Chapters There she was, back turned to me. I could barely see her face, but I knew what I saw. She was yellow and had a long pink mane reaching almost to her hooves.
“A pegasus as well,” I thought to myself as I closed the door.
The door startled the mare, and I saw her jump a little.
"I'm sorry. I didn't mean to startle you like that.”
“Oh, um, that's okay. I, um, get startled easily.”
“Like me, I always tended to get startled over the little things and was always embarrassed."
She was now facing me, and I could finally see her face. My God, was she beautiful.
A perfect face and beautiful eyes, God, those eyes were of a sea foam green. I had to take a second to recompose myself before speaking.
"I get it; I always get startled over the little things too.”
“Oh, um, yeah.”
She was shy, and I could see that clearly, just like me. I was always drawn to other shy and quiet ponies like myself because they made me feel safe and secure.
"Maybe you could help me out. I just got to town, hoping to find some work and a place to stay while I get on my hooves."
“Oh, um, well, there are lots of jobs around town, always hiring ponies.”
“That’s great! Any pony you’d recommend?”
“Well, um, Pinkie Pie and her family are always looking for help at Sugar Cube Corner; you could start there.”
"Great, I'll ask her about a job."
"Now, I only need a place to lie my head down."
"Um, well, I do know a place, but um, well..."
"Well?" I asked curiously.
"It's just that I don't usually invite other ponies over."
"Wait, are you offering me a place to stay?"
"Um, maybe?"
"That's very kind of you; I didn't catch your name."
"Oh, um, I'm Fluttershy.”
“My name's Blue Bolt.”
"Oh, um, is it because you're, you know, blue?" she asked curiously.
"Oh, my name? Yeah, my Mom came up with it rather quickly, as you would expect," I let out a small chuckle but was also a bit embarrassed.
"I like it; it fits you well," Fluttershy said.
My cheeks start to warm up and begin to feel red. “Oh no, I thought to myself. It never took long to get me to blush, and this was no different.” “Well, thank you, I appreciate that," I nervously said. “I'm guessing the shyness in your name comes from you, well, being a bit shy?”
I watched as her whole face became red and flushed. “Oh no, that may have been too much I nervously thought.”
“Um, m-maybe,” is all she said.
“Oh, I didn't mean to.”
“No, it's okay. You're right. I'm just shy, is all.”
“Yeah, I know what that's like.”
“It was nice meeting you, Blue Bolt, but I should probably go.”
“Oh, well, it was nice meeting you too, Fluttershy.” Still blushing as she passed me and trotted out the door.
I stood there for a moment, thinking about what had just happened.
"That was such a stupid fucking thing to say." But the more I thought about Fluttershy, the more my mind pondered. There was something about that mare that just felt right. The way she looked and talked, and her scent. God, her scent was empowering. All I could smell through the room was pine and cedar, two of my favorite smells they just so happened to be. I knew I had to see her again. "Wait a minute, wasn't she going to offer me a place to stay? God damn it, I scared her off! Classic Blue Bolt always fucking something up.”
I recomposed and breathed; I needed to find her, apologize, and hope the offer still stands. And with that, I gathered my bags and headed out the door into a beautiful orange and pink sunset.
I went off the beaten path while munching on my cupcake as nightfall began hitting the sky. I was always fascinated with stars and space, wondering what more was out there. If we were the only ponies in Equestria or if there were more out there.
Whenever night hit the sky, I felt a sense of calmness and security. Fewer ponies would be out during the night, making it more peaceful. I was never one for crowds; I always chose small friend groups and rarely attended parties. It was a simple life, just the way I liked it.
I approach hundreds of trees with fresh, ripe apples on them. Earth ponies, indeed, had their work cut out for them. I could never do the work they do; I was just fortunate to have wings, although I didn't use them much. I always had a sense of pride when I would fly in the sky.
A massive barn took my eyes away from the apple trees, where I saw an orange earth pony gathering hay in barrels.
“She might know where the path to Fluttershy's cottage was," I thought. I trotted over to her as she looked up at me.
"Well, Howdy there, stranger! What brings you out to our farm so late?”
“Hey there, my name is Blue Bolt, and I'm new to town."
"Well, you're no stranger anymore! Howdy Blue Bolt, I'm Applejack!"
"Howdy, partner," I said rather awkwardly. "I'm trying to find Fluttershy's cottage. She offered me a place to stay for a bit, told by Pinkie Pie that it's around here somewhere.”
“Fluttershy offering ponies a place to stay? Now that there is a first, she's always inviting every critter over, but other ponies are a surprise.”
“That’s the same thing Pinkie Pie said as well; I feel honored that she would offer me a place to stay, but she never got around to telling me where she lives.”
"Hm, well, I can definitely help you with that, mister; she just lives up ahead on the hill; her cottage sits near the bank of the river and on the outskirts of the ever-free forest.”
“Thanks, Applejack, I appreciate it.”
"No problem, partner; I hope you enjoy Ponyville, and you can't leave my farm without trying some of our family's famous apple cider! Here, this one is on the house; enjoy!" She threw me a pint of cider, and I went into the night's darkness.
She wasn't kidding about the cider; this stuff was to die for as I chugged the rest of it down. My hooves were tired from all the trotting, so I used my wings and flew briefly. I finally reached the top of the hill, and in the distance, I could barely make out a small structure with light illuminating from it. “That must be it; I hope her offer still stands because I am exhausted."
I glided over many ponds and rivers, all with crystal clear water reflecting the moonlight. This area was peaceful, with plenty of privacy from being hidden from the forest. The only sounds I could hear were from crickets and other minor bugs in the distance.
As I got closer, I saw it. There it was, a small cottage sitting all by itself. I finally found Fluttershy. “This was going
I landed on the ground, seeing a single light illuminating inside and all the blinds closed. "Well, at least Fluttershy is home," I thought. Here goes nothing; I go to the door and store my bags. I take a deep breath and knock on the door with my hoof. I wait a few moments and hear nothing, so I try again, a bit louder this time—still nothing.
"God damn it, I thought to myself, she's not even home."
I was ready to turn around when I heard a slight "hello?" from inside.
"Hello? Fluttershy? It's Blue Bolt; I wanted to talk to you about earlier."
I hear her moving inside and finally listen to the locks unlocking, the door turning, and the door opening.
"Oh, um, hi, Blue Bolt."
"Hi, I'm sorry it's late, but I wanted to apologize for what I said earlier about the whole name thing."
"Oh, um, it's okay. You don't have to apologize. I get embarrassed easily.”
“I know how you feel, but I thought I scared you off. I was hoping that offer still stood about staying with you.”
"Oh, I did say that, didn't I?”
“Uh yeah, you did.”
"Um, well, okay, you can come in," Fluttershy said as I gathered my bags and walked in the door.
I woke up to the sun shining down on my face and a beautiful smell coming from the kitchen. I got up from the couch and went towards the aroma.
"Well, good morning, sleepy head!"As Fluttershy looked at me and smiled.
"Good morning, Flutters; how are you this morning?"
"I am doing great; I made you some muffins and tea for breakfast!"
"Thank you, that's very kind of you." I ate a few muffins off the table. "I should head to Sugar Cube Corner soon to start with Pinkie," I said.
"Yes, that sounds like a good idea. I'm sure you'll have a great first day!" Flutters said.
"I never asked you, but do you have a regular job or do your own thing?" I asked curiously.
"Well, um, not precisely, you see, I don't have a job per se; I usually help my friends. I also help with the local critters here in Ponyville."
"That's sweet of you to help the critters," I say.
"Oh yes, I love critters! "I love all the bunnies, birdies, oh they are all so wonderful! I've always had a connection with them since I was a filly, and It's helped me become a better pony."
"That's great, Flutters.!" I said with a smile.
"I should get going," finishing up my muffins & tea.
"Oh yes, you don't want to be late for your first day! Here are some extra muffins in case you get hungry later," she hands me a small pouch.
As Flutters gives the pouch, she approaches me and puts it around my neck. I could smell that fantastic aroma she was putting off, driving me crazy. I've never smelled something so substantial before. I blush a little as she steps away.
"Thanks, Flutters. I appreciate it a lot." "You're welcome, Blue Bolt," as she blushes a bit.
"Have a great first day at work; I'll be here when you return," she says, smirkingly.
I smiled at her, gathered my bags, and headed out the door.
I head into Ponyville to Sugar Cube Corner, where Pinkie Pie awaits me outside the shop.
"Good Morning, Blue, Bolt, are you ready to start the day!?"
"Good morning, Pinkie! I'm eager to get started!"
"Then, let's not waste any time!" She opens the door for us both, and we walk inside behind the counter.
"You will mostly be working behind the counter, helping ponies, selling our treats, and answering their questions! You leave the baking to me and my parents!"
"Sounds great, Pinkie, easy enough!"
"Great, I'll have you shadow me for a bit, and then I'll let you work the counter yourself!"
A few hours pass, and I'm now working the counter myself and helping a few ponies. "So, Blue Bolt, I wanted to ask how it went with Fluttershy last night?" Pinkie asked curiously.
"She is super sweet; she made me food and gave me a place to sleep. I'm very thankful."
"Hm, is that all you think of her?"
"Uh, well, what do you mean?"
"What I mean is, do you like her!?"
"Well, I mean, she's great, but, okay, okay, yes, I like her."
"I knew it! and I think she likes you too!"
"What makes you say that Pinkie?" I asked curiously.
"She never invites other ponies over; she must trust you enough. Secondly, word travels fast here in Ponyville; you must get used to that! Word on the street is that Fluttershy has a crush on the new pony!"
I blush a bit. “That fast, huh?”
"Oh yeah, Blue Bolt, there's no escaping it!"
"I don't understand why she suddenly has an interest in me of all ponies if she's so shy and private. She's lived here all her life, and I've only been here a day, and she likes me?"
"Well, I guess that’s something you’re just going to have to ask her yourself, Blue Bolt!" "Speaking of which, it's quitting time! Good work today," as she throws me a pouch of bits.
"Thanks, Pinkie. I'm going to head back to Flutter's cottage." I gather my belongings with new bits in hoof and make my way out the door
I go down the main street, where I see a merchant mare selling flowers—an excellent opportunity to get something nice for Flutters. I headed to the sales mare and looked at the flowers she had for sale.
"Well, hello there! All my flowers are fresh," the mare said.
"Hi there, I'm looking for something for a special mare."
"I have just the thing for you!" She reaches down and grabs a bouquet of red roses.
"They are beautiful, I say, I'll take them!" I handed over a few bits and headed off to Flutter's cottage.
I heard a voice above the clouds as I headed up the hill.
“Well, well, well, if it isn't the new pony that Fluttershy has a crush on."
I look around, confused, as I say a "hello?" A blue pony with a rainbow-colored mane flew out of the clouds and landed on the ground.
"The name is Rainbow Dash; you must be Blue Bolt."
"Yeah, that's me. How did you guess?"
"Word travels fast around here."
"So, I've heard," I nervously say.
"So, what's the deal with you and Fluttershy?" Rainbow Dash asked curiously.
"The deal?" I nervously ask.
"Um, yeah, what's the deal with you having a crush on one another?"
"Well, I mean, yeah, I like her, and I think she likes me, too."
"Duh, she likes you. I've never seen Fluttershy this social before; it's bizarre. So, have you two gotten to know each other?"
"I mean, I barely moved here and still have much to ask."
"Well, you should know something about Fluttershy."
"What's that?" I ask curiously.
"She hasn't always had it easy, so she's timid and private. She has had some things happen in her past that she won't tell any pony; I've even tried asking her myself but to no avail. She trusts you enough, so you could get her to discuss it.
"Maybe you're right; I want to get to know her better. She's extraordinary; I know she is."
"Well, you better not keep her waiting, Romeo," she chuckles. She then quickly speeds up to the clouds and vanishes.
Rainbow Dash was right with me asking about Fluttershy's past; It made me curious about what she was hiding. We may have more similarities than I initially thought. I arrive at her cottage and knock on the door with my hoof.
"One moment," I hear from behind the door.
The door opens, and I see her beautiful face; she leans in and hugs me around the neck. I instantly felt flushed, and I knew I was blushing. Not only that, but I felt myself getting hard just from that slight touch.
"Nice to see you too," I awkwardly say as she steps away.
"Come in; I made dinner," she says.
I head in, drop my bags on the ground, and remember the flowers I bought her earlier. I reach down into my bag and retrieve them. I headed over to the kitchen and handed them to her.
"These are for you, Flutters, for all you've done for me so far," as I gave her the bouquet of roses.
"Oh, my goodness, these are so pretty; thank you so much, Blue Bolt!"
"You're welcome, Flutters,” I say, slightly blushing.
I retrieved some soup from the stove and sat at the dining room table. I take a spoonful of the soup and slowly sip it.
"Wow, this is good, Flutters; you're quite the cook."
"Oh, it's nothing," she nervously says as she sips. "I've always loved cooking for other ponies; it makes me feel food."
"You make me feel good," I smirkingly say.
"Oh my, I didn't think I'd done that much for you, Blue Bolt."
"Of course, you have Flutters; you've offered me food, a place to stay, and helped me find a job. You've done more
"It's nothing, Blue Bolt. I like helping ponies."
"But that's just the thing, Flutters; I keep hearing you're so shy and private that you usually don't do these things for other ponies. Why me? I'm nothing special, just a lone pegisi looking for a better life here in Ponyville."
"That's just the thing, though, Blue Bolt; you are special; you're special to me."
"I uh, well, you're special to me too, Flutters.”
"But you should know, Blue Bolt, I have been hurt by other ponies."
"Hurt you? I say rather angrily, like physically?"
"No, not like that, but my heart has been hurt greatly."
"Other ponies have used my shyness to their advantage and played me like a fool, taking what they want from me,
Flutters tear up a bit, "But I saw you, Blue Bolt, and I knew you were different. You're not like other ponies; you care, are considerate, and have a true heart, and that's why I like you."
I sit there stunned at the dinner table of what I just heard. I got up, trotted over to Flutters, and hugged her immediately.
"I'm so sorry, Flutters. No pony deserves to go through what you have. But you're strong and made it so far that no pony else should matter."
"Thank you, Blue Bolt," she says as I wipe her tears away.
We sat there momentarily, locking eyes, "should I lean in and kiss her,” I nervously thought? I didn't know if she was ready for that yet. I used my best judgment and decided to back away slowly and wait for the right moment.
"I know what it's like to feel so alone, Flutters. I have always been a lone pony. My father left when I was just a filly, leaving my Mom to raise me.”
“I always had trouble fitting in with other ponies because of who I was. I just wanted to be alone, leading to
I started crying and couldn't stop the tears dripping down my face. Flutters approached me and put my head into
"We've both had difficult pasts, but that shouldn't define who we are." I lift my head as she wipes the tears off my face.
"Thank you, Flutters, thank you so much I say. I needed to hear that."
"Anything for you, Blue Bolt; I'm here no matter what."
We lock eyes with each other once again like earlier, this time a bit closer. In a split-second decision, I said "fuck it" in
I've kissed other mares before, but this was different. I have never felt anything so erotic before. Just from that small kiss alone, I got instantly hard, and I think Fluttershy could feel it.
Her lips and mouth were so warm they felt like an oven; it was a warmth that spread across my face and onto my whole
"Yeah, Flutters, it was." Smiling back at her.
9 | Under the Moonlit Sky
"I want to show you something," Flutters said. I follow her out the back door as she opens her wings and begins to fly.
"Hey, wait up!" I say. I catch up to her in the sky as she slows down for me.
"Where are we going?" I ask.
"Somewhere special, you'll see when we get there."
It was always hard for me to trust other ponies, but something with Fluttershy was so easy. Gliding with her under the night sky gave me a sense of safety and security. I've never felt anything like it, not even with my family. When I was with her, all my worries would cease my mind, and I could finally live in the moment with another pony.
For once, I wasn't worrying about my future and contemplating if I would ever amount to the pony I wanted to become.
Flutters started speeding up and glided toward the river beneath us.
"Catch me if you can!" She said smirkingly.
"Oh, you're on!"
I followed her to the river stream and glided between rocks and boulders. The river then closed in through a cavern which, when we entered, the moonlight reflected off the water and displayed on the rocks to make an aurora. When I looked at her, she shone like a million stars. When she looked back at me, she gave me a similar look. It was one of those looks that were hard to describe but, instead, something you must experience. It felt natural and genuine.
It's as if I've known Fluttershy as an old friend for years, and we were now reuniting. Or a long-lost love that never got the chance to express how they felt. But, beyond that, it was a mixture of everything I felt right then and there. The cavern started to open, and we began to descend upwards, where we could now see a cliffside sitting by a lake. I follow Flutters over to the cliff as she begins to land, and I do the same.
"Over here, Blue Bolt!" She said excitedly.
I followed her over to the cliff's edge, where we sat and could now see the surrounding area. In front of us was one of the most beautiful landscapes I had ever seen.
There was the cliff where we sat down and the blue crystal lake down below; in the distance, I could see the outskirts of Ponyville, and up in the mountains, I could faintly make out Canterlot. But the best part? A full moon shining below on a crystal-clear sky with a million stars reflecting down.
It was peaceful, with absolute silence from all around. You could hear a pin drop.
We sat beside one another, and I could feel Flutters slowly ease closer. I finally opened my wing and put it around her, pulling her in closer to me. As I did this, we both looked at each other and blushed.
"Is that better?" I ask rather nervously.
"Much better," Flutters says as she leans into my chest.
We stayed like this for quite some time until I finally asked her what I had been wondering. "Flutters, what did you want to show me?"
"This Blue Bolt," as she looks off into the distance.
I sat there somewhat confused until I started to piece it together.
"To reflect?" I ask.
"Yes," Flutters says, "I come here to this spot when I need to reflect and take it all in. We take life for granted, and we as ponies rarely go out of our way to appreciate our lives."
"I never thought about it that way before. My whole life, I've always been looking towards the future, striving to do my best and hoping I make it. But I have never sat down to reflect on my own life."
"That's why I brought you here; after everything you told me, I knew you would appreciate this as much as I have. Nothing else matters here; you don't have to look towards the future; you and the world alone to reflect." Flutters said. I reached over to Flutters and kissed her on the head.
"Thank you for all of this."
"Of course, Blue Bolt, anything for you."
"If you don't mind, could I have a few minutes to reflect?"
"Oh, of course! I wouldn't take that time away from you. I'll be over by the big pine tree," as she points her hoof in the opposite direction
"Sounds good; I’ll meet you there. I should only be a few minutes."
"Take as much time as you need," Flutters says as she trots over to the other side of the cliff.
I sat there looking off into the distance. At that moment, I felt nothing, no worries, no insecurities, and nothing to bring me down.
Reflection is what I've been missing all my life. My past has never been easy, but I never appreciated the life given to me in the first place.
The only pony that I ever needed in life was myself. If I didn’t have that, who was I? Flutters has taught me so much about myself over just a few days. No pony else has ever taught me how to be myself before. She has taught me to be a better pony, not only to myself but to others. I thought about the present, where I saw myself at that very moment. I wanted a life with Fluttershy. I could see myself spending the rest of my life with her. My past relationships never lasted because I never attempted to maintain them.
But I also never had a real connection with a pony before. Fluttershy was the only one who broke down the walls I had put up for myself all these moons. I slowly sat up from where I was sitting and finally thought about my past depression. Something clicked as soon as I got off the train to Ponyville; it was like a weight lifted off my shoulders. I always loved it back home, but honestly? I didn't miss it.
Of course, I missed my Mom, as is to be expected, but Manehatten itself? I could see myself never going back there. That was where all my past problems stemmed from. It was clear that I needed a fresh start somewhere new. Well, it worked, as I've never felt happier. I could see Flutters lying in the grass in the distance, and I decided to look back one last time at the scenery. I could barely see the sun rising over the mountain as the moon began to set behind me, painting an orange and pink sky above.
It was the perfect end to a beautiful night, or so I thought.
I trotted over to Flutters, where she was lying in the grass looking off into the distance.
"Thank you for giving me those few minutes. I needed that."
"Of course, I knew it would make you feel better," Flutters said with a smile.
I lay down and put my wing around her.
"Can I tell you something, Blue Bolt?" Flutters said, rather intrigued.
"Of course, you can tell me anything," as I tense up a bit.
"Well, um, I've never felt this way with another pony. Romantically, I haven't been in many relationships, and you are the first pony I've felt a genuine connection with. I've only known you for a few days, but it's felt like many moons since we first met. I'm saying, "Well, I like you, I like you a lot, Blue Bolt."
"I feel the same, Flutters; everything you said is the same for me. You give me so much joy every time I see you. Just looking at you makes me smile and feel warm and fuzzy inside. You are a special pony, Fluttershy; I hope you know that."
I see her blushing, and I can feel myself doing the same. She slowly leaned in and kissed me on the cheek, where I could feel her warmth. Her face itself was like an oven. I expected her to stop with that one kiss, but she kept going. It's slower each time on my cheek. She started kissing lower down to my neck, and I could feel myself getting hard.
"Can I, um, bite you a little?" Flutters said somewhat nervously.
"Yes, please, Flutters, you can bite wherever you want."
She slowly started nibbling on my neck as I let out slightly subdued moans. It felt like a million little kisses all over my neck. Once she stopped on one side, she slowly turned her attention to the other, where she continued. I started stroking her mane in one hoof and her back with another as she climbed on top of me and pinned me down; this made me rock hard.
Being dominated by another pony was a first. I liked it a lot. She continued kissing me all over my neck, cheeks, and forehead. She finally lifts, and I can now see her beautiful face. I put my hooves around her and brought her in to kiss her lips. I could taste her saliva in and outside her mouth as I slowly kissed her, each time going a little further in her mouth. After some time, I stuck my tongue in and matched it with hers as we began French kissing. I began stroking Flutter's back, going further down with each stroke. Every time we kissed, we swapped more and more saliva until I could feel it dripping down both of our mouths; that wasn't the only thing that was leaking, though.
From her being on top of me, I could feel her becoming wetter and wetter near my cock. She was only a few inches away from touching it, and I could feel her wetness slowly drizzling down. She finally backed away from kissing, letting out a subdued moan.
"Oh, my Blue Bolt, you're quite the kisser!"
"Well, what can I say? I guess I'm good for something after all," I smirkingly say.
"You're good for a lot more than that," Flutters said as she laid back facing me. She buried her face in my neck and rubbed my chest with her hooves.
She slowly rubs her way down to my cock, where she finally made contact, and I let out a slight moan.
"Is that okay?" Flutters asked.
"Yes, you can do whatever you want to me, Flutters; you have my permission," I said with a smile.
She started kissing my neck again and slowly stroked my cock with more friction each time. I kept moaning with each stroke. It felt terrific; It had been moons since another pony had touched me like she was doing.
I could feel my cock filling up with precum, and I knew she felt it too. She then took her hooves away and moved her head downwards towards my cock.
"Oh fuck, I thought to myself, I've never gotten head before; this was going to be something new."
She slowly started licking my tip and sucking out my precum. With each suck, she put my cock deeper into her mouth until I was in her throat. She slowly started sucking back and forth, all while looking up at me while doing so. It was so fucking hot looking at her while she was sucking me off; all I could let out was,
"Oh fuck, Flutters, that feels so good."
She didn't say anything, but I could tell she was smiling. I started to feel exhausted when I typically did when I was about to climax.
"I couldn't cum now, not this early I thought to myself. Flutters deserved pleasure, which I was going to give." I slowly lifted her head away from my cock and pulled her upwards over my chest, and put her flank directly on top of my face.
"Oh my, Blue Bolt, you're such a gentleman!" Flutters said excitedly.
I slowly started licking her pussy and could hear her moaning above me. She tasted fucking fantastic it was indescribable. It was a mixture of sweetness of what you expect when getting a drink or a treat.
I kept licking back and forth and could feel her pussy quivering with each lick. I finally paid attention to her clit, which I slowly started to lick.
Her whole body jumped as I could feel her back legs begin to tighten around my head, locking me into the position I was in—Flutters then brought my hooves to her chest, where she had me start massaging her breasts.
As I did this, she was moaning even louder, and it was turning me on even more with every whimper and sigh of pleasure; this went on for some time until I could feel her start to stand up off me.
I finally get to pin her down underneath me as I start to rub her pussy. She was incredibly wet, dripping like a waterfall
"Does that feel good, Flutters?" I ask her as I'm stroking her pussy.
"Oh, God, Blue Bolt, yes, it feels so good."
We were almost to the point of going all the way; we've been doing everything except penetration, but I needed to ask her to be sure that's what she wanted.
"Flutters, can I fuck you?"
"Oh, yes, Blue Bolt, I want you to fill me up with your hot stallion cum!"
I was so turned on and hard at that moment my cock was throbbing. I've never had a more substantial erection before.
"Oh, but um, Blue Bolt, please be gentle; this is my first time."
"Oh my God, I thought to myself. Her pussy was about to be so tight I didn't know how I was going to last more than a few seconds."
"I'll go nice and slow for you; if it hurts, just tell me, and I'll stop."
She pulls me in to start kissing, and I slowly move my cock down to her pussy. I slowly started rubbing the outside of her pussy, going up and down her clit as she kept moaning with every stroke.
I then slowly pushed my cock in ever so slightly inside of her, where I could now feel how tight she was. I had to move to even get my cock all the way in from her being so close. We both let out a loud moan as I finally penetrated her all the way.
"Oh fuck, Flutters, you're so tight," I say, holding my breath not to cum.
I slowly started to thrust in and out of her as my cock got more and more wet from being inside. I could already feel myself filling her up with precum and could feel her wetness dripping out onto my balls.
"Oh, God, Blue Bolt, yes, that's it! I want you to make me cum!”
I began to pick up my thrusting and went a bit faster. I wanted to give the most pleasure I possibly could. I kept thrusting until I could feel myself getting to that point of climax.
"This was it, I thought; I had to make Flutters cum; there was not much time."
"I am; oh, fuck I'm going to cum, Flutters!"
"Yes, Blue Bolt! You're going to make me cum!"
I got in a few more thrusts where we both moaned so loud it could have broken a sonic rain boom.
With my final thrust, I let out the most enormous load of cum that has ever come out of my cock. The orgasm was so intense it lasted a solid five seconds, all at the same time; I saw Flutter’s whole body start to shake as she pulled me into her. I could feel her cum oozing out of her pussy and onto my cock as I slowly pulled out. I was so sensitive as I finally pulled out; there was still cum dripping out of my cock. She held me tight and put my head into her chest as she cradled me.
“Oh, my God, Blue Bolt, that was amazing.”
All I could say from being wholly exhausted was, “I love you, Flutters.”
"I love you too, Blue Bolt,” as she slowly kissed my head.
We lay next to one another as the sun finally peaked behind the mountain and onto us, basking us in warmth and painting the sky with an orange and pink sunrise.
“I should probably get to work at Sugar Cube Corner,” I tell Flutters.
“Yeah, I suppose you should, but I just want to stay like this for a few more minutes,” she nuzzles her face into my chest.
We stayed like this for several minutes until we finally gathered our strength from the workout; we just put our bodies through. We begin to fly upwards and back to her cottage as I see a familiar face in the distance. It was Rainbow Dash from the other day.
“Huh, I wonder what she wants,” asked, confused.
“Blue Bolt!” Rainbow Dash shouted.
“What is it?” I yelled back at her.
She proceeds to fly closer to us until we’re talking distance.
“We’ve been looking for you!”
“Looking for me?” I needed clarification.
“Yes, there’s something in town you need to see!”
I look at Flutters, somewhat confused, and she gives me a similar look.
“Okay, does it need to be right this second?” I ask.
“YES, right this second!”
“You should go, Blue Bolt; this sounds important,” as Flutters hugs me and descends.
“Follow me, Blue Bolt,” as Rainbow Dash commanded me.
I follow her back to Ponyville, where most of the town is out for the morning with ponies doing their day-to-day errands. We land down the main street and trot towards Sugar Cube Corner.
“You escorted me back to work? Gee, thanks, Rainbow Dash,” I said somewhat angrily.
“I didn’t bring you all the way here for work, genius,” she said, smirkingly.
“Then why am I here?” I ask.
“See for yourself, dude,” as she gestures at me to open the door.
I open the door with my hoof to see dozens of ponies inside the shop.
“SURPRISE,” they all said collectively.
“What, what’s all this?”
“It’s a surprise party, duh!” Pinkie says, shooting a confetti popper.
“I don’t understand. It’s not my Birthday; was there some event I missed?”
“Not exactly Sugar Cube,” Apple Jack said, sipping some cider.”
“Well, what is it?”
“Oh, Blue Bolt, aren’t you just the cutest?” as Flutters peaks behind the counter.”
“Flutters, what are you doing here?” “All of this is for you!”
“For me?” I ask, needing clarification.
“We all wanted to throw a party for you to celebrate you moving here to Ponyville.” Flutters said.
“It was mostly my idea, to be exact,” Pinkie said, smirkingly.
“Wow, I don’t know what to say, this is great!” I say rather nervously.
“You did always tend to get nervous in large crowds,” a familiar voice said from behind the crowd of ponies.
The mare slowly trotted to the front, where I could finally see who it was. It was my Mother.
“Mom?” What are you doing here? I asked, confused.
“I wanted to see you one last time before you go.”
“One last time?” Mom, what are you talking about?”
“Come with me momentarily, son,” as I follow her behind the store.
“Mom, it’s so good to see you but, I don’t understand what are you doing here?"
"Blue Bolt, I only wanted the best for you from the moment you were born. I did my best to protect, teach, and give you the needed strength. Now all I see is my baby filly all grown up."
I started crying down my face. It was one of those cries where you couldn’t stop it from happening.
“Mom, I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t for you. You sacrificed so much for me, and I will always be grateful.”
“I know you are Blue Bolt; I came here to say goodbye. You’re all grown now and don't need me any longer.”
“What are you talking about, Mom? I will always need you!”
“No, Blue Bolt, I came here to Ponyville expecting to find you needing my help, but instead, I learned from your friends that you are capable just on your own.”
“In just a short few days, you found a job, made some friends, and found a special pony for yourself. I couldn’t be prouder of you, and you’ve shown you no longer need me to help you with difficult decisions. I raised you to be the amazing stallion you are today.”
She hugs me tightly as my tears fall onto her face.
“It’s time to let go, Blue Bolt. You’re ready to face Equestria by yourself.”
She wipes my tears as I look up at her.
"You promise you'll” visit now and then?"
"Once in a blue moon, of course, I will, but I always know you’ll be doing your best even when I can’t see you, that I know for a fact.”
“Thank you, Mom, for everything.”
“Of course, my son, now you enjoy yourself with that mare. She’s extraordinary, Blue Bolt; she’s the one for you.”
“I know she is. I’ve never been happier.”
“Well, you better get going,” she reaches over and kisses me on the forehead before opening the back exit and looking back at me one last time.
“I love you son.”
“I love you too, Mom.”
She trots out the door as it closes behind her. I stand there for a moment, feeling absolute joy. I felt so strong knowing that I had made it. That I've matured enough to have my Mother tell me so. All I could do with myself at that moment was smile ear to ear. I heard the door behind me slowly open to see Flutters enter the doorway. I immediately trotted over to her and gave her the tightest hug possible. She exchanged the hug back to me even tighter.
“I’m so proud of you.” She said.
“I love you, Flutters.”
“I love you too, Blue Bolt.”
We stood there hugging until she moved away and looked at me.
“Now, how about we throw a party?”
“That sounds like a wonderful idea,” I smiled at her.
We both trotted back into the store lobby, where every pony awaited. “Finally, there they are!” Rainbow Dash said, somewhat annoyed.
“Let’s get this party started!” Pinkie said as she began to shoot confetti from a giant cannon. Another pony started playing music, and the whole store completely changed scenery.
I grab some Cider from Applejack as Flutters does the same. We trot over to the counter and grab some cake prepared for us.
“Now, this is a party!” Rainbow Dash said, flying above us. I finished my cake and cider and looked over Flutters. A slow song began to play, and it was a perfect opportunity.
“Flutters, do you want to dance?” I asked her.
“Oh, I’ve never really danced before.”
“Me neither, but you can just follow my lead.”
The store floor opens as other mares and stallions grab their special pony and dance. Me and Flutters join them on the floor as we start to get close to each other. I put my hooves around Flutter’s neck as she did the same around me, and we slowly began to dance in a circular pattern. Ever so slightly speeding up when the song allowed it.
All the other ponies faded into the darkness, and it was just me and Flutters at that very moment. She eventually nuzzled her head into my chest, and I put mine into her neck.
No words were exchanged between us, only each other’s company at that moment; it was all we needed. We danced to what seemed like moons until the song finally stopped, and the party returned to a typical setting.
“Well, there’s the two love birds!” Pinkie said excitedly. “I’m so happy for you both that I could SCREAM!”
“Oh, um, you don’t have to, Pinkie, really,” Flutters said as we all chuckle.
“If you’re ain’t the perfect couple, I don’t know what is,” Applejack said with a grin.
“Yeah, okay, sure, they are a pretty cute couple,” Rainbow Dash said smirkingly.
“Thanks, every pony, really, for all of this.”
“Don’t mention it, Blue Bolt; why don’t you and Flutters flutter off? HAHA, see what I did there?!” Pinkie said with laughter.
“Good one, Pinkie,” Flutters said, blushing.
With that, we said our goodbyes to every pony, gathered some sweets for the road and headed out the door.
I fly with Flutters through the main street and eventually outwards past Ponyville.
“Did you enjoy your party?” Flutters asked.
“It was wonderful, Flutters; I’ve never had something like that done for me; it was truly a unique experience.”
“Your Mom said you would appreciate it.”
“Oh no, how much did she tell you about me?” I nervously asked.
“Oh, only the best things, like how you were as a filly and pet peeves.”
“Pet peeves?” I ask curiously.
“You know, being on time, super clean, just being you,” she said with a chuckle.
“You know, Flutters, I never asked about your parents.”
“What about them?” She asked curiously.
“Don’t you think I should, you know, meet them?”
“Oh, of course, Blue Bolt, I was just waiting for the perfect time; as a matter of fact, they will be in town next week, so you’ll be able to meet them then.”
“That’s great, Flutters. I hope they like me.”
“Who wouldn’t like you?” Flutters said smirkingly.
We finally reach Flutter’s cottage as we descend to the ground. We open the door and head inside, and I get hit with that amazing smell.
“It always smells so good in here.” I finally say.
“Well, I’m glad you like it because if you’re going to live here, you’ll smell like it daily.”
“Live here? With you?” I asked, surprised.
“Well, of course, Blue Bolt, where else would you go?”
“I, uh, well, have never lived with another pony before; it's just a little new for me, is all."
"Oh, don’t worry, I’ll be sure to give you your space if you can ever get me off of you,” As Flutters rushes over and hugs me.
“Thank you, Flutters. I can’t wait to spend all this time with you; I’m the luckiest stallion in Equestria.”
“And I’m the luckiest mare, Blue Bolt,” Flutters says as she kisses me.
“Do you want to go watch the sunset?” Flutters asks.
“I’m never going to turn down a sunset,” I say smirkingly.
We headed out the back door and up the hill adjacent to the cottage. “We cuddle up on the ground, wings wrapped around each other as we watch the sun slowly fall behind the mountains.
We stay out for quite some time until the sun is completely gone and gives the sky a purple and orange aurora from the sun setting and the moon rising.
“Oh, Blue Bolt, I can’t wait for our many adventures together.”
“Me too, Flutters; I can’t wait to spend every minute with you.”
“What were you thinking for our first big adventure?” Flutters asked curiously.
“Well, I’ve always wanted to visit Canterlot and meet royalty or maybe travel to the Dragon Lands; what about the Everfree Forest? Cloudsdale seems cool, or...” Flutters covered my mouth with her hoof.
"Yes, silly, we'll do all of it!" She said with a smile. "You and me together, now for our first adventure, we should get some rest” Flutters says smirkingly.
"Sounds like a plan to me," I smirkingly say back.
We trot back down the hill to the cottage, and as Flutters opens the door, I look behind me as an instinct, feeling as if something is there.
"What is it, Blue Bolt?" Flutters asks.
“Oh, it’s nothing. I just felt my Mom watching over me; let’s head inside,” as I closed the door behind me.
I went down the main street to see that most of the town wasempty. I must have been in the town hall for quite some time. I had no idea where Fluttershy lived, so I would have to find some pony that might know her.
“Sugar Cube Corner, I thought to myself; she mentioned they were looking for help; they might know her.”
I passed many fascinating buildings on my way down the street. A few that caught my eye were a boutique with beautiful clothes in the windows, a small coffee shop that looked warm and inviting, and a vast library that looked like a tree house.
I finally made my way down to what I only assumed was Sugar Cube Corner. It looked inviting, with plenty of sweets and treats in the windows. I opened the door to be greeted imminently by an energetic pink pony.
"Well, hello there, I’m Pinkie Pie! Welcome to Sugar Cube Corner!”
“Hi there, I'm Blue Bolt, new to town, hoping to find some work. Fluttershy mentioned you were looking for help?
"Oh, of course! We're always looking for some lending hooves!"
“That's great; I was hoping to start soon if that's okay with you.”
"Sure, Blue Bolt! You can stop by tomorrow, and I'll give you a small crash course on what you need to know! I would do it now, but it's getting a little late, as you can see!”
“Oh, that sounds fantastic! There was one more thing, though. Fluttershy mentioned she had a place for me to stay, but she left before I got to ask about it. Do you know where she lives?"
"Wait just a minute, let me get this straight: Fluttershy was inviting YOU to HER place!?”
“Um, yes?” I nervously say.
“That's super rare for Fluttershy! She never invites ponies over, not even me, and it's only for rare occasions.”
“Why would that be?” I asked curiously.
“She tends to keep to herself and has a private life in her cottage.”
“Her cottage?” I asked.
“Oh yes! Her cottage is wonderful; it's just a little outside town. You'll see a trail for it over by Sweet Apple Acres!”
“Thanks, Pinkie; I appreciate the help.”
“No problem! And I almost forgot, here's a little cupcake for the road!” “Wow, that's very kind of you; thank you again.” With the cupcake in my hoof, I headed to Sweet Apple Acers.
Author's Note
Where to begin? After reading other authors and their stories for years, I've always wanted to write my own fanfiction. I was never motivated or driven to tell a story, but I finally decided. This story culminates ideas in my mind for many months. I first started jotting down small words in a notes app on my phone and eventually put them into a Word document.
The story is short and sweet, but I wanted to flesh my characters out and give them depth. I wanted to display that through and through, nobody is perfect, and most suffer from some form of trauma, whether that be depression, mental disorder, death, or anything else. What we do about the trauma makes us who we are and how we overcome it.
Regarding the love story, I wanted to write something people could relate to. I’ve had many relationships and still haven’t found that one person for myself, but I know she’s there; It's just a matter of when. Writing about how my characters interact with one another is something I see many people dream of in a relationship to find that special connection and grow old together. True love is out there, and it may take some time to see it, but nothing comes easy in life, and love requires time, effort, and, of course, sacrifice.
Ultimately, I'm proud to say I wrote this fanfic and excited to write more. Readers can get from this story that you should always keep going. No matter how hard life gets or if you feel like you're about to give up, don't. Someone will always watch over and root for you to keep going.
If you read all of this to the end, thank you. I hope you enjoy the story.
1 | Fresh Start
"What a beautiful day," I said as I looked out the train window. That smell in the air, the breeze through my mane, the sun shining down.
"Yeah, this was going to be a fantastic day."
Ponyville was very different from Manehatten. It had a small-town feel, which I always loved. Don't get me wrong, I loved the city, but something just felt right here.
"Welcome to Ponyville," shouted the conductor. My stop has finally come.
I gathered my few bags and stepped off the train to be hit by a tremendous gust of wind from above. It was the Pegisi clearing the clouds for the sun to shine down. Being a Pegisi myself, I can always appreciate their work.
I went through the train station and onto the main path to town. "To Town Hall,” the sign read.
“That looks like an excellent place to start.”
I didn't have a plan when I got here; I hoped to find work and a place to stay before I got on my hooves. I trotted down the main street, where there was a crowded town. For a small town, there were many ponies out and about, all doing different jobs. I finally arrive at the town hall and open the doors to see the most beautiful mare I've ever seen.
As soon as I walked in the door, I got hit with that scent I smelled from earlier, a strong aroma of pine and cedar. She filled the room with beautiful trinkets and furniture, precisely what you would expect inside a cottage.
"This is a beautiful place; you have Fluttershy," I said with a smile.
"Oh well, it's nothing special" Fluttershy said back also smiling.
I sat my bags down and had to ask her what I had been wondering about all day.
"So, out of curiosity, every pony I've talked to today said you rarely invite other ponies over."
"Oh, well, it's true, I suppose," Fluttershy said.
"I see, so why invite me over? We just met, and I could have been any pony you just let into your cottage." I asked curiously.
"Well, um, as soon as I saw you, I could tell you had a good heart and that I could trust you."
"Uh, what?" I asked, needing clarification.
I froze momentarily; no pony had ever said that to me before. I rarely got compliments from my family back home but from a stranger?
"That's sweet of you to say, slightly blushing. I appreciate that. But, how can you tell I have a good
"I, um, just know." "Well, thank you again, Fluttershy."
"You're welcome, Blue Bolt," Fluttershy said with a smile. "Make yourself at home. My cottage is yours; I'll start some tea while you settle."
"Thank you," I say as I unpack my few bags; I organize them onto the floor, putting aside the food and clothing I brought. I only got a little from home, my most essential items: a few pictures, clothing, and some food. My Mom always worried about me, but I assured her I would be okay moving to Ponyville. I've been on my own before, but this was completely new.
“Here's your tea, Blue Bolt,” as Fluttershy hands me a small cup.
"Thank you, that's very kind of you."
"Of course, it's the least I can do for you. You can sleep here on the couch until you get on your hooves."
"This wouldn't be a bad place to call home," I smirkingly thought.
"I'm sure I won't be here very long. I talked to Pinkie Pie, and she offered me a job to start tomorrow."
"Oh, my, that's wonderful, Blue Bolt!"
"All thanks to you," I said smirkingly.
"Oh well, um yeah, I guess so," as Fluttershy blushes a bit.
"Well, um, if you need anything else, just let me know; otherwise, I will head to bed."
"I think I'm fine for now, Fluttershy. Thanks for everything."
"You're welcome, um, but you can call me Flutters if you want, um, you don't have to, though."
"Flutters, I like that a lot," I said with a smile.
