Chapters [DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 1 - One Tarterus of a introduction
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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The woman was shaking awake when she noticed the nice warmth all around her. Someone or something was shaking her hard while heating up her confinement.
Perhaps she was being rescued from the remains of the glass panel that had been falling down on her? How she survived this at all, was far beyond her imagination.
A mighty collision she more heared than it was feeled by her stopped all the shaking.
When after several minutes nothing happened, did she started to panic.
To her surprise, her prison begins to cracked slowly, when she tried to escape again. With light shining through the cracks of her prison and the liquid slowly draining away.
Her head eventually popped out of whatever held her in place. When she had obtained freedom, did she notice how she was inside a small crater. Climbing out with her old body would be a pain in the ass.
When she looked around herself, did she see her former prison. It looked like a stone like egg.
Then she noticed something blocking part of her vision, it was purple and it looked like a heavy breathing dog snout or something similar... with scales.
Impossible as it seems was she was freezing in place, when she tried to take the object in her face away with her... CLAWS?
Holy mother of all that is something important, her hands are clawed! No skin on them, but rather snake-like scales. She declined the possibility that she was really seeing what was infront of her.
She must really have suffered head trauma from the glass panel falling on her as well using her head to break free of the... Egg?
Impossible, what was going on?
She checked out her body as much she could, her neck was ridiculous flexible and when she feel her tail up and down, did she notice the muscles in them. She could move it shortly after, but she was very concerned about injuries she might sustain if she accidently moved it her way.
Well it wasn't literally bloody, yet.
Something inside her mind started to calm her down. It was like a soundless voices she just know where there, but something hold them of from actually hearing them.
Despite one of them seeming to humming her a lullaby of sorts and her stress and confusion started to melt away from it, like ice in a child's ice cream cone.
Next was a different voice in her mind beckoning her to climb out. She followed the voiceless suggestion and found her claws to be excellent tools in climbing out of the crater.
She was in a forest full of Apple Trees, some of them apparently had been set on fire by something and the ground around the crater was partially burned clean down to the earth or stone? It was hard to describe how the ground looked like.
The lullaby to keep her calm continued to contain the female's anxiety and the other voice in her mind told of knowledge that sounded to be a matter of fact, rather than a suggestion.
Magic? Magic was real? What was going on?
But wherever she was, she apparently had someone watching over her. Her personal guardian angels perhaps?
Apparently did both voices chuckled at her suggestion, despite not vocal voicing it.
She was taken out of her musings when something was heard to produce a low growl behind her. The dragon hatchling spinning around on her four legs managed on instincts and substituted muscle memories thanks to her roommates to move rather swiftly.
Would the voice support end, would she be stumbling around like a newborn without a doubt.
While one voice helped her move smoothly, did the other voice let her move in some kind of autopilot. She know she could override it anytime she wanted, but she trusted her guardian angels to guide her.
Not all to sudden three Timberwolves jumped out of the cover of still smoking trees.
Her breathing was clear despite all the smoke in the area. The wooden wolves in front of her had slightly to fight with coughing though.
The ones on the sides spread out flanking her, cutting off line of sight as well they managed.
Her field of view was a lot bigger than before, even with the blind spot in front below her, a well compensated trade.
When the dragon hatchling bad luck had her potencial escape blocked. But they in turn didn't move to attack while the original middle one that was the only one approaching her alone.
She or rather the voices in her head guiding her body unlike her own wishes to walk away to denied that instinct. Her body was slowly walk instead of backwards as her human mind suggested, instead it was actually slowly walking towards its deadly aggressor.
The wooden wolf one of the voices called a Timberwolf, stopped advancing and rather slowly backed away while growling.
One of the two voices in her mind whispered and demanded her to take a deep breath through her nose, hold it and release it in force as if to shout but not to speak, rather than exhaling with all the force her lung would allow.
All three minds in her body flinched slightly, when a silent but insistent roar with a green fireball exited her mouth.
The Timberwolf tried to back away from the vibrant forest colored flame, but found itself bumping into a tree.
The Timberwolf now set on magical fire cried its own agony into the sky, before falling to ash.
When she turned around, another Timberwolf was almost snout to snout with her. One of the voices used her tail when she backflipped with all her might backwards.
The Timberwolf, unfortunately already committed to attack in a jump to catch his prey by surprise, was cleavaged cleanly in two pieces.
The three voices were confident to now manage the last Predator. Since their teamwork seemed to have trump this beasts hunting instinctual behavior with improvised combat prowess and she felt something rising from her throat.
A mighty cute roar was coming out of her throat.
If not for her displayed deadly attacks on its pack members, would the Timberwolf have fallen to pieces in laughter. It sounded like a Kitten was roaring because it scared itself after farting for the first time from indigestion.
After the embarrassing failure and a mental facepalm did she tried again.
She actually only expected a faster build up of air and exhaling of fire. Instead did she exhaled a dark lightning bolt that cracked with unstable electricity.
The Timberwolf exploded on impact and its fragmented body pelted the dragon hatchling. It's scales had not yet fully hardened and it feel like tiny ice balls showered her with slightly painful hits.
After the voices had used the hatchling body to turn slowly twice in place and scanned the area further for threats, did the hatchling body from overuse of physical and magical strength started to lower to the ground.
The voices under protest had lost their control of the body and while still there was unable to assist in anything but singing her a lullaby in unison to keep her troubled human mind occupied until they guided her failing body to sleep.
Not one of the three minds of the out cold body of the hatchling was able to register the ponies coming to the old ponies and by extension her young bodies aid.
"Honey over here." A pony stallion in enchanted leather armor called over a mare in the same themed and enchanted leather armor was heard echoing over the still in smoke fogged Orchard.
The two figures were running towards the unharmed, but totally exhausted and passing out elderly mare and to their surprise a female dragon hatchling.
The Apple family was out in the field of their Orchard in the fields closest to the Everfree Forest, when a pack of 13 Timberwolfs had stormed them.
Instead of surrounding them as expected, the Timberwolfs holded 4 by 3 formation with the Alpha Timberwolf at the front slightly in front of his pack.
The Ponies of the Apple forest had not left enough of the magic rainbow apples behind for them to feed on in their opinion even if it was slightly more than last year's portion.
The Apple family was unprepared for this attack, magical wards should have warned them if anything would go through or above the fence that are enchanted for alarms to sound all over the orchard.
Unfortunately did no one expected the Timberwolves to generously dig under the fence poles that already reached two meters depth.
A stallion the father of the family, a mare the mother of the family, a elderly mare the Grandmother of the stallion and a pair of foals between the legs of the parents. They all know that fleeing as not an option.
Under tears did the elder walked over to the parents of the foals and give them a nuzzled goodbye.
Nature was unforgiving, the ones in it in contrast had empathy unlike many expected them to show and practice it.
Before the old light green mare with silver mane and tail could walk over to her last walking while her family was wailing for her fate to be changed by any creatures miracle, did loud *bang* take every creatures attention towards the sky.
As if their call for divine intervention was heared and answered did a massive fireball come from very high in the sky towards them.
The Timberwolves were uncertain if this was a horned Prey trick or not.
What ever trick this was, they would not fall for it.
The Timberwolfs as barked by the Alpha keep formation and ready themself for a counter attack.
Noone expected the fireball to be actually a high velocity dragon egg that got *yeeted* by Nightmare Stellar Moon and Luna towards the planet.
When the burning egg impacted in the middle of the pack was every Timberwolf directly surrounding the impact zone instantly disintegrated to ash.
The three remaining Timberwolves and all the ponies got thrown to the ground through the shockwave.
The remaining Timberwolfs recovered and retreated to observe the situation.
Their pack was destroyed. They would need at best one hole day and night to recovering from becoming ash, three days and nights if they wanted to return to half their total strength individually.
Their Alpha would not be amused about this outcome after having renewed itself.
The Timberwolfs retreated, but keep the ponies in view, in case they charged due to the turn of events. The adults take the foals and fleeing the Apple Forest to their wooden den.
The elder lay unmoving in the grass. If it was dead or unconscious was not too important.
After some time did a wingless purple not pony came out of the hole in the ground.
Author's Note
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[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 2 - Of Apples and science of Dragons 1/2
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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The young dragoness awakened after a while and was very pleasantly surprised to be still alive and in good condition beyond an immense thirsting for water. She was feeling as if she had been partying through a night full of alcohol and had a cotton mouth feeling, but otherwise despite what she had been through was in pretty good shape.
It was strange to no longer be in constant pain of her joints for example due to her old body breaking down a little more with every passing year.
Once she discovered what was going on in this bloody area she found herself in, would she try finding out what happend overall.
Once more, one of the voices started to sing her a lullaby and her anxiety and sorrows born from insecurities melted away.
One of the voices in her mind seems to translate their spoken words with a delay and further explaining her with memories imposed on her conscious mind, rather than words about what happened to her since she apparently had hatched from her egg.
In short:
No one of the three know what happened after they collapse from exhaustion themselves by using magic to attack and even magically extend the range of her tail blade to bloody half one of the Timberwolves in the middle throughout its body length.
Anyway... They would listen to the horses. Or rather ponies as the soundless voices in her head called them.
"How is the little dragon doctor? That little thing somehow destroyed 10-13 Timberwolves, yet I fear she might have paid greatly for her heroic deed."
She noticed that she was actually too tired to open both her eyes all the way. Further did her environment was seemingly ridiculous bright at the moment. The voices nudged her mentally to continue to listen to the ponies.
"This hatchling seems to be suffering from physical and magical exhaustion. The physical one is not really surprising seeing how she had to fight for her life, but her magical fatigue seems to come from overuse of magical abilities, amazing how a hatchling obviously has instinctual understanding of its own magic abilities despite her just having hatched and not even reached her scale drying phase.
I guess you were right that she probably destroyed more than the one Timberwolf that you reported as cut in two pieces by her tail weapon, as unlikely as it seem to be.
This hatchling shows how pure survival instinct can make even a newly hatched dragon a threat to anyone dumb or desperate enough to attack it, even if its unguarded.
"So what species of dragon is she?
Another voice answered in a relaxed pace:
The doctor had apparently studied many other dragon species during his career, but this might be a new species all together.
A field of studies that was very strictly controlled and use outside authorities permitted magic caster without license was punished with either removal of one's magic abilities or lifetime imprisonment in Tartarus, if one would not go through mental reconditioned reformation by well trained and regulated mind menders.
As a doctor and government employee he was required by law to send a letter to canterlot and inform the Princess about this.
The ponies started uneasy to shift on there hooves for a while, until their conversation continued.
"So what is her dietary needs doctor?"
"I scanned her and she is an omnivore with additional capacity for mineral consumption requirements. Therefore fairly common in that regard."
To hear that her dietary needs were common was good. While not poor by any means, would a specialized diet always cost more than a common one. The Apple familie was loaded, but not Gem feeding a dragon regularly as main diat kind of loaded.
While Thestral, Pegasus and Griffons are the reason many meats got sold regularly with fish being the cheapest thanks to trade with Seaquestria fish markets on shores in the market with first grade preservation spells keeping even easy spoiling fish fresh up to a year, so they don't have to worry about the omnivore part of the dietary needs.
"The mineral portion would easily be sponsored by the crown for researchIng this newly discovered species of dragon kind."
After a few careful stretches was the dragon feeling more awake and alert. She carefully opened her eyes, to spare her the glare of the sun.
She was in a bed with a see-through blanket over most of her body, then she looked around to see three stallions and two mares talking to each other.
One of the stallions had a beige colored fur coat, he also wore glasses and a doctor's coat then she spotted higher on his skull a horn coming out of his head.
The second stallion had a stetson hat with a red mane, light grayish olive coat, emerald eyes, and his cutie mark was an apple with a star in it.
The third and last stallion had for some reason a nurse cap on his head. His fur coat and hair color was as plane as his environment. If not for the nurse cap he might have looked like a hospital camelion while hiding.
One of the mares had her mane done in a ponytail, pale gamboge fur, her mane color was normal gamboge, and her eyes were turquoise colored.
While the other was also a nurse, but she moved out of her field of vision to describe her.
They kept talking about a lot of interesting things related to her, but the hatchling throat was too dry for her to focus on the conversation. So one of the voices takes control of her tail and wiggle it around as to get them to look towards her. It worked and a glass of water on the nightstand was levitated to the little dragon, it was emptied surprisingly fast.
The water was so refreshing that the voices wondered if it was really just unaltered water.
The dragon hatchling made a visible attempt to move forward, but collapsed on the bed where it tried to stand up. As it tried to stand again, it seemed to be pushed down very gently by a sparkling light surrounding it.
One of the mares responded to the hatchling wanting to stand up. The mare picked up another glass of water with her hoof. She then let the dragon drink it as well and started to pet the dragon's head.
Everypony took deep breaths as one of the mares set the glass down and the hatchling was fast asleep.
"It seems she got spooked from my scan, she is only a day old if the analysis earlier about the egg state is to be believed. But everything seems to line up perfectly to reach this conclusion. So it is more than understandable that the hatchling must be absolutely wiped after that much activity."
"So how do we take care of a baby dragon?" Asked the one mare.
"You don't." Responded the stallion nurse.
"A dragon upbringing depends on the species and since he is unknown for now, we will have to wait for Canterlot specialists to come here to examine him so we do what we can for her now just more tailored to the hatchlings needs." The doctor said as his horn glowed blue and so did his glasses as they adjusted themselves as he left the hospital's open viewing examination room.
The Apple family would return later, not just to visit Granny Smith. While Granny Smith had been knocked out during the eggs impact, was she mostly there on her own insisting.
Once the doctor had excused himself to retire for the day, Granny Smith a bit stiff legged entered the examination/observation room. Once the guard see the pony elder to lay down besides the dragon hatchling and started lovingly hugging it before falling asleep next to it.
The guards see nothing wrong with this and with a small smile on their lips continued to stand silent guard next to the entry double door.
Later the same day, did the hatchling awakened to the feeling of someone cuddling next to it. It was a very comfortable feeling to have someone next to her on the bed.
When she looked around and see the ponies in light green coat fur color protectively snuggling her, did the memories of earlier in the day slowly returned.
Currently only one of the voices in her mind was present. It seemed to watch in amusement how the former egg inhabitant had made a cuddle buddy in her sleep.
As the mare let out a cute yawn, did the hatchling escaped a audible "dawww".
The little dragon still feeling the strain of the fight hours ago cuddle up to the mare, who in her sleep instinctually tighten her loving grip on her self elected charge.
Nurses, doctors and changing guard shifts all dawww silently on this diabetic inducing cute display of Harmony and wholesome snuggling.
The next morning did the specialists arrived. To everyponys surprise was Princess Celestia with them.
The Princess of the sun had with four ponies following her the best experts in dragon knowledge Equestria currently had in hooves with her.
One knows all dragon strains by name and had the in and out about their behavior in his doctor thesis, another knows everything they ever learned about the different types of breath attacks and natural occurring weapons and defenses that grow in or on dragons.
Another had knowledge about all changes that had been known to ponykind occurred by volunteering or being forced into during times of war and otherwise.
The last specialist was a dragon breeder, the old stallion understands animals thanks to his cutie mark and is known to communicate with even the most difficult to work with predators. Hydras, Manticores, Parasprites or even Breezees!
This team of experts would help determine the capabilities and abilities of the hatchling. Further its ideal upbringing and who to select to try to domestically tame this dragon.
Should all this fail, would she take the burden upon herself to end this poor victim of some creatures experiments, as to end its ~~threat~~ suffering from potential mutations making it life one of suffering.
They all looked like cliche scientists with their lab coats and security googles and hoove covers.
The three mares and one stallion surrounded the currently docile dragon laying on the back of a elderly pony mare. Two of the mares had horns running scans on the body of the dragon.
The third mare was a Thestral bicorn examination currently its body only with its eyes as to not interfere with the already running scans of the other horned colleges and the stallion was an earth pony that seemed to switch his gaze between the hatchling laying absolutely relaxed on the mare's back.
The two unicorns walked around the little exotic dragon hatchling and examined its body in detail, especially the tail got attention.
"Never seen a tail like this before." One of them said while the other nodded in confirmation.
They all started writing down noteworthy details, further did the stallion noted down that the hatchling was already imprinted towards the scent and body warmth of the elder mare. Otherwise it would not be so relaxed, the parents would never allow touching it otherwise. This instinctual knowledge keeps the hatchling at peace.
Celestia herself started writing down notes on her own.
The little dragon hatchling tail was easy to move around, so she started wiggling it around lazily out of boredom.
When one of the doctors touched it carefully with a hoove did it feel blunt.
The stallion of the group of scientists explained that this tail weapon was a 'cut through will' kind of weapon. In easy words: "It only cuts, when the owner desired it"
The stallion carefully coaxing opened the younglings mouth, discovering it had no visible teeth. When he used a dragon meat treat especially made for feeding younger dragons for researching purposes, did its teeth shoot out the gums to rip the treat apart.
When he inspected the tongue of the Dragon did he see a heat resistant pattern on them.
"She seems to be a fire breather." The earth stallion said, everypony takes that into their notes.
When the bicorn checked the found results of the earth pony researcher, did she accidentally rubbed the hatchling snoot tip with her hoof frog.
The Princess noticed the change of expression in the dragon eyes, she guessed it had an urge to sneeze.
"Everypony move out of the way, she is going to sneeze!" With the exception of Granny Smith, did everyone moved away so as to not stay in the path of the grimacing dragon coming blow.
A green firestream escaped the dragon.
When she checked the enchanted ground against fire and water damage, did she found the enchantments damaged by the magical dragon fire.
The Sun princess found this unnerving, hospitals used the second highest enchantment class available to all civilian medical facilities.
"As you deduced from its mouth attributes, she is a fire breather." The bicorn mare said to the earth pony stallion.
The stallion nodded respectfully to his horned colleague and told them about his hunch that this dragon had an alternative breath attack. But that it had to be determined later due to the Dragon younglings low Mana levels.
"One of the rare dragons with two different breath attacks than." Ask the Princess of the Sun.
After many minor but not less important measurements and its vital data having been recorded for two hours and written it all down, did the examination was mostly finished...
Now comes the hard part. As the earth pony stallion named 'Silver Tongue' suggested, did they tested the progress of how much the dragon hatchling had imprinted on the elderly mare of the Apple clan.
For this do they levitated the dragon from the elders back. Its reaction was minor, it only looked repeatedly around itself and fixed its presumed mother occasionally with a questionable look.
When it got levitated in different heights around the room did it get distracted by it enough to no longer seeking its mother out, while it was 'played with'.
When the ponies with exception of the light green elderly mare left the room while levitating the hatchling with them, did it start to chirp for its mother. After two minutes without her mother finding it, did it repeatedly chirped and called for its mother.
Not 5 minutes after they had been separated did the hatchling get scared enough as to use its tail weapon. When it hit one of the walls did it cut through the enchanted fire and water resistant wall like a hot butter knife through already melting butter.
Celestia noticed again how minor sparks got emanated from the afflicted areas around the attack. Once more did the enchantments show damage to them near the hit area.
On Silver Tongue insisting did the test was aborted and the hatchling was levitated back into the room and towards its 'mothers' embrace.
This made it clear that removing the hatchling from the mare was only going to cause it to get traumatized.
When the Princess ask for elaboration did Silver Tongue put it simply: "Remove the dragon hatchling from its presumably birthmother and it will never be as docile as during the examination again!"
After a short contemplation did the Princess decree the Apple clan to be responsible for the upbringing of the dragon with royal support of financial lost interests due to duty for the crown and a security force for the ~~hatchling observation~~ Apple family safety after this Timberwolf attack. They are after all royal suppliers of the Canterlot nobility and royal family so Celestia argued.
The scientists/ researchers concluded:
With that the Princess and her herd of eggheads left the hospital and returned via chariot to Canterlot.
Meanwhile would the Apple family spending more time with the dragon hatchling until it imprinted towards them on Silver Tongues recommendations.
Author's Note
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[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 4 - Welcome to the Clan Welp, you are a Apple now... 1/3
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Kinda funny mused the voices in their shared head space, noone even tried to name the dragoness yet.
She herself had yet to think about what name she wanted for herself, but she actually didn't even know how she looked like in full body view.
The Apple elders expected more ponies to come by over the next days, but outside occasional health checks and minor medical scanning did only the feeding of the dragon caused the occasional new ponies to visit the newest member of the Apple family in their appointed hospital observatory room.
The Apple family members argued about giving her a name, but they had no idea what a traditional dragon name sounded like.
So they keep the nameless little dragon unnamed and referred to her as
Other than that, it was a surprisingly mellow week of cuddling and nuzzeling the dragon welp on Silver Tongues recommendations how to further their bonding.
Celestia had organized helpers for the farm to keep it running smoothly in the absence of the Farm ponies, while everypony usually working the farm was on the princess decree made sure that the hatchling imprinted on them as their family, so she could be easily integrated into the pony folks community.
Additional military forces build a extending to the guard barracks and filled it ranks with experienced guard ponies, it also helped sharpening the awareness of the usually bored village guardsponies now that it got the princess personal guards.
Ponyville certainly seem to get a lot of attention from the princess of the sun and some nobel family's tried to find out what was so important that a small village got royal guard support.
When Celestia told them in day court how Timberwolfs attacked the 'entire Apple family' living in Ponyville that was caring for the Apple orchard that provided all of Canterlot with apples products, did everypony agreed that royal guard had to guarantee that Canterlot number one supplier of Equestrias apples and only zap jam apple producers had to be protected.
The more known nobels would never allowed any creature to threatening their favorit Applecider producers.
To the royal princess surprise did the 'rich clan' with its head of house 'Filthy Rich' and his new fiance 'Spoiled Milk' moved to Ponyville after buying a vacant place, what im turn would be Ponyville first and only Villa ever constructed until than.
That they would mostly provide security for themself was not important enough to mention.
They vowed to protect the Canterlot Nobel family's supply of highest produce of the Apple family safe and would keep the threat of the Everfree Forest at bay for the greater good.
Celestias spys could not find any ties to illegal or suspicious activities to the 'Rich clan'. There for their intentions was most likely gaining more support and probably hoped to raise their nobel status from 5th to 4th grade nobel pony.
The 5th rank was the lowest that allowed pony family's to gain tax reduction and other perks granted by the crown.
Now a days it was rather rare to see somepony earning more prestigious ranking through hard and honest work, instead of buying it off some house in decline or marriage.
Celestias spy network if needed would support the 'Rich clan' from the shadows to aid the Apples further.
Maybe they finally find a lead to who created the dragon hatchling and she could start to hunt the responsible parties down to the last members of their family.
When the dragon with her more or less ever present company woke up the next morning on the day the princess and the scientists would return, did a well known to the hatchling orange filly with emerald eyes stare at her in childish curiosity when it would be time for another round of tongue wrestling.
The dragon welp had made it a daily routine to fight off the orange filly into submission.
The adults had become accustomed to this routine and started betting on how long the welp needed to defeat their darling daughter in tongue to hoove combat.
A gurgling of delight escaped welp and filly when the next epic fight 'adorable' versus 'absolutely diabolical cuteness' would start.
When one day a snack vendor started to organize betting pools with sweets for the losing participants of the bets, was a new harmless gamble tradition was born.
"Hello Mayor Mare, congratulations on your first election to the Ponyville leadership position." Bright Mac said and the mare burst into giggles when the stallion compliment the brand new head of Village.
Her predecessor had warned her that the Apples had a hoove for negotiation and trade, but she had no idea why he had always smirked towards her when he had mentioned it in passing.
Moving from Manehatten to the little Village of Ponyville was the best decision of her life.
The Apples chuckled as they see how they managed to nibbel the new mayor mare into submission even before the dragon welp had managed to tickel their foal into defeat.
By the time Celestia of the Sun and her followers of knowledge arrived, did no trace of the gambling or the epic fight adorable versus absolutely diabolical cuteness remained.
With exception of their in giggles twitching orange filly and the tongue tied dragon welp.
The dragon welp recovered faster and was wobbly walking towards Granny Smith who was busy straight out the young colts wild mane into something resembling a mane.
Celestia had actually no idea what peeked her more interested:
The Dragon hatchling using it sharp looking but blunt willed tail weapon to climb up the standing elderly mare.
The 'Mayor Mare' that keep twitching on the ground while the Apple clan tried to hide their involvement in
Celestia was quite amused.
The research party behind her was confused.
The dragon hatchling was climbing the Apple family oldest mares head to stand on it like a kitten that got the bird.
The orange filly of the Apple clan had stopped giggling, but was still twitching away at the hospital room floor.
Eventually did the new mayor mare stood up but her legs were a little wobbly. When she noticed the Princess of Equestria smirking down on her, did she excused herself with a red head that resembeld Big Macintosh fur coat color.
When they heard the door closing, did Celestias followers already started to approach the dragon welp of 8 days. Silver Tongue untangled the dragons tongue knot and remarked that he would probably retire into Ponyville if they had at least one more pink haired mare in the Village.
Celestia remarked that she had once pink hair before the night of her sisters Nightmaremoon and Luna incident that got them accidentally banished to the Moon for ten thousand years.
With exception of the still twitching Applejack filly one could have hear a needle drop to the ground.
It was Applejack's father 'Bright Mac' and his wife named 'Butter Cup' who broke the silence:
As Celestia explained the plans about the dragon hatchling and the Apples family involvement in them, did the royals on the moon listen to their big flanked sister and learned about the currently standing of their nation Equestria.
It was clear that despite her best efforts and a well build spy network some elements had to be at play that Celestia was not aware of.
Celestia had officially one spymaster that was anonymous for easy to guess reasons.
Despite Celestias extensive reach inside and outside of Equestria was it clear that some big player either just stepped into the game with someone that know the ropes or was bloody lucky not to have tripped over one of countless infiltrated splinter groups inside and outside the gavourment one has to face eventuelly.
She herself controlled and supported half of them, i case she needed to guide ponies or non ponys to extremist to show them the error of their ways.
Or what unfortunately happens more often than Celestia liked to confess, to dispose of unredeemable elements.
Or a Necromancer Griffon that worked for her gavourment for years, that helped civilian and military sectors.
This few rare exceptions needed to be set free from their un-harmonious way and then given a proper burial as to end there journey in this life and their paper trail... the paper work on things like that always seem unnecessary complicated, it being in triplicate was just overkill.
Nightmare Moon had respect for Celestias calculated actions, while keeping herself as mutch down to the ground as she could allow herself to go.
Luna was dissapointed that Celestia had more than started the same path as Nightmare Moon had been forced to walk back in the old days as Queen.
Being a true Ruler more often than not unfortunately made one thing apperent:
After over a hour of explanation about her plans to raise the mutated Dragon hatchling with the apples help and use its existence to root out corruption hiding within and outside her Princessdom.
After all: One do not simply ignore / write off a high value experiment just like that.
Once it had reached its tenth hatchday in 10 years, would Celestia slowly leak information throughout Equestria as to lure the enemy to the hatchling with 'Black Hoove agents'
Celestia would from this day forward slide her Black Hoove agents and her S.M.I.L.E. agents to Ponyville as new joining population. When Celestia would be leaking in 10 years the information would at least 1/5 of the Ponyville population be either elite troops with a well established background, or early retirement royal guard ponies that wanted to settle down for raising their family in a relative peaceful and absolutely unimportant Village outside the Zapp Apple Jam production.
The three adult Apple Clan members agreed to use a Geas on them as to keep the information save from escaping their lips, hooves or minds.
Further did Bright Mac and Butter Cup would receive Earthponys combat training for the event something went wrong.
With that the meeting was finished after the researchers had recorded all that was important about the hatchling, before they all received voluntary a mind memory wipe over the last 5 hours of their day and be debriefed.
Silver Tongue was excluded from the mind memory wipe to become the very first agent Celestia would place in Ponyville as retired gavourment agent.
Butter Cup formerly known as Pear Butter was very concerned about the future of her new daughter, but she had faith in her goddess to know and act as to keep them all safe while burning away the darkness away threatening them all... if a Alicorn could not fix it, it usually was literally impossible to deal with.
With hope for a brighter future for them all, would she try for another foal or three in a few years time.
Bright Mac would have to accept more help from outside the farm, his new duty while giving him more time for his family, would need him to be stronger than ever.
When Celestia returned to her castle that night did she summon her most trusted subjects in her government and informed them about her new plans.
She wondered very troubled if her run away beloved ~~adoptive daughter~~ Sunset Shimmer had anything to do with this all.
Celestia cried herself to sleep that night, worried about Sunset Shimmer unclear fate for the last years and in the future... she could just pray to receive one day closure on this.
Author's Note
To be continued...
Stay snuggly everycreature
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Chapter 5 - Welcome to the Clan Welp, you are a Apple now... 2/3
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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"Look who's up", said Luna as the dragon welp looked at their first challenger of the day.
Yesterday did Nightmare Moon defeated the colt and the filly by giving the welp suggestion and comments at how to act and when to attack or retreat. Almost like a trainer would guide his charge.
While the second fight was technically a tie, did Nightmare Moon celebrated her victory through proxy on the elderly cuddlebuddys head. The welp was rather good by now using its weapon tail as some kind of fifth leg.
When Luna guided the dragon hatchling to victory, did they started to converse with one another.
"Thank you for helping me." said she to her currently action guiding guardian angel.
That didn't get unnoticed by the ponies around the little dragon, but a flaming burp straight into the ceiling fixed it.
Unfortunately did that started the
Luna was rather surprised how well they could communicate with one another despite the magical translation matrix being occationaly ridiculous inaccurate.
Like the time they tried to make the hatchling understand it's position:
At this point Luna had just given up. The buck was a banana anyway?
Luna had complained about the translation matrix mixing words up on the dragon hatchling end, when Nightmare Moon told her sister to fix it herself did the dragon hatchling was seemingly convinced to be a wizard, than a dragon. Only to end in the understanding that she was some kind of wizard dragon.
When Nightmare and Luna started to speak like the lower class citizens, did the translation matrix finally started to work as expected:
"So you can talk at your age." Stated Luna, something she try to ask earlyer, but only now could both sides understand one another.
"Yes, i don't know why it was so difficult at the beginning though." She said as both sides just genuinely enjoyed being understandable.
Both sisteres were curious how the dragon hatchling could talk at all. The welp should rather communicate with concepts and images than translation supported words.
Especially since she was a hatchling less than two weeks old.
But their conversation had to wait when Bright Mac walked towards her and the orange filly and picked up the foal.
Then he placed her on his back as well and started slowly to trotting over to their house. The first time the dragon had been in there and remembering it.
Two hour and a half earlyer.
"I Celestia, high princess of Equestria, bringer of the day, shepard of the sun etc etc. Here for name this hatchling
Everypony was doing something, like scratching their head, looking away or kicking away imaginary pebels. But noone cheered Princess Celestias chosen name.
Silver Tongue informed his Princess that her decision was bluntly put 'Horseapples'.
Celestia grabbed the dragon welp in her magic grip, turned it around and tried to check its gender.
Apperently had the sharp eyed and sharper tongue Princess a perception disability towards dragon genders if they didn't show clear indication of genders like pony stallion having more prominent facial features like a blocky face and thicker legs.
When Silver Tongue suggested the second Dragon Lord to ever exist that happen to be named Cynder, did Celestia repeated her royal pose and line and replaced the Spyro with Cynder.
Still noone cheered when Celestia should have gotten a reaction out of them, did Silver Tongue suggested that she might stop levitating the dragon welp now named Cynder. While it was kinda hilarious how Cynder was performing swimming motions mid air, did it really steal all attention from the solar matriarch.
Celestia set the dragon hatchling named Cynder gently on the ground and chose a connor of the round observation room to sulk for a minute or two.
She effectively was pouting at a wall.
When the questioning gaze of the Solar Princess landed on the stallion did he said:
On the moon where two royal princesses.
The moon was surrounded by a vacuum.
If the vacuum of space did not exist, would one have heared the unrestrained laughter of the Queen of the Night and Equestria, 'Nightmare Moon'. She was rolling around in the ash of the moon while trying not to suffocating on her laughter.
How she did that without air in her lungs in the first time was a mystery, but Celestia just managed to sulk in a connor of a round room.
Luna in the meantime 'shouted her laughter into the eternity of space' while somehow creating shockwaves of laughter so strong, she keep backflipping countless times in the low gravity of the moon while floating in place.
The Princess of Equestria eye were twitching, Silver Tongue held a perfect dead pan poker face and the royal guard ponies clenched their buttocks so hard together from suppressed laughter, that they might have crushed coles to diamonds.
2 minutes later did, Cynder was climbing up Celestias body, snached one of the treats up with her tail, roasted it over the in flame standing mane of Celestia and enjoyed a flame bath while laying over hear head.
Silver Tongue was profusely sweating do to the rising heat of the room while Celestias royal guards evacuated the room of the Apple family and the hospital of it personal.
Lucky did at this time no creature was bed bound do to sickness or injuries.
Unlucky did the Silver Tongued stallion started to dry out and,ask the Princess of the Sun, that name a marvelous impression of a Solar Nova if she could conjure up a glass of water for him.
She give him three.
Celestia cooling down to her usual temperature but still standing on fire did said to the stallion:
At that the stallions poker face broke.
That day Silver Tongue got questionable lucky.
Prince Blueblood was born 1 day and 11 months later.
Cynder and Celestias sisters got a one of a kind show that day, since she was kinda still clinging to the head of Celestia while she was riding the Tarterus out of the poor stallion.
Author's Note
Where did i get my ideas from?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/495613/foundational-story-equus-story
Silver Tongue sure likes to play with hot cakes on burning coals.
Stay snuggly
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Chapter 6 - Welcome to the Clan Welp, you are a Apple now... 3/3
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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"Look who's up and about, welcome home Apples" said one of the royal appointed farmers to help take care of the Apple Orchard with all coming benefits of working for the gavourment.
6 groups of eatch 5 farmer would assist the Apple Orchard of the Apple clan with their work. To be precise, 2 farmers as in Earthponys, 2 Unicorns as help to the Earthponys and one Pegasus for weather control.
To Bright Mac's and Butter Cups absolutely horrific discovery, did the hired help had their work duty on the Apple trees the wrong way around.
Instead of the Earthponys bucking the Trees and filling the enchanted boxes with Apples and the Unicorns storing them for transportation, was the Unicorns picking the Apple with their telekinesis and the Earthponys moved them to storage.
For over a week did they worked that way and contaminated all Apples they worked with. Since they managed the workload of what Bright Mac would have needed 3 months for was unfortunately the stock of compromised Apples huge.
To show the new helping hooves the difference, did Bright Mac let them all taste test one 'Red Delicious' made 'the Earthponys way' from picking to loading into the crate and them tasting the same with Unicorn influences.
There was indeed a different after taste after the consumption in their mouth.
Bright Mac was furious that he had a week worth of help with three months of profit that could not be sold to their usual customers.
When Celestia learned of this, did she buy all afflicted Apples through her own personal Cake fund and sold it of to the Griffons in Griffonia at 1/3 price.
The Apple clan had not lost any profit or reputation and the Griffons of Griffonia were very happy with her spontaneous generosity.
So mutch so that many poor Family's throw away their piss poor origins in their home land and immigrants started to flood Equestria of the poorest of Griffonias citizens.
While Celestia had some seriouse problems of organization to get them well enough housed, feeded and integrated into Equestria, did the additional help in working power and filling out Equestrias military ranks out, payed big time years down the line.
Funny how Harmony sometimes worked.
The Nobel Griffons of Griffonia suspected a dark ploy from the Pony nation, but their investigation simply showed that the Griffons immigrants were the lowest level of citizens they had and most of them had not more than the basic education.
In the end did the Griffonia nobility ignored this massiv migration and only years later learned how mutch they screwed themselves over losing so mutch working forces and low grade income and tax paying population.
Three weeks did it take for the Apple clan to learn in their new work force and settle into a lifestyle between half time farmer and full time filly & dragon hatchling raising low level nobility.
The Apples had since the longest time enjoyed the 5th rank of Nobel status to give them a 10% discount and selling bonus from Equestrias gavourment. With their direct service to the crown under Princess Celestias orders did they got officially raised to Nobility of the 4th rank.
A 4th rank nobel could buy stuff from the gavourment at a 20% discount but still only received only 10% bonus selling to them.
Sometime the nobels tried to change that they never received more than 10% selling to the gavourment no matter if 5th or 1th rank nobels, but the economy would not be tanked by greedy individuals like some half braindead Apes.
While the Apple family of the Apple Orchard in Ponyville settle into their respective new responsibilities and their training regiment, did the Foals enjoyed more family time than ever before. The dragon hatchling was already used to being carried up and down stairs, while walking all over the house and occationaly on the farm side by side with its siblings.
Life was anything but good.
At least his earth pony nature allowed him to participate the first three rounds and endure fourth to six, while surviving seven to ten.
That stud had more endurance then 10 unicorns stallions combined and twice their output when properly watered and potions force-fed.
But recently did her bodys magic was on the fritz and the royal physician wanted to make additional test before committing to results that in his words: "Would not unnecessary stress her if unfounded."
Celestia had a bad feeling about this, yet somehow she was giddy anticipating the result behind this odd occurrence.
The rumors had already started to spread all over Equestria from her having some Alicorn sickness up to her being knocked up by the inofficially existence of a supposed to existing Royal Guard harem. Guess it serves her right starting that after forgetting to wipe her productiv stud eggnog from her face before ordering her bedroom chamber guards to ask a maiden to ask the chef cooks to make or bake a hollow cream pie.
That sure had the maiden of the castle grounds tittering in inappropriate but accurate jokes.
Bright Mac was slowly starting to panic, he could not seem to find his little trouble makers.
Not only did he couldn't find them, someone was pranking him by placing three boxes of the ones with a picture of a orange, a red delicious apple and a purple grapes wine bottle near where he already searched his foals.
Meanwhile Bright Mac was continued to be followed around by 'empty cardboard boxes'...
Three black hoove agents watched in amusement and slight admiration how Bright Mac was followed around by the ones he was looking for.
They agreed that as silly as the younglings had used the Cardboard boxes, it worked as long their hiding boxes did not seem to be out of place or in a obstructing way in the room.
Example:
They would have to add this silly yet effective way of hiding to their arsenal.
As the apple stallion looked around and showed clear signs of distress, did two of the black hoove agents played distraction for the foals benefit and as one group was presented without cardboard boxes hiding them, to the stallion.
"Thank you for helping me finally finding them, i really started to get desperate. No matter that i know 6 black hoove agents in two teams of eatch 3 are on the orchard at all times with sentry guards watching the Orchards fences." He said and he froze in a shiver when he remembered how the Timberwolfs not to long ago had a drop on them... luck like that usually wasn't something one should relaying on.
"So you can talk sooner to me next time you find them sneaking away from me to play
The black hoove agents politely nodded their head in affirmation and once more dissappear into the darkness.
When Bright Mac watched them reposition, did he admitted to himself that he never see anything like it.
One climbed a ceilling pillar and observed from there the area and everything in it. He resembeld a fruitbat in waiting.
The second one almost melded with a semi dark shadow near some piles of the new cardboard boxes. To Bright Mac surprised eyes did he seem to take on the color around him and become a misshaped but still fitting in object.
Clearing out a table, did one last black hoove take a sit on it. It was redicules how the assassin just sit there like a out of place picture in a empty room. When Bright Mac lifted the foals of the ground and on his back with Cynder claiming the space below his hat, did the agent that prior had been just simply sitting on a table, dissappeard.
Something keep Bright Mac's eyes to busy to avoid him from watching the point where he know to last see the Black Hoove agent sitting like a Fluffy pony in the middle of a empty room.
Yet no matter how mutch he tried to force himself, his line of sight where the assassin still had to sit, refused to acknowledge the pony in his resting place.
Butter Cup and Granny Smith were rather amused that they hear later how the three younglings manage to hide in plain sight from Bright Mac.
"Yes, I don't know how but why ever the black hooves insisted that the foals never left the barn and messing with me by reposition cardboard boxes behind me as to probably test their skill of stealthy walking around me, did i had the feeling that the three muffins on four legs vanished
"I am genuinely curious how the three pulled it off."
While the adults talked did the Foals and hatchling used their father as improvised warm bed to nap.
While it was decades from happening, did Nightmare Moon and Luna decided it was time for them to train a new generation of dream walkers for their service to them. Once they returned to Equestria with the end of their magicaly imposed banishment.
Cynder was to learn the basics about
Since theoretical everycreature can learn to use 'dream walking' with the right training, was there a huge difference between the abilities of one that merely manage to observe dreams and someone that, actually could effect them.
Starswirl the bearded become as powerful as he was because he feed regularly on the parasitic lifeforms plaging the dream realm. This race of vermin practiced cannibalism on their own vile kind to become stronger and evolve.
A regular nightdream parasite wasn't more than a instinctualy driven fear devouring being.
From there on out they have multible stages of evolution, but eventually they become self aware and the most dangerous and from then on potencial lethal, are the sapient nightdream parasites.
Newly evolved ones might make the mistake killing their victim and leaving a trail behind for the before Lunas banishment established royal 'Dream Guard' to find and hunt them down in the dream realm.
The most dangerous are hitting the category 'Tantabus' and are as smart or smarter as every sapient counted species.
The eradication of their vile Species is practically impossible do to their nature, but they can be indeed be culled with enough effort to be a manageable threat.
Cynder would serve Equestria and other nations well, while growing in strength and eventually become a master of the dream arts.
It would be a interessting idea to explore if the hatchling Cynder could be used as political figurehead.
Perhaps the on extinction edging Kirin/Nirik could get new bloodlined added, once dragons started to mate with ponys that are compatible with some of their subraces like the Night Terror or the Colossus dragon strain.
Nightmarem Moon was expectedly
The now not even half a year old hatchling was unexpectedly intelligent, but very playful. There wasn't a singel dream realm meeting that didn't start or end with a tickel fight.
But it was not all dream realm lessons & fun games.
Actions have consequences.
If one could bleed in the dream realm, the royal sisters might have to be wary of drowning in rivers of blood from slaying wave after wave of intruders into Cynders mind.
But to be fair... The royal sisters had not for countless centuries so mutch fun and entertainment.
If they slay the vile invaders with Ice/Fire-Sword and Dream-Scythe or bare hooves was objectively a minor detail.
Save to say noone had a laugh at the end other than them, feasting on their magical energy.
Their through magical means staying alive body were is rough shape do to neglected muscle training and lack of superficial things like food and nutrition, but they could help themself with the additional magical strength they gained to rebuilding their bodys slowly.
Instead of bearly alive husks of bone and skin with bearly enough muscles to hold them standing, would they be back at their peak strength as if never banished in the first place.
Of course would they have to worry about weakened immune systems and getting back to slowing down their magic consumption that had become a requirement for them to staying alive on the moon.
When they would finally return on the 10.000 Summer Solstice after their banishment, would everything change...
Author's Note
Have a great day every brony.
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Chapter 7 - In the shadows of a bright world
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Canterlot, ~~Evil counsel~~ Pony first meeting.
Main Speaker Naysay with a stern expression:
Everypony else in the meeting present gives a silent and uneasy nod.
Main Speaker a unicorn named Naysay:
Yet this might all become undone by one huge mistake from our misguided Princess.
Secondary speaker a bicorn named Crow Inkwell:
Main Speaker Naysay:
Second speaker Crow Inkwell:
Many ponys start to murmer and giggle in content about that remark.
Second speaker Crow Inkwell continues:
Some ponies show how disgusted they are how Griffonia treated their own Citizens.
Crow Inkwell continues in his function of second speaker:
Everypony in attendance shows pride in their basic guidelines.
Main Speaker Naysay:
Second Speaker Crow inkwell nods in affirmation:
We have keep non ponies in check as long we could, but times are changing and so must we..."
Uncertainty rises in the ranks, yet everypony stay respectful and relatively silent.
Main speaker Naysay:
Everypony give their agreement with many showing mischievous grins on their faces.
Second speaker Crow Inkwell end his speech with:
Everpony reverently murmers the guiding phrase.
Before the meeting could come to a end did the main Speaker Naysay ended the meeting with:
"The subject that should not get 'lost' is that Griffons will not be allowed to join our Nobel ranks unless we have elevated everypony in attendance to 4th rank and made sure only 5th rank is ever granted non-ponys. The leadership in our hooves should never be allowed to get reached by any other race.
Yet we can't risk to grab any Alicorns attention. We survive because we have never existed in the public eye.
It had been a hole month since Celestia had her newest Stud Muffin and he sure did a number on her. She was pregnant...
Her royal physician had warned her about her using magic at all do to her body naturally reroute a lot of her magic into her womb to make the foal grow strong and healthy, while protecting it with antic magic as old as their race was from illnesses and physical harm.
Yet while a certain prozentuale magic body capacity is used for the foals benefit, is anything beyond basic levitation highly restricted.
The magician guild would have to lower and raise sun and moon for at least two years to come... in theory they prepare form the formation of Equestria to help Celestia doing it every second day instead of emergencys that had not happened for at least the last 1000 year or so.
Equestria was already celebrating the news of the solar Alicorns filly coming into their life's.
What ever the Filly or colt would be... unless it end up being twins?
In many non pony nation was the news of Equestrias Alicorn Princess being with foal was bringing dread to it enemies.
Was it so mutch to ask that the Storm Kings agents would be able to break the filthy neck of Celestias spawn once it is born?
Their every civilian had military training.
His family already had managed to start the production of anti magic weapons and armor, while having found ways to re-direct what could not be canceled outright.
He would rule any sapient being one day. It was his right after generations had worked towards it.
A few extraction teams in the different nations keep acquire materials, knowledge and artifacts of old, but they keep failing to get the last two pieces of their plan.
A antic magical staff named 'Staff of Sacanas' that was rumored to be once used to raise and lower sun & moon.
Once they had both, would world domination just be a matter of time... he would not like his Ancestors or his parents wait patiently any longer, he alone would rule or set the world aflame for failing to bow to him.
They can't delay this glorious future to him indefinitly, but he would not wait for mutch longer.
He wasn't getting any younger and he would be out of his prime in 40 years.
A Minatour lifting his left eyebrow displeased when he see a filthy dragon walking along ponies.
He had come shamed from his nation to Equestria to start a new life. Equestria was a land of many races, but Dragonkind are not one of them.
His unfortunate rather worn down transportation wagon would unfortunately lose its breaks very soon.
Many places in Equestria keep losing guard to retirement, when the guards started to lose ground versus criminal elements, did the future seem to become Grim.
When Griffons started to immigrate to Equestria did boh side be it justice or corruption found relieve in new blood. Most of the Griffons wanted a honest and honorable life. This strengthen Equestria guard security forces and the military overall.
Yet every basket has its foul eggs and some criminal organizations found new blood joining their ranks.
The good guys and the bad guys both have to adjust to sudden increase in population.
With new and old blood mixing did many bad elements started to failing recruiting forces when opportunities where given.
If this would keep up would even the most skeptically ancestors celebrate their descendants accomplishments.
Bright Mac set Applejack & Big Macintosh from his back down next to the selling stand of his Apples. Than he placed the scaley daughter of his from under his hat near her siblings.
Three Blackhoove agents watched the youngest three Apples to play in the streets in sight of their parents.
While they usually are all business, did the on shift working 24 Black Hoove agents dedicated to the security of the Apple family officaly and to Cynder security and observation did grow attached to their charges.
Unfortunately did in 7 out of 10 times was guard duty boring, 1 times it get usualy interrupted by something unimportant and only 2 times did it really was needed to be viligant to be on duty.
Cynder the dragon hatchling had fun with playing with her sister Applejack the orange Earthpony filly and her brother Big Macintosh the red earthpony colt. She was of course keeping the younglings out of harms way where she could, while keeping them entertained.
Unfortunately did one could not be as vigilant as one needs to be all the time and it often only needed someone missing to pay attention in the wrong place, at the wrong time... when peaceful day become the norm, than tragically events hit all the harder.
When a wagon filled with wood was rolled deliberately towards herself and her siblings did only the shouted out warning of a pony that could not be seen due to very powerful magics used by spys and assassin give her warning that death on four wheels approached her.
When Cynder see the wagon coming for her did Applejack and Big Macintosh had been in pounce stance to one another. Her Guardians had tried to save the dragon welp by leaping away, but Cynder would not sacrefice her family for her own safety, she override their muscle control over her body.
So with a regret born out of longing for the times she would not have with her new family, did Cynder grabbed the foals with a tail and her mouth gums eatch and spin herself in place to use her strength to let both be catapulted to the sides.
Earthponys were redicules sturdy, even the foals.
When the fillys landed safely away from the coming death on four wheels did Cynder had no time left to safe herself.
Preparing for the last brutal moment in her life, did she closed her eyes with a tear of sadness for the pain her passing would bring the Apple family.
Three hours earlier
Granny Smith was collecting the three youngest apples on the farm in their shared room.
The three stopped when their Grandmother started laughing at their sight.
On her back was rising the future of Equestria, so thought the Apple Matriarch. How mutch she was right about it would she see over the last 33 years of her life.
Butter Cup called to her mother in law:
Butter Cup had also prepared a breakfast in the living room for the Blackhoove agents in the morning shift.
As Bright Mac walked into the house coming from the livestock barn, due to having fed the pigs and other meat animals. He could smell the delicious food at the table, one of the reasons he loved waking every morning was the delicious company and their good enough breakfasts.
After Bright Mac had nuzzeld the house Matriarch a good morning and give his beloved mate a kiss 'hello i am back', did the family started to enjoy their breakfast together.
Granny Smith does look a lot younger than many Earthponys her age do to her still being active with farmlife, even with her applebucking and storing day long in the past.
As to be expepted did Cynder had fun rescue Applejack and Big Macs food from their portions while sacreficing it to herself.
To the Apples surprise did the Fillys actually liked to eat it in small portions.
As to be expepted at this point did the younglings needed the occational reminder to stop playing at the food table.
"Well looks like someone's awake we were worried about you." One of the Farm helpers said to Granny Smith.
The old Apple appreciated the younger generation missing her still well shaped flanks absence. So she at least told herself with some tittering.
Butter Cup started laughing when she looked at the Farm helping pony for what almost sounded like a slight flirt. Bright Mac appreciated the compliment her mother still get on occasion, even if he only see it as hollow gesture to compliment the old widow.
The Apples noticed him mentaly drooling after spotting Butter Cups made breakfast and offered him some. He enjoyed a Apple pie peace before informing Bright Mac about them having to check the sales wagon for wear and tear before loading it up.
Wiping some crums away did he give his offspring and his favorite dragon daughter a nuzzeld
The Apples are still surprised how mutch the dragon welp could fit in her body.
He could never explain how the welp could once he actually weight all Cynder was eating fit
When Silver Tongue finally had arrived at the apples family house was only one hour left before they would go to the market to sell their products. Especially Granny Smith 'out of season' soft cider would be drawing attention today.
Silver Tongue enjoyed a improvised breakfast made by Granny Smith for him.
Apple Matriarch Smith explained to the stud of the nation: "We are going to be expecting massiv company today near the stand, keep a eye out for the younglings if you could?"
Silver Tongue untangled the mass of Apple produce from his tongue and give affirmation to the old mare.
Author's Note
Had a car crash at the day of this chapter release. Fuck... did i got luck only my car is dead...
Anyway my coping mechanism to stress and pain is writing or listening to text to speech stuff on Fimfiction ...
So enjoy the chapter i made over the last 7 hours and 30 minutes
Stay snuggly
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Chapter 8 - Stepping into the dark gray territorys
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Beeping, endless beeping. Merciless beeping in the earholes of Cynder the dragon welp.
Why was nobody stopping the beeping? It must have been the singel most infuriating sound she ever heared in both her lifes.
After a while her guardian angels named Luna and Nightmare Moon joined in her sorrow of this annoying sound keeping them from a restful relaxing laying around.
At least it was warm and cuddly, she smelled earth and apples, salt and sweat. A very familiar smell that made up over time for this horrific sound reminding her of her inability to keep up with her surroundings. She was sooo tired, maybe sleeping some more, yes this would eventually fix it all, it has to...
Doctor Mending Heart had done all he could, but it looked bad, really bad.
The motivation was still under investigation, but it was clear that the immigrant from Minatoria a male Minatour had confessed under magical examination that he tried to murder the dragon welp and would have cared very little if anyone else like for example the pony siblings of Cynder would have been killed as long he succeeded in killing the welp.
Nothing more was know to Doctor Mending Heart, but he seriously hoped they fixed the Minatours mind soon, otherwise the Apple clan would undoubtedly call for the antic law that allowed to determine the punishment of the guilty party in clan matter be resulted in a duel to the death between a champion of the Apple clan branch of the harmed party and the offender.
The Apples are known throughout Equestria, if the investigation result of what the Doctor already know would eventually be released?
But what would it matter in the end for his patient? The dragon welp was dying... that was a undeniable fact.
Somehow the dragon welp performed a unknown magic feet with unknown dark affinity readings that had her saved from any physical harm, but over extended her magic essence core to the point of cracking.
What a world... The welp had to fight for her life from the very first day of hatching. She had survived versus a full pack of Timberwolfs only to die to a mentally obviously sick non-pony.
Her damaged core lost its charge as fast as it could produce it, making it impossible to repair itself. Further who ever played around with the dragon welps core had done quite a number on it.
The capacity was unable to be measured by any of their or Canterlot teleported in equicment.
Mana infusions of all known and stored affinities where rejected by the body of Cynder.
It was if all known and stored mana typed are incompatible with the core so far.
Silver Tongue suggested to temporarily free one of the un-curable in Tarterus indefinitly holded prisoners and try using their corruption infested parasitic dark magic as possible mana infusion for the welp.
Even if it would work, it would destroy the welps mind! Fully grown and adult ponies and non-ponys had fallen to its influence. Why not rather leave the welp to peaceful die pure of corruption of any kind, than forcing her to grow up and eventually die alone in a isolated cell in Tarterus?
What was Silver Tongue thinking?
Further what lunatic would suggested this in the first place? Yes, they were desperate to save the life of someone that saved the Apple family clans members life twice... but unless the silver tongued stallion could manage to change the law, this was never going to happen.
Silver Tongue after a heated debate had convinced his mate to try his last ditch attempt at saving the dragon welp Cynder.
Celestia in tears of the merely suggested idea break considering it, she give in to Silvers arguments.
If Cynder would survive that way, than so be it.
At least she would save one life, even if she damned it to a eternity of isolation.
Three days later
The Tarterus watch guards had been a well trained and hazard payed division of the royal guards. They are besides the dream guard headquarters the only ones allowed to be near one of the two entrances to Tarterus.
They are very loyal, yet when even their beloved princess Celestia made a call that was so clearly wrong, did the Royal Dream Guard
Their second nobel class rank would allow for a investigation for the well being of Equestria and of the last Alicorns in Equus existence.
"This doomed to failing experiment is only the top of the ice mounten. Celestia is certainly compromised somehow! Further did we keep losing guard to retirement or have to execute sudden deserters and badly failing personal and recruiting is falling short... just as it did for quite some time.
His son a young but gifted and in power rising young royal dream realm guard 'Red Dream' has just send him a dragon fire scroll message.
What he learned from it was highly concerning.
Now she free her own to lifetime sentanced former subjects for a black ops medical procedure for a non-pony.
Celestia had taken family from him because parasitic dark magic influenced ponies are to dangerous to be left lone if not in Tarterus imprisonment.
He would not stand for all this! Time for a emergency meeting of the 'Pony first' Counsel.
Two days later
All preparations had been done.
This would work or the welp would not leave the cave again. These Crystal's absorbed magic and filtered it into neutral magic and used the magic it converted to grow existing crystals or spawning new ones.
All in Tarterus imprisonment prisoners that died of old age or being executed for attempting to flee for the last 2000 years had been layed to rest in the Crystal mines under Canterlot.
High Princess Celestia would soon run out of space if she didn't find a alternative to bury the Tarterus and otherwise dark magic infested bodys here.
It had been time, Silver Tongue had suggested it and he would be here to witness it from start to end.
Celestia would not come near the caves that could potencial harm her unborn foal.
The old light green Apple clan Matriarch under tears nuzzeld the welp a last time before she was escorted out of the chamber.
The two un-curable had been chemicaly sedated and prepared, a direct mana infusions from the ponies to the dragon welp and back was formed.
Tail hair crossed, did everypony in revulsion see the corruption in the mana of the ponies enter the welp. Cynder body didn't reacted at first as expected, but after half a hour did the two un-curable ponies reacted instead to everyponys surprise.
The life signs of the dragon Cynder was returning to stable parameters and when the dragon hatchling come to it and pulled the breather and its air hoses out of her throat did everyone in attendance that had not yet his muzzel dropped open, done exactly that.
The dragon welp not even a year old somehow managed the literally impossible as before today.
The impossible had been witnessed today:
Tarterus ten of thousands imprisonment for lifetime dark magic un-curable would potencial be able to be returned to society.
Cynder the dragon of the Apple family clan was going to change the world with less tha a year old age by being the only viable discovered cure to dark magic corruption!
Celestia could not belive it. Well she could, but only after having the papers confirming it in her hooves. Silver Tongue had once more rocked her world. The dragon Cynder that got experimented on as a egg with a enchantments destroying tail weapon and breath attack, had been confirmed to be the cure to dark magic corruption.
This was huge.
Unless... Hm... yesss.
Author's Note
The difference between a lunatic and a genius is their success...
Once more do my pains of being alive denied me sleep...
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Chapter 9 - Uncertain times
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Naysay was absolutely flabbergasted.
He could not stop his tears from falling when his lips meet that of his wife. Something he had longed for so many years.
It was pure luck that this has fallen in her hooves, but she would milk it for how mutch it was worth.
As Celestia give them about half a hour to catch up, did the purified ponies eventually run out of stamina and had to return to the medically supplied castle internal hospital wing.
Naysay only need a few minutes to get himself back in his well practiced political mindset, while he unexpectedly don't force a mask of neutrality on himself.
Naysay politely ask how this was possible and whatever she wanted in return for this miracle.
Equestrias ruler would not ask for anything in return that was not freely given already.
To Celestias pleasure did Naysay was absolutely flabbergasted once more.
Of course did she lie the Tarterus out of the blue to keep him off guard and his associates would try to find clues to her claimes.
In the end did she just needed Naysay to bring news to the nobels about her great deeds and how she unfortunately needed financial support after having funded all her research by herself so far.
Unfortunately was this no longer sustainable and so she give their current cure a 8/10 rating of successful purging corruption from anypony afflicted body.
If Naysay helped her to convince the nobility to stand down 1/10 of the monthly payments the gavourment of Equestria to the nobels class for the next 200 years at the very least, she might find a way to increase her research to 9/10 successful curing of dark parasitic magic afflicted for ponykind.
To further bolster Equestria finances short term and increase other Nations relationship long term, she proposed to release the information of a break through in magical medical science in two years.
From than on all Equestrian citizens get released after getting cured and reintegration into sociable circles can be assured.
Unfortunately did Celestias research only was that effective on Ponies, she would need somepony to traveling from one nation to another to bring research overview and results to their allied forces, further was it in the long term cheaper to buy a Tarterus the cure that unfortunately currently and probably for the next 100 years cost exactly 5 years of Tarterus maintenance costs for the prisoner.
Just in case they managed to somehow collect the money short term, so they don't pay long term.
When Naysay swallowed hook, line and fisherboat, did Celestia freely allowed herself a very satisfying smile and a fore hoove pumping in the air out in joy for her success once Naysay had left the room.
It would be a redicules pain keeping everyone in the dark about her 'research and the curing methods and needed materials'.
The doomed to failing experiment was apperently far from being a prototype if it had a 8/10 successful rate of curing afflicted individuals. Further was it only natural that she focus on Ponies, since her citizen had a higher priority and with the other nations being indefinitly in her pockets as the sole owner of the cure, was everyone forced to play nice.
He had underestimated his princess... he blinked a few times after that thought registered in his mind.
O horseapples... he just started a witch doctor hunt two days prior in the pony first counsel.
Also how did she manage to keep the official declared cure against parasitic dark magic as impossible declared 300 years ago, so long ago a secret?
The dark stain on his family tree was gone.
Crow Inkwell just had a meeting with his close associate Naysay. What he was told was amazing in very concerning. Celestia might suspect Naysay to be in one of many Canterlot nobel organization that wasn't answering to the Princess, but how mutch did she know really?
Further did they keep losing guard and maid staff to retirement or other unfortunately tragic ends. They keep failing to have acquired personal for their spy and smuggling networks. The Griffon immigrants are to blindsided by Celestia titel and her deeds to be swaying for more profitable factions.
Their information network was apperently not nearly as efficient as he had been assured time and time again. Research and the funding of it always left a paper trail. To have it only revealed because Princess Celestia did it herself... how curious.
But what was more pressing the finding out the secret to the cure, was to keep it in ponies hooves. Once in two years the knowledge will be spread, every damn non Equestrian spy will be over Equestria newest biggest secret.
Unfortunately had he first to put out the wildfire that Naysay had started... not the first time, BUT hopefully the last time.
Nobelpony of the 2th rank Naysay thought to himself that he should use the incident, when a Minotaur attempted to get a sloppy assasination on the entire Apple family clan youngest generation through unpunished as a tragic accident.
He would help the Apple clan to get this lunatic terminated. He heard Minatour meat was going well with red wine. He would at least try it once.
In other news was his son a young but gifted and in power rising young royal dream realm guard, but 'Red Dream' has just been caught send him a dragon fire scroll message on a black ops mission. He better pull his son of Tarterus and get him station closer to home. He wanted his current post only to see his mother, when she occasionally got lucid enough to talk with family.
Bright Mac and Butter Cup just learned from Cynder being saved from deaths barn gate, how it was achieved on the other hoove was highly concerning.
Celestia had made it clear that even if it worked, Cynder would probably spend the rest of her life in Tarterus unless somehow a cure to corruption
Yet this experimental medical procedure uncovered that their darling Cynder was the very first being to naturaly cure other dark parasitic magic afflicted ponies!
Princess Celestia herself come to their Orchard to escort them to Cynders bed. While her core was already regenerated was she still weak from a cold she had catched while her magic immune system was down for the count.
Once they reached a conclusion about that Minatour... a example of one kind or another had to be made.
Further did Butter Cup & Bright Mac are about to receive serious training and their family owned lands that had Ponyville standing on it was about to become a lot more busy with Celestia making Ponyville into one of the biggest military training grounds of Griffons to hide Equestrias biggest secret known to the world in two year time.
It was only a matter of time, until Cynder was found out to be a piece to the 'Cure'. There for it was only the question WHEN they come to get Cynder through abduction.
Cynder had just become the most valuable commodity in Equestria and beyond.
Celestia would build up her military over the next 20 years for the day when 'no' was not longer unfortunately sufficient to hold others off to come for Cynder and her future hatchlings...
Many guard as loyal a they are, started to wonder what was going on. High Princess Celestia had just now set free two of her own to lifetime sentanced former subjects officially removed from the Tarterus prisoner list.
They all know a black ops medical procedure for something had been performed and probably cost the prisoners their life's, since parasitic dark magic was impossible to cure.
High Princess Celestias seal had been impossible to manipulate or to artificially fabricated without it being successful uncovered to be one on closer inspection without failure within a day.
But perhaps someone had finally finished to fabricate a legitimately looking forgery?
To suddenly have the Equestrian leader Celestia somehow suddenly without reason changing her mind over night/day? Impossible!
Major Faithful Wings had to get behind this. He would not be falling for this like any common soldier might do under pressure of a seemingly perfect fabricated false strings of orders.
He had surprisingly many vacation days on his back hoove collected. His most loyal soldiers would accompany him to the Princess in pony to ask her. Somecreature might have smuggle this inofficially given orders past Tarterus messages service, but let see what his princess had to say about this blatantly ludacris scam.
Two weeks later did Major Faithful Wings was before his princess and she confirmed her previously send out orders.
After taking a week to running background checks on them, did they received their new orders.
Lieutenant Colonel Faithful Wings was to be the pony of the hour to oversee the structuring and training of the new Equestrian Griffon forces, after ten years would he receive a one of a kind mission that literally would have him having a hoove in changing the world for the better.
Fat chance.
By the end of the meeting did Princess Celestia had the perfectly loyal soldiers and if needed be 'expandable guards', for the safety of Cynder the dragon of the apple family clan.
The public made case of Iron Faith was about to be commencement by noone less than 'High Princess Celestia Solaris Stellar' in attendance of the 'hole' Apple clan. Directly or indirectly affected by the Minatours actions.
Since it was a high profile case with massive implications, did the Ambassador of Minatoria had been in attendance as well.
To Celestias horror did the Apple clan Matriarch and father of the almost killed foals and dragon hatchling declared the use of a antic law he was entitled to call upon, that would force the criminal to fight him to the death if he accepted.
With the threat of losing any remaining shred of dignity and respect Iron Faith had to accept.
In 1 month would 'Bright Mac of the Apple family clan' fight 'Iron Faith from the Iron horn family clan'.
Two would entry the arena alive, only one was going to leave it, if at all... only time would tell.
Author's Note
Hope you enjoy the chapter
Further more enjoying the future chapters as well
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Chapter 10 - Day of the duel - Prelude
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Bright Mac had done what was needed to secure his family safety, further would today be a turning point for his family. They would either be strong enough to make others think twice before messing with the apple clan of Equestria and his youngest family members. Showing them withstanding anything and anyone that would wish them harm.
Or:
They would see him die, trying to defend all he hold dear and loved with all his heart and dedication.
But either outcome, blood would be spilled.
Celestia had taken the apple family dedication to keep their foals out of harms way from anyone to lightly.
If this duel would end in the Apple clan losing, than Equestrian nobility might lose face.
If this duel would end in the Apple clan winning, than Equestrian nobility might keep their face.
》BUT《
Celestia might lose face with her rather trying to keep peaceful relationships, until her military was ready to take a more aggressive approach to demandings of other nations with currently superior military standing.
Equestria was a nation that had a good military standing, but nothing geared toward offensive action. They are specialized towards repelling other nations short term, until she herself could pull her 'Alicorn of the Sun' politics metaphorical joker-card out of her petral. She actually had really one in her petral, two actually.
One with her 'trollestia' face on it, the other with her in royal armor displayed while a Solar Lance burning down her surroundings.
Anyway...
With all the Griffon immigration and making them a part of Equestrias new foundation, in time Equestrias standing as:
But until than,
Surprisingly she managed all her reign with this internal sentance to rule Equestria.
A singel Alicorn might level a City or ten.
For example:
If someone is building a army outside her borders, she simply 'Solar Lance' the Tarterus out of the enemy forces.
》But《
If for another example they are inside Equestrian territorys, than the massive sledgehammer of the Sun could not be used without turning the surroundings into magicaly charged glassware.
The threat of parasitic dark magic influenced was indiscriminately harming and killing everyone equally.
Unless one is a immortal, a Sphinx that is counting as the former OR already dead/undead...
It was to dangerous to be left alone. So when Equestria with her leadership take care of everyone's corrupted individual, was Equestria all of a sudden out of everyones
Tarterus originaly is a magicaly dead zone due to it being constructed out of anti magic stones, supplied by the Yeti nation.
After Celestia found out that corruption of afflicted individuals before nearly unstoppable and unpredictable due to environmental magic spread, was now unable to spread withhin its walls due to no magical field feeding it.
A new and viable solution was found to keep 'it' contained, thanks to Equestria anti magic prison. Instead of the old solution to throw them in a vulcano and hope it stayed there... because sometimes it did not and caused even more troubles down the road.
The SCP: ' Seperated - Confinement - Prisons ', had been carrying the threat on their shoulders and flanks to keep the world free of its death spreading threat.
For a fee, did Equestria house any prisoners there.
Bright Mac and Butter Cup walked from their guests suit in the castle near Celestias tower towards the medical wing of the castle near its center and picked up Applejack and Big Macintosh from the royal garden.
Further has Bright Mac donated his seed for the national seed banks, in return to have 2 of 5 loads reserved for his wife. If he should perish today in the duel, would she be still able to raise one or two foals from him.
When Bright Mac arrived alongside his wife in the room reserved for Cynder, did the door got opened by a greeting Black Hoove agent.
Big Macintosh and Applejack got placed on the for the fillys huge bed of their ill dragon sibling.
The two nurses on duty give the apples a friendly greeting and informed them how Cynders new magical suppressor collar worked.
Cynder had further fore and hindleg bracelets that would keep a bluntness magical field around her sharp areas that would start to self sharpen, when she reached her second year after her hatching.
On her tail ring was also a bluntness charme, better safe than sorry.
After the Apple family parents had learned it activation code phrase and deactivating phrase, did the Nurses continued with their halted tactical 'children card games'.
Once the time come for Cynders medications to be taken, did the Apples learned how tightly the hatchling could hold its muzzle shut.
After Bright Mac ask if they had Cynders medication as rectal suppositories, did Cynder mouth fall open in shock.
Bright Mac enjoyed the remaining hours he had with his family, until it was almost time to prepare.
His wife give her husband a tear filled 'good luck' kiss, before they parted away from one another.
The time had come.
Two would enter the arena, only one would be allowed to walk out of it alive.
Both combating parties receive a medical check up.
A drink and a last meal was offered. The water was accepted, while the meal was declined by both.
After the examination and declaration of them to be healthy, was a testament given to protocol in case one or both perished.
Than both entered the area on opposite sides of the dueling grounds.
High Princess Celestia with Ambassador declared with amplified voices the rules:
Unarmed combat, no armor or clothing as protection was allowed.
The fight was to the death as agreed by both parties.
If one or both perished, was their bodys to be given over to the society of carnivore nutritional needs.
No time limit, if they died due to battle inflicted injuries or exposure was irrelevant.
Two entered the area, only one would leave it on his hooves. If at all... only time would show and tell.
Both combatants acknowledge to understand the rules.
Since the Minatour had natural weapons, did Bright Mac had a right of a alchemist made bleeding suppressor. The Minatour combatant ask, how he know if this was not going to end in foul play.
Bright Mac ordered two flasks, the Minatour would select the one he would drink. He himself might indulge himself of a flask as well.
After the Minatour Iron Faith selected the flask Bright Mac was to drink, did he declined his share. Blood thickness potions made brutally painful bruising, occasionally even weeks after the trauma was received.
The Minotaur Ambassador elaborate what would happen if his pony opponent lose by dying and Iron Faith survived.
He would be exiled from Equestria, never to return or he would have his trial continued and with attempted homicide of minors, he would be at best be permanent housed in Tarterus or out right executed publicly.
Before they started they get the chance to say some last words. Both accepted.
Bright Mac was given the first chance by his Minatour opponent.
So Bright Mac spoke:
After a minute of silence, did Iron Faith spoke up:
I have not been told if the dragon shitstain has died or not... but it would have been well worth dying for, to spare the world another monstrous snake with wings.
Yes i am sorry that i put your blood and flesh foals in danger and if i die today, know that i hope they live a long and healthy life to carry your bloodline into the future for your nation well being.
But this draconian shitstain is not worth breathing the air it uses up.
That is all i have to say... for now."
After a minute, did Bright Macintosh spoke up again:
"My name is Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, you tried to murder my family.
Author's Note
Universe 13 of the 'Draconequus Continuum' Synths Hiveship
Just in case you want to know the roughly shaped political/Nation situation. Minus the Synths that don't exist in this 'Displaced' story.
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Chapter 12 - Duel of fates, Equestrian vs Minatorian 2/2
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Bearly did they standed face to crouch area, did Bright Macintosh tried to rear up to strike with his forelegs, but accidentally jumped back about two meters.
That had saved him from a knee to the face and when the Minatour charged, did both pony and his charging bipedal enemy are equally surprised for a moment, when fore hooves meet his fists knuckles with bone damaging effect.
Both flinching in pain when the attack left a mark on them both, with Iron having blooded fists and Bright Mac suffering painful hairline cracks in his forelegs and hooves keratin outer layer.
While the Minatour was surprised how swift his opponent had reacted and countered, did Bright Macintosh was without showing it outwardly slightly panicking that has body coordination just went to Tarterus in a hoove basket.
While Iron Faith was attacking and wondering how a farmer was giving him trouble breaking its defenses down, did Bright Mac desperately tried to keep his body under control.
When after two minutes the Minatour had to halt his assault do to being out of breath, did Bright Mac desperately attacks his enemy. His missed presumed headbutt attacks and missed forelegs punches. Yet it didn't betray how uncertainty and fear guided his hooves overall.
Only the Black Hoove Agents present and a few Pegasus royal guards see how mutch Bright Mac struggle to hold his body in check or how uncoordinated his body was responding under his body transformation.
Meanwhile did the ponies in the audience cheerful shouted praise about Bright Mac combat prowess.
Iron Faith was to busy to notice Bright Mac real situation with him having to deflect his clearly stronger opponent endless attacks and the growth of pain in fists and leg hooves, that deflected the attacks and suffered more and more damage through blunt force trauma wasn't helping along.
It had been merely 4 minutes since Bright Macintosh was using his Black Hoove learned technique, but both opponents where masking their pain in war cries.
Bright Mac had totally overestimated his ability to use this technique and underestimated everything else. Pure desperation guided his cracked forelegs, until the pain was to mutch and he closed his eyes for long enough for Iron Faith to get behind him.
Iron Faith had no longer any feeling outside pain in his fists, this demon of a pony was ruthlessly attacking him and he had no doubt that his fists are about to break.
So he needed to get behind his enemy and land one quick stab to the stallion.
No matter how well trained this farmer was, that technique had to really have major drawbacks on his stamina. He know from reading zebra potion books, that hulking up and beserker potions overworked the heart.
Sooner or later would he have to collapse, he just had to... he could not die here, because he tried to kill that little shitstain, there isn't existing something like a innocent dragon.
Just one good stab and his own muscles expanded mass should make the bleeding suppressor irrelevant. It had to or he would die... die to a monster in the disguise of a peaceful pony.
Celestia had seen a lot in her long difficult rule in Equestria, this was just another day in her office that she hated the most.
Bright Macintosh had 3-4 minutes roughly left until he would collapse.
When he closed from the body strain and pain his eyes for a moment to long, did the Minatour had naturaly taken adventage of it to get behind him.
When the Minatour tried to stab Bright Macintosh, did both factions of the fight had taken a critical blow.
This fight had to be ended in 2 minutes and 30 second tops by Bright Macintosh or Iron Faith was walking free.
Iron Faith was now clearly in the winning to a well trained eye, after simply waiting for Bright Mac to die shortly after the technique wear off.
While the bull Iron Faith probably didn't know how mutch Bright Mac had ruined his own body in record time, would even a fool recognize a out cold enemy in a duel to the death.
Time was ticking and Lady Death was patience incarnated. Someone was coming her way very soon... if not both parties of this duel.
Iron Faith and Bright Macintosh shouted their agony into the air and the audience went instantly dead silent.
Bright Macintosh had blindsided by his condition and enemy movement hoped for the best and blind bucked where he hoped to hit something.
He hit and was hit at the same time in return.
Iron Faith had just lost his right horn, when Bright Mac blind hindleg buck hit it.
Iron Faith was bleeding from the horn stump, while Bright Macintosh was bleeded from the pierced left thigh.
Both opponents backed away in pain, but unlike Bright Macintosh that had his hole body starting to quit, did Iron Faith had only his fists and right horn ruined.
Roughly 2 minutes would be seeing the very bloody end of this duel.
Bright Mac frame visibility reduced when he lost control of his body, once he was stabbed.
Iron Faith partially in delirious combat 'fight or flight instinct' kicked in and he grabbed the hindlegs of his enemy.
While wildly swinging the pony in a circle, did his grip slipped eventually and the pony crashed besides his broken off horn right into the wall. Headtrauma meeting everything else, did bad become worse when Bright Macintosh cursing internaly was down for the count temporarily.
But the pain of his body overall brought him with all his adrenalin back enough to notice the broken off horn.
This debacle is not over yet.
He would make his clans enemy bleed for their victory.
What could a farmer do that their enemies aren't willing to?
Their was the physcial and the mental price of ones actions. In victory or defeat, there was always a after.
If Bright Macintosh Apple could manage to make it do so that any victory is to costly, perhaps that would make enough threats back away...
The point of interest isn't in 'who wins', it is in how much he would make the enemy bleed for it.
In a fight to the death, was that just to be expected anyway.
Iron Faith was furious, he had just lost his right horn. Minatorian bulls and cows did take a lot of pride in their horns, as symbols of strength and health. This pony would have at the latest now a death warrant earned from Iron Faith, if not already in a death duel.
He staggered slightly clutching his bleeding horn stump with little success stopping its flow painting the grounds crimson.
Time to end this with his own hands, instead of waiting for the pony to kick the bucket from his stabbing wound.
While the bull Iron Faith walked toward his fallen pony opponent, spraying thin high pressure blood stains all over the arena, did he continuously started to wonder if his vendetta against dragon kind had really been worth losing so mutch.
His wagon, his standing in Equestria, his horn...
Naysay was very displeased how it looked like that Minatour bull Iron Faith was going to win this.
Bright Macintosh was laying in a puddle of liquid that most likely was him bleeding out at the moment.
Naysay wasn't expecting to miss his opportunity to talk to Bright Macintosh Apple about his familys secrets combat technique. The stallion was at least hoping that his wife might could get the information.
The Minatorian Ambassador was in one way pleased that his fellow Minatour had apperently the victory in hand, unfortunately did he suspected Princess Celestia would not be so generously toward them the next trading agreement that was coming around as a result.
Worse, calves murdering Minatours of any race really got his fatherly instincts raging. Dangerously dancing on his discipline edge.
Iron Faith stand right behind Bright Mac that was still facing the wall, he had been thrown into head first. The blood puddle below him was noticed despite the twilight growing darker.
He probably would have ended the fight fast and without any monolog, if the pony hadn't bucked off his horn to places unknown.
So he wouldn't miss the opportunity to drive in his victory before ending the duel.
"Where is all that hot shit you spouted just like a minute ago? Remind me what did you tell me again?"
The Minatour smirked in satisfaction.
"My name... is Bright Macintosh of... the apple family clan...
This would be the last time he would say it today.
When Iron Faith turned his enemy around to have the satisfaction to see his enemys eyes lose their life when he would choke him to death, did he not noticed what Bright Mac wide right foreleg hide with its girth.
When the Minatour started to choke him, did Bright Mac stabbed Iron Faith right in his genital sheet and janked it out.
The Minatour screaming in pure agony his pain into the air with exposed neck, quickly changed into a gurgling when Bright Macintosh ripped with the acquired horn the bulls throat out.
The Minatorian bull tried to step away from this monster of a equine, but after only 2 steps he fall to his knees.
Right hand clutching his sheave and left hand trying to stopping the bleeding of his ripped open throat, didn't the dying bull see in his shock how the pony was rearing up to buck at him.
He could not understand why he was suddenly infront of Princess Celestia blood stained face surrounded by a glow.
But when Iron Faith heard Celestia words, did his mouth dropped open with the knowledge hitting him with realization what was going on.
"The dragon is alive and well, you just lost life and head for nothing. Rest well in the knowledge that you thrown away a life of peace in Equestria, where Harmony embraces everycreature.
Ambassador of Minatoria got handed over the hornless head of the former Minatorian citizen
The announcement of the end of the duel was not followed with cheers or celebration.
Consciousness fleed the stallion Bright Macintosh Apple even before the light of Iron Faith life faded from his eyes.
Not learning of him actually decapitating his enemy, instead of just knocking him out to spare him a dreadful death.
For he was lead into the darkness before Iron Faith was embraced by it, following his opponent into the realm after ones body had expired.
Bright Macintosh did not leave the arena that day a proud winner.
Author's Note
Sometimes life and death are unkind.
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Chapter 13 - The days after the duel
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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~~Pear~~ Butter Cup Apple is a very loving mare, very calm to many outside her market sale hours of the day. Many not knowing her, see the mare as reserved. The farm ponys working in her orchard and her friends know better, especially with her not being to shy to nibbeling on ones ears to get what she wants.
She would be the type to not lose her temper easily and have it exploited or allow anger to fester within without a bucking good reason.
But if you hurt her family or friends, you had better hope you meet Celestia before she gets hold of you, because Celestia will show mercy.
But when she got hooved over the still blood stained Stetson of her beloved and father of her foals, did all strength in her was lost and she was embraced by the darkness of unconsciousness.
Cynder had her siblings besides her, they had a nap after roughhousing for about a hour straight.
The nurses thinking themselves ignored and the apples to young to understand, talked quietly about the 'duel to the death' of yesterday.
They told of the chilling stand off that had them locking eyes for a hour or more so.
"My name is Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, you tried to murder my family.
How he dodging his opponents first attack with the swiftness of a Royal Guard.
And finally how in a moment of distraction rumored to be caused by something within the audience, to get him distracted for but a moment.
A moment that his Minotaur enemy used to stab him in his genitals!
How he returned the favor later, when the Minatour taunted him and tried to choke him to death.
How he used the horn of his enemy that he had ripped off with a buck prior, to slit open the bulls vile throat.
And finally how he decapitated his opponent and by devine will, send it directly infront of Princess Celestia who is rumored to have told him 'she was sorry that he had chosen to be a criminal, instead of being a friend and be befriended in turn in harmony'.
Cynder coughing unfortunately ended the recollection prematurely, but when her adoptive mother come with a blood sprayed Stetson into the room. Was it clear that the Minatour had sold himself very dearly.
Even if Butter Cup Apple thought to talked to herself and was trying to cope, did Cynder know enough to suspect that it was her fault that her siblings would have to start getting used to not longer having their father around them.
Since she could think back, did she had Bright Macintosh around them. She loved to hide below his huge at her size Stetson and enjoy his pear sented shampoo made by her adoptive mother herself.
Right now all she could smell was the copper of the blooded Stetson and the bile in her throat.
Today nothing was rousing any reaction from her.
Tonight would she morn her adoptive fathers absence that she would have to make somehow up.
Would they hate her for it?
After all, they belived that besides the apples, the stallion Silver Tongue was one she had imprinted on... as ever present family friend.
When the revelations and implications had set in, did it hit all minds in this tiny body with overwhelming weight... what cruel turn of events.
When the apples didn't return the next day and the day after that?
And when the pain become to mutch...
When it stopped coming out of it's pit in her heart, expelled from her stomach...
'Pear Butter Cup Apple', when the mother of two told her mother in law how she feel about all that had happened and that she blamed Cynder for everything that had happened to them and how she had decided to give away the dragon hatchling, did Granny Smith Apple called her out of her full name.
That was when she knew she bucked up.
Bright Macintosh Apple had given everything he had to make a stand and proudly declared to the world what he loved most and would defend to his dying breath, only for his own wife to abandoned the very thing he had suffered and bleed the arena grounds for infront of Princess and many others!
Bright Macintosh a peaceful and loving stallion had bucking murdered a sapient being for the safety of all his foals , pony or dragon.
Yet was the bloody Stetson of the stallion filled with determination given to somepony that just had straight up abandoned one of them!
Was it not exactly that what was the reason she had left her birth family and founded this apple family clan branch with fruitful harvests.
How Pear Butter Cup Apple wished she had been in Bright Macintosh place...
Maybe her father was not wrong to be disappointed of her, because just as he had said before they parted ways:
She would only be allowed to return, once she learned of dedication, determination and the will to stand against all odds for the sake of their 'family'.
It was now that she had noticed how her father had said 'family' not 'family clan'.
They might be of two clans, but they would be of one family!
A screaming of two nurses had the Black Hoove Agents at high alert in seconds and even before the nurses come coughing out off the room without the most valued possession of the Equestrian Queendom, did summoning crystals had shattered to summoning all assets stationed for the safety of the dragon that could cure dark magic corruption right outside the medical wing.
No amount of Pegasus or Thestral wing beats moved the dark smoke, when the Unicorns and Bicorns detected dark magic was everyone backing away.
So it didn't surprise when something holding the unconsciously laying hatchling captive in their grasping talons, come out of the room.
It was a Golem clouded in dark magic mist, making it very hard to make out its actual features.
Two intruders had dared to try foal nap the future cure of a impossible to cure affliction of parasitic dark magic influence. But only over the dead corpses of every Black Hoove Agent in Canterlot.
With currently roughly 200 having been called via summoning to serve and if necessary die, this would have to be almost impossible odds to overcome.
The eyes of the Golems seem magical in nature and told of calculating and battle hardend puppet masters behind their magical gaze.
One was testing out the limitations of the construct it was remotely controlling somehow.
Someone had just managed to crack the cipher of the royal castle!
This might just be a 'Alicorn of the Sun' requirement of 'Solar Lance' for who ever was behind this.
Princess Celestia was currently in talks with the Abesinian Queen and Minatorian King, when 2 of her personal Black Hoove Agents had been summoned away.
That was impossible... The only one designed to be higher in priorities was...
"O HORSEAPPLES!"
The Abesinian Queendom and Minatorian Kingdomes royal guard and personal assassins had just stormed the negotiations room, when High Princess Celestia cursed up a storm.
When she told them to protect everycreature with their life and that she be dealing with the invasion forces herself was the chaos perfect.
A certain statue had just very prematurely received a cracked surface. A dark chuckle was to hear in the royal garten of the castle grounds.
Harmony shuddered in dread, something just had been set in motion that could not be longer stopped... this major change in her plan could no longer be overlooked and tolerated.
Destiny and Fate shifted every so slightly and a paradox was growing, that would in time shake the foundation of this world to the very core!
Author's Note
Harmony is in panic mode.
When a Pony mage with the name Starlight Glimmer could change the world with a singel spell and deed...
What had just been done this day?
Stay snuggly
Celestia be like:
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Chapter 14 - The days after the duel - rising darkness and the return of chaos
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Celestia was furious, her spell work was already messed up by the growth of her foal indide her womb, if she was calm in body and collected in mind.
Her armor 'Elysiums Embrace' refused to be answering her summoning do to the second magic field inside her body, the sentient armor judged her current magic signature to be a attempt of a foreign mage to trick it into obeying.
At least her flame sword and flame combat scythe heeded her magical calls.
Yet when 'Faust' was taken away by 'Discord', did her armor and weapons remained and chose her solar affinity blood daughter to be her successor.
Celestia was enjoying a far greater agility without armor, but when someone of her level was fighting against her, than without her former mothers battle armor, did Celestia feel very exposed.
It was 'Elysiums Embrace' that stopped 'Tireks' magic draining abilities to take hold on her.
It freed magic had returned to all living counterparts that didn't die do to expire recently do to exposure to the elements, when their magic drained bodys suffered the mentality exhausted end state to a degree where they didn't noticed their bodies demands for water, food and shelter.
When Grogar returned after having been declared dead for a long time, did only the combination of her mothers inhereted battle armor and both weapons allowed her to keep the undead busy, until her sisters had build the beginning of a anti magic prison that would be known centuries later as
Right now did Celestia switched between flying and galloping between rows and rows of uncloaked, fully battle ready Black Hoove Agents in the highest concentration outside the Hive.
Her Black Hoove Agents are the best of the best, the elite of the elite of her youngest sister
The Changeling had build a cover existance for them as Shadow Ponies, blessed by her father 'Solar Nova Exterminaty' to be the defenders of pony kind.
Of course did the Changelings also created cover races for other species like the Abesinian enjoying the 'Black Kitten', or the Minatour having their 'Black Horned' counterparts.
Only the Alicorn Royal family know about it, that also only on her youngest belived lost sister's trust.
Anyway...
While they parted despite them standing shoulder to shoulder, before Celestia presence parted them in her way like a Pegasus or Griffon parted the mist in the morning in one of two Cloud City's currently in existence.
By the time Celestia arrived close to Cynder with her solar weapons ready to strike, did the situation seem to have escalated into fighting.
The clashing of weapons was to hear and somehow did the Black Hooves manage to keep talking with her despite them standing meters apart.
It was actually very other worldly how Chrysalis managed to speak to her with the Black Hooves in that moment stand beside her, eatch only managing a singel word before the ones before her a meter infront continued:
"Celestia - it - has - already - happend, the - unknown - dark - forces - have - the - hatchling - in - their - grasping - talons.
The - fight - has - already - started, - two - enemies - total. One - is - keeping - the - dragon - in - one - of - its - blunt - talons - that - remind - me - of - slim - Minatour - hands - actually, - but - is - making - petting - motions - that - I - suspect - are - cloaked - glyph - writing.
They - have - apparently - breached - the - royal - castle - anti - scrying - cipher, - if - we - can - not - free - the - dragon - before - they - breach - the - anti - transportation - defenses.
This - can - not - be - allowed - to - come - to - pass!"
Celestia agreed, there would be no monologs or dialogue of any kind. The attackers would be killed on the spot and after the security Cipers are changed out, would they see how the unknown enemy entered in the first place!
15 Black Hoove Agents lay out cold with head trauma in the medical wing, that with coordination are passed from hoove to hoove to be safely evacuated outside the combat area.
The purified Naysay clan ponies and all medical personal was already evacuated.
Once the dragon welp was secured, would they rain death and destruction on the attackers.
The warstaff master of the invading duo keep using the bodies of the Black Hooves attackers as cover against anti magic stone weapons.
The Golems manipulation was perfect, no wasted movement what so ever. Worse, it started to look like the puppet master started to predict its opposing combatants more and more.
It occationaly 'liberated' some equicment it could snatch up from attackers.
3 of the out cold 15... Correction, 17 Black Hoove Agents did get knocked out by their own knock out devices.
Magic spell casting so far only resulted in one Agent losing his cloak to fire and another one had his chameleon cloak malfunctioning and giving everyone with a sense of fashion a heart attack with it stripes of rainbows with changing polkadot appearing and disappearing by random.
They just hoped that Princess Celestia or their Queen in her disguise come in time before they lost the only cure to corruption covered in scales.
The Minatour King and the Queen of Abesinia standed back to back, what shit for brain had the ludacris idea to start a invasion so close to winter?
This better not be the Yetis again... They are the only race not just preferring to fight currently in cold as tits climates, but since they only have to shave themselves according to climate conditions, are they the only nation in the world giving a shit on temperature difficulties or food shortages in combat situations.
Far from the smartest beings, did the Yeti excelled through toughness and their disregard of morality and personal safety in all kinds of warfare. Noone was as feared all year long to be attacked like the Yeti nation under the Storm Kings leadership was.
Literally the only nation without defenses to speak off, do to them all being soldiers from young age.
While many nations flee the slowly growing ice areas of the world, did the Yeti enjoy uncontested territorys. Farming nutrition rich, but absolutely inedible for everyone but Yetis race roots grow under deep layers of Ice.
Anyway...
The Yeti keep their greedy and war mongering armys away, after Celestia once melted a wide area of the Yeti invaders border areas near their territorys to drown the tunneling soldiers there.
He could not be possibly that stupid to attack again... for that matter, how did they reached Canterlot Castle unnoticed?
Once Celestia was back, was the trading agreement probably having to wait. So once the situation of the attack can be elaborated and be addressed accordingly.
If the Abesinian Queen and Minatorian King are lucky, than they have the chance to see a 'Solar Lance' attack with their own eyes. Historically reported that it was always a sight to behold.
The last one was 200 years or so ago, when Celestia glassed a Pinguine army inside Griffonias borders.
The Griffons lost only one minor City that was mostly evacuated, the Pinguine lost all their offensive military standing in return.
That was a historical crystal memory recording even used in today's educational elementary schools, when they teached
Apparently was death by sugar a thing if one was not a Alicorn or Hippo... only their metabolism could handle that much sugar.
Anyway...
Once this drama was over, than they all could sit down to tea and cake again and get the trading agreement renegotiated and trading routes renewed and modernized.
When Celestia arrived at the scene, did she give herself one minute roughly to study the enemy and spot Cynder who was hiccuping with tears streaming from her body. Her body was limply laying around the in dark magic mist covered Golems the Black Hoove Agents talked about.
Cynder was apparently emotionally hard to decipher at the moment, but her emotional distress seem to be extream.
Suddenly before her eyes did Celestia was seeing in the haze of 'a vision' a Yeti Black Hand Agent, a actually assassine organisation that wasn't made out of Changelings and pretending to swear absolute loyalty to their royal family for the purposes of gaining total information network access of a King/Queendom.
It had a Foal in its hands, Celestia just know that it was her as of yet unborn pony colt!
He was perfect! He had her so bright pink coat fur that it looked white, he had a blond mane and tail as sunny as her sun. It was very young and had not its cutie mark as a result, but it was definitely had her stallions features despite being so young.
... ... ... Only to be crushed when the masked assassine showed himself to be one of the Storm Kings many children with his red eyes and signature cruel smirk on his face, as he killed him.
KILLED - HER - FOAL - IN - HIS - DIRTY MOTHER-BUCKING - HANDS!
Celestia had just a internal vision...
Luna had the fun of a lifetime. All that uncut and unrestrained combat with intend to kill. She could let lose because her body was that of a Golem and suffered no strain nor the dull pain, but still give the full adrenaline rush of full on combat to the death!
The living puppet had a bipedal body, one resembeling the ones of the in Starswirl portal mirror resembeling Humans.
It was very rough shaped overall, but had hands like Minatorian had just more nimbel and dexterity unchallenged in precision. Fighting like this through Cynder instinct driven motor function memories really give her a range of motion that while more limited overall, allowed for faster and more precise results.
Though it was strange that a quadruple walking dragon has bipedal walking instinct and knowledge about optimal movements in different stances.
It's like she used to fight with a thin butter knife all her life time, now she had a scalpel!
The what she had learned
This had to be corrected!
So while Luna enjoyed her new found freedom through Cynder, she feared to lose it and her at the same time.
The Black Hooves would not give her a chance of signing language.
Since it has been a while she had used it out of boredom, was she a bit rusty anyway.
Once she defeated enough to have them trying negotiations would she...
Wait, what is that bright fire in the entrance of the roo- O SHIT!
Nightmare Stellar Moon was giving Cynder physical reassurance by petting her, while it helped was it only delaying the inevitable.
She observed the surroundings she had to work with. She was in a dead end area of a long very bright made hall that might by some lesser citizens are considered a entry hallway in width and height.
Still it was a dead end, infront of her was a huge force of the best Equestria had to offer in military matters.
How was she to get Cynder to the Apple Clan Familys Orchard ? This Golems had further no flight capacity and all its magic was currently dormant. Bearly giving them a seemingly well balanced combat staff, to fight with.
So far her sister Luna Dreemur Stellar had defeated 17 Black Hoove Agents with non lethal head trauma, knocking them out cold.
While it was fun to feel the battle rush of her sister thanks to being connected via Cynder, was her growing distress at her slow progress the same as her own.
Unfortunately did she could not risk to join the fight, Cynder would not survive in her weakened state as mutch as one combat spell accidentally hitting the well natural armored, but still young body.
She suddenly spotted her sister Celestia, she had unexpectedly not her armor on, but hadn't spared on offensive matters.
What was she thinking t-
Celestia had:
Earthpony of the day, strong and superior in stamina. Celestia body embraced the full strength of the peak performance of anyone's body.
Pegasus of the day, she had the endurance and long range capacity of the most sturdy Pegasus. Her wind manipulation was unfortunately rather pathetic, but her resistance towards electricity was absolute.
Unicorn, one horn and a lesser capacity for multi casting of telekinesis or spells. But a wider range of magical affinities.
Celestia Solaris Stellar was no laughing matter...
For some reason she just took personal offense to what happened, Lunas Golem construction no matter how tough, what it wasn't...
... ... Yep, pierced by Daybreaker and vertically sliced in half by Daybringer... And burning...
O SHIT!
Discord had planned to make a big entrance, but this was way more entertaining!
Aaannnddd there goes Celestia and ends the fight versus Lunas controlled Golem in less than 10 seconds flat...
O Shit... He better make a appearance, the
Time to save the Golem of his Wife... and announce his return to the world.
Discord apperance was well timed but badly placed, as his magical Avatar just got shish kebabed by Fausts sword Daybringer.
Author's Note
Bloody Tarterus... where do i get my ideas from?
' Foundational story: Equus Story '
See you next chapter!
Stay snuggly ♡
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Chapter 15 - Family reunion
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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"Ouch... That sure is a warm welcome..."
Stated a surprised Draconequus.
Discord had just been run through with Daybringer while holding the already in swinging Daybreaker mid air in his tail grasp, before it could hit the dark magic construct.
Celestia absolutely livid state of mind changed into absolutely bottom of the Celestial sea rocks in her stomach. 'Discord - ~~God~~ Lord of Chaos' and former inoffical mate of her mother Faust, of currently still officially to her oldest sisters Nightmares Stellar Moon married Queen of Equestria, had just stopped her cold in her tracks as she was about to dispose of the foal napping Golem.
If Discord would take Cynder away or make her ability to cure parasitic dark magic invalid...
Without the element support of Harmony was Equus doomed to his every wimpy mood... unless Nightmare Moon keep him busy ~♡
Nightmare didn't know if she was delirious or if her husband had finally freed himself from his stone prison in the royal garden.
He looked just as good as ever... how she loved to have him draped all over her and thrusting his ever shapeshifting... hm... thoughts better continued after Cynder was saved.
Every not knocked out Black Hoove agent was knelt before their lord.
'Their God' had just returned to them!
A certain Queen just squeal in joy out, her brother in law had finally returned. She would hug the stuffing out of the Draconequus the next chance she got.
Luna watched through the Golems eyes that Nightmare currently remote controlled, thanks to her connection between Cynder and her own magic core.
Discord was free of his stone prison.
Discord pulled himself free of Daybringers flaming embrace inside and out. The sapient flame sword had not even dated him before, how rude... he was a married Draconequus anyway... unless Nightmare Moon wouldn't mind to share the bed with the heat based weapon to warm their bed?
Anyway he had stuff to undo and places to make, probably a few laws of physics and magic to break. Not to forget to pay his debts back, the little dragon in the Golems hands needed help yesterday... or today as soon as possible.
So Discord talon over his sister in laws toys of war back to her, give the place where the Golem should have his mouth a short kiss and take Cynder in his lion paw.
Celestia begged him not to hurt the dragon, at that the Draconequus scolded Celestia. He had a lot on his list of deeds and misdeeds, but he would never suffer the consequences of existing with the knowledge to have killed something that hadn't reached physically and mentally the ages to be considered a adult.
With a snap of his Griffon talon was a second Golem as the one Nightmare Moon controlled poofed into existance.
Another snap of his Griffon talon had the Moon restored to a time before Celestia had accidentally turned it to ash.
The last snap of the day left the Draconequus exhausted, but all the chaos magic stored durring his prison in stone time was well spend in him teleporting himself, Celestia, Luna, Nightmare Moon and Chrysalis towards the Apple Orchard.
He slowly collapse into a air empty Ballon version of himself and pawed over Cynder to his Wifes hooves.
With him having reunited his family on Equus, was he spend for the next 20-ish... Years to come, so he told them.
Further that they are all welcome, they would see what he means the next time the Moon rises again... unless they are colorblind towards green.
Pear Butter Cup Apple had the shock of her life when three Alicorn and a Bug-Horse thingy was standing infront of her houses entry.
After a minute of her brain short-circuit, did Cynder got hooved over to Butter Cups hooves.
This day was absolutely madness incarnated... but at least it wasn't boring.
Celestia stopped making sence of this day. Unfortunately could she not drown herself in Apple Clan hard cider... or the near future after the birth.
Applejack and Big Macintosh had no idea what was going on, but they had missed their purple sister. When they started snuggeling the coughing dragon sibling.
Discord had just singel taloned used up millenia worth of chaos magic by restoration of the Moon surface to a lush jungel.
Currently it only had plants, trees and a lot of insects on it, but it would not longer be a to ash burned lifeless miniature planet.
Noone could say that Discord never had done anything useful or good ever again.
If some wanne be Tyrants come after Equestria?
Luna and Nightmare could not belived their youngest sisters wasn't just alive, but had a few ten of thousands of sons and daughters and grandchildren like sons and granddaughters.
Celestia could not belived how Discord just had saved her sisters from the dead moon surface, next she knew he turns the moon back to a living environment or into cheese... or cake?
Chrysalis was hugging the metaphorical stuffing out of all three eldest sisters in a group hug. She had to shape-shifting her legs into snakes to fit them, but their family was complet once more.
Somewhere a in stasis hold dead pony body come back to life. It made absolutely no sence, his body was numb and painfully overworked, but the stallion used his neck to work himself from the bed he was on, down to the ground. His family and clan needed him... He had to meet them again, even if he had to drag his sorry carcase of a body from Canterlot to Ponyville.
Bright Macintosh Apple was filled with determination!
Meanwhile did Canterlot was still in lockdown and the Abesinian Queen & Minatorian King keep unnecessarily a high alert in the negotiations room of the castle with their royal guard and assassines not waving in their determination to keep their rulers save from any harm.
No assassine or invasion force was going to catch them off guard... but noone would see the Draconequus coming in time.
The Tree of Harmony just had her plans all ruined... The only thought she had at the moment was:
"FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!"
Author's Note
Where is that stuff all coming from?
'Foundational story: Equus Story'
Discord might not be what the Equus population wanted him to be, but he is the god they deserved.
Stay snuggly
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Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Hours later... Did surprisingly little happend.
Somewhere... Well actually on the Apple Orchard where Discord collapsed into a empty ballon earlier, did a certain Draconequus shaped ballon received enough wisps of Chaos magic to retreat into his long abandoned chaos realm. He really needed a lemonade bath right about now... maybe with sprinkles!
The green glowing Moon that night was a picture of legends and was added at historic event in any historical book. Yes, even the Yetis... education on history was quite high in their uncivilized civilization.
~~Evil counsel~~
Somewhere a Thestral pony take offense to that and Bicorn Crow Inkwell shortly apologized for his choice of words... he was usually more perceive and careful with his wording.
A long silence in the meeting room, their plans for the years to come are in ruines and Naysay was nowhere to be found.
The temporarily main Speaker double facehoof and say with a cold blooded voice:
Meeting of the Pony First counsel end.
The Alicorns found themselves all shortly after in the Royal Castle medical wing with a very giddy Abesinian Queen and a flabbergasted Minatorian King.
Celestia had a check up on her unborn foal, after all the magic she had used and that was used on her.
Luna and Nightmare in contrast needed months if not years of recovery.
The foreign rulers didn't get to meet the Alicorn family for long, but a Black Griffoness assured them that they be reasonable ready to be meeting them in the next years nation rulers summoning.
The royalty of Minatoria and Abesinian had their trade agreement renegotiated the next day and departed three days later with eatch having a group hug picture of the three Alicorns.
Abesinian and Minatorian alliance was never stronger since a millenia, than after that few days.
The Storm Kings spys reported months later the return of the Alicorns decades before expected and the Storm King had fumed. The storm king had few vacant places underneath him a day later. For the first time in the Yeti history was a non Yeti in a commanding and leading position.
A young mare going by the name of 'Tempest Shadow Storm' had earned her place under him, by blowing her superior in a duel to the death up. For someone with a cracked off horn, this little pony was hardcore. He hated her squishy appearance, but loved her ruthlessly killing any opposition any Yeti give her.
Perhaps she would find the
To the surprise was the dead declared stallion Bright Macintosh Apple found to be crawling with the strength of his neck muscles alone, dragging himself up the start of the dungeons where they had stored his body to be given alongside Iron Faith's body to the organization for carnivore needs.
He was very thoughtfully and in detailed put through examination, he was definitely not a undead. His body was stiff and damaged through frost bite, but he would make a full recovery by the next years end.
He would have to stay in the Royal medical wing for that time. He needed the best the nation had to offer and to make sure no mare snuck into his room to milk him for a Rockhoove level of foal service.
If anyone was to milk his balls, it would be his wife... or at least having his wife agreeing to it.
Celestia just know how mutch his seed was going to make on the black market alone...
It was a very tear filled reunited Apple family, that his mother and wife called a miracle of the gods.
Discord chuckle in pride at that.
Cynder had never happen to experience happiness in that degree, after she had been reborn in this magical world.
Near the end of the year, did everything looked a bit brighter. Cynder had become healthier than ever, especially after Celestia prematurely started to heal ponies in secret.
Unfortunately did she had to keep them in Tarterus for 'observation purposes'. But Tarterus interior got overworked for million worth of bits.
To Tirek and Grogars surprise did Discord the God of Chaos had returned.
The undead and the magic sucker were no fools and agreed.
Before the year ended had Butter Cup returned to her birth family and brought her three youngling and Apple elder with her. The start was a bit uncertain and wobbly, but after Butter Cup offered to unite their clans with the seed of her husband, could the mares of the Pear clan not fast enough agree to become the Apple-Pear clan.
Bright Macintosh Apple become questionable lucky the next years heat season... he even managed somehow not to suffer friction burns!
By the time Cynder become two years old had she not mutch grown in size, but her physical and magic capabilities and capacity had grown redicules in comparison to any other two year old dragon welp.
All thanks to Celestia weekly bringing into the Crystal caves prior un-curable ponies to be cured by Cynder.
Celestia was reminded of Tireks abilities, Cynder just was only effecting parasitic elements of dark magic.
To Celestias displeasure did many ponies keep a dark magic affinity after being cured. To her surprise did they are agreed to be registered as dark magic users and be training one another to use it for the well being of society and nation demands.
If this worked out? It would be seen in the coming decades... and beyond.
The summoning of the Nations in the second year of Cynders lifetime in Equestria had to be slightly delayed.
A pink Griffoness chick bearly 4 years of age had after a rather redicules story ascension archived.
Mi Amore Cadenza, short Cadance:
The Griffonias nobility demanded her to be taloned over to them.
Further had Nightmare Stellar Moon & Luna Dreemur Stellar send their own cards as well.
Luna with a Ice Sword surrounded by a army of frozen enemies
The Griffonia nobel Griffons also got reminded that their usual army population pool had just become Equestrians and would not mind coming home to make a permanent change in governmental leadership.
The Griffonia counsel of nobelgriffons unanimously declared 'Mi Amore Cadenza' a Equestrian citizen with a honorary Griffonia one as well... it was the best they could come up with.
Cadance become a fully adopted member of the Alicorn royal family.
Mutch later was Cynder joining them as well...
Before the second year was over, could Cynder breath out dark magic mist out of her mouth that could transform trees into living puppets that stayed permanently.
Pure dark mist Golems just stayed a month, before dissolving into dark morning mist and returning to their source.
Further did the royal family members had all connected themself to Cynder magical core.
When Queen Chrysalis connected her magic core and unknowingly to the Changeling race, did they all had to go for a few days into hiding.
Her Changeling children reacted physically violently to it, but once their bodies adapted could they send and receive over twice their old Hivemind range.
Further did they all gained dark magic affinities and for some reason their need for 'Magicaly charged Love' decreased by 1/3.
Queen Chrysalis suspected that they all had unknowingly got affected by parasitic dark magic prior that spread over the Hivemind connection, that got healed by Cynder accidentally.
By the end of the adaptive cycle, did their Shape-shifting improved a lot under less strain to body and love reserves.
Cynder not even two years of age had changed a lot of life's for the better.
Celestia delivered with the help of Discord a perfectly healthy and very stallion like shaped colt to the world.
Equestria celebrated a golden Age!
The Tree of Harmony was raging in silence...
How could she turn it all around? Or at least gain enough power if Equestrians would not feed her with new chosen Element users to regain old strength.
Harmony ploted it's come back... it would be glorious.
Not even the personified chaos of this world could stop the harmonious future, its choices for this world would make it a paradise of its making.
Author's Note
Hope you love that Chaos.
Thanks to a story that showed me a Griffon Celestia, something that had never crossed my mind before.
I had the idea to make Cadance a Crystal Griffon
How will this all effect Harmonys script for Equus?
Stay snuggly everyone ♡
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Chapter 17 - Royal visits and preparations for conflicts to come
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Granny Smith walked to the room of the children and picked up Applejack, Big Mac and Cynder. Once they had been as always placed on her back, they slowly enjoyed the daily ride to the breakfast table. While they might probably be able to safely go up and down the stairs, did Granny Smith enjoyed being used as their mighty steed.
When they arrived downstairs, after breakfast was ready, did they unexpected enjoyed the Griffon Princess Cadance to be with them.
Apparently deliberately pulling a 'puppy licking your face act', really win you many snuggeling points.
As Granny walked down the corridor to the kitchen with four than her usual three passengers, could they already smell the delicious food that would wait for them at the table.
After getting to the table and getting in a chair as usually, did Cynder get unexpected grabbed by Cadance and Granny Smith with her daugther in law enjoyed the heart felt affectionate feeding Cynder received.
It was some time no longer needed that Cynder had to sneak part of her carnivore elements of her food partially to her siblings. Since at some point they wanted to have some at every meal.
It become a surprisingly common occurrence that the Royal familie come alone or as a group to the Apple-Pear Family clans Orchard.
Many minor non Unicorn nobels migrated to Ponyville and the sleepy little Ponyville village that had her highness foal daddy in it.
Meanwhile had thanks to the excellent leadership of Colonel Faithful Wings this former badly defended Village become a impressive military fortress base with a very high civilian population density. Many Black Hoove Agents enjoyed their selection of ponies they could imitate do to revolutionary new spell that was extreamly complex, that let pony Black Hoove Agents turn into anyone so they can enjoy the civilian life.
Ponies giving consent to being added to the list of the Agent using their forms got compensation for their contributions to the cause.
Noone minded to make observing parties unsure if a pony had just been a agent disguise as themself or they actually managed to kick ass of Timberwolfs that keep starting to become more bold in the last month to attack the
Once Cynder had her food feeded to end by her Griffon friend, did they all rested snuggeling for a few minutes before they as usually started to do their things.
By now it was not unusual to see military training resting Griffons around and in the orchard.
While it was silly fun at first, did it also helped the Changelings pretending to be Ponies to find recruits for the 'Black Beak' Agent program that was planned to be created in about 8 years time.
Life was good and relatively peaceful.
Bright Macintosh had started to recover from his arena duel.
For some unknown reason had he massive coordination problems in his 'unbuffed' state.
The mares just could not help themselves around her alpha stud... Bright Mac at some point considering to hire bodyguard to shield him from horny mares.
"Well looks like somepony has finally awakened, since the Appletrees didn't sway under unexplainable tiny earthquakes, do i wonder if the mighty Bright Macintosh Apple-Pear were actualy enjoying sleeping in."
Bright Macintosh got acquainted and used to the friendly ribbing his workers give him. It was in all good fun and slightly jealous wish to be like him.
When his little trouble makers come into the Barn to play around, did Bright Mac was surprised to see the shy Griffon Equestrian Princess Cadance laughing following them around.
When Cynder come up to him, did he nuzzeld his little darling.
Cynder had reached her second year of life and had unfortunately started to instinctualy and magicaly sharpened her spikes, claws and tail.
How the carefree and playful dragon welp seem to know when her leg, tail and neck bracers needed replacing was beyond him, but he was just happy noone got accidentally hurt.
Bright Mac spoke up to his daughter:
"I was very worried about you last night, when I keep hearing you whimpering in your sleep.
Unfortunately did the dragon welp had to nod in confirmation, sadness paintings body language and facial expression. Her growing dream realm affinities had the Alicorn Royal family overworked to slaughter ten of thousands of nighttime attacking parasites Cynders mental defenses at once.
On one hoove Equestria never had enjoyed so mutch good sleep like the day of the royal sisters returning, but as Cynder was literally pulling nation spanning populations of this parasites to her, did the Alicorn as strong they are simply got overwhelmed at their numbers... quantity is a quality all on its own... nothing to underestimate.
Cynder's mind often got overwhelmed in her sleep and she wake up in fear and tears screaming for her family in her squeaky noises.
The Dream guards got finally the praise they yearn for, when the fought night for night to defend the dragon welps mind as long they managed, increasing their mental and physical might from month to month.
For some reason was Cynder unable to speak like a sapient being with her vocal cords, but she had learned to use of a formerly dormant ability to make up for it with telepathy.
Strangely did her voice sounded very mature. If their family didn't know she was a two year old dragon welp, they might mistaken her for a noble pony with a alluring voice that tried to charm them with her voice alone.
This time everyone doubt him after he give all of Canterlot adult population occasionaly foal voices, while the fillies and colts sounded mature.
Mid day when the family and the workers sit down to eat in the middle of their orchard, was a knock on a door to hear.
Instead of just teleporting in, did he liked to bend space and time and connected doors in Canterlot to appearing doors in mid air to announce his coming through.
Lord Discord who didn't want to be called King for some reasons.
Nightmare had a tray of non Apple or Pears desserts with her.
A sneeze revealed Princes Solaris Bluebloods in his mothers neck covered nest of Celestias flowing mane.
The colt got levitated to his best friends in the world and they feeded him one after another.
The little rascal was living it up like a King already.
After the meal did Celestia excused herself with her Foal into the Apple-Pear Orchards house.
But he thought better of it. That way Celestia had Solaris at her side 30/7 with her and none would manage to ruine the foal with nobel Canterlot ideas and non-pony bullshit... easier said than done.
Besides, the Yeti Storm King had legitimate wishes to see the foal dead and worse done to others.
Unfortunately was Discord limited to little pranks and illusions, until he recovered in many decades in the future decades.
The Yeti Storm King empire of Yeti Kingdoms and thiefdoms had massive populations thanks to being uncontested in the coldest areas of the world where for Yeti delicious ice roots grow deep underground.
Yet while this Wookie like horned predators preferred meat instead of vegetarian lifestyle and there solution to growing old was to start wars and die in them, did no nation know them not to start a war every 20-40 years with one nation or another.
The Diamond Dog and Gem Wolf population was their only allied forces.
Unless the Yeti outright kill their 'accumulated work force' as snack in between transportation.
Noone could really stand the Yetis, not even the Diamond Dogs who put profits over sympathetic trading partners.
The other nations know that fact and excused the Gem Fido population more greedy population their support of the Yetis.
It had also the nice side effect being able to free their slaves for a surprisingly equine ransom that even low income citizens of Griffonia could pay.
Win-win for everycreature involved.
Somewhere in the Dragon lands...
A dragon named 'Malefor' was 1 of 10 remaining specimens of his subrace of dragons that thrive under parasitic dark magic influence and night dream parasites attacks to feed themselves, improving their already impressive natural strength.
He heard rumors that Equestria had finally found a way to have his deliberately spread parasitic dark influence neutralized.
Malefor had to find out the ingredients of the cure and destroy as many of them as possible, the more the better. He could put some of his least tasty followers towards this task.
But unfortunately was he currently hold up, his newest experiment was underway.
Idiots didn't think about him eating the corruption meaning that he would devour them in their entirety.
Once the unique egg was thoroughly corrupted with dark parasitic magic, than he would try share his dark essence with it, so he could have a strong hench dragon that still was below his might.
He thought the first Dragon Lord's name: 'Spyro'
All his previous sons and daughters had not been able to inherit his dark affinities, this time he would succeed.
Without a protective mother to fend him off once they learned of his plans. Spyro would become a ruthless tyrant like him, shackled by respect to his strength and fear of a punishment of it would dare disappointing the might of the future dark dragon high-lord:
Author's Note
Hope you enjoy slow burning stories.
Stay snuggly!
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Chapter 18 - When the world is not a kids show
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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After all that had happened and had been discovered by the Royal sisters, was a lot to be change over the years.
For example would now at least once a year the royal castle and military fortress installations change the Cipher out. While it was not cheap and making some security glyph makers very unhappy due to new demands and regulations that they had to satisfy their customers with, did thanks to Luna and Nightmare Moon was clear that a Cipers being 10 years or older was unacceptable.
While they never actually breached it rather than, sidestep it via a very rare loophole that would be kept open for the royal family convenience, did Luna and Nightmare Moon learned through a 'compromised guard that wanted to come clean' before his goddesses, that the current Cipher had been compromised for as long as he was working for them... with him being at least 21 years in service that meant some personal had to be fired that was responsible for even allowing so vast security leaks to stand for so long.
Many organizations had a lot of the more... should they be called morality flexible guards?
Other had family's that got pressured and had to obey or else... apparently did many ponies got way to inspired by criminal novel books to come up with very eccentric ways to make someone suffer.
Clear to say that 20 former pony nobelhouses had been terminated for high treason and the possession of highly illegal materials and pieces of knowledge stolen from the royal library by making copies of them.
Family clans like for example 'the Naysays' are partially pardoned, because no highly illegal dark magic or other regular illegal stuff was found in their clans possession.
While many interessting sums of gold and other valuable goodies had changed hooves, did Naysay had believability on his side after he let himself on his own insisting scan for magic manipulation and other means of making someone more susceptible to outside influence.
While it was only trace amounts that he could've taken for a eventualities like this to happen over years, did 'High Princess of Equestria Celestia', give him the reason of a doubt and for a price... that was basically a personal minder and a placement on the watch list for troublesome individuals, let him and his family clan of the hook.
Nothing as empty as gold or gems would do to strengthen trust between them, but informations on the other hoove would be welcomed.
For example how he himself and his dearest friends, got gang pressured to follow through with activities and them giving financial support to groups like: 'Prey first' or 'Advantage of high grade self defense for the civilian sector'.
The Black Hoove Agents did a excellent job in ripping large networks of corruption out of the hearts of Canterlot with these new informations.
Manhatten and Cloudsdale in particular seem to be besides Canterlot the hide quarters for this scum to reinforce their roots into Equestrias economy.
Apparently did they had learned how crowded jails in Equestria for the really dangerous criminals had become, for self entitled and whining wanne be masters of crime, they had surprisingly mutch spine to fight to their dying breath.
The royal familys house cleaning was very effectively crippeling crime lords and many corrupted elements in their justice system, according to Sir Naysay and Sir Inkwell, who confirmed that all their associates that are not gang pressured into following had been apprehended or killed.
They thanked their majestys for their mercy to spare their family clans, since they get
Celestia would keep a eye open for them, they get one chance to redeem themself and no more.
The dream guards had received a strong infusion of financial aid and recruits.
The purge of the dream realm of this over millenia festering problem need to be finally addressed. It might take decades,
As a side effect they had eventually redicules strong guards physically and mentally. All by regular consumption of dream parasites magic release upon their termination, was just the metaphorical cherry on top.
Research was started to collect the released magic of dream parasites and used it for non dream guards.
Though Luna would have to keep a close eye on it, because that mutch activity hunting in the dream realm would not go unnoticed by the older Tantabus inhabitants and might force them to take unexpected action against a intrusion of their realm to a extent, where mutual respect towards ones hunting grounds was no longer stopping one side from harming the other.
This might yet present a set of unforeseen complications for the future to come.
Tarterus continued to get modernized and while it was a huge risk, did Discord ask the two main inhabitants to be let out of Tarterus to regenerate mana and help in their unique ways to modernized Tarterus inside and out.
Grogar with the help of the freshly executed former nobel ponies as tireless and cheap work force and Tirek by having dream guards mana stores partially absorbed and the Centaur physical strength temporarily restore, to help with
How Tirek reluctant verbally protesting agreed, but regardless without fail returned his 'borrowed magic and mana' after completing his assignments, give them all hope that Grogar and Tirek if not reformed, at least leave to where they come before their attack on Equus.
Grogar and Tirek had been rulers of their own kingdoms in the far past after all.
Everyone especially Tirek and Grogar agreed that a eternity in Tarterus makes things like world domination really undesirable.
They further would have to return to their domain and most likely start from scratch to build their lost kingdom into a state that even allowed them to be a threat once more.
Their time in Tarterus would most likely be enough to ever return to this realm of existence ever again.
The Tree if Harmony was fuming in rage... the script she was following was falling apart piece by piece.
'The Tree of Harmony' continued to plot... it would fullfill its role in the greater picture yet.
Cynder training continued to progress, slowly but with success that could be measured depending on the excercised aspect.
Currently she could breath 10 firestreams for 8,5 seconds over a range of 10 meters or alternatively full recovered 20 fireballs over up to 100 meter range, before her throat started to become painfully sore from overstrained use.
She managed up to 10 bolts of dark magic lightning attack from her mouth, but fall unconscious shortly after, caused by magical exhaustion rather than physical fatigue.
Luna and Nightmare teached her to turn into a black cloud that was save from physical damage,
Cynder also showed latent psychic powers, unfortunately was she to young and mentally not mature enough to unlock them. With exception of the telepathy ability.
Cynder most likely would develop in time psychic abilities, as for example telekinesis.
She was to young for combat training and her currently full day and night cycles, had been filled with activities one way or another.
If Cynder wasn't trying to sleep properly and become the dream realms biggest light tower, due to her inability to hide herself anymore... the weight of strength and its price for obtaining its power.
Did she started to participate in dream parasite hunting. If she had to endure being attacked when she tried to rest her mind instead of keeping it busy, than she had to at least try making the best about it.
Interessting enough did she didn't get effected the same way others did, the only thing it seem to do to her was increased temporary mental and physical and magical regeneration.
While the only permanent effect seem to be a increase in speed and agility as well durability of her spikes and claws.
While noone would test it, would even the Alicorn battle armor
One thing Luna and Nightmare Moon had to learn the hard way was how not everything harmless looking was actually that way.
Only because there was a colorful bottle that seemingly got knocked over and had colorful looking candys, always read the labels and if in doubt:
Another hard lesson they both had to learn was:
While they had only fun and games in mind, things and actions have consequences!
For example was another lesson:
At least the ponies enjoyed a new short tail hair trend, when nobel ponies visiting the castle see their Queen having her marehood at full display.
Although some suspected her to be a shameless flirt or a really thirsty mare... something they all would love to help with., stallions and mares alike.
Fun fact: Even if the mane and tail hair look like mystical clouds, they are still just that, tail hair bleeding of mana in a spectacular manner.
Many stallions learned that their self control wasn't as good as they expected. So Queen Nightmare just had given by accident, what she was getting back... quite the sight to behold.
It was a time where pony eyeplates just showed how big they could apper to grow with the iris taking all available space...
These days at least the royal guards didn't complain about boring patrol duties, once their Queen walked past them.
Author's Note
Remember:
Keep them save by telling them if they make mistakes and store medications out of children and adults with childrens maturity mindset out of reach...
Stay snuggly
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Chapter 19 - Consequences
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Consequences sometimes come immediately, more often than not they take time, but there are always consequences for one self or another.
As the royal sisters that had spend countless time on the Moon just learned, didn't all thing could be fixed or ignored with sufficient magic thrown at a problem.
A lot of their problems could be fixed with water, food and sufficiently potent potions that might have raised the dead and make them dance the tango... or what ever dance they learned through their lifetime.
But some problems just had to be fixed the hard way...
Since they didn't use massiv amounts of mana to merely keep themselves alive on a dead moon that was more of a miniature planet, did they had to spend it somehow else.
Unfortunately if someone has a ice affinity it might cause a short time climatic change when the blast zone is covered in meter thick areas of ice as a result, that every Pegasus in weather jobs have to correct over time...
Tornadoes are no laughing matters.
Having to be put under the scalpel, because the lungs had over millenia breath in tiny amounts of moon dust, adding up in clogged lungs.
Having Stallions and Mares around in estrius season... or the chronological thirsty ones.
Having admiring Stallions and Mares that wanted to court the sexy imortals. Especially with one cutting her tail off to show of her marehood like a 'all you can eat' open invitation...
Luna and Nightmare had not as mutch to laugh the first 2 years of their return as they hoped...
Alicorns don't do filling of tooth due to teeth decaying or root canals procedures.
After the purge of over the half main string pulling nobels in Canterlot, Cloudsdale and Manehatten, did a lot of crime subtlety got lost.
The most ruthless idiots got themselves and their followers arrested or killed, before the one without shit for brains actually started to make a decent job.
Over the next decade would crime again grow more subtleties and would need another purging.
This alone ruined a lot of tourismus for Equestrian City's and Villages.
Many benefits the corrupted organisation brought like a stable economy, suddenly collapsed and the 'Golden Age' was surprisingly fast over.
At least all the money and art pieces taken from the criminal familys and organizations had helped to balance it roughly out.
With not to many open ponies actually capable to fill the holes in the nobility and the knowledge to do them correctly, did many trading agreements needed to be renegotiated. They ended off worse for the Equestrians, since they had partially really nasty delays.
When a certain Apple-Pear clan had the food ready, but transportation and storage and finally distribution failed, did Equestria had to become for some time very dependable for outside help.
That brought surprisingly issues on its own, but that should be explained by someone that actually knows how to write stuff like that...
The Naysay and Inkwell clan become the foundation of the recovery effort of Equestria, yet while they managed very well all things considered, did someponys spread the idea that the economy collapse was caused by Griffons, rather than the royal family 'cleaning house'.
Suddenly was the friendly Griffon next door not longer looking so friendly and many insecure ponies insisting on self defense training and gimmicks to be sold.
Years later would two sibling con artists thrive in this environment... though they produced a few of good things to leave authorities undecided if to lock them up for good or wait for one of their revolutionary rare inventions.
With Equestria in a economy weakened state, many helps to Yeti attacked nations started to fail to come early enough to count and the national community cooperation started to slowly fall apart.
When the Griffon nobility managed to get themselves killed because all their horded wealth, was not be able to be exchanged into food and other things the population needed, did a internal war ripped Griffonia into pieces.
Many minor nobel houses tried in vain to flee, when the lower class needed a scapegoat to pounce on.
Many Griffon Chick's supposed to be only in Equestrian schools for a year at a time or two suddenly become orphans.
A certain Griffon chick found in all this chaos a new family that take her in, when a multi colored foal told her parents that her best Griffon friend had nowhere to go... Rainbow Dash new adopted griffon sister Gilda Flash-Dash joined Equestria permanently.
Fates shifted and destiny could not longer hold course.
Apparently who ever designed fate and destiny has not counted with a tiny but mighty Dragoness and a Draconequus to play like it like children building spaceships out of Lego-Playhouse sets.
That day the world would shake, as if it tried to losed a stone that had blocked its clockwork.
The tapestry of the world destiny would have to be fundamentaly renewed and the balance of the world have to be restored in ways noone could predict.
One thing that got a massiv boost was the orphanages and the school system in Equestria, effecting unexpectedly many years later other nations by mimicking its concepts.
Construction of new buildings and renovation or extensions got added to already existing infrastructures.
Still home schooling was rather common for many families, especially the nobility preferred it that way.
Cynder learned a lot of stuff she had noticed, but needed someone to teach her anyway so it stuck to her memories properly.
The day and night lasted 15 hours eatch.
Week days are named:
Though depending on the nation week day names might change, though it was widely used for international trading and the economic different system to get a common ground to work on.
Other things like how their alphabet looked like, really give her slightly problems.
Funny coincidence.
At least that was all their world had in common with the anime. Cynder would have hated to have to accept that any meat dishes would require sapient beings to die for it... as would be the consequences of having every animal as a Pokémon.
Besides the standard educational system was also a magicaly educational system in place, not important if Kirin, Yak, Pegasus, Dragon, Diamond/Gem Dog, Bicorn, Griffon, Minotaur or Earthpony, they all learned it because everycreature had magic and even if not very talented in it, everyone could work it!
Glyph writing made magic possible for any race. What and how well they could work it was determined by internal mana pool or substitutes like Gems infused with magic.
But a Gem holding water affinity mana would not work fire spells. Magic was simply that way...
The biggest consequence to all recent events of economical world unstability was that many nations stopped giving one another military support outside key Citys, outside of major events that reached beyond a village or two like pandemic outbreaks or wanna be revolutionary groups trying pretend to know better than the countless millenia old immortals either leading a nation or traveling the world to life their existence as they see fit, under the radar of law and order ideally.
Though tax evasive behavior was commonly overlooked on their part.
Equestria helped only by sending Celestia out to 'Solar Lance' Yeti areas out by random for activ military intervention.
Usually military intervention of demigod powermoves would get any race towards the community of nations communication range to get stuff like that to stop, any sane leadership would also try to get equine-itarian aid for their people.
Not to forget that all the increased moisture in the world atmosphere from melting huge areas of ice into steam made rainstorms and wild wind storms so problematic, that Celestia was approached to stop roasting the Yetis...
Of course would the Moon vacation sisters of Equestria had a high demand to catch up with laws and social standards to start helping out in any ruling capacity.
At some point do the Alicorns wished for a free day on the Moon or two, with them realizing that in Celestias care law and order had expanded and become so complicated that hole professionally trained branches had to be established to keep it running and minimizing loopholes to keep order in a sea of rules and regulations.
The Equestrian law and order military and non military institutions once freed of noblepony corruption, did a stellar shining job in keeping government and its citizens in order.
Especially Celestia needed help ruling Equestria and guiding it allies, since she was a newly baked mother.
Making things more often complicated beyond imagination. Unfortunately making some aspects slower than they should be.
So the Author would just ignore the details and move on... seriously unnecessary stuff that got mentioned but never explained to mutch in detail
Cadance the pink Griffon chick had her royal family more often than not to busy to raise her, so Cynder got a new honorary sister.
Cadance would not grow up a singel child anymore. Further would she know the plight and benefits of growing up mostly as a normal citizen.
The Tree of Harmony was metaphorical fuming with rage and throwing up a tantrum in frustration that was noticeable as a earthquake within the Everfree Forest.
Harmony was now widening her contemplations... maybe it was time to stop playing exclusively for the 'good guys'.
Cynder was three years of age now.
Author's Note
Hope you liked that stuff.
Stay snuggly
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Chapter 20 - Cynder third year living in Equestria
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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After Cynder reached her third year living in Equestria, did things became a bit more busy.
They even become popular under the Griffon soldiers in training, with some additional difficulties added with airborne elements.
Some enchanted training dummys completed the course.
From:
The Black Hooves flinching slightly, when Cynder showed proficiency in hitting and slicing off parts noone wanted ever see hit that way again... preferably ever.
Later a way more difficult and dangerous parkour got made by the Griffons to add more variables to their training.
Air Griffons, Earth Griffons or Mage Griffons, all had their strong and weak sides running it through. But every Griffon was to be able to manage to make it through. Even if they could not finish in certain time frames.
When Cynder was going one night out of her house towards the Village, did the Black Hoove learned to never let themself be slacking in their diligence, when on 'Cynder watch duty'.
The panic was short lived, but Cynder being no longer in her room with Applejack, Cadance and Big Macintosh was discovered, when during the shift change her bracelet and necklace got pinged on as standard procedure.
While no audiable alert was raised, did a certain Queen was displeased to be awakend during the night. When she learned that the dragon welp was no longer in the Orchard, did roughly 200 Black Hoove Agents and sleeping cover agents converge on the village sweet and treat bakers house in case of foul play.
While Cynder was found unharmed and alone with a belly aching due to sugar poisoning, did the situation was still not acceptable.
Noone was replaced, but a certain shift of Black Hooves Agents got blue hooves from all the extra work they had to do as part of their punishment for slacking in guard duty to the most important unique being on Equus.
Blueberry cider was getting more accessible the next season thanks to the extra work the Ling got put up to, making a mare named Berry Twist a very famous and slightly richer pony.
Since Chrysalis was a diligent and reliable sister and Queen, did she not try to cover up for her children's failure. Still did her sisters only started to calm down, when the standard 3 agents with reinforcements summoning crystals got raised to 9 Black Hoove Agents with summoning crystals and dragon fire scrolls to alert the stationed Griffon and Pony militia, 'WHEN' not 'IF' it actually wasn't a false alarm anymore.
Cynder would next time she sneak out of the Orchard unfortunately have learned a new ability to concealed herself and the bracers signature.
The intervals of Cynder bracers to get pinged got raised to one ping a hour and her new bracelet and collar, could not longer be concealed by her new ability.
Unfortunately didn't anyling expected that Cynder might take off the bracers and necklace. When they needed to call the royals to locate the dragon welp, was noone happy how often up to this day Cynder could have been potencial be taken away... it just needed to happen once to ruine everyone chances if they ever would get infected after all.
With Cynder being found in the Ponyville Guard food storage having raided the MRE -packages for their treats... leaving many open to spoilage rations behind. Something the on watch standing agents get blamed for, having let her get to them in the first place.
But better all this small alerts with leaks in security found and eliminated, than having someone doing it for them with the intention of keeping Cynder for themself.
When Cynder tried tricking the 'take off alert', by Cynder first using concealment and than removing them. This made the Black Hoove Agents stop panicking who got the night shift with Cynder, to be punished when she again tricked them all... the dragon welp stayed unpunished, since she revealed a mountain of flaws that needed fixing over time.
Unfortunately did Cynder started to play hide and seek during the day with the Black Hoove Agents with increasingly more clever or abstract hiding places.
The little trouble maker sure was doing it deliberately by now.
The Black Hooves relished the challenge.
While Chrysalis enjoyed the dragon welps ability of concealment, did she wondered how a three year old could be possibly that clever and deviously creative:
The closet
Under the bed while under the fresh bed sheets
The cookies jar insides, after eating all the cookies to make place for herself
The ceiling structure wooden aid top side
The backside of a sleeping pig
The inside of a empty barrel
The insides of a lamp shade
Under the sink using chemical cleaning bottles as cover
The insides of the running oven
The backside of the dusty refrigerator
A bread basket filled with flowers
Behind the showers curtain fixture in the room conor
Inside the cloak of a out of duty Black Hoove Agent taking a nap
Inside a stack of cardboard boxes
A digged out hole of a dead apple tree
The empty waste bin
The dirty laundry basket
Under the table curtains
Pretending to be a Cynder plushy inside the foals plushy collection ( she literally didn't react the thirst three time the Black Hoove poked her, until a meat treat make her break the act )
And finally on top of various furnitures.
That was when Chrysalis learned from Luna and Nightmare that their connection to once magic core allowed for them to voiceless talk to one another.
Queen Chrysalis was very impressed, how well spoken and polite the dragon was.
Before the third year was over and Cynder settled down with her hiding acts she pulled all year...
Did Cynder gained the Ability to summoning a strange Glyph card that let her summoning 1-10 living Puppets. Golems that acted like living beings even if their roughly designs Golem exterior didn't show their versatile nature.
Cynder somehow showed the royalty of Equestria how to connect to them to a degree, where they could use them as if they are their original bodies. Minus the limitations that the Golems body had.
When the royals started to drill their pony and griffon Guards, Black Hoove Agents and Cynder herself in their free time, did their abilities to use presets of abilities got eventually discovered, even if they collapse before properly forming.
Apperently was the quality of the Golems mirroring Cynders maturity. Until a certain threshold would be reached, would the living puppets just be good to be used under direct control if not given simple commands.
The Golems only do what Cynder told them in her squeaky voice and noise commands and what they are told over telepathy or the tethered connection magic core to magic core.
Still telling them to do stuff was partially extreamly clunky, so direct control was usually needed to have any use out of them.
Go to point 'A,B,C'.
Follow individual 'A or B'.
Defend / attack that area.
Stand by for orders.
With the knowledge that parasitic dark magic influenced beings could be cured came the skepticism. That was when Celestia with every allied nation witnessed how Tarterus got opened up and slightly malnutrition, but healthy ponies come out to enjoy the sun and started Picknicks all around them.
When Celestia with her foal and her personal advisor joined them, was clear that Celestia had full confidence in them being completely healed.
When they ask why it was only ponies, did Celestia ask who would raise their foreleg if they invested millions worth in bits for the cures efficiency on their own race.
Only Celestia raised her foreleg.
When the Abesinian ask how effective the ponies cure was on a non-pony, did Celestia of course lied that it only had a 2 in 10 chance on the optimistic side. Stating that biological differences are vast, something that wasn't even a lie in itself.
As expected did all Kingdom and Queendom started to pay one of many huge sums of money for research and offered their scientific best personal they had in the medical field.
Celestia ask if they had any ways to protect the researcher from parasitic infections?
Of course was there nothing to research, Cynder had a 100% cure chance, but she had to make up old cure attempts bill's that had never been filled out and the psychological medical staff alone wasn't cheap either.
So in a few years time healing would be increasingly be more efficiently than the years before. In 20 years would it even raise up to 5 out of 10 chances! While a 50/50 gamble was still very high and low at the same time would at least one of the currently foreign sick royal family members be healed, mentally patched up and the cure would unfortunately have not worked on others.
All that money would be actually stuffed into war recovery efforts of the allied nations over time and hold Equestrias own economy to get stabilized.
Equestrias standing was the standing of them all with the Yetis leaving Equestria mostly alone...
Cynder often started to nibbeling during her third year the tail and mane hairs of the Alicorn when they come for a visit. Bright Mac and Butter Cup often nibbeling on the royal mares ears to get them embracing their more sensual and social aspects of their new era in Equestria.
Chrysalis tried to chicken out on it, by turning Griffon what left only ear holes.
Her sisters laughed unhaulted at this silly display of affection.
Life was good.
The Tree of Harmony crossed out the Changeling invasion... some other race would have to invade but who had shape-shifting... hm... unless...
The Tree of Harmony chuckled mischievously for once, what sounded inside the cave system she resided in like wind chimes blowing their merry tones into the wind.
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You motivated me so far to write more actively.
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Chapter 21 - Fourth year living in Equestria
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Cynder enjoyed her end of the third and start of the fourth year living in Equestria with family and friends watching as for once more Luna and Nightmare performed the Summer Solstice event with Celestia sitting that event out once more, despite being there to witness it.
Little Prince Solaris Blueblood and
Celestias actions made the civilian sectors become a lot more busy, when Celestia released all healed ponies from Tarterus that got cured.
Celestia know about the story how Cynder as a egg meet her sisters. The parasitic infection cure was probably a combination out of Cynders vile manipulators and her sister helping what they could to undo it. One more reason to belive that eventually someone would come for Cynder. Experiments of that scale are bloody expensive after all...
Anyway...
Many ponies and non-ponies that are citizens of Equestria give freely funds to support the non-pony research to cure them, so their families could be reunited as well.
The cutest donation was probably the one foal that had donated her freshly of her own pocket money bought cookie to princess Cadance, so she tell her family to help non-ponies to get their mommys back as well.
While Celestia had to fight her mind for it, did a few unsuccessful attempts of cure in general lead to a few cured non-ponies. That mutch Celestia could give for the foals heart felt donation to Cadance.
Meanwhile education was still rather light towards the younglings as to not overwhelming them as they showed more physical than mental development for the moment.
Cynder started to enjoy physical excercises more and more and showed her speed, agility and climbing on walls and ceilings more often.
Her siblings unfortunately could not keep up with her.
When at last Cadance started to slowly fly very close to the ground around, did Cynder was always there to cheer her on.
When Cynder ask via telepathy when, did Silver Tongue told her in probably 20 to 30 years. Since she was a unknown dragon species, he simply did not know it yet.
Cynder almost got shining eyes when ever Cadance started to glide and fly low to the ground. Cynder told of her wish to kiss the sky on her own strength one day.
One interesting thing they learned that the connection of the Alicorns and Changeling give her a few passive abilities:
Cynder could touch, manipulate and stand on clouds like a Pegasus. Unfortunately was she lacking the Pegasus natural cold resistance so a cloud bed would not be to long enjoyed by the welp, until Cynder started to shiver from hypothermia.
Cynder could adjust her tail, spikes and claws length.
Cynder had started to training with her Golems once her own body was to exhausted from running around and made some rather strange body excercises that are rather entertaining to watch. Many wonder where she get the ideas from... One does usually don't make climbing motions with its backlegs or training their tail like that as well.
But her muscles showed a surprisingly good increase in strength output.
Cynders training with the pony and griffon via living puppets even become more popular under the soldiers, when squads started training take downs. While Cynder tried to keep her puppets activ as long she could and coordinate them outside direct control.
Cynder added some additional difficulties, when she learned that the puppets borrowed her experience in things.
When Cynder got archer classes with long bows and crossbows, did the puppets had her proficiency in their use shortly after.
Unfortunately could the puppet not return the favor. Nothing others tried to teach the puppets, was learned by Cynder and once the out of dark mist puppets made Golems dissappeared, stuck around in form of learned lessons.
Still once Cynder realize that all she know how to do could be performed by the living puppets, did a lot of griffon and pony citizens of Ponyville got a helping hand from them.
Older ponies had puppets aiding them transporting shopping bags around.
And so on... and on... and on.
Major Mare didn't returned for her ear nibbeling for some time to the Apple-Pear Family clans Orchard, since she was very busy for some time...
Luna and Nightmare learned rather fast that Cynders enchantment breaking tail attack was extreamly effective against training dummys, but her own puppets showed immunity to the enchantment damaging up to destroying effect of her tail blade.
The Griffon Civil War was rather fast resolved when the population was after the few supposedly nobel griffons, which probably only lasted as long because as Celestia heard later, needed the knowledge where they horded their wealth.
Corruption never got purged without the population of a nation going after it if the government had not something like the Alicorn sisters at their disposal.
The Black Hooves flinching slightly when they showed pictures how some of the corrupt griffons got... deposed.
Noone wanted ever to see these pictures again, yet Celestia insisted that they be preserved.
Air Griffons, Earth Griffons or Mage Griffons of Equestrias military partially returned to Griffonia to help it rebuild.
All systems of governments had their strong and weak sides. With immortals being in very short access, did many mortals had to try their best running it.
Until she be a adult and be able to manage to make it as a leader, would the Griffons have to manage on their own.
Fortunately showed a experiment that Cynders living puppets had no limit how far they can be remote controlled. No matter if they are next door to Cynder or the Abesinian Queendom.
Nightmare, Luna and Chrysalis helped nations by having one puppet eatch in their royal Castle.
Every month did the Nations could share knowledge and suggestions that way.
Even if the nation leaders could not initiate the meeting, it certainly was useful every time the Alicorns started a meeting once they had been ready.
Especially once the Yeti would once more start their next acquisition war... something that would not change until the Yetis current royal bloodline was in power.
The next time the Yetis come, the Alicorns would know it. This time they see how the royal sisters returning hostile actions would look like in pony.
When Cynder was going one night out of her house towards the village with Cadance, did the Black Hoove not been slacking in their diligence.
When the dragon and griffon hatchling tried to sneak into Sugar Cube conor through a open window for a midnight snack, did the Black Hoove let them. Cadance seem to really love this night time raid for sweets.
The day after the children unexpectedly get all sweets for breakfast, Cadance and Cynder didn't participated to mutch that morning and got grumpy because of the wasted opportunity...
Cadance get a bracelet set just like Cynder. Her claws started to leave some not so nice marks on the furniture... especially the one that got passed from one generation to the next.
During Cadance and Cynders next night raid, did the house of the fish meat shop got targeted.
When later reported did Chrysalis was surprised how well Cynder found alternatives for spells intended use.
The Black Hooves spotted a known griffon head hunter stalking the house the hatchlings filled their stomach in.
Just in case the griffon was after the ones they watched after, did they uncloaked before him.
The mercenary become the first inoffical Black Beak Agent of Griffonia the same year, on the Alicorns recommendation later on.
Unexpectedly did Celestia found her foal in the hands of a Yeti when she, Silver Tongue and her foal with two platoons had been visiting Minatorian.
How a Yeti made it into Minatorian grounds, no less into their royal Castle was not important.
But before her 'True vision' could come true, did Discord teleported into the room and snapped the assassins neck with his tail, while pawing Celestia back her foal.
With the sentence:
Celestia never doubt Discords love for her and everyone in her family ever again... what still didn't make him in general any less of a annoying prankster.
Discord had for a relatively long time wondered how he could Celestias string of bad dreams end, that he accidentally give her that one day, he returned.
With that Celestias mind was once at ease, he restored his trust between Celestia and himself.
A clear win-win... seriously who would ever miss a one dimensional selfish homicidal maniac without any redeeming qualities?
Author's Note
Hope you enjoyed Chapter 21.
Anyway...
Stay snuggly
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Chapter 22 - Fifth year living in Equestria
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Cynder enjoyed the end of the fourth year and start of the Fifth year living in Equestria once more with family and friends. Watching as for once all sisters together performed the Summer Solstice event with the Apple-Pear Family and Discord baby sitting the small ones.
Despite all Discord had done for everyone, was he not welcomed by most. He didn't care that mutch, because the ones caring for him, did all the more. He truly feel loved by his family and the Apple-Pear family clan that see him as the odd ball of the family instead of anything more negativ as most other did.
Being there to witness how Equestria shaped up for the better than his counterpart would have allowed them so early, did made him wonder what that Tree was up to... he might have underestimated that crystal plant, if it managed something like his stone imprisonment for thousands of years.
The Tree of Harmony was currently strangling a dragon to death that wanted to make a meal out of it.
Perhaps replacing Tirek with a Dragon was a bad idea after all... but the selection was rather limited overall.
Little Prince Solaris Blueblood and
Cynder as always flabbergasted, running around the area from awesomeness overloading her mind just witnessing the mind blowing event.
The God of Chaos sure enjoyed this chaos generating human in dragon body.
Celestia released all healed ponies that had since be restored sufficiently and showed to be mentally stable enough to be returned from Tarterus to their family, if they had somepony left to get back to. Unfortunately had somecreatures nowhere to go, so Celestia hired them for anything they are good for.
If no open space was in that job line, she just make some space. She financialy supported them until they would stand steady on their own.
A few that got cured, unfortunately had been in the end stages of their natural life's or their mind had been destroyed to mutch by the parasitic magical illness. There was not mutch that could be done about them.
Discord was magicaly to exhausted to help everyone, but occasionally despite all odds, did some younger ponies recovered all on their own.
Celestia worst fears come true about Cynder getting discovered when someone suggested that the parasitic infection cure was probably a combination out of Cynders enchantment breaking tail ability, since the parasitic magical illness could be counted as malicious enchantment in their educated opinion.
They got to close for comfort to the truth, but there wasn't anything that could be done to undo it.
That eventually someone would come for Cynder was clear, but they really hoped the dragon welp could enjoy a normal life a little while longer... every year full of cherished memories.
But with all that was dependent on Cynder, no risk could be taken.
Not ideal, but they had to compromise... life is build around compromises after all.
Cynder, Cadance, Applejack and Big Macintosh got more schooling help, as the royal family hired teachers for young students. Cynder take the best to math and magical glyph topics.
To Queen Chrysalis dismay did her Agents all over the world reported how their royalty demanded them to acquire information about the cure. What component had it so effective towards ponies in the first-time, what about the rumors about the Apple-Pear clan dragon being a part of it and if there was a way to steal research to see if the pony princess of the day really had problems developing non-pony cures.
It took a lot of medical and magic bullshit, but beyond superficial knowledge about 'that can't be used for a Abesinian like for a pony because it would be poisonous' or a 'Minatorian cow would potencial become infertile when certain medications are introduced', did Chrysalis do overall good enough to convince them that:
Yes, it actually is so bloody complicated as expected curing it.
No, they could not find a short cut to avoid paying for the research costs.
No, the researcher could not be bribed, or their notes could be acquired, unless they wanted to get catched by Black Hoove Agents.
The rumors about the Dragon could not be confirmed or found to be false. Especially with Cynder being passively under observation, because princess Cadance was a honorary sister.
Celestia did release a few successful attempts of cured non-ponys that in general didn't lead to a reliable cured to non-ponies in general. That mutch Celestia could give for the ungrateful alliance partners.
Just good Chrysalis had her hooves in everyones national information network.
Cynder in general enjoy physical excercises. Her strength was her speed and agility, but she was now starting to lack behind her pony siblings more and more in physical strength.
Cynder unfortunately could not keep up with them in strength and endurance.
But Cadance was a immortal and Cynder was a very long lived species. So noone was in a hurry to find out.
When at last Cadance started to slowly increase the heights she fly in, did Cynder started to dream about flying and not even the dream parasites could ruine it for her!
Thanks to Cadance bright pink feathers and fur coloring was it not necessary for her to be close to the ground to let Cynder watch her and cheer her on.
Cynder seem to be at awe at that aerial display of Cadance making barrel rolls and loopings in high enough heights to not risk a 'crash and burn'. (Crashing on the ground and suffering frictional burn from the grass or earth ground, until she comes to a stand).
When Cynder tested her maximum telepathy range, did they measured 200 meters.
Cynder almost got shining eyes, when she imagined her puppets flying. With her direct control abilities, could she experience flight prematurely perhaps?
Cynder wish to 'kiss the sky on her own strength' might come closer than expected yet... later than it could have come in use over the years before.
Cynder had continued her training with commanding her Golems, while beside them in her original body and inside a directly controlled puppet besides other puppets following around.
Her progress was slower than she hoped, but over the year did her training showed a good increase in more precise outcomes.
Also a polite asked task was still higher in command structure than a Alicorn stated command.
The summoning individual was always first in the structure of command. Her order also invalidate previously by Alicorns given orders.
Cynders training with the living puppets even become more entertaining and difficult, when group/squads actions started to become part of the training.
While Cynder tried to keep her puppets actively coordinated outside direct control, did they messed up more often than Cynder worried they would. In time would she get the fine commanding out of her puppets, but this was a skill set she would have to work on.
In turn would her puppets be years later as proficient as their master upon summoning, no matter if out of pure dark magic and there for temporarily or with a sacrefice of wood, made permanently to stay.
The puppets borrowed her experiences and statistical abilities in all things that their limits allowed for. While not the strongest, fastest or to durable, they had unlimited stamina and never needed rest, sleep, water or food.
These puppets would make for very high grade guards in the future!
Cynder didn't grow in dexterity in her own body, but that didn't stop her from becoming better in her puppet control training it.
Very unexpected did Luna and Nightmare discovered that puppets could be controlled during sleeping periods. It was a more sluggish control, better for any non combat related task, but it could be done.
Suddenly could Cynder keep herself busy learning or excercise with her puppets during night time.
Unfortunately was that when Cynder had the brilliant idea to continue her food raids, just with the extra step of smuggling the food into the house.
All Black Hooves hoove palmed at that new headache, Queen Chrysalis to their dismay enjoyed to see how dedicated Cynder was to get her sweet tooth filled with sugar.
When Cynder started to use squad tactics to cover her food raids from Black Hooves that tried counter raid her liberated food, was a new game born.
Catch that Candy/Fish/Muffin/Cupcake.
Cynder started to play dirty when up to 18 Black Hooves simply outnumbered her 10 living puppets. Cynder just invented the next day the water pistol with dark pepper combination.
Not a month later was a refined version made available for non lethal take downs of criminals!
This was not going to be the last thing Cynder bring to Equestria... the stun baton would become the go to non lethal weapons besides the pepper water rifles.
Author's Note
Working from time to time on my already released chapters as some might notice.
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Chapter 23 - The big adventure... School time!
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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The 5 years Cynder had been living showed a lot of change for her personally, not a decade into this new world and everything had changed for the world as well...
Cynder had learned a lot for someone her age. She made a lot of acquaintances, had every true friends turned family or honorary family. She had acquired her abilities and trained her skills and body. Alongside her numerous skills. But her hardest challenge was yet to come... Schooling outside home and living along foals with chicks.
O girl... What horrors would await her? Not even the Black Hooves would be able to save her from children being children.
Applejacks the absolutely diabolical cuteness on four hooves. Veteran of many tongue vs hooves fights against Cynder and hoove to hoove fight with her big brother. As well the hoove to beak combat champion.
Big Macintosh the young sturdy colt that was the biggest of them all, second champion of many hoove to hoove, hoove to tongue and hoove to beak fights.
Cynder the undisputed absolute adorable squeaky toy of doom in tongue to hoove and beak fights. A true champion of the gentle roughhousing arts.
Cadance the pretty and pink chick. While mostly on the last place in the roughhousing pole, did she exceptionally was unbeatable in the art of making puppy eyes to get sweets for them all and tickel take downs with her feathers.
Even Discord feared her tickel sneak attacks.
The betting poll was 50/50 on Cynder or Cadance to give the world a heart attack one day as adorable younglings or probably kill males of their respective species with their puppy eyes of doom...
Anyway...
The very first open day of public school today was coming along and the younglings could bearly wait for it.
They all where busy trying to wake Granny Smith up for once. The mare started to feel her twilight years to grind down her slowly failing body...
She was 175 years of age, usually a Earthponys could manage up to 200 without big medical support, but a life of hard honest work finally had started to grind her body into the Earth that had birthed all she had worked and cared for.
Some guessed that the internal magical core was breaking down from overuse... But after millenia of research, did noone really know it for sure...
Today was her joy bringing youngest generation really troublesome.
"Come on wake up or we'll be late." Stated Applejack, Big Mac and Cadance. They hopped around Granny Smith like excited puppys.
Only Cynder seem to have acknowledge her state and snuggeling her face, until Granny Smith surrendered and standed slowly up.
If Granny Smith situation started to degrade further this year, might she not even enjoy being the mighty steed to the breakfast table any longer before Cynder become 6 years old...
After breakfast did Silver Tongue and Granny Smith disappeared for a few minutes. After they had returned did the plan of the day had changed.
After breakfast did everyone got a shower from Butter Cup, while Bright Mac was going somewhere with Granny Smith...
Butter Cup spend some time holding back a laugh as she tried to sneak tickels into her drying of her younglings in.
A magic hot air hair dry maschine helped the younglings to dry up.
Once they where ready, they take the schooling supplies in her hammer space storages and Silver Tongue started to ride them to their first stay.
The way to the school was event less and many greetings come their way.
Many of the parents bring their younglings to the school today. The Ponyville had three huge school complexes, building a 'U' shape. The courtyard was rather huge thanks to the fence between the conor of the school buildings edges.
Many Griffon soldiers roosted on the roof of the school.
While Celestia had ordered more general nutrition dispensers on the other side of the Everfree forest as to lead the majority of all predators away, did eventually new prides and hunting grounds got established and the weakest packs and singel hunters enjoyed their territorys near Ponyville.
Ponyville was a unattractive target since it had a huge collection with ponies with sharp sticks, not to forget the Griffons with sharp sticks that could fly...
But desperation drive some predators to a bad decision that not to rarely ending in the population of feral predators dropping thanks to guards doing their jobs very efficiently.
The Tree of Harmony crossed out feral Predator as death cause for Bright Mac and Butter Cup Apple-Pear death out. To strong military presence to sneak even a top nourished and well trained Alpha predator to the Village or the Orchard.
Death by Tree falling, death by rogue military or death by accident it would have to be.
Death by Tree falling or accidents of any kind it was...
After reaching the school they all evacuated Silver Tongue back and tested out their new magical glyph tattoos located on their neck backside that give them all a transparent looking hammer space storage.
One with more storage space harder to inspect and low level preservation spells reinforced would be made available, once they all reached 30 years of age and be declared adults in Equestrias law.
With the Griffons and Pegasus as we'll Thestral having a life expectation of 160 years was 30 years a good age to be declared adult, when given enough time to mature.
The Unicorns, Bicorn and Kirin see it with only 120 years of life expectation a bit differently, but the law was the law and noone stopped someone at 25 to start acting and jobbing like a adult.
The group of younglings standed together.
As the group leaded by Cynder could get a good look at their new classmates, was it not to surprising to see many air or earth griffons low flight chasing one another to alleviate tension and boredom. The mage Griffon Chick's with their colorful plumage like Cadance had it, rather flocked together as a hole and squeaked and chirped happily with one another.
Cadance was accepted by them like a common family member, the ponies got gently poked and proded to see if they are as soft without feathers as the rumors told them.
And Cynder?
While Cadance was a bit miffed that her most favorite squeaky puppy like sister got so crowded that Cadance would not be able to sneak a head petting in, would she make up that deficit later at home.
When one chick tested Cynders tale and found it dull despite it looking like the sharpest blade to have ever existed...
Cadance would ruthlessly exploit that fact from now on, when Cynder started to tickel her when roughhousing.
Celestia, Chrysalis, Luna and Nightmare enjoying the show by snacking on cookies and biscuits, while watching everything happening before Cynders eyes.
Their magic core connection was also unfortunate sharing parts of Cynders ticklish treatment by Griffons in rows nibbeling the dragon welp, to get it to squeak and hiss in laughing fits.
The day was filled with giggling by the young and antique equally.
Meanwhile did a certain filly lost her only friend in the world, do to him getting a cutie mark and leaving town with his family.
If the Tree of Harmony would have had a face, it would be glowing in glee.
Author's Note
Joy and tragedy, blessings and curses of fate and destiny fall upon many that fateful day...
Proofreading more in detail will be made at a later date.
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Chapter 24 - The big adventure of school and dark secrets within...
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Cynder was very surprised once the school greeting ceremony started, a magical projector showed the faces of all the teachers and director Naysay. The retired politician wanted to help 'shape the next generation' and help 'guiding it into the right direction'.
He helped funding the well armored and spell protected school from outside influences, while having occasional a griffon or ten patrol the corridors in the very unlikely situation where something harmful could have somehow get inside the school. Unlikely as it was so he insisted, would the Naysay Ponyville school for Equestrians never let the future of Equestrian be harmed by any means.
After the little speech of the director did the teachers introduced themselfs and to everyone surprised was their pool of teachers very varied.
Cynder didn't recognize any of the Teachers with exception of a familiar face of a earthpony. Miss Cheerilee Sunflower.
Celestia and Chrysalis frowned, they know Naysay wanted to retire from politics but not that he would become Ponyvilles school director.
They might have to send in a few Black Hooves to observe the school in general.
When the first day ended after the general introduction off the school director and staff, did the Students got a general introduction into the school layout, a overview of emergency collecting areas and where the many toilets are with their brand new
That sure would keep the Naysay family clan remembered. Perhaps why Naysay did it?
After the traditionally celebration of school opening and first day orientation was over, did everyone enjoyed a mixed feast donated by Naysay. In the now decorated and well furnished Courtyards with rain magic shielding.
Where Naysay got a rare and expensive Minatour steak to his red wine, was beyond anyone.
Cynder had somehow fleed the Griffons students tickeling her half to death and finally stopped for a well earned rest. Near a toilet room.
That got Cynder startled in turn and make her jump to Cheerilee eye height.
Shortly after did Cheerilee learned three things:
Telepathy was apparently not that high of a mage spell, if a 5 year old could use it.
Don't judge a book by its cover.
And finally:
As Cynder wanted to ask why all teachers are stallions and her being the only mare in the school staff, did Cheerilee told Cynder that the staff on the school are all residents from Canterlot and are 4th to 2th class nobel ponies that all retired from politics and want a more relaxed lifestyle and hoping to score potencial a few mares as a herd.
Cynder internaly snicker at Cheerilee for forgetting for a moment that Cynder was a welp, instead of a fellow mare. She could relate, the hunting game was very entertaining for both genders.
Until she got accidentally pregnant after two decades of playing the game and never giving celebrated a broken condom as mutch as that one time that give her a son like she never knew before, that she wanted to fill the hole in her heart...
"Yeah, snuggeling is the best." Cynder said as she played the dragon welp role for the adult mares sake.
To change the topic did Cynder used her near future plans in their walked to the inside of the Courtyard, to get Cheerilee back to talk relaxed again:
"So what do you think our first lesson will be, also what do you teach us?" The clever dragon welp asked.
"The alphabet and counting up to 10 or even 20, if you are good at remembering so mutch at once." Did Cheerilee answered.
That was basically all that they could have discussed, because Cynder Apple-Pear just remembered why she had fleed the Courtyard in the first place.
Cadance said aloud:
At that Cynder feel betrayed like never before, just seconds before her doom was sealed a clear deal...
The Staff of the Naysay school minus Cheerilee started their meeting:
"Welcome back to the new 'Pony First' counsel.
A singel Guard gangpressed into service almost got us all killed.
Unfortunately will he sacrefice himself to play the absolutely uncorruptible servant for the Alicorns and will make his daughter Raven Inkwell be Celestias right hoove mare.
I have removed the corrupt elements from the long founders list and only our true believers and heros like Crow Inkwell will be remembered.
May we all life and die in Harmonys embrace and rule over any creature fair, but with ponies at their top.
For the Pony Empire!"
*All attendance cheers in celebration*
"And what about the teacher Cheerilee Sunflower?"
Naysay answered:
As far as i can tell, we celebrate tonight's school opening in the orgy room i build for you as requested.
I made sure, she is one of the open minded mares. I think even a earthpony of her qualities will be out cold from pleasure, once we all had 1 or maybe 2 round with her eatch...
See you all in two hours stallions, be showered and ready to blow her mind with our collective stud efforts."
Meeting end.
Cheerilee Sunflower had the best night of her life. Unfortunately was she indeed a Puddinghead descendants... She lasted all night long and the stallions only managed, to last minute hire and fast instruct the one day staff for tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.
Cheerilee had just won the jackpot of her life.
Her ancestors Puddinghead and Rockhoove would have been proud of her stamina and endurance!
All these stallions are her now...
Author's Note
Not to long and i can start with the Displaced action...
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Chapter 25 - Days come and days go, what have we to show for in the end?
Author's Note
Hope you enjoy the battle of determination to see once family unharmed.
Can't guarantee i keep up the update rate.
This weekend i will write a crossover with a amazing other displaced Author.
Who will be my guest of honor?
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Chapter 25 - Days come and days go, what have we to show for in the end?
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Unexpected did Cynder and her siblings had the first activ school day delayed. By two days and the first day teaching started had longer breaks than on the teachings plan clawed over to their families showed.
Why they didn't use wheelchairs was beyond her.
Cynder smirked at that, kinky stallion.
As Cynder was told by their parents did
Unfortunately is it a common thing that most parent's that are not pony nobels, let others teach their foals. Unfortunately is lack of time or simply no wish there to give their offspring a headstart in life.
But that is a topic better left for now.
A certain Tree of Harmony made sure of it...
Applejack, Cadance and Big Macintosh know the first days teaching already. In fact half a year did they learned what they had been teached by their parents already.
Many were not taught by their parents unfortunately and so eventually the group got bored and started unexpectedly to help the teachers to oversee the students in math and writing classes. While reading was still something they had to master themselves, did the Apple-Pear family get a high praise for their smart, gifted and well raised younglings.
Celestia even thought to use the Apple-Pear clan younglings to teach Blueblood what they already know. Blueblood was a bit younger than them, so they made 15 minutes a few attempts at teaching, before playing and repeatedly going over the alphabet in a playful way.
Blueblood had the alphabet memorized by the month in a singing game.
To know that the Apple-Pear clan see the Alicorns as honorary family without any wish to exploit it, made Celestia hope that her little Colt might already have a excellent pool for a open herd far into the future.
As Chrysalis observed Cynders behavior more recently did she had to wonder if the mature telepathy voice might be a mirror of her mind maturity.
Maybe Cynders unique dark magic made her learn in redicules speeds? She thought as unprecedented as it was, maybe instead of a 5 year old, did she had the mind of a 10 year old.
That could explain a lot.
When Cynder took her seat as Applejack, Big Mac and Cadance did so as well did a new teacher walked in and introduced himself.
The teacher walked in after the bell rang with a few treats in a basket. Positiv reinforcements for positivity and productivity.
"Good morning children my name is Written Script the twenty-first." He said writing his name on the board.
Cynder ask for the twenty-first was for even if she already know it.
When Cynder learned that ponies had a ratio of 1 stallion to 8 mares, did she understand why they tried so often for a colt...
Further was his family a rare breed, they only birthed 1 to 1 ratio. So the royal princess of the sun had payed them hoovesomely and giving them paid help to raise them all, since the stallion would be invaluable to keep Equestrian population stable and...
What ever he was explaining got lost to Cynder when she realized how hard it would be for her to 'get some' if Dragons have similar ratios.
They could ask, but mind reading was not supported by the connection magic core to magic core.
Unfortunately didn't everyone learned as fast then previously predicted and near the end of the year classes shifted.
Cynder noticed that she grow spoiled to have her good acquaintances become friends and finally family. A strange thing now that she think about it... maybe Cynder maturity an common sense did development for this life after all.
Today was the last day of school and they would be going one last time over the alphabet. Everyone, especially the Apple-Pear group had it down and perfectly memorized.
After their first hour of writing, was the not mastered material followed. This time everyone struggled, even Cynder. She could read it, but she still needed to translate the Icognito alphabet to her usual english. While some of her teachers wondered why Cynder made a strange non Icognito alphabet to help her reading, did Chrysalis got very interested in this little detail.
When mathematics come up did Cynder was the best in class, but once more was Cynder going on with slightly changed up numbers.
Later did Chrysalis ask her sisters if they new those numbers or non Equestrian or otherwise used alphabet. Celestia and Nightmare Moon needed to search for that. But had only just remembered to have learned it from their parents. A few millenia ago... very curious.
Something was strange about Cynder, but they could not quite put their hooves on it.
The rest of the day went smoothly for the students and they where sent home.
Cadance would start the next year to play more and more with her fellow griffons. Cynder would smile in the knowledge that her honorary sister was finally losing her shyness and was building friendship and acquaintances outside her precious family.
Especially when old age would unavoidable eventually take all she know away over time...
But that was a very long time into the future, so Cynder pushed this drama to a later date.
The Black Hooves agents following princess Cadance did had a volatile situation at hoove.
Her new six Pegasus classmates had apparently played nearby, when Cadance accidentally crashed into one Pegasus after evading a Griffon student flying home that had almost collided with her.
Flinching AND sharply turning she had mid air crashed into one of her class mates. They both caught themselves in air, but the Pegasus filly had lost a primary when Cadance accidentally grabbed mid fall at her collision partner.
One crying filly and her angry friends on the ground wanted to teach the Griffon pink ruffian a lesson in attacking unprovoked.
Cynder was accompanied by 10 of her living puppets she had in Ponyville.
She had multible living puppets in other nation by now. But they counted currently to her magic core connected extended family.
10 for eatch:
Celestia had her 10 living puppets in research facility, that get tested on anything that they wanted to know, even if some things are more made out of curiosity than scientists desire to learning in case it damaged a puppet.
Cynder could by the end of the 6th year hold 200 puppets in existence.
Otherwise the wooden construction is evacuated by the dark magic and leaves the previous used body behind.
The magic without fail keep returning to Cynder.
Apparently air tight isn't magic tight.
Anyway was Cynder followed by the golems around, while having them hold eatch two baskets full of fruits and other market pre-order wares that only needed picking up.
That was until her connection to Chrysalis showed her that something was happening that conserned her.
Less than a minute of explaining later, did the puppets speed walked towards the orchard while she herself sprinted at speeds she didn't know she had in her. Apparently did all her daily muscles training with forelegs and hindlegs didn't just improve strength, but speed and stamina.
When Cynder caught up to the group of her angry classmates and her featherd sister, did Cadance already had use of the self defense training practice game experience that Cynder had 'played with her'.
So far only 1 Pegasus attacked, while 4 watched impatient to see the Griffon hurt for hurting someone else.
When Cynder jumped the attacker when Cadance had lost balance and landed on her rear defenseless, did the aggravated Pegasus started attacking the dragon that just like the Griffon had unprovoked attacked.
The situation was at best complicated and at worst unsolvable, if they didn't interfere. But the Changeling Queen had orderd to wait and see. Especially when she feel the confidence of Cynder in the situation. So the Black Hoove Agents did their jobs and followed their mothers wishes with compliance.
Cynder dodged and waved between her classmates in their tantrum attacking her.
She was practically dancing around the attacking Pegasus fillies and she sometimes fainted a attack, she never went through with it.
Adrenaline and magic flowed through the dragon welp and the royal family wondered if this welp was really only a child.
Cynder was a warrior and a dancer, a trickster and a very kind soul.
She could have ended the fight minutes ago, yet she let the Pegasus work out their anger on her so they be to busy to harm a sobbing Cadance.
When after 18 minutes the puppets finally come to their master aid was one holding a first aid packet, while another had a Apple pie with him.
The 5 attacking Pegasus fillys did get absolutely winded from their attack non stop.
When they see the puppets behind them, did they fear trouble. When they get handed over sweets, did they confused take them as offered.
Cynder told them she was sorry for the misunderstanding. They can have her candys as excuse for the trouble.
The fillys that had her primary lost got the apple pie and ignored her stinging wing for a time.
That was until after 5 minutes when everything was fine again and Cynder was with Cadance and the puppets on the way home, Cynder collapsed from overstretching her endurance.
Now the Black Hooves finally had reason to act unrestrained.
The Tree of Harmony had seen it all.
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Chapter 26 - The Merchant 1/2
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Chapter 27 - The Merchant 2/2
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Cynder ask about her family and how they do after her death. It was a tough thought about them having to burying her and move on do suddenly after the incident that cost her life.
The Merchant kept track of them apparently, because he expected exactly this conversation to happen. He informed her that they mourned her passing, but they overcome the pain eventually and had been living a happy life together back than.
To be more precise he watched them for many decades, just to see if they be more than he expected them to become. One year here is a decade over there, so if they do the math with her 6 years here that the merchant watched them, he spend over 60 years on earth just to tell Cynder what become of them.
Long story short: Her beloved son never had another child, but her darling granddaughter had 4 children, three boys and a girl.
Cynders son died due to old age, surrounded by family and friends that still lived to that date.
So she can rest easy that they both had fullfilled lives, unfortunately they all three missed a chance to make a mark in history. Unlike here where Cynder literally changed the lives of ten of thousands actively or passively.
But here in a world filled with activ magic did many a individual made quite the impact, even if their names didn't necessarily get writen down in history book or other media of knowledge retainer and their knowledge get lost to time or fools destroying the past knowledge and robbing future generations of the chance to avoid making the present unable to prevent past mistakes to be repeated in the future.
The Merchant come a long way, but he could not see a bright future for fools destroying knowledge of the past only because it didn't fit in their world view or they are simply petty.
Who cares? It's all in the past, but when wars repeatedly happen exactly because of it, than it was noones fault or everyone else but their fault, when it happend again as the mortals always insisted on.
Unlike on her old one would she stay here a lot longer and unlike as a human, she would shape this world and it's people. For better or for worse, but with immortal family members and herself going to live for centuries at the shorter end and multible thousands if not for ten of thousand years at best? She better make her life a good one.
Cynder would probably be sad for a time, but she could finally let her past life rest and dedicate everything she had and was into her new life and family.
But it is how she react to pain past, present and future, that makes all the difference. And that is where the choices of her life come in. There was mutch to consider, the merchant had waited for this and give her a great speech:
"Think about any of your Heroes that you know of.
He obscured them both and only Discord could still listen to them:
"Twilight in the canon timeline had her own reluctance to see past her books, and her need to constantly prove herself to others, especially to her beloved mentor.
Pinkie had her trials growing up and later with archiving her goals and spreading her joy and enjoyment of life and happyness to others.
Applejack had the deaths of both her parents, she needed to find the strength in herself for everyone else to support them. She worked all her life hard to live up to the expectations she and others had of her.
Rainbow had to grow past her own self-confidence, learn to accept help and to make more reasonable choices and keep her expectations less fantasy and keep them closer to reality.
Rarity tasked herself to build a business in a world where the inhabitants usually went in their birthday suit , eventually settled down with a reasonable partner instead of a perfect mate that never existed anywhere outside the realm of books and stories.
Last but maybe most importantly Fluttershy. She is... well Fluttershy. She basically had to constantly improve something about herself, yet she had a impact like very few in history had.
When the merchant looked through the obscuring spell he had woven, did Discord give him the same smirk as he give the chaos god and a griffon version of a thumbs up.
Both the Hero and the Villain experienced pain. But the difference between the two was the hero said, "The world hurt me, and I'm going to make sure no one else ever feels this pain."
The Villain however said, "The world hurt me. Now, I'm going to make sure EVERYONE hurts just as much, or even more!"
The funny thing is, both characters believe they're in right, especially the ones being dead wrong.
So if you can convey that line of thinking in your action and teach other you will make the world a better place, one changed individual at a time.
Never try to change the world on its own, for the creatures in it shape it with their deeds and what they didn't do. If you can make your friends and should you become a leader of a group, your followers feel the experience of your pains and teach their lessons. With this you can change a lot in the world you will be living on for the rest of your life.
You and others might be able to draw them into the worlds you wish to create and make them and yourself laugh, cry or what you desire to experience.
I will give you some time to grow up and become the female you desire to become, but be warned:
I wanted to have your entire family with you as a starting benefit, but it was not to be. It seem the fate I wanted for you to follow had a mind of its own and you have more in some manners and less than I planned for. Make of it what you will, your card have been dealt and you better make the best of it. We all have to, from the most powerful immortal to the preceded weakly mortal.
Before I will be dispelling our privacy a little warning for both our benefits:
Even good deeds have consequences and some cruel actions can have very wide spread benefits.
Discord listening to the words of this void traveled being reminded him of many things he experienced himself in this plain of existence or in another timeline when he explored them for their potencial.
After having delivered, did the merchant had to ask for compensation for his service provided.
Unfortunately did Cynder was way to young and while her abilities indeed started to awaken, they would need at least about a decade to manifest sufficient to be even considered to be send out into the multiverse of the near countless displacement Equestrian versions.
Apparently would he have to accept a incomplete Token, that he would not distribute and later exchange with a fully developed Token that would have her in a matured enough state to have a fighting chance.
The merchant was a bit unsure if this Equestrian 'Tree of Harmony' would not try to pull something, this rather exotic part of the multiverse reminded him of two displaced universes which turned out to have either instabile if not outright hostile mindsets to many unexpected things and individuals not fitting into their 'grand improvised plans'.
The death of a displaced was always regrettably a losing of good harvesting grounds for his customers consumption of entertainment. Why multiverse observing was so prominent with his 6 dimensional customers was beyond him, but as long he got his due rewards it was totally worth its inconveniences.
Cynder created a object that reminded her of the play card she had bought from the vendor that as she now know was apparently a dimensional hopping merchant with merchandise that changed the life's of their consumers beyond her wildest imagination.
Apparently would this 'incomplete Token' be enough to find her in roughly a decade in her universes time and allow him to meet again, when she actually was reasonably more mature to help others and vise versa.
The Merchant had than left business card behind for eatch immortal present and given them a gift in form of a potion.
He opened a gate with the new incomplete Token and it than kinda phase out of existence shortly after.
Discord used his potion on Cynder and her fatigue was undone, more like replaced by a dragon fire inside her that lit her tail metaphoricaly on fire.
Discord further suggested a small visit to the Tree of Harmony cave with his entire family plus Cynder and her family within the Everfree Forest. He was reminded of something the Merchant had warned him of, he didn't want to see the tree to pull something iffy out of it branches.
If Discord had remembered to keep some chaos magic back... he probably would have wasted it on something else before remembering to keep some amount back for the tree pulling some order behind his back.
That crystal tree of unpredictable order was a necessity to be tolerated, occasionally even assisted. After all it had taken the part of its counter into consideration for the extended stoning.
He also wondered why it wasn't already yapping at him about turning heads. Unless Harmony as unlikely as Celestia farting Breezy's out her ears giving Discord a compliment for revival of the Moon and its premature royal family reunion.
Bahhh... unlikely even if this overgrown mineral based air freshener wouldn't be Tarterus bend on knowing all and being ahead of any development.
A not to long time the same day later, did Discord unusually alongside the Alicorn mares and the Apple-Pear clan parents walked for hours through the Everfree Forest with Cynder, Cadance and Blueblood on their back toward their old castle of the three sisters. After all, Chrysalis has since her change done the best to be forgotten and rule with her family from the shadows.
Chrysalis disguised as a teenage Griffon riding Celestias back and entertaining Blueblood with chirping melodies, while her Swarm was clearing the patch of unwelcome opposition.
When they reached a purple sea serpent with a impressive orange face beard, did Celestia introduction was cut short and she acknowledged her next shipment of irredeemable ponies and non ponies alive for his nutritional supplements.
This was a darker side of Equestria that the Apple-Pear parents and Cynder could have done without knowing. Sometimes ignorance was bliss indeed.
Thanks to Steven many jails getting close to overfilling could free capacities. Unfortunately with soon changing policies would Steven have shortly need of hunting again, at least that in turn would help the regulation of the Predator population that had spiked over the years.
Steven jokingly asked if Celestia still was on occasion missing the doors and walking through solid walls where ever she needed to go, what Celestia with a wingpalm explained to have happened almost one century prior. It happend when she over indulge in the Minatour capital on bloodwine.
A honest mistake, she usually as expected was polite enough to use doors or miss that a window, to pass obstructions inside a construction.
The Everfree is dangerous more than other places in Equestria, with exception of the Rainjungle of Equestria that is even more extrem than the Everfree Forest. Anyway it was a well known fact how many ponies and otherwise eatable prey traveld through the Everfree without ever leaving again.
After the royal sisters Queen Nightmare Moon & Princess Luna stopped caring for the Everfree Forest, because Princess Celestia send them to the moon, since she was seen as the lesser princess that was only good for paper work and talking the nobility politely down.
After only a decade of neglect the predators without sufficient food effort switched from pony defenders to their indiscriminately hunting nature.
Stories about how somecreatures friend got gobbled up by a hydra or torn to shreds by a timberwolf, or snapped up by a cragadile, or even just sank into the marsh and drowned like one usually is doing in quicksand while traveling through uncharted Sattle Arabian established routes.
When one predator or another, Timberwolves specifically slipped through Chrysalis Swarm defenses that take serious effort to keep the more daring wood spirits away, than Nightmare Moon giving it a death glare or Luna simply throw it away with telekinesis in the air, their lack of wings made sure they be busy reforming for a while.
Meanwhile the alicorns had fun walking through the usually very deadly Everfree Forest. To their surprise did a trio of Zebra siblings camp lay in their path through the forrest.
After a short talk did it turned out that they are on a self imposed journey to improve the Everfree Forest traveling paths, especially in this area and Discord convinced Celestia to use her Earthpony aspect to grow a conjured Haselnut into a full grown and sturdy tree, so the Zebras had a safe home to return after the Zebras had done their daily work .
Nightmare and Luna had fun using some spells on the tree to warp its inner space, while Celestia made sure the spells didn't harm the new treehouse.
Discord enjoyed this random encounter in their way to the tree of harmony. The act of kindness and generosity of his Alicorn family members was also nice to witness.
The youngest but still experienced Shaman and Alchemist Zecora thanked their royal benefactors, while her brothers already started to explore the treehouse in dream like disbelief.
The Zebra siblings had traveled a long way and they've been together around the clock, yet they really didn't think their timing would spare the time building a retreat for them anywhere this sturdy and spacious.
Since the royal family really lacked more time with a objective in mind, did they dissappeared into the Everfree Forest underbrush as fast as they had appeared.
It was a once in a lifetime opportunity that had resulted randomly in a lot of changes without to mutch effort.
Would they ever think about them tomorrow?
Zecora and her siblings would now play a bigger picture in the future unbeknownst to them and help to unmake Harmonys plan for the Equestrian and non Equestria creature alike of this world.
Meanwhile would Bright Mac and Pear Butter share the knowledge of the Zebras and how they royals give them a treehouse of their own making, leading several nobels to seek out the Zebras and build a work relationship for their Alchemist potions and their knowledge in general.
Zecora and her brothers become not to long after the main suppliers for medication made out of Everfree Forest grown herbs and roots.
Author's Note
Sorry for the long time with no updates, but I am rather busy in the last months.
Especially with one or two accidents that had me away from anything beside text to speech function use and typing occational comments.
Hope you enjoy the chapter and the occasional proofreading I did on other chapters and stories.
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Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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The meeting with the merchant sure was something to remember him by. Discord seem to have made a new friend that was quite the mystery to him as he was to others, that sure would help keep the chaos god entertained every second monday, when they meet for tea and consumable dishes are supposed to happen in the future.
But more interesting to Cynder was the idea what Discord and the Merchant come up with to visit the 'Tree of Harmony' the eternal rival and friendlier nemesis of chaos and change that was Discord in all his mix of aspects.
Discord would guide the Alicorns and the Apple-Pear family with Cynder to the tree semi secret location by hoove.
He could collect chaos magic while they traveled to their destination, further would it be a good time to catch up with what happened over the last millenia.
He vowed in the future when he had recovered to have already made their stay more bearable and less straining, back when they where banished on the Moon.
With so reality bending power did the Alicorn of the sun wondered why he never undone his defeat and imprisonment in the past?
All this power, yet he only used it for their family and its residing nations benefit? Her father/brother in law Discord was indeed a frightening entity, yet it was very assuring that her future would be a bright one, even if bad things would come to happen.
As if to confirm that he would in the future do it or rather having already done it in the future past... these time manipulation sure messed around with ones time perception, while already having done it...
Celestia started to get a headache trying to make sense of it all. Though it was quite a different headache than for example dealing with the stupidity of Canterlots Nobel ponies.
The portal that could be seen through, allowed surprisingly a view into a background that showed Equus from a out of space orbit, to be looked down or up to, depending on the viewpoint.
Damn Discord was deliberately now messing things up to keep it complicated.
It give away a space station or space craft feeling, though he said it was on the moon?
Something everycreature present was curious to learn about, before Discord waved it off as 'spoilers of the past future', for later.
Celestia facehoof at that, making sense of this literally reality and timeline bending entity was madness. As well knowing that a 'later' might meant never.
Discord directed everyone currently with him walking member of the party thoughts towards the offical past, since the future was yet to happen.
Cynder double face clawed at Discord not to subtle way of obviously being clever about leaving things as they are... now... until later?
She was interested to hear how the origin of this world and some of its history played out over the millenia.
What ever it was meaning to hint at.
Discord daughter with Faust in the past that happened somehow in the future, that Draconequus sure loved to mess with time and making it hard to follow his explanations about how easy thing could be if time wasn't as wibbly as it was wobbly.
Further that by no relation what so ever, if they see statues that moved in the blink of a eye, they better don't blink and if able take to the sky to safely put distance to them.
Making sense of Discord sure was a mental hazard... probably something to ask the royals another time when she remembered to ask how they coped with him over the millenia.
But a long story with very complicated and partially contradictory details later... he just said that they are fine and unfortunately they would not meet in Cynders lifetime, unless something very unplanned happend.
Cynder started to get a headache from trying to make sense if and of Discords verbal diarrhea.
He apparently shortly tried to be specific in details, that had everyone trying to follow along, give up shortly after. How Nightmare Moon was coping with that guy in her life was a mystery to Cynder.
From what Discord at least 5 minutes tried to explain had drastic spoilers that could be used for everyone benefit, unfortunately noone payed to mutch attention to the details, due to him giving them headaches trying to follow him in detail or any understanding matter.
But what they take away from what they understand at all:
Cynder was sure that trying to make sense out his non sense was just wasted time and effort.
He was literally something to be ignored half of the time and simply accepted the rest of it, by simply nodding and agreeing.
Unlike the normal or not so normal mortal and immortal, did the Tree of Harmony noticed all the changes in the past and was really tempted to wipe that smug face of Discord through a mountain or three, but unlike him, it would do so with style... where did she misplaced the Crystal Empire for later use again?
How mutch of the original timeline could be salvaged by the end? Harmony dreaded the uncertainty of free will and unbound by fate and destiny.
As they walked through the Everfree Forest, did the predators of flesh and blood had enough self preservation to behave themselves, when confronted with overwhelming telekinesis against them for the more aggressive specimens.
What was rather entertaining would be what the Alicorns did when predators like Manicores omegas of a pride and Parasprites in general come towards them.
Nightmare Moon feeded the hybrid carnivores that look like a tamer version of Discord in variation, with fish and pork meat that she apparently had prepared before hoove, something that made her wonder if their spontaneous adventure into the Everfree was really not planned beforehoove by them.
While Luna was giving ear scritches and hugs to some of the usually deadly creatures of the forest, did Celestia apparently preferred giving belly rubs.
Unfortunately did Cadance and the other didn't get to cuddle the wild animals, since the Alicorns and the Draconequus guaranteed that it wasn't really save to interact with Manticores even when they are playful.
There seem to be a magic spell the Alicorns used to passively keep them relaxed and in a playful mind set and they tried to give the predators insensitive to not see the ponies and Griffon that accompanied them as food, since their alphas would protect their smaller younglings.
Further did Discord collected in the time they walked through the deadly forrest enough chaos magic to very subtle change these primitive creatures mind set.
Harmony wouldn't like that change... but that was future Discord problems.
Somewhere in the future was Discord miffed at the stuff he changed in the past to cause him present problems and unwelcome challenges, but in the end he forgive his past self, because he probably had a reason to mess with himself and shovel negative outcomes towards him in the future present.
The most eventful Manticore beta pack member tried to wrestling playful Celestia to the ground, when the sun monarch overdid it with belly rubs.
Than again, ruling over a nation certainly was a time consuming and very complicated matter, especially with other nations getting to make things even more complex.
This world was no children cartoon though, so she was rather giddy to think about how the few future events like the big red villainous main event in the kids show would play out in real... could a mortal like Twilight really earn immortality like in the show?
But how could experienced and millenia of wisdom armed beings let things escalated so drastically that they could not cope and force a mostly untested hero to take national threat practically on her own.
Cynder hoped that everything would work out somehow, this god level clashing of titans would be nothing she could remotely help with.
Harmony noticed a disturbance in the Everfree Forest and sensed Discord warping her perception of the world with his presence alone, what was that desaster on legs up to this time?
At least he could only do so mutch coming closer to her own area of effect presence magic practically sealing his main bulk of abilities.
Maybe the abandoned Changeling Hive in the deserted sand area would make for a good rally point to meet and recruit her villainous pawns for the near and far future?
Harmony continued to harvest the scales of the dead dragon blocking her cave entry, since he refused to served its purpose, now it would make use of it in another way.
One would guess that their main defense origin would be better protected by default... or Celestia did more than assign a castle full of Thestral as caretaker of her cave.
While the Manticore prides and Timberwolves fruit packs that claimed the food dispersion stations had learned fast not to hurt the hooves that feed them, did the less fortunate predator didn't see it so clearly.
The hungry and less fortunate prides of Manticores and Timberwolve packs of the Everfree Forest inside the chaotic forest are often only to be separated visually and through their body odor, something that often only helped to notice friendly from hostile carnivores way to late.
While they had some snacks for encountered wild life on them, did noone wanted to provide to mutch food for the animals to grow accustomed towards the Thestral patrols.
To keep every predator fed, would create future problems noone wanted to deal with.
To many predators breeding out of control due to food situations encourage breeding their prides to higher numbers, would cause food shortage eventually later down the line, while the bigger spread of new packs would eventually overpopulated the Everfree Forest and risk Ponyville and other villages next to it.
Animal misdirection glyph stones only could do so mutch, before the local guard force had to use force on the lethal wild life.
Celestia said that there was a predator training program to use some domestic packs raised from birth for Equestrian forces from the visually distinctive offshoot packs, reinforced the local guards neatly as their territorys since the villages are part of their prides feeding grounds.
The most visually and pleasant smelling Sakura Tree Timberwolves near Ponyville or the ones that had fruits growing out of their body, made great natural defensive forces, before glyph defense stones and finaly local guard forces had to become a deterrence for the threats to citizens of Equestria.
They trained them to be watch post support in more wild areas of Equestria as well and even managed to breed special breeds that had a big impact on food products, medical industry and general alchemy ingredients.
For example Timberwolves saliva was dependable on their physical health, useful for different things to boost ponies immune systems with weakend infections shots.
The more exotic breeds that standed visually out that provide fruit and liquids like hard Timberwolve cider, something that was harvested and than fermented to produce high value trading goods. As long someone don't care for how honey and similar products are made, they are a rich support to ones dietary needs, building many farming branches to keep ponies supplied with jobs and well received exotic additional products for countless markets.
Another example would be Manticore venom thinned out or magicaly changed. It was made for magnifying efficient hospital sedatives and other medications that helped creatures with injuries or illness to recover more easily.
More extream useful but hard to obtain things could be thing like:
Minatour milk.
Ponies seed for artificial insemination.
Dragon baby teeth for mineral harvesting tools.
Griffon or other species feathers for fashion items and pillow stuffing.
Kirin chest fur.
Seapony body oil was very good to help prevent water damage to ones fur coat for divers, especially for Pegasus and Griffon feathers.
Many other things that probably waiting to be discovered in the future, if species like the reclusive Yak would trade more openly.
New markets often spring stuff like morality questionable but undeniable helpful to create placebo pellets with nutrition additions for the future to help uncurable thing like magic illnesses, that got effected or started because internal strife made them sick through so called 'hopeless magic'.
A rare occurrence that through mental negativity created magical waste production in a body and created many illnesses that unlike many other sicknesses, could be cured with literally living a happy and fullfilled life.
The power of belive could effect ponies and other creatures for better or for worse. Mental health worked in many unexpected ways, despite medical knowledge being rather advanced.
New medications and experimental treatments like that really give good plausible deniability with countless minor ingredients discovered in the last centuries to various ways to combine them.
Cynder was in awe to learn how complex this world was, nothing nearly as complex was to be found in the canon show she watched back than with her granddaughter on TV.
Though she never read the comics that used to be sold alongside the show, so she might have missed things like deeper lore.
Thought they made good progress by hooves, while talking to one another verbally or via telepathy, thanks to being around redicules powerful magic users and good preparation even in short on time as they seem to be coming directly from the hospital and the Merchant first meeting.
But while the time was rather uneventful in the grand sense, they still needed to camp out in the middle of the 'Everfree Forest' one night to reach the 'old Castle of the Sisters'.
It was clear by now that the deitys clearly take their time with this journey to spend some time with one another.
The Everfree Forest was one of the biggest and difficult to travel Forests in all of Equestria, unless one wanted to try traveling unpredictable updrafts and downwinds by flight, one does not simply travel to the Everfree Forest or through it in a matter of hours.
At least not for mortals, while even the royals seem to have a certain respect for its wild, dangerous and yet exotic beauty.
When the group finally reached the castle of the Everfree Forest, formerly known as the castle of the royal sisters, did a big group of Thestral guards escorted them inside to rest their slightly tired unannounced guests.
After a decently provided meal and three cakes for Celestia, did the Thestral celebrated the return of their rulers, even if it was just for a passing visit.
The next day after a few hours of celebration, did the royals finally moved on with their business.
Through a secret passage to the 'Everfree Forest Harmony Tree', did they ventured towards their goal.
Fortunately did the Tree if Harmony was undamaged upon inspection and Celestia made a mental note to block of the natural entry to it.
She shuddered to think how a lone nomadic dragon might have eaten this one of a kind tree for a snack.
The castle certainly needed a modernization, while it was a nice nostalgic thing to see the castles old kitchen be used to bake more traditional cakes, did she preferred not to wait hours on end for her cakes to be completed.
But she was again focusing on the wrong things.
The only way to access the 'Tree of Harmony' needed definitely better protection even with the Elements of Harmony being inactive and useless to any creature.
With Discord and Harmony being so close to one another did the clashing of their magic even on a passive level send out ripples throughout the magic of the world in past, present and on occasion the future.
And so did prematurely things got sent in motion that would change the world forever more... The in time and space displaced by Harmony Crystal Empire remnants shifted sooner than planned and with them the Umbrum prison, awakening the Umbrum far sooner than they should be.
While the Empire return was to come still many years in the future, did the Umbrum prison already started to shift into this world, with this did also the king of shadows started to free himself.
What would the former Wendigo race, mutated by pony magic to Umbrum do when they freed themselves, but the Empire would still not be within reach to take their vengeance upon the crystal creatures of the empire?
The Thestral ponies showed their superior night vision, as well as how it was not very compatible with bright light others might use.
Cynder suggested red light to have a middle ground between day and night time ponies.
Cynder was happy that things she learned as human could be used to the ponies advantage on occasion.
Cynder preferred her own alternative to night vision though. She discover by complet accident that she had some kind of heat vision, when she was on her second ever nom-nom raid for sweets during night raids.
Silver Tongue told her about it once she mentioned it the next day. After she had discovered how to use it reliable for herself, though it was mostly only useful in her opinion during night times when temperatures dropped and body warmth was easier to spot.
Interesting to know was also that not every dragon had heat vision. Some had a special magic vision instead, a more valuable and rare trait that was unfortunately not in her arsenal of natural advantages given to her new body by birth.
Unless she had it and lost it, what wasn't to unlikely with all the changes her body had to endure even before her hatching.
But it would be useless to morn spilled milk, rather Cynder appreciated what she actually had access to currently. Especially since she mostly used her normal vision anyway.
Before they finally reached their travel target, did Discord seperated from the rest of the group, apparently had he suffered growing feelings of weakness the closer he came to the Tree of Harmony.
Nightmare give her husband a parting kiss, while Luna and Chrysalis in her true form parted with him after a heartfelt hug.
When Celestia finally stepped into the cave alone was she saddened to see it only glowing faintly, its magnificent shine nowhere near as when she was last here, to ask Harmony to undo the moon banishment her foolish self had forced upon her family.
Everyone was listening as a unisex voice spoke up to the sun alicorn:
"Hello Celestia, it has been quite a while that you visited me last. I was rather dissapointed that you didn't come more often to pay me a visit after all we have been through. Though I must say, your ponies in this castle are a delightful company to hold.
I hope you don't come here to ask me again to un-do the sealing spell you accidentally casted with my elements of harmony. While the spell is growing weaker with every year, will it still take at the very least a decade of not three until the spell wears out and they be returned.
Keep in mind that you promised me the Elements return, should you fail to find new bearing wielding creatures. As you can see I start to grow ever weaker and eventually I will need them back.
Actually if I wasn't as busy to do that and more, I might had the time to tell you how difficult it is to be keeping it all going without as mutch the occational 'thank you' from anyone but your ponies working in the castle above me.
Though i am dissapointed in you personally, they have been keeping me company over the centuries, for that I have to thank you.
Celestia had the decency to look ashamed of herself at these words.
Harmony was playing dumb, while looking forward to see how mutch Celestia was about to tell her on her own accord. She know of Discord gaining freedom, the moment his presence started to warping her vision within the usual range of him moving around within this world.
She know of Nightmares & Lunas return, when Discord wasn't around to block her abilities to see what happend in the castle, clearing up quickly within hours, when he departed to places unknown.
Would she introduce her darling Blueblood to her? Who could be a better godparent than the god of harmony?
What would she tell about the Griffon deity still growing up. Why was Cadance a Griffon anyway?
Most importantly... What had she to say about that Dragon welp Cynder? That little outsider was quite the thorny deviant, a stone in the gears of her plans that needed removing.
Be it by sending her anywhere else than Equestria or the Dragonlands.
Author's Note
Enjoy the new chapter my der readers
Next story I update, it will probably be my Necromancer story and than... who knows? The Fimfiction muse gives when it pleases her.
Stay snuggly everyony
At this point I have problems keeping the right time measurements the correct way, so I made it complicated enough to look less stupid about it
Happy new year
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Chapter 29 - Meeting Harmony, face to Tree 2/3
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Harmony showed patience and intrigue when Celestia announced Discord return, while leaving a auditable quiver in its voice to pretend to be showing uncertainty if not a fearful attitude toward the chaos bringer, since its strength was overtaxed as it was and the former mighty Tree might have to drop all her magic expanding actions.
Harmony wanted to make some puns, mortals often show coping of stress in dangerous situations with humor after all.
With purposes always behind its actions, even if the Tree ~~had no idea what it was doing it for~~, had always a plan and sense behind its actions.
Unfortunately something of a nessesary evil thing to do, after Discord was banished and made the races of this world very stagnant in their development. Due to stagnation usually leading to ruine in one way or another, was a chance in order due to the wish of the Tree to help its little ponies to become greater than the total sum of its herds mass collection of individuals.
Though her puns and joke really lacking timing for greater effect, did she informed Celestia about temporal anomalies all over the world, suggesting that Discord might be behind it all, now that she know he was free and was the most likely culprit.
Discord had a few itching tail scales, either someone had given him unearned praise, was insulting towards his efforts to make things work out in the end or ... actually that chaos sense had a few other unrelated combinations. He really needed to check his itching and twitching catalog.
That accusation for once was a full truth for the most part, even if it was kinda cheap to guess if something was going south, it be Discord doing, especially if he was to busy recovering from his currently power drained state.
What might hold him now to busy to do some mischief, though it would in theory not stop him at all to come back from the future towards the past of Equestria or other nations for one reason or another.
On rare occasions even the Tree of Harmony had to give him credit to do a reasonable decent job, not screwing everything the chaos bringer touched to end up completely into unconstructive horseapples.
Still... this violent reaction of the world was no joking matter, since it was so bad in some regions of the planet that it stopped time to flow entirely at a stable rate, designing perhaps truely monumental problems for the world and its safety.
Celestia thoughts seem to be distracted and Harmony made it known that she as sole Alicorn ruler now and ever needed to think about tomorrow!
One does not simply damage the environment without suffering dear consequences that are often seen only decades later and are highly regretted, because noone had made a move to stop it and current generations cursed its ancestors for doing the same they themself currently attempted.
Silly mortals often due go for that option, since they are long dead before it became their generations pressing issue.
Celestia was a very busy pony, yet she needed to knock some hours off her working schedule filled clock of her nation wide duties, if a planet wide matter demanded her attention.
Something they are rewarded later for, being free to ling around like only Changelings managed to do. It sure had perks to be of a race that could shape shift and has spells to manipulate memories for emergencies.
For example when a mare woke up with a hangover and foundly remembered enjoying drunkenly a group of ~~Changelings~~ multi species males partying with her privately with thing one only dares to enjoy usually in ones mind, often when one was gossiping about remembering something so one of a kind moments in their life, like a nice multi species mating party.
Mutual beneficial bounds, not to rarely resulting in multi species herds and perhaps soon flocks, once the Griffon race is integrated into the future Equestrian Empire.
So many little pieces that formed a greater hole, be it the two Pegasus floating citys. Like that of 'Las Pegasus' that stays stationary all year around or 'Cloudsdale' the mobil cloud city constantly building smaller extensions that will one day create small Pegasus villages to strengthening the Pegasus population alongside others.
Then there are the Unicorn and Bicorn citys of 'Canterlot' or 'Fillydelphia',
With other locations like the Thestral mainly populating 'Hollow Shades' and 'Smokey Mountains'.
Not to forget the last descendant of the slowly dying out Crystal pony population of the 'Neighara Falls' or 'Tall Tale' the crystal grown little city.
With other locations being mixed in their populations with pony main population.
Though these days some non pony communities with low pony population have taken places for their own, while following the Alicorn rulership like:
With very mixed, but still pony scarcity locations like 'Seaward Shoals' that is mainly populated by Abesinian and Minotaur citizens of Equestria or 'Horseshoe Bay' that has a main population of Hypogriffons and Seaponys that migrated to Equestria for one reason or another.
Just to name a few examples.
But to return at the matter of importance...
Besides the very uncertainty growing situation that a freed Draconequus caused inevitably, did her sisters on the Moon surface had been going through a very disturbing change.
Making it more importantly to find elements of harmony bearing ponies to save the last remaining Alicorns beside Celestia herself to rule over the day and night cycles of the world, giving it a rather stable day and night cycle for everyone to flourish under.
Harmony really played up the conserned friend part up, maybe something to let the night Alicorns look over the fact that Harmony had been occupied mentally when Celestia banished her sisters, only to notice her blunder about blindly trusting Celestias judgment of the past to do the right thing and only use the elements as a last resort 'friendship laser to the face solution' towards enemies of Harmony and its charges she looked after.
They where allies since her creation, so long ago that they are like drinking buddies or sisters of war to the end of time.
Harmony told Celestia further that something very strange happened to the Moon, the scrying spell she used to 'see outside the cave' seem to be very inaccurate if not outright being actively prevented to give sensibel and good enough for interpretation informations back, unless somehow her sisters had turned to pure dark magic constructions, the Moon surface was from one night to another no longer a life devoided ash filled surface and instead is filled to the capacity limit of Harmonys scrying spell to detect life and wild magic, that usually are created from a active flora filled environment.
Harmony told Celestia that Discord obviously had found out that how weak it had become over time and now sabotaged all scrying spell activity the Tree used to keep Equestrians population as safe as possible, only living sapient lifeforms create harmonious charged magic.
Celestia had a amused smile on her muzzle, while and also showing a embarrassed body language that something wasn't adding up in Harmonys assumptions and she had failed to calm the Trees concerned mind sooner.
Celestia then revealed that Discord upon return had saved her sisters rumps from the Moon surface and somehow switch it up with puppet made out of dark magic constructed dummys to take their place.
Further that he had restored the Moon surface that as Harmony knew Celestia herself had accidentally once turned up after having moved the sun to close to the moons surface, igniting the flammable atmosphere and unfortunately everything and everyone on it at the time, before years later banishment was enforced upon her sisters when Celestia had foolishly used the elements of harmony not to banishing her opposing mindsets of her sisters, rather than banishing them body and soul towards the dead moon surface.
At that point did a Luna in her full empowered Alicorn state stepped from the stairs and trotted before Harmony.
Despite Harmony knowing of Lunas return, did the Tree squealed in delight of having her little Wona back despite her being in her adult Luna form.
"I missed you so mutch my little Wona."
Celestia was quite happy to see that the Tree of Harmony was as cuddle needy as in the past, Luna dream realm affinities allowed her somehow to bond more tightly with the Tree of Harmony, that unlike in the real world, could move freely in the dream realm and when not helping out in the dream realm out, come for some entertainment for Lunas dream avatar.
Harmony in the dream realm took from time to time different dream avatar shapes to meet with Luna up.
Harmony had even developed over the first centuries a root for dream pranks, like when Luna pulled Nightmare Moon and Celestia into a shared dream and than snuggeld the mares that are all of a sudden all plushy sized in her uber fluffy form until the night ended.
Or the other time where Harmony was with Lunas aid testing if someone could be tickeld so hard in their dream avatar state, that they are awoken from sleep.
Harmony and Lunas reunion cuddling was interrupted when Nightmare Moon giggling stepped forward at the sight of Luna being absolutely cuddle dominated by Harmonys magical crystal vines.
While Harmony was having the deepest bond towards Luna, with Celestias relationships to Harmony strained, was that to Nightmare Moon between a very close co-working relation and on occasion a fellow cuddle buddy.
The Tree of Harmony had with the passing of Solar Nova Exterminaty, the father of the royal sisters, that become Starswirl the Bearded when he was forced into becoming a mortal again, only a few selected individuals made it into the circel of friends for Harmony.
While even the closest mortal to Harmony was merely a very close acquaintance, at best.
Nightmare Moon give the Tree of Harmony and friend of the family a warm wing hug and than started to introduce her little riders.
Starting with Prince Blueblood of Equestria, the colt was fascinated by the pretty and colorful even if dull shining tree in a cave.
If Harmony told the truth, the colt was her hope to bond Celestia to her and should it ever be needed, replacing her by ascending the colt to become the next Alicorn stallion.
Currently did 5 Alicorn stallions run around the world though only 1 was currently in Equestria where the Tree could observe the stallion 30 hours of the 7 days and nights of the week.
All ascending thanks to Harmony influence on the world, siphon wild magic to empowerment of their physical mortal body, until it got overloaded. This usually is killing the mortal and giving him a chance to ascending if their soul and willpower was sufficient.
So far Harmony had groomed 599 stallion from colt age and attempted to re-create the Alicorn species. Unfortunately did most ponies had dissapointed it by simply dying without coming back as Alicorns.
The ascending of any mortal was complicated, but reasonable easy in its first steps.
First one needed to find and ideally over the years groom a natural stronger than average born pony.
Second did a artificial infusion of magic needed to happen, most reliable was wild magic collected and released in a magical explosiv release, causing forced adaptation, leading otherwise to instantaneous lethal magic mana poisoning.
If successful than the mortal will have the first ascending stage gained alongside a new random attribute of another sub race of the species.
The third step after idealy a full year of stabilization and full assimilation of the body to its new magical composition, than needs to basically repeat the second step and once again survive the outcome.
With the born sub race and the two gained attributes of other races, will now the final step be required.
The previous steps are respectively with a 80% and than 60% success rate.
The fifth step is what decide if a true new Alicorn is created, what its final attribute configuration will be.
The final step is to accept eternity and its consequences. The body will be ripped apart and fused with its soul in the ascending realm of the gods.
The outcome is always either a new immortal that get body beyond any mortal limitations or the applicant might chose to be reborn as a mortal clean slate soul.
The reason why most decline godhood is in its price, immortals have a hard existence. They have to endure the stupidity of mortals, have to suffer the passing of befriended and beloved mortals and most importantly... upon death they stop existing entirely.
While Harmony was slowly infusing Bluebloods body and soul with harmoniously charged magic, did another triple of magical soften crystal vines take hold of the pink juvenile Griffon and mercilessly tickeld it into submission.
After a few minutes having successfully completed the subtle manipulation of the colts body and soul, did the Tree returned Celestias foal and focused on the Griffon goddess.
This pink Griffon juvenile goddess was fully formed and was beyond subtle manipulation, it would have to be the old fashion way to befriend it.
All in due time... all in due time.
Once a tickeld into submission Griffon cub was returned to the Alicorns, namely Celestia since her colt seem to like snuggeling into a fellow aged being did Harmony noticed the last addition still sitting on Nightmare Moon, obscured by her magic waving mane.
When the Tree made contact with Cynder the dragon welp, did the situation from a friendly reunion changed into a desaster about to happen.
With a menacing howl did the Tree of Harmony squeezed down on the welp. Not more than necessarily that it would need, to ensure it didn't escape its grasping vines.
The Tree of Harmonys vine in contact of the dragoness turned dark gray before turning sickly dark purple with smoke like magical mist escaping its vines.
The Tree of Harmony was howling in pain and fury:
" ᛞᚨᚱᚴ᛫ᛗᚨᚷᛁᚳ? "
" ᚨᛒᚩᛗᛁᚾᚨᛏᛁᚩᚾ "
" ᛋᛁᚳᚴ᛫ᚳᚱᛖᚨᛏᚢᚱᛖ᛫ᚩᚠ᛫ᛞᛖᚨᛏᚻ᛫ᚨᚾᛞ᛫ᛞᛖᛋᛏᚱᚢᚳᛏᛁᚩᚾ! "
" ᚤᛟᚢ᛫-᛫ᚹᛁᛚᛚ᛫-᛫ᛒᛖ᛫-᛫ᛈᚢᚱᚷᛖᛞ! "
Before the shocked Alicorns and now in fear crying Griffon and pony younglings could do anything, did the hole cave shook violently.
Everyone in the old Castle of the Everfree Forest and inside the cave could hear a pained, yet furious voice in their mind, giving a powerful impression in their minds internal eye.
The Alicorns froze staring at the Tree of Harmony gobsmacked, never in their existence did they hear Harmony speak in a rage like this, if it wasn't talking about Discord and his deeds.
Right now it was pure undiluted murderous anger, with full intention to kill the welp, until it was dead, no... until not even its very soul would be left behind, to prevent its rebirth into the wheel of life.
As the Alicorns backed away from their usually gentle friend, did Chrysalis moved from the staircase.
Chrysalis wanted to reintroduce herself to Harmony after long last, but this turn of events seem to force her hoove.
Chrysalis turned into her true form and charged two spells, a powerful cutting curse and a telekinesis grip on Cynder.
Harmony was blindsided by her vines around Cynder being cut off her main body and falling with pained motion on the ground, before they seconds later become motionless.
Chrysalis pulled the in fear shacking and tears crying Cynder to her forehooves, the Queen of Changelings would not let anything happen to the welp Cynder, savior of dark parasitic infection plaguing their world.
Even if she would have to go to war with the Harmony construct itself!!!
Author's Note
Well... that happened
Don't forget to turn on when the next ~~episode of DBZ~~ chapter of
Next story updated will be my Necromancer story, probably.
Stay snuggly until than everyone
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Chapter 0 - The End of the old and the beginning of the new
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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"Grandma hurry up or we will be late for all the fun stuff." Her granddaughter Alice said as she tried to pull her beloved Grandmother out of the car, chuckling over her Grandchild's endless energy she remembered having herself back in the day.
"Please don't rush me too much, my little one, we have more than enough time. You will get to see it all in time my dear."
As her son helped her out of the car without stressing the old woman's body to much, she wasn't quite so athletic in her twilight years...
They walked to the convention event place where there was a construction ongoing at the top of the building, but it was said on the news it was completely safe with with a full security inspection the day before the opening. Yet one must wonder why they housed a huge event like this in an unfinished complex, even if it was mainly the final touches and a replacement XXL window or three for better heating efficiency.
The old woman loved spending time with her granddaughter, the joys of a fulfilling life in one's final years. One should value the time left, with family and good final memories.
They all watched her Granddaughters favorite cartoons together like Skylanders Academy and My Little Pony - Friendship is magic.
After hours of fun for her Son and Granddaughter, the old woman looked forward to a well earned rest of her old spine.
With the first day nearly at its end and only 3 hours before closing of the first of three events days would the old Grandmother buy a few Souvenirs for her family to remember her by.
"Hey mister Merchant, how much is that ring?"
The man buying was interested in a ring that seemed to have a well detailed My Little Pony Equestrian flag on it printed. While she was still thinking this Merchant was someone she would not want to meet alone in a dark alley, she had to give him credit for his high value looking merchandise.
The old Grandmother sent her son and her little angel to buy some ice cream, while she would buy there Souvenirs for her family members here.
While the man before her paid and got his wares handed out, she searched her well stuffed purse for her spending money.
The convention event was massive and the themes it had were kid friendly up to mature rated. That He-Man cosplayer sure had a well toned ass, to be young again and go for the hunt. But her Cougars hunt had ended unfortunately 10 years ago with the death of her libido.
Anyway…
The Merchant sure had it all.
The merchant had to her surprise offered a three for one price deal after she had told him she would buy Souvenirs for her whole family.
As long the old customer would allow for a group picture with each family member holding one piece of his sales in hand hugging one another
The old woman had to change her mind about this Merchant, he might look a bit of a oddball but had a heart of gold. What could he otherwise get from a family picture with his sales in hand from one of his customers in a wholesome family hug?
The sale was completed and paid, all that remained as to finish the contract in full, was the family event picture for the nice Merchantman.
She walked to her family and guided them to the Merchant and explained the deal.
The Merchant waited patiently for father and daughter to finish their ice cream, sharing the grandmother's one since she declined to eat hers.
The old Woman made some smalltalk while her family tried not to suffer too much from brain freeze. Even the Merchant had to laugh at the adorable faces Alice was making after her third brain freeze attack.
"Hey Ma, remember when you used to take me to the Movie theme park?" Her son asked and she remembered.
"Yes I do and you whine on every ride." She said and everyone including the Merchant laughed.
"So what should we do tomorrow first?" The old woman asked them as they looked around.
"I don't know, but how about we buy things for Alice tomorrow morning at full price?" At that the Merchant had a little mischief hiding smile.
One had to put food on the table after all.
I'm sure Alice would love that." She said as he hugged his Mother.
The Merchant seemed to get a bit more giddy when the father and daughter had finished their original ice cream and the little one was almost done with her grandmother's ice cream.
"Profitable day outside the competition with family pictures i hope?" The old woman asked as her son helped a woman pick up her change money after it had spilled out her fallen money purse.
"Yes, a very profitable day actually.
The old woman give him a smile and answered: "Don't worry, good people like you often are favorably supported by lady luck. Tomorrow you probably get a lot more for your best success sold off."
The Merchant had a pleased smile on him after hearing that.
She continued their conversation: "Do you have some more from
The Merchant as response ducking under the counter rummaging through a few boxes pulling out what looked like the dark Cynders figurine with a Collar out and an Applejack figurine with an adorable Cowboy hat on her head out.
Without much words did she buy them full price and put them away with the other already sold items in her now rather overfill purse.
One final thing she ask him for was if he have anything from wizard 101, she remember playing that game a while ago with her Grandchild Alice, but she quite since it was a fucking pay to win and pay to play game as she learned later.
Even the Merchant had an annoyed facial expression when she told him about it.
"Yeah I think i have one thing from it let me get it." He said as he reached under the counter again pulling out a card .
He placed it on the counter and sold it to her.
The old woman would have scoffed at herself buying that much on one day and planning to do so for the remaining other two days, but her family's joy was worth far more than that.
Her son and daughter had still been at helping the woman that lost her money to pick up all the change money others just ignored and walked around them. Extremely rude...
Everyone in the congregation of nerds on this event looked up when they noticed a creaking noise but no one couldn't tell where it was coming from so everyone kept walking, ignoring it.
After a few minutes her son & Alice were done helping the woman. To her son's surprise, did the woman take his daugher in a hug and guide them away from the Merchant. The Merchant visibly frowned as he see his chance of the day walking away.
The old woman excused herself to get her family for the promised group picture.
A large piece of the construction was collapsing right over many of them.
The woman called out to her familie, telling them to move to safety, but screaming all around her drained out her voice as she ran towards them.
Alice was confused by the screaming of everyone around her before she looked up and with fear looked right before her father spotted it as well.
The old woman's body was old, but still rather fit and adrenaline allowed her to manage for one last time to perform as if she was young once more.
She herself was crushed by the falling window.
To her family's surprise there was no human pancake under all the glass that had cracked into countless pieces but had not shattered to become fragmented ballistic death incarnated.
"Ma?!" The Merchant heard his lost chance to make a family one way trip to adventure yelling as loud as he could.
"Well, this was unexpected, I guess I will have to settle with one when I want to send three people.
"Wake up old one, it is time to start the game and rebirth, don't wait for anyone too long..."
She opened her eyes but it was still dark and it felt like she was inside something hard yet slightly giving.
"I have to get out of here" she thought out loud even when no sound escaped her.
She started banging her head against it, but no matter what she did, it didn't crack open and rays of light would not shine through her prison.
She continued pushing with all her body might until her strength was exhausted. She give in to sleepiness and the slowly cooling water she was encased in forced her into a deep slumber.
A day or maybe a night later, hard to tell on the surface of the moon...
Two figures closed in on the stone that wasn't a stone. Both examined the object emanating dark magic. Both frowned when they feel parasitic dark magic running through it.
Whoever did it, had apparently strong enemies to manage to send it to the Moon out of reach of anyone on the planet. They would do for the hatchling what they could, before they sent it back. Linking their magic to the egg to guide its young soul as to prevent it to suffer the dark fate it most likely would suffer in the end.
Seven cycles of day and night and Nightmare Moon managed to purge most of the dark magic and did what never anyone attempted. Make a dark creature with dark magic that wasn't parasitic or aggressively feeding around its user's environment.
Luna in the meantime infuse her own and her sister's magic into the hatchling. It's magical core would instead of spreading dark magic, devour it without going for any other magical aspects.
They established a link between the unborn core and their own. This in turn would not just create an unbreakable bond between them, but would allow them to become one in mind if they ever wished to converse with one another.
On the 14 day/night did they heavily enchanted the egg to resist impact of any kind and protect the hatchling within for the next three days.
With a mighty alicorn strength supported *yeet* did they send the hatchling back to the planet's surface.
Author's Note
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[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 3 - Of Apples and science of Dragons 2/2
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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When Granny Smith a bit stiff legged entered the exermination/observation room the hatchling sleep in, did she not know that Nightmare Moon had been leading the hatchling main mind to the dream realm to research its origin and determining how it was far more advanced in thought pattern than a newborn was supposed to be. Maybe finding a stray memory about who was experimenting on her prior to her arrival on the Moon.
The pony elder of the Apple Clan lay down besides the dragon hatchling not knowing it was actually currently used by Princess Luna Dreemur Stellar via remote control, thanks to the linked cores of the hatchling and the two royals on the moon.
When the pony started lovingly hugging the dragon gently did the Lunar Princess had almost tears in her eyes, the hatchling had truly found a loving mare to help it being raise with love and care. Both were falling asleep in one another embrace.
Later the same day did the Luna controlled hatchling awakend to the feeling of the elderly mare cuddling next to it. It was a very comfortable feeling to have one of her subjects so close to her after the dreadful isolation that she and her eldest sister Nightmare Stellar Moon had to endure for almost now 10.000 years.
When she looked around and see the ponies in light green fur coat color continuance toward protectively snuggeling her, did the Wona in Luna form take hold and she snuggeld and nuzzeld the metaphorical stuffing out of the old mare.
Currently Luna occupied the mind scape of the hatchlings body, while Nightmare Moon was investigating the body owners mind...
After only a few hours did the hatchling mind got released back into control of its body and found she had made a cuddlebuddy in her sleep.
As the mare let out a cute yawn, did the former human escaped a audiable dawww.
She had always wanted a pony to snuggel, after so long did her old dream come finally true.
So she cuddle up to the soft pony, who in her sleep tighten her loving grip on her the formerly old woman that was giddy being embraced by the cutest pony she ever meet.
The wholesome snuggeling continued throughout the night when ever they wake up for a moment.
The next morning did more ponies arrived. To the woman become dragon surprise, did one huge horse with wide hips was accompanied with some of her foals apparently.
The voices in her head had to snicker at her first assumption and laugh about the second.
They all dressed up like cliche scientists with their lab coats and security googles and their hoovesies to covers there hooves would made her squeal in cuteness overload if her throat wasn't so sore from yesterday.
The three mares and one stallion surrounded her while she was chilling on her pony pillow. The former human had noticed how some of the ponies with their glowing horns running prickly things on her scaley body or inside it.
It reminded her of spa visits where the costumers got occasionally rubbed in with medical urbs to soothing acing spots or made her skin gently stimulated.
After yesterday with all the horrible things that had happened to her was this unexpected spa like experience almost lulling her to sleep again.
The two horned ponies walked around her occasionaly and seem to massage her with their horn magical touch more thoroughly for a moment they switched directions. Her tail got tingly, when they give it attention. It almost made her giggle.
"Never seen a tail like this before." One of them said, she didn't care mutch what they where saying. The relaxation she experienced was through the roof!
The scent and body warmth of the pony mare she was laying on made it the best day she had for a looong time.
The sounds of the feathered pens on paper was unexpectedly soothing.
One of the voices started wiggling her sword tipped tail around. She was to relaxed to care, so she let her guardian play around with it. Moving it around lazily from left to right, up and down.
Luna had unexpectedly mutch fun playing around with the hatchlings tail.
The surface of the pony that made a spectacular impression of a huge body pillow, was better than any bed she had enjoyed for years.
When one of the ponies played carefully around with her tail by using a hoove, did it feel like something was petting over a finger nail edge.
The stallion of the group was saying something about her tail, but she was to mellow to care what they tried to say.
Even the voices in her mind chilled into a state of
When one of the ponies carefully started playing around with her snout, did she opened her mouth so they could get back to the petting part of her pony spa treatment.
When she get a meaty treat from one of the adorable ponies, did she got reminded how hungry she had become. The newly minted dragon was surprised that her teeth shoot out her gums to rip the treat apart, she would have get used to this feeling.
Pretty unexpected was the feeling like switching a set of teeth with a set of blunt tooth prosthetics to chew with.
When she got her tongue gently tugged on did the three mind linked females came out of their relaxed state and started once more to pay attention to their surroundings.
They sure take there time watching inside her mouth. Had she something stuck between her teeth?
"She seems to be a fire breather." The earth stallion said, the human now dragon had to mentally face palm when the ponies take that into their notes. What else should dragon use?
When the double horned pony checked her mouth, did she accidentally tickeld her snout.
One of the voices noticed to her that the double horned pony was a bicorn, but that wasn't helping to prevent her from sneezing at all...
She heard the huge horse shout:
She could not care why they were so afraid on getting sneezed on, but better to avoid getting it in their face. That was never a nice feeling...
With exception of her living body pillow, did everyone moved away as to not stay in the path of her incoming sneeze. It feel like she might actually accidentally might cough up a gunk ball.
A green firestream escaped her. To her surprise did she throw up some fireworks display, she really was lucky noone got hit by that.
"As you deduced from its mouth attributes, she is a fire breather." The bicorn mare said to the wing and hornless pony stallion.
She briefly mused if normal ponies are handicapped in regards to the others, but the voices give her assurance that they had their own unique strengths and weaknesses.
When the stallion spoke about 'low Mana levels', did the voices in her head send her mental pictures of ponies from being in top condition up to being about to collapse.
After that they keep gently poking and prodding her body, the way they somehow managed to make her insides tingle was amusing and concerning at the same time.
At some point did one of the horned ponies levitated her from the living body pillow. It's only slightly anoy her to not longer have a cuddly pony pillow, but she would tolerate this crime against snuggels for a short time.
She was uncertain what the ponies had in mind floating her from one side of the room to another. Even the voices in her mind did watch on in puzzlement.
Occasionally with a questionable look did they try to find out what was going on.
When she got levitated in different heights around the room, did she get rather distracted by the new experience.
When the ponies with exception of her favorite pony pillow left the room while levitating her with them, did she started to call out to her favorite cuddlebuddy in this crazy world.
After two minutes with constant complaints about forgetting her pony pillow cuddlebuddy, did she repeatedly and insistently reminded them that they forget her friend in the exermination room.
Not 5 minutes after they had been separated from their most cuddly pony ever, did the voices in her mind started to get annoyed as well.
One got the idea to use it tail weapon, this would make their demands for more snuggeling impossible to overlook.
When they hit by accident one of the walls, did it cut through the wall like a hot butterknife trough already melting butter. It was rather disturbing how effective her tail weapon was. But she get assured by her guardian angels that they had it well in claw.
On the pony stallions insistance, did they finaly levitated her back into the room and towards its most snuggly pone embrace. Best pone ever!
After a short contemplation did the big flanked pony told the ponies that they be responsible for the food, cuddles and occasionally petting. At least did that her roommate in her head translated quickly.
The ponies that later turned out not to be the big flanked white horse with wings and a horn foals, than said something along the lines of:
With that the horse and her herd of ponies left the hospital and dissappear.
Meanwhile did the family of her best friend in the world spending more time with her.
Author's Note
As always i wish you a great day, even if I don't always mention it
You hopefully read the story of former harlock5399 now Silas5399 yet?
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[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 11 - Duel of fates, Equestrian vs Minatorian 1/2
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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Bright Macintosh and Iron Faith stand after 10 minutes still in place. The sun was beating merciless down on them. In about 1 hour and 30 minutes would the sun be lowered and the moon would be raised.
The Minatour unlike Bright Mac had a dark fur coat, so night time was not on the ponies side.
He did it carefully only through the frogs of his hooves, instead of doing it as one would expect through the hooves keratin foundation.
While the Minatour would wonder what the pony was waiting for, did Bright Macintosh muscles standed relaxed as to hide how they keep expanding. Unfortunately the moment he would so mutch as move his neck, would he no longer be able to hide it.
Iron Faith was surprised how mutch the pony seem to relaxing at the moment. He didn't use magic to draw power from the Earth, since his hooves are not glowing like cheap nightlights.
Maybe he was waiting for the Night time?
Perhaps the pony was unsure how long the potion he drink needed to get into his blood? If he didn't know that it already was in full effect, than he would not correct his enemy.
While the pony was waiting for the potion to take effect, did he used the time to surface scan the arena they are in. No stones to throw, no sand to blind his opponent, no trees to uproot and use as a club and no water to drown the pony in.
The observing crowd enjoyed the stand off, it seem they enjoyed the show as stalled as it was currently.
He would wait for the Sun to set before he used the darkness to hide his movements better.
A clever bull never played the hero and the only goal he had was surviving, until he could try his luck in another nation.
Bright Macintosh was lucky, his opposition had given him all the time he needed.
This was for his family safety, for their happiness and peaceful foalhood. His princess had warned him... Celestia told him they would be coming for Cynder, it was only a matter of time.
Over - his - dead - fucking - cold - corpse!
So he spoke up:
Iron Faith was flinching in surprise when the Earthponys inhaled sharply and his bodys frame extend massively! What was going on? His hooves still didn't glow and noone would dare work any charms on Celestias and his Ambassadors watchful gaze.
Was he a fool to refuse the flask offered?
This farm pony just got from very well trained to absolutely fucking ridicules. He see that one white Pegasus foal with tiny wings and impressive muscle mass.
This pony just bench press two of them for morning breakfast!
O... by his mothers udders, he doubt that Night time was going to be a point of consideration... was his enemy really only a farmer?
Bright Mac was bursting, his muscles screaming with magic that begged to be released.
His muscle already made the ground beneath him sink slightly in, his body was shaking with slightly stiff movements.
He would have less than 30 minutes time, before his body would collapse and he would not get up again. Everything or nothing.
"My name is Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, you tried to murder my family.
Bright Macintosh was so coldly delivering this line, that he had just frightened himself.
The Minatour had to give it to the farm pony, his delivery left no uncertainty, that he was coming over to kill him. But this game could be played by two!
Time to earn his freedom and leave Equestria behind him.
This would blow up in Celestias face one way or another!
She observed how Bright Macintosh just used a extreamly effective, but outright suicidal Earthpony Black Hoove technique.
Even after getting out of the arena unharmed, he would be bed ridden for months!
This duel was about to be ended very brutally, one way or another. She give Bright Mac with his current expenditures of magic now 9 minutes and 10 seconds.
The Minatour Ambassador was in his office for 30 years and see a lot in his days, before he become a dedicated Ambassador for Equestrian and Minatorian matters. This was plainly the best and most comfortable position to ask for.
Ponies are peaceful and easy going outside nobility that he had to endure 4 days of the week.
Their military was geared towards defense and stalling the enemy, since Celestia was the one taking over the offensive parts.
Armys in historical documents reduced to ash and slag in minutes. Areas glassed and said glass was harvested for pony needs and wants.
Civilian population had no concept of military grade magic or training. Even self defense was very rudimentary at best.
How the bloody udder of Minatorian cows of old, did this Earthponys 'farmer' just used military grade techniques?
Unless the flasks both are spiked from the begin with, this was so far outside usual or unusual that this was almost Rockhoove levels of rare.
They be having someone laying in his own blood before twilight was over... so mutch was sure, blunt force attacks would cause bleeding, even if less than slash and stab wounds resulted it.
It was just good that he ask for the second flask to be levitated towards him, by noone less than his host high Princess Celestia. He would get that flask to his doctor the second he stepped into the ambassadorial building of Minatoria!
Because if the flask was not the cause of the physical changes, than even the least activ magic using subspecies of pony kind would be terrifyingly efficient in any magic usage in conflict to come.
By the grassroots of his family farm, he would have one Tarterus off a story to tell his calves, once he returned in his next vacation window.
Naysay was watching the arena grounds from the beginning. The Minatour unfortunately had enough brain capacity to ask for possible 'foul play', his hired alchemist had not risk to use any obviously spiked potions. All he did include in the potions that possibility get used by both, was a pain suppressor and a nutrition supplement.
Nothing that would be unusually in blood pressure or bleeding suppressor potions.
When he noticed how the low nobelpony of the apple family clan started to gain magic without visible collecting them, did he suspected someone casting a spell on the earthpony farmer.
A spell to see mana flow showed how the apple patriarch actually was collecting magic, without showing any signs. He would have to use his black market connection to research this.
Extremely rare and bloody valuable to sell to others!
This changed just about anything.
Of course would Naysay make it 10 times more profitable for himself to exclusively selling the knowledge in backdoor deals, but the apple clan would be bloody rich anyway.
Naysay hear the pony speak up:
"My name is Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, you tried to murder my family.
Actually Naysay only 5 times the profit would be more fair. It was for the betterment of his fellow ponies after all... no profit is worth the risk to get that stallion aggravated against him or his clan.
The audience was truly seeing something only heard in legends and stories of old.
If they didn't come to witness a duel to the death, the mares would be standing in line to get breed by this absolutely wingless and hornless Alicorn level alpha stud.
He confidently and slowly moved over to the beastly biped that tried killing defenseless minors!
By Celestias flaming teets, this was so unreasonable hot, that they might jump him after the duel was done.
Every mare in attendance hoped that Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, was a national seed banks donating stallion.
Bright Macintosh was always very gregarious and rough and tumble farm pony with a good sense of right and wrong. He is the type to wear his heart on his metaphorical sleeve. He give you the metaphorical shirt off his back or the last bit in his coin purse if he could spare some, he would be the type to throw himself into danger to rescue someone without a second thought.
But if you ever wrong his family or somecreature he cares about, you would made a very dangerous enemy for a very short life.
This Minatour has attempted to murder his family, insulted his foal with scales and had not even the decency to make more than a token effort to ask for forgiveness.
Today Bright Macintosh would take one life and if necessary lay down his life to...
No...
No he would not lay down his life, he would make sure that every singel motherbucking threat to his family would lay down their lifes!
Anyone could die and take the easy way out, he would do it the hard way, the apple way.
Let the enemy of his clan come forthright to him.
He be only sorry to have not lifed longer to keep his clan safe and sound.
He could life with it, he would life with it, until the end of his existance.
May he be drowning in guilt and a pool of his and the enemies blood, he would keep his beloved above it all. So they never would have to.
Because there was no price to high for the happiness of his clan.
As Bright Macintosh came out of his contemplations, did he standed infront of his over him towering enemy and he spoke loud and clear, yet with a coldness that made even Celestia suddenly shudder in appearedly potent fright:
"My name is Bright Macintosh of the apple family clan, you tried to murder my family.
Author's Note
Universe 13 of the 'Draconequus Continuum' Synths Hiveship
Just in case you want to know the roughly shaped political/Nation situation. Minus the Synths that don't exist in this 'Displaced' story.
Inspired by me playing
Gore warning for the next chapter. You might want to skip it if you didn't like to read it.
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[DISPLACED] Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 30 - Meeting Harmony, face to Tree 3/3
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by:
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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The Alicorns backed away from the Tree of Harmony, what caused the Tree to send out it uncut vines to block the stairs, so they could not leave the cave by hoove.
Harmony demanded to have the dragon welp be given to her for extermination.
Harmony repeated her demand and warned them that it will not ask again. They needed to put that threat down as soon as possible.
Celestias horn flared and a magical shield against any magical attacks flickered under difficulty into existence.
The Tree of Harmony was effectivly stopped in its tracks to gain the dragon welp by force for the near future.
Harmony lifted its cut off vines into the air and remerged them with its main body. Just good its pain sensation works differently from fleshy individuals or this might become unnecessary personal.
Chrysalis tilted Cynder right side up with the vines having hold her upside down so she flailed reflexively as further distraction, until the dragon welp could have been dealt with.
Chrysalis bring the terrified dragonness closer to her face and inspected the young female body closer, to see if any damaged had been inflicted yet.
While Chrysalis was examine Cynder, did Celestia ask with a forced calm voice that Harmony needed to explain her actions from moments ago.
Harmonys metaphorical eyes widened in fear, how could Celestia have missed the matter at vines? That welp was a dark magic incarnation, something that had caused countless deaths for centuries. They had after all concluded together that dark magic infected individuals needed to be incarcerated into Tarterus if not killed on the spot or thrown into a vulcano to burn its physical remains.
Harmony had a strained voice like Celestia, a voice that told of supressed aggression for the goal of a comprehensive conversation.
Meanwhile did the guard all over the Everfree Forest fall back to the old castle, this pure murderous intend briefly to feel all over the Forest had given them more than enough reasons to be on high alert and expected the unexpected troubles soon coming their way.
Harmony briefly ignored the Alicorn and shapeshifting equine insectoid to inform the whole castle stationed personal to be cordoned off with no one being allowed to get out of the Forrest.
This threat needed to be isolated from the rest of Equestria, otherwise it might cause the dark infection to be spread and causing more death and suffering for her protected charges.
Harmony just was happy that they know by now not to do unnecessary things like halt all shipments to and from the effected area. Not anything could spread dark magic infections, only infected individuals and magic artefact purposefully made or manipulated to do so.
That spread particular virulent in some cases.
The magic around the not so harmonious Tree flared less aggressive, when conversation started.
Chrysalis narrowed her eyes looking at the Tree, less brightly as she prepared to cast in case the entity had plans to catch them off guard.
The queen of the shapeshifting race turned her attention back to the Tree, after having Blueblood and Cadance reunited with Cynder on her back, having shaped her mane into a protective fluffy cocoon for the younglings convinients.
Harmony spoke up to the immortals, no longer projecting outside the cave:
"Dark magic is like a virus, a very difficult to contain or even healing illness." Harmony could be felt to focus on Luna & Nightmare Moon, "In your time in banishment did the world medicine and science have seen a progressive strong development, many illnesses could be cured these days unlike in the far past, were it was not possible and it merely could be contained, if not needed to be aggressive destroyed alongside the infected.”
Celestia shuddered when Harmony said it, with Chrysalis giving a mental hug to Celestia via the soul link they shared thanks to the magical core of Cynder.
Before giving time for unnecessary questions, did it not let itself get stop in its monolog to make a example or two:
“Non magical Flesh-eating sicknesses and dark magic infection, both results in lethal outcome for mortals afflicted by it.” Chrysalis nodded at the examples, even if she wasn't sure why Harmony mentioned them now, there seem to be a missing vital information that was misplaced, perhaps hearing the Tree out could shed light on the situation.
“A sickness be it non magical or magical in nature can spread very - very fast. It is in most cases very deadly as well. Unnecessary to mention that a sickness like that is very messy in its presentations, due to all the internal and external bleeding it causes.
Though at least medications have developed so far that it can be cured eventually and the consequences to the body in general can be reversed for the variations that can be healed, at least partially."
Chrysalis and Celestia started to suspect where Harmony was going with this, but they leave her to explain herself, after all one often started to slowly calm down from very strong emotional outbursts usually over time, especially if the satisfaction of getting a aknowledge for ones arguments is given. Something Luna & Nightmare would provide.
Harmony continued after a moment of letting it sink into its audience, already satisfied that Luna and Nightmare seem enthralled into the facts:
The Tree pointed with one of its vines at Celestia:
“Celestia had the last outbreaks before Tarterus was made the default answer to anyone infected with serious sickness like a flesh eating virus often under many day on watch, she kept the infected in solitary isolation for years if the victim managed to hold out that long, thanks to medication that supressed the viral progression and partial restoration of the body.
In some cases a cure was found while they lived, sometimes after they had died to the sickness.
Before Celestia let cured individuals go to any sort of environment else than medical facilities,
There is to be made a strong distinction between physical and magical outbreaks, they effectively influence both aspects, but their origin makes the difference if it can be even attempted to be researched.
A feeling of melancholia came over the room, seemingly emanating from the Tree of Harmony.
"I had Celestia crying to me for hours over 300 years ago, because healing dark magic infections was found out to be impossible to cure.
I am not to proud to admit that i failed to be anything but something to hold on in a situation like that... though i improved in that regard over the centuries, when i made good acquainted individuals here with the stationed ponies and soothed their pain verbally. For the day Celestia needed someone to lighten to her pains, one thing i learned over the years was that listening to someone to talk about their troubles in life often already had a healing element."
Celestia & Chrysalis are sure by now to know where the misunderstanding come from, but just to make sure, they had to let Harmonys monolog run out on is own.
Harmony continued:
The Tree of Harmony stated with mimics of a shoulder/arm shrugs of her crystal vines and continued her monolog.
“They are all supposed to be dead and gone outside Tarterus, at least every Nation is trying it very best to keep it that way.
Any of you should realize the danger of this dragon, Celestia your mortal colt unlike the young Griffon deity Cadance could be infected any moment, yet they are body to body hugging one another... have you gone mad?
At worst in needs seconds of exposure, at best hours. Lets hope it is not to late already!
But the only one i see injured was myself, who still showed the only indication to eliminate the imminent threat to prince Blueblood.
Silence echoed throughout the Cave.
The Tree of Harmony was taken aback when all adults before her suddenly give her a deadpan look, when they all practical simultaneously wingpalmed themself, did the Tree of Harmony had the feeling she was missing a obvious punchline of a joke. The joke was most certainly on it.
But that would be silly, it was with exception of Discord and this dragon welps area of magical range able to see all that happened in Equestria if it focused herself on doing so, even if it needed hours to process everything experienced.
"My dear Tree of Harmony... you have it all wrong... Cynder is not a threat, she is the solution to the threat!"
"You don't feel the same way a parasite dark magic infected individual does, there is no shame you acted prematurely before you actually read her magic right, your vines seem to always act out when in contact with dark magic on the past.
The Tree of Harmony was extreamly confused about what Celestia told her, what was missed by getting into contact... wasn't all dark magic the same in general?
When Chrysalis floated the shaking Cynder to Celestia and Nightmare Moon. They both hold her gently together with telekinesis in the air, to the struggling dragonness displeasure, especially when a crystal vine come towards her.
Like instructed did Harmony slowly extend a crystal vines towards the welp.
It was fascinating!
This little troublemaker was still a paining thorn in its carefully improvised plans, but with adjustments would its little scaled rump might become a major asset, if hold at range and away from the Dragonlands.
This might actually be a solution for the poisoning of the world she was fighting for millenia!
Discord would never let her life it down.
Ssshhhiiiiittt!
Well... that happend so the Tree of Harmony facepalmed metaphorical speaking internally.
Luna brow narrowed when she hear the vines behind them move, but relaxed when the crystal vines no longer obstructed the staircase. She spoke up:
The Tree emanating feeling of shame answered:
Luna satisfied reply:
Luna moved over to hug her old friend, eventually joined by Celestia and the reluctant queens Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon.
"Nopony can look at you now and see the infallible immortal, who would close her eyes when she got into any sort of contradiction, you are willing to accept confrontation through differently running opinions. Yet you are willing to change your mind, if shown to be wrong.
After the group hug was over the Tree of Harmony significance misunderstanding was explained to the guards, visibly relaxing everypony.
With her becoming of age with her 30th birthday/hatchday in a few years decades, unless her dragon subspecies matured differently.
Harmony tried to mend the damaged bridge between it and the others:
With a understanding of mutual benefishal support did they parted ways in retreat into the castle to relax, while some castle staff pampered the crystal tree with extra layers of crystal polish shortly after.
The Tree sighed in relaxation while getting serviced by the Thestrals, perhaps the dragon would not be to hard to tolerate after all.
That inconvenience of a individual would pay it effort in time, perhaps fixing most of its problems eventually. That internal said to itself, if the dragon would ever find its end after the parasitic dark magic was removed world wide, is would only regret it gone because it probably grow accustomed to it, just like one could grow accustomed to some creature like Discord eventually.
The next day Bright Mac and Cynder come along the rulers to make a statement, after a hour or two of catching up and Cynder accepting the Tree of Harmony apologies, did Bright Mac insisted to have a short conversation with the entity that tried to kill his adopted daughter.
Bright Macintosh spoke up in his unbuffed state, with a nearly emotional empty voice.
The Tree of Harmony was radiating amusement, she answered the imputent pony:
A crystal vine moved to pat the pony admonishing on its head, only to be stopped by the stallion suddenly practically exploding in size, squeezing down hard enough to make the vine crack and splinter that got gripped by the fetlock of the stallion.
A very unamused farm pony spoke up to the mighty Harmony:
Harmony wasn't exactly intimidated, but her consequently followed answer had no mockery in it:
"Your life for your daughter well being? That can be arranged, you better pick fights you can actually win little pony. Otherwise it might cost you your mortal little life."
Bright Macintosh wasn't in the mood for ideal threats, so the pulled at the vine, ripping it of the Tree of Harmony trunk and crushing what he was holding in his fetlock to crystal powder, not flinching despite the blood his fetlock was losing slowly.
Bright Mac tossed the ripped of blooded crystal vine at its owner and said:
Next time you will see that i do not make ideal threats, I am very proficient in bucking trees... have a nice day lady Harmony."
When Bright Mac had via the staircase left the cave, did Harmony tried to ignore what happened and reattach her blooded crushed crystal vine, only to find it impossible to re-attach and further starting to break apart.
Harmony throw away the afflicted vine and shuddered in real fright, when it started to hardening and splinter until it was crystal rubble without magic running through it anymore.
Maybe there was more behind Cynder than one magical perception could see, because her adopted fathers blood was saturated in magic harmony properties damaging elements.
Beyond expectations for the first time in millenia... Harmony learned to fear a little mortal it... she... feared with honest respect that previously insignificant looking pony.
Author's Note
Next chapter of this story will not come for some time, other storys need my attention.
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