Chapters The Super Duper Pony Couple
Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie were at one of their biggest parties yet. They were celebrating the 10th birthday of Dancing Star, the adopted daughter of Vinyl Scratch and Octavia Melody. It was time for Dancing Star's birthday song to be performed. With every word Pinkie sang, the filly's eyes widened with excitement as she flapped her wings without leaving the ground. A big smile spread across her face.
"Make a wish it's your birthday, make a wish it's your birthday party! Make a wish it's your birthday! Make a wish it's your birthday party!" Pinkie sang.
"Alright fillies and gentlecolts," Cheese said with a really excited face on. "We are here for one reason only,"
"To celebrate the birthday of Dancing Star!" Cheese and Pinkie both said excitedly in unison, with giant smile from ear to ear on their faces.
"Now it's time to open presents!" Pinkie piped excitedly.
Dancing ran over to her pile of presents, stacked higher than she could fly. In her defence she wasn't the best flier.
"Here you go honey." Vinyl said levitating a large present over to her daughter. "From me and mommy."
As Dancing Star unwrapped her gifts, Vinyl and Octavia smiled to see their little girl grow up.
"Tap Shoes! These are just what I wanted! How did you know?" Dancing said as she hugged both her moms.
"We just knew sweetie." Octavia said while still hugging her daughter.
Dancing went back to unwrapping her gifts when Cheese Sandwich pulled Pinkie aside.
"Pinkie." Cheese said with a tone of worry and sadness in his voice.
"Yes Cheese?" Pinkie asked wondering what was going on with a confused tone in her voice.
"We need the party cannon!" Cheese said excitedly, as if he threw his gloomy self away.
"Which one?" Pinkie asked excitedly, as they owned many party cannons.
"The cheese supreme cannon ball surprise!" Cheese yelled out excitedly as the cannon seemed to have mysteriously appeared.
Pinkie Pie ran up to the stage with an ear-to-ear grin on her face.
"Alright ponies! We've got a surprise for our birthday girl Dancing Star, Dancing, why don't ya come on up?" Pinkie said excitedly.
Dancing Star flew up to the stage excitedly at what might come next. Pinkie Pie waved a hoof in the air and Cheese waved one back. He set off the party cannon, then KA-BOOM!
. Everypony stomped their hooves in the ground every time the cheese supreme cannon ball surprise went off. Tons of ponies went on roller-coasters and there were 12 ponies in the fruit punch lake. Dancing Star was dancing with her bat pony friend, Annie, when ponies started coming to say goodbye.
"Bye Dancing Star! See you tomorrow at school!" yelled a blue earth pony with blue, green and pink named Petal.
"Bye Petal!" Dancing yelled back to her friend.
"So Dancing, what was the best present you got?" Annie asked.
"The tap shoes! I'm so happy my parents got it!" Dancing said excitedly.
The music stopped playing and almost everypony was gone. Cheese and Pinkie were packing up all there party supplies when the pegasus filly ran up to them.
"Where is everypony? Where did everypony go?" Dancing asked Pinkie Pie, who was putting away the stereo.
"They all left silly filly, the party's over!" Pinkie said while loading the stereo into her supply truck
"But..but.." Dancing said with a sad tone.
Dancing slowly walked with her head down, only for it to be pulled up by Pinkie and Cheese.
"Hey there filly! You had an awesome party! So don't be down now! There is next year, and tomorrow you will see all your friends tomorrow!" Cheese said with an excited tone to try and cheer the filly up.
"Hey, Dancing, I gotta go, my mom's here." Annie shouted out to her friend.
"Ok Annie, I'll see you tomorrow!"
"Bye!"
As Octavia and Vinyl came to pick their daughter up, they paid the bits to Pinkie and Cheese.
"Keep the change," Vinyl said happily with a smile on her face. "We haven't seen her this happy since the day she met Annie."
"Have a nice day Vinyl! You too Octavia! Call us next year when she needs a party!" Pinkie piped excitedly throwing the bits to her coltfriend, who threw them into a bin in the truck.
Pinkie and Cheese walked into the truck, and the other 2 ponies started pulling. They knew it was going to be an hour ride, so they decided to talk about the party and what they enjoyed the most about it.
"So what did you like Cheese?" Pinkie said excitedly with a huge smile on her face.
"You singing! You were awesome!" Cheese said as he started repeating the dance moves Pinkie was doing.
"Yea, me singing was pretty awesome! My favourite part was seeing the fillies and colts so happy!" Pinkie said very bouncily as she started bouncing up and down.
"That part too!" Cheese said forgetful.
"You guys can get off now, this is the stop." Said one of the ponies.
"And make sure to pay us!" Yelled the other with a tired look on his face.
Pinkie tossed the bits and Cheese tossed all the supplies into the party supply garage. The ponies pulling the truck ran away at top speed leaving the truck behind. Pinkie shrugged as her and Cheese pushed it into the supply garage. The beautiful night shone brightly. Cheese planted a kiss on his mare's forehead. Pinkie blushed as she kissed her colt on the lips. It was a long day, coming to a nice end.
Author's Note
Ok there isn't much CheesePie here yet, but there will be in the next chapter. I made this earlier than expected after abandoning my other story a love tale wedding. I hope the same doesn't happen here. I took some constructive criticism from some users about spacing and dialogue tags and expression, so here. I hope it's good
The Super Duper Pony Couple
The sun shone into the bedroom of Pinkie and Cheese. Both ponies shot up and jumped downstairs.
"Cheese! Cheese! Do you feel that coming?" Pinkie said as if she knew something was going to happen.
As if on cue, Cheese started shaking all over, his cutie mark started playing like an accordion, and he jumped up, hitting the ceiling.
"Now I do." Cheese said rubbing his head in pain.
Pinkie Pie hopped downstairs and got her extra confetti. She put it in her party cannon when a question found a way into her head.
"Cheesey! Where is the party?!" Pinkie yelled out to him through a megaphone, startling everyone in Ponyville.
"Town Hall!" Cheese yelled back through a megaphone, alarming all the ponies in Ponyville again.
Mayor Silver Spoon stomped her hoof.
"Those ponies need to quiet it down!" Silver said with an angry tone while marching into Town Hall.
Pinkie hopped out of her door and into the streets of Ponyville. Cheese Sandwich was the next to get out the door of The Party Zone. This was where they sold party supplies and had ponies come to book party dates.
When the 2 ponies were hopping amongst the street of Ponyville, they were met with angry glares everywhere they went. As usual, they shrugged it off and kept hopping towards Town Hall.
"Finally you guys are here!" said Mayor Silver Spoon with a relieved look on her face and a relieved tone.
"Sorry, we had some troubles with supplies." Pinkie said jumping all over the Town Hall.
Pinkie and Cheese got their party supplies for the summer sun celebration. It was being held in Ponyville this year.
"Mayor? Where do you want the confetti?" Pinkie asked pulling out her party cannon with a huge smile on her face.
Mayor Silver Spoon pointed her hoof towards the stage curtains.
"Okie dokie!" Pinkie said firing confetti onto the curtains.
"Mayor Silver Spoon," Cheese said as he approached Silver Spoon. "Where do you want the snacks?"
Silver Spoon pointed her hoof towards a table covered with a cloth.
"Okie doke!" Cheese said as he balanced a bunch of snacks and sweets on his back.
Silver Spoon backed up to the door of Town Hall and examined the place. Not too much confetti, not too much snacks, not too much ribbon. Perfect. She stomped her hoof to get everypony's attention.
"Alright everypony, this is good. See you all at tonight's summer sun celebration!"
Cheers rang throughout the Town Hall and Ponyville. Little fillies jumped up with joy, with huge smiles on their faces. Pegasi ponies, big or small, flew all over the place with joy. The earth ponies stomped their hooves loudly and the unicorns danced with glee. They all stopped this when Mayor Silver Spoon stomped her hooves.
"Everypony settle down, the festivities won't happen until later today. I recommend that everypony go home, and celebrate a separate party, that is of course, until Princess Celestia comes here with Luna and Twilight to raise the sun and lower the moon." The mayor spoke in a proud, loud, and clear voice so that everypony could hear her.
As soon as the mayor stopped speaking, all the ponies either walked to their houses or to Sugar Cube Corner for some treats for their parties. It was one of the cheerful times of year, where everypony was happy, and where the Cakes made a lot of money. Pinkie and Cheese rushed home, for sometimes ponies came to The Party Zone for party supplies.
"Hey Cheese, we should throw a party for the summer sun celebration, you know, instead of giving away party supplies. Pumpkin and Pound know me well, so I can squeeze in some desserts!" Pinkie said bouncing up and down.
"You sure Pink? It's almost sundown." Cheese replied to Pinkie.
They arrived at The Party Zone. When they walked inside and were setting up for the party, many ponies burst through the door.
"Hello? Pinkie Pie? Cheese Sandwich? Is anypony here?" said a beige coated earth pony with dark blue and pink hair.
"Yes we are!" Pinkie said bouncing out of the storage room.
"Oh hi. Are you guys throwing a summer sun party? Cause Lyra's train is delayed and I've not nopony to celebrate with." The pony replied.
"No problem Sweetie Drops, of course you can celebrate with us!" Piped Cheese as he started decorating the party room.
"Great! Can I bring a few more ponies?" Sweetie replied.
"The more the merrier!" Pinkie and Cheese piped in unison.
Sweetie Drops rushed out the door and returned a minute later with Berry Punch and her unicorn daughter Berry Pinch. She had just turned 27 a couple weeks ago.
"Hi there Cheese and Pinkie!" Berry Punch said as she rapidly waived her hoof at the door.
"Hey Berry!" Both earth ponies piped in unison.
Word quickly got around town that Pinkie and Cheese were throwing a party at The Party Zone. Even though sunrise was in 35 minutes, everypony dropped what they were doing and galloped towards The Party Zone at their fastest pace possible. Everypony knew that at a Pinkie and Cheese party, it was sure to not be lame, and they played a bunch of fun party games and ate amazing treats.
Pinkie's ears shot up when she heard the noise of hooves padding on the ground. She bounced around with a huge smile on her face.
"Pinkie? Do you hear that?" Cheese said, hearing the many padding hooves.
"I sure do! Hooves! More hooves means more friends! And.." Pinkie began saying, waiting for Cheese to finish the sentence.
"..More friends means more party members!" Cheese said as he jumped up, copying Pinkie.
After fatigue reached the 2 ponies very quickly, they stopped bouncing and went back to games. As they did so, many ponies burst through the door, knocked them over, and started dancing on the dance floor.
The Party Zone was decorated with streamers, balloons, confetti, ribbons, a pin the tail on the pony game, hand drawn pictures of the sun rising and the moon lowering. There were tables filled with food like cake, cupcakes, cookies and punch, which Berry Punch seemed to love.
Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich saw that everypony had a smile on her face, which brought a smile to her face. Vinyl Scratch cranked the music louder as everypony danced. They still kept dancing when Mayor Silver Spoon announced that it was midnight and that the princesses had arrived. The only pony who caught it was Pinkie Pie.
"C'mon everypony! Time to see the sun rise!" Pinkie Pie yelled over the music and the many ponies dancing and cheering.
Everypony rushed out the door and into Town Hall. When they all arrived there, it was packed by many ponies from Cloudsdale, Trottingham, Manehattan, Baltimare, Canterlot, and all of Equestria. The three of four princesses stood there. Luna began by lowering the moon, than Celestia rose the sun. When the sun and moon were at the same height, Twilight flew past it and used her magic to make a sonic sparkle boom. Princess Luna landed, followed by Celestia, who was then followed by Twilight. Ponies cheers rang throughout the halls as ponies stomped their hooves.
"That was so cool!" Piped a few fillies and colts in the front row.
"Epic!" shouted 2 pegasus colts in the crowd.
"Hey Pinkie Pie?" Cheese said turning to his marefriend.
"Yes Cheese?" Pinkie replied with a worried tone.
She lost her train of thought when Cheese brought his lips to hers. Her eyes stood open in shock, then she slowly closed them. The kiss only lasted for a few seconds.
A few magical seconds..
When Pinkie and Cheese pulled their lips away, Cheese spoke to her.
"Happy summer." He said putting a hoof on his marefriend's back, only for her to blush and nuzzle up to him.
Author's Note
Hope you guys enjoy this chapter! I finally started up writing ACTUAL CheesePie. Hope you enjoy it!
The Super Duper Pony Couple
Cheese and Pinkie were going to the bowling alley. On their way, they saw the (former) cutie mark crusaders and former band.
"Hey Scoots! Hey Sweetie! Hey Applebloom!" Pinkie said waving at the three mares.
"Hi Pinkie. You came to bowl too? Oh and I see Cheese is here as well." Sweetie Belle said using her magic to hold her bowling ball.
"I still don't know if Mr.Kingpin is gonna let me play after what I did about 20 years ago." Scootaloo said landing on the ground from her flying. "Remember that, it bounced everywhere!"
"We remember Scootaloo." Applebloom said rolling her eyes.
"This time I better try to keep it in the bowling lane." Scootaloo said grabbing her purple bowling ball.
"Hey guys! Do you guys wanna play together in the same match?" Cheese asked the 3 mares.
"Sure." they all said in unison.
As soon as the 5 ponies walked in, Scootaloo was spotted and pushed out.
"Hey! Watch it!" Scootaloo yelled as the guards pushed her away.
"Sorry, your still banned." said one of the guards before they closed the door.
"We better go too." Sweetie Belle said as she and Applebloom chased after Scootaloo.
Pinkie and Cheese shrugged it off and played bowling anyway. Pinkie's turn was coming, and between the two best party planners in Equestria, this could get interesting.
Cheese and Pinkie were tied 62 to 62, and now, they were accusing each other for cheating.
"Oh come on Cheese! You so cheated when you used that gorilla suit!" Pinkie yelled at Cheese.
"Really, you call that cheating? Your the one who blasted it with confetti and hit it with streamers!" Cheese yelled back to Pinkie.
"I think that's enough bowling for today." Pinkie said grabbing her bowling ball.
"Yea. Sorry." Cheese said grabbing his bowling ball.
"I'm sorry too. Hey, wanna go on a picnic?" Pinkie asked heading towards the door.
"A picnic? Sure!" Cheese answered with a smile on his face.
Pinkie Pie hopped happily in the park holding a picnic basket in her mouth. She sat down, knowing this was the spot her and Cheese were supposed to meet.
"Hif Chqeese!" Pinkie said through her teeth.
"Hey Pinkie." Cheese said sitting down. "So listen,"
"Yes Cheese?" Pinkie cut in putting the basket down.
"In about..5 days, can we play a trivia game?" Cheese asked nervously, obviously with butterflies in his stomach.
"Sure..? Ok, now let's eat!" Pinkie said getting the basket. "We have chocolate cake, chocolate smoothies, chocolate cupcakes, vanilla cake, vanilla smoothies, strawberry smoothies, baked alaska and SUGAR!" Pinkie said unloading a huge assortment of food.
"Mmmm, I want a strawberry smoothie and a slice of chocolate cake please!" Cheese said looking at all the desert.
"Coming right up." Pinkie said tossing the plates to Cheese.
Pinkie and Cheese ate their desserts. Pinkie obviously ate more.
"Hey Cheese," Pinkie said breaking the silence of eating sweets.
"Yea Pinkie?"
"Want a taste of dessert?" Pinkie said in a devilish playful tone.
"I think I had too much actually." Cheese said rubbing his stomach.
Pinkie face-hoofed herself. She sighed and kissed Cheese.
"Oh..oh..Now I get it." Cheese said as he blushed, his eyes opened and narrowed in sudden shock.
Pinkie only chuckled, followed by Cheese as they plopped on the ground.
5 days later...
Cheese Sandwich set up the trivia game and got out something special.
"Pinkie dear! The game is set up!" Cheese called out, his stomach full of butterflies.
Instantly Pinkie skipped down the stairs using her head. She sat down in a seat as Cheese did the same.
"Ooh! My turn! My turn!" Pinkie said excitedly grabbing the dice across from her.
She rolled a 4 and moved her spaces.
"Your question is..When was the Al Cowda formed?" Cheese said reading the trivia card.
"1988!" Pinkie replied with pride, and a smile on her face.
It was Cheese Sandwich's turn. He rolled a 2 and landed on a roll again square. He rolled again and got 5. It was Pinkie Pie's turn to ask the question.
"Cheese Sandwich, your question is..When was Afghanisteed founded?" Pinkie said reading the card.
"2200 BC, before Celestia." Cheese said as he grabbed the dice.
He rolled a 3 and moved. It was his turn to ask Pinkie a question.
"Pinkie Pie..your question is.." Cheese said dropping onto 1 knee without Pinkie noticing. "Will you marry me?"
"Well that's an odd questio..." Pinkie said turning around.
Her mouth was wide open, jaw almost touching the floor. She looked at the gem and back at Cheese, her eyes with stars and a smile on her face.
"Yes." Pinkie simply replied.
Author's Note
Ok, don't worry, it's not over yet. The wedding is gonna be in the same fic this time. So, enjoy!
The Super Duper Pony Couple
Cheese and Pinkie woke up and trotted down the stairs. Random confetti blasted when both reached the bottom.
"Huh. That's new." Cheese said stating the random confetti blast.
Pinkie Pie only snickered, then sneezed out confetti.
"Pinkie, did you tell your friends that we're engaged?" Cheese asked randomly.
"Yesseri!" Pinkie said as the doorbell rang.
"Who is it?" Pinkie yelled out.
All they received was a squeak, but not a mouse squeak, a plastic toy squeak. Pinkie curiously approached the door. She cautiously asked again.
"Who is it?" Pinkie said behind the door.
All she received was another squeak.
"Open it." Cheese said as he stepped behind her.
Pinkie opened the door and looks outside. Nopony there. Then, she heard a squeak and looked down to see Boneless 3.
"Cheese!" Pinkie cried out, Cheese unaware that it was Boneless 3.
"Yea?" Cheese called out from the kitchen.
"How many bonelesses do you have?" Pinkie said closing the door.
"4..." Cheese said as his voice trailed off.
"I found the third." Pinkie said approaching the kitchen.
"Really?!" Cheese said speeding out of the kitchen.
Pinkie handed Cheese the rubber chicken. Cheese squealed as he hugged his chicken. Pinkie Pie put on an evil smug, and pressed a red button. All of a sudden, banana cream pie hit him in the face. Pinkie laughed and was shortly joined by Cheese.
"And then, I pressed a button and banana cream pie hit him in the face!" Pinkie retold as she and Cheese laughed, while the rest of the mane 6 and their love interests just sat there stone-faced.
"Will all do respect Pinkie Pie," Twilight said as she twirled her newly flowing mane. "You've told us that at least 10 times."
"Uh huh." the rest of the ponies mumbled under their breath.
"I think we better go. Right Flash?" Twilight said turning to her coltfriend.
"Gotta Flash!" he said opening up his wings.
Flash quickly flew into the sky quick enough to leave a blue trail with orange zig-zags across it. Next followed the purple alicorn, leaving behind a sparkly purple and hot pink trail.
"Me too. Soarin, your coming." Rain said grabbing the pegasus stallion by the hoof.
Soarin only nodded and away. Fluttershy looked up at Discord, who simply nodded and teleported away with Fluttershy.
"Ah think we should get goin' Spike." Applejack said grabbing the dragon's claw. When Spike tried to object, the farmgirl shot him a glare.
"Well as much fun as it is hanging around you Cheese Sandwich, me and my bride must certaintly head back to Canterlot to pack to move here in Ponyville." Fancy Pants said getting up. "See you two around."
Rarity got up and followed Fancy Pants, leaving Cheese and Pinkie alone.
"Why did they just all leave?" Pinkie said, tears starting to form in her eyes.
"I dunno. Bored of us, I guess. Has that ever happened?" Cheese asked his sad marefriend.
"No." Pinkie said with a sob in her voice.
As if on cue, Pinkie's and Cheese's mane went flat. Deflated. Straight.
"Let's go." said the sad earth stallion, missing the excitement in his voice.
The sad Pinkie Pie got up and sloppily trotted to The Fun Zone, Cheese Sandwich following. They walked in and hung up the closed sign.
"Let's just stay here." Pinkie said sitting down.
"Agreed." Cheese replied blandly sitting down beside her.
Flash, Spike, and Discord met up at the park.
"Whew. That was a close one." Flash said wiping the sweat off his brow. "We almost didn't make it out."
Discord and Spike nodded.
"This is going to be hard to do, even though I am the Lord of Chaos, he's Cheese Sandwich. How are we supposed to out-party the party pony of parties. Especially since he has a super duper party pony with him because he is a super duper party pony and how are we supposed to out-party the party ponies!" Discord yelled while the dragon and pegasus just started at him confused. Discord only blinked. "What? I am the Lord of Chaos after all."
"True." the Flash and Spike replied in unison.
"Now, how are we gonna plan this bachelor party?" Flash said.
"Bachelor party? I already planned Cadence's and Shining Armour's bachelor party!" Spike whined.
"No, you really didn't." Discord replied.
"How did you know that Mr. Stonehead?" Spike replied defensively.
"Duh, I follow Shining on that bird mail delivery service." Discord said rolling his eyes.
"Oh that one!" Flash said breaking his silence. "Hey can I follow you? What's your scroll name?"
"ChaosLordof657." Discord said writing it down and giving it to Flash.
"Seriously! This entire time there was a mail service and Twilight made me send letters with fire?" Spike said as he stomped.
"Dude, it's only 1 year old. Plus, we should probably get back to planning this." the orange-yellow pegasus cut in before the dragon got too angry.
"Hey guys. How's the bachelor party coming?" asked a purple alicorn as her and her friends (the ones that are here) approached the guys.
"Just fine honey. Just fine.." Flash said hugging the princess.
"I'm a little sad that Rainbow, Soarin, Fancy Pants and Rarity couldn't attend." Fluttershy said shyly.
"Stupid Wonderbolts tour." Twilight stomped.
"Stupid unpacking and moving to Ponyville." Applejack said as she spat on the ground.
"We have to keep up this hate until we finish this project." Spike said to the group as the rest of the ponies nodded.
The Super Duper Pony Couple
Applejack and Spike walked past The Fun Zone. Spike noticed a sign on the doorknob and she read it aloud.
"Dear Party Fellows," she began to read aloud, "ah thank ya kindly fer stoppin' by The Fun Zone. Due to recent events, this is currently, and temporarily, known as, The Done Zone. As in we're not changin' it back until mah friends respect us." Applejack finished up and stared at Spike.
"We have to go tell Twilight!" Spike said as he popped out the first thought that came to his mind.
"No, she's doin' royal duties, and Flash was sent to protect her." Applejack replied defensively.
"Rainbow Dash and Soarin?" Spike said thinking of the next couple in his mind.
"Wonderbolts tour." the orange mare let out a sigh.
"Flutters.." the purple dragon said before being cut off.
"Fluttershy and Discord are takin' over some stuff that Twilight and Flash didn't and don't have time to finish." she said as she kicked a rock in between her hooves.
"Rarity and Fancy?" Spike said letting out a sigh.
"Packin." the cowgirl answered.
"Pinkie Pie?" Spike replied with a shrug. The cowgirl only shot him a glare that read 'seriously? '.
"Spike, we gotta get 'em outta the dumps without revealin the secret. You said it yourself that we have to keep up this hate until we finish the project." Applejack replied retelling what Spike had earlier said.
The dragon nodded remembering what he had said earlier. Both him and Applejack creaked the door to the store open. They walked into a dimly-lit shady zone with all the blinds shut as sunlight barely was able to peer into the store. The store was empty, almost as if it was robbed. Luckily it wasn't that way when Spike read a note saying that all the items were moved upstairs. The colourful pink, blue, and yellow walls seemed a mucky, swamp-like green. The formerly toy-filled shelves were bare and had a few cobwebs here and there. The window had a small crack coming through the middle, and the floor tiles seemed very dirty. If you listened carefully and were silent, you could hear faint sobs and hooves clanking on the ground.
Applejack went and twisted the doorknob that led to the upstairs room, only to find it locked. The clicking of the doorknob echoed in the empty room. Applejack backed up as Spike approached. He took in a deep, big breath, and exhaled in the direction of the doorknob. As he did, fire came along with it. He hoped that it would burn, but instead it just turned hot red and increased with heat.
"How do ya suppose we open it?" Applejack said as she put a hoof on the mahogany door.
"Wait, this is wood, right?" Spike asked dumbly. The cowgirl nodded. "Then let me burn it. I do have fire, after all." Spike said as he puffed out his chest, trying to seem prominent.
Before Spike could do anything, Applejack blocked the door. "Spike, are y'all sure that you should burn the door? We don't know how Cheese and Pinkie will react if we just destroy their property. Besides, the smoke might tell them that we're here."
"Get some water." He said as if he was ordering her. She grabbed a bucket and zoomed to the nearest water supply, and made sure to get a lot. "Now, when I burn it, pour it on the door. We'll clean it up later."
Spike breathed in and let out a huge amount of green fire onto the door. It crackled a bit, then caught a small flame. It took a while for it to fully burn, and that's when AJ poured the water on it.
They creeped up the stairs and were sure to be silent. Spike chickened out, and Applejack told him to watch the empty store. As she walked up the stairs, she heard the sobs getting louder. AJ was met by a oak door. She turned the doorknob. Luckily, this one wasn't locked.
Applejack silently tipped-hoofed on the dark floors, much like the ones downstairs. She walked into the kitchen, where Pinkie was stuffing her face with cake while crying.
"Pinkie Pie..?" She shyly asked her friend.
"WHAT!" Pinkie snapped, fire in her eyes.
"Are y'all ok..me and the rest of the girls, guys also, are startin' to get worried."
"I'm fine." She grumbled.
"You sure 'bout that sugarcube?" The cowgirl said slowly approaching Pinkie.
"YES!"
"Ok sugar, just know, that we are here for ya, and if ya need us, we'll be sure to come." AJ said turning to the living room where Cheese was.
The depressed mare gave a nod. With that, the orange mare turned and slowly approached the living room.
"Cheese?" She shyly said, hiding behind a wall.
"WHAT!" Cheese snapped similar to his soon-to-be bride.
"The guys are worried about cha', the girls, maybe just a little. Just get better soon." Applejack said exiting the room. She stopped after remembering something. "And make sure to clean up a bit around here. It's so dark." She shivered.
Applejack and Spike left The Fun Zone. On the top floor, Pinkie and Cheese looked at each other, then at their friends. As they got an idea, their faces had a sudden glow, but not enough to poof up the manes. they were instantly off and loud construction noises could be heard. And they made sure to lock the doors, not that they had any.
Author's Note
Short chapter. Yes. Is it better than nothing? Yes. Did I give Applejack and Spike a small spotlight scene here. Yes.
Was it fun to write this. Eh.
I will try to promise a longer chapter next!
I also tried to improve on descriptions, especially of areas.
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The Super Duper Pony Couple
They're not exactly a party pony couple, they're more like a creepy couple you would want to avoid if you saw them on the street Pt2
First Fluttershy's eyes fluttered open, lead by Flash's and then everypony else. All the ponies quickly realized they were strapped against a table..in a party room?
"No, for the last time! There is no question mark!" Harmonic yelled at her notebook, seeming to get mad at it. "Eh, let's get back to the story."
All the ponies quickly realized they were strapped against a table..in a party room.
"YES!" The same purple pegasus pony said as she flew around her room excitedly, then returning to her story.
"Uh, Twilight? I still have mud on my face." Flash said pointing out the green mud mask on his face.
"I'm sorry Flash, my magic isn't working." Twilight said as her horn glowed but quickly flashed off, unable to perform even the simplest of magic tricks even if she tried.
"Mine isn't either. Poo." Discord grunted flicking his fingers and tail, but nothing.
"Nor is mine." The white unicorn with purple hair said trying to use her blue magic.
"Mine either. They must've taken our magic away." Fancy said trying to use his gamboge magic.
"Wait? How can earths take magic away?" Harmonic thought to herself, before coming up with an answer. "Oh wait, this is AU. Never mind."
"And us pegasi can't fly." Rainbow added flapping her wings and struggling, Soarin doing the same, but both resulting in failing.
"I can't use my fire!" Spike yelled trying to get even a tiny flame.
The 8 ponies, 1 draconequus and 1 dragon heard 8 hoofsteps clanking on the ground. All they could see was the silhouette of 2 ponies, one a mare, one a stallion. The mare approached the ponies, dragon and draconequus. She stepped into the light to reveal her face. Dull pink, blue turned to red eyes, and a cut on her cheek.
"Hello there..." She said as she was using a very creepy tone.
"Pinkie. What's going on?" Twilight said as she struggled.
"I want to know if you guys are my friends. You left me and Cheese stranded in the park." Pinkie said softening her voice.
"Of course we're your friends Pinks." Rainbow cut in.
"What about you guys? You left me as well." Cheese said turning to the males in the group.
"Dude. I just had to go on a wonderbolts tour. Which I'm missing right now." Soarin said rolling his eyes.
"Yea. And I'm a princess's coltfriend. I have royal duties to do." Flash said struggling trying to get off the table that he was handcuffed to.
With that, Cheese and Pinkie exchanged a glance and pressed a button that returned the magic to the ponies and released them from the table. All the creatures tried to leave but were stopped.
"I'm waiting for a proper apology later." Pinkie said as her mane puffed up a bit, but not exactly just there.
All the ponies dashed out with a beat of a heart, leaving Cheese and Pinkie alone, again.
The 2 ponies quickly creeped slowly and silently behind the running and flying ponies, dragon and draconequus. This might not end well....
"CLIFFHANGERS! I love this!" Brush said putting down her quill.
Author's Note
SUCCESS! If you put these two parts together, you get 1200+ words! SUCCESS! I HAVE CONQUERED THE POSSIBLE! MORE THAN 1000 WORDS! CONQUERED!
Ok I'm going a little too crazy there...
IT IS FINALLY DONE! NOW I MUST GO DO HOMEWORK ON MATTER!
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Y'know, this is just a roller-coaster
Soarin and Dash were racing around Cloudsdale, trying to get their mind off of Pinkie and Cheese. Dash left behind a opaque rainbow trail while Soarin left a thin but deep navy blue trail. With one last push, Soarin placed first, leaving behind a disappointed Rainbow Dash.
"Aw, don't look like that honey," Soarin said trying to comfort his wife.
"I. Hate. Losing." She grumbled in response.
Soarin started at her for a minute before putting on a goofy grin. He firmly pressed his lips against hers.
"Now I feel better," Dash snuggled up to Soarin.
The two pegasi flew towards the huge cloud home, which was more like a palace, in which they resided. They trotted into the house and turned directly to the kitchen. Dash pulled out some hayfries and warmed them up.
"Hey Soar-Soar, do you know what's up with Cheese Sandwich?" Rainbow asked her husband. He shook his head resulting in a 'no'. "Well we better find out soon. They seem really...depressed."
Soarin nodded in response, his mouth filled with hayfries.
"Hey Pinks!" Dash yelled towards the greyish-pink mare.
"Dash," She mumbled in response turning her head away.
"Listen, sorry about whatever we did to you," the cyan pegasus said trotting up to the earth pony.
Pinkie got up, hesitated to speak, but eventually spoke.
"Tell the girls and the stallions to meet me at the park in 30 minutes." Pinkie grumbled before darting away.
"...Ok?" Dash took off.
The 10 ponies (excluding Pinkie and Cheese) gathered in a group around a few flowers in the park. Each pony had a questioned expression on their face, not knowing what was to come of this. Eventually, Cheese and Pinkie arrived, their fur and hair slightly lighter toned, but not quite the way it was before. Pinkie was holding something in her mouth while Cheese was carrying something else in his.
"Hwi Gwirls!" Pinkie shouted through her teeth, a little bit of excitement behind it.
"Hi Pinks!" they all replied.
"Hey dudes," Cheese said setting the item down.
"Hey!" all the males shouted in reply.
"Why did you call us here, Pinkie Pie?" Twilight asked turning her attention to the pink mare.
"Oh, I was just wondering if we were still friends!" She piped.
"Of course!" Everypony except for Cheese and Pinkie shouted.
"Yea right," Cheese grumbled, "I'm going home."
He turned away, still in between happy and depressed. Pinkie turned to her friends, obviously returned back to her regular self.
"He's a bit of a grump-grump!" She yelled.
"Ok.." Flash's voice trailed off.
"Bye!" She shouted before hopping off.
The 8 ponies, 1 dragon, and 1 draconequus turned their attention to the items on the ground. Applejack curiously approached one, and opened it. It was a box. Her face was instantly changed from a curious to a shocked expression. The rest of the group looked into the box, sharing the same expression.
Author's Note
BOOM! CLIFFHANGER!
The last few chapters have mainly just been filler
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It was a Saturday in Ponyville. The fillies and colts were still ecstatic from the summer sun celebration that happened yesterday, for most of them it was the first time they saw the Princesses, except for Twilight who lived in Ponyville with them. This inspired many fillies and colts to throw their own parties, and naturally, they went to Ponyville's largest, and possibly only, party supply story, The Fun Zone.
"Excuse me Miss Pie, where are the alicorn princesses costumes?" piped a little earth pony filly.
"Right over there Daffodil." Pinkie replied pointing the filly to the princess costumes.
Daffodil, Dancing Star and Annie ran over to the costumes. Daffodil bought the Twilight costume, Dancing bought the Celestia costume and Annie bought the Luna costume, as she looked the most like Luna.
"Wow girls! That looks amazing!" Octavia told her daughter, her best friend, and her new friend.
"Thanks Mommy Octavia!" Dancing Star told her mom. "Where's Mommy Vinyl?"
"She's working on her new track with her cousin Neon Lights in Fillydelphia. She'll be gone for 2 days." Octavia said trying to comfort her daughter.
"But she missed the summer sun celebration." Annie told Octavia.
"Yes, that's true," Octavia replied with sadness in her voice. "But wouldn't you like to buy those costumes?" She said smiling to hide sorrow.
"Yes!" All three fillies yelled in unison forgetting what they had just talked about.
Each pony took off their costume and wigs and put them back in their packages. Octavia took them and went to the front counter where Cheese Sandwich was. He counted up how much bits it would cost.
"That would be...7..14....21 bits." Cheese said counting the bits.
"Oh, ok," Octavia said passing the bits.
Octavia and the three fillies exited the store.
"Hey Pinks!" Cheese yelled out to his marefriend. "Come here!"
Following her colt friends request, Pinkie Pie hopped across the store quickly to Cheese.
"What is it Cheesey?" Pinkie asked Cheese.
"Business is booming! We're running low on the costumes and props. I need you to run down to the warehouse and pick up some more." Cheese asked pulling out a map.
"Ok deary!" Pinkie said taking the map and colouring the route in with a crayon.
"Ok so right from the school house, past the cottages, and into the train station." Pinkie recited as she followed the directions.
Pinkie read the map. She had to go to Canterlot.
"Oh horseapples! I need a train ticket!" Pinkie said running to the ticket booth.
"Excuse me Mrs, what can I get cha?" said Steam, a conductor unicorn pony.
"A ticket to Canterlot please." Pinkie replied taking her saddlebag off her back.
"Ok, the most recent ride is leaving in 13 minutes." Steam said getting a ticket out. "That'd be..let's see...carry the 9...35 bits."
"I think I got it." Pinkie said untying her bag. "27, 32, 34.50."
"You need 50 more cents." Steam said.
"I know, but can you cut it for me just this once." Pinkie said, dilating her pupils.
"Ok fine." Steam said handing over the ticket. "Have a safe trip."
"Thanks!" Pinkie said accepting the ticket.
"Stand over there." Steam said pointing his hoof to the platform. "You know, where the other ponies waiting for their daily train are."
"Okie doke!" Pinkie said hopping towards the platform.
The tracks screeched loudly as many ponies brought their hoofs to their ears. Unfortunately, this wasn't the Canterlot train, it was the train from the crystal empire going to the crystal empire.
"Horseapples!" Pinkie yelled. "It isn't my train. It's been 12 minutes."
As if on cue, the crystal train screeched and zoomed in the direction of the crystal empire. As it left, a new train pulled into the station, this one to Canterlot.
"All aboard for Canterlot!" yelled Coal. A earth pony stallion charcoal grey with lime green hair and a cutie mark of flaming coal.
"Hey Coal!" Steam yelled waving to Coal.
"Hey brother!" Coal yelled back to Steam.
Pinkie Pie boarded the train. It wasn't until she sat down that she noticed her older sister.
"Maud! Your back from your trip!" Pinkie yelled up galloping to her sister.
"Hi Pinkie Pie. Actually, you see, I'm going to Manehattan to continue my research." Maud said blandly, like she always does. "Why are you on this train?"
"I need to get supplies from a warehouse in Canterlot because business is booming! See." Pinkie said as she put a hoof on the map marking where the warehouse was. "You sure do have a long route to go."
"I have a sleeping cabin." Maud said.
"Oh." Pinkie said as she took off her saddle bag.
Pinkie Pie took a seat beside Maud as the train started moving.
"Bye Coal!" Steam yelled from the ticket booth.
"Bye!" Coal yelled back to his brother.
The train pulled into the station as ponies started getting their luggage. Pinkie hopped off the train with her saddlebag tied around her waste.
"Bye Mauuuuud!" Pinkie yelled as she exited the train.
"Bye." Maud said in her same old monotone voice.
Pinkie, along with many ponies, walked into the streets of Canterlot. Ponies darted different ways, but Pinkie kept going straight. She was met by a large purple and pink building.
"The warehouse!" Pinkie said with excitement as she ran in.
"Hi Pinkie Pie!" yelled a blue mare with pink hair.
"Hi Cup Cake! Hi Carrot Cake!"
"Hi!" replied the orange stallion.
"What can I get cha?" Mrs.Cake said as she stopped her work.
"I need the princess costumes and some props." Pinkie said handing over a shipping receipt that so randomly appeared.
"You got it Pinks." Mr.Cake said bringing out many many boxes of supplies.
"Great! Here's the receipt." Pinkie said getting the many boxes and handing Carrot Cake the receipt.
Carrot Cake signed the receipt and returned a copy to Pinkie. Cup Cake stacked the boxes into a delivery cart. Pinkie walked out the shop door while leaving behind a few bits for Mr and Mrs.Cake.
"Great seeing you Pinkie!" Cup Cake yelled out as Pinkie boarded the delivery cart attached to the train back.
"Bye Mr and Mrs.Cake!" Pinkie yelled out as the train moved.
5 minutes later...
Suddenly, the train came to a halt, and Pinkie couldn't get out of her delivery cabin.
"Horseapples!" Pinkie said as she stomped on the floor angrily as her face turned red. "I need to get back somehow."
The shop just closed when Cheese started tingling and his cutie mark played like an accordion. This cheesey sense was not for a party, but for Pinkie Pie.
"She needs my help." Cheese said darting towards Canterlot.
Author's Note
I have no idea what I did here, just blurbed stuff out of my mind.
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Pinkie Pie banged on the door and the sides of the delivery cart. She knew it was helpless since the only other pony on the train was Coal, and he was busy trying to discover why the train stopped and to fix it.
"Hello? Coal! COAL!" Pinkie yelled out at the top of her lungs while she struggled to open the door since there was no windows.
Cheese was running beside the railways since no trains were leaving due to the stopped one. He knew that Pinkie was in there, he just knew .
"Pinkie Pie..here I come." Cheese said as he started to carefully walk through the tunnels on the tracks.
Cheese Sandwich hopped into the train and was met by a grey pony wearing something blue to hide their identity.
"Cheese Sandwich..I waited for you." the figure said in a monotone voice.
"Huh?" Cheese said squinting his eyes to try to see who it was.
Before Cheese could see who it was, he was thrown into the delivery cart where Pinkie was and the door locked behind them
"Cheesey!" Pinkie yelled tackling and hugging her coltfriend.
"Pinkie!" Cheese said returning the hug.
"Cheese Sandwich." said the monotone voice again. "Tell Pinkie how you feel about work."
"Cheese? Is there a problem?" Pinkie said looking up at him.
"Well, sometimes I feel like we work too much. Sometimes, I just wanna go somewhere or do something that doesn't have to do with being crazy." Cheese said as he looked to the ground.
"I feel the same way too Cheese." Pinkie said lifting his chin.
"Really?" Cheese said as he got up.
"Really." Pinkie said as got up and hugged Cheese back.
"Do you wanna go somewhere out tonight, just you and me?" Cheese said as he broke the hug.
"Sure."
"I knew it would work!" The monotone voice said as she opened the door.
"Yea who are you?" Cheese Sandwich said as he tried to get a good look at the hooded figure.
The pony removed her hood to reveal her face. She was a grey with dusty purple hair and blue eyes. Her cutie mark was a rock poorly cut into a diamond.
"Maud?!" Pinkie and Cheese said staring at Pinkie's older sister, their eyes wide in disbelief.
"Yes." Maud said in her usual monotone voice.
"But shouldn't you be in Manehattan?" Pinkie questioned.
"No. I made it up. I finished my rock research 2 years ago. I could tell how unhappy you and Cheese were but it doesn't show because you guys, are you guys, so I had to do something. During my rock research, I studied the art of love as well. Learned a thing or 2 from Princess Cadence." Maud replied with a smile on her face in pride.
"Wow..." Cheese said as his voice trailed off.
"That's a lot." Pinkie said finishing Cheese's sentence.
"I know." Maud said. "COAL, GET THE TRAIN MOVING!"
"YOU GOT IT MAUD!" Coal said as the train started moving again.
"He was in it too?" Pinkie said.
"Yes." Maud said as she took a seat.
Pinkie and Cheese walked in the park that was dimly lit by the moon. Cheese picked a beautiful flower and put it in Pinkie's hair.
"It looks lovely on you dear." Cheese said as he put a hoof around his marefriend's back.
"Thanks Cheese." Pinkie said as she put a hoof around his back.
As the sun rose and the sunset brushed over the land, Pinkie and Cheese kissed each other.
"You know Pinkie," Cheese said breaking away from the kiss. "We should take the week off from work, shut the shop down, take a break."
"You know what Cheesey, I would like that very much. Even if it is the busiest week, we need alone time." Pinkie said as she hopped onto the outskirts town. "You coming or what?"
"Coming!" Cheese replied as he bounced on over to her.
Author's Note
Yea, short chapter. It's not the shortest I've written though (that's like 375 words) but I sprained my finger, so it's kinda hard to type. Hope ya enjoy oh and a little spoiler. This story is unlike my other stories cause the wedding will be in the same story, but not just yet.
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They're not exactly a party pony couple, they're more like a creepy couple you would want to avoid if you saw them on the street Pt1
~1 WEEK LATER~
Huge, loud construction noises could still be heard coming from The Fun Zone after a week. At first the noise went through the streets, then reached Town Hall and Town Square, then reached the end of the apple fields.
"Dangnabbit! Won't that noise ever quiet down!" Applejack said as she and Spike covered their ears.
Rarity and Fancy Pants upgraded the Carousel Boutique for it to be bigger and fit more people. The ground started shaking.
"Darling! I thought you soundproofed it!" Rarity yelled out to Fancy.
"WHAT? I CAN'T HEAR YOU!" He yelled back holding the hooves with his ears.
"Discord! Use your magic to soundproof this or something!" Fluttershy yelled out to the draconqeus.
"I'm trying! It's not working! I think my magic's drained from all the noise!" He yelled back.
Rainbow Dash and Soarin who were stopping in Ponyville on the wonderbolts were trying to block out the noise. They flew up to the clouds, chunked a piece off, and tried to use it as earplugs. Unfortunately, that didn't work.
Flash Sentry returned home to Twilight reading a book.
"It sure is stuffy in here. I'm gonna open the window." Twilight said putting down her book.
"Twilight! NO!" Flash objected, but was unfortunately too late.
The window was open and the noise was pouring in. Twilight, quickly realizing her mistake, closed it almost immediately.
"The castle is soundproofed?" Twilight asked Flash, who gave a nod. "Huh. Cool."
Just then, Twilight and Flash heard a faint knock at the door. Twilight got up and pressed her ear up against the castle door.
"Who is it?" She asked.
"Rainbow Dash and Soarin!" A feminine voice replied.
Twilight opened the door to reveal the married pegasus couple covering their ears with their wings.
"Hello Rainbow Dash. Hi Soarin, come on it!" Twilight yelled while covering her ears with her larger wings.
The 2 pegasi walked in and Twilight shut the door behind them.
"Soundproofed?" Soarin asked.
Twilight nodded. Just then, Applejack, Spike, Rarity and Fancy Pants walked in to the soundproofed castle. Shortly after, Discord teleported him and Fluttershy into the castle. All the ponies stood there in awkward silence. Being the princess that she was, Twilight levitated a book about sleepovers.
"Slumber 101." Twilight said as Applejack and Rarity looked at each other and foolishly giggled.
"Uh Twilight, why are you putting mud on my face?" Flash asked Twilight as she put on a mud mask.
"Silly. This is a mud mask . It is to refresh and rejuvenate your complexion." Rarity cut in after applying the green mud to her face.
"Oh, ok?" Flash simply questioned, resulting in Twilight and Rarity laughing.
"So, you ruffle your wings, and then you do your wing-ups?" Rainbow Dash asked Soarin demonstrated a good warm-up technique.
"Yep." He simply replied.
"Discord! What did you do to Fancy Pant's monocle?!" Fluttershy yelled at the draconequus while pointing her hoof at the polka dotted and striped monocle.
"What! I needed to have some fun." He replied rolling his eyes. "This castle is boring! Ooh, maybe I can turn that throne into chocolate!"
"Don't you dare!" The yellow pegasus said fluttering after him.
Just then, everypony heard a knock at the door. Twilight carefully opened it using her magic and it was notable that the noise had stopped and 2 flat-maned ponies with noticeably dull colours were there, devilish smiles on their faces.
"Hi girls.." The first pony said while approaching her friends.
"Hi Pinkie..." The girls said backing away.
"Come see what me and Cheese did..." Pinkamena said backing away from her friends, who slowly approached her silently.
The entire way to The Fun Zone everypony was silent. Nopony dared to talk as they followed the creepy couple towards the dark silent home.
As they entered The Fun Zone, Pinkie and Cheese just stood there, staring at the rest of the ponies. Before anyone could say anything, the room blacked out.
Author's Note
The reason it says part 1 is because it's continuing. It's very short, yes. I tried to make it longer than the previous, but I failed, which is why it's Pt1. Anyway, yay!
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Are we even friends anymore?
Pinkie creeped around the corner at the park where the girls met up.
All the girls panted as sweat formed on their brows and underneath their wings if they had them.
"That...was...close..." Twilight panted, taking breaks in between her words to catch her breath.
A chorus of yeas and uh huhs rung throughout the rest of the girls.
"Well ahm glad we got away!" Applejack added, wiping the sweat off her face with a swish of her hoof.
"Yea! Or else we couldn't hide the secret!" Rainbow replied, seeming to catch her breath a lot quicker than the rest of the mares.
Pinkie Pie started to cry, zoning out the rest of the words that the ponies were saying. She simply walked away, eyes full of tears, mane deflating back to it's completely flat state.
Once she was out of hearing range of the ponies, they revealed the secret amongst each other.
"Keeping this party from them is gonna be hard." Rarity said, resulting in the rest nodding.
Cheese Sandwich, experiencing a very similar glimpse as Pinkie, met up with her at The Fun Zone, also with a dull, flat-mane.
"The boys said they were keeping a secret from us." The grey-orange stallion said looking down.
"Same with the girls." Pinkie replied, a tear coming down from her cheek. "How come when we are about to get married, our friends go and turn on us?"
"Hey! We have friends in the town that could help!" Cheese said, gaining the excitement in his voice.
After visiting just about everyone in town, there was one more couple. Unfortunately, that didn't work.
"Sorry Pinkie. Sorry Cheese. Vinyl is still helping Neon and I have to watch over Dancing and practice cello for the Canterlot Orchestra." Octavia said shutting the door halfway.
"Oh, we understand." Pinkie replied as she and Cheese turned around and walked away.
"Everyone...everypony." the dull pink earth pony muttered under her breath the entire way to The Fun Zone.
"Ok Octavia, here are your 50 bits." Twilight said tossing a bag of bits to the gray earth pony.
"Thank you. I'm not much of an actor, more of a musician."
Author's Note
AAAAND that's the end. This chapter was HORRENDOUSLY short, I know. SO SORRY
