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WAY Out of place

by TheObserver1231
Sanity is not always what it's cracked up to be...

EDIT: Newly added DARK tag on specially marked chapters.
A sequel to my story Out of place. (Take it easy on the negative votes and critiquing guys, it's not a masterpiece) *Still first person
***New addition to the story: View shifts for different character that will be in second person.
What you say is schizophrenic, I call life. What you call douchy, I call relatable. What you call shit, I call my own thing and don't care whether you like it or not. I'm doing this because people loved it, I loved making it, and I had a lot of open grounds to work with and decided I should do more. Besides, I have a little too much free time and am very journalistic.

Oh, and if Draequine happens to see this, I don't really care anymore. Sure I held a grudge for a time but now I guess I don't care anymore. You were right about the lower amounts of likes and people. But that I don't care about either. I made what I wanted and I did what you and all the other Ponyfalls don't. I got chapters out. Not just often, daily. And even then they were still decently lengthened and had a good story to it. I should probably go back and fix up the shite starting chaps but I'll do that when I get someone for an editor and stop being lazy when it comes to hard work. Anyways, I'm sorry for being a douche to you and everyone else. I'm especially sorry that me trying to show you just how much I like Ponyfall would get you so upset. I'm sorry, there. We cool now?

So says TheObserver1231. I'm talking to you guys from Michigan and am waiting to hear from you.(Honestly in my opinion I find a lot of the things in this "camp".)
*{characters will be added later to keep from spoiling.}

[a special thanks to KrisRix on deviantART for the cover image. Thought since in the last one it was a nice picture of human twi in a field that this would suit a sequel nicely]

(Now with subtitles!)

Cancelled
Slice of Life
Human
Sad
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Romance
Sex
Adventure
 
PTMPO

68350 words: Estimated about 6 hours to read

46 Chapters:

  1. Starting things out 2012-10-02 00:29:10 UTC
    3656
  2. Chapter 2: "One usually shits one self." 2012-06-04 21:02:53 UTC
    2368
  3. Chapter 3: 20% more Scottish 2012-06-06 18:42:06 UTC
    1017
  4. Chapter 4: Meeting the other Manes(Now with Pinkie subtitles.) 2012-07-13 15:04:35 UTC
    1260
  5. Chapter 5: Woona's part time job 2012-06-12 22:52:02 UTC
    1457
  6. Chapter 6: Down on the farm 2012-06-06 19:18:11 UTC
    1281
  7. Chapter 7: "A city in the clouds...No not like Star Wars dumbass!" 2012-06-08 02:30:42 UTC
    941
  8. Chapter 8: A pleasant surprise 2012-06-08 21:09:53 UTC
    967
  9. Chapter 9: One fuck up after another. 2012-06-11 00:09:42 UTC
    1005
  10. Chapter 10: Party's downstairs/Drink away the pain 2012-06-20 20:15:54 UTC
    1977
  11. Chapter 11: Talking it out 2012-06-11 16:51:41 UTC
    1176
  12. Chapter 12: Retribution 2012-06-12 03:04:51 UTC
    1053
  13. Chapter 13: Mail time 2012-06-12 16:43:09 UTC
    1135
  14. Chapter 14: "Aww nuts." 2012-06-13 14:42:53 UTC
    1090
  15. Chapter 15: Damn good night (Kian) 2012-06-14 13:53:05 UTC
    997
  16. Chapter 16: Workin' hard or hardly workin' ? 2012-06-15 16:04:50 UTC
    1557
  17. Chapter 17: A talk with myself 2012-10-21 04:28:25 UTC
    922
  18. Chapter 18: Seeing things 2012-06-17 13:23:00 UTC
    1095
  19. Chapter 19: Incoming! 2012-06-18 14:32:58 UTC
    1159
  20. Chapter 20: Settling in 2012-06-20 19:09:16 UTC
    1284
  21. Chapter 21: Switching positions 2012-06-22 13:55:30 UTC
    1029
  22. Chapter 22: Back to basics 2012-06-22 17:14:55 UTC
    1261
  23. Chapter 23: "We're green." 2012-06-23 03:16:42 UTC
    2296
  24. Chapter 24: Standing tall 2012-08-03 12:15:21 UTC
    1171
  25. Chapter 25: ...(Kian) 2012-11-06 02:16:46 UTC
    1117
  26. Chapter 26: "He cleans up well." 2012-06-28 02:51:11 UTC
    1491
  27. Chapter 27: Suitting up 2012-06-28 23:24:56 UTC
    1142
  28. Chapter 28: Jackass meets Equestria 2012-06-30 14:39:07 UTC
    1217
  29. Chapter 29: New reading material 2012-07-01 06:07:22 UTC
    1198
  30. Chapter 30: Like a family 2012-07-02 04:14:02 UTC
    1199
  31. Chapter 31: Animal house(Kian) 2012-07-04 00:43:57 UTC
    1093
  32. Chapter 32: More than just a dream 2012-07-08 04:06:09 UTC
    1151
  33. Chapter 33: A long-ass vacation 2012-07-08 21:47:35 UTC
    1224
  34. Chapter 34: Pinkie Promise(Kian) 2012-07-10 15:27:59 UTC
    2320
  35. Chapter 35: A special recipe[Dark] 2012-07-10 20:24:06 UTC
    2194
  36. Chapter 36: A fading line 2012-07-11 23:32:29 UTC
    1104
  37. Chapter 37: Down the drain 2012-07-23 05:46:34 UTC
    1053
  38. Chapter 38: Thinking things over 2012-07-14 16:08:56 UTC
    1036
  39. Chapter 39: Can a pony change it's coat? 2012-07-17 19:25:23 UTC
    1013
  40. Chapter 40: Fantasizing 2012-07-20 00:23:38 UTC
    1042
  41. Chapter 41: Game on 2012-09-19 01:34:03 UTC
    2478
  42. Chapter 42: Lovable yandere(Kian) 2012-07-26 16:08:51 UTC
    3154
  43. Chapter 43: They never do 2012-08-19 01:30:55 UTC
    1320
  44. Chapter 44: Introductions 2012-08-22 21:24:32 UTC
    1353
  45. Chapter 45: Revertere 2012-10-06 04:41:47 UTC
    3885
  46. Chapter 46: Inner battles 2012-11-18 17:25:10 UTC
    2412