Has your luck with the mares been horrible lately? Do your attempts at flirting usually end up with a visit to the police station, or a spray of mace in the face? Well your in luck. This guide will teach you how to hold a steady conversation with the ladies, score a date, and , if your super lucky, an invitation to their house. My name's Scorching Stripes, and I'm here to help you with your lady problems.
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So this is my first story ever on fimfiction, and I thought a romantic comedy might help break the ice. The story follows my OC helping three guys get through their problems, so it'll have a lot of chapters with them talking, like flashbacks.
Criticism is appreciated.

Rated Teen for future chapter dialogue; hitting on mares.