appleacj loves me

by AppuhCobbler

First published

What happens when Benson goes on a well-deserved holiday and leaves it up to Rigby and Mordecai to look after the park? Chaos, you dodo. However, on one certain day, the two challenge Muscle Man and High Five Ghost for the TV, making a bet that will, in typical fashion, lead to supernatural elements. Will Mordecai and Rigby be able to return the park to normal before Benson arrives or will it take more than just them?

Author's Request: I would greatly appreciate it if you can critque my writing style. This is my first fan fic since… ever, and I have three ambitious stories that I want to write up in the future (currently in the drawing boards). Any criticism is welcome as I want to improve my writing skills (i.e. is there not enough description? Is there too much dialogue/banter? Is it confusing to follow)

Thank you