Yelled Morgan across the room.
"What is it do you know the killer yet?"
"No we don't but I need you and your friends to come to the station we need to ask you some question."
"Sure no problem lets go." Replied Twilight.
PONYVILLE MUSIC STORE.
"So how do you know Carrot Top again?" Asked JJ as she takes notes from the locals
"Well I'm her neighbor and she always have free carrots for us everyday even when it rains she stills delivery it to every pony."
"Ok anything else."
"Uhh no, yes actually I remember she just came back from Canterlot two days ago."
"Ok that help a lot can I have your name?"
"Uhh Octavia"
"Ok thank you Octavia" said JJ as she leaves the music store.
PONVILLE POLICE STATION
"Ok David I you to take to the Green family about there daughter murder and the Top family as well." Said Aaron.
"Sure bit isn't JJ suppose to handle this part?" Asked Rossi.
"She is but the local are mad for what happening around here they keep saying that the humans are "poisoning their town"." Explained Aaron " she's now talking them down right now."
TEN MINUTES LATER IN THE MEETING ROOM
"Hi Twilight I need to ask you some question about Carrot Top and some personal question about you" said Reid
"Ask away."
"Did you know if Carrot Top has a boy friend wife or close friends?"
"Uh not did I know of she's kinda a loner she doesn't really like groups."
"Ok and also where were you when Carrot died?"
"At the library with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy why you ask? Wait? You think I did this?" Said Twilight.
"No we don't we need to think that every body right now are a suspect until we can narrow it down." Explained Reid
"Ok sorry for lashing out on ya."
"It's ok I'm kinda use to it now." Replied Reid.
"Ok back to topic did you ever known Carrot Top when you lived here?"
"No I came to Ponyville two years ago and I just became a alicorn when I-"
"Became a princess or some sorts" said Reid before Twilight can finish her sentence.
"How on Equestria did you know?" Asked Twilight
"Well most myth and fantasy books say that alicorn are mostly likely royalty or have special powers so I guessed." Answered Reid.
"Ok where done here and thank you for your patience."
"Reid how did the questioning go?" Asked Prentiss.
"Better than most humans questioning I suppose."
"Ok Rossi and I are going to Carrot's house to see If we can find pit any more info about our victim." Said Aaron
"And ill set up a map perimeter to see if the geography is connected with the murder." Said Reid
"JJ and Prentiss I need you to talk to Twilight and her friends. Also Morgan talk to the guards near here and ask them if they saw anything weird these past few days."
"Sure thing Hotch" said Morgan as he leaves the room.
Nurse Red Heart was walking back to the hospital with her usual stuff three coffee and some muffins and sandwich. She goes into a alley way but a unknown pony walks right behind her.
"Who's following me?"
She turns around and see a black figure.
"Oh it's only you how are you feeling today? Wait why do you have a knife with you? Wait? Your the killer stay away from me NO NO NOOO!" Said Red Heart as her throat was sliced and her hooves is being slashed and her tongue was being cut out.
New Victims
PONYVILLE POLICE STATION
"So Reid do you have a perimeter set up yet?" Asked Emily as she enters the room.
"Ah yes it the town has a five miles radius and all three murder is located in the center of town so we should get more guards posted there."
"Alright ill let Hotch know."
Then Morgan came into the room.
"Guys there's been another murder."
RAMDOM ALLEYWAY IN PONYVILLE
The guards had already secure a perimeter around the area. Just after the FBI arrived.
"So Twilight can you give us the name if the new victim?" Asked Hotchner as they walk to the scene.
"Her name is Nurse Red Heart she works at the local hospital about a mile north oh here."
"Ok Reid, Rossi is this the same murderer?" Asked Morgan.
"Ok this is the same murderer cause it had the same cuts, lashes but I think this one is personal."
"Why is that asked?" Rainbow Dash as she came out of now where.
"Rainbow what are you doing here?" Asked Twilight.
"I followed you guys here on your cars why?"
"Cause this is a crime scene and your entering without permission but since your with Twilight ill let it slide." Said Hotchner
"Ok back to the murder the reason this one is personal is that the knife have stabbed the victim in the stomach forming a box shaped image while the other victims only had their hooves and throat cut. Plus the wounds are much deeper and more violent than ever and judging by the damage done by the knife our unsub is a male around he's thirties and there's a hole next to the trash about five foot tall so that's our u sub height." Explained Reid.
"Ok and I'm noticing that the wounds in Red Heart is more deeper than Carrots Top and Carrot Top wounds is more deeper than Sally Greens." Said Rossi.
"So he's becoming more violent and unstable" said Emily.
"Ok I think we have a profile now lets get back to the station and tell it." Said Hotchner
As the guards came in from the doors the agents are preparing for the profile when Rainbow ask Twilight a question.
"What are they doing now?"
"I don't know but shhhh."
"Umm Twilight when do these humans capture that killer?" Asked Fulttershy.
Then Reid and Rossi came to them.
"Hi uh we need to ask you one last quick question." Said Rossi.
"What is it?" Wondered Fluttershy.
"Uh this may sound kind of personal but how old are you girls?" Asked Reid.
"Why are you asking that kind of question?" Asked Rainbow.
"We believe that the unsub is killing young women in there mid-twenties so we need to know if you could become the next victim." Explained Rossi.
"Oh then I'm 24" said Rainbow.
"25" said Fluttershy quietly.
"And I'm 24" said Twilight
"That mean you girls maybe in danger I suggest you girls stay here until we can narrow the victims down." Said Reid
"Oh we will"
"I just remember something" Reid said as he was walking away from the girls. "I'll be right back."
"Hotch the new victim Red Heart she was a nurse yes?"
"Yeah why?"
"Did carrot top or any of the victims work at a hospital?"
"No but you get Garcia to check on it while we start the profile ok."
"Got it."
RING RING
"Hello there my wizard friend how can I help ya?"
"Garcia can you check on the victims and see of they worked or volunteer at a hospital or some sort."
"Uh sure ill call you back when I get the answer bye."
Three minutes later
"Welcome every body please have a seat and get ready to take some notes." Said Hotch.
"Ok our unsub is a male about exactly five foot even. He's mostly uncomfortable around women so keep a eye out." Said Hotch.
"Looks like there're explaining the murderer" said Twilight across the room.
"But"
"Shhh less talking more listening."
"Our unsub has already killed four mares and he's may keep killing. He is highly unstable so talking him down may be a problem so let us handle it." Explained Rossi.
"Also he may be in a mental suit so he'll be very ark ward in groups." Added Reid.
"And finally he's good with a knife so try to stay as far away as possible and judging by the skills he has with the knife he most likely a earth pony." Said Morgan.
"All the victims are around in the mid-twenties so keep the mares around that age safe from now on." Said Prentiss.
"Ok that's all we know about him so thank you from listening." Said JJ.
After the meeting all the guards left the building and the agents are sitting down in the meeting room. When Reid phone rang.
"It's Garcia. Hey Garcia your on speaker."
"Hey guys I just found out that all the victims worked or volunteer at the Ponyville Hospital a week ago."
"So this means the unsub is a patient there." Said Rossi.
"Got it and they all helped at the mental center at the hospital.
"Ok Reid, JJ and Rossi go to the hospital, Prentiss and Morgan go to Red Heart house and see if you can find any thing useful and ill talk to Nurse Red Heart family."
"Got it"
They all left the room.
"Do they always work like this Twilight?" Asked Rainbow Dash as she see them leaving the building
"I think so and I think they already know who the killer is."
"Well I have to go home to feed my critters again." Said Fluttershy
"We'll come with you just in case." Replied Twilight as they lapeave the building as well.
Author's Note
Well I'm trying to extend this story as much a s possible but if I can't ill make more stories in this stories about the BAU helping Equestria. They will all be separate stories.
During the ride to the Hospital Rossi noticed that JJ was very fatigued and tired. This bothered him cause that JJ was hardly ever tired her job is to talk to the public or the victims family she needs to be active and wide awake all the time.
"Hey Jennifer you seen tired what's wrong?"
"Uh it's these ponies." Replied JJ.
"How I don't see anything wrong with any of them." Said Reid.
"No you guys only handle a few but for me it's a different story."
"What do you mean by that?" Asked Rossi as he turns to a different road.
"On average most people just ask me who is the victims, how did he/she die and who's next but theses ponies they never heard of murder they ask me so many weird question like "what did the stab look like?" And what was your reaction?" I mean come on its general logic." Explained JJ as she face plam her face. "They always keep repeating the same question it's killing me."
"We'll they do have a reason." Said Reid.
"Like?"
"They hardly have any crime in this world and the public seems to be always parnoid." Explained Reid.
"He has a point JJ at the station many of the guards were asking us what does our profile of the unsub even do and how will it help them." Said Rossi "they clearly have no experience with murder."
"Come to think of it I think that's why the princess requested us here cause were one if the best BAU teams in the country." Said Reid.
"Well we should stop talking about it now cause were here." Said Rossi as the car stop at the front door.
They got out of the car and went inside and when they entered the hospital seems like a normal hospital if you don't count the ponies waking around using magic and tools that was modify with magic. As they walked around a unicorn stallion came to them.
"Hello there agents I'm Dr.Cross and you must be here for the death of one of our nurses."
"Oh yes and also all the others and we wanted to ask you some question as well." Said Reid.
"Sure."
"Do you know the head doctor for the mental institution for this hospital?"
"Uh your looking right at him."
"Good now did all the victims work or volunteer at that place?"
"Uhh yes they all did but for Red Heart she was the supervisor for the volunteers." Replied Dr.Cross.
"And what does the volunteers do around here?"
"They help the Doctors feed the patients, they help give the medicine and they clean the rooms when the patient isn't there or they were clear to check out of the hospital."
"Can we see the rooms?" Asked JJ.
"Sure follow me."
They walk down the halls till they saw a metal door with two royal guards at the door. They open up the door and the agents saw multiple patients room. The door was metal and locked.
"How many patients do you get here each year?" Ask Rossi and they enter a room.
"Uh about 200 a year."
"And how many checked out this month?" Asked JJ.
"Uh for this month about 50."
"Can you excuse us for a minute?" Asked Reid.
"No problem ill just be outside." Said Dr.Cross as he steps out the room and close the door.
"Well this room seems pretty clean and big for one patient." Said JJ.
"Well there's no window in this room and the door so the ponies who in here feel like he/she is forgotten and lost so they most likely lash out on doctors and nurses." Said Reid.
'That explains the guards at the door." Said JJ.
"Yeah wait what's that?" Said Reid pointing at the piece of paper hanging out beneath the bed.
"It seems to be a note." Said Rossi as he takes it out.
"What does it say?" Asked JJ.
"It say this "where is every pony why am I here some pony help me." It also say this "why is every pony not listening to me?"
"Is that all it say?" Asked Reid.
"No here the last one " these damn ponies don't understand I don't belong here they don't listen to me the volunteer just ignore them I wish they disappear and their throats cut ha ha and slash of cuts on their hooves so they feel helpless like me."
"This room belong to the unsub." Said Rossi after he finish reading the letter.
They quickly left the room and talked to Dr.Cross.
"Who was the patient that stayed in this room and what's he's name?" Asked Rossi.
"Uhh I forgot uh Clover that was he's first name but I for got his last name." Replied the doctor.
"Thank you we gotta leave now." Said Reid as they ran out the hospital and into the car and start driving.
Reid quickly called Hotch.
"Yes Reid?"
"The unsub was in the hospital and he hated the ponies who worked there."
"And?"
"How long was the last victim killed?"
"About six hours ago why?"
"It was twelve when he did it and now it's six O'clock right now it means he's gonna kill again."
"Alright ill ask Garcia who else worked at that place."
"Got it will be there in ten minutes."
"Thank you for your time Mr and Mrs.Hearts well find the pony who killed your daughter." Said Hotch as he leaves their house and calls Garcia.
RING RING
"Yessssss?"
"Garcia who else worked volunteered at the hospital beside the victims?"
"Uh two Fluttershy and Bale Leaf but Bale is at Cloudsdale right now.
"So that leaves Fluttershy where is she now?"
"Last time I checked she left the station and went back to here house with her friends."
"Also I need you to run some things."
"Sure no problem what do you need?"
"Search for male patients at the Ponyville hospital that checked out last month."
"I got 50 can you narrow it down?" Asked Garcia.
"He really calm to others and he takes his pills so he can leave faster. He also talks to himself a lot at night."
"That's now 5 anything else?"
"His first name is Clover."
"GOT IT" "he lives at 21 Oaks street Ponyville."
"And where's Fluttershy address?"
"34 West Everfree Lane."
"Got it tell Morgan and Prentiss to go to Clovers house and tell the others to go to Fluttershy house now." Said Hotchner as he runs to his car and starts driving towards Fluttershy's house.
(Ok before you red this chapter I need to tell ever body something. First is that I just realized that this serial killer story is going to be too short so here's what I'm gonna do. I'm going to write multiple stories of the BAU solving serial killer crimes ill tell you if it's the same story by the name. This chapter is the final story for this story but a new killer will emerge in Equestria and the BAU knows how to solve it. Also the change is by episode so this is episode 1. Thank you for reading this and hope you enjoy this story.)
Hotch was driving fast towards Fluttershy house. He could drive faster if the roads aren't made if dirt. He already called the others and there already on the way.
MEANWHILE AT FLUTTERSHY'S HOUSE
"Oh thank you very much for helping me feed my critters would you like to stay for dinner?" Asked Fluttershy as she sets up plates for three.
"Oh we have time so I guess." Said Twilight.
"What are we having?" Asked Rainbow as she sits down.
"Hay macaroni and cheese." Replied Fluttershy.
"Oh my favorite."
ONE BLOCK AWAY FROM FLUTTERSHY'S HOUSE
Clover Leaf has just finish his dinner a simple seaweed salad with ranch dressing he had his pocket knife in his jacket and he has he cap on his head.
"He he he oh Fluttershy I'm coming for you." He said quietly as she walked slowly to the house.
(Ok before I continue Clover voice sounds like Pinkie Pie voice in the Episode Party of One when she was crazy. Also Equestria has changed a lot. There is black top roads in cites and humans tech like phones and some ponies cars also some ponies have guns so that's going to be interesting in other episodes hint hint. Ok back to the story.)
CLOVER LEAF'S HOUSE
Morgan and Prentiss walked up to the house and knocked on e door.
"Clover Leaf this the agent Derek Morgan were with the FBI open up!"
No response
"Open up." Yelled Prentiss.
After ten seconds of no response they grabbed their pistols from their holsters and kicked down the door.
They entered in side and searched the house but they couldn't find him.
"Damn it he isn't here."
'Ill ask the others to see if they know where's he's going." Said Prentiss as she was about to use her cell phone.
"You don't have to do that look at these plates and food there still warm." Said Morgan as he touches the food on the table.
"And looks at theses photos."
Prentiss looked at the photos seeing picture of all the victims in the pictures doing there jobs and being with others and also their house.
"It seem like he stalks his victims for a couple of hours and then he kills them." Explained Morgan.
"And he already found his next one." Said Prentiss as she takes a picture of Fluttershy and her friends at the park.
Morgan quickly called Rossi.
RING RING
"Yeah?" Answered Reid.
"Hey it's Morgan the killer is heading towards Fluttershy's house he may already on his way how far away are you from the house?"
"Two minutes."
"Alright well on our way as well."
ROSSI'S CAR
Reid called Garcia.
RING RING
"Yeah this is Garcia the wonder how can I help you?"
"Garcia what is Fluttershy home phone number?"
"Uh it's 3-516-249-4349."
"Thanks Garcia."
Reid then quickly punched in the number and waited.
(Also don't call that number it's fake I think but it won't go to Fluttershy's house ill just go to some ramdom people in New York an they just gonna yell at you and call you a fucking idiot so I recommend don't do it.)
"Hello? Who's this?" Asked Twilight.
"Twilight is that you?"
"Yes it me who's this?"
"It's Dr.Reid are you and Fluttershy at the house right now?"
"Yeah and so is Rainbow why?"
"We believe the killer is on his way to you girls right now so lock the door and window and don't let any pony in got it"
"And yeah I'll do it right now." Replied Twilight
"Good we're going to be there in a minute so hold on tight."
Reid quickly hang up.
"Rainbow get Fluttershy we need to close all window and door.
"Why?" Asked Rainbow.
"Cause the killer is coming here." Explained Twilight
They locked the door when they heard a whimper noise
"Girls"
They turn around and they saw a red stallion with a four leaf clover as a cutie mark holding a pocket knife to Fluttershy throat.
"Hello there Rainbow Dash and Princess Twilight Sparkle my name is Clover Leaf and I'm going to kill you all today."
They BAU quickly got out of their car when they got to the house. They all had their pistol at their hands and when they reached the door Hotch kicked down the door and entered the house they saw Clover Leaf holding a knife at Fluttershy.
"Clover Leaf in agent Aaron Hotchner and were with the FBI and we want you to drop your knife and come with us."
"Oh yeah and what? Bring me back to the hell hole at the hospital huh huh?"
"No we're going to get you some help."
"NO" yelled Clover.
"I want these people to suffer for what they do to me I want them to die. They didn't listen to me at all."
"Our place they do that all we what you to do is to drop the knife and let her go." Said Rossi.
"No"
"If you put another inch of that blade towards her throat I will blow your heads of." Said Morgan as he enters the room.
"Ok I will." Said Clover as he held tighter to Fluttershy.
Then he quickly let go of Fluttershy and charged at Hotch but all that happen was a bullet in Clover's chest from a fired bullet from Rossi.
Morgan went to check on the body. He shocked his head meaning that the pony is dead.
Reid,Twilight and Rainbow went to check on Fluttershy since she was in shock.
"Are you alright?" Asked Rainbow as she hugs Fluttershy.
"Yes I'm fine." Replied Fluttershy.
One hour later.
"I would like to thank you all for helping our town." Said Twilight.
"Your welcome and when ever you need help just tell us." Replied Hotch.
Then Celestia appear out of nowhere a chariot came with two Pegasus pulling it. When they landed Princess Celestia came out.
"Thank you for stopping this killer from all this killing but we still need your help." Said Celestia.
"What do you mean?" Ask JJ.
"We had a home invasion at Canterlot and we need your help your president knows about this and he wants you guys to help us. Do you accept?" Asked Celestia
They all looked a each other and nodded at each other.
Hotch looked at Celestia and all he said was this "yes well help you ponies."
Quotes-Emerson said, “All is riddle, and the key to a riddle is another riddle.”
End of Episode one.
(Well hope you enjoy and thank you for waiting.)
Author's Note
Well that's the end of episode one and I think ill start the second episode maybe tomorrow so wait and also I will need a MO for a murder and a bio also I need a temporary profile for the unsub and maybe a name as well.
"Ok this couldn't be a burglary." Claimed Morgan.
"Why is that?" Asked Prentiss.
"Look the unsub entered through the front door and a back door they could have taken their stuff and leave with out any one noticing but they woke the family instead, so when the dad came out he was knocked in the head, the wife and son tries to run out the back door but the partner was there blocking them." Morgan Explained as she looked at the gash in the father head.
"They also use a crow bar to head the dad."
"So that exclaimed the holes in the wall." Said Reid.
"Yeah there was a safe behind that picture but nothing was stolen no jewelry or money." Said Rossi as he points to the open safe.
"If it wasn't the money then what were they looking for?" Asked Reid.
"Who ever the pony is he decided to clean up the mess, look at the floor it's cleaned with bleach and a mop." Said Prentiss.
"So the unsubs likes to be clean and has a issue with his father." Said Reid.
"Alright call JJ and Aaron and tell them to ask the locals if they saw anything last night and Morgan and Prentiss look around the house and see if anything is out of the ordinary, Reid since your so good with the girls back at Ponyville you can Explain to them what were doing right now." Said Rossi.
"Got it anything else?" Reid asked.
"Take a tour around the city we need to know this place better."
"And we'll meet up at the station in about a hour or so." Said Morgan.
"Got it."
When Reid left the house he saw the girls and a white pony with a diamond cutie marks.
"Hey Reid watcha doing?" Asked Rainbow as she flies to Reid.
"Oh nothing I was just going to wander around the cities." Answered Reid as he starts to walk down the streets.
"Hey I thought we are learning to be like you guys why aren't we going inside?"
"Cause of two reason. One you don't have any profiling experience and second of all were stilling looking for evidence, and there's a dead bodies inside as well.
"Wait some pony died?" Asked Rarity.
"Yeah the whole family."
"Fluttershy started crying.
"Hey don't cry that's lesson one don't let your emotion get to you and your job."
"And how do we do that?" Asked Rainbow.
"Simple just think of the good things like your going to save more ponies lives when the killer is caught and theses stuff happens every day."
"Oh ok then." Said Fluttershy as she wipes of the tears in her face.
"Ok let's find a cafe and get started."
Cream Family house upstairs.
"Look at this the sons bedroom window is open and there's a ladder in the back yard so why didn't the unsub just use that to get in and kill the family while there sleeping?" Asked Prentiss.
"Cause they wanted the family witness each others death." Replied Morgan.
"Also look at the pictures in this room and the hall ways there perfectly lined up."
"So the unsub is OCD and highly organized and this murder was planned to the last second." Claimed Morgan.
"Yeah let's get back to the station." Said Prentiss as they head down stairs.
The girls and Reid found a cafe in the center of Canterlot and they sat down. After a minute a unicorn waiter came.
"Good afternoon and what would yo-" said the unicorn before he stopped and looked at Twilight.
"Princess Sparkles I'm so sorry I didn't noticed you for a second ill get the best chefs right now."
"Don't worry we're just here for some coffee and tea." Said Twilight.
"Sure lets ill be right back." Said the waiter as he walks back to the kitchen.
"So when are we getting starting?" Asked Fluttershy.
"We already did, see that pony in that suit what can you tell me about him just by looking at him?"
"Uh he's stylish he going west and he has a blue mane." Said Rarity.
"Anything else?"
They all shocked there head.
"Well so far your good but here's what you missed, one thing is that the stallions mane it's a bit flat and cully so he forgot to brush his mane and second look at his eyes they have wrinkles so that means he rather having lots of stress lately or he didn't have enough sleep last night. Also he's keep pulling his tie so he's nervous about something and since he levitating a suitcase I thinks he going to present a meeting or some sort."
"You got all of that just by looking at him?" Asked Twilight.
"Yup after a few years in the BAU you notice some things that not every body do." Said Reid.
The tea and coffee arrived and they started talking about their lives but mostly Twilight was asking all the question. Trying speed things up Reid told them he needs to get to the police station.
"Oh sure no problem ill just teleport us there."
Then a purple ball surrounded them and they disappear from the cafe leaving sixteen bits on the table.
(Ok khilleobge Some name since your judging my writing and being a grammar nazi y don't u proofreader and edit for me hmmm. That's right since my proofreader and editor are in school and your such a grammar nazi proofread for me if u don't want to just fucking stop judging and don't read this ok. I'm bad in school for grammar ok then. If not then stop commenting my mistakes please ill try my best to fix them.)
Reid had just woken up and when he looked around he was in the police station sitting down in a seat with the rest of the team looking at the map.
"Uhh my head."
"Uh well well well look who finally woke up." Said Morgan as he pat Reid in the back.
"How long was I out for?"
"About ten minutes, Twilight teleported you here and when you appeared out of now where me and Hotch almost shot ya,but you just fell asleep as soon you got here." Morgan explained as he sat next to Reid.
"Where's Twilight anyway?"
"There're outside right now. She told us that humans get a little sleepy when they teleport."
"So what are we doing right now?"
"Where about to give the profile to the guards right now so get ready." Said Hotch as he walk out of the room.
FIVE MINUTES LATER
"Good afternoon every pony before I start I would want you all to settle down and I would like welcome Princess Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Rarity there'll be our assistants and learn about profiling and maybe one day become part of the Equestria BAU team." Said Hotch.
Every pony turned around clapped to the girls.
"Ok then our unsubs are both male around the age of 30 to 40. They both OCD and highly organized. They are looking for a three pony family a mother,father and a filly. Their weapon of choice is a .38 caliber and a crossbar." Said Hotch.
"And due to the fact that both unsubs are partner than this mean they are mostly likely living together or live very close to each other in order to keep contact." Said Morgan.
"And judging that both of them are males there will be the alpha male." Said Reid.
"What does that mean?" Asked a guard in the back.
"A alpha male is the male in charge or the leader." Explained JJ.
"Also with every thing we collected on the crime scene the unsubs are a unicorn and a Pegasus since they know how to use a pistol that's silenced." Said Rossi.
"We also want to recommend you check in hotels and apartments looking for stallion roommates that are a unicorn and a Pegasus."
"One last thing the unsub are very clam and focus on the smallest details so when you are interviewing possible suspects try to tap on your pens and pencils and try whistling and speaking quietly to your partners if they try to listen in or ask you to stop in a very aggressive way then take them back into the station and question them." Said Prentiss.
"Ok that's all we have we'll update you all again when we have more info." Said Hotch as he turns around from the crowd. "Ok JJ and Reid I want you both to map the area in Canterlot that has a two man apartments and cost very cheap. And Morgan and Prentiss go to the rich section of the city and look for a place that the unsubs could attack next and finally David its seven o'clock right now so I want you to escort the ladies here to where their living."
"Sure, ok girls lets get going then."
"As Rossi and the girls walk out of the room Reid and JJ looked at the map of Canterlot.
"I have never seen a city build on a mountain before." Said JJ
"Yeah neither do I but I'm kinda scared of this place." Replied Reid.
"Why is that?"
"This cites history says that this place has been standing for a thousand years and its built on a mountain so I have a fear that this place is going to collapse any minute from now."
"Well of this place has been standing for so long I don't see you it shouldn't keep standing for a thousand more."
"Yeah I guess so."
"Look at this." Pointed Reid
"What am I looking at?"
"There's a apartment complex just five blocks down from the murder so that could be where our unsubs are living right now."
"How do we know for sure?"
"Two ways one- they turn themselves in and second-they commit another murder."
Rossi was driving the girls back to the castle when Rarity asked a question.
"What does earth look like?"
"Well it looks just like here but more polluted, more cites, more car and planes and skyscrapers."
"Is there any places for the animals?" Asked Fluttershy.
"Well yeah there's the local animal shelters, cats and dogs can live in people homes and there is still forest and jungles in the world so it's not like the whole planet is covered in cites and roads."
"Oh ok." Said Fluttershy.
"I'm still confused how murder and crime came out of nowhere." Said Twilight.
"Well it was always here but it's just you finally take notice of it when it happens right in your face."
They reached the castle and the girls stepped out of the castle and four guards are standing next to the door and they continued walking until they entered the castle.
HOURS LATER
it was one o'clock when two stallion reached a house both wearing a mask. The Pegasus open the front door while the unicorn open the back door with its magic. When they entered they unicorn knocked over a vase waking up the family.
"What was that?" Asked the sleepy mare next to the dad.
"I don't know find Rolly and hide I'm going to find out said the unicorn dad as he stepped out the door and went downstairs.
After five minute of silence the mother and her son Rolly went down stairs.
"Honey is every thing ok?"
"Dad? Are you ok?"
They open the lights and they saw the stallion tied up in a chair and two stallion wearing a ski mask looking at them while one of them levitated a 38 caliber pistol pointed at them. Finally the Pegasus spoke.
"You say a word you die."
Too Early
(People are wondering why did I put the mane six icons and other icon in the story well ill tell ya why. Remember this stories has multiple cases so the stories travel around ponies will show up and stuff. Also if you want to above any pony such as OC and background characters to be victims or murderers just let me know. Now let us continued the story.)
RING RING
"Uh Rarity can you pick that up I'm to tired to move." Said Rainbow as she hides in her blanket.
"So sorry Rainbow I need my beauty sleep Twilight darling can you be it?"
"Uh sure hold on a second."
Twilight quickly levitated the phone and hold it up in her ear.
"Uh hello? Who's this?"
"Is this Princess Twilight Sparkles?" Asked a low voice.
"Um yes,and who are you?"
"I'm agent Aaron Hotchner I'm calling for Twilight Spakles."
"Uh hi agent Hotchner." Said Twilight as she gets every pony out of bed.
"We need you and the rest of the study team to come to 25 West Hay Street there's been another murder.
"Wait right now it's only 4 in the morning."
"Then get here in fifteen minutes." Said Hotch as he hangs up on them.
"Who was that?" Asked Fluttershy as she get out of her bed.
"Yeah who calls ponies this early in the morning?" Asked Rainbow as she stretches her wings.
"Well apparently the FBI does come on let's go."
THE NEW CRIME SCENE
"Well Reid how did you sleep?" Asked Rossi as he walk over to him.
"Pretty good, the beds here is a bit small but its fine."
"Good, so what did you find?"
"Well it seems like the dad came downstairs first and the rest if the family was shocked seeing the dad tied up likes this so they agreed to be tied up thinking everything well be ok."
"Is anything stolen here?"
"No nothing it's just like to other crime die blocks down."
"We also think the unsubs are very close around here since both murder was only a five block distance." Said Morgan.
"Ok then tell the guards to send more guards in this area and also I want to know when those girls are here yet." Said Hotch.
"There's also one thing we missed during the last scene." Said Reid as he walks towards the group.
"And that is?" Asked Prentiss.
"Both home invasion had two thing in common. One- both house looking highly alike to each other and second the family looks similar to another like the same skin color and age."
"So this means its personal or they practicing on some pony to kill and these aren't the real victims."
"So the problem is who are they really targeting?" Asked JJ.
"I think it's the unsubs own family just look, the dad if course had multiple stabbing and a bullet to the head but for the others it's just a bullet no stabbing or tortured just a silent and painless death."
The Elements had just arrived at the crime scene it and when they entered they saw three ponies tied up dead.
"Uh why is such disgusting things just laid there?" Said Rarity in a loud voice.
The team turned around and saw the ponies.
"Good there here now I want JJ and Reid to take the girls to ask questions in the neighborhood if they saw any thing shades,sudden movements and ponies fidgeting. Also teach them something along the way. Said Hotch. "Morgan and Prentiss drive around and look for a place where is unsubs can spy on their victims.
"Rossi get the guards here we need to tell them about the connection these murder have with the unsub."
Reid, JJ and the harmony left the house and started walking down the street.
"oh shoot I forgot my cell ill be right back." Said JJ as she runs back into the house.
"So what are we learning today?" Asked Twilight.
"Well were going to teach you girls about self control." Replied Reid.
"And how do we do that?" Asked Rainbow.
"Remember how Rarity react when she saw those bodies well you can't do that and also if there's anything that you want from the crime scene you can't have it or your'll be charged with theft and destruction of evidence."
"How will we not think of a dead body right in front of us?" Asked Fluttershy.
"That's for you to find out and decide remember we can only teach you so much."
Morgan and Prentiss are driving around the same pony with the top hat three times before they noticed a apartment complex four blocks near the murder and it had a large windows. They decide to check it out, when they arrived they superintendent wanted a warrant before any of the could entered. So they left.
"Something isn't right abut that place I can feel it." Said Morgan as they entered the car.
"Same thing well come back this afternoon and ask again and hopefully with a warrant."
(Well I feel fucking sick right now :pinkiesad: why you may ask? Well ill tell ya. First fuck school that means I not have time for ponies wait never mind I bronies friends in school. Also I feel said for the people who have school tomorrow my school days is on the ninth. Second-it's really hard to type on the iPad since its a iPad mini and my fingers hurt very much. And finally they third reason is that I need ideas I have writers block so I may not post a chapter every day, P.S I may have longer chapters when my writer block is over. Also I'm sorry for the short chapters and holy shot I forgot to buy my cool supplies I gotta run bye.)
Author's Note
Idk what the fuck is wrong with me. Anyway enjoy. Also I need a proofreader and a editor so please help me out.
The Warrant of truth
A/N Hi I'm back no I want dead and yes this chapter is going to be longer than usual. I'm still trying to find a editor and proofreader but in the mean time ill post my original chapters for you to read. Also if I do find a editor ill reedit my old chapters and fix them so people can read them and understand better. I might ask dominatusimperator since he's always a help to me and the same thing for him. Any way also ill be back to school soon but I'm also on this site but I'm just may not be writing much. Enjoy this chapters.
When Morgan and Prentiss arrived at the station they quickly found Hotch and told him what they saw last night.
"Hotch you got a minute?"
"Not much Morgan, I'm going to held a press conference about the murder this morning what is it?"
"We were looking around the neighborhood and we saw a five story apartment that looks at the murder scene and its pretty close to it as well. Also the superintendent was acting very strange when we tried to talk to them."
"Well did you guys get to look inside the building?"
"No the superintendent won't allow anyone inside unless they live there or they have a warrant."
"Alright ill go ask Celestia for a warrant and I also want you to take Twilight and her friends to the place as well so they can observed and maybe even help out a little bit."
"Got it Hotch anything else?" Asked Prentiss.
"Uh yes do you know a coffee store anywhere,me and Rossi hardly got any sleep last night."
"I think we past a coffee shop when we were coming here."
"We were just about to get something there as well do you and Rossi want anything?"
"Uh I would like a dark coffee and two bags of sugar and Rossi would like it brown with a bit of cream in it."
"Got it and call us when you get that warrant ok."
"Sure thing Morgan."
Reid was looking at the map of Canterlot when JJ came in.
"Reid you look tired have you been here all day so far?"
"No I only got here about two hours ago."
"Then why do you look so tired?"
"It's Twilight and her friends, they keep asking me question that for once I don't want to answer."
"Oh"
"Also you kinda ditch me this morning when you left to get your cell phone."
"Oh sorry about that, Hotch wanted me to talk to the neighbors if they saw anything this morning."
"Did they?” Asked Reid.
"Uh one mare did she was walking down the street when she saw two stallion one red and one light blue running out of the house that night and we she walk into the house she saw the bodies."
"Did she report it?"
"Uh she did she ran out and found the nearest patrol and guide them there, and also Hotch is giving out the brief description if the killers to the public."
"Oh good then."
"What's wrong?"
"It's the map it's label so differently."
"What do you mean differently?"
"Normally a city or even a town will have a certain section like all the business buildings and rich people buildings in one area but not this city there all over the place."
"Isn't that suppose to help us narrow it down?"
"Sully but there's still five apartment buildings that's near the murder so it's more traveling for us and more place where a killer can hide."
"Well I heard that Morgan and Prentiss found a place that suspicious a couple of blocks from the murder scene."
"What's is address?"
"216 Cream's Drive."
"That's only five blocks down from both murder scene and its geography able to see anything from a ten block radius."
"So is that place a possible living area for the killers?"
"No it's not a possible place, it is the place."
The two brother was outside in the streets when they over heard a conversation between two guards.
"So 216 Cream's Drive could be a place for the serial killers?"
"Yeah, theses human police are damn good at their jobs it takes us weeks to find the killers and they found were they live Ina couple of day."
The brothers both looked at each and ran towards the alley way.
"God damn it I thought we had more time."
"Calm yourself Price Tag we find another way."
"The humans and guards already know where we live we can't go back."
"Hey hey Price Tag there's a reason I'm the older brother here I have our extra set of tools in my saddle were fine well just forgot all the other practices and head for our final target.
"Do you know his address Brush Tags?"
"Indeed I do little brother now lets go and meet him and his 'new family'."
The serial killers/partners/brother got out of the alley and walk to downtown.
Morgan and Prentiss along with Twilight and her friends had reach the apartment along with two guards with there spears readily and they 9 millimeter pistol ready on theirs holsters and some are being levitated by the unicorn guards.
"Why are the guards here and their weapons ready?" Asked Twilight.
"Cause we got a call from Reid and JJ that this place is the killers home and we don't want any pony get hurt." Replied Morgan as he grabs his USP-45 from his hostler.
They arrived at the front door and they saw the cranky superintendent at the front door.
"You got a warrant?"
"Yes we do and we want to know who lives here that pays in bits every month never late and their apartments is very clean and they don't like loud noise?" Asked Morgan.
"Uh there's is this one room shared by brothers, room 3 fifth floor."
"Thank you."
They quickly rush up to the third floor and they were at the door.
"OPEN UP FBI!!" Yelled Morgan.
"Uh Derek they might not know who we are." Said Prentiss quietly.
"Oh then IT'S THE ROYAL GUARDS OPEN UP."
There was no response. So then Morgan kick down the door and they entered in.
"Clear." Said a guard in the master bedroom.
"Clear.' Said the guard in the kitchen.
"They aren't here." Said Morgan.
So then were could they be going then?"
A/N I'm too tired to write a long chapter sorry. But ill try my best to write a chapter as long as possible so yeah. Also this isn't the edited version I hope the edited version would be done in a couple of days.
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Episode 2- Home Invasion and a trip down memory lane.
(Ok before episode two starts I would want to let everybody know something. First of thanks for the likes as favs I mean a lot to me. Second I will write in the chapter names if its a new episode and ill also end the chapters with a quote so your'll know)
Episode 2-Home Invasion
It's been only two days since the BAU team arrived at Equestria and they already help solve a crime that involves the death of four mares. Now the team is headling for Canterlot to solve another crime a home invasion to be precise.
Quote-Albert Einstein asked, “The question that sometimes drives me hazy: Am I or the others crazy?”
The team decides to take the train to Canterlot since its to far away for a car to drive and Rossi,Morgan and Reid doesn't trust the flying carriage pulled by two Pegasus guards. So in the cart the team is discussing the new case.
"Ok Garcia already has the info of the crime and family data updated so of you have any concerns just ask her. Alright lets begin." Said Hotch as he enters the train cart.
"Ok the house belongs to the Cream family a mother name Sour Cream age 31, a father name Whisk Cream age 34 and a young male foal by the name Jelly Cream." Explained JJ as she pass out info and pictures of the family." They were killed about three AM so the unsub came in while they were sleeping."
"Canterlot is the capital of this country so does this mean the invasion could be a burglary gone wrong?" Asked Rossi.
"No the police there found nothing stolen and there was a force entry by both the front door and the back door."
"Why both of there were killing some one or in this case some pony why use two doors?" Asked Morgan.
"We'll find that out when we get there. Our cars are in the storage cart in the back so well drive to the station." Said Hotch as he leaves the cart but then he stopped.
"You guys should get some rest we have another four hours on this train and we should get some rest we going to need it."
Reid was walking around the train when he bumped in Twilight and here friends.
"Oh I'm sorry I wa- oh hey girls what are you doing here?"
"We came along to see how you humans solve crime and maybe princess Celestia can come up with a new unit for solving major crimes and we can be in it." Explained Rainbow.
"Well I'm happy you had taken interest in this but your going to see a lot of dead bodies and you may need to kill some pony when the time is needed." Said Reid.
"Why do we need to kill some pony?" Asked Fluttershy.
"Well how do I say this uh, do you remember when a Fluttershy was taken hostage by Clover Leaf and Hotch shot him when he charged at him?"
They all nodded in agreement.
"Well of Hotchner didn't shoot he would have been stabbed and the killer might have gotten away or even worse kill more ponies."
"So we need to kill for the job?" Asked Twilight.
"Yeah I had my far share of the shot and I even was tortured once."
"You were tortured that's terrible." Said Flutterhsy.
"Well I don't blame him I blamed his father. You see his name is Tabias the killers name had three personality. One was himself. Another one was his father and the third one was a man named Raphel he was the part of him who did the killing." Explained Reid.
"What was the killing for?" Asked Twilight.
"Sins" Reid replied.
"That's it?" Rainbow yelled.
"Mmhmm he killed caused all his victims had some sort of sin so he killed them for it."
"When we founded him he knocked me out in the fields and JJ unconscious in the barn. The dogs he owned almost killed her."
"But when I was about to be killed my team found me but sadly he died."
"Why are you taking pity of him he killed all those people and almost you as well." Said Rainbow.
"I know but it wasn't Tabias it was his father side that was evil and he saved me one when I was dying from a shock."
"So you couldn't blame him for what he did."
"Yeah he was beaten by his dad and when his dad died but the part of him stayed with Tabias and made him a killer."
"I never know how bad it was or I would never agree to this." Said Fluttershy while Twilight nodded in agreement.
"You experience traumatic moments in this job but the teams cars for me they like a second family to me so if your friends are doing this kind of job with you one day your'll brake and your friends will never give up on you." Reid explained.
(Ok if you didn't understand what the hell Reid was talking about one seasons had a episode when Reid was captured and torture by a three personality man name Tabias I for got the episode name and season so post a comment of you k ow what episode and what season it was in. I think it was season six or five.)
After the little chat with Reid the girls went back to their own train carts.
"I can't believe Reid went through that." Said Rainbow as she flies up to her bunk bed.
"Me either and I'm hoping we don't have to go through all that one day." Agreed Twilight (HINT HINT)
When they arrived at Canterlot their cars was already waiting for them so they got into the car and went to the police station which was right next to the castle.
"Darlings how are you doing today?" Asked a feminine voice the girls all knew they turned around and there was Rarity.
"Rarity!" They yelled as they hugged here.
"We were about to visit you when there was a murder that postponed it. " Twilight explained.
"It's ok so what are we doing today?"
"We're going to follow the humans to a crime scene so we can learn to become them as well." Said Rainbow.
"That sounds fun lets of then."
The team arrived a the murder scene the house looked like the suburban houses back on earth but the door seems a bit smaller and there was no space for a car.
When they entered they saw three chairs looking at each other and three bodies sitting in them.
"They unsub tied them up and forced them to watch the family dies." Said Rossi as they looked around.
"The father had multiple stab wounds in the chest and a shot in the head but the mother and the son only had gun wounds why?' Asked Reid.
"Maybe the unsub had a bad connection with his father and also looked at this they father was five foot four tall for a stallion pony so how did one unsub take control of the area so fast and easily?" Asked Rossi.
"Maybe cause the unsub had a gun or a partner." Answered Reid.
(Home invasion,specific targets or a burglary gone wrong stay tuned and find out next chapter.)
Author's Note
Well here you go all new killers victim and a MO the profile for the unsub and the new chapter will come out maybe Tomorrow. Before that some other stuff.
