Chapters Special Promises (An OC Book)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends were awoken from their slumber from the loudest yell they had ever heard.
"MANE SIX!"
All of them rushed from their houses to the source of the noise, which was a lovely mansion made from ice in the sky. (A/N Just... Imagine Frozen. Except the castle is in the sky) They stared at awe and walked slowly up the stairs that led to the door. Before Twilight had even knocked, the door flew open to reveal an angry lilac unicorn, growling at the Mane Six. A giant gust of wind blew them into the house, where they were surprised to feel a soft, warm carpet on the ground of an ice castle. Twilight then paled, as she realized who the unicorn was.
"I presume you understand why you are here, Twilight Sparkle?" The unicorn narrowed her eyes and spat out the name like it was garbage. Twilight gulped and nodded her head.
"I, have just finished watching the new season. Which, I must say, for a daily life vlogging series is really incredible. Anyway... I think someone forgot a friendship promise." Rainbow Dash snarled.
"You dare to provoke the Mane Six?!" She tried to fly at the pony, but as she got ready to fly, she froze.
"Tsk, tsk. Rainbow Dash, I expected you to know my domain. After all, how did I create my home?" Applejack frowned and decided that it wouldn't be a good idea to irritate the lilac colored unicorn.
"Well, then sugarcube. What's your name? And what's y'all domain? Or is it domains? What do they do? Also, what's this 'bout a... 'friendship promise'?" The pony's cold gaze swept over the Mane Six, making them shiver.
"My name is Lilac Snowflake. I control frost and ice. I could freeze your blood like RD's, and make you stay here for eternity. I provide most of the snow for Winter. And the friendship promise? Well... Let's just say, Twilight Sparkle," she spat. "Has some explaining to do."
Twilight gulped and sighed. "I promised Lilac that..." She then mumbled something that no pony could hear.
"What was that, sugarcube?" Lilac looked thoughtful for a moment.
"You don't tell, no Element of Loyalty." Rainbow looked a little miffed, being a trade offer.
"I promised Lilac that I would include OCs of fans into the series by the end of this season. I promised it on a friendship." The rest of the Mane Six gawked as they processed the information. The Princess of Friendship had broken a friendship promise. And that friendship promise made Twilight lose a friend.
"So, my DEAR Twilight... Let's begin."
Author's Note
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
BlazeFire (BronyBlazeFire's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
She sighed as the chime struck 1 AM and hung up her cap. BlazeFire started to walk out of the building from her job and flew off to her home, a midnight black house above the Everfree Forest. While flying, she pondered over her past jobs. There was the baker, where she had presumed that her black and white flame cutie mark was for the fire that bakes the bread. But she had managed to burn every loaf. She then had turned to being a bouncer, which had payed well. Her bulky frame was perfect for keeping out the people that kept sneaking in. She then wondered why she gave up that job as a night guard. Probably because the job felt much more comfortable.
Her wings fluttered in the wind, making a whooshing sound which her ears, enhanced with the bat pony heritage picked up. But then again, her wings were like bats too. BlazeFire landed in front of her home and entered.
"Hello..." A soft whisper spoke in her home, causing her to scratch the floor with her griffin claws.
"Oh. I'm sorry. I didn't mean to frighten you. I just crashed into your home... And wanted to explore."
Blazefire rolled her eyes and grumbled. "And that gives you permission to walk into my house?" The peach colored pony blushed and poked her head out of the shadow to see the blue and green Griffin-Bat hybrid. Her eyes widened and rolled to the back of her head. Blazefire shook her head, lifted the yellow pony which she recognized as Fluttershy, and flew towards Twilight's castle. The bright and shiny crystal castle was hard to miss.
Knocking on the door, she laid Fluttershy on her back and waited. The well known purple alicorn answered the door, only looking surprised for a millisecond. Then she say Fluttershy on the griffin's back and stepped back, her horn aglow, ready for a fight.
BlazeFire only rolled her eyes again. "I've come to return Fluttershy, who decided to walk into my house to explore. Then she saw me and fainted." The purple pony relaxed and levitated the pegasus off the griffin's back and nodded her head in thanks. The door closed and BlazeFire flew off again.
Yawning, she went into her home and fell asleep on her fluffy cloud bed, at 2:49 AM.
She opened her eyes to look at the clock, which read 9 AM. Then she took in her surroundings. A rainbow maned pegasus and Fluttershy were staring at her, making BlazeFire hop up from the bed and extend her bat wings. Rainbow Dash only looked shocked while Fluttershy looked with interest.
"Nice crib, ya got here, bud!" Rainbow Dash spoke in a raspy voice. Blaze already knew about the pegasus's ego, and getting a compliment from her? Pretty hard. Blaze nodded her head in thanks then went onto the obvious question.
"WHY DO YOU KEEP COMING TO MY HOUSE UNINVITED?!" Rainbow looked shocked and spoke with a 'duh' tone.
"Cause we're the Mane Six?" Blaze faceclawed, but stayed silent.
"Um... I asked Rainbow to come with me to see the Griffon-bat hybrid. I'm sorry for coming into your home uninvited." Blaze snarled a bit, upset. It made Fluttershy shake and hide behind Dash, who glared at the griffin.
"So what. I'm a display now? I'm just trying to get a good rest-" And Dash cut her off.
"A good rest at 9 AM? It's basically the afternoon." Glaring at the pegasus, she continued.
"A good rest because my job is a night guard and I got back at 2 AM." The rainbow pegasus remained silent after that. Then Fluttershy pulled out some apples from her bag.
"Are you hungry? You can have some..." Blaze rolled her eyes but took an apple anyway and ate it. It tasted of freshness and was very sweet and juicy. Blaze nodded her thanks and showed them to the door.
After a bit of morning prep, she flew out to the town and bought a lock and keys, making sure she also bought a new bag, as the old one had broken. Blaze walked into the house again to be greeted with streamers and a giant poster that said, "WELCOME TO PONYVILLE!"
"ARGH! WILL YOU STOP COMING INTO MY HOUSE?!"
Author's Note
That was fun to write at 10 PM... I'm serious. It's much more entertaining then watching a dog trying to enter a room with a cat in it. Well, BronyBlazeFire, here's your story. Please tell me how you like it, and PM me if you want me to include or remove something~
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Abyssal Shield (Shadow Hero's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
~A while ago...~
~Two Years After~
He couldn't do anything. Chocolate rain was constantly drenching him as he floated around the castle, unable to do anything but hope that Discord would be stopped. Then suddenly, he dried off and he fell from the top of the throne room to the ground. He opened his wings and flapped, making the room smell of death. He thought of how lucky he was to escape England and get to this magical land, where he wouldn't be pulling carriages.
The Grand Galloping Gala
They both were intrigued in their platter when they crashed into each other, ruining their formal outfits. They looked at each other and felt the spark of love. They began to chat about their guard life until a pink pony started singing about random stuff. They laughed and walked out to the gardens where they found a crazed yellow pegasus yelling about animals loving her. They shook their heads and started walking around the castle.
1 year later
She was crying as she stared at the ring he had presented to her at their favorite garden. They had been watching Celestia around the garden when he had pulled out the gemstone. Celestia turned around to see what had her favorite guard crying, and gasped when she saw the threstral holding the ring out for her. She smiled.
30 years later
He sighed. Another day of just... wandering. Then he smelled it. Death was coming upon someone. He rushed to the scent where he found a cowering changeling filly about to be killed by a guard. He looked around and saw the dead bodies of what looked to be the filly's kin. His heart softened and he charged forward to meet the guard at sword point.
The guard was astonished to see a unicorn attack him with a sword. What shocked him was the cutie mark the stallion had, a shield with a sword. He shook off his shock and continued to fight until he realized he had already been knocked down and held by sword point by the neck. He gulped and readied himself for death.
The grey stallion however got off him and demanded the guard's armour. Too shocked to fight back, the guard took off his armour and left.
"Why... why would you help me?" The little changeling filly spoke, shy. The stallion's eyes softened and kneeled, where he was at eye level with the changeling.
"Because no one deserves to be killed, unless with good reason." The changeling looked at him with the bright green orbs and hugged him.
"Can I come with you, mister? I want to be just like you!" The pony, though wanting to allow the child, shook his head and looked away, not wanting to see the filly's disappointment.
"Don't call me 'mister'. My name is Abyssal Shield. My travels are too dangerous for a filly." And with that, he dropped some bits by the filly's side and walked off to what he believed was the nearest village.
Two days had passed since he met the filly and ate anything. He had given the filly the last of his bits and was still walking on the road, chewing some grass. Then he saw something else, that wasn't a village. It was a town, with a giant castle. A giant... Crystal castle. Abyss wondered if there was even some merchandise at the local store. He hoped the town would pay well for armour.
"HI! WELCOME TO PONYVILLE! ARE YOU HERE FOREVER?!" A pink pony hopped out of a barrel and started singing. What she sang... He had no idea.Just... keep walking . He thought to himself. The pink pony didn't bother him afterwards, the only times he saw her was when she was hiding, trying to spot out his secrets.
"Hello. I'm Abyssal Shield. I'm here to buy and sell." The store pony, Amethyst nodded.
"What do you have to offer?" He held up the armour, making her widen her eyes. She nodded and walked to the back. Two seconds later, 6 colorful ponies, including the pink one had burst into the shop, 'surrounding' him. He rolled his eyes.
"What did I do now? This is the 4th Princess that has confronted me!" They looked shocked at his tone but still stood strong, as the alicorn walked up.
"You have been spotted with guard armour that looks beat up. You are covered in mud and sweating, with a sword next to you. What do you expect, a welcome party?" Abyss only rolled his eyes and sighed.
"I was attacking the guard because he was slaughtering changelings." The rainbow pony gasped in shock.
"And did you? Changelings are EVIL!" He grumbled, and the girls heard snippets of 'arrogant' and 'evil pricks'. He took a breath and spoke.
"Because those changelings were fillies. I dislike changelings, but they are children and they don't deserve to be killed like that. There was only one child left, all the others were lying on the side, some decapitated and some with their chests ripped open. Those were only. Foals." He continued to raise his voice. "FOALS! THEY WERE CHILDREN THAT WERE MURDERED IN COLD BLOOD! THE PARENTS WERE LYING ON THE SIDE OF THE HOME, DEAD! THEY WERE DEAD, DEFENDING THEIR CHILDREN!" At this moment, the girls were shocked at how passionate at his loyalty for the defeated enemies.
He panted, drained of air after the rant. Sighing, he shook his head and left. The 6 ponies were awestruck. Ever since they allowed OC's to enter Equestria, they had been astonished by how they acted. They acted more violent, and were not as forgiving to others.
What really shocked Twilight was the grey stallion's blood line when she scanned him. It composed of unicorns, and a pegasus that had to do with death. Off to the library... And with that, she walked to her home, intent of finding the other bloodline's source.
What she found was what shocked her most, it was a... threstral...? Apparently it came from a place called... England. She didn't know anything besides the fact that only people who had seen death could see the winged beasts. That was probably why everyone except the new foals could see him.
She sighed. Abyssal Shield was an odd pony. But then again, most of the OCs were. She grinned. The OC ponies were incredible.
She didn't regret making that promise one bit.
Author's Note
Another one done! Woohoo! This is for you, Shadow Hero!
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Ruby Starlight (RuinQueenofOblivion's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Beads of sweat rolled down her forehead as she grabbed the scalpel to remove a bullet that had been shot close to near the heart. The pony was about to die if it wasn't removed from him soon. With a breath of relief, the metal came out of the body, clattering to the hard ground of the abandoned shelter. Using her magic, she sealed the wound. The stallion nodded his head and paid her the caps and the bottle of Sparkle Soda before trotting off into the fallout wilderness. Her friend, a unicorn, looked at the bullet and gasped.
"It's... not made out of anything I've seen before!" He said as he tried to figure out what material the bullet was made of. Ruby frowned and trotted over. Before the fallout, her friend had been a metal inspector, and if her friend couldn't figure it out... Well, maybe no one could. She looked at it, and saw... a swirling vortex. She looked at it a bit closer and screamed as it pulled her into who knows where.
She landed on a hard, checkered floor right next to a clean bed. She had never seen a clean item before, besides her guns and tools. Looking up, she saw a confused nurse, wearing a clean, white outfit. In fact, her fur was white as snow too. The nurse seemed surprised to see such a dirty looking pony in her hospital. Then she looked at the pony's cutie mark. It was a lot like hers. Too much like hers. But she shrugged it off.
"Who are you?" Nurse Redheart spoke.
"My name is Ruby Starlight."
The nurse nodded and contacted the Princess, alerting her of perhaps another OC.
The Princess was dozing off in another boring 'conference' when she felt the message.
'Princess, I've found another OC I believe. She doesn't look to be from our time period.'
The alicorn stood up abruptly, as the council members stared at her in question and scolding matter. Celestia looked at Twilight and nodded, allowing the purple alicorn to leave the meeting room. Twilight teleported herself to the hospital where a dirt-caked, red pony was staring at the hospital like it was gold.
"Who are you?" The red pony was up in an instant, her horn aglow. "My question is who are you? Alicorn." The unusual mare spat out.
"My name is Twilight Sparkle. Are you from this time period?" The unicorn lowered her attack stance, but still held the magic in her horn to a high power standard.
"Time period? I'm from the Fallout. Why is everything so clean? Why are you not trying to kill me for supplies?" Twilight took in the information and frowned. Kill her? She didn't want that.
Ruby Starlight's P.O.V.
"You're dead. You aren't supposed to be here. You... You're Twilight Sparkle. You... You... You're supposed to be a unicorn." Ruby couldn't comprehend everything at once and backed up, hitting some pony else. A pink pony with poofy hair. The pony looked like a statue of one of the Ministries. She shook her head. It wasn't real. They were dead. Then she saw one pony that she was calm in.
"Fluttershy, my teacher! Why are they still alive? Am I looking at a memory orb?" Her 'teacher' looked confused and nervous.
"I... I don't know you..." Ruby became more confused. What is her teacher talking about? She only caught the eyes of a concerned bunny before the world turned black.
"Oh how ironic. The healer needs healing." That made Nurse Redheart more confused as she stared at the unconscious dirt caked pony. That dirty thing, a healer? She couldn't imagine what dimension 'Ruby Starlight' came from.
Hours later, Ruby woke up with a pounding headache. Or rather, a pounding on the head from a rabbit. "Angel...? Is that you?" The rabbit nodded and gestured to the room. She looked around and realized that she was no longer in the clean hospital, but in a much nicer version of her shelter.
"Oh, you're awake! Angel dearie, don't bully the poor unicorn." The yellow mare clopped (Dirty people... Bad minds.) into view and placed a steaming wet cloth on Ruby's forehead. She closed her eyes and let the darkness take over again, hoping that there wouldn't be a monster from the Fallout to kill her. Oh how wrong she was.
She opened her eyes and her ears flicked up, hearing the sounds of arguing. Gently getting off the beautiful furniture, she poked her head into the other room, where she saw a draconicus flapping over Fluttershy, glaring at her mentor. Then her heart stopped as she saw it scratch Fluttershy's wings, making them flayed and useless. He shook his head as he looked at what he had done, then he flew off. Coward. She thought as she rushed over to Fluttershy's side, ready for healing duty.
Ruby quickly scanned Fluttershy, and got to work quickly, summoning bandages and splints out of nowhere. Soon, Fluttershy was able to hover over the ground once more. Ruby explored the house and noticed a beautiful red gem in the shape of her cutie mark. She saw Angel staring at her, eyebrow raised. She blushed and walked to Fluttershy. Ruby then sighed, glancing at Fluttershy at sometimes, averting the eyes of her 'mentor'.
"Ruby, what is it? Why are you so nervous?" Ruby scuffled the ground as Angel pulled on her tail, nodding his head. Ruby glanced at the bunny, then sighed.
"As much as I love the cleanliness of this world's Ponyville, I have to get back to my friend. He's waiting for me, and he can't heal anyone. Please, send me back!" Starlight's voice rose higher and higher as she told Fluttershy what was bothering her. Fluttershy nodded, then indicated for the red mare to follow her. Ruby kneeled down and let Angel hop on. They rushed to Twilight's castle, where she told the alicorn about her question. Twilight nodded and teleported all four of them to Celestia's throne room, where at first Ruby was suspicious and didn't trust the ruler of the lands. After all, she had been the start of the demise of Equestria.
After being assured, Ruby told Celestia of her problem. Celestia, as impassive as ever, brought the red unicorn to a room which had hundreds of portals, all in unusual forms. There where some hoof held mirrors, goblets, and a black, square object that had little squares in it. It had been glowing. Ruby wondered what it was. While she was pondering, she crashed into the tall alicorn's long legs.
In front of her was the same bullet that had brought her to this dimension. Nodding her thanks, she looked into it again. The last thing she saw was a bunny, waving goodbye.
3rd Person P.O.V.
"OOF! Get OFF YOU RAIDER SCUM-" Her friend paused as he looked at who landed on top of him. Worried sick, he had closed down the hospital, and continued to try to understand what the bullet was made of.
"RUBY STARLIGHT! Where have you been?!" Shaking her head, she looked at the destroyed remains of Fluttershy's cottage. Taking the bullet, she put it into a glass case that had remained unbroken through the war. He looked at her in confusion, but didn't question it. She smiled and flipped the sign to 'Open'. One mare slowly walked in with something on her back. The mare looked up and smiled as the 'thing' hopped off her back.
"Fluttershy! I haven't seen you in a long time!" Ruby went to greet the old mare when she noticed the bunny covered in soot. He held something and offered it to her. It was the red cutie mark gem. Her eyes widened and she allowed a smile to cover her face, and carefully placed the gem into an unbreakable box.
"Angel insisted on coming to see you. I'm glad to see you again, my student." Angel left to a small tunnel. He pulled out a small device and turned it on. Nodding to the image, he smiled.
"Good job, my agent."
Author's Note
This is RuinQueenofOblivion's OC story~
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Midnight Strike (Midnight Strike's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Flying off to see her friends was nice, but when she went home, many friends would be there, just to play with her. But that was going to be late at dusk. Right now, she smiled as she quickly flew to her idol's workspace, hoping to catch a glimpse of what was inside of the fabled 'Rainbow Factory.' (NO!! NOT THAT RAINBOW FACTORY!) Grinning, she went into a cloud bank as peeked through the clouds and watched zoom into the Factory.
Midnight Strike's P.O.V.
Flapping up, I started to fly to a cloud bank. Halfway there, I felt something move in my mane. I paused, causing something blue to tumble out. I caught it. Frowning, I stared at the feathered bundle. "What were you thinking, Bolt? You know you are too young to accompany me." I shook my head. Too late to bring him back.
I must have been lucky today, because when I watched Rainbow Dash walk into the Factory, the door didn't swing all the way shut! Smirking, I stuck my tongue out at the key card scanner and quickly flew in. Zipping around the Factory was easy, after all, I could just tuck in the clouds. Then I saw her in a white lab coat, heading to the deeper part of the Factory. I guess I flapped too fast because I soon flew past her and into the snow building, where I saw an astonished lilac unicorn. She then frowned and went to talk to some other unicorns.
"How'd you get in here, kid?" The voice of my idol spoke. I tensed, waiting for scolding until she opened her mouth and laughed.
"You are one fast pegasus, you know that? You reached half the speed needed for the Sonic Rainboom! Of course, I could fly like that when I was a filly, but that's besides the point!" She held her hoof out and I gladly accepted it, silently vowing to never wash that hoof again. She sneered the unicorns, which two I recall to be some of her enemies. I then sneered at them, getting myself covered in snow. I sped out and around the Factory, trying to find Rainbow Dash. I bumped into a yellow pegasus.
"Hey, are you ok?" She looked relieved not to have someone freaking out about her. I wonder why. Smiling, she nods.
Then she speaks in a soft voice, "Hello. Are you going to see Rainbow Dash?" I nod. "I am too." She blushes and paws at the clouds.
"Would you like to come with me to visit her?" I glance at her. "Would I?! Yes!"
We chatted for a while until I had asked her, "What's your name?" Her gaze went from smiling to a slack, forced grin on her face.
"Fluttershy... My name is Fluttershy." Then it came to me. The yellow fur, the long pink mane! "Oh my goodness! You are Fluttershy, the animal caretaker? All my winged animals love to talk about you!" Her shyness vanished, and her eyes widened as she noticed Bolt in my mane. Squealing, she picked him up and swung him around. He twittered in shock as he was shoved into the picnic basket and picked up.
"You should have told me you loved animals, I would have talked to you about them right away!" She giggled and we started flight again.
We landed on a giant cloud home, that was near an ice mansion. Definitely on my break in and explore list. Turning back to look at Fluttershy, she had disappeared. Then she poked her head out of the cloud wall. "You coming?" I nod and trot though the wall.
"Fluttershy, I'm not going on another lame picnic of yours! I need to train for the performance next week! You know the Wonderbolts don't let trainees slack off!" I saw my hero rolling her magenta eyes as they wandered over the room. "And where's the guest? You better not have brought another- AGH!" Bolt started to attack Rainbow Dash, unaware that she was my hero. I quickly flew in and detained him (caught him) and apologized profusely.
"I'm so sorry, Rainbow Dash! I don't know what came over him..." She scanned me over, then her eyes widened as her gaze landed on my cutie mark. "You're the pony that managed to get into the Rainbow Factory! Hey, are you coming to the picnic with Flutters over there?" She gestured to the yellow mare, scolding my poor blue bird for attacking Rainbow. Well, that was rude of him. I nodded, and she turned to Fluttershy.
"Well, Flutters. If she's going, I'm going too! I could give her a little 'Rainbow' training!" I smiled at that, nodded, and picked up the basket of goodies and the blanket. We flew over to a hill, where I could see was near the staircase going up to the giant ice mansion. Guess I had a detour to make. Rainbow looked at the castle and snorted. I looked at her in confusion.
"The owner of the house is technically the reason you exist. Without her, you never would have come here, programmed with those memories that you remember." I nodded, remembering that I was just in this... black room until I was suddenly sucked out of it into a house with tons of animals. "But the price was me. She froze my blood, making me immobile. I was the bargaining chip!" Rainbow was upset by now, kicking her hoof into the ground.
"Now, now, Rainbow. You know that you were being arrogant. You were in her house, and you disrespected the hostess. What do you expect, a welcoming party?" At this, Rainbow grinned lopsided. "Yeah, but I get awesome new friends, such as you- uh... What was your name?" I giggled a bit, putting a hoof to my muzzle to muffle the laughter.
"My name is Midnight Strike." I didn't care that she didn't know my name. She called me HER. AWESOME. FRIEND. That was all I needed. We ate lunch, which was delicious. Who knew salad could taste so good with home grown crops? Then Rainbow dragged me over to 'train'. She cracked a lot of bones during warm up, which made me wonder about her skeletal structure. "Now, Strike. Fly as fast as you can go. Fluttershy here will race you. Don't underestimate her, she was the reason the hurricane could reach Cloudsdale."
Grinning, I nodded. This was the best day EVER!
Author's Note
I just realized that I put all your OC's P.O.V.s in 3rd person. Want me to change it or nah??
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Accalia Lupa (Accalia Lupa's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Panting, she quickly ran into the dark forest, where she hoped that the guards wouldn't chase her in. Yelling out her best friend's name, she continued to run, her paws and hooves starting to hurt. A sudden blast of dark blue magic struck Celestia's guards as she stood, panting.
"Zeff! Help me! Celestia... ordered my..." The last words spoken caused her to lose too much energy, and she fell to the ground in a dead faint. Then, Zeff Corni sensed a powerful aura... Even more powerful aura then his princess. Levitating his fallen friend, he sent one more beam of dark blue energy at the white alicorn descending, and ran off into the darkness. "Wake up, Accalia... Please."
Celestia's P.O.V.
Struck by a sudden beam of light, I captured the magic and absorbed the essence. What I had expected wasn't what I had wanted. Another OC was wandering. If only I didn't take my niece's alicorn wings... Maybe this mayhem of ponies and creatures wouldn't have come. If only I had listened to her that night...
~~Memory~~
"Ms. Snowflake, go pack your items from the library and move to the guest room." She eyed me questionably but did as I asked. Over the years, I focused more on Twilight Sparkle's magic lessons, but Twilight's magic essence continued to stay the same level until one day... She managed to defeat me in a magic duel. Her essence spiked up to my level and beyond. That's the day I had to take the wings. So I promised her that I would make her a princess when she was ready. I wasn't thinking that night. I yelled at Lilac, and she told me something about a promise. A promise that I would let her become a princess. And that it was to her mother too. I don't know why I didn't stop her, as she used her advanced magic to tear off her wings, making her an unicorn with alicorn and beyond powers.
I realized that not even Twilight could do that, and I tried to stop her from running. I was too late, and I collapsed as I realized I broke my promise to Luna, to make her daughter a princess when she came back from the moon. I wailed in despair, and collapsed, cradling a picture that had fallen on the ground. It showed all three of us, Luna, Lilac as a child, and me, smiling. We were so young back then...
~~Memory~~
But then again, Equestria was so boring before they came along...
Accalia Lupa's P.O.V.
Waking up after running for miles was not fun. My head pulsed as I opened my eyes, revealing Zeff. He looked at me disapprovingly as he kneaded the floor of our little home.
"What are you doing? Being chased by them again? What's Luna going to say about-" The shack started to shake as he stopped talking.
"I have heard about this... business. Accalia. Come here."A loud voice rang from the skies. Ducking my head, I walked out of my home to my master. Glaring down at me, she opens her mouth, only to start laughing.
"You should have seen Tia's face! She was so mortified from having some OC escape from her!" She fell on the ground and continued to laugh. The guards looked bewildered, not used to seeing their princess laugh. I was lost with them.
"Anyways, onto more pressing matters. I have decided that to ensure your safety, you will train my- I mean you will train WITH my guards every day, and at night, you are free to do what you want... After asking my permission." What did she mean I will train her guards...? Wait... Moon shards and Sunny rays! I have to train with guards?!
After repeating this information to Zeff, his eyes widened. "Accalia! That's such an honor!" I shook my head and stomped my paw and hoof on the ground. "What do you mean that's an honor? I have to train the entire day!" He snorted.
"You are such a sissy. Everyone wants to train with LUNA's guards!" I groaned and slammed my head into a pillow. And continued to slam my head until Zeff used his magic to hold my head.
"Well this Lycanalago DOESN'T want to... I'm lazy enough. Please Zeff! Keep her away..." He only smiled and shook his head 'no'.
"I hate you, Z..."
~Le Next Morning~
"Rise and shine, Sleeping Beauty! Big day ahead of you!" Slamming my hoof on Zeff's face was fun. Running from him... Not so much. My paws can't take as much stress, and it started to throb after a while. Of course, the snow in the winter did help out with my paws hurting. Oh the joy when I become full fledged, cause it means I'll be like Zeff, able to run around with two pairs of hooves on my legs. I did what I always did, I gaped at the sight of Luna's hidden palace in the forest... It was a beauty.
"Accalia? Is that you?" My best flirt friend, Gruno was guarding today. "How's your flirting coming along?" I pouted.
"No practice. I gotta go see the Princess. Ciao, Gruno!" Racing in the the castle, I slammed into a guard. His eyes lit up in amusement. Did I mention he looks cute?
"Are you our trainer? We're the new guards and the Princess says that we need to find a gray coated Lycanalago fledgling. Blushing, I look behind him to find a whole unit (10) behind him. So THIS is what the Princess meant by training her guards!
"Well, what are we waiting for? To the training room!" The guards looked at me in confusion.
The leader, a pony with a black coat and galaxy cutie mark opened his mouth and I zoned out immediately. All I heard was, 'tour', 'no training room', 'where?'
Raising my paw, I stopped him from talking. "Okay, I zoned out. But..." I paused as he snorted in frustration. "You done? Okay. There is no training room in the castle. But... Come to my kingdom and you can find your training ground. Follow me." Flicking my tail, I indicated them to follow me. My ear twitched as listened to their murmuring in the back. Being half wolf had it's advantages. 'She must suck as a trainer...' This got me ticked off. Growling, walked over and smacked his mouth. He was a night blue unicorn with a sword as a cutie mark.
"Okay, first of all... No talking while marching. All of you. Second, don't backtalk your trainer. I've been here for all my life, training with the Princess. You try and step out of line, I'll smash your tiny body into pieces!" They nodded and started to walk in a straight line, no talking at all. We stopped at the secluded part of the forest. Flicking my tail in the ground, I wrote 'Wait here' in the dirt. They didn't move at all when I started climbing the trees. Then I started jumping all around, smashing tree branches.
After I finished, I smiled. The training course was complete. I jumped off the tree and landed in front of the awestruck guards. "Your training course. Run it!" I yelled. Tripping up the blue pony that back talked me, I smirked.
"And you... Swordin. Look out. Not everyone is destroyed by the sword." He looked at me in confusion, and ran off to catch up to his comrades.
Sighing in content, I watched my troop run until dusk. Then I started to run the course.
~Hours later~
"Accalia. Accalia. Wake up, child." Looking up, I stared at my princess.
"Your highness! I apologize-" She smiled, something that she doesn't do that much.
"Your unit has requested a day off. I believe one of them said they felt like their legs where going to fall off." Blushing, I pawed the ground. "I'm sorry for over working them, your highness." Shaking her head, she looked at me.
"You're doing perfect, my dear."
Author's Note
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Anywho... This is Accalia Lupa's OC, nice time writing it, really killed some time in school with this one. Woo!
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Bopping his head to the music, new tunes entered his ears when suddenly-
"Hey! Ya listenin' here? I've been tryin' ta tell ya that you need some new headphones, these are disgusting!" Applejack waved around his precious child in front of his face. He frowned as he snatched them from her grasp.
Looking at them, he nearly threw up. They were dripping of sweat and it was sparking, with bits of his food embedded on it. Nodding, he went over to the local store where he hoped they sold headphones. They were his life.
Waveform's P.O.V.
My disgusting habits landed me in another pickle. I can pay for the headphones if they don't cost so much. Then I see it, my light. Brand new headphones that cost... me 50 bits?! This is ridiculous, my current ones were only 20! If only there was some... headphone repair store. But there isn't. Guess I'm taking a job today.
~At the Party~
This party is awesome! Mixing up tunes is my passion, after all, that's my cutie mark! But as I continued to scratch, another DJ came in. With that white coat and blue mane, she looked like... Vinyl! Oh crap, did I take her job? Oh well, it's mine now. I have to get those new headphones! Did I mention that I'm jealous of hers? She lowered her glasses and glared at me as she set up her booth on the other side of the room. Pointing at me, then at the board, I got her message.
It's time for a... DJ BATTLE! @>^<@
I nodded, accepting her challenge. Stopping my music, I watched as the party-goers groan in protest. She chose a song, and started with a simple scratch beat. I contradicted with a similar, more upbeat tune, and a more of a long-short scratch pattern. People started to get what was going on and cheered for us. She narrowed her eyes at my dangerous approach and slowly rose her volume and speed to a rate about... 5 pony clops per hour. That was pretty fast for a mixing speed as everypony started to dance to the beat. I smiled at her fast challenge and decided to play the censored version of Scream and Shout. Mixing it at a really fast speed (which hurt my hoof), I watched as the ponies started to scream with enjoyment from this song. Grinning, I cocked my head at Vinyl, smirking.
Grinning, she reached down and pulled out... Octavia?! Together, they made an orchestrated dub step song, and it was clear I had lost this battle. By the end, it was around 2AM, and everypony had left the party as the DJs put away their boards and such. I felt a nudge to my side and looked at the white pony. Grinning, she made me take out my bits bag and then... She dumped in half of the pay! Winking, Vinyl took my headphones from my head and smashed it in half. Oh my Celestia... She knew about my disgusting headphones the whole mix. Welp... I didn't want to be humiliated in front of my idol anyway.
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I looked into the display window, and realized that they changed the headphones again, to a pretty awesome looking, neon blue, glow in the dark headphones. Galloping in, I looked at the price of it and groaned. 75 bits?! I sighed and went out of the store, feeling like crap. I crashed into a little filly that looked a lot like Octavia who was hit with an age spell. She was trying to play the violin, so I lifted her up, and helped her drag her hoof to play a nice remix of Applause, by Sapphire Shores. I smiled as she gurgled happily, hugging my leg. Looking up, I see that a crowd has formed, and were staring at us, wide eyed.
"OCTAVIA! Where are you?!" I hear and watch somepony, or rather Twilight Sparkle run to the front and drag the baby from me with her magic. After the princess leaves, the crowd goes wild, throwing bits at me which hurts... a lot. When they leave, I pick up the fallen bits. I do a happy dance. I have over 75 bits! I can buy the headphones, AND buy some new tunes!
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Galloping over to the store, I rushed in the door and grabbed the headphones off the shelf, and took it to the cashier.
"Can I buy these please?" The store keeper nods and accepts the bits, and I grab those awesome headphones, place them on my head and connect them to my Hoofsung (Samsung) and play some new tunes I bought on the Neigh Store (Play Store). Closing my eyes, I didn't even notice when I crashed into a familiar white mare. Her jaw dropped at my headphones as I snorted.
Nudging her, I chuckled. "Catch up to my level sometime, yeah?" She smirked as a gigantic speaker car stopped right behind her. Smirking, she nodded. I groaned. Where the hell did she get that?! I turned, but a tap on my shoulder caused me to turn, right into Octavia's face.
"Hey... I just wanted to thank you for helping me to play the violin when I was a baby." She hopped onto the car and they drove off. I smiled. Music is my passion. And I love helping music happen.
෴2 Years Later෴
♩Here we are again, just me and you comedian-♩ My headphones are ripped off my head.
"Hello, darling? Dear! Are you listening?" I opened my eyes to see Rarity looking at me with disapproval. She held my headphones, and I groaned to see the disgusting, overused piece of property on my ears. Why did this always happen? Oh well, time to steal another one of Vinyl Scratch's jobs.
Pausing, I thought for a minute, then shrugged.
She is so going to kill me.
Author's Note
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Stellar Winds (Peahead's OC)
3rd P.O.V.
"So, can someone tell me what P=F/A stands for?" Professor Stellar Winds asked her college students. For the ripe age of 16, most students were shocked when they found out their college professor was going to be a few years younger than them. She had turned out to be one of their best teachers, always cracking jokes and helping out on the more difficult questions. A pony in the back raised her gray hoof. Her yellow eyes were in different directions; due to her condition of Strabismus, but she focused on him the best she could.
"Miss Muffins? What does P=F/A stand for?" Her ears flicked as she heard the small bits of laughter around the room. This little laughter chain had happened more than once, and it was irritating him. Snorting, she stomped her hoof on the ground.
"ENOUGH! You will not laugh at Miss Muffins for her name, condition, or cutie mark." The room quickly silenced, not used to having their light-hearted professor upset. "Now... Please continue."
Lowering her head, she mumbled out the answer. "Again, Miss Muffins." A bit of laughter to the right. Her eyes glinting an amber shade of yellow, she spoke again, louder.
"Mr. Winds, the equation P=F/A stands for pressure." Snickering could be heard around the room. The professor fumed and flew to the cause of the laughter, which just happened to be Hoops, Dumb-bell, and Score. (They are Rainbow Dash's bullies) The room stared as their Professor passed all three of them slips, forcing them to head over to go to Dean Spitfire.
"Now that we have that over with, I would like to say that Miss Muffins is correct." Looking at her clock, he sighed. "That is all the time we have today, please pack your items and head to your next class." As the class exited out of the classroom, she flapped down to her desk and sighed.
Stellar Wind's P.O.V.
Tucking my books under my wing, I headed over to Doctor Hooves, who I am apprenticed to. Though I prefer working alone, the Doctor seems to know more about the universe than anyone else. It's like he's lived the lives of other dimensions, or people! Pah... listen to me think. That's ridiculous. I landed next to the blue box. Walking in, I started when I saw my student talking with the Doctor.
"But Doc, that's ridiculous. Why on earth would you make a time machine when you could just ask a unicorn to do it for you? I know Princess Twilight would help you out, she's done it before!" Coughing, I watched as Muffins turn around in shock.
"Professor! I swear I'm not cheating-" I raised a wing, stopping her in her sentence. "Muffins, I need to talk to the Doctor. Alone." She nodded and quickly left the room. Looking at her, he laid my work on the desk. Staring at it, he squinted at the papers until his crystal blue eyes widened.
"Winds, listen to my new theory! I completely forgot to mention this to you last time!" I piqued up in interest, and leaned forward, interested in his theory.
(A/N This is all based on MY theory. It may not be true.)
"Everyone knows the old story of the Windigos... But who cast the spell? Where did the alicorns come from? I believe, with questioning-" I coughed. Rolling his eyes, he smirked. "Okay, kidnapping the Princesses and forcing them to talk, I found out that Celestia and Luna BECAME alicorns after the creation of Equestria. The founders had died already, and the ponies were in chaos. Luna was born a pegasus, while Celestia a unicorn, which explains their talents... But who created the ponies?" He trailed off, frowning.
"By golly, I've got it! There is no one else rather than... Starswirl the Bearded! The princesses must have trained under his guidance... And absorbed his essence to keep him alive." I shook my head and smiled. He was ranting again. I best leave him to his studies... I thought as I scooped my folders into my bag.
"Doctor. I'm going home now." He nodded and I flew off with my precious work, as he continued mumbling theories.
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I flopped onto my bed, exhausted from the long flight to my little cottage. Being a pegasus meant I could live on the clouds, and THAT meant I could watch the stars with no blockades. My little cottage was quiet, just the way I liked it. Big crowds weren't my thing, though I've heard from my aunt that I have an egoistic cousin that loves attention 24/7. (Who's that? XD)
Sighing, I dragged myself to my little desk and began grading tests. I looked at them all in shock, and I started crying.
"Why are they all so stupid?!" Slamming my head on the table, groaned in frustration and started writing 25% on most of the tests until I found... Ms. Muffins' test. It was 100%, and the extra credit was correct. Filled with hope for the future generation, I quickly wrote a 105% on the test. After finishing the tests, I trotted outside to my telescope, where I was watching a dying star. Glancing at it again, I gasped as it combusted, causing myself to be blinded for a few minutes. Stumbling around, I hit my wall and went out cold.
Great. I thought. Just a normal day for me. And my last sight of light was a star before everything went into black.
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I woke up, groaning. Dizzily walking into my house, I looked at the time. "OH CRAP!" I grabbed the tests and my lessons and flew out to the college. The students looked at me in confusion, probably not used to their professor being late.
Before hoofing (handing) their tests back, I looked at them with disappointment.
"I can't believe you guys failed the test! Well... Except for one pony." They all turned to Moon Dancer. (Twilight's 'twin' if you remember Amending Fences)
"No, it wasn't Moon Dancer." Gasps of shock rose from around the room. "Ms. Muffins. Congratulations to getting 105% on your test." I smiled as I watched Moon Dancer faint.
Author's Note
Hey guys! Wow, 8 likes, you guys are overpowering the haters~
This is Peahead's OC, Stellar Winds.
Currently not open to requests until I finish Keen Foresight, or Doug_'s OC. Thanks for understanding!
Special Promises (An OC Book)
Keen Foresight (Doug_'s OC)
Keen Foresight (Doug_'s OC)
(I do not think Doug_ has a pic of Keen Foresight, so I'm going to tell you that he is tiny. He has a plain tan coat, dark brown mane, and green eyes. Earth Pony)
3rd P.O.V.
"Mother?? Mother? Mom? BEARER OF ME!" 8 years old, Keen Foresight had come back to his home after working on the farm. He managed to steal some bread for his mother to eat, she had been so weak! But now, his mother laid on the ground, cold and hungry. He dropped the bread and nudged her to a hay pile, that luckily hadn't rotted yet. He made a note to go gather some more later on. Piece by piece, he fed his mother the bread until it was gone. A knock on the door alerted Foresight, and he slowly got up and opened the door, revealing a smiling Wood Craft, holding a bundle of bread. Foresight groaned and knocked his head on the wall, realizing that he didn't need to steal that bread.
"Come in, Wood Craft." His friend trotted into the house and put the bundle on the pathetically small table.
"How are you, Wood Craft?" Tender Love slowly got up, flinching as she heard her bone crack. Walking over to the cupboards, she got out a cup and filled it with water, offering it to Craft. He dipped his head in thanks and took the cup, guzzling the water down. "Thank you, Tender." Smiling, Foresight nudged his friend.
"And to think you're the rebel in the fields!"
2 years later...
Keen Foresight's P.O.V.
That feeling was calling for me again. I couldn't ignore it, but I had to... For Mother. She needs someone to support her. I inhaled the fresh country air and continued to water the plants in my part of the field. Another tugging from my heart. The urge to... leave. Tensing up, I controlled my body, willing it to stay put. But it just didn't feel right.
~0-0~
I finished paying the vendor and scooped the fruits in my bag. I thanked Faust that my little shack was near the market, and galloped the rest of the way back.
"Mother! I have your food." She clopped over, smiling at the sight of the shining apples. Looking away, I glanced at the table. I shook my head, but slowly walked over. 3... 2... 1...
"SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" Craft popped out from behind the table, like every other year. And there was a cake on the table... I looked at Craft in shock. How did he get a cake? They cost so much in Equestria! Glaring at him, I wait until he breaks.
"I saved some bits every month for the cake... Now eat it! I spent a LONG time working for it!" Smiling, I waited for Mother to take a slice first, then I took my own, savoring the last taste of sweetness I would ever eat. Gulping down the last bit of cake, I smiled and laughed nervously.
"Um... I wanted to tell you two something." Craft, who was licking the plate clean, rolled his eyes and grinned at me.
"What is it now? Our food's going to rot? Stocks are going to go up?" Tender Love chuckled at his jeers, and smiled at me. "So? What is it?"
I gulped and took a deep breath. "I want to leave." Craft and Mother stared at me. Then he started to laugh.
"Leave? On your 10th birthday? Foresight, c'mon you wouldn't-" He paused and looked at my face. Looking down, I repeated myself. "I want to leave. There's been this... feeling. It's pulling me towards a different part of Equestria, and I HAVE to follow it. Please!" I looked at them pleadingly. Mother sighed.
"I told Fruit Stock that you were special. And I was right. She went to her bed and pulled out a knapsack. "This has enough food and water for a month, IF you ration it well. And I know you will. There are some bits if you need them. You need to go. And don't worry. You will find it." I smiled at her and looked at Craft. He smiled and pushed me towards the door. I walked into the blizzard, where it would take me where to go.
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I was currently reading a scroll I found while walking, and I started to smell something burning. Hm. Someone must be cooking. I thought to myself as I continued along with the path of the strange feeling. Then I was yanked from my path and my scroll fell from it's wooden holder.
"What are you doing in there?! That was a burning building... And you... You were READING!" Looking up, I notice a peach colored unicorn in golden armor. Wait... It was burning? That explains the burnt hay smell. I looked up and his eyes widened.
"Why... You're only a colt!" I snorted. A colt? I am 10 years old!
Glaring at the unicorn, I walked off into the city, suddenly realizing that all the ponies around me were very rich, seeing by their clothing. I quickly galloped out of the city and into some odd looking woods.
Before long, I met a wolf made out of twigs. It appeared hurt and stuck under a rock, so I used my Earth Pony strength to push it out of the way, even though I was ready to run. Something didn't feel right about the strength in the wolf... I was right! After removing the rock, it ran towards me and extended it's claws. I quickly bolted, trying to kick it at the same time. It just managed to scratch my back legs with it extended reach before it got caught in some vines.
Mauled by the claws before I got away, I limped to an odd looking tree with a red door on it. The strange feeling was strong here. Using the odd knocker, I waited. A few seconds later, an odd looking pony opened the door, looked at me and beckoned me in.
"You are the stranger I have beckoned, please, wait here for a second." She closed the door and I heard some shuffling, then the door opened again as she gestured into her house.
It was much nicer than my home, but there were many bottles and necklaces around in the shelves, carved into the wood. The 'pony' turned to face me, and smiled. "Not used to seeing a pony like me, I can see. I shall break from my rhymes for a spell, I am a zebra." Blinking, I stared at her again. Zebras were an old mares tale, to scare the children to sleep. But now that I think about it, she has the same black stripes that my mother used to tell me about. But she didn't look like she was going to eat me. Just... worried. "You need to find the source of the discourse, find an odd creature by the name of Discord."
"You are quite a young one, I see. But then again, you are quite young to be free. Perhaps something happened in your childhood, whatever it was, it shan't be good..." She trailed off. Looking at me again with hardened eyes, she spoke in her twisted tongue. "You must never ignore the feeling inside you, but before that, you must be starving. Here, take some stew." Out of nowhere, she gives me a bowl of stew, which I drink hungrily. The food mother gave me had diminished a few days ago, and I was starving. Glancing up at her for a second, I felt my muzzle burn as she looked at me with a smile.
"Now that you have replenished your hunger, go and explore! You won't get any younger." She smiled at me, and gave me the knapsack that had suddenly gained some weight. I walked out of her home and looked at her as she smiled and waved at me. Feeling confident in myself, I puffed up my chest and continued into the forest.
I was young, but I would find the one to find... Discord. And there was no stopping me, or this strange feeling of mine. Nothing.
Author's Note
This is Doug_'s OC~ I'm sorry this took so long... Not only did high school start, but I had to keep rereading Keen Foresight's story to understand what was he like. I didn't have much information about him, sorry about that! Thanks for letting me write a part of his life!
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Eclipse (Typervader's OC)
3rd P.O.V.
"Nightbeam, are you sure it's a good idea to go there?" A cloak covered most of the pony, only showing the tip of her horn. A glowing, red star necklace adorned her neck, and a little doll stuck out of her knapsack. "I don't think that place will accept us." Suddenly, some pony squeaked as she crashed into her. Flipping the pony over, a green aura sparked from her horn as her hood fell down, revealing a red mane with a streak of dark purple. The yellow pony cowered in fear as the aura lifted her up by the tail, and the dark green eyes ingested the sight of the long pink mane, and the butterfly cutie mark.
"Please don't kill me!" She yelped, and the pony relaxed, allowing the cloak to cover one side of her flank. It revealed her black coat, and blood moon cutie mark. Letting the pegasus down, she blinked.
"I'm not trying to kill you. It was self-defense." She spoke again, monotonously. Fluttershy shuddered at her tone, more scared than before. But she was an Element of Harmony, and it was plainly clear that this newcomer was an OC. She had already met Blazefire, a griffin/bat pony hybrid. Why should she be scared of a monotone... Painless... Unemotional- She squeaked at her thoughts, wishing she had Rainbow with her. It was torture as her mind played out every possibility that this pony might be able to do.
However, the mare just stood there, glancing at Fluttershy. She seemed to converge in a silent conversation with a doll before holding out her hoof. Fluttershy cautiously took up the offer, and was startled a bit by the strength of the pony. Calm yourself, Fluttershy. Calm. She let out a breath and looked at the pony. She had a mid-length, choppy mane style, and Fluttershy immediately could tell that Rarity would faint if she saw it. Closing her eyes, she counted to 5 before looking at the pony again. "Would you like to come with me to Ponyville?" She offered, and started to walk towards her. Fluttershy was surprised that her legs hadn't turned to jelly.
The mare, however, stepped back. Green eyes glinting, it seemed to scream, 'Don't come any closer before I kill you!' So Fluttershy decided it would be best to step away and go home. But as she fly home, she noticed on the ground, the odd pony following her. She landed on the ground in front of the pony. "My name is Fluttershy." She held her hoof out.
"Eclipse."
Eclipse's P.O.V.
'Follow her! Then knock her out~ It'll be fun!'
'No, Darklight. Eclipse, be friends with her, then take her stuff and run!'
'What the hell, Starglow? No! This mare is offering us a way to work!'
'Eclipse. Leave this Fluttershy, now.' Nightbeam. Of course.
"All of you, shut up." I spoke back to Nightbeam, earning myself an odd glance from Fluttershy. Whispering, I spoke to him again. "I'm going with Shadow's idea, I just want to work so I don't starve." We approached the exit of the forest and I had to close my eyes for a second to adjust to the bright colors of Ponyville.
"Here we are! Ponyville. Say, what are you here for anyway?" Fluttershy spoke, eyes glimmering with curiosity.
'Quick! Knock her out while we have the chance! She might tell everyone about you!' Nightbeam's voice rang through my head, and I had to admit. That was a good reason, so I did it. Using my magic, I took my Necromancy book and slammed it against Fluttershy's head. Her eyes held the feel of betrayal before closing.
I glanced at my worker's card. Apparently, I was supposed to be helping some pony with the newspaper, then bucking apples, and then baking cakes. All this would provide me with more bits than I could chew. Oh well. "Where do I go now, Nightbeam?" As usual, Nightbeam's voice echoed throughout my mind.
'Start working! And avoid that Fluttershy.'
"Okay then, Nightbeam."
And we were off.
3rd P.O.V.
She whimpered as Twilight held her. "She... She knocked me out with a giant book!" The little pegasus wailed as the Princess hugged her tighter.
"Who is she, Fluttershy? I need to know who she is." Twilight reassured, trying to ease her friend's tension.
"Yes, do tell. I think I need to 'talk' to her." Discord's voice approached them as the girls looked up and stared into the face of an angry draconequus.
"Discord... Don't hurt her." Both the dragon and the princess whipped their heads around to look at Fluttershy, who had gotten onto her shaky knees. "I want to talk to her. She seemed worried when I asked her about what she was doing here." Glancing at Twilight for a second, she scuffed the grass. Twilight sighed and nodded.
"I'll go to my archives and see what's happening." Fluttershy brightened, then scrunched up her face. "Wait, Twilight! I remember." The alicorn turned, not used to her friend raising her voice above whisper level. "The book she hit me with... It was a necromancy book!" Twilight Sparkle gasped. Necromancy? She might have to take this to Celestia. But if it was dark magic... She could definitely trace the aura. It was time for a hunt.
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Twilight Sparkle traced the magical residue to many houses, each of the owners carrying a mouthful of mail, so she couldn't ask them. After searching many houses, she came to the conclusion that the pony must be working at the post office. So she waited for the entire day. No pony that looked odd came through the door. She saw Derpy eating her muffins in the backroom, and trotted over, hoping for some answers. Derpy nodded. "I just paid a mare for helping me with my mail!" She giggled and went back to her muffins. Twilight frowned. A pony with necromancy magic, delivering mail? She shook her head and continued on her adventure to find this mysterious pony.
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"Applejack?" Twilight's questioning voice echoed throughout the apple fields and the orange mare suddenly stood by her side, stretching her legs.
"Yes, Twilight?"
She jumped slightly, crashing into a tree. Calming down and removing twigs from her mane, Twilight spoke in a questioning tone. "I've been looking for a new OC, she seems to be working here."
Her friend's green eyes brightened. "Ah, yes. I had somepony here. Didn't talk much, but was a darn tootin' good worker. Bucked all apple trees in half the time because of her."
Twilight's confusion only worsened. "She didn't... attack you? Nothing?" Applejack shook her head. "Say, why'da want ta know?"
Twilight shook her head. "Do you know where she went?" Applejack nodded this time.
"Yeah. Went and head on o'er to the inn. She went that'a way after the trees were clear." Twilight nodded her thanks and started to walk over when she stopped. "Hey, you know what she looks like? And her name?"
***
After constant interrogation, she found out that she was looking for a unicorn mare with a black cloak and wore a shiny, red star necklace. Apparently you can buck apples in that apparel... Her frown only deepened when she realized that this pony was a migrant worker, and that she might be somepony that curses towns. Hurrying to the inn, she half expected to hear screaming. Instead, she heard a soft and unfamiliar voice come through one of the doors.
"Nightbeam, I know it's an alicorn. I don't want to hurt an alicorn, they may kill me. ... ... ... Very well. I will go confront them." The door swung open, revealing a unicorn, her horn aglow and holding a demonic version of Twilight's Smartypants doll.
"Hello, Twilight Sparkle. You cross paths with us, you better hope you aren’t a threat." Twilight took in her appearance, slightly shivering from the words and the glare the pony sent her.
Twilight warily glanced at the pony before bursting into question. "Hello, Eclipse. How are you? Do you want to take over the town? Why are you here? Why did you knock out Fluttershy?" The pony only glanced at her doll.
When 'Eclipse' spoke, Twilight didn't know who she was talking to at all. It wasn't her... So was it the doll? "I agree. She is quite talkative, but I believe it's for the safety of her town. Why would you want to take over Ponyville? We are guests here. Nightbeam, that's not nice. ... ... ... Nightbeam, apologize to your brother." Twilight blinked. Who was this pony? What were they doing here? And why... Were they talking to their doll? Focusing, she saw faint pink sparks fall to the ground as she looked into the magical residue of the doll and managed to obtain the traces of three demons talking to the mare.
And a small grin formed on her face as she summon a quill and parchment. Time to take notes.
Eclipse's P.O.V.
I watched with Nightbeam as she pulled out a quill and parchment from nowhere, looking eager to start writing.
'Let her in, Eclipse.' As usual, I let Nightbeam take over me and he gestured her inside. The princess seemed wary of me, and made a point of showing so by moving quickly around me, as if I contained a disease.
"What do you want to know first?" I asked, as I pulled up two chairs for us to sit in.
Twilight's eyes seemed to spark to life, and all I heard was a blur. Raising a hoof, I raised an eyebrow. "Slower, please. And one question at a time."
She took a breath, then smiled. "Why do you have a book of necromancy in your hold?" Out of all the questions, Nightbeam and I didn't expect this. So Nightbeam spoke to me, and I repeated the words.
"He the demon that possesses my doll, Nightbeam. He was given to me by the family when they abandoned me, leaving us for the dead." Twilight dropped everything and hopped out of the chair, her horn aglow. I also jumped up and quickly raised my green aura, holding items such as tables, together as a shield.
"Why do you allow demons to talk you? Are you not afraid?" Rolling my eyes, I spoke through the wall. "Gee, I LOVE talking to demons. They have nice voices, like hooves on a chalkboard." She muttered profanity before destroying my wall of items, leaving me defenseless.
"Back to my original question. Why do you have-" I rolled my eyes. "I found the stupid book in Celestia's library. Happy?" She frowned. Glancing at the time, I scowled. Right now, I should be reading a story with Nightbeam, with him teaching me new words.
I bit back remarks and spoke to her. "Listen, princess . I have to go to bed now, Nightbeam's supposed to be reading me a story to help me read. Listen, I'm working at someplace called Sugarcube Corner tomorrow, you can go interrogate me there. Right now, get out." I opened the door, glaring at her. She flinched and I felt Nightbeam smirk. When she didn't move, I raised my voice. Something I usually don't do, but right now I feel trespassed. "OUT!" And then she flew out.
***
"Nightbeam, how come the other two pigs didn't build their house with bricks?"
'Because they were foolish and didn't want to do work, so they became lazy.' His voice was soothing, lulling me to sleep. I yawned.
'It's time for bed, Eclipse. Good night.'
I shut my eyes. "Good night, Nightbeam."
3rd P.O.V.
Fluttershy, Discord, and Twilight unknowingly smiled as they watched the interaction between the doll and the mare. Fluttershy was giggling as Discord begrudgingly admitted defeat to Twilight, who had opposed of killing or sending Eclipse to another dimension. Then Fluttershy let out a squeak, that the other two immediately translated to a yawn. Discord stretched his long back.
"I suppose all of us need our sleep now." Twilight softly smiled. She yawned. "I guess I'll take some notes tomorrow." And with that, Ponyville's last light was extinguished, and the town fell into a deep slumber as Luna walked among their dreams.
Author's Note
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Lightning Rose (XIII's OC)
Author's Note
LOL So many requests right now... (Internally screaming from happiness and pain)
I NOTICED PEOPLE ARE USING THE OC CAFE'S FORMAT TO ENTER INTO MY STORY AND I'M TOTALLY FINE WITH THAT. JUST... A LITTLE UPSET NO ONE IS USING MINE. T_T OH WELL. CONTINUE ON!!
(Still taking requests by the way but uh... You're gonna have to wait a bit)
Lightning Rose (XIII's OC)
3rd P.O.V.
“Aw… You are the only one I’ve seen… I could dig you up… I don’t know what might harm you!” She exclaimed in excitement as she looked at the beautiful gold and blue flower, which colors seemed to swirl. Her blue eyes were following the golden luster, shining from the sliver of light through the cave. Grabbing a feather out of her wing (and flinching), she dipped the cream-colored feather into her blue ink and scribbled down the facts she could tell about it.
“... Swirling colors of blue and gold… The gold shines when light hits it… Origin unknown…” She muttered to herself as she scribbled some notes into her notebook.
“Lightning Rose? Lightning Rose?” A small yell echoed throughout the cavern, and the flower curled up into a ‘W’. “Interesting…” Taking up her quill, she wrote in, ‘Curls up on a W when near loud creatures.’
SLAP!
In shock, her wing lets go of her notebook and quill and she looked up, clutching her cheek while trying to glare at the Alicorn, using her magic to levitate a book. “I swear, you’re like me, only writing instead of reading.” Rolling her eyes at the Princess of Friendship (who hits her friends with books apparently), she scrunched up her nose when she looked at her getup.
The princess had sticks and mud in her mane and tail, and she had streaks of green mush on her face. “What did you do to get here?” The princess’s tail flicks a bit, irritated. “I couldn’t find this cave until I heard you muttering.” She mumbled, avoiding the question. Lightning Rose grinned. Oh well, can’t get them all.
Lightning Rose’s P.O.V.
Walking back with the Princess of Friendship was a little weird, especially when she kept taking my notebook and reading it. “Princess, the paper is made from Whomping Willow wood. I would appreciate it if you didn’t destroy it…” She grinned sheepishly but gave it back. Tucking it back under my wing, I started to divert my path from her, which she noticed. “Um… Lightning, that path leads to the Tree of Harmony." I turn to look at her, slightly invigorated by my new find.
"I know." She looks at me oddly but starts to head back to Ponyville.
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I yawned. It was late and I was about to collapse at my front door after trying hard not to bump into ANY of the plants on the ground and hanging from some trees. My wings were sore from careful fluttering and my hooves were throbbing from running away from a Timber Wolf. I gazed at the scenery I had from my treehouse and my eyes immediately landed on the glowing tree that became my nightlight and main investigation as I tried to understand what it was, how it came there, and so on. (Cause Author-chan is lazy)
"Who are you?" An elegant voice rang out in the desolate forest, making me slightly wince from the sudden sound. "Why are you at the Tree of Harmony? Do you live here? I quite like your idea of living next to that beauty." I immediately spotted the voice coming from a white mare, contrasting from all the colors of my plants.
She squinted and her eyes lit up. "Fluttershy! I didn't know you had a second home!" She trotted over quickly and I rolled my eyes. This keeps happening! "I'm not Fluttershy, for the last time." Of course, this wouldn't be the last time, but I have to say something, right?
"Oh, apologies. You really do look like-"
"Listen I understand that I look like Fluttershy but you sorta are on my lands right now..." Her bright blue eyes narrowed towards my direction. "I'm sorry, but this is the Tree of Har-" I was slightly frustrated with this mare.
"No, I mean you're on my land!" Her horn let off a small spark as I raised my voice. "This is not. Your. Land." She stated, slow and clear. I groaned. "Hey pony! If you would please look down, you would see you are stepping on my poor flowers!" She looked down and the pink was visible through her white fur.
She stepped off my dear petunias. "Oh dear, I'm quite sorry for all the trouble. I thought you were claiming the tree for yourself." Man, were the Mane Six this gullible? I shook my head as I started to investigate the trampled flowers. "Nah, I get it. It's a work of art, that's for sure. Hey, you know where that came from?" She shook her head.
"Er... I'm sure Twilight would know-"
"Nah. I already asked her." She blinked at my quick reply and sighed. "Well, dearly sorry for hurting your flowers. I must be off now." I waved her off before quickly rushing into my home to heal the dying plant. But of course it's cliche time and I trip over my scarf and smash an empty pot. I sighed. I really should just sleep this off.
First the Princess slaps me, then my poor petunias get trampled. Man, could this day get any odder?
I hear a knock on my door, even though it was wide open. Glancing through the scarf that covered my eyes, I saw the familiar rainbow flowing hair. "Oh no. No no no no no... Please why?!" Celestia peeked through the door.
"Why what?" I stayed silent.
"Princess?" She slowly walked in, using her magic to clean up the entrance to my doorway. "Yes, Lightning?"
I let out a large sigh as my scarf fluttered from my breath. "Can you come back tomorrow please?"
Special Promises (An OC Book)
Char Broil (HB_DS2013's OC)
Char Broil (HB_DS2013's OC)
The blue coated pony wandered around the stalls to find his own. His teal colored mane covered his face as he pushed a cart of fish over to a red and silver stall, where he dumped all his fish into a tray filled with ice. It was not a good day for him, and all he wanted to do was stab something.
“Sir! Stop, we only meant to ask you a question! We didn’t think it would make you upset.” He paused, his hoof still in the air. The students panted, tired from chasing the odd pony who was rumored to be raised by griffins.
He glared at them. “You laugh because I can’t read?” They shook their heads, even though that had been the reason. The stallion narrowed his odd red eyes at them. “Not all the ponies who can’t read are stupid. Who the buck do you think I am?” The CSGU (Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns) students gasped at his language and looked at each other in shock.
When they turned back to face him, he was gone.
A cough brought the pony back to reality, and he realized a customer was impatiently waiting. He blinked and put away the fish he had destroyed with the knife.
“Your order?” He asked. The purple unicorn nodded. “I would like fish; salmon and sweetfish. Sliced, if you please.” I’m not pleased with the fact that you want sliced fish. He shoved the thought to the back of his head and nodded. He opened the cooler that contained his fish and took out a salmon and a sweetfish. Using his favorite butcher knife, he cut the fish into 4 long pieces and used his magic to place the fish into the bags branded with his cutie mark. "Thank you, Broil." He nodded.
As she walked away, he saw the slight movement at her torso. There was no mistaking it, those were wings. Had he served another alicorn?
"Who got you upset this time, Gilbert?" He jumped, and he lost all control of the small fire that he had in his magic vicinity. The fire burned his stall and was heading over to his neighbor when a stream of water headed towards the direction of the fire and quickly put it out. He nodded and apology at his neighbor, and looked back at the white alicorn.
He rolled his eyes. "What the BUCK, Celestia. You know well that magic ain't my strong point." She held no response to his foul language and smiled. "It's 'magic isn't my strong point.'."
"Celestia, you damn know this is my way of talkin'."
She kept the smile upon her face, even though internally she was screaming, wishing she had kept her sister from throwing him in jail so many times. "Apologies, Gilbert."
As he turned towards his destroyed stand (and fish), he snorted flames from his nostrils and called behind his shoulder, "Damn that, Celestia. You know Gilbert isn't a name I listen to anymore." And she left.
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"No, no, no, no, NO!" Char Broil ran out of his little hut and watched the fire spread towards the forest, probably scaring every animal out of the woods. He watched as timberwolves, bunnies, and other animals escape out of the raging woods, alight with flames.
He heard the wings of two ponies and groaned. "I swear, this ain't my fault. I was cooking and the wind was blowin' the wrong way. I just forgot to check. Luna, I swear, you put me in that damn jail one more time..." He trailed off as he turned, facing a pink and purple alicorn.
"For buck's sake, how many alicorns are there now?!" The pink pony cocked her head to one side. "Well, now that Flurry's here... Five." Char snorted, fire coming out of his nostrils. The alicorns jumped and as his red eyes adjusted to the darkness, Char realized he recognized the purple one. "You! You're the alicorn I gave the fish to earlier!"
"Hey, I have a name." He rolled his eyes at her response, something he seemed to do more often now that he was in the Crystal Empire. "And I don't give a damn." The pink one, he recognized as the Princess of Love. The purple one must have been new since she looked like she wasn't used to her wings. "Cadance. Who's the purple one?" Princess Cadence sighed, used to her Aunts' hater.
"That's Twilight Sparkle. She's the Princess of Friendship." Broil snorted again, this time laughing. "Friendship? Hah! And what's that going to do to this world?" Twilight huffed and turned to the Love Princess. "Celestia told us to put out the fire. Can we do that and go?" Twilight knew this was another one of Lilac Snowflake's OC friends; no pony in her universe would ever resort to such language.
As the alicorns put out the fire, he prepared dinner. With a sigh of annoyance at Celestia's lessons getting to him, he prepared 2 more plates for the Princesses after they finished using their water.
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They sniffed the air, smelling the scent of cooking fish. They trotted over to the smell, where the blue furred pony silently ate his fish as he looked at the fire, dancing for him again. He looked up as he heard the hooves approaching him. "Are you two hungry?" He asked, and they slowly nodded. He stood up and removed some fish that had survived the destruction of his stall. He closed eyes and let out a breath, and used the only spell he had ever mastered. The Bound Knife spell. Using this, his cuts were more precise and he let a satisfied snort of approval when he checked the quality of the fish innards. As Broil fried the fish over the fire, Twilight became curious.
He was harsh and rude but seemed more calm away from ponies and close to fires. She asked Cadance why he recognized her and the Princess of Love snickered. "Twi, he was arrested on three counts of arson in Griffonia, illegal knowledge and possession of combat magic, five counts of assault, five other times for disturbing the peace, and three times for insulting the Princesses and possession of illegally imported salt. So... about 18 times. I think this will be his 19th time after Luna finds out." Twilight's eyes widened in surprise but she kept quiet as the pony brought them their fish.
It was exquisite.
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After the alicorns left, Char 'Gilbert' Broil lit another fire, staring at it slowly dancing in the darkness. The light was the only thing shining beside the crescent moon in the sky, as the sky was covered in clouds. He rolled onto his back and stared into the abyss of night.
Author's Note
Um... I have no excuse for this. I just haven't been able to write as much, since I'm starting a new book on my Wattpad account and I'm trying to finish up a book so I don't have to bother with it anymore.
I also have no idea what the Bound Knife spell was used for... Sorry if I made it up along the way.
That was an excuse, wasn't it? Dam.
Anyway...
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Special Promises (An OC Book)
Hello, friends. You know, Gold should really change her password to something else. Anyway, I have better things to do. Toodles! - Anonymous
WHO THIS HELL THOUGHT IT WOULD BE FREAKING FUNNY TO WRITE ON MY ACCOUNT? THIS ISN'T ME! I DON'T KNOW WHO THE HELL WAS THAT AND I'M FRICKING PANICKING! TELL ME WHO THE HELL THOUGHT THIS WOULD BE FRICKING FUNNY?!
Special Promises (An OC Book)
Lilac Snowflake (Gold121221's OC)
3rd Person P.O.V.
Lilac combed her mane and sighed in content as she looked outside. Fall was coming to an end, and it was time for her season. She used her magic to teleport her to Cloudsdale. After all, Celestia didn't only have Twilight Sparkle as a student. Lilac pondered on old moments, but shook her head and walked into the Weather Factory.
Lilac Snowflake's P.O.V.
I walked into the factory, inhaling the fresh smell of snow in the air. The factory hired me as a part-time worker here, only the winter of course! Otherwise, I ran the Ponyville Confidential, but no one knew me. Well, no one would, I had just moved in last year... I shook my head and walked into the Snow room, where it smelled of crisp, cold snow.
"Lilac! You ready?" I grinned as I saw my best friends, Trixie and Starlight Glimmer. They loved their new job here in Cloudsdale, as no one bothered them. Nodding my head, I started to concentrate on making a giant pile of fresh snow. To do that, I had to summon memories to fill the pattern of each snowflake.
~~Memory~~
"Hey, Twilight! Try and focus on one spot, not the area of the place you want to teleport!" She frowned, but nodded and I watched as her spell started to grow larger and larger. Her eyes turned pure white and teleported twice around the room, one in an impossible area.
First she was in the glass tank that no one was ever able to teleport through, then she landed on top of me. Celestia looked astonished and went over and looked at Twilight. Then she looked at me emotionless.
"Ms. Snowflake, go pack your items from the library and move to the guest room." I didn't question it, and left.
Over the years, Celestia forgot about our lessons. I didn't question it until she came to my room one night.
"Lilac... I need you to leave." I widened my eyes.
"You are outshining Twilight, and she is supposed to be the next princess. I promised her that." I snarled. She had promised I was going to be a princess for my magic!
"You... You forgot your promise to me?!" I was upset. That promise when she found me.
"It is no worth to me. You will leave." Her eyes were dark, and she didn't dare look at me.
"I'm not like Sunset. I don't want power. But your promise wasn't only to me, it was to my mother too."
I use my magic to remove my lilac colored wings, ignoring the protests of Celestia. Then I run. I stop running in a forest. I look up in the sky, where the moon is shining bright.
"Goodnight... Mother."
~~Memory~~
I blink and look at the snowflakes. This time, they show the moon and a little filly. A loud and arrogant voice fills the room.
"The Rainbow Dash, is back!" She then notices Trixie and Starlight Glimmer.
"YOU TWO! What are you doing on Cloudsdale? Trying to sabotage it?"
I rolled my eyes. "Well, unlike them, you actually brought winter faster to make sure your turtle didn't fall asleep. Pretty sure that's sabotage."
Rainbow Dash glares at me. "He's a tortoise!"
"Well, Trixie, Glimmer. I'm finished with today's batch of snow. You still coming to my house?" They grinned.
"You're going down." They say at the same time. I smile and go back home.
After pacing in my room a bit, I make the conclusion to go visit a princess.
~~At the Throne Room~~
"Hello, Celestia." I say coldly, then note my mother on the side, with no throne at all.
"Who are you? How have you frozen my guards?" I glare up at her.
"I guess you don't remember any old student. Except for Twilight Sparkle. You miss me, Auntie?" I sneer as her mouth drops open. She glances at my mother, then at me.
"After all, I have my mother's old hair style. Do you like how my mane became? It became half of yours and half of mine!" I grin as I stare at her.
"Nonsense. I have never had a child since Lilac... Snowflake." She looks at me again, her eyes open. Then the doors burst open.
"Celestia! I came as soon as I could, I'm so sorry for missing our lesson-" Twilight glances at me.
"So this is the pony I gave my wings up for? Pathetic. Hello, Twilight." She looks at me in confusion.
"This is my niece, Twilight. I'm sure you remember your old study partner." Celestia stands up and looks at me, with sadness in her eyes.
"Sister, what is this about giving up wings?" I glare at Celestia before I launch into the story of how I became a unicorn. At the end of the story, both Twilight and Mother are yelling at my aunt.
"WHY WOULD YOU GIVE ME SOMEONE ELSE'S WINGS?!" Twilight's yelling sounded hurt. Of course, I taught her how to teleport and all of her spells. My mother was sobbing.
"I- I promised you, Twilight." Twilight glared at our teacher. "You promised her first! How could you!?" I sighed.
"What's done is done, Twilight. Accept your position." I sigh. "Auntie, I just wanted to let you and Mother know that I'm back."
Teleporting back, I see Trixie and Starlight Glimmer walking to my house, chatting with a familiar purple alicorn. I smile and greet them as I open the door for all three to come in.
"Well then, who's going down in this magic battle? How 'bout this, me and Glimmer, Sparkle and Trixie teamup?" They grin and nod. Maybe it wasn't going to be a bad day.
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