Now Being Re-written!

Hello and Welcome back to the Derpy Hooves Story!
I am re-writing this because I thought there was a bit too much rush into it as well as there being obvious hate as well as me rushing the romance part.

NOW UNTO THE DESCRIPTION!

Derpy Hooves was a gray pegasi who was taunted by many ponies. Sometimes even Rainbow Dash, and Wonderbolts Captain Spitfire couldn't help but poke fun at the gray mare. They would always stop it when it got really bad though. Despite this Derpy was slowly falling into a state of depression. Derpy had finally had enough after a few more months, and she decided she was going to put an end to all of her problems, starting with everypony elses biggest problem….. her.