
WAY Out of place
EDIT: Newly added DARK tag on specially marked chapters.
A sequel to my story Out of place. (Take it easy on the negative votes and critiquing guys, it's not a masterpiece) *Still first person
***New addition to the story: View shifts for different character that will be in second person.
What you say is schizophrenic, I call life. What you call douchy, I call relatable. What you call shit, I call my own thing and don't care whether you like it or not. I'm doing this because people loved it, I loved making it, and I had a lot of open grounds to work with and decided I should do more. Besides, I have a little too much free time and am very journalistic.
Oh, and if Draequine happens to see this, I don't really care anymore. Sure I held a grudge for a time but now I guess I don't care anymore. You were right about the lower amounts of likes and people. But that I don't care about either. I made what I wanted and I did what you and all the other Ponyfalls don't. I got chapters out. Not just often, daily. And even then they were still decently lengthened and had a good story to it. I should probably go back and fix up the shite starting chaps but I'll do that when I get someone for an editor and stop being lazy when it comes to hard work. Anyways, I'm sorry for being a douche to you and everyone else. I'm especially sorry that me trying to show you just how much I like Ponyfall would get you so upset. I'm sorry, there. We cool now?
So says TheObserver1231. I'm talking to you guys from Michigan and am waiting to hear from you.(Honestly in my opinion I find a lot of the things in this "camp".)
*{characters will be added later to keep from spoiling.}
[a special thanks to KrisRix on deviantART for the cover image. Thought since in the last one it was a nice picture of human twi in a field that this would suit a sequel nicely]
(Now with subtitles!)





46 Chapters:
- Starting things out 2012-10-02 00:29:10 UTC3656
- Chapter 2: "One usually shits one self." 2012-06-04 21:02:53 UTC2368
- Chapter 3: 20% more Scottish 2012-06-06 18:42:06 UTC1017
- Chapter 4: Meeting the other Manes(Now with Pinkie subtitles.) 2012-07-13 15:04:35 UTC1260
- Chapter 5: Woona's part time job 2012-06-12 22:52:02 UTC1457
- Chapter 6: Down on the farm 2012-06-06 19:18:11 UTC1281
- Chapter 7: "A city in the clouds...No not like Star Wars dumbass!" 2012-06-08 02:30:42 UTC941
- Chapter 8: A pleasant surprise 2012-06-08 21:09:53 UTC967
- Chapter 9: One fuck up after another. 2012-06-11 00:09:42 UTC1005
- Chapter 10: Party's downstairs/Drink away the pain 2012-06-20 20:15:54 UTC1977
- Chapter 11: Talking it out 2012-06-11 16:51:41 UTC1176
- Chapter 12: Retribution 2012-06-12 03:04:51 UTC1053
- Chapter 13: Mail time 2012-06-12 16:43:09 UTC1135
- Chapter 14: "Aww nuts." 2012-06-13 14:42:53 UTC1090
- Chapter 15: Damn good night (Kian) 2012-06-14 13:53:05 UTC997
- Chapter 16: Workin' hard or hardly workin' ? 2012-06-15 16:04:50 UTC1557
- Chapter 17: A talk with myself 2012-10-21 04:28:25 UTC922
- Chapter 18: Seeing things 2012-06-17 13:23:00 UTC1095
- Chapter 19: Incoming! 2012-06-18 14:32:58 UTC1159
- Chapter 20: Settling in 2012-06-20 19:09:16 UTC1284
- Chapter 21: Switching positions 2012-06-22 13:55:30 UTC1029
- Chapter 22: Back to basics 2012-06-22 17:14:55 UTC1261
- Chapter 23: "We're green." 2012-06-23 03:16:42 UTC2296
- Chapter 24: Standing tall 2012-08-03 12:15:21 UTC1171
- Chapter 25: ...(Kian) 2012-11-06 02:16:46 UTC1117
- Chapter 26: "He cleans up well." 2012-06-28 02:51:11 UTC1491
- Chapter 27: Suitting up 2012-06-28 23:24:56 UTC1142
- Chapter 28: Jackass meets Equestria 2012-06-30 14:39:07 UTC1217
- Chapter 29: New reading material 2012-07-01 06:07:22 UTC1198
- Chapter 30: Like a family 2012-07-02 04:14:02 UTC1199
- Chapter 31: Animal house(Kian) 2012-07-04 00:43:57 UTC1093
- Chapter 32: More than just a dream 2012-07-08 04:06:09 UTC1151
- Chapter 33: A long-ass vacation 2012-07-08 21:47:35 UTC1224
- Chapter 34: Pinkie Promise(Kian) 2012-07-10 15:27:59 UTC2320
- Chapter 35: A special recipe[Dark] 2012-07-10 20:24:06 UTC2194
- Chapter 36: A fading line 2012-07-11 23:32:29 UTC1104
- Chapter 37: Down the drain 2012-07-23 05:46:34 UTC1053
- Chapter 38: Thinking things over 2012-07-14 16:08:56 UTC1036
- Chapter 39: Can a pony change it's coat? 2012-07-17 19:25:23 UTC1013
- Chapter 40: Fantasizing 2012-07-20 00:23:38 UTC1042
- Chapter 41: Game on 2012-09-19 01:34:03 UTC2478
- Chapter 42: Lovable yandere(Kian) 2012-07-26 16:08:51 UTC3154
- Chapter 43: They never do 2012-08-19 01:30:55 UTC1320
- Chapter 44: Introductions 2012-08-22 21:24:32 UTC1353
- Chapter 45: Revertere 2012-10-06 04:41:47 UTC3885
- Chapter 46: Inner battles 2012-11-18 17:25:10 UTC2412