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Transformation I (First Draft)
Krakatoa did WHAT?! The unexpected break in.
Krakatoa did WHAT?! The unexpected break in.
When I awoke on the limo bed, I looked around. I saw the mile marker was at 25 and counting down, I almost out of the state. The driver said that were stopping at Blythe, California, 150 miles away from the University. When we stopped at the gas station, I ran to the bathroom. After my business was done, I grabbed a few snacks from the store. My driver filled up the limo and went back inside to wait patiently for me.
The women who was scanning my snacks looked at me it was a brisk look, “What are you a famous person?”
I nodded and said, “I just got accepted to go to an awesome University.”
She sighed, “Well good for you!” She looked kind of pissed, but I digress.
After that fiasco, we headed to the edge of the California, when suddenly, an earthquake was happening. The driver slammed on the brakes so we could stop. There was a truck in the distance, but it was not stopping and was continuing down the highway. The ground underneath pushed the truck vertically to make it airborne and it headed towards the limo. I grabbed my backpack; jumped out of the limo, ducked in a ditch, the truck exploded when it crashed onto the limo. Then the earthquake stopped.
The TV was on, it said, “Krakatoa, the sleeping volcano that erupted in the 1800’s has erupted again. The California, Japan, the Philippines have suffered tsunami’s.”
I looked at the TV, just staring at the screen, my world was falling apart. Mother Nature is probably pissed at the people who released carbon dioxide into the atmosphere has had enough. My parents, sister, and friends are all dead.
I stepped out the gas station, looked towards the direction of Long beach. There at that moment a tsunami 20 feet high was heading towards me. There was nothing I could do, I looked at the pendant that my sister gave me and started to cry. When a tear landed on the pendant; the earth shook underneath me, a circle formed around me and then light surrounded me. I looked at the tsunami and blinked.
I am dead, I am dead, and I am totally dead. The weight of the tsunami killed me and I am with my parents in heaven. But that was not the case, when that light surrounded around me, I must of teleported to a forest. I survived and after that I started to yell in the moaning of my family’s death.
After I recovered from the trauma, I looked at my phone, no service or 4G. I am definitely not in a place where technology exists. I found a tree that looked climbable, when I reached the top. I was in awestruck, my jaw dropped to the floor. In the distance of where I was at, there was Canterlot, coming out of the clouds. It looked very beautiful with the sunset in the background.
“Oh, shit. I am in Equestria!!!! I am in EQUESTRIA!!!!!!!!” Shouted with overwhelming feelings. Stopped to think, ‘I have my laptop and a solar charger!!!’ I went down from the tree to the ground floor. Grabbed my laptop, turned it on, on the desktop there was a background picture with my family on it. I got rid of it and put it in a safe folder for now and replaced it with Celestia, Luna, Cadance and Twilight.
I searched through my pictures and grabbed a map of Equestria. I got my note pad and copied as best as I could to get directions from where I came from. Speaking of that, I grabbed a stick and marked off where I teleported. Not that I cared anymore, but I digress. My excitement for this world was getting bigger and better.
Then I realized, ‘Am I the first human ever to walk Equestria? I could scared everypony….’ I just laughed, Everypony?! I know I am just going to fit in. I put my laptop away and made my way to Canterlot.
I am a few hours or so, my watch said it was 9:00pm at night, but who knows what time it is in Equestria. I made it to the face of the mountain, I looked up and I see Canterlot several miles away from the bottom of the cliff. Turn around to see the pony railway on my right and Ponyville on my left. It looked beautiful from the distance. It was a good thing too that the Everfree forest stretched from Ponyville to Canterlot. I hope nobod-pony saw me.
I saw tunnel at the end of the mountain, the railway went through the tunnel to Canterlot, but I needed a better way to get there without being seen. Reason for this is, one Panic, two questions from everywhere, three getting to the princesses first will be a huge opportunity because they will introduce me to the world. Too bad I was not teleported to Canterlot first, but I digress.
Anyway, I put my camera back in my pack, and continued. In another 30 minutes, I reached to a hatch on the bottom. It was locked, but I had a plan. I grabbed my keys (I carry them all the time, it’s a natural habit.), fidget the lock and the next thing I knew it was unlocked.
I grabbed my flashlight, out of my pack, and looked at the horizon. It was almost morning time, I stayed up an entire night without sleeping… Wow, I am excited. The hatch slid open and I climbed inside. I stretched because my back was killing me with the stair. I closed the hatch and looked around. There was a sign says ‘Emergency Exit in case of Disaster.’ Huh. Who knew?
Then the next few moments, the doors opened, I hear the most purifying voice of all time, “Sister, you can go to bed now.” It was Celestia.
I did not want to look, because Alicorns have senses beyond me… Wait that is fan fiction…. I face palmed lightly.
“Not now sister, I sensed some pony did not sleep at all last night.” That was Luna, but who was she talking about. Maybe she was talking about me or some pony else.
“And who might that be?” Celestia asked.
Luna spoke, “He’s right in this room.” Now my heart was now beating fast.
Author's Note
Now things are probably getting interesting right? Well I decided to get two chapter today, because I felt like doing it 'cough the website was watching me cough'.
Anyway now lets hope to not get into anymore conflicts right? Please don't message me again website developers! I was only trying to convince people that Trey is human and teleported to Equestria. I just wanted a back story for Trey. IS THAT ASKING FOR TOO MUCH?!
I digress, I hope you guys like it and I hope to see the comments.
(Update) I have a website that lets me check my grammar and I'll be using that to post more chapters.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Introducing myself to the Princesses and meeting Discord
Introducing myself to the Princesses and meeting Discord
I look around the chair I see in full glory. Princess Celestia and Princess Luna standing several feet from the chair. Celestia’s light rainbow mane was flowing; it was representing the beautiful days of Equestria, Luna’s dark blue mane was flowing slowly, but diligently like the nights of Equestria.
“I know who you are and you do not know me.” I said cautiously, they look one another like I did not know what I was saying.
“Well, if you know who we are, then you might as well prove it.” Luna said, she grinned and looked at Celestia, who was not sure what to say.
“You with the dark blue mane is named Princess Luna, the one who was reformed by Princess Twilight. You were once evil, but with the Elements of Harmony; you are now good. You have a crest moon cutie mark which represents the rising and setting of the moon.” I said, I looked at Luna’s jaw dropping face.
Luna recovered, “Well-I, uh. Yes you are very correct.”
“You with the very light rainbow mane is named Princess Celestia. Once was able to move the set and rise the moon and sun, when you banished your sister. You taught a very talented student named Twilight Sparkle. You were once defeated by the Changing Queen Chrysalis. You and your sister defeated Discord the holder of Chaos. Also you congratulated Twilight Sparkle to become a princess.” When I finished, Celestia kept a good face while I way stating myself.
“How do you know this information?” Celestia asked, I now think it is the time to reveal myself. The Princesses trust me to a point and they were curious.
“To tell you the truth, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna; I think you will be shocked to find out what kind of creature I am.” I stepped away from the chair and took a deep breath.
I put out one leg, then the other and now the whole body. Both of the Princesses gasped. I let them take it all in. “I am what you call a futuristic monkey. I am a homosapien from a different dimension. I hope I did not scare you as much.” I said with my heart beating at the speed of sound.
I grabbed my back pack, from behind and in a flash they were right in front of me. It looks like they were analyzing me. Luna looked at my bag and Celestia looked at my anatomy.
“You are very different creature, you wear clothing, have items in your bag and most of all you are an interesting creature who past all the guards to this specific room to meet us.” Celestia stated.
“I am very confused of what these little items are.” Luna asked staring at my laptop.
“In my world, we have a thing called a TV that holds moving pictures and we watch you. You have a show called My Little Pony. I know it sounds strange, but let me tell you this. I am just confused as you are and I am very glad to meet you both.” I said.
Luna and Celestia looked at one another and looked relieved. “I suppose we cannot call you a spy, or alien. We can call you our friend from a distant land.” Celestia said and Luna nodded her head.
“Come, I will take you to your guest room and we will have a party to introduce our new friend, oh I am sorry what was your name?” Luna asked.
“My name is Trey, it is a pleasure to meet you.” I said, out of nowhere I hugged Luna, at first she hesitated, but she hugged back. Letting go I hugged Celestia as well and got a reply.
Luna looked at me gave me a confused look, “What’s wrong? Why are you crying?”
I grabbed a tissue from my pocket, I wiped the tear off and said, “I’m so glad to be in Equestria with you Princesses, it’s like a dream.”
Being escorted to the guest room and seeing the guards' face (How did he get in here? Face), was just priceless. Thinking about the guest room gave me a question, ‘Will I have the room Rarity had or will be this a different room. I have all the knowledge of My-Little-Pony-knowledge and a lot of information from the Generations (and yes the horrible Generation 3. *Shudder*).
I looked around while I was getting escorted, when we were stopped by a well-known reformed creature.
“Hello Celestia, I am here to say that Tirek has been sealed completely and will not be getting out anytime so- GAH!? What is this creature? I did not make him, honest!”
“Hello Discord, the one and only free being from Celestia’s seal and was reformed by the ways of friendship is magic. You are the one and only who controls and harnesses chaos by your will and I admire that.” I said to a Discord who was very confused.
Discord looked at me and said, “Well I guess were going to be the best of pals.”
He held out his bear looking hand and I shook it saying, “I hope you do not betray us again.” I smiled and Discord was just dumbfounded.
We walked around shocked Discord, I overheard him saying, “I’ve got to tell this to Fluttershy, she will just love this new creature.” Then he disappeared.
I look at Celestia, “So~ Celestia, How has been your relationship with Discord been after he gave you the flowers and winked at you?” She stopped and so did Luna and I. She looked down and said, “Well we did go out on occasions and we were just...”
We nodded and continued walking when I see Shining Armor in the distance.
I tap Luna’s shoulder, “Could you call Shining Armor to here, I would like to mess with his buttons too.”
She looked at me and said, “In due time, my friend… In due time.”
We made it to my room and I was first to open it. I had a big bed, a nice desk, a table in the middle and a nice view of the Ponyville and beyond the cities. I ran to the desk and emptied my bag. Grabbed my clothes and put them in the Desk drawer. Put my electronics on the table and hanged the solar charger on a hook. Then plugged in all the electronics.
I stopped to find Celestia and Luna just looking at the devices, it was something that was unseen before and it looked very different with their current tech. (E.G. Steam trains are a point of history where their technology is steam powered. Maybe a little bit of electricity from the Flim and Flam Brothers, but I digress.)
“I will show you these devices when their charged from the energy of the sun.” I said. I heard O’s and Ah’s from them; they were amazed.
I heard Luna saying, “So they only work during the night time?”
I said, “Both day and night.” Again another round of O’s and Ah’s.
This was getting interesting, because introducing them to the technology will overtime advance them to invent more technology. Celestia looked at Luna, and she looks at her. They both smiled.
“You wait here and we will get the welcoming party started.” Celestia said.
I smiled, “I believe you are going to have the one and only Pinkie pie to plan the party?” Again Luna and Celestia were surprised and even smiled wider.
“I suppose I will fit right in with this knowledge, right?” I asked.
Both Luna and Celestia nodded and Luna said, “We’ll let you settle in and my sister and I believe that you are indeed going to fit in.”
They left and closed the door. I grabbed my laptop and opened a word document and typed:
My quest in Equestria. I have been teleported to Equestria which is every body’s dream of doing. I do not even want to go back to earth anymore. I love being in this place! I met Princess Celestia, Princess Luna and Discord. They accepted me and I am having a welcoming party! I am going to meet all types of ponies. Unicorns, Pegasus’s, and earth ponies. This I am going to be an exciting life from here on out!
I look at my laptop it only has 22% left for power. I save the document and turn off my computer, lie on my new bed thinking, ‘Everything is going to be alright now.’
Author's Note
Makes me wonder what's going to happen in the story.... I'll be making chapters when I have time. Stay tuned.
(Update) I have a website that lets me check my grammar and I'll be using that to post more chapters.
Transformation I (First Draft)
A few hours have passed by, and I realized something… I smell horrible. I have not took a shower for at least two in a half days. I grabbed my pack, it held my change of clothes and a swimming shorts? What was a pair of swimming shorts doing in my pack? I continue to unfold the clothing; there was a note. I was hesitant to open it, but decide to read it, it said:
To my Dearest son Trey,
Well we know our family was going to be separated sometime, but dear god it was too soon. I packed a few things in the pack if you forgot to pack in your suit case.
Your dad, sister and I love you so much and have the best of fun in college.
Love Mom
When I finished the note, tears were streaming down my cheek, but I wiped the tear off with my tissue and I put the note on the desk next to the mirror. I looked at myself in my current state, less chubby from before clothes are worn down and I look like a wreck up close. Then I remembered I need to take a shower for the party.
Well minus well shape up and go to the bathroom to take a shower. I grabbed my swim stuff, and my new change of clothes, because who knows what the shower looks like. I saw a sign, it hold a map of the castle. From my room to the shower, it’s literally next door and across the hall from the door is the dining room/party room.
‘I’ll go there after my shower, because I am so hungry, but I hygiene is more important. It’s not like I am starving to death.’ I thought.
I opened the door and headed to the bathroom and I stopped when I saw this beautiful sign. ‘Unisex Showers.’ At first I was at glee, but then stopped and gulped.
‘I know its Unisex, but I am sort of scared to enter.’ I thought, but I slapped my head and said, “C’mon I am a man, I can do this…. I hope.”
Walked in side and it sort of looked like a Japanese changing room; there was a glass that separated the vapor in the bathing area. I scanned the area and quickly changed into my swimming trunks. I carefully opened the slide door, the mist that was holding in the room was released. To keep the room warm, I slid through into the bathing area and closed the door. When the mist cleared I saw that there was three baths with signs. One huge one saying ‘Casual Swimming’ A medium one that said, Personnel Bathing’ and a Small one with bubbles in it says, ‘Sauna hot tub.’
I went the medium one and I realized that there was no dividers for personnel bathing. It was a square within a square and there water was at least of five feet long and 3-4 feet deep; then it there was marble shelves on the surface.
I walked down the stairs and the water was warm, to almost a point of hotness. I picked a shelf, put my goggles and towel on the top. Then I saw a bar of soap and a wash clothe. It was not used, and it seemed new. I grabbed the soap and washed myself and saw something blue in the distance of the mist.
My first reaction, I ducked down and peeked across. It was Luna in the Hot Tub and I tried to wash fast without being caught. It was like I was in the girl’s locker room.
“You know you do not have to be shy, Trey.” Luna shouted across the room.
I was first embarrassed for no reason, “I just want to be at least clean, and so I will not be smelly around other ponies.”
“Could you help me with something, Trey?” Luna asked.
I could hear my heart going up to my throat, I know I have not had a girlfriend, but I just do not get it. Even though I was popular nobody could stay with me. Now I think I am in love with Luna; it’s just as simple as that.
My brain slapped itself together so I could say something, “I-I could help you, but it depends on what it is…”
I turned around slowly and Luna standing in the water with me; she was looking at me with her sapphire eyes, looking concerned.
“Can you sir Trey, wash my…” she was blushing and continued, “Wash my scar?”
I was relieved at first, but then I thought. ‘Scar? She has a scar?’ I thought where is the world she got a scar, then it hit me. When Celestia hit her with the Elements of Harmony.
I put my hand on her shoulder, “I would like to do that for you, but I have to ask, why?”
She sighed, got out of the bath and laid down on the marble, “When I use my magic to wash myself, I can only get my whole body, except my scar. When I touch it, my magic goes on the frits and I cannot get wash it with my hooves.” She opened her front legs, revealing her scar has been hidden by her fur.
“I believe you got this when you faced against Celestia?” I asked and I got a nod from Luna.
I grabbed my unused washcloth and soaked it and rubbed some soap in the clothe under the water to the surface.
When I walked close to her, I said, “Just tell me when you are in pain, so I can stop.” Luna looked at me and nodded.
I jumped to the other side of the pool, “I’m sorry!”
Luna put her hoof on her mouth and made a ‘shhh’ face, “I’m sorry Trey, I am just so sensitive when someone tries to wash me or touch me.”
I got back up to her, I finished the job. I grabbed a handful of water and said, “I have to wash this off and it might sting because it’s trying to heal.”
Luna nodded, I put the water over her scare and released it. She held in squeal, and was banging her hoof on the marble. When the pain settled, she sighed. There was some tears in her eyes, it must have hurt.
“I’m sorry if I hurt you, but you had some dead skin and I had to wash it out. So just get some healing herbs and it will heal in no time. If I could ask you a question; why could not your sister to help you?” I asked.
Luna smiled and leaned in her head on my shoulder, “Thank you, Trey. I was trying to hide my scar from my sister, I just could not get her worried.”
“I understand, but you can trust your sister, you are her only family; or so what I think. I have another question; why did you pick me to do this?” I asked again.
I could feel Luna’s head heat up, “Well, since your intelligent with Pony knowledge… I just had to trust somebody.”
Out of nowhere I tickled Luna’s belly and she was giggling, “Hey! *laughs* No fair! *laughs*” She pushes me away and jumps in and says, “HERE COME THE KISSES!!!” She was making these kissy faces and was kissing my face.
My back was against the wall, “Alright! Alright you win!” She stopped, looked at me and I was looked at her. We laughed, I was enjoying this and she was as well. I am happy, so very happy.
I grabbed my stuff and we headed out to the changing area. I was blushing because Luna was following me. I looked at her and showed a face meaning ‘I need privacy please?’ She understood and went back to the Hot tub. I got in dried off and changed into my Jeans, and my little pony shirt with the mane six and the Alicorns.
I opened the door and she was there right in front of me, “I did not peek honest.” She said.
I just trusted what she said and I let her in. I was surprised that Luna did not react to my shirt. I wonder... Anyway, I saw her shelf which was holding a blue dress. I stared at her, without her armor she is on beautiful Alicorn. She levitated her dress and looked at it and looked at me.
“I think you should go your room and wait until you are called to the party room.” Luna said. I was compliant to her orders.
Before I left I said, “Let me know if you want any other help.” Luna smiled and covered herself with a towel in embarrassment.
I step out and headed back to my room. When I went inside, I saw something different in my room, there was a laundry hamper right next to the door. Conveniently I put the dirty clothes into the hamper and walked to the window.
I see ponies working in the party area, the party was getting bigger and it was extending to the outside. ‘This is going to be an awesome party.’ I thought.
The door opened, and I looked behind me and it was Luna in a stunning, white, sparkling dress. I was staring in a good way.
I laughed, “No. No. No… I was just wondering if Rarity made your dress and if so, she did capture your beautiful night to reflect on yourself. So what I am saying is that; you look as beautiful as the night and the moon.”
“You’re flattering me, sir Trey.” Luna was hiding herself with her wing.
I walked to her, lightly touched her wing, “When I say something to make anybody happy, I mean it.”
She looked at me, I looked at her; there was a long silence. I coughed to break the silence, “Well we better surprise everypony.”
Luna nodded, “R-Right, let me lead you to the room to surprise and maybe stun everypony.” She giggled and I giggled.
We walked out of the room, and headed to the doors which lead to the party. Luna opened the door to let me in and it was dark when I entered.
Author's Note
Now I hope you like that romance, I'll make another chapter with Luna's point of view. Hope everybody likes it.
So hopefully I'll have time to do the next chapter tomorrow. So wish me luck!
(Update) I have a website that lets me check my grammar and I'll be using that to post more chapters.
Transformation I (First Draft)
Ever since Trey, cleaned my scar, I wanted to take his advice to heal it. After I put my dress on, I headed to the infirmary. I asked the nurse if she had any healing herbs, she was at first hesitant, then gave me a purple jar with a red cross on it. I levitated it a few feet from my head and carried it to my room.
I closed the door behind me and locked it. I took off my dress, put it on the bed. I levitated a clothe and when I opened the jar, it smelled like roses. ‘Scented ointment? That is very convenient to thyself.” I thought.
I wanted to make an impression on Trey… Wait make an impression. I put my hoof on my cheek and I realized that I was blushing when I thought about him. ‘Why am I am enchanted by Trey?’ I thought in my mind.
Anyway I shook my head and applied the ointment on the scar. To my surprise it did not sting at all. It seems that Trey cleaned it off really well. Also when I applied it, my magic did not go on the fritz. Now I was wondering what he really did to clean it.
I put away the jar and clothe on my table and walked to the mirror. The ointment disguised the scar and it I saw it was healing very slowly. Magic ointments were always made to heal cuts and scars, this was available for everypony. I levitated my dress and put it on, I saw myself on the mirror and I looked decent.
“Alright Luna, you can do this. Rarity really did a good job on making this dress. I hope Trey likes it on me.” Luna thought out loud.
Then there was a knock on my door, I levitated the ointment and clothe into the drawers. The door opened and it was my sister.
“How is the party preparations, Tia?” I asked.
“I’m afraid, I could only invite six ponies and a baby dragon.” Celestia said.
“What do you mean, you invited Canterlot did you?” I was confused.
“With Trey being a different creature, that is not part of this land, I do not want to cause panic. I just invited my faithful Princess Twilight, and her friends.” Celestia explained.
I sat down on the ground thinking, ‘Would this hurt Trey?’ “Well if it’s for the ponies keeping their sanity, then I understand. I will just get Trey out of his room to surprise the seven of them… Guess.” I said.
Celestia looked concerned, “What’s wrong Luna? Is there something you need to tell me?”
I thought about the ointment and the scar that was underneath my dress. “It’s nothing, it’s just that when were done with the party, I could like to discuss something important to you… Privately.”
Sister nodded, she understood, “Anything for my sister. Now I will tell everypony to get ready.”
She left and I followed behind her. She headed to the party room and I headed to Trey. ‘I really hope he doesn't get upset.’
When Trey entered the room, I was hesitant for a moment and waiting outside the door. Trey really complimented me with the dress a whole lot and I thought, ‘Why is he only doing this to me?’ I shook my head to debunk it. It was a first dark, it was lasting a few moments. It seems Celestia wanted to surprise Trey and it looked like Trey was just waiting. Then the lights turned on.
He at first covered his eyes because was at first blinded, he was then greeted with, “SURPRISE!!!! WAHH???!!!!” All I heard next was ponies trotting to the far end of the room.
Trey panned around and I looked over his shoulder; there was Twilight, Applejack, Spike, and Rarity in one corner. Then Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie pie in the other corner. Then I walked towards Trey.
“I hope you understand Trey,” when I walked to his right side, “We did not want the ponies of Canterlot and Ponyville because it would cause panic. If you would understand.”
I was looking at his face, but it was not despair or sadness, it was happiness. Maybe he realizes that Celestia and I did this for his well-being and he nodded. I now knew that he understood the situation. Then at the corner of my eye, Pinkie rushed towards me and was protecting me.
“Don’t worry Princess, I will save you! Who are you and who are you working for?” Pinkie said, I knew that she was scared.
I sighed, “I see that this would happen; let me introduce you to this creature named Trey.”
“Hello everypony it’s nice to meet you.” Trey said bowing down.
Rainbow Dash flew towards Trey and was face to face, staring at one another, “Hello Rainbow dash!” Trey said.
This startled her and flew back a ways, “How do you know my name? Are you a Spy? But first what are you.”
Trey collected himself, “I assure you Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Spike; I am no threat to you. I am a creature from another dimension, which is very different with yours. To classify myself, I am a highly advanced monkey with intelligence. In my world we worship you 7, Celestia, Luna and all Equestria."
Trey grabbed something out of his pants and he held one device, “To show you proof, I will show you my technology.” Then there was a flash and a click. To the 7’s direction.
I saw Twilight smiling, she was now interested to meet him. She walked to him and said, “Trey, what did you just do?”
Fluttershy flew towards him and touched his ears, face and gave him a hug, “I do not think you are dangerous, you look like you are far from home visiting us and besides Discord told me about you in advance.”
Everypony except for Trey and I was surprised for a moment, then Trey broke the silence.
“Well I am here to stay, I want to stay here.” Trey said to Fluttershy while petting her mane. Then everypony else gathered around, it seemed that now their taking interest.
“Where did you make that smashing outfit, darling?” Rarity spoke.
“I bought it in a store form where I came from. It has you in it, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Twilight, Princess Cadance, and then the rest of you.” Trey explained.
Applejack then spoke, “So, you are telling me that you came from a distant dimension or whatever and wanted to stay here in Equestria?”
Trey nodded, “For the longest time it was people’s dream to go to Equestria and live there.”
Pinkie pulled a pendant out of he is pocket, “What’s this?”
I was then curious, and walked toward Pinkie, and I looked at the pendant. Why it was all the Princess’s cutie marks on the pendant collage into one.
Trey smiled, “It was made for me from my sister.” He grabbed it and put it on his neck. It dangled on his chest.
He turned around, and was trying to take deep breaths. It looks like he was trying to calm down. Everypony stood back, but I stayed by his side. “What happened, Trey is your world OK?”
He looked at me, his eyes were in despair. He then walked to a chair and sat down. Spike followed fast, “Hey, what is wrong with you?”
I then followed to Trey and sat right next to him, everypony sat around the table. Trey sighed, then he explained everything that he could.
Everypony was shocked. Rarity and Fluttershy were crying, Applejack tipped her hat down, Twilight and the others held their ground of emotions.
I looked at him, “Trey doesn't mean you are the last of your kind?” He did not say anything, but put his head down. I covered my face with my hooves, trying to hide my emotions. I did not know how to respond, but all I could say was, “I’m sorry.”
He then got up, “No do not be. I can morn form my family members all I want, but I have to move on someday. Right?”
He wiped his tears off with his shirt, and smiled, “Hey why the long faces? Why do not we party?! Let’s have some Applejack’s Apple cider?”
“NOW YOU’RE TALKING!!! LET’S PARTY!!!” Pinkie shouted and pulled her party cannon out and fired confetti.
Trey and everypony else partied like it was no tomorrow. I knew that for a fact that he was have a good time, even at his hardships. After everybody was done partying, Celestia walked the seven to their rooms and I walked Trey to his room.
“You know Luna, I wanted to give you something to resemble our… bond.” Trey said opening his door.
“You do not have to give me anything, Trey. I am fine with you just here… By my side.” Luna said.
He did not listen, but he grabbed a statue that he pulled out of his pack. He then showed it to me and I was surprised. It was me sleeping on top of the moon sitting on a pedestal.
“My sister wanted to give this to you. So I hope you can take this.” Trey said.
“Oh, my, Trey this is beautiful.” I gave him a hug and levitated the statue, “I need to go to talk to Celestia about my scar and I am sort of scared.”
He held my chin and lifted it to his face, “You and Celestia are sisters, and there is no explanation why she would not hate you. I just want to tell you this, she will understand.”
That was the most touching thing he ever told me, he let me go and then show a hand gesture to go to see her. I nodded and left. He closed the door and my worries withered away. ‘He’s right, Celestia would not hat me if I told her.’ She thought.
I opened the door to my room and there was Celestia waiting for me, “Well sister, I have my full attention.”
Author's Note
Alright time for a little bit of sad parts. But really what did you think. Things will start to pick up, I swear. Something will play part soon and no spoilers!
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Transformation I (First Draft)
The Cutie Mark Interrogation Crusaders
Twilight. All I have to say is this. Your ‘Twilight Time’ really did get the Cutie Mark Crusaders to improve on their hobbies. So all I have to say is keep on doing the good work.
I saw the episode, Twilight Time, I had mixed emotions about it. Overall I thought they are really growing as characters, instead of pursuing their talents (Their Cutie Marks). Which is good, not thinking what you are going to do in the future, especially when you are at a young age, could in fact affect their personalities.
When confronted by the CMC, Luna and I were taken to their Tree house. We agreed with them to answer some questions and Sweetie Bell was keeping a good eye on us, even though we were invisible. I had to ask her how she learned that and Luna was too surprised that a foal was able to detect us.
We sat down on a bench that was made by Applejack, the name was engraved on the top board. Luna and I just sat there; we looked at one another of what happens if they found out who I really look like. Luna looked concerned, but I just waved at her like it was going to be fine.
“Alright, who are you sir? Why are you invisible?” Apple Bloom asked.
Sweetie Bell corrected her, “Uh, Apple Bloom there are two of them. All I can say is one is a pony and the other is not."
“How do you know that? Did Twilight teach you some detecting spells?” Scootaloo asked her.
Apple Bloom and Scootaloo were glaring at her wanting to know and I too was wondering the same.
Finally she fessed up, “I borrowed a spell book from Twilight and she was OK with that. I looked through the book and some seemed complicated. I asked my sister, but the only one she could give me was this detecting spell. I guess it’s for my protection. It was the only one for me and Twilight said it takes time to learn certain spells so… I guess it came in handy?”
Luna was about to say something but I covered her muzzle with my hand. She glanced at me and I put my finger to my mouth making a ‘shhh’ gesture. She smiled, she knew that I was going to get us out of this and nodded in return.
“Alright, you got me, but before I answer anything, I would like to read your past.” I said and there were just confused faces all around.
“How can you read our past? Do you have magic?” Sweetie Bell asked.
“No, I do not have magic, I am an earth pony.” I fibbed.
“Yeah, we do not believe you. Just answer the qu-” Scootaloo was stopped by Apple Bloom’s hoof against her mouth.
“Wait Scootaloo, let’s just see what he has to say. I am interested to know what is going to unfold.” Apple Bloom explained.
“Isn't this working against us? He might just asked us questions instead of him answering ours.” Sweetie Bell explained.
Before they responded to Sweetie Bell’s remark I got my knowledge rolling, “Sweetie Bell, Scootaloo, Apple Bloom the Cutie Mark Crusaders that had made Babs Seed the honorary member of the CMC. She is to help find more ponies that do not have Cutie Marks and search for their talents.”
That really did made them up go quiet. All of them gathered around the bench, curious of what else I had to say. Luna was in awe of my knowledge she has yet to learn from me.
I continued, “Apple Bloom, youngest foal in the Apple family. You have a Big brother name Big Mcintosh, and you have an older sister named Applejack. You have a grandmother name Granny Smith. You and Twilight have been improving on you science and growing plants.”
Apple Bloom was shocked, she did not know what to say. She looked at Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell who were surprised about it. To their point of view the saw nothing, but they wonder what kind of pony I really was.
I looked at Scootaloo, “Scootaloo, fan of Rainbow Dash and you consider her as a sister. You have tried to fly, but sadly you have not. That is OK, because you try hard and you have made improvements with Twilight to break apart items and put them back together. You had to fight your fears and Princess Luna was able to aid you.”
Scootaloo slightly smiled and she liked that compliment. I was starting to like this, and when I glanced at Luna she was enjoying the foal’s faces.
I looked at Sweetie Bell, “Sweetie Bell, you are the younger sister of Rarity. You and your sister had had some fights, but overtime you learn from each other and you bond as siblings. Even if your parents are away you try to make the best of it. For example when you destroyed Rarity’s project that Sapphire Shores wanted for her group; you never understood Rarity’s point of view. Later when Luna visited your dreams she told you that you need to fix it. Then you were able to and you learned your lesson.”
Luna was nodding when I was saying this. It took a good while for the Crusaders to snap out of it. The stepped away when all of a sudden, I saw Applejack outside the front door with Rarity through the window. Luna saw this too and when they knocked on the door, we stood up.
The Crusaders looked like they wanted to ask more questions. So they opened the door and went outside. I pointed towards the exit, that lead to the other way and she nodded. I opened the door and Luna went out first and I was about to follow, but I wanted to eavesdrop on the Cutie Mark Crusaders talking to Applejack and Rarity.
“But I do not want to go home yet.” It was Apple Bloom.
“I’m sorry sugar cube, you did not do your chores and you have to do them before they double tomorrow.” Applejack explained.
“I agree Applejack, Sweetie Bell, your friend Button Mash stopped by and he wanted to know where you are. Did you see him? I pointed to this Tree house.” Rarity said.
Scootaloo explained, “He wanted to be in the CMC, but he is a boy and we cannot have a boy in the CMC. So I turned him away before he came to the tree house.”
“YOU DID WHAT?” Sweetie Bell was outraged!
“It’s true Button wanted to join the CMC!” Scootaloo said.
It was starting to heat up and they were about to get in the tree house. I jumped down into the hole and closed the door lightly. I landed on my feet and was running towards Luna which was ten feet away from me.
“That was incredulous, Trey. You really know all about them. It’s like you are a fortune teller.” Luna said. She looked very impressed of my intelligence, I blushed a little.
It was getting near sunset time and we continued From a distance we hear the CMC scream. Well they now know we were gone, we ran a little bit towards town.
Before we went into time square, Luna stopped me, “What’s wrong?”
“I need to raise the moon for tonight so can we sit at the small hill at the park so I can do my job?” Luna asked.
After she was done, she sat back down. I glanced at her, “You know in my world, the earth has its own gravitational pull and the sun and moon move on their own.”
She was admiring me and I turned to see if anyone was around, “Is anybody there?” I asked.
She giggled, “No I just admire your intellect. You are very foreign Trey and I like that about you.”
Again I was being embarrassed and blushed, “No, you are just flattering me.”
She got her hoof and put it under my chin and moved my head to see eye to eye, “When a Princess says something to their subjects, they do not take it for granted. When I speak I am serious.”
“Hey that was my line, but you phased it in a different way.” I complained.
She stared at me, “Then prove it.”
We stared at each other’s eyes and looked away and laughed. Luna and I were have a great time. Then I looked at my hand it was turning to regular color.
“We need to go. The spell is wearing off and fast.” I said when I got up.
“Let’s make haste.” Luna said offering me to ride her back.
I got on and she took off, I looked at the hill and there was a purple horn in a bush. I tried to get a better look and Twilight's head popped out of the bush. She was spying on us? Why, how and when I do not even have a clue.
It was getting darker and I could not see anything other than Luna’s moon and shadows. I looked at my hand it was back to normal. Wait if the invisible magic worn off, then the light weight magic is about to… Oh no!
“Luna! How long do we have until we get to Canterlot?” I shouted through the wind.
“Only about three minutes, why?” Luna asked looking at herself and realized the situation, “Hold on tight!” she shouted.
Out of nowhere, we jumped to one speed to a faster speed.
“WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!” I yelled grabbing on to Luna’s chest for dear life. We shot up into the air and we started to turn like a football.
“The window that we exited out of is closed!” Luna shouted.
“Let’s try your room! Got to your balcony!” I shouted back.
Her horn glowed and the doors opened, “Hold on tight Trey!”
“I’ll try!” I said, there was a magic aura surrounding me, the spell was about to end.
Only ten feet to go to Luna wings were only flashing, through my eyes. She was sweating and breathing heavily, we rose above the rail of the balcony and past through the glass doors. She used her magic to stop her wings thrashing back and forth and the g-forces took its course. Luna saw me as I was flying past her, she responded by using her levitation power to stop me and her in place. She stopped her levitation's and we landed on her bed.
I was in shock; that was the most dangerous thing I or we have ever done. I looked at Luna she was exhausted, breathing heavily, sweating buckets on her clean sheets. I was not different the whole experience was thrilling. The magic aura disappeared, I started to feel my own weight.
“Maybe next time we can take the train?” I asked.
Luna let out a snicker, “I second that.”
I got up, but I felt very woozy and landed on the bed. I think that the weight adjuster spell has some side affects. I thought about how Celestia put the Scroll of spells on the table. Did she plan this? I have no clue, I was starting to get superstitious.
“Can I ask you a question?” I asked.
“Ask away.” Luna asked and it her breathing was returning to normal.
“It seems the spell you cast on me had side affects and I think it's taking its toll.” I explained.
Luna was silent, she then was embarrassed or it might be the exhaustion. I only known her for a week and we have been bonding like crazy, but it was more than that. We trusted each other and it was her turn to trust me even more.
“If you stay on your side of the bed then I do not see why not.” She answered.
I gazed at her, I was in fact happy. Now I looked at her body, silky legs, fine butt rounded cutie mark, slim belly leading up to her face. Then reality snapped me in half in realization. ‘What am I am doing? I know I am at Equestria and I am the only human here, but I am Human!’ My instincts are telling me to stop, but my heart wants to be with her.
I shook my head, “Good night Luna.”
Luna put her horn on my forehead, and it glowed. My eyes were getting heavier. I was falling asleep.
“Good night Trey, see you in your dreams.” She said before I fell into a deep sleep.
Author's Note
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Sharing Dreams... Danger ahead
When Trey fell asleep, I was staring at his face. It looked peaceful, he must be having a good dream. I think I need to visit him in his dream to see what he thinks. At first I was nervous, I really never when inside another creatures dream. I was used to go into other ponies dream to see what was going on in their lives. Whether it be good or bad I would always leave advice for them. For example, when I visited Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo in their dreams to help them make things right.
Well I had to ask myself this, ‘I just hope I’m not intruding.’ I lowered my horn to Trey’s forehead and cast my transmitting spell. This would get me into ponies’ dreams without them knowing it. I can cast it long distances to other pony’s dreams, but it takes awhile to connect.
Since this was a direct connection; I was able to get into his subconscious. When I entered, there was a metal black beast coming toward me, I flinched, but then I was pulled away by Trey.
There we were together in the same dream, he held my hoof tight and was breathing heavily. I looked at the metal beast, but it was miles away roaring in the distance. It looked like it did not want to eat ponies.
When I glanced at him; I finally I spoke, “You know were in a dream right? The beast would have gone through me.”
He let go of my hoof and was confused, “You know that was not a beast, it was a car. Besides I did not know that to begin with. If I saw you and you were about to get run over, I would save you.”
That made me blush a little, but I shook it off. I walked around Trey to see the scenery around me. The ground was hard, the streets were black, there were patches of grass around and there was not tree insight. There were houses, but they were different from Ponyville.
“Trey, I was wondering, where are we?” I asked.
Trey smiled, “Well Luna, you are in my world seeing it through my eyes. May I take you on a tour?”
He snapped his fingers and a carriage from Equestria popped out. No pony was harnessed to it, he snapped his fingers again. Now it was the same carriage, but with some sort of box connected to it, and it was roaring with life. I believe Trey is in a lucid dream where he can create anything, which I am now getting excited to know what kind of world Trey lived in.
He got inside the carriage and signaled me to get in with him. At first hesitant, but I took a deep breath and walked inside. Inside there was a wheel connected to the floor as well as two pedals. There was two cylinders with dials on them. I went from 0 to 110, it has a label that says, ‘Miles per Hour’
I was one confused Alicorn, this was something I was learning on a whole new level. Next thing I know he puts a seat belt around me and he does the same. Don’t tell me this thing goes faster than a steam engine? It would be impossible!
Trey looked at me, “Let me tell you this…. HOLD ON TIGHT!!!”
He takes a shaft and puts it on D and presses one pedal and we were accelerating. At first it was slow then it gained more and more speed. I glanced at the Meter we are going 60 miles per hour from what the needle is doing. The needle was rising higher and higher until it reached 110 Miles per hour.
I was very excited, my heart was beating, my adrenaline was pumping, and it was a thriller! Then I was laughing, I was laughing because these speeds. Trey and I are having a blast!
“Having fun?” Trey asked, I nodded and he continued, “Were almost to our stop.”
He slowed down a bit and soon the thrill ride was over. We stepped out of the carriage and I inspected the area. There was nothing else than a huge building with a sign that said, ‘Trey.’
“What is this place Trey is this your home?” I said staring up at the towering building.
“No Luna it is a museum my past me and what I learned in my school.” Trey stated.
He stepped inside and I followed. It was hot outside, but when we went inside the temperature was cold, but refreshing. I glanced around to see holes in the ceiling that was pumping out air.
“For my first question Trey, what are the holes for? Why are do they pump different air than the outside?” I asked curiously.
“That is an HVAC system, or a Heating Ventilation Air conditioning unit. When installed into the buildings like this it keeps it cool for the summer and hot for the summer. It is all controlled by this device.” Trey explained and snapped his fingers again to show us the device.
He handed it to me and I was curious, I felt like a filly in an amusement park. The device said it was 62 degrees, I adjusted the temperature by turning the nob clockwise to 70 degrees and it adjusted.
I was astounded, this is probably the best thing ever, but there are so many other things to learn. Trey snapped his fingers and got rid of the device and guided me to a curtain.
“You ready to see what the world looks like from ours?” he asked.
I nodded, “I really am interested in what you do in your world.”
Trey liked the compliment and open the curtains, there was nothing but a small device. Trey walked to it and picked it up. I thought this was a joke, but he returned with the device.
“Since you have a lot of questions about this world, I have invented a memory transceiver. It will transmit my memories and copy to another person. This was invented by us, and when this thing was buyable we would give one another memories. But I didn’t want to share any memories with anyone. So I am going to trust you with these memories, these will be a copy of what I know. I hope you can understand that.” Trey stated.
“Well if there is no other way then, I suppose we can go through with it.” I said and this made Trey happy.
“Alright all I need you to do is to sit next to me and I will do the rest.” Trey said connecting the string looking things with suction cups to it.
The suction cups went on my head to where my brain was, and only three was connected. Trey then connected five of the suction cups on his head.
He sat the device on the ground and said, “Are you ready?”
I nodded, I am nervous of what is going to happen, what kind of memories he will give me. I took a deep breath and he turned on the device.
I closed my eyes and then there was a burst of energy, I learned where human babies come from, to Trey’s birth to his first crawl to walk. Everything was going fast, it accelerated to his a Preschool they would call it then to Elementary school and I would watch young Trey getting rid of bullies. Jump into middle school all the knowledge was being crammed into my head. There were big tests he would struggle on and his parents and baby sister would help. Then came to high school everybody was wearing a different shirt of ponies from Equestria and then a song popped into my head:
My Little Pony, My Little Pony
I was shocked, the song, the moving pictures with the title ‘My Little Pony.’ A song that was sung by millions upon millions of humans. We then go to another building and it said, ‘Bronycon’ on a banner. There were thousands of humans dressed up as ponies from Equestria. There was a card game called My Little Pony card game. This was getting interesting. Then I saw something that was unbelievable, I saw my creator, I don’t remember the name. It was only a picture of her and Celestia was right when she said it was another Alicorn that had made us exist in the first place. She was white, was holding a paint brush and she had an ink holder and a feather pin as her cutie mark.
I then jumped to the scene where Treys house and I saw the beautiful artwork that his sister made. It was everywhere, different ponies and Trey saw her making my gift from afar. She made money from making these masterpieces. Then it jumped to the video about Trey going to another school and it was showing Trey leaving his family. It jumped to the next day and this is when everything went chaotic. The truck almost crushed him, but he escaped in time. He ran to the building he was in before, but nobody was in there and the TV showed the world was destroying itself. The Krakatoa volcano was erupting. He stepped outside and saw the tsunami that was heading towards him and a circle surrounded him and he was at the Everfree forest. Then Trey’s memories stopped.
When I awoke, tears were streaming down my cheeks. I glanced at Trey’s direction, he was in more tears than I.
“I think that is all I have to offer, so how was Bronycon?” Trey asked, but grunted in pain.
I learned everything from Trey and what the device did. What it would do, when it is started it hurts the user, but not the person getting the memories. I went to him and hugged him in disbelief.
“You must be mad using this device. Why did you use it, even though you would get hurt?” I asked him.
All I saw was a smile, “Didn't want you to worry because I would do anything for you.”
“Trey…” I did not know what to say. I was shocked.
He did this for me and I had to do something in return, but I could not think of anything. Trey pushed me aside, and looked ok.
“So how were my memories Luna. Are better than expected?” Trey asked.
Then I remembered something, “When I learned everything, but out of all the things I’ve learned I saw my creator. There is only one thing though, what is her name?”
Trey looked at me and was surprised about what I just said. He sat up and looked recovered from his memory pain.
He looked at me, “Your creator is named, Lauren Faust. She created you and the other ponies. It was a really an amazing feat. It attracted so many people to the TV screen that it caused its own fandom.”
After what I collected from Trey’s memories, I understood everything. A ‘TV’ was a television, ‘people’ are a group of humans, and ‘fandom’ is about being a fan of a show or book. The terms were explaining themselves with my head.
I nodded, “We don’t have any pictures of Lauren Faust. Could you draw us one for the castle?”
Trey grinned, he thought about what to do about the picture, because he can indeed do art, but only drawings.
“How about I make a sculpture of her? It would be amazing.” Trey said.
“That would be amazing, but how about-” I was interrupted, by the scenery.
The scenery of the building was melting. Green ooze was coming out of the walls, floor and ceiling. Then everything dropped all around and we were floating in mid-space. Trey was snapping his fingers, but nothing was happening.
“What’s happening?” Trey asked.
“It seems that the memory from my horn is sharing a vision.” I explained.
“Well putting things melting and green ooze going everywhere doesn’t mean it's a good thing.” Trey answered.
He was right, it is a bad thing. Next thing I know I was separated by Trey and a picture from my mind was showing. It looked like a pony, but the holes came to view. There were holes from her hoofs and horn. Who was this pony? Then I realized that it was indeed Queen Chrysalis.
I inspected the darkness, “Trey? Are you there?”
Then another vision came up it was Trey walking; then daggers came out of nowhere and was stabbed. His shoulder, stomach, legs and his hands. He was lying on the ground, crying in pain. I was in too in tears, why would somebody do this to Trey. After Trey was trying a green light cut off his head.
When I screamed, it echoed to wake me up. Surely enough the vision was over, I was awake in cold sweat. Treys snores got my attention, he was still there and was still sleeping. I looked at the window and it was still opened. It was still night time, the moon was getting close to set. I got out of bed quietly to not interrupt Trey and tipped hoof to the door.
“Luna don’t leave me…. Please.” Trey said in his sleep.
It made me blush a little then, everything from the dream flashed into my brain. All the intelligence from the human world were coming into my memories. I shook it off and opened the door and rushed towards my sister.
When I bust open the doors, “Sister, I have bad news.”
“I know, she has recovered and wants revenge.” Celestia replied.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
I have a sickness?! The truth about my sickness.
I have a sickness?! The truth about my sickness.
When Luna disappeared, my dream was getting deteriorated I was floating in the air motionless. I was about to wake up, but there was an image coming down at my face and it’s me dying against an enemy.
I felt my body cringe and that is that is the most terrifying nightmare I have ever had. My eyes were still closed and when I opened them, Celestia was staring at me. This got me to jump out of the bed and stand to attention. It was like I was caught dozing off the job in the military, also I am very terrified. Then my body was not fully awake and I landed on my butt.
Celestia just giggled, “Well I suppose the feather weight magic plan did its work and had an affect on you. So how was your date with Luna?”
I tried to get up, but my body would not comply, “What do you mean date? What plan? We just spent time together and nothing else.”
Celestia’s eyebrow raised and had a face saying, ‘Oh really?’ Now I was blushing, embarrassed that I cannot get up, and that I am trying to get awake. I wanted to get up, but my legs were not responding.
“When Luna used the spell on you, it had a side affect that no pony and creature cannot walk until 24 hours.” Celestia said.
“Oh that cannot be good. Did I just use magic?” I ask
Celestia now was scared of what I just did and shook it off, “I believe you have a sickness that is similar to earth ponies. Let me just analysis you real quick.”
Celestia lowered her horn towards me and the golden Aura was surrounding me and all of a sudden it stopped. The aura disappeared
Celestia leered at me, “Trey, you have a magic absorption problem.”
I was confused, “What do you mean? I do not feel sick, but for some reason I feel somewhat stro-”
I stopped myself, I ran to Luna’s mirror and I realize I am three inches taller from before. Then information from season four finale came into view. I am becoming Tirek? Am I going to have every ponies energy drained?
“I think we need Twilight and the others. We need rainbow power to remove this.” I stated to Celestia
She shook her head, “I have a better solution.” She grabs something out of her bag. I did not really notice, but she gave it to me with her levitation.
The aura on the item was being absorbing into my hand. Man I think that the spells weren't a good idea. I thought about the possibilities about a human coming to Equestria, but nothing came to mind. Then it hits me, magic. Magic does not exist in the human word and therefore I am adopting to this world I am currently living in. It only theory, but it is the only one I can think of.
When I put the green gauntlet on and I shrank back to my normal height. I looked at the door and across the hallway Luna went inside my room. I glanced at Celestia and she grinned.
“That you for the gift Celestia, but I need to go to my room and get things done.” I said
“Before you go, I just need to tell you that Queen Chrysalis is making her return soon. Before you speak to my sister about this, do you sir Trey want to help and defeat her?” She asked
I was surprised by this, of course I want to help out and defeat her. I was looking at me gauntlet and I was wondering, what else do they have in store for me?
“Princess Celestia, it would be an honor and if anybody objects, I will try to negotiate with them.” I said.
I walked away from the door and all I heard from Celestia is this, “Luna kissed you while you were asleep.”
That right there got me speeding towards my room, my face was embarrassed from this. ‘CURSE YOU CELESTIA YOU FRICKEN TROLL!!!!’ I screamed in my head.
I opened the door and Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Spike and Luna were in my room. Luna was typing on my laptop and the others were watching her.
“I see you're using my knowledge to your advantage?” I asked Luna
This made her jump, it was cute, and the mane six were gathering around me.
“What is that? What is that? A bracelet? A rubber band? No it cannot be a rubber band. Is it armor? Yes it is Armor!!” Pinkie pie speeding through her speech like a maniac as always.
“It looks dashing on you, but you cloths does not match the color.” Rarity said.
“It makes you like a guard for Celestia!” Fluttershy said.
“Yeah, but it’s not 20% cooler, it needs to be.” Rainbow Dash stated.
“Aw c’mon, Dash, give him some slack.” Applejack said.
“It looks like it was made by the royal blacksmiths and it has an enchantment on it.” Twilight said while analyzing it.
Luna approached me and looked at the gauntlet and was curious. She looked at me and had a face saying ‘we need to talk.’ Did a thumbs up towards her, and she nodded.
“So what are you guys doing? I hope you not doing anything to break my technology.” I asked
Luna spoke, “Since you gave me your memories I was able to know what your technology is.” She walked to the table and picked up my phone, laptop, 2DS, external hard drive, solar charger, my phone, camera, and my Yu-Gi-Oh! Cards. Then puts them down back on the table.
“I showed Twilight and the others while you were still asleep and I gave them bad news in the process.” Luna said.
“Queen Chrysalis want revenge I know, Celestia told me and I am going to fight.” I said.
Everyone gasped, “ARE YOU SERIOUS?”
“Celestia has me covered for the rest such as armor and others.” I stated and everypony was silent.
I sighed and walked to my backpack, grabbed my new clothes and swimming shorts for another bath. As I walked to the stunned ponies, Pinkie Pie said, “Hey! Where are you going?”
“I believe he is going to the bath for a cleansing, right Trey?” Rarity said.
I nodded.
“We will be happy to accompany you!” Twilight said.
I gave in, “Ok, but you guys have to go first so I can change and do not ask why. Just go, I will catch up”
Everypony agreed and went to the bathroom next door and I was left alone with Luna. I put my clothes down the table and looked at my electronics. I looked at my computers history and it was showing some videos and pictures that I downloaded while I had the internet. I glanced at Luna who looked furious.
“Why are you choosing to fight, Trey. I told Celestia that you got killed in my vision.” Luna said.
Then out of nowhere Luna ran towards me and hugs me, “I just…” tears were going down her eyes, “When I saw the vison, I was so scared. I realize that I cannot lose you.”
I released the hug to look at her face, “That is why you will be by my side.” I wiped away her tears, but I made my eyes glanced away from her, “I have another issue.”
Luna stepped back and was has my full attention, “I had a sickness and it’s similar to Tirek. I am wearing this gauntlet to prevent my body to absorb magic.”
Luna sat down on the floor, she was upset, but why?
“What wrong?” I asked
“I am so sorry. I am so sorry.’” Luna said.
“Wait. Wait. Wait.” I said, “What do you mean you are sorry?”
Luna came down a little, but was still freaking out, “When we were sharing the same dreams, I used a huge amount of magic to direct connect to you dream. I think this is the side affect.
I looked at Luna, in all worst case scenario I still smiled. Luna looked at me, “Why are you smiling?! Don’t you know what I’ve just done? I caused this! Me!”
In all the shouting I ran to her and gave her a hug, she stopped, but she was then crying on my shoulder.
“I do not care if you were the cause, what is at fault here is magic in general. I cannot have spells enchanted on me anymore. But do not make it seem that you did this.” I stated.
I looked at Luna, “Besides, you are the best thing that has ever happen to me.”
“But I thought that coming to Equestria was the best thing that happened to you?” Luna said.
“Yes, it ‘was’ the best thing, but I realize this Luna, I like you… More than just a friend.” I confessed.
Luna was crying again, I stroked her mane trying to calm her down. In the end I did not get a response, because we shared the same memories. What was going through her head right now is that this could not work. Us being a couple. I understood why she was crying, but I did not cry because I understood this from the start. I was crying that would never be together with Luna while I am a human days ago.
Finally Luna calm down and looked at me, “You know I will always…. Like you Trey.”
“Yeah, I understand, Luna. Let’s not let the other wait. OK?” I asked.
Luna leaves the room while I stood there. Why? Why the human race and my instincts does says it doesn’t work. I just cannot understand it. It was wrong, but I am not bound by the human rules anymore. This is going to be that hardest life not loving Luna because my brain says bestiality doesn't work.
I walked to the mirror and stared at my face. I did not even realized that I was crying too. Damn it. Damn it all.
Author's Note
The harsh world is being pushed on Trey and Luna.
So I tried to think the limitation about a human extending his love to a pony, but what extent.
OK, I have finished this at a late time. I wont be posting new chapters because I'm on vacation. I post another chapter about next week.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
I left Trey alone in his room to head to the bathing chambers. The memories of Trey and the bestiality really is shamed in the human world. I think now I know why he has been holding back or has he? I really do not know. His memories are interesting, but they get in the way sometimes.
For example: When I was talking to Celestia about Queen Chrysalis’ return, Treys slang talk came into play and Celestia stared at me like I was not her sister.
I just hope nothing like this comes into play when I am with my friends. Please for me?
Anyway, when I got to the changing rooms, I removed my daily armor and a scene in my head pops out. It looks like a bathroom, but there is a pool, a slide which I never saw before, and a whole bunch of people.
The memories was short and sweet, it showed me how humans only play in pools and have an actual bathing room in their own apartments. It was weird, but nice.
The memory faded and I continued stripping. The word ‘stripping’ was a new term for me that came out of Treys memories. It meant removing your clothes in a slow or fast pace… I think.
I grabbed a towel out of my shelf that I chose and head inside the bathing area. Twilight and the others were enjoying the Casual Swimming area or pool. I needed to wash off my scar to add new medicine.
Turned to the personnel bathing, and started to wash myself. Hoofs, mane, tail, plot, body, legs, and last was face. All my washing was done with my levitation, another memory popped out, I was Trey using the shower….. What?!
I try to shake off the memory, but I see his naked glory! Oh sweet sister!!! I cannot stop looking, the memory is in plain sight!!!! For the love of Equestria stop!!!
The memory ended and when I opened my eyes, Twilight was staring at me.
“What are you doing Luna?” Twilight asked.
I was about to answer but then a memory from Trey came into my head. It was Twilight spying on us at Ponyville.
I glared at Twilight, “I could ask you the same thing, Twilight. What were you doing when you were spying on Trey and I?” I asked back.
Twilight was surprised by this and sighed, “I was told by the CMC that two strange invisible figures came to Ponyville and escaped their clutches. I used a detecting spell, and found you and Trey talking. Curious I wrote down what you said and was intrigued.”
“What are you intrigued about, Twilight? Are you just surprised that were together” I wondered.
“It’s not that I just have to ask you one question. What is your relationship with Trey?” Twilight asked.
Before I answered, Trey entered the room in his swimming shorts. The others gather around him, he was talking to them.
I pulled Twilight's ear with my magic and put it to my mouth, “I get back to you later, and I do not want Trey to know. Say its girl talk.”
Twilight nodded and headed back to the others. Trey was heading this way and yet another memory came out of nowhere. A song was playing: Can you feel the love tonight….
I shook my head viciously and Trey was already next to me getting his stuff ready.
I had to say something, “Are you feeling ok, Trey?”
He was silent, he was washing his counter parts and I an image of his manhood was in my head…. ‘OH STOP SHOWING ME THAT PLEASE!!!!!’ I shouted in my head.
Finally he spoke, “I’ll be fine, what about you? You are blushing like an apple.”
“Uh… Yes. I will be fine. It’s just that your memories are causing me some problems.” I told him.
Trey turned to me and smirked, “Are you thinking about me taking a shower? All I have to say is that is very dirty Luna. What do you have to say about that?”
My jaw dropped, “T-Trey, what are you saying?”
He grabbed my wash cloth and soaked it in the soap.
“As punishment, you have to stand there and let me wash you scar, but in a different way.” He said soaping the cloth with layers and layers of soap.
I sighed, “But, Trey. The others would be watching.” The others were still playing in the distance. We are separated by ten feet of flooring.
“The only different thing were doing it that, you have to hold your moans to a minimum or try not to moan at all.” He told me.
I nodded showing my royalty to the punishment. I suppose its for me learning my lesson… Wait a minute… Trey knew I thought about him naked? How did he know that?
Before I said anything, Trey got my cloth and touched my scar with it, and I almost yelped.
He put his finger to his mouth and said, “Shhh….”
He then got the cloth, and was rotating the hell of my scar. We were both submerged in water, it reached to my neck and it reached up to his belly. I was getting hot headed, holding in my moans. Was I getting pleasure out of this?
“Good, now one more thing and it will be it.” Trey said.
Next thing I knew, Trey grabbed my plot from one hand and was still stimulating my scar with my cloth. I moaned through my mouth making it look like I was humming. He dropped the cloth and went around to my plot and licked my plot.
Then he stopped, I took a deep breath. What just happened? I blinked and then Trey entered the pool… Wait it was a vision or a memory.
When he entered I looked at my scar and glanced at Trey. The scar was not clean. Was this what they call a day dream?
Trey washed himself and I asked, “Are you feeling ok Trey?”
He looked at me a smiled, “Yeah, I will be fine. How about you?”
“I’m going to be alright; when you washed my scar, I can now use my magic to clean it now. Look.”
I got my cloth and washed my scar thoroughly and my magic did not lose any concentration. I glanced at him and he looked impressed.
“I see the medicine is going its duty. Just reapply the medicine you're using and you will be fine a few days.” Trey stated.
He finished and he headed out the bathroom and to the changing room. I heard Pinkie Pie saying, “You will be playing with us next time right?”
“Oh, do not worry Pinkie Pie. I will have something prepared for you and the others.” He winked at me and closed the door.
I got my hoof and felt around my plot, I felt no imprint on my plot. I did feel one thing though. I think I just ‘came’ for the imaginary version of Trey. Oh my….
I just blushed and dipped my head in water. I looked for the drain and pulled the plug. I levitated my stuff and headed to the sauna. I felt really embarrassed, but when I sat in the hot tub the worries were going away. All I know is that I was masturbating for Trey. For the love of Equestria, would somepony please help me…? I think I am in love.
Author's Note
Even though Luna has her memories and Trey's memories, she is trying to focus, but lost her was in imagination. I wonder what will happen next?
I;m back from my vacation and I able to squeeze in a chapter to Luna's point of view. There will be one more chapter that will be fun, then we will get into the fight.
Hope you like it comment what you like. Leave a like if your still reading the story and haven't liked before. Also don't forget to favorite because I plan to update with one new chapter everyday... Hopefully.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Introducing the fandom to the ponies
I finished changing back into my next change of clothing, but I wondered about my other clothing. Ever since the hamper came out of nowhere, and I happen to put my cloths in it, I have not seen it sense. When I walked into my room, I noticed my closet was open. Inside was a whole bunch of clothing and there was a note one shirt.
Trey,
We have measured your clothing and were able to duplicate the same fabric with the best of our knowledge. We noticed that you only had two-three changes of clothes, and we wanted you to be comfortable. Hope you enjoy!
My regards,
Princess Celestia
P.S. When you go out with my sister again, I made a suit just for you. Have fun! <3
God damn it, Celestia is slowly-no… Celestia is becoming a troll, but I believe it all in good fun…. For her side. I closed the closet, walked to the table and got on my laptop. It had 90% of power left in it and it told me that it can last for about five hours. ‘Perfect’ I thought. There was enough power in my laptop to show the mane six, Luna and Spike my videos from Bronycon, and PMV (Pony Music Videos).
I look at the list and picked out the videos that aren’t too long, but not too short. I also picked out some music from the show and music of my own. Meaning that Twilight is going to fill her note book with lots of notes. I imagine Twilight having many note books by the end of the night. The piles on piles of notes will cause an avalanche.
When I picked my playlist, Spike was next to me in which I jumped.
“Whoa! Hey, Trey! Sorry I spooked you. I just wanted to tell you that the others are talking girl talk and sent me to inform you.” Spike stated.
I calmed down for a bit and I thought of something, “Hey, Spike I would like to show you something first.”
I pulled up a video and set aside my video list. The video I pulled was ‘Spike the Bad Dragon’ (Made by lAmlnHurt). After he watched it he had a face that was so priceless, I was rolling around the floor.
“Dude that is very creepy, what was that?” Spike asked.
I collect myself, “That was a fan made video called a YouTube Poop and that is a video that you distort to make people laugh. I know it must be confusing, but it’s funny to me when I first watched it.”
Spike did not know what to say, he was shocked. When he was about to say something the other came in. When I say came in I mean Pinkie Pie!
“Hey! Hey what are you watching?! I want to watch me, me, and me!” Pinkie said
“Alright let me think about what you can watch...” I said.
I thought about it hard, but I decided to show her Smile HD (Made by MisterDavie). At first her reaction was good and was swaying to the music, but when it got to Pinkie punching Twilights head off, she stopped. She was staring at the video motionless.
When it ended she shook her head, “That is messed up Trey. Why would you show me this?”
“It was because of you, that many of the fans made you look crazy it was too good to be true. Meaning that this violence that you saw was funny to them. Or if some got offended, they would laugh it off and let it be. So it’s not you it’s the fandom.” I said.
Pinkie nodded and that is where Rainbow Dash, and Twilight came into the room.
She flew above us, “What are you guys doing?”
“Yeah, I would like to see what you are doing.” Twilight said.
I explained and I showed her Double Rain boom (Made by Zachary Rich). When it ended she was shouting how awesome it was she was going around the room wanting to do a double rain boom. Twilight was just sitting there getting all her notes together. When certain words came out of the video she wrote it down and was studying it. I mean its like she is in a field trip in a history museum.
“Well, it was fan made and people wanted to see certain characters to cross over with other characters. Also I think I hear the others coming in.” I said
Like magic, Rarity, Luna, Applejack, and Fluttershy came in. When they came in I showed them all the pony Anthology 1, 2 and 3 (made by ZephyrStar). When it finished some of them had to recuperate.
“Well that was interesting, funny, weird, and all sorts of non-sense all around.” Rarity said.
“I agree with Rarity, this is all great, but what is the purpose of these so called videos?” Applejack said.
Everypony was staring at me, Luna in particular understood the situation. I had to tell them sooner or later.
“You know that you are on a T.V. or performance to show to us creatures?” I said and they nodded.
I closed the window and clicked on a few folders and clicked on the season four finale of My Little Pony friendship is magic.
I press played and their eyes were hypnotized to the screen of the video. All except Luna, she had my memories to look at and she understood. When the video finished, all of them were confused, Twilight finished writing her third note book and put it to the side. Her friends were whispering all around.
Pinkie Pie jumped, “THAT WAS AN AMAZING BATTLE!!!!”
It stopped the awkward silence then Applejack said something, “So overall were a show to entertain other people to your world?”
I nodded and all of them jumped in glee, it looks like they did not take it the wrong way. They took it all in and accepted it.
“Well one more thing, before my laptop loses power… Some music!” I played the playlist and we were partying all around my room. I danced with the mane six and danced with Luna. I was a memorable moment in my life. When we finished, I turned off my laptop and got them out of my room so they can go to bed.
I typed a new passage in my laptop and I really need to review some of these, but when I finished, I decided to see Luna before I went to bed. I grabbed my laptop and was on my way.
I tip toed out of my room past the other rooms, past the kitchen, getting closer to her room.
I stopped when I overheard, “So let me ask you again; what is your relationship with Trey?”
It was Twilight, what was she doing in Luna’s room? Why was she asking her this? I know its hard not to eavesdrop on our friends, but I could not resist.
“What do you mean, Twilight? My relationship? Trey and I are just friends.” Luna said
I was not hurt by the comment Luna said, because its the truth. She and I know if we continued into something more, it would get complicated. ‘OK Twilight you can leave the room now.’ I thought.
“Well, I think its suspicious that you and Trey have been together ever since he came to this castle. If you and Trey fell in love, it would be a total disaster.” Twilight said.
What? A disaster? What does she mean by disaster?
“We know the incident could not be avoided, the couple really loved one another and made a Griffin. It caused an overflow with them on the land and that is why we put them on a different island.” Luna stated.
Huh…. Who knew? Some my little pony history 101. Then I heard somebody headed towards the door. I looked to my left and jumped into a janitor’s closet.
I peered through the hole; it was Twilight who walked out of the door, “Well do not go crying to Celestia, Cadance or me if you make an abomination!”
She stomped out of the room, and Luna slammed the door. She did not lock it, but when I was about to turn the knob, I heard Luna was crying. I took a deep breath and opened the door quietly.
When I waltz in and closed the door behind me. I walked to Luna’s bed and she stopped sobbing.
“Trey, why are we so in love with one another? My heart is telling you to love you, but with your memories in my head, I have to hold back.” Luna said cleaning her tears off.
I sighed, “I know its hard and it doesn’t make any sense, but I know we can get through this together.”
She buried her face in her pillow and I continued, “I have a video to show you. It’s my favorite video about you, and I think you will like it.”
Luna lifted her head when I opened my laptop and click on the video called, 'Children of the night' (Made by Duo Cartoonist). At the end of the video she was in tears; it looks like it touched her.
“Out of all the fans of my little pony, they have cared for you and if not then I care about you.” I said.
Luna leaped up to me and gave me a heartwarming hug. I wiped her tears away and kissed her forehead. Then Celestia entered the room.
“Ahem. I hope I am not interrupting, but Queen Chrysalis is on the move towards Ponyville.” She stated.
Author's Note
Now I hope you enjoy those videos that were made by those people. It definitely worth a watch.
So tell me what you think, in the comment section.
Favorite and like if your new reading this and love it I will be updating one chapter per day... Hopefully.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
How to defeat Chrysalis. Griffins History.
How to defeat Chrysalis. Griffins History.
Luna and I were lead to the royal room and inside was a table with a map of Equestria. It was magnified to Ponyville and to the left of the Everfree forest was a big fat X. I saw Shining Armor looking at a list, it might be logistics for the military, but I did not want to ask. Luna sat on a chair and I stood to watch. I pan my head around the room and I saw Princess Cadance on the royal chair.
I looked at her and waved and the returned it, but did not say anything.
Celestia spoke, “Let’s just cut to the chase… Queen Chrysalis is near the castle of the two sisters and Shining Armor sent in spies, but did not return. I believe that the two spies were unicorns and we sent in two earth ponies and they returned with several injuries. They gave this information despite their injuries.”
I stood there just silently and Shining spoke, “We need a different creature to go to the castle and see where Queen Chrysalis is hiding.”
Then it hits me, “So you want me to go then is that correct? All I got to know is; does Chrysalis know the elements of harmony and its location?”
“No, she does not know where it is, but she knows what they are. I believe Queen Chrysalis does not know your presence and we will have the upper hoof.” Celestia responded.
“Alright. I will agree to your terms, but under some conditions.” I demanded.
“Name it and we will send you off.” Shining Armor said.
I cleared my throat, “One, I need another enchanted gauntlet because I have a dangerous idea. Two, Luna has to escort me, because even though I have the intelligence, I do not know my way around the Everfree forest. Three, I need to know what happen with the Griffins and why they were segregated to another land.”
Luna looked at me like she knew I was eavesdropping on her. I ignored it, and stared at Celestia then at Shining Armor.
Celestia sighed, “Alright, we will agree to your terms. I have to discuss with my sister with a few concerns I have.”
She signals Luna to follow, and she was compliant. When the doors closed, Shining Armor walked towards me.
“Before you say anything, let me fill in what I know about you. Your name is Shining Armor, captain of Celestia’s royal guard.
You have a sister named Twilight Sparkle. You married Princess Cadance who is the protector of the Crystal Empire. You were once mind controlled by Queen Chrysalis. Your sister saved you from being married to a Changeling.” I stated.
That got him to stay silent for a while, he just sat there like the other ponies I talked to.
“I suppose you will be good for the job then, Sir Trey.” Cadance said
That made me jump into Luna’s seat. Cadance laughed and walked to Shining Armor.
Shining Armor shook his head, “You just made me freeze in my tracks. This is what we need to defeat Chrysalis. I suppose
I glanced at her, and she grinned. This tempted me and I rolled my eyes, “Princess Cadance, protector of the Crystal Empire. You and Spike the baby dragon defeated King Sombra from his tyranny. You once babysat little Twilight and met Shining when he was on duty. You married Shining Armor after the changeling incident.”
That was enough to make me prove myself to Cadance and Shining Armor which ever hypnotized about what I said.
Cadance shook her head, “OK, you have proven yourself worthy and I can believe you, but I have to ask you. What is your plan against Chrysalis?”
I smirked, “It’s a surprise and once I use it; Queen Chrysalis will be dethroned and she will never be hurting any pony anymore.”
When I said that Celestia and Luna came back from their talk and gave me another gauntlet. Luna was in her armor and she looked worried. I shrug it off and put the other gauntlet on the other hand.
“I have a special train ready for you and Luna to get meet Chrysalis. The gauntlet has the same enchantments as the other one does. Also it is adjustable to small or large hands.” Celestia stated.
Celestia looked at Cadance and Shining Armor and they were compliant and left. I waved at them as they left and they waved back. All I know is that I am about to be debriefed about Griffins.
Celestia cleared her throat, “When the first Griffins came into being, they were at first kind full of life and most of all had a good diet. Then one Griffin decided to eat meat and because of this other Griffins decide to join in. Most of animals you see today are recuperating because of it. When the animals left they decided to feast on other ponies, especially fillies. A total of a quarter of Equestira's population was eaten by Griffins. Luna and I found a land for Griffins to live in and we persuaded them to thrive in the land. The original couple who made the Griffin were killed by their own creation and we do not know the reason behind it.”
I thought about what she said, ‘Killed other ponies?’ I thought. Well we do not know the possibilities with a childs show, but I wondered about what happens during the in among the episodes of my little pony. Was it more violent? Or was it more child friendly. It is probably pointing me to the first option.
I sighed, “I now understand the situation. Luna and I will got to the train to Ponyville.”
Luna nodded and walked to the entrance; when I followed I was stopped by Celestia’s hoof.
“I do not mind you were eavesdropping on the conversation with Twilight and Luna, but when you want to talk about something that is not part of your knowledge. Please talk to me or Luna before you ask somepony in public.” Celestia said.
She was right I did need to be quiet and I needed to get my manners straight. She released me and I continued towards the exit, but then Celestia lowered her head near my ear.
“I do not mind if you do some lovemaking with Luna. You have my permissions, brother-in-law.” Celestia said.
I sprinted towards the door hearing Celestia giggling in the distance. ‘AND SHE STRIKES AGAIN!!’ I shouted in my head. Seriously though; what is her deal?! Is she trolling me or is she very serious about this? I do not know, I do not care, and I just
Author's Note
Yeah yeah yeah She's a Troller
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Discussion in the train
When exiting through the court yard, I try not to think what Celestia said to me. I told her about my full vision, but she does not believe me. All I can do is to try to protect Trey. I walked to the train station and the next train is going to be here in about ten minutes. I wanted to know what Trey was going to do to Queen Chrysalis and whether it’s dangerous or not.
I heard the train in the distance, I wondered what Trey was doing. He is going to be late for the train. Just when the train just stopped I heard steps in the distance to the left. It was Trey running towards the Train with the royal tickets. I looked around and there was no pony in sight, the train station was empty except for me.
He got into the door of the train and I followed. I looked inside the cabin and he when inside the room that was on the ticket. I walked in and yet another memory came out of nowhere. Just when I was about to relax. The memory was Trey visiting a Train museum and how steam engines are obsolete. Then it showed me what trains look like in his present time.
When I opened my eyes the room was different. It was like from Trey’s memories, but it felt so real. Trey was sitting on the seat huffing and puffing like the train was going to leave soon. The room still did not change, but I decide to shrug it off. Maybe it will disappear soon.
I sat down next to Trey, “Well you sure know how to keep a lady waiting.” I joked.
He giggled, “Well I just got the tickets from Shining Armor and Princess Cadance.”
He paused for a moment and he gasped, “No pony knows that I am here in Equestria everypony is going to freak!”
“Do not fret Trey; I have requested the conductor to have a pit stop to fix the ‘broken wheels’. Then we will have our walk to the Castle of the Two Sisters.” I said.
He calmed down when I said that; he looked at the window and was in a pensive mood.
The room returned to normal, and I shook my head. ‘You got to tell Trey about these memories.’ I thought.
The Train started to move when the whistle was released. Slowly, but surely we made it out of Canterlot. Trey and I were together in the same room and we were both silent. We both know it's going to be a life changing experience when we face Queen Chrysalis head on.
Trey turned to me, “So how are those memories?”
He may have just read my mind, “Well it has some minor issues, but it is an interesting set of memories. When I think of something it will give me information… Too much of it.”
He looked at me weirdly, “What do you mean minor issues?”
I decide not to tell him what happen in the bathroom, “Well when I entered this cabin room, everything changed and it was like what you have in your world.”
He had his hand on his chin, “That is interesting… What happens when I mention the word happy?”
A memory burst from my head and is was all the happiness from Trey that he received when he was an infant to present time. I brought a huge smile to my face and this made Trey grin a little bit.
“What are you thinking Trey?” I asked.
“I just want to test some things that would interest you.” He clears his throat and continues, “Porn. Sex. Pleasure. Education. Yu-gi-oh Cards.”
A train of memories hit my head. This information is too overwhelming. Porn meaning to ‘pleasure’ yourself while watching somebody having ‘sex’. People go to school to have their ‘education’ to do what they want for the rest of their lives. Yu-gi-oh cards meant a card game that Trey has in his pack.
When the memories subsided, “What are you trying to do have my brain a heart attack?”
He laughed, “Well I guess it only works on my command and only when I say single words. You will be fine and I am sorry I said those things. It was only to test out my theory.”
I am now confused, “What do you mean theory? What is your theory?”
He sighed, “It happened to me when I was little. I was confusing the TV world with the real world and I think its having the same affect, but in reverse.”
I am now scared of this side affect, “What will we do about this issue?”
He got close to me and held my hoof, “Think hard Luna. When did these memories started and stop?”
I thought about it very hard about it, “Let’s see. I think it was when I was in the bathroom it started, but when you entered it ended.”
Trey thought out loud, “I have a theory, but it might be risky.”
“What is it? I asked
“We need to be isolated to another location in Equestria to get your memories straight. We need to go on a vacation and meditate. When I had the same issues I meditated with a teacher and I can teach you as well.” Trey explained.
“That is brilliant Trey, but we have the Queen Chrysalis issue on our hoofs or your hands.” I said.
Before Trey was able to say anything the train was slowing down. It was time for us to go. Trey got up without a word and walked out. I followed and left the room and out the cabin. Out on the distance to my left I saw Ponyville and to my right was an eerie very light green aura in the distance. It may not be noticeable in Ponyville and Canterlot, but it made a difference here.
“Alright we got some ground to cover before dark.” Trey said to me walking towards the aura.
I followed sort of slowly, the green aura had a powerful presence. I shook off the fact and trotted towards Trey.
“I suppose you know what you are going to do?” I asked
He smirked, “It might work, but if it fails I have a plan B.”
He looked at the sky, "Do you have to rise the moon tonight?"
"Don't worry about it, my sister has it for to night." I said.
He nodded and I thought, ‘Wow. Trey has a back up plan increase it fails.' Trey is more prepared than I thought, even though I have no idea what he is going to do.
When we got through the brush, I saw the bridge, that lead to my old castle. I am concerned what Chrysalis is planning to do.
Author's Note
Hope you like the follow up of this before Trey talks to Queen Chrysalis!
I would like to address something here. Do you like this story so far? Comment what you think. This is a story I plan on making long term. So its going to be a hell of a ride.
Give a like if you haven't before and like this series; I make one chapter per day so don't worry about it. I'll address anything that is going on that might put this story on hiatus (Hopefully it wont come to that).
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Transformation I (First Draft)
I was first to cross the bridge that has been redone. It looked better than the decrepit bridge that was held by some rope. Now the new bridge has new wood all painted to last forever. Luna followed slowly. I was concerned for her memories that I shared with her. Her memories that were being altered by my memories and it was making her very confused, but I need to take care of Chrysalis first.
When across, Luna stopped, “I need to stay back, the intense evil magic is making my magic very weak.”
I walked back to her and knelt down, “That is OK Luna. I think I can take care of this on my own. Chrysalis is only about 20-50 feet away through the castle. If you feel better when time passes, then you can follow.”
She nodded and I gave her a hug, “You better come back you hear?”
“I will come back to you I promise.” I said.
“Don’t keep promises you cannot keep.” She said.
Luna hugged back and was trying really hard not to cry. I was not sure why, but I thought that she was in pain because this dark magic. It’s a good thing I can absorb it, and the gauntlets are letting me channel my abortion to my gauntlet.
We let go of the hug and I walked into the castle. I waved to Luna and she returned it. When I walked inside the castle of the two sisters, it was almost restored thanks to Twilight and her friends. I saw a cloak on the ground and thought, ‘I might need this.’
I searched the room and I saw a crack on the wall to the other side that can a size of a changeling. Fortunately it was big enough to fit me and I squeezed through. It was not too long of a tunnel it was only about five feet long before I entered into a small room. Then I fell in a huge puddle of back substance and got out of it very quickly. ‘Gross.’ I thought. The substance did not smell horrid, but it was hard to get off. I would take care of it later; now’s not the time.
The room was covered with black roots like the ones from the season four premiere, but it was totally covered in it. It was formed into a square and it was lightly glowing dark green through the roots. There was a door across from the crack and I followed through. Like the first day in Equestria into the Canterlot castle I absconded around.
There were no changeling guards in sight. ‘What is going on?’ I thought. All the hallways and rooms were empty and had all the black glowing roots. Then I heard cheering in the distance. I tiptoed towards the cheers and saw a door that was closed. All the cheers were coming from the inside. I pushed it open slightly and looked through the crack.
My jaw dropped it was a full scale army of Changelings gathering around. There were over five thousand of them gathered around and the center was empty. I get on all fours and walk into the room and close the door.
Luckily I was not confronted with another changeling and walked towards the center. These changelings were surprisingly letting me through. I sat down in a cress cross position and the changelings gathered around and sat around me. Then the lights turned off.
‘Please do not let this be a trap.’ I thought. Then the lights turn on to the center platform and there was Queen Chrysalis standing there. She looked around her subjects, but did not see me? Was the substance disguising me? If so, it’s working because I did not know what I would do if I was caught.
Chrysalis spoke, “Changelings, you queen has arrived.”
There was a cheer around the room, I stayed silent. I wanted to know what she had plan before I make my move.
She continued, “We were defeated by the power of love, which is the most terrible power that we faced, but I have a solution… We need the Elements of Harmony and take over this land as our own. Who is with me?!”
More cheers were going around, it seems the crowd likes the idea.
Now you may not know this, but I have the power to change my voice to many different voices. Whether it would be cartoon or another person I can emulate it. The secret is that I have very flexible vocal cords, so I can change my voice to another with some thought. I thought about Chrysalis’s voice and slightly changed my vocal cords.
When Chrysalis was about to speak, I spoke, “Who agrees with stay here and party before we go to battle? You are free to go to relax. Meeting over!”
I hope it was enough to persuade the Changelings. It was a success all the Changelings left the room in a frenzy to party. Chrysalis was trying to shout to her minions, but by the time she could say anything, every Changelings were gone except Chrysalis and I.
She looked at me and shouted, “ARE YOU THE ONE WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS?!”
I adjusted my vocal cords to my normal voice and cleared my throat, “Oh I am sorry. Stupendous Queen Chrysalis. The most powerful Queen in Equestria. I would like to say how laughable that you were defeated by love. After seeing your performance today, I see now that you are quite serious about taking over the world plan.”
I was still sitting down covered in my cloak and I see Chrysalis in a pensive mood, “Do you thing flattery and insulting comments could save you? I did not sense you come into this facility, maybe it was the cleansing area for the changelings.”
‘That is very gross.’ I thought.
I continued, “No I believe you would kill me in an instant, but you cannot because I believe you are curious to see what I truly am.”
She looked pleased, “Go on.”
I got on all fours and stretched out. I got my feet to the floor and shot up. I was now up right, and I stretched out my hands. I grab the cloak and tossed it to the side. Chrysalis looked impressed.
“You’re a creature I have not seen before. Before I vaporize you; what would you like to tell me? I would like to know.” She asked.
“I am what they call a ‘human.’ But I am what they call a persuasive ‘person.’ I know terms that aren't part of your knowledge, I know more about Equestria than you would ever know. I am the intelligence of Equestria. I am called a Brony.” I stated.
“You amuse me, but you delayed my plans long enough,” her horn was powering up, “Now Brony… If you know everything about Equestria; then you must know the power of DARK MAGIC!!!”
She shoots a dark green beam towards me, and I got my right gauntlet and the magic was being absorbed into it. It looks like the main plan did not work; time for plan b and it is going in action. It was only a theory, but I had to trust it.
The gauntlet was starting to crack into pieces. ‘Please work!’ I thought. The right gauntlet scattered into pieces. I saw the ground go away 50 to 100 feet and I when through the roof. ‘It’s working.’ It thought.
The gauntlet to my left adjusted to my huge magic growth spurts. I felt the magic coursing through my veins; now I knew how Tirek felt when getting this power. Without thinking, I got my humongous arm and grab Chrysalis who was utterly shocked. I absorbed all of her dark magic and she shrank into a small foal. She was so small that she was about a micro inch tall, which was a huge difference to my humongous hand.
The left gauntlet started to kick in and was absorbing all the magic that I have collected. I started to shrink down to my size, but I decided to walk to where Luna was at. I carried baby Chrysalis towards the castle of the two sisters. I saw Luna sitting at the bridge and I was about 10 to 20 feet tall, still walking through the forest.
When Luna sat me her jaw dropped and I shrank back to my size. Baby Chrysalis was crying and she was the size of an infant. I walked to Luna and she shook off the shock and levitated Chrysalis to her face.
“You are not much of a threat anymore, Chrysalis.” Luna said.
“You are going to pay for this! The Brony tricked me!!” She shouted.
I laughed a little, but was stopped by the sound of bees. Those were not bees they were Changelings heading towards our direction.
I looked at Luna, “I was wondering, can you teleport us to Ponyville?”
She nodded, her horn glowed and we teleported to Ponyville in flash. I was dizzy for a second, but recovered and we ran towards Twilight’s Kingdom.
I opened the door and we rushed inside the court room. I ran with Chrysalis in hand towards Twilight and the others.
“We need a cell for baby queen Chrysalis!” I shouted.
Inside the room was Twilight, Fluttershy and Spike looking at some books about animals. Twilight showed us the cell room which was a down the stairs to the right.
Luna spoke, “We need this cell to be enchanted so the Changelings will not find her!”
There was a loud buzzing noise in the distance and I knew that they are coming.
Without a word she used a spell on the cell and we placed her in it. I closed the door and locked it. There was a bright light from the cell and then the buzzing stopped in the distance. I looked and the Changelings were going away.
“NO! How could you do this?! I was going to be ruler of Equestria!” Chrysalis shouted.
Luna glanced at me, “I suppose your plan worked?”
“We would not be here if it had not worked.” I winked.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Explaination and 'Negative' Problems
When we sealed Chrysalis in her cell; she was outraged and we left her in her cell for a little while. Twilight, Trey and I headed to the first room with the throne chairs.
Trey looked confused, “Where are the others?”
“Pinkie Pie is hosting a party for Mr. and Mrs. Cake’s children, Rainbow Dash is at the Wonderbolts academy, Rarity is making dresses with Sapphire shores next show, and Applejack is gathering apples for the bucking season.” Twilight Explained.
“It seems that they have a whole lot of work to do and I guess Fluttershy is wondering about what animals relate to me?” Trey said.
Fluttershy was surprised, “How did you know?”
I spoke, “Well the book says it all.”
The book title says: The Apes and Monkeys Anatomy. I was not curious about the book because I learned from Treys memories how humans existed and how evolution took its place. There have been some issues with this theory about it such as… Uh… Religion? It’s about following your ruler or god? Kind of like ponies, Pegasus’s, unicorns worship Celestia and I.
Trey walked to Fluttershy and were hitting it off. Fluttershy asked questions and he would answer to his best ability. Twilight gestured her head, wanting to talk to me. I was compliant, I did not want Trey to listen to this.
We walked to another room and it was Twilight's room. She sat on the bed and I just sat on the ground wanting this to be over.
“So, will you explain what happen to Chrysalis?” Twilight asked.
I sighed, “When we went near the castle of the two sisters; I had to stay back because the dark magic was intense. So Trey went ahead and his defect in this world to his greatest advantage.”
“His absorption powers which are similar to Tirek, but ten times powerful?” Twilight said.
I nodded, “When he entered the castle it only ten minutes, but he grew to big heights and the gauntlet that he had adjusted to his humongous size. He took away Chrysalis's power and made her to the current state you saw in the room. The gauntlet started to work, and I guess he is back to his normal size.”
Twilight was not impressed, all she did is walk to her mirror and just sigh a lot.
“I suppose you have a problem with this?” I asked
“You have no idea what you might have done. Releasing him to Queen Chrysalis and destroying the other gauntlet because it was overwhelmed with magic and shattered. I am not mad at you or Trey, it’s just that he is part of the human world and he might have a negative affects from magic.” Twilight said.
Then I heard a scream. It was Fluttershy. Twilight and I, without a word, rushed towards the throne room. Fluttershy was against the wall; Trey was on the floor crutching and holding his stomach.
“SHIT!!!” Trey shouted, he was in pain.
“What’s wrong?!” I shouted back.
Twilight levitated him toward us away from Fluttershy. We looked at Trey, and he looked fine, but he was then holding his arm where the gauntlet is at. The gauntlet was pitch black and it was in his skin. The skin was turning grey and as it moved he shouted and cursed.
“Luna we need to teleport to Canterlot at once!” Twilight explained.
I nodded fast, I focused us to be teleported to Canterlot and all three of us were in Celestia’s royal room. Celestia and Cadance were having a conversation, but was interrupted by us intruding.
“IT FUCKING HURTS!!!” Trey shouted in pain. The grey skin was up to his shoulder, and the gauntlet was releasing dark skin through the grey skin. He was crying, scared and he wants help.
Celestia levitates him on her bad and spreads his legs and arms apart. I ripped off his shirt, the Grey was almost to his heart.
“What do we do?!” I shouted, I realize I was crying out loud, I did not want him to die.
Celestia shouted, “FOCUS YOUR MAGIC ON TREY’S GAUNTLET!”
Without a word Cadance, Celestia, Twilight and I focused our magic on Trey’s gauntlet. We fired our beams of magic on the piece of armor. The black skin receded, and the grey skin was slowly receding, but Trey was shouting in pain.
‘This is in fact dark magic.’ I thought. This is really bad, this is the result of Dark magic. It can consume him. I shook it off and focused on saving Trey.
The grey skin was on his forearm and in a flash it when back on the gauntlet. Celestia grabbed the piece of armor and tossed it across the room. It glowed red and there was a red light in the room. When I opened my eyes the gauntlet was floating. The dark magic transformed into a replica of Trey, but he was pitch black.
“I suppose I can thank you for releasing me. It was either he would die or I had to get out of it.” It said.
“Who… are… you?” Trey gasped for air.
“Trey save your strength!” I said.
It looked at Trey, “I am impressed that you even survived the impact of Dark Magic. So in reward of this discovery, I will revel my name.” it laughed and continued, “The name is Negative Yert. I will be see you around.”
He laughed with a satisfying smile; Yert ran towards the Balcony and jumped down the cliff of Canterlot. I ran towards the Balcony and glanced around the outside. In the distance he was flying away, he was heading towards the Griffin Kingdom.
‘Good. At least he is not destroying anything in Equestria.’ I thought.
I ran back inside to my sister’s room to see how Trey was recovering. He was breathing heavily, his face was pale, he had a cold sweat and he was exhausted.
“Could you explain what happened here Luna?” Celestia asked.
Twilight and I explained what happened and Cadance and Celestia were surprised what Trey used for his plan. Trey calmed down and was breathing normally and his color was returning to his face when we explained everything.
Trey spoke, “That’s not all. This is a childhood memory of mine, but when I was little I had a huge imagination.” He paused and took a deep breath, “I created a hero and a villain, but I chose the villain to be my name backwards. So I was the hero fighting my evil self. When I grew up I locked that imagination away.”
“Trey why are you speaking of this now?” I asked.
“What purpose does this relate to this?” Celestia asked.
“The gauntlet. It wanted to consume me… When you were getting it off me, it grabbed a copy of that evil villain I created years ago. Now it has my knowledge and is probably going to do whatever it wants.” Trey said.
“So what you are saying is that your childhood memory villain is out there going to terrorize Equestria?” Twilight asked.
Trey nodded, “I’m sorry. I tried to fight back, but now there is more trouble out there.”
“It’s alright, Trey. You are the one who created when you were a child and we understand why Yert formed so quickly.” Cadance said trying to comfort him.
Celestia then does a spell on Trey to prevent him to absorb any more magic that he already has, "I will make another gauntlet for you ans it will be ready when the spell wears off." she said.
Without a word from the Princess’s we carried Trey to his room and covered him up with the sheets. Twilight left the room and Cadance followed. Celestia looked back to me; I nodded and she left. She knew I had to talk to him.
“I thought you were going to die.” I said to him
He did that smile again trying to make me happy, “Me? Nah! I am tough as stone.”
I sat down next to him, and I was letting ear down my cheek.
He spoke again, “Don’t cry Luna; I am fine you see? I just need some rest.”
He got his hand and wiped the tears away. He then put his fingers through my mane and booped my nose with his finger.
I jumped to him and gave him a hug, but it was sincere. I looked at him and kissed him in the lips.
At first he was shocked, but he kissed back against my lips. It was sensational my heart was beating fast, I never felt like this before.
When Trey stopped he looked at me, “I’m afraid we can only do that. The kissing I mean, but we cannot go any further
I smiled, “I know.”
I looked out the window and it was already sunrise. I think I will go to bed, because I am tired from yesterday.
I glanced at Trey, and said, “Can I sleep next to you for today.”
“Nothing in the world would make me happier.” Trey responded.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
When Luna snuggled up in my covers, I feel into a deep sleep. After being through all that pain I really deserve a break and that would be sleep. I felt motionless, you know that feeling when you feel you are about to fall off a cliff? I felt just like that, but then I thought of Ponyville and I was there. I walked around the town square and no pony was there which was strange.
“Hello old friend” a voice said behind me.
I sharply turned around and there was Yert. His pitch black figure was not there, but he looked like a ghost. Black particles were floating around the gauntlet which was now pitch black. The black Particles formed an arm leading to a head with red eyes. Why was he in my dream? Are our minds connected? What the hell is going on?
“I can see that you are confused and I can hear your thoughts. I am in you dream because our minds are connected, but very lightly. When you shut me out in your mind, I was torn apart by your happiness, colorful emotions, but mostly love. Just when I was about to die; this gauntlet let me have a chance. Dark magic did this to me, and I am very grateful.” Yert explained.
“What are you going to do for the mean time? Are you going to destroy Equestria?” I demanded.
He chuckled, “No. No. Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. I have to prepare and get stronger, and I plan to do something you will never expect. I plan to take this world and make it my own.”
He started to disappear, his particles were turning to sand. The black particles were gone but the red eyes and the gauntlet was still there.
“You are never going to get away with this!” I shouted.
“In time we will face one another, but I have the upper hand. I have the dark magic, you have the absorption magic. If you try to absorb me; it will kill you in an instant… You mind is shutting me off again, farewell.” When he finished, he was gone.
I was angry, powerless and sad. I punched the ground like it would shake the ground, but nothing happened. I wanted to cry, but I cannot just sit here and mope around. I have to search my memories to see what I can do to stop Yert.
Then I was meditating in my dream focusing all my mental stamina to search through my mind. Next thing I knew I was in mid space, like before, but there were screens of different memories all around. I moved forward I looked around, nothing here, nothing there, nothing, I was getting nothing.
I focus even harder, but a memory of my mediating class came though, ‘Never focus hard, but try to think lightly to find the answer.’
My teacher was right, I had to stop thinking hard, but I had to think lightly. I took several deep breaths and waited awhile. After about half an hour I was able to gain access all my childhood memories. Then I found me creating Yert and how I defeated him. I realize I defeated him with my parents help. Meaning that I forgot about Yert because my parent focused their energy to keep me entertained.
“I suppose that you are in deep sleeping thinking about Yert.” The voice sound familiar, but it was friendly.
I turned around and it was Luna laying down on a cloud that the color of her mane. She had a serious look on her face and I felt caught looking through my memories.
“Yert visited my dream and said he wants to become stronger. He and I are able to communicate by thought, but I shut him off.” I said.
“Well it is to be expected, you were the one who created him in the first place, but it not your fault either.” Luna said.
It really made me feel better that Luna was understandable in my situation. I walked to up to her, and I touched her cloud. It felt soft, like a pillow, but I went through the cloud. All I could see was blue mist and when I walked out of it Luna was right in front of me.
“I know that we cannot go any farther than kissing, but we are in a dream. We could do what you want.” Luna said blushing.
“You know what Yert took away from me?” I asked. Luna shook her head and I continued, “He took away what I believe was right.”
I hugged Luna she said, “What do you mean, what you believe is right?”
I looked at her, “I know we can have… Sex while we are awake, but we can have sex in our dreams. What I believe is right will not come in mind because it’s a lucid dream. I am going to let you choose two things. One: I will transform you into a human women. Two: After the first sex, I will transform us into Alicorns. What do you choose?”
“I’ll pick the first option, but to tell you the truth Trey; I am scared of what would happen. What if I am an ugly human?” Luna asked.
I smiled, “You will not have to worry about that.”
I stepped back away from Luna and snapped my fingers. Luna transformed into a woman slowly like a goop. Then on all fours was a nude women with blue hair. I could not see breasts or a vagina, but I snapped my fingers for clothing. What? I was embarrassed.
Luna looked up and I did not see the face of Luna from Equestria girls, but she was totally a different person. Her eyes matched her blue hair which was still flowing like she was an Alicorn. I walked up to her and offered my hand.
She was at first shaky, but when she grasped my hand; I lifted her so she can stand on her feet. It was like her first steps as a baby, but as an adult. I looked at her body; she was slim, curvy, medium size breasts that were about the same size as her butt.
While I was staring at her body she was staring at me, “I do not know what to do next.”
She was confused and I understood that. I snapped my fingers and a door appeared several feet away. She glanced at the door and glanced back at me.
“You first have to walk like a human, before we do anything.” I said.
She pushed me away and was standing still. Then she puts one foot in front of the other and was walking slowly. She did not fall, but as soon as she got used to it.
She opened the door; inside was a bed with candles on top of cabinets and dressers burning. This made the room look dim and romantic. The romantic part was the music playing in the background.
I swallowed and I knew it was a dream, but I am so nervous. I walked inside the room and Luna was sitting on the edge of the bed. She stood and looked nervous as well.
“W-What we have to do first is to take our clothing off.” I said.
“I do not know how to take my clothing off.” She said.
I forgot about that, even though she has my memories, she doesn’t know what to do with clothing. I nodded in reply. I got my fingers and was about to snap it but she hold my hand.
“I do not really mind if you took my clothes off, Trey.” Luna said.
Now my heart was at my throat, I gulped it down and unbuttoned her pants. I grabbed each side and slowly pulled them down. When the pants were down, she stepped out of them. I tossed them to aside and told her to lift her hand in the air. I pulled her shirt off and realized she was not wearing any underwear.
Now my heart is accelerating, I felt my head heat up and Luna was blushing too. I took my clothing off and I had the biggest boner popped out of my pants. Luna stared at it, and was wondering if my memories were kicking in her head.
“I believe I have to…” she stopped and got on her knees.
Her head was level to my dick and I looked away. ‘Is this really happening now?’ I thought
She got her hand and touched it. It twitched and she slowly stroked it. Luna was giving me a hand job. Then her mouth opened and my dick was submerged in Luna’s saliva. She continued stroking me and was liking my tip. I moaned.
“Luna, I am about too…” I said but ejaculated in Luna’s mouth.
She was surprised, but swallowed everything. That was the best hand job I ever had and we are in a dream!
She stood up and said, “Now I believe it is your turn to… eat me out?”
My head exploded with embarrassment. She laid down on the bed and was covering her pussy. I felt dirty, but I had to pleasure her. I got on my knees and scoot up to Luna’s legs. I lightly breathed on them and she quivered. I grabbed her hands and lifted them away from the pussy. It looked beautiful; the pussy looked un-penetrated.
I licked her pussy and was eating her out. I sucked on her clitoris and she was moaning. Next thing I knew, she was shaking and she came. I sucked out all the beautiful juices. I wiped my face on the cover to clear it off to look clean.
I looked at her, and she was covering her face, “Even though this is a dream, this is the first time I shall have sex in a dream… Be gentle.” She said.
“This is my first time too Luna, I am happy to know you will be my first in a dream.” I said.
I lifted myself and my boner was back and twitching with anticipation. I grabbed Luna’s thighs and dragged her closer to my dick. Our dick and pussy were close to each other. I was still blushing, and she was blushing.
I rubbed her pussy from my dick and slowly penetrated her hymen. She yelped a little and I stopped.
“You OK?” I asked.
“Please continue, I am alright.” Luna said.
I nodded and continued. I pushed through her hymen and I was inside her. We stayed there in that position for several minutes feeling what we have never felt before. I moved back and forth pulling my penis out and in of her pussy. It was getting hot and tight; Luna was shouting and moaning. She was enjoying this; she sat up and we made out.
I lifted her up and continued to fuck her. I was going faster and faster; she was moaning through my mouth and we both let go of our locked lips. I dropped her to the bed and as I fucked her I licked and sucked her nipples.
“OH, SWEET CELESTIA!!!! BUCK ME HARDER TREY!!!” Luna shouted to the top of her lungs.
I took it to overdrive, my heart was beating, my head was pounding and I fucked her even harder. She moaned louder and louder.
“Luna it feels amazing though being inside you… I love you so much!” I said.
“I love you too, Trey! OH BUCK!!!!! I think I am about to cum!!!” Luna said.
“I am about to cum as well!” I returned.
We continued fucking and soon Luna shouted. Her pussy juices gushed out and went everywhere. When she came I came inside her. She and I moaned at the same time.
I pulled out my penis out of her dripping pussy and collapsed on the bed next to her. We were breathing heavily and we were exhausted. We had the same faces saying that it was the best thing that ever happened to us. We kissed and hugged each other.
“I love you Trey.” Luna confessed.
I smiled, “I love you too, Luna.”
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When it ended, we awoke in embarrassment. We awoke in a wet bed. I looked at my pants and I came several times, but Luna was she one who caused the bed to become wet. Luna got up and so did I.
“We must not speak to this to anypony.” Luna said.
I crossed my heart, “Cross my heart and hope to die.”
We laughed, and then we heard a knock on the door, “Clean up after yourselves you two.” It was Celestia passing by.
Every single detail in the dream hit me in the brain and I felt hot on my face. I glanced a Luna and she looked down blushing.
“What happens in our dreams, stays with our dreams?” I asked
She looked at me, “Agreed.”
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Being born from pure dark magic has it amazing features. I was able to get out of Trey’s mind before I was completely destroyed. You know what got me destroyed? This world called Equestria, but I do not want to destroy it in revenge. I want to take over as all power king. The copy of Trey’s memories were all just my figment of my imagination. A while before I entered the Griffin Kingdom I contacted Trey through his dream.
I realize that I can connect to Treys dreams or thoughts whenever I felt like it. Only thing is that he is shutting me off. When that happens total communications are off. When I entered the border of the Griffins, it was not all that I expected.
The land was all green and there were many villages in the distance. Being in a human form can cause some chaos, but I want to see what they are up to. I choose a small wooded area and landed quite nicely.
My dark magic does anything that I wanted to, but for a price. I had to give some away which was a big bummer. So I choose to become a Griffin myself. I focused and my hands turned into claws and my feet turned into loin’s feet. Soon I was on all fours and my head transformed into a griffin head. I adjusted the colors of my feathers and eyes to grey and white. I made my tail and wings the same color and almost forgotten about it.
It was all I could do not wasting any more magic I have. I have no idea what the consequences are for when I run out of magic. Will I die? Will I disappear? Or will I go back into this gauntlet and recharge power? It is all very confusing, but I digress.
I walked for about a half of a mile before seeing a sign called Usedom Population 10,000. ‘Well I see that the Griffins keep track of their numbers at least.’ I thought.
I was right, there were parties, gatherings, shops that were cheap (in price), structures looked grand and it all was spectacular. I saw a bar in the distance and decide to go inside the joint. Inside was Griffins playing their version of pool table; no radio, but a violin was playing behind the curtains, and the bar tender was wiping his table.
When I grabbed a seat everybody was not staring at me, but everything went silent except the violinist playing in the background. The bartender was walking to me and to my surprise it was an earth pony who walked up to me.
“What kind of drink would you want?” He asked.
“I would like what is on the special today, please.” I responded pointing at the chalk board.
He nodded and grabbed glass and filled it with something black and then he uses a vial and pours it into the glass and it turned blue.
“Here’s your special called ‘The Blue Plague.’ Enjoy” He said.
I use my fingers to snap a few bits in my gauntlet quietly and paid him. I took a sip and for some reason my dark magic suddenly grew. My appearance did not change, but I felt myself getting stronger. Does Alcohol make me stronger? If so it would be an awesome power being a drunk king. ‘Yeah right.’ I thought.
I finished my drink and it was delicious. Waved at the bartender and he came back after serving a few more customers.
“What? You want seconds? I am sorry the ingredient I use for this drink is quite confidential. So I can serve you another different drink.” The bartender said.
“Well if it’s confidential, then I guess I can pay double or triple for another drink or I can pay in figures for that ingredient.” I said giving him a bag of bits I used from my magic.
“Is this all real? Are you just using magic to make all this? Also you are a Griffin; why do you have the magic? he asked.
“Well I have this gauntlet that lets me use magic, but teleportation is all I can do. I am quite rich you know.” I lied, but it convinced him to be persuaded.
“Follow me.” He said flipping open the table door and I followed him into a small room.
He then removed a carpet and opened a secret door that had stairs leading to a basement. After I came down after him he flicked on a candle and showed me the ingredient. There were 20 barrel size jugs on the shelf that said, ‘Dark Magic’
“I have only been using a fraction of it, and it kept the customers coming back. So how much are we will be talking he asked
“Before I pay you, where did you acquire this ‘ingredient’?” I asked
I need to know where he has acquired his because if he can tell me where it is, I can grow more powerful. 20 barrels of this stuff can wipe out half of a griffin empire. The thought of it quivered my insides. It was turning out to be the biggest evil plan ever.
“I happen to acquire this ‘ingredient’ at the mines south of here, but it is really hard for some pony to get in there and come back alive.” He said.
I touched the dark magic barrels and it absorbed into my being. I slowly transformed into my original self. The bartender
I looked at him with my red eyes, “For this Dark Magic… It is priceless.”
My arm extends to grab his throat. I squeezed his air pipe and absorbed his life force; turning him into dust. I then transformed into my human form absorbed the rest of the barrels and made an explosion.
It devastated the bar; all there was left was one survivor, It was the violinist and she was a pony. She was just stepping out of her shift and leaving. I rose out of the basement to the surface. When I got a closer look it was Octavia. Trey’s memories hit me, tell me not to hurt her. ‘Great.’ I thought. ‘I am limited to kill only the ones Trey does not know.’
A Griffin police officer ran up to us, “Is everyone alright?”
We looked at each other and he flinched. I grabbed his head and absorbed his life force. It was all delicious, it fed my powers. I felt stronger and I was growing in my size.
Octavia was just lying on the floor and was staring in fear. ‘Yes, fear me.’ I thought.
I glanced around and every Griffin and ponies were running away from me. I jumped in the air and was floating in the sky. I focused a dark beam down to the buildings absorbing the ponies/griffins life force in the process; while they are being hit.
In the matter of hours; I destroyed the village with all the dark magic and life force I have attained. There were a few survivors, but they were Trey’s memories doing.
‘Alright, destruction of the Griffin Village: Check. Next is going to the mine.’ I thought.
I flew away from the flames and not even a mile I ran into the mine’s entrance. I went inside, it took forever to find what I was looking for. I went down deeper and deeper into that mine. Soon I ran out of oxygen, but I did not need any because I was so keen to fine this dark magic powder.
I ran into a dead end and sensed the dark magic in the other side, I punched the dead end and inside was a cavern of Dark Magic crystals. It reminded me of Sombra but he was foolish. I realized that this cavern is part of a volcano tunnel. ‘You've been asleep for a while…’ I thought.
I smirked, “Ready to wake up?”
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Transformation I (First Draft)
I realize that Trey and I are closer than ever since that dream. Another thing that confused me is that while we were having sex in my human form, there was no romance. Maybe it was because of dream connection or was it just pure sex. I am so confused that I did not get the details of the room, bed, etc… The only detail I was able to get out of the dream was pure sex.
Anyway, back to us being closer. We basically went to the bath together and we washed one another like it was nothing. Sure Trey had to wear his swim trunks again, but he was more confident coming into the Unisex bathroom. Another thing that concerned me was where did Trey go to do his business?
When I asked him this he responded, “I happen to an eagle scout and one thing I have to do is going to was make myself an outhouse. It was small because of the wood I had. So it was a chair with a toilet hole. It may seem disgusting, but I dig a hole about five to seven feet and when I do business, I bury the smell. I clean up after myself and clean the area.”
“Do you mind showing me this toilet?” I asked.
I know what a toilet looks like in my head because of the memories Trey gave me. After we took our bath, got changed, we walked to the garden. Outside the garden was a blanket as a wall hanged up surrounding the chair. It did not smell like he said, but he was right he needed more wood for this outhouse.
“I will get you more wood you desire to complete this outhouse if you do not mind.” I told him
“Thanks Luna. I need to do more business, so could you step out?” He said shaking.
I was compliant and decided to go to my sister who took my shift for several nights. I needed to talk to her about Yerts location and if my sister does in fact know what Trey and I did last night.
I knocked on the door to enter Celestia’s room. I heard her to come in and I opened and entered. She was laying down on her regular pillow looking through some letters. Maybe it was from Twilight.
“You know what has surprises me Luna?” Celestia asked.
I was hesitant to say anything because she could be talking about Trey, and I for the dream, the letter or anything.
I shook my head and she continued, “Twilight sent me a letter telling me that Chrysalis is a foal, and Trey was the one who did this. It seems Trey was able to use the gauntlet to his advantage, but it back fired later and created Yert. It’s all very interesting.”
“I suppose that having Trey really changes our perspective of magic?” I asked.
She nodded, “Yes it concerns me what Yert is capable of. Trey has the potential of using magic.”
“What do you mean?” I said in confusion.
“Trey might absorb magic, but if he concentrates hard enough he might be able to use it.” She explained.
“So like meditation?” I asked her.
“Meda-what?” Now she was confused.
“What Trey gave me information that he can meditate. It’s to concentrate your mind a spirit and to make a better self.” I explained.
I grabbed the information from the memories, but I released the onslaught of what was here and not. I saw that Celestia’s bed was getting small like a doll house size. Celestia’s pillow was made out of Lego’s. The floor was crisscrossed with black and white. I looked at my hoof it was melting. These memories are from a night mare that Trey experienced.
“Luna are you alright?” Celestia asked.
That broke the illusion and I shook my head, “Sorry, Trey wanted to go to a secluded area and train his meditation and would like to take me there.”
Celestia thought and looked through some more letters and responded, “Is this because of your memories Trey gave you?”
“H-How do you know that?” I said in surprised.
“You always talk in your sleep, and Trey is no exception. Also do not get me started what I heard last night. Remember these castle walls have ears.” She said.
I felt my face being hot, I was embarrassed. I did not know what to say to her. Even though it was only a dream she knows.
“So how was the sex dream or should I say super wet dream?” She asked.
I was stuttering, “W-Well i-it was only a dream but I did not sense a-any romance.”
“I believe I have the explanation.” This caught my attention and Celestia continued, “When you are in a dream with some pony else you only get the sex. I know it is not right me saying I know all dreams, but when you only have the sex in a dream, there is no romance. Romance, surprisingly enough, is only put separate. This is why you have probably did not have any details of the dream excepts the sex.”
I never thought of it that way. We were talking about Trey, and I in sexual relations it made me felt dizzy.
“So over all Trey and I in this relationship is alright?” I asked her.
“Why would you say that? Of course you are allowed to do this, you are my sister and it is your choice to what you want to do with your love life.” She said.
I sighed and I walked to the balcony. Celestia walked with me and looked concerned.
“What’s wrong? Are you not happy with Trey?” She asked.
“It is not that I am happy. It’s just with Yert in the way, Trey is having trouble with what is right being human and losing his humanity.” I told her.
“What do you mean losing humanity?”
“What I am trying to say is… A human having sex with a pony is looked down on and he will only go as far with kisses. So we are slowly getting through this, but it slowly going to a halt… I just wish that there was a spell that can transform Trey into a pony or maybe a Alicorn." I said.
“Well there is no spells that are permanent to change Trey’s appearance to a pony. Let alone a male Alicorn. If we had that kind of spell, then a lot of ponies would be running around changing their race for the good or better.” She said.
“You are probably right.” I said.
“Let’s just focused of defeating Yert and I believe I have a place where Trey can train.” She said.
When I was about to speak, a royal guard who reports to us comes in running. He was breathing heavily, it looked like he was sweating through is royal clothing.
“Your highness, Yert has destroyed three villages in the Griffin Kingdom and probably headed to the main kingdom. There have been some reports of survivors. We collected about five of them and they are in the royal infirmary.”
“We need Trey to start training soon.” I said to Celestia and she nodded.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
When the guards delivered the wood and planks, I was able to complete my out house. It was like the old western movies and I engraved a crescent moon hole on the top of the door. It was magnificent; it was a bathroom for me and I felt proud making it this far for holding my deposits.
‘Alright time to use this thing.’ I thought.
After my business, I headed towards Luna, but she was not in her room. I heard some disturbances out on the hallway. I headed to the noise and it was three nurses who were talking. I decide to eavesdrop on them to see what was going on.
“It seems like some of them are in shock.” Said one nurse.
“I am surprised that they even survived that onslaught.” Said the other.
“Do you have the list of the survivors, nurse?” said a male voice.
“Yes, I have the list… One is Nurse Redheart serving her duty in the Griffin hospital, two is Octavia who was working in a bar playing the violin, three is Gilda who was at her parents’ house, four is Lyra Heartstrings who was visiting the Griffin Kingdom for a vacation, fifth is Sweetie Drops or as Lyra calls her Bon Bonn, she was with Lyra on their vacation.” Said the nurse.
“Are you sure that there were no other survivors?” said the male voice.
“I am sure that every Griffin or pony were eradicated from the three villages except for the survivors.” Said the other.
“Damn it. This doesn't make any sense. Why would he destroyed three entire villages and leave these survivors… It just doesn't make any sense.” The male pony said.
‘Did Yert attack those ponies and Griffin’s? He is trying to become powerful? I know the ponies that are in the hospital, but why did they survive?’ I thought. I thought through my head, but no answer would be coming up. It was confusing.
Then the nurse continued to speak, “It seems like all the ponies and the Griffin described this creature as a monkey standing up on two legs and it was pitch black. They also mention it wearing a gauntlet.”
“Is that it?” he said
“Yes sir, it’s the only information we have.” Said the nurse.
"Thank you nurse you can tend to the patients. Thank you for the information and I will report it to Celestia.” The male pony said.
I heard footsteps walking away from the room and I realize somepony was behind me.
“I suppose you just like to get information, just as I do.” Said a voice.
I jumped five feet away from this, and I landed on my butt. I looked up and it was Celestia herself. ‘AHHHH! STOP TROLLING ME!!!’ I shouted in my head.
“Celestia, you scared the wits out of me.” I said to her.
“I hope I did because you need to stop your eavesdropping. If you want information just talk to me or Luna your lover.” She said
‘YOUR DID IT AGAIN!!!’ I shouted in my head. This made me blush uncontrollably.
When I recovered, “I suppose that Yert is taking over the Griffin Kingdom. Did you talk to the Royal people in the kingdom?”
“You want to get to the point? Alright… Half the Kingdom is devastated. Luckily the royal quarters weren’t destroyed and I’ve asked them the royal family to stay at Canterlot, but they refused.” She said.
“I suppose the Griffins are not fond to you or anybody in the royal guard?’ I asked
Celestia frowned, “Yes, there have been tensions among the countries and we have prevented war for almost 3,000 years after the first Griffin was born.”
‘Wow! Three thousand years! That is a long time.’ I thought. I never had a clue that there was tensions among the two kingdoms and prevention of war. Maybe it explains why Gilda was angry with other ponies.
I looked at Celestia and asked, “May I see the patients?”
Celestia sighed, “You may, but I have to be present so that they will not be afraid of you.”
We walked into the infirmary and there was curtains all around. Each curtain represented a room with a bed and a night stand with flowers. The only thing was each was closed to let them rest, but Celestia is going to surprise them.
Celestia whispered, “Wait here when I call you.”
I just stood there and Celestia was talking to another pony. I do not know who was in each one, but when Celestia called my name I walked in. As soon as I walked through those curtains, I recognized Octavia. She was at first calm, but then screamed when she saw me. I covered my ears and Celestia calmed her down.
“What is he doing here? He destroyed everything!!!” she shouted.
“It was not me! It was my evil counterpart. He was born from dark magic!” I said.
She was angry, but when she saw my gauntlet as a different arm she calmed down a bit.
“You see what Trey is telling you is the truth. The pitch black figure you saw was Trey’s evil counterpart and was born from dark magic.” Celestia explained.
“Why would this evil counterpart spare me, let alone four others?” Octavia asked.
“Because I know you from another world that I have come from. I know you Octavia. You came out of know where and was playing at a filly birthday party that Pinkie was playing. So maybe my evil counterpart cannot hurt anyone I know from the show and maybe others I have seen… It’s just a theory though.” I said.
Octavia shook her head, no one else knew this except Pinkie Pie and the other fillies. She was confused like the other ponies I have encountered. Then the curtain dropped around us and it was nurse Redheart holding a table leg, Gilda with the other table leg, Bon Bonn holding Lyra against her will because she was shouting a lot of thing out.
Celestia shouted, “ENOUGH!!!”
Everyone stopped and dropped their weapons and Bon Bonn let go of Lyra and jumped on top of me.
“OH MY GOSH!!!! A HUMAN!!!” Lyra shouted.
Celestia levitated her away from me, and I got myself up.
“Alright, I believe you deserve an explanation.” I said.
“Like Tartarus do! You are the reason you killed my family!!” Gilda shouted.
Celestia continued, “I SAID ENOUGH! Gilda this man is not your enemy. If it his evil counterpart that is doing this. Also for the last time he was born from dark magic!”
Everyone calmed down and I was surprised. When Celestia is fooling around she just trolls become Trollestia. Then when she is serious, she is Princess Celestia of the royal family. I just have to wonder when she switches from troll to serious Alicorn.
Everybody got back to their bed and we explained ourselves. They were shocked I knew them, and I answered some of Lyra’s human questions and she was disappointed how my world got destroyed. I answered a lot more serious questions from the others and Celestia was surprised that I was able to handle the rest.
When finished we let everybody sleep for the night and Celestia and I walk back to her room.
“It seems like you were very popular today.” Celestia said.
“Yeah, other that the accusing me destroying the villages it was fine.” I said.
“Which begs me the question, Trey. Have you wanted to become my royal negotiator? I could use your knowledge to persuade the Griffin royal family to stay with them. I can fill you in with their history.” Celestia asked.
I was surprised, “I would be honored to be part of your royal guard. So the answer is yes.”
“Good now, I have to go to bed and talk to Discord about the news.” Celestia said opening her door.
I walked away and as she was closing the door, I said, “Don’t make a mess you two!”
I sprinted towards my room, now even trying to see what Celestia’s reaction was. I opened and jumped into my room and closed the door behind me. My heart was racing and then I jump in surprise because Luna was laying on my bed reading a book.
She spoke, “I suppose that you got the news?”
I calm myself and said, “Yes I did. I accepted the job and I am going to be a great negotiator.”
“Tomorrow we leave for training and we will fill you up with Griffin Knowledge and the training area will be a secluded area.” She said.
“That’s where we will do magic, meditation and the teaching right?” I asked Luna.
She smiled, “Of course silly, why wouldn't we go.”
I walked up to her, and she puts down her book. I stroked her mane and she move her head to touch my hand. I gave her a kiss on the forehead, and she blushed a little.
“You know Luna? Why are you so cute?” I asked
“I sorry I did not catch that.” She said.
“I said, why are you so cu-” I was cut off because Luna gave me a kiss on the lips.
When she let go, she was embarrassed, “I’m sorry was it too so-”
I returned her kiss and I stopped, “You do not have to worry. Let’s worry about me getting trained for me battling against Yert.”
She nodded and I got changed to my pajamas. I joined Luna in the bed and we slept together for the night.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
This volcano is full of dark magic crystals! This will fill me with ultimate power. Why would it? It would make my attacks powerful and I can annihilate anything that comes into my path. I have destroyed three small villages and over all five survivors were able to see my full appearance… ‘Why did I make them live? I am heartless… Right?’ I thought.
I was able to destroy anything, the guards and those who stood in my way had their life forces taken away from them feeding my evil. The only thing is I need to assemble an evil group, but how? I thought about all the seasons of MLP for info and I realized something… ‘How about Generation 1?’ I thought.
The only ones I could think to the top of my head was the Smooze and Grogar. I thought, ‘Maybe I can free Tirek and get him to join my team. Then I can release Chrysalis from Twilights castle, revive King Sombra, and make my own version of the Smooze.’
I snatched a crystal from the ground and focused on making the Smooze. I did not take long, the dark crystal turned into a dark form of lava. Next it formed eyes and a mouth. It was not like I thought it would be in the Generation one, but next thing I knew it leaped out of my hand and was eating more dark crystals. As it ate it grew stronger.
“I think I shall call you…” I smiled then laughed, “Gak.”
When it was eating the crystals the ground shook. The volcano has been doing that for a short while. I have several theories why it is happening. One the more I take the crystals to feed me and my minions, the stronger it will erupt. Two it would either collapse.
When the Gak stopped it fell among a crack and it shouted. I opened the crack with my hands and transformed it into a stair case. Gak was impaled by a big crystal that was surging with dark magic. I touched it and I was being fed more power than ever before. My body could not take it; my body turned into a dust cloud and my hand was still on it.
I was able to let go, my body slowly came back to its original form. I looked at Gak and I was grinning, “Let’s just get this straight you take over this land only, you are not allowed to cross the ocean you hear?”
“You got it master! No one can stop the GAK!!” It shouted putting its mouth on top the crystal. I ran out of the room to let him out. He grew and grew making several more faces on its gooey membrane. It was done feeding and it surged out through the tunnels. I teleported to outside the entrance of the mine and landed on my feet.
There was a big earthquake and the Gak was coming and then I heard the music as it was heading out the mine, it sounded like the Gak made several different personalities to sing this song. I also wanted to join in the madness!
Girl’s voice :
Gak :
Girl’s voice :
Gak :
Girl’s voice :
Gak :
Yert :
Girl’s voice :
Yert and the girl’s voice :
Gak :
Yert and the girl’ voice :
Yert :
Girl’s voice :
Gak :
Girl’s voice :
Yert :
Yert, girl’s voice and Gak :
Gak :
Girl’s voice :
Yert :
Girl’s voice and Yert :
Gak :
Girl’s voice :
Gak :
It was just a silly evil song, but I loved it. It continued to sing taking over the land of Griffin’s and I decided to head back to my layer. Why you might ask? Yes I am asking you. Pinkie isn’t the only one who can’t break the fourth wall. Well I just answer my own question then and continue to read this story. The minions I create or will create; I can connect to their minds so I can see the destruction from afar.
I decided to head back to the large crystal and it was still there. I hope Gak was not greed on feeding on dark magic, but I digress. I saw from across the room was an arch that had crystals, but they were clear. I touched one of them and the arch turned into a portal. ‘Interesting...’ I thought.
The dark crystal was pulsing again and I turned around to see what was going on. I saw the crystal showing locations on Equestria and other places… I thought of Tartarus; the crystal made the images appear and the portal roared with life.
“Time to meet the defeated Tirek.” I said walking through the portal.
I grabbed a dark crystal and held it until I met Cerberus. It was angry with its three heads and pounced towards me. I just held up my finger and fired my laser. I absorbed the immortal Cerberus life force. It was very delicious.
I strolled along the stairs leading to Tirek’s cell. It looked the same as season four left it. Tirek was sitting on the floor looking weak. He looked up and wasn’t surprised, but curious.
“Who or what are you?” he asked weakly.
I tossed the crystal to his feet and he picked it up, “Your fellow friend pure dark magic named Yert.”
Tirek realized it was full of dark magic and tossed it to the side, “If you free me I will not be able to help because I was defeated by friendship.”
“I see you are sad by this, but I have a way to defeat rainbow power…” I said
Then Tirek face changes to a funny expression, “I’m listening.”
“You see when I have the dark magic I can cause anything to be in destruction. With the Griffin Kingdom in ruin it feeds the crystals and soon enough it will have enough power to destroy Equestria… No rainbow power or anything else can stand in our way.” I explained.
Tirek smiled and grabbed the crystal and absorbed it to his domain. Like in the show he grew to his final form, but looked like the generation 1 Tirek with the Generation 2.
“What do we do next; master?” He destroyed the cell and bowed down. His voice was also deeper and more menacing.
I grinned, “We get a certain someone who made me in the first place.”
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Transformation I (First Draft)
I awoke to a kiss. It was Trey waking me up for the morning. I complemented the kiss with a hug. My warm hooves were around his back and he released my lips. He laid down next to me keeping our warm bodies at bay against the cold covers.
Trey got up out of bed, and I glanced at him. He was changing and I happen to blush, but I kept on looking at him. Even though he is a human he is so attractive; even if he is in the nude. He glanced at me and smiled; he then winked at me and put my attention back to the horizon.
‘The Griffin Kingdom is in trouble and I need to get Trey training going.’ I kept on thinking of my head.
“Well; where are we going for my negotiation training?” He asked putting his arm around my shoulder.
“You are ready then?” I asked.
He nodded and I concentrated to the location of the kitchen.
“Well, we better eat some breakfast then.” I told him.
Without a word he stuffs bread, milk, orange juice, apples, and fruits down his throat like a monster. It looks like he wants to get the training started.
When he finished; he burped and walked up to me, “Shall we go?”
I laughed and I teleported us to a secret room, that is underground Canterlot itself. Celestia only show me this once, but she told me to use this for training. Inside was an orb in the center it held a small house and acres of trees and forests leading to a plain field of flowers.
“It looks like a snow globe.” Trey said.
“It is more than a snow globe; its another universe. This holds a different time line and when we go inside we will be changed forever when we come out. The time difference is phenomenal; each second is a worth 14 days. 62, 208,000 seconds is worth 720 days in real time but those seconds in this orb will be 207360 seconds. Which is 2.4 days. So were going to use this to save time and save the Griffin Kingdom.” I explained.
“Well we have ‘time’ to waste here if we wanted to.” Trey joked.
I got serious, “You ready for the challenge? Once you get in there; you cannot get out until you get powerful enough to defeat Yert.”
“I believe I got it Luna. Let’s go.” Trey said.
I sighed and touched the orb with my horn. There was a big white flash and the both of us got engulfed in it. When it ended, we were in the plains full of flowers. Trey looked around and turned around to face me.
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We have spent 834 days (2.38 days in Equestria) in this orb and Trey has improved phenomenally. He knows what to do to face Yert. The combat training he knew in the passed, is in a whole new level. His body was now skinny and starting to grow muscles, his facial features grew a beard and his hair grew to his shoulders. Even though there was limitless amount of food and water, there was no knifes to shave his beard. Most kisses would tickle my muzzle.
I have too changed as well. When I was training with Trey I had so much fun, but soon he was able to take me down more easily. Soon I had to show my nightmare side to teach him a hard lesson. When I transformed he took me down like I was nothing. I called Celestia about his improvements and she sent in some golems she made. They are the most powerful in Equestria and were turned into dust; they only lasted within a minute.
Back to me I grew some feminine muscles and I lost a lot of weight. I looked like myself before I was banished to the moon. Trey grew more and more fond of me, but due to human issues we did not go into sex, but we did in dreams during the night we were resting. He transformed into a male Alicorn he created for me and I loved it. We were forbidden to make love, but no one said we can make love in our dreams.
Trey and I walked back to the place we were at the beginning. He was touching my shoulder all across the way.
I admitted it was a fun time, “When everything is finished could we focus on turning you into a pony?”
The conversation about that started after the 480th day and we just kept on talking more about the subject. There was no recorded history a pony wanting to become a human, but records of a pony becoming a Alicorn and Unicorn.
“Yeah, we can do that. It would make me happy about turning into a pony to make love to you.” Trey said.
My head exploded with embarrassment, but I made a combat, “Yes, I would love that. I want to have your babies.”
I could not tell if Trey was embarrassed, but the cheeks turning red said it all. Without a further ado, I touched my horn on the orb and we were engulfed in the white light once more.
When we made it back to the room, I teleported us to Trey’s room. It was a little dusty and his electronics were still there. Trey went to his bag and grabbed his shave and asked for some soap.
It took about an hour, but he shaved his beard and had himself a haircut. There was some cuts on his skin, but I am sure he will be fine.
Trey and I walked to Celestia's quarter and she was waiting for us.
She looked at Trey then at me, “I suppose training went well?”
“Yes sister, it went better than expected.” I said glancing at Trey
“So are we going to go to the Griffin Kingdom?” Trey asked.
“Before we go I have to tell you the situation with Yert.” Celestia stated.
“Well we have no time, tell us what happened on the way.” He said.
Celestia, Trey and I were on the royal Carriage heading towards the Griffin Kingdom royal palace.
Celestia continued, “Yert has freed Tirek, restored Queen Chrysalis’s power and release a monster called Gak.”
“I believe its called the Smooze, but I believe that Yert wanted to be a little joker on his part. It doesn't surprise me that he freed Chrysalis and Tirek, but I do not think he can get anymore to his team… All there is left is King Sombra.” Trey said.
“Yes, but that is at the Crystal Empire.” I said.
Our ride was short because we made it to the royal palace entrance, but before that the villages from the left side of the kingdom was taken over by Yert.
When the carriage landed we were greeted with Griffin guards. We were lead to the door where the King and Queen were inside. Trey was getting nervous, but shook his head.
“Alright let the negotiations begin.” He said opening the door.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Three days ago….
It seems Tirek is just lying around inside these caves like he owns the place. Touching and absorbing dark crystals make him grow in strength. You might think that I will be betrayed by him, but you are mistaken. If he tries to overthrow me my dark magic will take away his powers to his old weaken state. I have him under wraps.
Gak on the other hand was being obedient and was following every command I was doing. It was still repeating the song over and over. It was diabolical. With Gak we have taken a quarter of the land and soon when we free Chrysalis, the evil power will grow again. Meaning more evil power in an evil group equals Gak growing in strength.
“So how are do we go to sneak into Twilight's Castle?” Tirek asked.
“What do you mean ‘we’?” I asked him.
“What do I mean about ‘we’? WE are a team, WE are meant to work together.” Tirek explained.
I looked through the crystal and pictured the dungeon in Treys memories. Then the crystal showed Chrysalis.
“I will go alone because I can condense my dark magic to a minimum. If you go; you will cause panic.” I said.
“I suppose your right; what would you like for me to do?” he asked.
I walked up to him jumped and touched his forehead with my finger tip. I gave him the memory of Grogar.
Once I got back on my feet I said, “Make sure you add a little more darkness into him when you create him.”
Tirek smirked, “Of course master.”
He walked towards the dark crystal and grabbed a fragment. The crystal in his hand melted and it was harder than clay. With his strength he constructed, like Gak, a Grogar.
I walked into the portal just to let them talk things over. I wonder what Chrysalis is going to think about me. I am technically its son and she is my mother. My mother? Hah, do not be ridiculous. I was born as a good magic spell from Celestia and then corrupted by Chrysalis that made me this personality. So now that I think about it, Celestia and Chrysalis are my parents, but from magic form.
I decided to shake it off and condense my power to a minimum, so I will not be detected. Once I got out of the portal, I was nothing, but a floating gauntlet. I floated to Chrysalis’ cell and my gauntlet grabbed the door and melted it to the ground. I slowly transform into my regular form, and Chrysalis was just looking at me unimpressed. Though she is around a filly, now that he power is returning slowly.
“And who might you be?” she asked.
“I am Yert, born from your dark magic.” I formed a dark crystal in my hand and showed it to her, “With my powers growing, I want to take over Equestria, but with your help and the changelings help, we can over throw both the Griffin Kingdom and Equestria.”
“I am sort of persuaded She stood up and continued, “I you want to take over this world, then you can do it in one condition. I take over Canterlot as our new Queen.”
I take her word and gave her the crystal which she ate. I grabbed her holey hoof, told her I will catch up and led her into the portal first.
“Time to do some research.” I said.
Not even a minute, I encountered Fluttershy. ‘Why was she here?’ I thought. No matter. I sprinted towards her, and she curled up in a ball in fear.
I touched her for head and something came out. It was her negative self, but in a goopy form. I pulled it out the rest of the way and transformed it into a negative Fluttershy (NF).
It looked like Fluttershy, but she was gray when Discord took away their elements. So it looked exactly like that.
“Well is this a surprise? I suppose that miss Boo Hoo is giving up to face against this handsome beast.” Said NF
“W-Well I suppose that I cannot face him, but...” Fluttershy stopped and started to run away.
“Oh Boo Hoo!” said NF
I floated through the next floor and there was Twilight, Rarity and Applejack talking about what to do with Chrysalis. Rarity was wearing a white dress that was dazzling, Applejack seems tired from working out on the apple farm and Twilight looked a little bit taller even though she was sitting down. Then I interrupted their talk with my hand splitting into three and grabbing out their negativity. Then transformed into something a little bit different.
“Twilight you will always be a failure at everything, because I am the number one student of Yert.” Said Negative Twilight (NT). She then burned some books that were on the shelf.
“My, my darlings it seems your fashion is out of date Rarity. Let me rip out some of those dazzling crystals and spend it on nothing but ice cream. So I can become fat and hideous!” Said Negative Rarity (NR). She used her magic and ripped those crystals off Rarity’s dress. Making it useless and ragged.
“Working in the Apple farm is sure boring around those parts. I decided I do not want to work and let the apples rot. No more Apple cider for anyone, but myself.” Said Negative Applejack (NA). She then spat on AJ’s hoof which got her angry.
The eight ponies were fighting themselves, it was a wonderful sight to see. I heard a whoosh from the distance and it was Rainbow Dash coming in. She was about to crash into a window. I lifted my hand up and she impacted through the window I grabbed out her negativity. Then I transformed it into a diabolical Rainbow Dash.
As Rainbow dash collects herself from the crash she is encountered with her negative self.
“You are a failure at landing! You think that the Wonderbolts would take you in if you did this? Do not even make me laugh!” said Negative Rainbow Dash (NRD). She then grabbed Rainbow Dash’s tail with her mouth and threw her across the room hitting the wall.
Pinkie Pie showed up out of nowhere and fired her party cannon at me, but it when through me. I turned around and grabbed Pinkie’s head and pulled out her evil side… Pinkamena.
“Ugh! I am so tired of you partying with these ponies. I do not want to do anything else with you, but instead. Let me do this.” Said Pinkamena.
She punched Pinkie, but then kissed her in the lips for no reason. Then punched her again and repeated the process for two more seconds then threw her towards Rainbow Dash. It was a fight frenzy and I was enjoying it laughing.
I snapped my fingers and the negatives stopped their fighting. I snapped them again and they followed me through the portal I made for them. They went through and I followed, but I was being shot at by Twilight’s magic. I deflected like it was nothing and said, “You cannot stop me.” Then the portal closed when I entered back into my cave.
It was already the next day, and everyone was gathered inside the dark crystal room. They were silenced when I was in the room. Everypony was here, Tirek, Grogar, a representation of Gak (Separated from the main Gak to tell reports), Chrysalis (who has grown back to her normal self) and the negative mane six.
“Today we prepare for something we all dream… To take over this land and to fight for what is ours. To take over Equestria after the Griffin Kingdom. Some of you may ask why I did not do Equestria first, but here is the reason. To show an example what we are going to do to Equestria. You get to do anything you want after we defeat Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Cadance, Princess Twilight and Trey. Negative Mane six will go after their counterparts and Chrysalis will take her changelings to the Crystal Empire and revive one more team member. Tirek, Gak and I will go to the Royal Palace to finish off the empire. So who is with me?” I asked.
Everyone shouted in glee, they wanted to get out of this place to cause more evil chaos. Now I opened the portal for the N-Main six through their portal to Ponyville. I then pulled Chrysalis to the side and gave her a big crystal.
“Go to the top of the empire and place this dark crystal on the balcony. This will be able to revive Sombra. I shall send you back to your changelings so you can finish your preparations to take the Crystal Empire.” I said.
“Alright then; next time we meet, we shall take over Equestria.” She said.
Chrysalis walked through the portal to her location and it was just Tirek, Grogar, Gak and I. We talked what we were going to do as to take the Royal Palace.
“We should wait until sunrise because I can convert the sun’s rays and make them into eternal night.” I told them.
“I suppose we can do that, but what stopping us?” Grogar asked.
“Yes, I am too concerned why we need to wait until tomorrow.” Tirek said curiously.
“I am going to be in my ultimate form with this dark crystal. I need to sap every last drop of its power. I wasted too much making a negative main six and I need to recharge. I am not saying we are going to be defeated if I am drained; it’s just that it would be difficult to fight with an empty stomach.” I explained.
Then nodded in agreement even though it was a slight hint that without my power I would be useless. I walked to the dark crystal; put my hand forward and touched it. ‘Now you may erupt my dark friend.’ I said in my head.
There was a slight rumble, but not big enough to shake the kingdom and soon it was working. Each second gave me 10 tons of Dark magic it was overwhelming, but I held on. I wanted every last drop. All of a sudden I was now surrounded by darkness…. “Here I come, Trey….” I said laughing.
Author's Note
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Negotiations and the beginning of the end
Training with Luna was like a dream… A year and almost a half dream. Even so we were able to bond with one another. I was surprised myself I had some more abilities that I developed when I was inside the orb. I believe I can beat Yert without killing myself and be with Luna for the rest of my life.
Arriving at the Griffin Royal Palace is like entering Canterlot, but the shape and architecture are totally different. It was more Egyptian than anything else, but the royal guards did not match the architecture. I believe they will pop out more so people can notice them.
Anyway when I got inside the room for negotiations for the King and Queen, something was different, no one was in the room. All a sudden I sensed it was a trap I pushed Luna and Celestia back to the hallway and I got caught in a cage.
“Ha Ha! We caught him! We caught the creature terrorizing our lands!” said a voice.
“Honey I think you got the wrong creature, he is different from what we saw.” Said a female voice.
“I suppose you are the King and Queen of this Kingdom?” I asked.
I was right, the two figures stepped out and revealed themselves as the Queen and King of the Griffin Kingdom (They were Griffins of course). The King looked like he had barely any sleep and the Queen was very worried. Celestia and Luna finally was able to get in the room.
“What is the meaning of this?” Celestia demanded.
“Trey are you alright?” Luna asked.
“Trey? You mean Yert! This is Yert terrorizing our lands!” Shouted the king and pointed at me.
“Yert is supposed to be pitch black like the witnesses said.” Said the Queen.
“ENOUGH!” I shouted.
Everyone stopped what they were doing. I cleared my throat, “Queen Scarlet, you are right about me, Yert is an evil counterpart of mine and I want to defeat him. Also it wasn’t my fault, Yert was created by dark magic.”
Scarlet looked at the king with a face saying ‘I told you so.’
“King Jayden, please believe me if you can. I am not Yert. If I was Yert I would escape here as fast as possible, yet I am going to sit in this cage so I can talk to you.” I said.
Jayden calmed down and walked to the end of the table was his royal chair was and sat on it. Scarlet followed and sat right next to him to comfort him.
“Alright let’s start negotiations please?” Celestia asked.
Celestia sat on a chair right next to my cage and Luna just sat there right next to me. Luna was concerned what I was going to do with this predicament.
“You may speak and try to convince me, but it will not work. I am staying here in this castle and that is final.” Said Jayden.
“King Jayden; all I have to say is this is going to be suicide if you do not escape. Yert has gathered some of the most dangerous villains on this world. If you think your guards are going to protect you then you are wrong! I know how powerful he is, I need to fight him so I can get to him.” I said.
“What Trey is saying is true and I will help him force you off your lands to save you. You King Jayden, Queen Scarlet is essential for the Griffin Kingdom.” Luna added.
“Please for the love of your Kingdom, try to see that you will never see your Kingdom again if you cannot agree with go the Equestria.” Said Celestia.
“Honey, please consider. I am going to be there with you. You can bring our children with us. Just please for your kingdom. Let them take care of the rest.” said Scarlet.
“Scarlet do not you see. If I leave these ponies will take over my throne if I agree.” Said Jayden.
“FOR THE LOVE GOD!!! I have done research and you do not trust ponies because it was better for you to stay in this land. You ate ponies and you still were on a rampage. After all those years; you have not changed! We trust you now because there is a BIGGER THREAT THAT US!!!” I shouted.
I was angry they would not understand that they can be obliterated on the spot if Yert was here. Luna put her hoof on my shoulder through the mini jail cell. ‘It time to begin, Trey.’ Said Yert in my mind.
“He’s coming… Make your decision, trust us or… Yert will kill us all.” I said.
Celestia looked at me like I was crazy and Luna was almost the same. Jayden and Scarlet looked at one another and nodded their heads.
“We will go with you to Equestria until our kingdom is safe.” Said Scarlet.
I bent the steel bars apart and stepped out of the cell. The King and Queen got up and walked towards Celestia to be evacuated. They called their two children a prince and princess named Ceaser and Ginger.
They were guided to a royal carriage the family went in and Celestia followed inside. Luna walked inside, but I stayed outside and I closed the door. I focused my hand to melt the door together and cast a spell on it.
“Trey!? What is the meaning of this?” Luna demanded.
“I’m sorry Luna. I have to fight Yert by myself. I will be fine.” I said,
“But you said that we will be together! You promised!” she shouted and she started to tear up.
I walk up to the ponies pulling the carriage, “I am going to give you a protective spell so you can get back to Equestria safely.”
“Yes sir.” They said in reply. Then I enchanted a protection spell and an acceleration spell.
“You do not have to do this Trey! Let me fight with you!” Luna said.
“Luna…” Celestia said.
“Don’t Luna me, sister! He promised!” Luna shouted.
Tears were streaming down her cheeks and her hoof was against the window. I put my hand over it.
I looked at the guards and said, “Go now!”
The carriage moved and it moved fast, the last thing I heard was Luna shouting Trey. Blue skies were turning into darkness, and it covered the sun making it into night unnaturally. I have controlled my emotions to this point and I shouted, Luna.
I calmed down and I took a deep breath, ‘You can show yourself Yert.’ I said in my head.
“You know that was a great spell and departure. It was so touching, but I got to give it thumbs down for tearing up part.” Said Yert.
“How long were you there?” I asked.
“I was there at the end of the negotiations… Anyway do you just love the darkness I am about to release?” asked Yert.
“I am going to prevent that from happening Yert. Anything else you want to say before you are obliterated?” I asked.
“Oh, you are so cold. I can tell something has changed about you.” Yert said.
I cracked my knuckles, neck, back and knees. I was ready, I breathed in and out.
Yert moved towards me, and I turned around and I focused my punch to his face, but it was colliding with his fist. Then boom! We deflected off one another and Yert crashed into the caste and I landed on my feet.
“I need to absorb more magic then.” I said.
Yert was laughing in the distance, “INTERESTING!!! You are the same level as I am! Our punches will be useless if we continue to do this!”
I smirked, “Who said it was a punch?”
Yert looked at his belly and it was a huge hole. It was bleeding like he was human. ‘You can make magic turn into anything your desire.’ Said Luna. ‘Thank you teacher. I am going to need it.’ I said in my head.
Yert was confused and screamed in pain, his first feeling of the day… Pain. He soon recovered and his bleeding returned into his normal pitch black particles.
“What the hell did you do to me?!” Yert demanded.
I snorted, “Magic.”
Author's Note
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Trey is even more powerful than ever! No matter; I have back up when ready. ‘You guys almost done?’ I asked in my head. Our team is connected to the mind, thanks to the dark crystals and we have a huge advantage on our part.
I look down at Trey he looked furious and wanted me dead. I cannot really remember how he defeated me the first and last time in his childhood. I believe he has a way. I do not know how he was able to get me to feel the pain like a human, but it seems like he had a whole bunch of training. I have no idea where he got the training from in a short time. It was mysterious.
“Well you want some more?” Shouted Trey.
I smirked, “This is only the beginning! Feel the power of DARKNESS!!!”
I focus my palm to fire a dark magic beam, similar to what Chrysalis fired before, but it was ten times bigger. It was coming at Trey at amazing speeds; I was laughing. I was enjoying this! I lowered my hand, turning off the beam and there was nothing, but smoke.
All I heard was a whoosh and then my stomach felt weird. When I looked down, from my belly to my chest it was a gaping hole and seeping out this hole was real human blood. “AAAHHHH!!!!” I shouted in pain.
How was he able to survive and return an attack? that? Did he really absorb my dark magic and used it? No, it would kill him… Wait! I think I know what he did.
When the smoke cleared Trey looked different. Half of his body was white and the other was black. He was a Yin Yang! Now I see he converted my power to regular powerful magic.
My dark magic healed my wounds and I was still alive, but it was short lived. I blinked for a second and he was gone. The next second, he punched me in the head, while I was still healing.
“GAH!” I grunted.
This punch made me crash through the marble flooring to the bottom floor. I was lying on the ground face down. I just need to wait a little longer… ‘Tirek you are up!’ I shouted through my head.
I turned around there was Trey with glowing golden eyes…. Was this his fighting form?
He jumped down to my level and I smirked, “So, I suppose you got yourself a new power… Not that I am surprised, but you do not know what you are dealing with.”
Nothing came out of his mouth, just a face saying, ‘Get out of my life’
Like I said, Tirek came crashing through the wall and rammed into Trey through the wall to the front garden. My wounds finally healed up and I got up. I was looking at the damage, Tirek was punching the hell out of Trey. He lifted him up and tried to absorb his magic, but then Trey broke out of his levitation.
“How in the Tartarus did you-” he was interrupted with Treys kick.
This kick made him flew across several statues and landed in shallow water. ‘Useless.’ I thought. ‘Do not worry master, I am just getting started.’ Tirek in my head.
He jumped and fired a laser at Trey like he did at Twilight, but it was total darkness. I looked at Trey before he was hit, he was smiling. ‘Oh no! Stop Tirek!’ I shouted in his mind.
It was too late, the laser hit him and it was absorbed into his being. He was still was the same size, but the black side of Trey was turning sliver. What did it meant? I sprinted towards him and when I got to him he smacked me across to where Tirek was at. ‘How can this be?’ I asked myself?
Tirek and I collided with one another and we landed on the ground causing a three feet hole in it. Tirek and I looked at one another and we agreed, “It’s time to bring in GAK!” I shouted.
Gak came in like a wave. It was coming in as fast as a tsunami and it soon consumed Trey in Dark magic substance. There was a big light coming out of Gak and a whirl pool was forming on Gak. He was going down. It was screaming in pain. Tirek and I got up and grabbed a little bit of Gak and all the substance that made him up was absorbed my Trey.
Now his appearance was totally different. His Yin Yang was gold and silver. I looked at Gak and he looked exhausted, scared and was slowly dying. Tirek was the same way and I was recovered to fight, but I need to know something.
“WHO OR WHAT ARE YOU!!??” I demanded.
Trey turned around and faced us, he then was walking towards us. He then stopped and was ten feet away from us.
“I am the ultimate converter of magic, Trey. I am a human how will defeat what I started.” He said.
He continued to walk towards me and shouted in my head, ‘GROGAR!!’
Grogar teleported and was running towards Trey. His horns transformed into knifes and stabbed through Trey’s stomach from the back. Trey coughed out blood and landed on my face. The two knifes were connected to Grogar’s head and they were glowing with a green aura. His gold and silver Yin Yang was turning back into black and white. There was one problem. Trey was still walking, dragging Grogar with the two knifes stuck into his stomach!
Tirek ran towards him and Trey punched him. In a blink Tirek was back into his old weakened state. I looked at Gak, but he turned into darkness dust. My back was against the wall; Trey was still walking towards me and Grogar decided to pull out of Treys back and rammed through his chest from the back.
Trey stopped and the Yin Yang was disappearing from the feet, but he was still walking… There we were face to face. I tasted his breath breathing on me. It was weak, he was exhausted.
He lifted his left and right arm, touched his wound and covered it in his blood. He touched my gauntlet with his left hand making a circle. It was a big circle and with his right he drew the earth?
Then he whispered in my ear, “You will not be hurting any one else….”
Trey smiled when he dropped his hands and fell backwards. His ‘Yin Yang’ power was depleted. I looked at the symbol on my gauntlet and then there was a flash of light that engulfed me. I screamed in pain, most of my power was being taken away.
When it ended, I opened my eyes. The scenery was different from before. There was grey skies volcanos erupting in the distance and I saw the apocalyptic city of New York in the distance. I was in the human world?!
I lifted my gauntlet to cast a spell to teleport me back to Trey’s location, but I could not see him. I cast it anyway. My gauntlet shattered into dust and my dark magic was depleted. My dark magic hands turned into human hands. I transformed into a human.
I knelt down on my knees and shouted, “TREY!!! YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!”
Now one can be able to hear me, I was alone. This world is dying, I do not want a world that was dying. I realized something from Trey’s fight. My memories are disappearing, who is Trey? What is Equestria? Who am I?
“Who am I?” I asked… I did not know.
Author's Note
I can explain what happen to Yert. Back when magic was real (In the myth of King Arthur and Excalibur) there was an abundance of it and it flourished. When people stopped believing, the magic stopped and never recovered. When Yert came in from Equestria to the human world. There was magic at all. There was nothing but destruction. So with that in mind he lost all his memories and powers and became a human without a name.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
We made it to Canterlot without any delays, but I was furious. Trey promised that I could fight with him to defeat Yert. I discussed it with Celestia while I was wiping away the tears. She told me it was for my own good, and that Yert could have used you as bait. Meaning I would of got captured and who know what would of happen to me.
Celestia opened the welded door and it looks like the spell ended it purpose like Trey said. The guards were exhausted because the speed spell makes them use all their physical strength. I told them they can have a vacation after today to lift their spirits. Jayden and Scarlet were led to the royal guest room. Then all a sudden my hoofs stopped in place, my mind was showing all Trey's memories.
I thought I have already controlled these memories, but I guess that I wrong. I walked to my room then my front hoofs collapsed and I hit my head on my door.
“Ouch… What is happening?” I said aloud.
I got myself up and I entered my room. I lie down on my bed and I close my eyes. Treys memories are fine until some of them were on fire. They were fading… I opened my eyes and got straight out of bed.
“Trey…” I said. I knew something is wrong.
I ran out of my room through the balcony. I began to fly through Canterlot, I needed to fly faster. I focus my magic on my wings to go faster than ever. A speed spell if I recall when I was in the Library with Trey.
I lifted my wings while I glided and did a gentle push and I was flying through the wind. I even able to make my own version of a rainboom, but it was blue and purple. Some ponies down below were looking up above and were cheering, but this is a matter I need to do.
As I kept getting closer more and more of Treys memories are disappearing from my mind. It is definitely not a good sign.
I got through the Griffin Kingdom border and was close to the royal palace. I scanned around to look for him. I was desperate, sad, and scared to see what I would find. Then my mind stabbed me and gave me the worse headache. Trey’s memories were almost gone. There was only the ones he was in Equestria.
The headache increased ten times and I lost balance and was crash landing towards the palace. I landed at the front garden; I lifted my head and looked around. There was Trey lying on a tree, with…. Four stab wounds.
I could not move I was paralyzed with fear, my eyes were streaming tears. ‘Move’ I thought.
“Trey! Trey can you hear me?!” I shouted.
I made myself get up, but fell again. The headache was still there; I shook my head and crawled towards Trey. Inch by inch, memories were almost depleted, except for one. The one that was lingering was Trey meeting me for the first time.
Finally I was close to him, “Trey? Trey can you please wake up….”
I put my ear on his chest, there was barely a heartbeat. I looked up again and his eyes were open. I could not say anything, I did not know what to say. My tears kept on running to his chest.
“I… Suppose this is not how we say good bye?” Trey finally said.
“Do not say anything, you need your strength. We need to get you out of here.” I said to him.
He did his usual smile, “You listen to me Luna… From the bottom of my heart, I love you. Even with my memories going hazy. I still remember you when we first met.” He then coughed out some blood to the side.
“Trey…” I said.
He lifted his hand and I put my cheek against his hand. His hand was cold and lifeless.
“Whatever happens to me; you can be strong for me?” he asked.
“Of course I can Trey, you have been my light for some time now. The way you helped me, cared for me, loved me. These
I leaned in for a kiss and he kiss me before I even got to his face. My emotions were everywhere. Love, fear, sorrow. Those three was painful for my heart. Then the last memory from my mind was dissolving.
“No, please no.” I said.
“Good bye Luna. I love you.” He said dropping his hand to the ground.
A light surrounded Trey making him disappear? What is happening? I blinked my eyes and his body was gone. No trace of blood, nothing. I could not believe it. He is gone… ‘No…’ I thought.
“NO!!!” I shouted out to the empty royal palace.
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It seems all Yerts doings disappeared. What I mean it all his dark magic was the source of his power. Chrysalis, who was invading the Crystal Empire, revived King Sombra. When Yert disappeared Sombra turned into dust, Chrysalis turned into a small filly. The changelings escaped because they could not follow a Queen that is not powerful than they. Tirek was sent back to Tartarus with Chrysalis.
Grogar disappeared, because Tirek created him from dark magic, connected to Yert. As for the negative Main six. They turned into dust, and they did not go back into their positive bodies. The main six are happy as ever not being held back with their negativity personalities. So they are just happy without any worry.
As for my sister and I we had to deal with rebuilding the Griffin Kingdom and the selected villages that King Jayden wanted to have rebuilt. The royal palace was built and the rest was done after three months. The volcano full of dark crystals we found after the incident, we sealed it up with a four Alicorn magic spell.
I asked King Jayden to build a Statue of Trey because he saved the Griffin Kingdom and Equestria. He made a bronze statue of him, and Equestria did too in Canterlot. A lot of ponies were confused what this creature is. Luckily I had some information from my own memories. Celestia gathered Canterlot and some ponies from Ponyville to make an announcement.
Celestia spoke, “Royal subjects. We faced an imminent doom, the Griffin Kingdom was being taken over by a creature named Yert. There was another creature named Trey. He was a human. I will admit that we kept him a secret from you all so we would not cause panic. He defeated Yert and saved us all. Right now Princess Cadance is doing this announcement as well to inform what happened when her kingdom was being taken over by Chrysalis. Chrysalis was defeated by Trey, but he got infected with dark magic. Then we separated Trey with the dark magic and it made Yert. My sister Luna will finish the rest.”
Celestia stepped back and signaled me to go forward. I looked nice in my royal armor, but Trey is gone, so what is the point of impressing everypony. It had been three months since he said goodbye, but I remembered what he said, ‘Be strong for me.’ I will keep your promise Trey. I glanced around the quiet ponies. Wanting to know what I was going to say.
Finally I spoke, “Trey was a dear friend, hero and lover. He loved this world of Equestria while he came from a different one. He had so much information to share with us, and I became interested with his intellect. What I am trying to say is if Yert continued to control the Griffin Kingdom, he would have controlled Equestria as well. So let’s give a round of applau-stoops to Trey.”
They all cheered and the cloth came off and showed Trey standing up smiling and waving. I walked back into the room and a there was a throbbing pain in my head. Then a memory came back from Trey. When we first met. Then like a flash memories of him was returning into my mind. ‘What could this mean?’ I thought.
Then I realized, “Trey?”
Author's Note
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Transformation I (First Draft)
A bright light surrounded me and engulfed my body. I closed my eyes to wait for death to take me to heaven. This has been one of the greatest experience coming to Equestria, loving Luna, defeating of Yert, and just being there just made me happy.
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When my eyes were still closed, a light was still going through my eyelids. I open them slightly to adjust the brightness. Everything was misty, I got my hand and tried to see if I can feel a halo. There was no feeling of a halo, just pure air. Speaking of that I was holding my breath because I died. I looked at my wounds they were all healed.
I gasped for air, “GAH!”
I looked around me and I was laying on a bench. I got to a sitting position and kept on looking. Everything was pure white to the distance I saw a desk with a Alicorn writing some papers. She looked familiar I just cannot put my finger on it.
I got myself up, I was a little wobbly at first, but I continued to walk towards the Alicorn. I got closer and the features were coming to me. Long brown mane, white fur and a quill and ink container as her cutie mark.
Wait a second, “Are you Laruen Faust?”
She stopped what she was doing and looked at me, “Why yes and I know who you are Trey.”
“Why would you know my name? I am unknown where I came from.” I said.
“Yes where you came from was Earth and you became quite popular in Equestria.” She said.
“I lost my memories, but I was able to recognize you… Why is that?” I asked.
She got up and walked around me, “There was only one memory that you kept when you died. That is when I re-mastered My Little Pony. When you defeated Yert your enemy, you sacrificed yourself to save my world that I created. For that I can give you a special award.”
I was shocked to hear this, I defeated an enemy? I saved her world that she created? I am getting confused… My face was expressionless. I did not know what to say. I searched my mind for any more memories, only two showed up. One was Lauren Faust and the other one was Luna.
Luna? Why is she in there? I tried harder to get anything out of it, but the only thing I got was when we first met. What did this mean? My heart is beating faster and faster when I think about her. I realized that I was letting tears stream though my cheek.
“I believe you love someone in Equestria. A certain Alicorn is it?” Faust asked.
“Yes. My heart is beating faster when I am think about her, but it is only one memory about her. At the same time I cannot love someone who is a pony… I am a human.” I said.
“That is why the award is going to be your choice of what you want.” She said.
“It can be anything?”
She nodded, “Anything.”
I walked up to her and gave her a hug, “I wish to be… a Alicorn."
“I believe I can do something about that. Before I continue, I just want to state something.” I let go so she continued, “The only reason I only make Alicorns female is because they know who to use magic in a good way. When a male becomes a Alicorn, he can use the power to become a tyrant. You have to promise me this, do not use your power for evil.” She explained.
“You have my word Miss Faust.” I said.
She walked back to her desk and got her pastel paint board. She looked at each color, red, pink, blue, purple, etc…
“What are your favorite colors?” she asked.
“Green and red.” I said.
“Alright red mane with some highlights on the tail and head. Green fur that will not be annoying to look at. Skinny Alicorn and quite tall. Some friendly eyes and some facial features and finished” She said.
“What about my cutie mark?” I asked
“It will appear when you found out what you did in Equestria.” She said.
I did not know what that meant, but I nodded. She got the painting and gave it to me. I held it in my arms and I looked at her and her horn glowed. A green and red light appeared to my left and right. They started to cycle around my body, it went faster and faster. Soon I was surrounded with green and red streams; the painting deteriorated and I was soon floating in the air.
“Tell Luna and Celestia I said, ‘You are doing a good job in keeping Equestria in check!’” she said.
“I will!” I shouted.
I was engulfed in a bright light again. I closed my eyes and all the memories are returning to me. Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Shining Armor, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, everypony. They go as far as I can remember when I entered Equestria.
My memories of me being a human still stayed and the next thing I knew; my hands were turning in hooves. My feet, body, transformed into a pony, I looked to my side. My wings grew and they were huge. I put my hoof on my face is had a muzzle. I felt the top of my head, I had a horn.
I was excited being a Alicorn for the first time! I cannot wait until Luna gets to see me. Wait. Will she even recognize me? ‘Of course she will! She loves me and I love her!’ I thought.
The light was disappearing and speaking of Luna I landed on top of her.
“Ugh!” I said.
“Ah!” she said.
I got up, but I was on my two legs and next I was on all fours. I tried to walk, but I was walking backwards and rammed into the closet.
“Hey! You get out of here this instant!” She shouted.
“Luna? Is that you?” I asked.
“Yes it is I, I do not know who you are.” She said.
“Don’t you remember me? It is I Trey.” I said.
“Yeah right. The Trey I know would not be a Unicorn.” She said.
‘She did not see my wings.’ I thought.
“Let me prove it to you. You are the magnificent Alicorn Luna, you are in charge of the night, once was nightmare moon, fell in love with a human. You have a scar when you fought Celestia. I defeated Yert, by sending you away. I know I broke that promise to let you fight alongside me, but it was for your own being. I am Trey the Alicorn.” I said.
I stepped out of the closet and I leaned against the door frame. She looked at my wings, facial hair and my mane. Luna walked closer and closer to me. It looks like she does not believe me at all. There we were face to face, she puts her horn on top of me.
“Then prove it to me…” she said.
Her horn glowed and she was looking through my memories. There was tears going down her cheeks, I lifted my hoof to her cheek and she leaned on my hoof.
“Trey?” she asked.
"Before I died; I said that I loved you from the bottom of my heart. This is the truth; nothing has changed. I met Lauren Faust and she gave me this transformation as a gift for me saving Equestria.” I said.
Without a word she leaned in for a kiss and I leaned forward as well. It was heartwarming, she let her tongue and I let it in. We were making out for about three minutes. Then Celestia came in through the doors.
“Sister I just have to tell you-” She stopped in mid-sentence and smirked.
“I suppose you do not love Trey anyway, just for this Pegasus?” she asked.
“Sister this is Trey and he is a Alicorn! He came back from meeting Lauren Faust and she transformed into what you see today.” She said.
“Hello Princess Troll- I mean Celestia. Nice to see you again. How is Discord?” I asked.
She looked surprised, “Did Lauren Faust said anything?”
“She just left a message for you too, ‘You are doing a great job keeping Equestria in check.’ That was about it.” I said.
Luna and Celestia were surprise about what I said to them, but they set it aside and looked at me.
“I suppose we do not have to keep you in secret anymore, now that you are a pony.” Celestia said.
“Yes let us celebrate your return.” Luna said.
All three of us have walked out of Luna’s room and they helped me out wobble out to the outside to meet the other ponies who were still gathered around.
‘Now I think that everything is going to be fine for now on. I got the love of my life, my new body. Nothing could possibly happen.’ I thought.
Author's Note
The Epilogue will be coming tonight. So what did you think of the encounter of Lauren Faust? Treys cutie mark will be in the next chapter.
Here is a question for you viewers: What did you think of Transformation? How do you feel about male Alicorns?
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Three years… That is a long time to think what the hell your life has been going since then. Ever since I showed up in Equestria; I have been a great influence of all ponies. When I was a human I was hidden away so I would not show panic. With that I am grateful, because I was able to meet Luna.
Sure my world is destroyed, but I guess I had to think it would recover without human civilization. Nature will just take its course one way or the other. I had to worry not about my world and focus on this one I am in. I will miss my family, but that will be made up with a ring.
Luna and I were married at Canterlot and had three foals; two fillies and one colt. We live in Canterlot now and they are brightening up our world. The only strange thing was the fillies were different pony’s altogether. One was a Unicorn, second an Earth Pony, and third was a Pegasus. We shook it off because there is not recorded history of a baby Alicorn being born. We named our children, Grace, Lily, and Noah.
Sometimes Luna and I would get into small fights, but that was about it. We take care of our children and teach them to be responsible. We are a happy family.
As for the main six, who watches our children while Luna and I go on a date, have been doing great since their fights with their opposites. They have covered spreading friendship across the land and they have contained all the evil coming out of the Everfree forest and anywhere else that would form or occur.
I have improved in education. I hit the books to get a better education. I want the technology to improve, and I am the only one who can help. I read all the books of steam engines and how to convert power to actual electricity power. I am going down a safe clean environment. Electricity and steam power tools not to pollute Equestria. What I have done is that I made a better stream train that can go even faster to the destinations. From Ponyville to Canterlot takes a day on the regular train, now with this new one, it can get there in a half of a day.
My cutie mark finally showed itself when I was training with Luna in the Orb. Yes, even though I transformed into a pony does not mean I know how to fight in Pony form. So I had to learn from scratch, but who cares I had many intercourse sessions with Luna and we tried many different scenarios of how to get an excuse to have sex. It was wonderful (Luna did not get pregnant when we were training the orb prevents pregnancy’s). Ahem… Anyway same calculations as before (about a year in a half), I was able to fight as an Alicorn.
Oh right, you wanted to hear about my cutie mark? It is a Yin Yang meaning I can talk to anyone who if good or evil to change their minds. This worked on Queen Chrysalis, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna and I talked to her and have agreed with go our separate ways. We made peace with the changelings, but the ponies in the towns are not persuaded. I have made countless announcements to prevent racism on the changelings. I had to recite Dr. Martin Luther King’s speech into a ponified version. So after a year they finally co-exist.
As for Tirek, we persuaded him to go back to his brother Scorpan so he can be taught the ways of friendship. In return we gave them supplies to their world when they needed it (Basic food and water).
Celestia and Discord have been quiet about their relationship and then boom. Celestia got pregnant with Discord’s child. I wonder what the baby is going to look like. If it looks like and has the same powers as Discord… Oh god, double the chaos.
My technology has been up and running and nothing bad has happened to them. So I put my electronics in a box to keep away. Besides I cannot use them with my hooves. I have more priorities for my family, my job as a negotiator, and for this world Equestria.
Author's Note
That's the end for Transformation, I hope you guys like the story overall.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
Landing in Ponyville w/ Luna with style!
After the party, I was not upset anymore. I said my good nights to Luna and the others, but I still want my existence to be known. So the next morning, I tip toed to the kitchen where Luna’s room is about 20 feet away. This is a big castle and the map in my room really did come in handy.
What stopped me in my tracks was a Celestia’s, “Ahem.”
I stood up strait and stayed still. It was in fact Celestia walking towards me, “We need to talk Trey.”
OK, at first I thought that Luna told Celestia and she did not get angry at her, but maybe at me… Great. She led me to the dining room and sat me down on a chair. Then she sat in another chair across from me and took a deep breath.
She sighed, “Trey could you tell me what you did to my sister?”
At that moment… I felt dirty. Again my brain slapped itself to order. ‘Stop it!’ I thought. “Ahem. I was at the Unisex bathroom and taking a bath… In my swimming trunks.” Hoping this will makes me look innocent, but I digress.
She then raised her right eye brow, I continued, “Then I saw Luna in the Hot Tub and at first I hid myself in embarrassment, but she walked to me and said could you wash my scar.”
She then looked relieved, “I understand; Luna came to me under your encouragement, and I am very grateful of you, but that is not the case.”
I was so confused, girls in my world was at first confusing, but Mares in My Little Pony is even more confusing. I just was sitting there dumbfounded, I do not know what she was going to say.
Then she broke the silence, “I think that Luna has a crush on you Trey!”
I shook my head, “COME AGAIN?!”
“This will be our secret, when she came foreword to me and told me about her scar. But that is not all, she could not stop talking about you!” She stated.
My head was turning red, “Luna likes me?” Celestia nodded, fireworks were exploding in my head. I was surprised, shocked and all the other emotions I rather not say!
But then Celestia got to a more serious tone, “As much as I like this,” I stopped thinking about Luna and was at Celestia’s Attention, “Now that I know how much she likes you, I must tell you this. If you hurt my sister or even make her upset on purpose, by my name as guardian of Equestria I will banish you.”
Not my heart dropped, my color of my face flushed. This was a very different Celestia from the show. I was shaking, and I knew that she really meant what she said.
“Well, I plan to stay with Luna so…” I said kindheartedly.
Celestia smiled, “Good, you may go now.”
I walked away thinking about this theory from the internet. What happens when the show continues and Celestia really becomes Trollestia or even worse… Molestia. I just shuddered in the thought of it.
I shook my head and decided to head to Luna’s room. When I went to her door, a moment from the anime I watched ‘Rule one: Always, ALWAYS knock first before entering a room.’
I knocked on the door and I heard Luna respond, “Come in.”
I opened the door, and closed it behind me. Luna was laying in her bed reading a book. I walked to the side of her bed and sat down. It took a few minutes before Luna with her levitation, dog-earing the page and put down her book.
She looked at me and was startled, “T-Trey, you scared me.”
I grinned, “I see you have been getting in neck deep in books.”
She laughed, “Well being banished to the moon for a thousand years really sets you back. So I am here catching up on my history. This is the last book.”
I gazed into her eyes and she was then blushing, “Why do you always get me like this Trey? Do you need something?”
I am now sure that Luna has in fact a crush on me. I decided to speak, “Would you like to go on an adventure to Ponyville?”
She had a face saying, ‘Are you serious?’ “What if somebody catches us leaving the castle?”
I made an evil smirk, “Let’s go to the library of spell, where Twilight used a Time spell, to get and invisibility cloak for the day.”
“That is brilliant! But how do you suppose we go to Ponyville? By train or walk?” She asked.
I made a face saying, ‘Really?’ “Could you just fly us to Ponyville and if you cannot I can find a feather weight spell.”
I got up and so she did without a word, I opened the door and said, “Follow my lead.” She nodded.
We walked casually to the Library of spell and Luna unlocked the gate with her magic. Then she closed it behind us. We looked around, but to be honest, the spells we were looking for was on the table in the middle. I saw a note and it was from Celestia:
Dear Trey,
Treat my sister well, these spells will help you. Also I will have to tell you that the castle does indeed talk. I can hear things left and right, so secret things will not go by. Have fun you two!
Luna hunched over my shoulder, “Well it seems my sister doesn't mind.”
I blushed a little, I looked at the spell and it looked like gibberish. (What can you expect the thing to be English?) I hand it to Luna and she levitated the scroll, read it over.
“Ah, this will be a jiffy, do you want to go first?” Luna asked.
I lifted my shoulders and said, “Hit me!”
Her horn was glowing and then a zap hit me body. I felt lighter, I jumped and it was slow coming down.
“Now all you got to do is say what weight you want to be and your become it.” Luna explained.
Alright now I have to think of a reasonable weight to ride Luna, “What is the max weight that you can handle?”
“Well the max I can handle is about 30 pounds.” Luna answered looking at the next spell.
“OK zap me with the invisibility spell and I will say my weight.” I said thinking. Her horn was glowing and zapped at my body.
“I’ll be ten pounds.” I said and then suddenly I felt super light.
Luna then zapped herself with the spell and I saw she was very light blue. Maybe it represents us being invisible. I walked to the window and it was not showing me my refection. I opened the window and the breeze came out, it was spring time air. I walked to Luna’s side and was hesitant.
Luna assured me, “Go ahead, I do not bite. Just make sure you do not kick my wings as much.”
I nodded, “I just never flew on a Alicorn before, let alone a horse.” Luna giggled.
I arched my legs on Luna’s back, and held on to her chest. Her wings expand and she ran to the window and jumped through the window.
“WOOOOOOOAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!” I shouted.
We were falling down the cliff of Canterlot. I held on to Luna’s chest and she released her wings. In a few seconds we were flying, the whoosh of her wings was sparkling in the sunlight. Which would blind anypony down there, but I did not care.
“Am I too heavy for you?” I asked, sorry I had to ask to make sure.
Luna laughed, “No, otherwise we would be free falling to the ground silly.”
We were flying through Ponyville and we decided to land about ten feet away. We got taking off taken care of, but landing was another story. We crashed in a bush, no harm, but seriously need to get landing right the next time.
But then I saw the Cutie Mark Crusaders who over heard me. “Who’s there?” It was Apple Bloom who said that.
“I can sense you with my sensing magic Twilight taught me.” It was Sweetie Belle.
“Who are you? Why are you invisible?” It was Scootaloo.
Luna looked at me and said, “Alright you caught us, just do not speak to anyone about this.”
The crusaders were silent for a while; they huddled up and were talking. Then they agreed on something.
Apple Bloom said, “We will not tell anyone, but you have to come to our tree-house and answer some questions.”
Author's Note
Uh Oh, Busted! What is going to happen to these soon to be lovers? Tune in next time on Transformation.
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Transformation I (First Draft)
What a wonderful place in California
My name is Trey, I am 17 years old, and I was born in Long beach California. I live with my mom, dad and little sister Clover at Los Angeles. I am 6’5 tall, little chubby here and there; I am ginger, which my ancestors had so I am pretty special in my family. When my parents and teachers call me ‘special’ I mean I am ahead of my class; I am a bookworm, nerd, geek, call me what you like; I am just smart. My favorite things to do in life are to keep my body in shape (Even though I love video games more, I have to maintain my body); watch TV such as anime and my little pony.
What you may ask? My little pony? A show that is made for little girls? Well my school, Long Beach High School, doesn't think so. Yes, you heard me right, my whole entire school totally accepts people who live my little pony. Before the show came to the school, it was boring and lifeless. Now when the show came around, the school burst with color. Posters everywhere of different ponies and O.C.’s (Original Characters). Even the teachers took the lessons in the show and used it for special lessons. The students loved it and so did the teachers. The school was happy when the show started on 2012.
Now in 2014 the school is still kicking with life. Sports integrated the games from the show and brought it to the playing field. Lots and I mean LOTS of students formed their own clubs like the Twilight Fan Club, Derpy Fan Club and so on. The clubs around 12 of them, compete against each other in the Long Pony Beach Games. I met a lot of extraordinary people, old, young and middle aged. It was a great time.
Clover loves my little pony as well, she makes a lot of clay pony figurines. When she finishes it I usually put it up on my shelf of other clay made items. When I mean a lot of art, I mean painting canvases hanged on the walls, sculptures made in the wall. (A few examples would be Discord opening a portal to Equestria, the main six fighting the changelings in a cave.) Even some of the press has seen this and she sold some of her art work for money.
My parents knew that Clover had a gift, but to this extent, a 12 year old girl who makes extraordinary art work and from my little pony no less. The one piece of artwork that she made for me was a pendant that has Celestia’s sun, Luna’s moon, Cadance’s crystal heart over lapping one another and Twilight’s pink star on top of them. When she gave that to me, I loved it and I put it in my room on my desk.
This is a happy town, school and community to be in nothing could ever change it. When morning came around, I got up, ate breakfast, and watched a re-run MLP: FiM episode of season four called Trade Ya. Then someone knocks on the door, I think that it’s the mail, so I paused the episode, walked to the door and opened it.
There was a mail man, “Hi are you Trey?” I shook my head, he went on, “Package for you. He handed a small rectangular packaged. I signed the papers telling that I have the package and went back inside. I opened the packaged, unwillingly, and inside was a DVD in a case and a letter. It said, Arizona State University, Phoenix Arizona. I grab the DVD, put aside the MLP episode and put it in the Blu-ray player.
I pressed play, the screen was white and there was a man in the middle, looking very gentlemen like in a nice expensive looking suit. He was an elderly looking man, maybe in his 60’s. Then he spoke, “Hello my name is Mr. Watson, I am the founder of Arizona State University. I am speaking to you to say,” he claps his hands and continues, “Congratulations on passing the SAT’s and ACT’s with the highest perfect score. We are here to tell you that you earned a free eight year scholarship for Technology and a free accommodations such as free dorm room with a roommate of your choice, free breakfast, lunches, dinners, etc…” Watson shows a map on the screen of the University, “We’ve informed your parents and told them not to tell them the news until we told you. We have set up your room in this facility, Room 102.”
I sat back for a moment, I felt dumbfounded, I was agreed to a good University, awesome scholarship, free accommodations and the room is 15 feet away from the female dormitory. I shouted in glee and celebrated with joy. When my parents came home with my sister they brought back my favorite food, Pizza, especially combination. We celebrated my success with them and the phone rang. My parents were informed that I had to leave the next day, the reason was because the semester is coming in about two weeks from today. It would be a great idea for me to settle into the dorm, before the semester overwhelms me.
I agreed and I packed my stuff, clothing in a suit case and a carry on. The carry on was a backpack, it held, a laptop, a 2DS (The 3D was overrated and expense), an external hard drive, a solar charger, my phone, camera, a set of clothes that last for a half of a week, and my Yu-Gi-Oh! Cards. When I was done a limo, yes, a limo came down into my neighborhood and was ready to pick me up to go to the university.
I was excited, when I was about to leave, my sister stopped me. “You almost forgot my pendant Trey!”
She held out the pendant, and grabbed it, “I’m sorry, sis, I will hold on to it for now on.” I put the pendant around my neck; mom gave me a hug, and dad gave me a handshake.
“Good luck son, well cheer you on.” My mom started to cry.
Mom hugged my sister and said, “We’ll be here if you want to visit.”
I waved, went inside the limo and it was like the movies. A TV, radio, internet connection, soda, food and a bed that would open, hinting me that it’s going to be a long ride. The driver announced that were going to the University and I waved again to my parents, they waived back. From that point on I did not know what was happening from across the ocean.
Author's Note
This is the beginning of the end of Trey's life, because nature decides to do something more devastating. Hope you like it, more will be coming, and suggest what I should add. Also thanks for reading my first chapter.
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