
The fatal error
Rainbow tries to do a third sonic rainboom to impress her marefriend. But she made a fatal error.
Rainbow Dash is a reckless flier, and her new relationship doesn't help change this. When Rainbow has a devastating crash, how much will her life change?
[Warning] This story is the first creative writing project I've ever done, and the writing is not up to par with most of my other stories, excluding the epilogue which is newer.
If you like this or dislike this, please tell me why, it will help me get better at writing.





17130 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
11 Chapters:
- Chapter one 2012-04-29 19:27:17 UTC1916
- Chapter two 2012-04-29 19:30:04 UTC1441
- Chapter three 2012-04-06 04:35:37 UTC1179
- Chapter four 2012-06-18 07:53:28 UTC1411
- Chapter Five 2012-04-20 23:54:55 UTC1586
- Chapter Six 2012-04-29 15:46:37 UTC1592
- Chapter seven 2012-06-18 07:43:18 UTC1296
- Chapter Eight 2012-06-02 00:29:01 UTC1333
- Chapter Nine 2012-06-02 00:25:07 UTC1392
- Chapter Ten 2012-06-12 22:08:01 UTC2659
- Epilogue 2014-12-21 05:16:15 UTC1325