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by AppuhCobbler
With Benson on holiday, Mordecai and Rigby ruin the park... and inviting some unexpected guests.

What happens when Benson goes on a well-deserved holiday and leaves it up to Rigby and Mordecai to look after the park? Chaos, you dodo. However, on one certain day, the two challenge Muscle Man and High Five Ghost for the TV, making a bet that will, in typical fashion, lead to supernatural elements. Will Mordecai and Rigby be able to return the park to normal before Benson arrives or will it take more than just them?

Author's Request: I would greatly appreciate it if you can critque my writing style. This is my first fan fic since… ever, and I have three ambitious stories that I want to write up in the future (currently in the drawing boards). Any criticism is welcome as I want to improve my writing skills (i.e. is there not enough description? Is there too much dialogue/banter? Is it confusing to follow)

Thank you

Everyone
Incomplete
Alternate Universe
Comedy
Crossover
Random
 

20813 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
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50 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1601
  2. Good Morning, My Little Ponies 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    676
  3. Chapter 3 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1004
  4. A short lived Golden Age 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    477
  5. Celestia's Trial 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1437
  6. Blood Diamond 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    926
  7. Villains 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1183
  8. Heroes 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    657
  9. Wars 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1053
  10. Stalliongrad 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    229
  11. Age 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    80
  12. Characters to Follow 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    82
  13. Characters from the Sprawl 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    129
  14. Flip Flop Company/School ponies 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    562
  15. Goalpost 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    726
  16. Equipment 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    99
  17. Flip Flop Company Stories 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    164
  18. Goalpost and Derpy 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    24
  19. Armies 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    110
  20. Ending 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    518
  21. Malestare and Twilight 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    39
  22. Art of the Uniform 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    5
  23. Roles & Problems they face 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    145
  24. Episode or Conflict Idea for Twilight 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    46
  25. Equestria vs. Roam 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2024
  26. Current Episodes 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1413
  27. Season One 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    214
  28. Crysis, the First Encounter 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    264
  29. S03: We Hold the Line 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1670
  30. Oddball 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    10
  31. S04: Coming to Terms 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    180
  32. S04 or S05 (multiple episodes MAYBE in the beginning): Ziro's Final Push or MAYBE Battle of Ponyville 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    755
  33. S05: Spring Offensives 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    129
  34. S02: Salvation at Seaddle 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    149
  35. Pedestal: Characters 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    105
  36. S03+: Pinkie Episode 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    97
  37. Flip Flop Company Intro 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    82
  38. S04+: Twitchy Twitch 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    71
  39. S06: Chrysalis' control over dragons 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    67
  40. Recap Characters 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    262
  41. S05+: Goalpost and Derpy 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    90
  42. Order of Battle 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    78
  43. S06: Endgame 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    60
  44. Griffons join Roamans because 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    60
  45. S07 Prison Break 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    45
  46. Hammer & Sickle 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    153
  47. S05 Finale: Twilight kills 'Celestia' 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    382
  48. S06: The Unholy Alliance 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    264
  49. S06 E01 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    193
  50. Flutterstare 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    24