Chapters Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Scotch can give you some crazy ideas
Go straight: we should just chill-out in our study, it's been a long day (44%).
The FLURRY HEART METER has increased by 1
Currently the meter is at 4 / 10 !
A scotch sounded good right about now.
Shining trotted down the corridor to his study. It was the one place in the Crystal Empire that he insisted no crystals should be visible. The small room was covered in dark oak panelling and heavy curtains. Bookshelves covered the walls, filled with musty tomes that had been personally selected by the chief librarian of the Empire. He’d never been a huge fan of reading, but when you have your own personal curator refining the selection available to you, it became pretty easy to pick any book from his archive and know that it would result in a good read.
Equally inviting was the thick armchair and footstool - one of the few masculine pieces of furniture that he’d managed to get into the castle. Even better was that fact that it was perched in front of a roaring fireplace - the snapping crackle of burning wood would always be a great source of relaxation for Shining, be it a homely hearth or a military campfire.
This would be a great place to kick back and relax, and take his mind off of the events of the day behind… and the challenges of the days ahead.
But before that - the booze.
Shining lifted the glass top of the nearby ornate decanter, pouring out a generous amount of the golden whiskey.. A local vintage that he always quite enjoyed. It went down like fire, burning the back of his throat with flavor and filling his gut with warmth.
“Ah, it’s good to be home.” He announced to himself, before settling back onto his recliner.
But the licking red tongues of flame couldn’t occupy his mind for long. His thoughts quickly returned to his daughter - she’d been so quick to leave the dinner table, and the way her eyes had avoided him almost purposefully. She really just didn’t want to spend time with him.
Flurry Heart was a puzzle. And puzzles didn’t just solve themselves.
‘I wonder if the issue isn’t how to make her my little-filly again, but why she’s acting out now… ’ Shining mused. In his mind, things were always simple - cause and effect. Ponies don’t just change for wishy-washy reasons: they are changed by events and ponies around them. ‘What if she’s in trouble? What if somepony is making her act up this way!? ’
Shining’s hoof clenched around the glass tumbler, making it flex dangerously under his strength. If somepony was bullying his little girl… or something was attacking her emotions… some sort of creature or villain… there would be absolute Tartarus for them to pay.
He was a protective dad.
The problem was, he had so little intelligence to act upon. Not the mental kind - Shining was no dull bulb - but the strategic kind. If this were a training exercise, Captain Shining Armor would have the leader of the Scout Division’s balls on his war-table for the lack of information on his enemy… he’d probably personally lead a recon-
That’s it!
Reconnaissance!
If he could find out what Flurry’s day to day was like, maybe he could find some clue as to what was making her act like some emotional teenager, instead of the beloved little filly he remembered. At the very least, it could probably give him some clues as to what her interests were.
The last thing that Shining remembered her being a fan of was that old animated cartoon, My Little Human . He’d actually seen a plushie of one of the main characters at the Crystal Empire train stop… he almost bought the thing as a little gift for Flurry, but he’d quickly stopped himself: she’d probably outgrown the children’s show, just like she’d outgrown so many other things. He might be a bit of a doting father, but he wasn’t about to walk straight into that landmine.
He sighed, sinking down into the leather of the chair.
The truth of the matter was: he really didn’t know much about who his daughter had grown up to be.
That thought made him feel awful. Just what the hay had he been doing these past ten years? Just how had time slipped away from him so easily!?
Shaking his head, he jumped to his hooves. Whenever he felt uneasy, Shining always had to start moving his hooves, start making progress, attempt to fix things. ‘If you’re going through hell, keep going. ’ Shining remembered. It was the saying of one of his legendary instructors.
He strode over to the bookshelves, avoiding those sections cordoned off for him, turning instead to the larger area which Cadence used to store many of her own literature.
‘Maybe there’s something in here that could tell me about teenagers and getting their love back? ’ He traced his hoof along the spines, most of which were romance novels and more… sultry paperbacks. He’d heard them referred to as clopfics around the barracks.
Most of the titles seemed to have a common... theme.
“A Family Affair.”
“Oh Daddy!”
“The Son is Shining.”
“Oh Brother!”
‘Wow Cadence, I’m not one to judge but… an incest-fetish? I guess it makes sense, she never really had siblings or parents, it isn’t as squicky for her. ’ Shining clicked his tongue while shaking his head. All the books had the same author too… Duchess Tempo ?
He was just about to crack one of the books open, when a particular book caught his eye. It was much older, with a thick leatherlike-binding, its title was in Old Ponish, something that Shining had learned back at the academy.
“How to make ponies love - spells, potions, and bewitchments.”
‘Maybe… maybe this could help? ’ Shining pulled the heavy text out. It reminded him of something that he’d find in his sister’s massive library in Ponyville… or in the forbidden spells section of the Royal Canterlot Archives.
He brought the thing over to the ornate oak desk, tucked away in a corner of the study - it was always replete with quills, parchment and ink… perfect for making a quick study of a tome like this.
Before he could set the book down, he stopped: the desk was already occupied with some parchment and quills… and what seemed to be a pink-colored personal journal. From the little scraps and discarded pieces of paper, it seemed that somepony had been using his stationery and desk to trying to copy something out of their own journal for what seemed like a school paper, if the headings at the top of the scraps were any clue.
Something clicked in Shining’s head as he realized what he was looking at.
This was Flurry Heart’s personal journal! Her diary !
She’d left it out here - where anypony could read it… her most private thoughts and feelings!
This was perfect !
Shining dropped the ancient spell-tome on the desk with a loud thud, eager to snatch up his daughter’s diary and find out just what went on in that head of hers.
But as his hoof touched the pink journal he paused. Was this a good idea? Wouldn’t this be betraying Flurry Heart’s trust? If she found out… (and mares always seemed to find out)... he might not be risking losing just her affection… but also her trust .
Was it worth it?
1) Read Flurry's journal. Do it in an intelligent way: making sure to take it to a secluded corner of the castle where there would be no chance of getting caught in the act - then return it to the desk before morning. Flurry would be none the wiser and Shining would have all of the intelligence he needs to tackle this problem!
2) Leave the journal where it is. Study the love-spell book instead. Maybe there's some arcane spellcraft or potion that he could formulate that would ease things with Flurry, make her a little more receptive... If Cadence had the book in her bookshelf out in the open, there was no way it could be dangerous, right?
3) Take the journal to Flurry Heart. She's probably worried that she's misplaced it, maybe even thinking that she's lost it. Surely Shining can be convincing enough to her that he didn't open it and is returning it unseen right? In any case - his strategy should be formulated around gathering information about Flurry passively, like a good army scout or Infiltrator - find out what her life is like!
Author's Note
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Dang you guys are fast!
It was a breakneck race between the study and going to Cadence. Both of those were the good choices. Going to Flurry right off the bat had a lot of risks of the conversation going sour and lowering the Flurry Heart score.
So we're up to the next choice now, and things are starting to get real.
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Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Take the journal to Flurry Heart - our strategy should be watching our daughter, not intruding on her privacy.
The FLURRY HEART METER was UNAFFECTED
Currently the meter is at 4 / 10 !
Shining picked up Flurry’s diary, careful not to disturb the cover. He gathered the different scraps of paper into a single sheaf, making sure to collect each and every piece of writing that might be private.
He couldn’t peek into his daughter’s diary. That wouldn’t be right. All might be fair in love and war - but this was no war. Besides, even if Flurry ended up never loving him again, at the very least he would keep her trust - he wanted to make sure that she’d feel comfortable turning to him in a time of need.
Leaving the spell book behind, ‘Those hokey old tomes never have anything useful, anyway,’ Shining walked out of his study, taking the turn that would lead him down to the west wing of the castle, where Flurry’s room was.
He saluted a pair of crystal guards as he passed them in the hallway. Being a long-time captain of guardsponies gives you a sixth sense for sentinels. What would have passed for two emotionless sentries to your average civilian were clearly two nervous soldiers in Shining’s eyes.
Something was up.
“Soldiers, report!”
The stallion on the left, a crystal-unicorn corporal who had recently joined broke down almost immediately. “S-sir, I wouldn’t go to see the young princess right now - she’s n-OOMPH.”
A stiff elbow from the mare on the right, a sergeant with many more years of experience cut him off. “Nothing to report as a guardspony , sir. Little princess is safe and sound in her room.” She snapped off a quick salute.
Shining frowned slightly, but nodded and returned the salute. He’d like to know what the corporal was going to reveal, maybe something about Flurry’s current mood - or whether she’d already gone to sleep. But the sergeant had a reason to cut off her subordinate, and Shining was no micromanager - the chain of command existed for a reason.
But still… maybe a quick question wouldn’t be completely out of order. “Corporal what wer-”
“Mmmnf!” A loud squeaky shriek pierced the hallway. It had come right from Flurry’s room.
Shining’s eyes darted to the sergeant, trying to see if she would react to the cry but instead the sergeant remained at perfect attention, eyes locked forward. “What was that sound sergeant?”
“Sir, guard post five is reporting all clear, Princess Flurry Heart safe and secure. Further, guardsponies obey standing orders to respect the privacy of all wards whenever reasonable or practicable, sir!”
‘She’s too damn experienced to just be a sergeant. ’ Shining grunted, then nodded. “Hm, very well, carry on sergeant.”
Shining sighed and trotted down the hallway a little faster now. He wasn’t sure what was going on in there, but at the very least Flurry was awake. Maybe she’d seen a mouse or something. He wasn’t sure if they had mice in the castle - it was probably difficult for rodents to tunnel through solid quartz but he’d seen crazier-
*BZZZZZZZZZ*
As he got right up to the door. A strange buzzing hum seemed to fill the air, coming right through the door. It made his ears flick slightly - it sounded so familiar… but he couldn’t quite place it. Was it maybe one of the magically powered lightbulbs in the hallway on the fritz?
The thought was pushed to the back of his head as he raised a hoof to knock on the door. He was about to experience first contact with the enemy. A one-on-one discussion with his teenage daughter, a chance to maybe resolve the mission in a single night! He clenched the diary in his right hoof with nervous energy… he had to do this just right.
“Mmmmmngh!” Another loud squeak came through the crystal door. Just what was going on in there? Was she listening to music or something? Maybe that buzz was a speaker that had gone haywire? But he didn’t hear any music … was she listening on headphones?
He rapped gently on the door with his hoof, whispering so as to be as unobtrusive as possible. “Flurry, sweetie? It’s me - can I come in?”
Nothing. Just the buzzing drone.
He was just about to knock again when he heard a muffled squeak, barely audible above the buzzing sound.
“Mmnnf… y-yes daddy!”
‘That’s weird. I haven’t heard her call me daddy since she was seven. ’ Still, it was an OK to his request to enter. He steeled himself with a deep breath. He couldn’t believe how nervous he was - he’d briefed God-Princesses and felt less anxious - but this was no time for hesitation.
He pushed open the door.
His eyes caught a flash of Flurry Heart on her bed, sitting in an awkward position. But before anything could register, the teen became a blur of color and motion her head snapping to her door with surprise, then her whole body twisting and flipping away with speed that would make a Wonderbolt jealous.
Flight or fright was a wonderfully powerful drug, and Shining imagined the adrenaline must have been surging through the young mare’s veins as she simultaneously pulled her covers over herself and flung whatever she had in her hooves at the sound that surprised her.
Something sailed through the air slamming against the crystal wall next to Shining’s head and falling to the ground - all while emitting the loud, annoying buzz that had been so hard to place.
“WHAT THE BUCK ARE YOU DOING HERE!?” Flurry’s face had gone from frightened to furiously fucking angry in about half a millisecond. Shining cringed as he recognized those features in Flurry’s face, inherited from her mother, which signified a really significant chewing out.
“Uh… I uh…” Shining stumbled over his words, all thoughts and rational planning out the window as he tried to react to the unexpectedly fierce venom pouring from his daughter.
“HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF BUCKING KNOCKING!?” She screamed, her wings outstretched.
Finally, Shining found his voice. “I-I… did knock though, I asked if I could come in… and you said ‘yes, daddy’... I didn’t mean to scare you…”
Flurry’s eyes darted left and right, and her ears splayed back. Her whole face was turning redder than a ruby crystal pony at sunset. “I… uh… was….”
Shining was distracted from his fumbling daughter by the buzzing object at his hooves, which had been rotating in a small circle from its vibrations before bumping against his front left hoof.
“What’s this?” Shining picked up the humming wand-shaped object.
Flurry Heart shrank under her covers, nervously searching for words. “Oh… that’s uh… my…”
“Back massager!” Shining shouted with a smile. “I knew I’d heard that buzz somewhere before - your mom has the exact same brand. Neightachi Magic Wand. I’ve used it myself when my neck gets stiff.”
“Uh… yeah !” Flurry coughed. “My… uh… back’s been acting up.”
Shining brought the massager up to his neck, pressing the bulbous soft end against the inside of his collarbone, the deep vibrating hum of the wand hitting deep within his tense muscles.
“O-o-oh… y-y-y-yeah….” Shining chuckled, his voice vibrating. He clicked the switch to off. “That always hit the spot. Does your mother know that you borrowed this?”
Shining’s face fell when he looked at his daughter. Flurry already looked like she was having the most unpleasant and awkward conversation imaginable. How had he grown so distant from her that she couldn’t even stand a simple conversation with her dad?
“It-it’s my own massager.”
“Ah.” Shining smiled. The fur around the spot where he’d massaged his neck was damp… almost slick. He brought the wand up to his eyes for inspection, wondering if it was leaking. “Oh! You like to use massage oils, just like your mom.”
“D-dad!” Flurry squeaked. Trying to interrupt him.
This was good, maybe he could relate to her by chatting about her frou-frou massage habits and how he knew about such things through Cadence. He brought the wand to his nostrils and sniffed. The rich, musky aroma filled his nose - a burst of flavor and excitement rushed through his mind, made his hackles stand on end, send a flush of blood through his body.
“Ah! You use scented oils like your mom too - even the same vanilla scent - though yours seems a little spici-”
“DAD, GIMME THAT BUCKING THING!” A powerful magical aura tore the back massage from his hoof as Flurry wrenched the tool from his possession, flinging it into a corner of her room. The teenage-filly still hadn’t moved from underneath her sheets - her cheeks were puffed out with anger and tears were forming at the corners of her eyes. “What did you even bucking want, anyway? Why are you here !?”
Shining swallowed deeply. He raised up the diary with his ears splayed back. “I… uh… f-found this in my study.”
“Holy buck!” Flurry squeaked, again reaching out with her magic to snag the journal and parchments to yank it away from her father. “I can’t believe I forgot about that!”
“Don’t worry - I promise I didn’t open it.” Shining quickly reassured. “Guard’s honor.”
Flurry rolled her eyes, the slightest twinge of mirth appearing at a corner of her mouth. “Jeez, dad… I know you didn’t open it. I have a protection spell on the cover - it instantly takes a magical snapshot of whoever’s opened it and sends it to my mirror.” She motioned at her dressing-table mirror. “But… thanks… for being honest.” She gave the barest little hint of a smile, her ears splayed back.
Shining let out a deep breath. Not a bad first step, considering. “N-no problem, honey-bunny-”
“Don’t call me that.” Flurry snapped.
“S-sorry.”
“I’m not some little foal, dad.” Flurry growled. “Do you have any idea how frustrating it is to be treated by the whole damn Empire like you’re still the little baby from your crystalling? I had to tell my guard-detail to stop ponies from coming up to pinch my cheeks, even when I was thirteen !”
“Sorry.” Shining reiterated. He’d learned a long time ago to simply nod and apologize when mares got going.
“I’m a grown mare . Not a filly!” She shook her head with a groan. “If I can’t get respect for who I am ‘as a pony ’... and not some eternal royal-baby or alicorn princess… when I’m on the streets or at school, at the least I’d like to get it from my bucking family .”
Shining’s ears popped up. ‘School! That’s it! That MUST be where all her emotional anxiety is coming from! I’ve gotta find out what’s going on at her school. ’
“Why have you gone all quiet!? You gonna tell me off for swearing or something!?” Flurry snarled, her blood fully risen as she’d worked herself into a little tizzy.
“No! No.” Shining quickly waved his hooves. “You get a pass for tonight.”
“And just why do you get to give passes!?” Flurry crossed her arms.
Shining ignored the obvious bait - he wanted to win Flurry over, not antagonize her. Pausing a moment to let the mood settle, he adopted his most empathetic, concerned tone. “Flurry… is everything… OK?”
Flurry cocked her head, arching an eyebrow in disbelief. “Is everything… OK? Are you serious? Of course everything’s not OK! You have no idea what I have to go through - and now you trot in here saying you’re going to spend more time with us, like that’s going to make anything better… when it’s really just going to make this next month like living in bucking TARTARUS! ” She threw her hooves up in desperation and slumped back onto her pillows.
Shining sighed. Perhaps it was best to make a tactical retreat, for now. “I… I don’t know what I did wrong Flurry. But I know I did something, and for that… I’m really sorry.”
Flurry sighed back. “D-dad… you don’t need to apologize.”
“No. I do.” He was sincere, he was open, he was vulnerable. “I miss having my little girl but that’s my fault - I spent too much time away and you’ve grown up. I need to find a way to connect with you, and that’s why I’m here.” Shining let out a deep breath. “I just hope… you’ll give me a chance.”
Flurry looked at him with bemusement. Then let out a little snort. “Pfft… what the hay was that after-school special nonsense?” She started giggling.
Well, at least he’d managed to make her laugh. “H-hey! I’m serious!”
Flurry was chuckling now, “Yeah yeah… I’ll believe it when I see it. I’m still half convinced you’re headed back to Canterlot tomorrow morning.”
“I’m not!”
“Fine.” Flurry wiped a tear from her eye. “Just don’t be so dramatically corny, dad.” She rolled her eyes. “All I really want is a little space and time - sometimes my whole life just feels so bucking claustrophobic.”
“Ok… ok.” Shining put up his hooves defensively. “I know I have a lot of work to do, just know that… I love you, Flurry.”
Flurry shook her head and rolled her eyes. “What did I just say about the corny-afterschool special lines, dad?”
“Sorry.” Shining turned toward the door.
“It’s fine. Thanks for returning my diary, I guess.”
Shining paused. Wondering how best to conclude his first contact with the ‘enemy ’.
1) Head right out the door. This is as good as it is going to get. Flurry just said that she’s looking for more time and space. You have to be the cool guy and step away.
2) Turn around and give her a good night hug. She’s warming up to you! This is the time to seize the initiative and go for something more - physical contact is huge: a nice dad-hug will remind her just how much you care about her, and could set you up perfectly in the days to come!
3) Go in for the hug and use her mirthful state to even go for some ‘tickle-time’ just like you used to. If you can get her laughing she’ll get over herself and that rigid exterior that she puts on as a front. Tickle-time will make her feel comfortable around you again… plus she smells simply amazing right now!
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Ok what the buck that was ridiculously fast. Bumping the vote count requirement up to 100, but I bet you guys will blow through that in only a few hours as well.
Returning the journal was far and away the top choice on this one. I'm really loving the comments and discussion this is generating. Some of you guys are far too clever for your own good!
We definitely dodged a bullet with not opening the diary... Flurry would have been furious . We would have found out what was going on in her head though.
The arcane spell-book was probably a red-herring. There was always a chance that Shining would have accidentally gotten a lust/love spell mixed up and somehow managed to cast the thing on an alicorn princess who is the daughter of the alicorn princess of love, without either of them knowing.
Journal was a neutral choice - the fear here was that Shining might catch heat just for being the messenger... but it turned out that the detection-spell trap actually helped us! Flurry trusts us more now! We would have gotten a point off of this...
Except we seemed to have interrupted a rather vigorous back massage session. Mare's hate when you do that.
Anyway, now Shining needs to make a choice as to how he should finish this night off!
Are you going to make the right choice? Think hard - it may not be obvious!
As always, commented suggestions are also welcome and can end up becoming a new choice / outcome if good enough!
Also, let me know if you want me to make the choices result in different random dice rolls (with a H/M/L rating) to determine what the outcome will be. This way I have to play fair!
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Let’s head out - Flurry could use some space and she’ll appreciate us not getting too close, too fast.
The FLURRY HEART METER improved by 1!
Currently the meter is at 5 / 10 !
“Ok, Flurry. It was nice talking with you… have a good sleep, OK?” Shining smiled and turned toward the hallway.
“D-dad!” Shining stopped at the sound of Flurry calling him.
“Yes?”
“Just… wanted to let you know…” Shining felt a strange pulling sensation on his blue tail, as his daughter’s magical aura bunched and lifted the long unkempt strands of hair. “U-uh… it’s the uh… style in the Empire to wear your tail up in a bun these days. Shows off your thighs.”
Shining looked back at Flurry. ‘This is great! She’s already giving me some fashion advice - she really does care!’ Her eyes were lingering on his butt though, instead of his face. He swallowed and shifted his rear legs closer together… with his tail held up like that, he’d be showing some… embarrassing bits to his daughter.
The movement seemed to jolt Flurry out of the gaze she was holding. She quickly dropped her magic field, letting Shining’s blue tail flop back between his legs. “J-just saying… so you don’t look like a complete Canterlot yokel.” She turned away from him, blushing furiously.
“Haha, I’ll try to remember that tomorrow, Flurry.” Shining nodded his head, “wouldn’t want to embarrass you. Good night!”
“G-good night.”
Shining closed the door behind him. He let out a deep breath, the air he was holding back draining from along with all the tension that had just built up. It seemed he’d had a successful ‘first contact ’. Though just how successful would be hard to tell.
*BZZZZZZZZZ*
The buzzing sound clicked back on, coming strongly from Flurry’s room.
“Mmm…. b-buck… yes….” The soft groan slipped from under the door.
Shining shook his head with disbelief, then began to trot away, toward his bedroom.
‘She must really have a sore back! ’
“Oh hey Shiny! All good in the barracks?”
Shining closed the double doors to the royal bedroom suite behind him. His beautiful wife was sitting on their luxurious royal bed, reading another of her romance novels. Her back was propped comfortably against the headrest, and she had on half-glasses that somehow managed to make her look even more sexy.
“Yes! There are some pretty clever officers in the Crystal Corps… this place basically runs itself.”
“I could have told you that.” Cadence smiled, closing her book and putting it onto her nightstand. “It was set up by the most handsome, most masculine, bravest stallion in all of Equestria, after all.”
Shining cocked his head. “King Sombra?”
“No! You silly.” She giggled, swatting at the air.
“I know, I just can’t get over how lucky I am to have a wife who’s still willing to blow smoke up my tailhole after all these years.” He collapsed onto one of the loungers that were positioned between the bed and the ornate fireplace.
“Well… if the barracks aren’t going to need your attention, that means that you really will be able to focus on other… more important things.”
Shining nodded and sighed, slumping lower into the comfortable seat. “Mmhmm… about that. I had a conversation with Flurry just now.”
Cadence’s ears perked up. “Oh? That’s great! What did you two talk about?”
“Well, she’d forgotten her diary in my study… I was just returning it to her.”
Cadence arched an eyebrow. “Her diary? She’s usually pretty careful about that. She probably left that there for you to find.”
Shining cocked his head in disbelief. “I… doubt that, she seemed pretty happy I didn’t look in it.”
Cadence shot her husband a knowing smile. “We mares can be a complex sort, Shiny. In any case, I think it means she wanted to reach out to you. That’s good!”
“I guess.” Shining sighed. “Hey, actually… I asked her if she was having trouble at school, and her immediate reaction was to ask if I’d been speaking to you about it.”
“Mhm? So?”
Shining circled his hoof in the air, hoping to prompt more out of his wife. “Sooooo… you get to talk with Flurry all the time. I see you two having heart to heart chats all the time… has she told you anything about school problems.”
Cadence sighed, looking at her husband over her half-glasses. “Shiny… I don’t want to share things that Flurry told me in confidence. It wouldn’t be fair to her.”
Shining groaned and rolled his eyes. “Aww come on Cadie! I’m her dad too you know! And I feel left out!”
“I know you do Shiny.” Cadence smiled sadly. “I’ve told her that she’s gotta work on that… it’s not fair to you… but… it’s complicated .”
Shining grumped, crossing his arms across his chest. “I think I deserve to know if I need to be doing something to protect my little girl - if she’s getting bullied at school.”
Cadence chewed the inside of her cheek for a moment. He hated when she observed him like this… she was truly the mastermind of the family. “Well Shiny, I understand that... Though I think you underestimate our daughter - she’s not a little girl anymore. Can you trust me when I say that I think everything will work itself out, in only a few weeks?”
Shining Armor’s ears perked up. A few weeks was exactly how long he had to get closer to Flurry before her birthday! The timeline would be cutting it far too close. Plus
“I mean… I won’t push her or anything Cadie.” Shining stood up, stretching his neck as he strode about the room. “But on this school bullying thing, I’m putting my hoof down. I need to know if she needs help.”
“She doesn’t need help.”
“Aha! So there is a problem at school!” Shining whirled and pointed at his wife.
“Well… sort of... “ Cadence rolled her eyes, “No more a problem than the usual struggles of a teenager trying to find how to fit in. I don’t really see how you could help her there…”
Shining Armor grinned and looked at his wife with a pitiful, deprecating look.
“Wh-what? What’s that look supposed to mean?”
“Oh, Cadie…” Shining Armor shook his head, “You were the most popular girl in school. I was the outcast nerd leading a gang of Ogres and Oubliettes fanatics in a race to see who could have the fewest actual conversations with a female before graduation.” He proudly held his chin up, “I think I could teach flurry way more about how to handle the stress of high school than you ever could.”
Cadence blinked at him, a deadpan expression in her face. “Really.”
Shining smugly nodded, confident he’d already won this argument.
“Ok, so… putting aside the fact you’re a stallion and not a mare. Did you also happen to be the only pink alicorn princess at your high school, with more attention being paid to you by the faculty and other students in a single day than most celebrities get in a year?”
“Uhm…”
“And did you also have the power to sense the love emotion of every single pony around you - their every crush, their every lust, their every salacious passion? Did you ever find yourself suddenly overwhelmed with the power of your princess abilities just as you were becoming a mare?”
“I… uh… guess not.”
“Yeah. I didn’t think so.” Cadence huffed out of her nose before rolling her eyes. “Not that it matters… I can already tell you’re going to come up with some zany plan. I won’t stop you - I know that you’ll go stir-crazy if you sit around on your hooves.” Cadence picked her book back up, cracking it open to the page that she’d left for herself. “But mark my words - you’re better off just waiting a few weeks..”
Shining was planning.
There was no way he was going to just sit back and let his little girl be stressed out at school. Regardless of his mission, being a dad would always come first. Nothing could stop him from protecting her. And if he played his cards right… he would be able to kill two birds with one stone - fixing her problems at school could bring them closer together!
But how ?
Shining thought back to his military training. He needed to get up close and personal - get that reconnaissance that he was thinking about earlier. He had to find out just what was happening at Flurry Heart’s high school. Immediately, three avenues seemed to present themselves to him.
He lifted a hoof to his chin as he thought, scratching intently. He barely noticed Cadence shaking her head disappointedly as he schemed.
The first and most obvious choice would be to surveil the school from a distance. He knew that there were plenty of trees, blind spots, roofs in the area around the school-grounds. With a good pair of military binoculars and clever concealment, he could watch Flurry from afar… with no chance of her seeing him. Eventually, he could make his way closer, staying under bleachers or inside lockers… He’d received training from some of the best changeling infiltrators under Thorax’s command: the chance of detection would be quite low. But he’d always be distant - out of range… he might miss out the critical intel that would help him understand what Flurry was going through.
His second choice would address that issue up front. Disguising himself as a member of the student body would be risky. Very risky. He could pull a favor with the principal and have him registered as a new transfer student. With some clever wardrobe choices and a change of manestyle, he’d be able to blend right in… maybe even get close to Flurry and her circle of friends. There was a higher risk of detection - especially around Flurry… but he’d definitely figure out what was bothering his daughter.
His third idea split the difference. Infiltrate the student body… but as a substitute teacher. It would be easier to blend in with his larger size as a member of the faculty. He’d be far less likely to stand out to Flurry or her friends… but he’d also be unable to hang out with any students without arousing suspicion. He’d be close, but not close enough to get the really juicy tidbits.
‘I can’t choose! ’ Shining grabbed his neck and squeezed in frustration. ‘They all pass the sniff test - sniff test? What is that smell? ’ Shining’s nostrils flared again. That spicy vanilla scent from earlier… he’d stirred some of it up when he’d grabbed his neck.
The damn stuff smelled so… good !
He blushed a little bit and arranged himself. His ‘little Shining ’ was starting to have a bit of a reaction to that heavenly musk. Those oils Cadence purchased always seemed to have this effect on him. This new flavor was even more intoxicating - the spice made it so much more… hot .
He was really starting to slip out of his sheath now.
Cadence arched an eyebrow at him, her eyes darting down at his groin at then back at his face. She grinned and shook her head, before continuing to read.
‘Maybe this is a sign. ’ Shining gulped, his ‘appendage’ drooping down his inner thigh. ‘At the military academy, they taught that Flash Magnus used to use the performance of his female subordinates in bed as a portent before a great battle. ’
Shining’s eyes darted about the room.
Behind him, just near the door, was the laundry hamper. He could see that it was quite full… almost to overflowing! That must mean that Flurry had also added her weekly garments to the pile. And there, on top of the dress his wife had worn on the previous weekend, like a sign from Celestia herself… were a pair of lacy black panties! He bit his lip. Black was his favorite color - Cadence almost always wore pink. He could easily slip those panties into his hoof, excuse himself to go get a late-night snack… then take care of himself in the kitchen! He knew that the staff would all have gone home by this time, and the kitchen wasn’t on the guard’s patrol rotation. The only ponies that would go in there at this time would be his own family! And Cadence would be reading for a while - so there’s nopony to worry about!
Or… he could just go to sleep. That spot next to Cadence looked so inviting. It had been a long, difficult day. Early this morning he was in Canterlot inspecting the defense plans for the capital. It wouldn’t be hard to simply sleep on his side, and let his erection subside naturally. Luna was often kind to him in the erotic dreams department - she rarely caused him to have anything so exciting as to give him ‘accidental relief’. In one sense, it sort of made sense that he should be ‘storing his energy’ until he completed his mission. He was in the midst of a battle! Relieving himself could wait until he’d accomplished his task and reconnected with Flurry. If anything it would give him more motivation.
His eyes traced over Cadence. She was reading her book - she didn’t seem to be very interested at the moment. But he knew her well… sliding underneath the covers at the foot of the bed, crawling up between her legs, burying his muzzle between her thighs. She’d quickly warm up. It had been a long day, sure… but with just a little more effort he was sure she’d reciprocate! And so what if he was getting distracted from his mission! It wasn’t like a little bit of sex with Cadence would reduce his motivation to fix things with Flurry!
He nodded thoughtfully to himself - he was resolved.
He’d let ‘little Shining’ do the thinking: whatever he chose would determine what his course of action tomorrow would be.
‘Flash Magnus would be proud! ’
DOUBLE CHOICE!
1) High Risk / Low Risk: Take the panties and go to the kitchen to relieve yourself. This way you’re not disturbing Cadence, and you get to have fun with those erotic looking black panties! What are the chances anypony walks into the kitchen so late at night? (50% Chance of discovery by Flurry)
Tomorrow you’ll keep up the clandestine act by spying on Flurry from afar. You’ll be further away, but there’s almost no chance that you’ll be spotted. It will be hard to get useful intel on your daughter’s troubles, though. (5% Chance of discovery by Flurry)
2) Low Risk / High Risk: Let’s just go to sleep. We need to focus on our end-goal! Let’s store all of that enthusiasm and energy up for finding ways to reconnect with Flurry, and to keep our motivation high! I’m sure she’ll appreciate it! (5% Chance of wet dream)
Tomorrow we’ll use that ‘frustration’ to put us in the mindset of a young teenage colt - perfect for disguising ourselves as Chad Armour, fresh transfer student! In and amongst those young fillies that know Flurry personally, we’ll surely find something about what’s going on! (50% Chance of discovery by Flurry)
3) Medium Risk / Medium Risk: Cadence is right there. A few minutes in ‘Shining’s tongue-town’ and she’ll be more than happy to drain all of our ‘tension’ away. There’s nothing like making sweet love to your wife to end a bad day on a high note. It helps that Cadence is a really ‘vocal’ lover - hopefully these crystal walls are thick enough! (30% Chance of Flurry hearing her parents having sex)
We might not have as much frustration to channel the thoughts and feelings of a teenage colt tomorrow - so let’s disguise ourselves as a substitute teacher instead. A manestyle change, a cardigan, some glasses… nopony will be the wiser. It’ll be harder to get close to Flurry and her friends, but we’ll also reduce the likelihood of getting found out. A good compromise! (30% Chance of discovery by Flurry)
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE !
Vote for your choice! Once we hit 125 total votes I'll write the next chapter!
Great job guys! You blasted through 100 votes and hit over 200 votes without even blinking! Bumping the vote count requirement up to 125 but you're not going to have any problem hitting that! I won't bump the vote requirement up every time, we'd never make it to the end of the month... I just don't want to cut people out before they've had a chance to pitch in!
So an even higher percentage of folks than last time went for the option to simply exit. Probably a good call. Tickle time might have gotten... exciting for a little bit. But as soon as Flurry got her head back...
We'd be in BIG trouble.
A hug was a kind of middle-ground. Flurry would have found it a bit annoying, she's got a really 'stiff back ' at the moment... and her dad hugging her might have just 'exacerbated' that. Likely a neutral outcome.
The end of this chapter presents our first DOUBLE CHOICE now you have to pick between Medium/Medium, Low/High, or High/Low! Can't go fully safe this time!
I've added some percentages in. I'll use a dice roll program to see if the outcomes do or do not hit and write accordingly. Let me know what you guys think of this system! Is it good? Too confusing? Tell me in the comments!
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Are you going to make the right choice? Think hard - it may not be obvious!
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Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Teaching 'Essential' Skills
(106 votes / 61%) Let’s have some sexy-time with the wife… then we’ll infiltrate the school tomorrow as a substitute teacher!
The FLURRY HEART METER remains UNCHANGED!
Currently the meter is at 5 / 10 !
Shining grinned as he crossed the floor in a couple of quick strides, hungrily eyeing his wife, who was completed distracted, with her nose buried in her book.
“Oh, Cadie….” Shining growled playfully, putting his front two hooves on the foot of the bed.
Cadence simply giggled, looking over the top of her book. “Oh Shiny, you’re incorrigible. Aren’t you tired after such a long day?”
Shining shook his head. “I’m never too tired for you , my love.”
Cadence simply sighed then looked back at her book. “As much as I’d love to, sweetheart… I think that you should actually uh… pause… any release for a little while.”
Shining arched an eyebrow. “Pause ?” He shook his head slightly, “Why should I do that?”
“Well… have you heard of tantric sex?” Cadence hummed, still reading her book. “It was developed in Poneladesh. They say that your orgasms can be up to ten times as intense if you simply restrain yourself for a short time.”
“A short time?” Shining whined.
“Mmhmm… say… the next couple of weeks? Just until Flurry’s birthday.” Cadence giggled. “Don’t you think that would be fun?”
‘Nope. ’ Shining’s thoughts echoed the immortal wisdom of that one farm-pony he’d met in Ponyville. Shining slipped his head under the covers in response, slowly moving up under the blankets, crawling between his wife’s legs.
“Shiny! You’re being a naughty little colt.” Cadence chuckled. He heard her turn a page on her book.
But he wasn’t about to stop. Already his nostrils were filled with the lovely perfume of his wife. A scent-trail of wonderful vanilla that was leading him right between her pink thighs. ‘It’s so strange that she smells just like those oils… I wonder if she uses them… down there? ’
Shining planted a light kiss on the inside of Cadence’s left thigh, making her giggle. “Kisses won’t buy you any credit from me, Shiny.” She was teasing him… but she still spread her legs, giving him access to plant a trail of kisses along that tender flesh - approaching her wonderful honeypot.
“Cadie…” Shining growled. The feel of his cock dragging against their silk sheets, the smell of his wife’s building arousal, the wonderful spicy vanilla musk from Flurry’s back massager… He was horny .
Cadence’s puffy pussy booped him right in the nose. He plump pink lips never failed to excite him - swollen flesh that hinted at the twisting pink love-tunnel inside. He leaned in and planted a long, slow lick… starting right at the sensitive flesh between Cadence’s tailhole and her pussy… trailing it slowly across her pussylips until reaching the cleft of that wondrous mons, whereupon he flicked the tip of his tongue, just barely snagging his wife’s clitoral hood.
“Ohhh… what a naughty colt…” Cadence shifted in her seated position, drawing up one of her rear hooves, brushing against Shining's stallionhood quite deliberately, “...not listening to his beautiful wife… you should be punished .”
Shining buried his nose deeper into his wife’s cunt, thrusting his tongue into her tight, hot snatch. With years of skillful practice, he had learned just how to curl his powerful pink muscle, hooking it upwards to stroke Cadence’s clitoris from the inside with twisting and erratic movements.
“Mnnfgh!” Cadence wrapped her rear hooves around his head, pinning him inside her. Shining felt the covers fly off as his wife threw her book aside and tore off the blankets, exposing him. “Shiney! I’ll.. punish you later… for now… don’t stop!”
He had no intention of stopping, not that he would have even been able to. In addition to his wife’s powerful thighs clenching him, she had also taken hold of his horn with her forehooves, using it like some kind of lewd joystick to direct exactly how she wanted Shining to eat her out.
So he dedicated himself to his work, thrashing about with his tongue as deeply as possible - breathing when she let up the pressure ever so slightly, inhaling deep whiffs of her marehood that made him wild with excitement.
Soon he wasn’t just breathing her… he was drinking her. Cadence had always been a rather wet mare. The alicorn’s red-hot love bud winked out against his muzzle, as squirts of nectar shot into the back of his throat.
“Y-yes! YES! YES SHINING! I’M...” He heard that familiar sound of alicorn wings spreading wide, felt the powerful clench of spasming mare-muscle, and the rhythmic clenching of his tongue that signified that his wife was indeed - “...CUMMING!”
Does Flurry Heart overhear her parents having sex (30% chance)? Shining rolls… success! Flurry Heart does NOT overhear!
Cadence groaned, her legs loosely slumping off of her husband. Shining loved being able to put his wife into post-orgasmic pleasure… she had such powerful releases - it was fun to just watch her as she dreamily drooled in a sea of bliss... An audible *thunk* filled his ears as her head slumped back and her horn impacted the headboard, leaving a small notch.
It was one notch of many . Shining was proud of those notches.
“Mmmm hmm hmm hmm…” Cadence half-groaned, half-chuckled. “Is there just no stopping you, my love?”
“Nope,” Shining starting crawling up his wife, his painfully hard cock dragging against her thigh as he prepared to-
“N-no… no Shiny…” Cadence groaned, attempting to close her thighs despite her weak muscles. “I’m serious - I want to hold off on any sex until Flurry’s birthday.”
“Wh-what? That’s not fair!” Shining moaned, sliding up and looking Cadence right in her dreamy face. “Cadence, I’ll never make it! You know how… ‘little Shining’ gets!” He looked down at himself.
Cadence glanced down too and bit her lip.
Despite the fact Shining was still nearly two feet from her, the tip of his jet-black cock hovered an inch from the end of her nose. With Cadence’s help, he’d developed had a bit of coltish, immature pride in his massive length and substantial, hoof-sized girth. What had once been something he tried to hide in the showers because of his almost freakish size, was now one of his not-so-bashful personal glories. Despite Cadence cautioning him that size had nothing to do with satisfaction - she’d quickly shown him how to put his stud-level stallionhood to expert use.
“Mmm… I... “ Cadence hesitated, not looking at Shining, but at her husband’s throbbing erection.
“P-pwease?” Shining put on his best puppy-dog eyes and clenched his hooves together in supplication.
“Hmmm…” Cadence reached forward, putting a hoof under his heavy black balls, as if gauging their fullness. “Ok-”
“Yes!” Shining pumped a hoof, flexing his cock proudly. A fat spurt of juice splattered from the end right across his wife’s face, forcing her to close an eye.
“Shiny!”
“Sorry!”
Cadence licked some of the flavor-filled, stallion juice away. With a bemused grin, she wiped her face and looked up at Shining with a mischievous grin. “Ok- if … you promise to drink something the night before Flurry’s birthday that will make it llike you’d held-off the whole time.”
“What’s the big deal with using her birthday as some tantric checkpoint, anyway?” He asked, cocking his head.
Cadence blew a warm stream of air across the fat, onyx head, causing another burble of pre-cum to spell from his cockslit. “That’s the deal… take it or le-”
“I take it!” Shining groaned, pressing his cock forward against his wife’s mouth.
Cadence chuckled, then pressed her tongue underneath his glans. Shining groaned, throwing his head back. Her soft tongue always brought him so much pleasure - right from the first, awkward blowjob she’d given him as a colt all those years ago… and she’d only gotten better with time.
Her tongue new every inch of his cock, every crevice, every vein. She slid it around the swollen ridge of his head, coaxing and slathering him with drool, not afraid to let the hot steel of erection press against her muzzle, into her mane, against her nose. He particularly loves when she took deep whiffs of his virile pre-juices. It made him feel like he was a potent drug - like his wife was getting high on him.
“Cadie… you’re so good at this.” Shining groaned, one hoof gently rubbing behind his wife’s ear - he never tried to grab Cadence’s head… she was far better at giving him pleasure than he would ever be - there was no reason to interrupt a master at work.
Cadence giggled, planting a kiss right on his glans. “You know… I remember when I used to practice on giant eggplants after our first romp in the hay together.” She blew a warm stream of air across his balls, then went back to his head, and somehow managed to fit the whole thing in her mouth for a couple of swirling bobs, which she broke off with a wet smack. “I wanted to practice for my love, so I could be the best for him.”
“Oh… you are the best Cadie…” Shining groaned, his legs twitching. He was getting closer. The knot in his stomach was tightening and tightening. “The best Princess… the best mare… the best cock-sucker… the best lover… the best mom…”
Cadence looked up at him with sparkling eyes at the last phrase. “Mmmhmm…” she drew her tongue from his thick medial ring all the way up to his tip. “I’ve learned lots of skills, haven’t I Shiny…”
“O-oh… b-buck, Cadie!” Shining’s hooves clenched. “I’m… I’m gonna…”
“But you know what makes a really great mom?” Cadence wiggled her eyebrows at him.
But he was having trouble focusing - the collapse of reason and restraint as his boiling orgasm surged through him had already begun. He felt his cock throb once, twice… then the throb of his flare expanding and straining.
“...passing those skills on to your daughter,” Cadence growled throatily, before impaling herself on Shining’s cock, shoving him all the way down her throat in a single thrust.
Shining screamed out, eyes shutting in absolute ecstasy as all eighteen inches of his length slid down the Princess of Love’s throat. Throb after throb of spasming clenches wracked through his body, each one coming with the intense satisfaction of release - with spraying gouts of steaming cum, poured directly into his wife’s belly.
Rope after rope shooting in blissful agony - all swallowed by his beloved wife. Until…
Eyes rolling in his head, Shining groggily saw Cadence removing his softening stallionhood from her mouth with a hungry, satisfied slurp. The world was spinning, the exhaustion of the day suddenly catching up to him, and he felt himself collapsing into the welcoming bed.
“Nighty-night Shiny…”
“Well, Mr. Armour.” The stodgy, gray-haired unicorn sighed, before sitting behind his desk. “I’m ecstatic, of course, that such a talented and respected pony would be willing to teach at our school… even if it’s only for a brief period of time.” The stallion adjusted his tie. “But why do you have to do it in disguise? Why the secrecy?”
Shining Armor smiled nervously. He really did look quite different.
Cadence had helped him gel his hair into an impressive set of luxurious curls. Despite her protests that this was ‘the stupidest idea of his many stupid ideas’ and that he should ‘just wait and not go buck everything up’, when he’d insisted and started trying to comb his hair… she’d pitched in to help with his concealment.
With the different mane-style… a pair of thick, black reading glasses… an ugly green sweater vest… and a little bit of concealing make-up to disguise his cutie mark (now it looked like a crystal-notepad)... he appeared to be a completely different pony! He’d even come up with a different name for himself: Sparking Shield… or Sparky for short.
Cadence had disagreed with his choice to wear his tail up in a bun, however. According to her, nopony in the Empire wore their tail that way - especially not Stallions… not unless they were trying to show off their bits for the whole world to see. He’d scoffed and derisively shook his head at his wife, informing her that he had received the very latest in fashion advice from Flurry on the subject.
That had gotten her to give in on the subject… though she’d done so with more chuckling than he would have liked.
In any case, when he’d left his home he was more than happy with how few ponies greeted him with salutes or greetings. Not a single passerby recognized him! The disguise was working!
The most extreme test had come when he’d passed his daughter walking through the hall on the way to see the principal...
Does Flurry Heart see through her father’s disguise (30% chance)? Shining Armor rolls… Success! Flurry Does not see through his disguise!
And she hadn’t noticed! He hoped it wasn’t just because she was chatting with a few of her friends at the time… but so far so good!
Shining turned his attention back to the old unicorn. He needed some kind of a reason for why he was undercover. “Principal Accommodating Zircon, my presence here needs to remain a strict secret… if any of the Empire’s enemies knew I was out in the open… it could place the entire school, and my daughter, at risk.”
The principal tilted his head quizzically. “B-but we already have so many guards in place to protect your daughter… and she’s happy to enroll under her true identity.”
‘Crap. ’ Shining quickly tried to think up some other reason, but couldn’t find one. “I… uh… the reasons are… top secret… only you and I can know, nopony else… especially Flurry Heart!”
The principal glared at Shining, and for a moment it seemed as though all would be lost. “Well, they don’t call me Principal Accommodating for nothing… I’m always happy to be of service to the Empire, of course!”
Shining let out a deep breath of relief.
“I assume that you’ll want to teach a class that your daughter is attending?”
“Oh! Yes, yes that would be ideal.”
The principal stared at the strange prince. “Can I ask why the young Princess needs to have her father watching over her?” Once again seeming upset that he wasn’t being given the full story.
“You may not. ” Shining gulped.
“Ok! No problem, always happy to help!” He pulled out a thick book, filled with all the various class-schedules and used his magic to skillfully navigate to a particular page. “Ah, here we go… hmm… there’s really only three options that I could give you.”
‘Of course. ’ Shining groaned internally. ‘It always seems to be three… ’
1) Low Risk / Low Reward: Shining was a Captain of the Guard! That’s basically a Ph.D. in physical education. He knows every type of sit-up, push-up, wing-up, and horn-up ever devised by pony-minds! If there’s one thing that Shining is well-qualified to do, it’s to stare at teen-filly butts as they are stretching and make sure that everything is in the right place! (20% chance of something going wrong, rewards are given a 0.5 times multiplier penalty)
2) Medium Risk / Medium Reward: Teach potions class in 2nd period. Yikes - it had been a long time since Shining Armor had done any study on potion brewing. Unicorns just… didn’t really need to use potions that often! That being said, how hard could it be? Potions are basically glorified cocktail mixing… and if Shining could fix up a mean rum and coke! If only he’d read that book from the night before! (50% chance of something going wrong - Rewards are given a 1.5 times multiplier)
3) High Risk / High Reward: Teach sex-ed in 3rd period. Insert tab A into slot B… how hard could it be, anyway? Sure he’ll have to discuss throbbing genitals and estrus cycles with a bunch of horny teens for over an hour, but he’d faced down changeling invasions! There was no way this could go wrong! Hmm… are teachers supposed to demonstrate things during sex-ed? (60% Chance of something going wrong - rewards are doubled)
Author's Note
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I hope you all enjoyed the little clop scene between Shining and Cadence! Just a little tease, not meant to be the 'full-shot' which will come (if you earn it) when you manage to fill the Flurry meter!
Coming up now is Shining's attempt to be a substitute teacher - YOU get to choose which class he'll teach. It will be interesting to see which of the options you all pick - you've been a bit conservative so far... you're going to need to take a few risks eventually!
But all three classes will be fun to write!
Hope you're all enjoying!
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Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Let’s teach sex-ed! How hard can that be?
The FLURRY HEART METER goes DOWN by 1!
Currently the meter is at 4 / 10 !
Will something go wrong during the sex-ed class (60% chance)? Shining rolls… FAILURE - uh oh!
Shining armor was scrambling through the materials for the class. Everything here was filled with complicated terms and documentation that he didn’t understand. ‘Learning outcomes’ and ‘Socratic methodology’ and all sorts of other things, all neatly arranged in the bright yellow folder left behind by the other teacher, Ms. Kindnicker.
He thought teaching kids about sex was supposed to be easy !
Then the bell went off, and students began to make their way into the classroom. For the most part, they were ignoring him, chatting in their little groups of pairs or threes, all wearing the same Crystal Highschool Academy uniform - with pleated skirts for the fillies and ties for the colts.
As they continued to file in, Shining took note of all the different students. About 80% of the class seemed to fillies, which was not an unusual composition in the mare-heavy Crystal Empire. There was such an assortment of students as well - some small, some more mature, all different colors and different manestyles… most were unicorns, but there was a scattering of pegasi and earth ponies in there as well.
Shining scrambled from the teacher's desk to the whiteboard, popping open one of the dry erase markers and quickly scribbling out his name.
S H I N
He stopped, remembering that he was currently acting under disguise.
SPARKLING SHIELD - SEX EDUCATION
As he finished writing up the subject much of the class groaned and tittered. “Again?” “This sucks.” “C’mon why do we-”
Shining snapped about on his rear heel, shooting his most furious drill-instructor gaze at the class, currently filled with impressionable young teenagers. “Did my ears just bucking deceive me, or did some slimy-horseapple, teat-sucking boots dare to speak before they were addressed by their senior officer?”
The entire class stiffened and sat up.
Shining nodded smugly to himself. ‘Good. I knew this was going to be easy. ’
At that moment the door opened and Flurry Heart walked in. She took one look at the whiteboard, then one look at Shining, and her face darkened. She looked over at him and growled. “You. Outside. Hallway. Now.”
Shining swallowed. “Y-yes m-ma’am.”
Shining stepped out meekly into the hall, right behind Flurry Heart. He was fully expecting to receive a massive explosion of anger and fully-justified fury. Instead, he was entirely surprised by her approach.
“Just who are you, and where is Ms. Kindknicker?” Flurry prodded him in the chest with a hoof, hissing through her teeth.
Shining stumbled backward, his rear bumping into some of the lockers in the hallway as the mare stepped forward. ‘My cover hasn’t been blown! ’
“Uh… I’m… uh… Sh-sh… no, Sparkling Shield. I’m the substitute teacher for today - Ms. Kindknicker is out sick today.”
“Uh huh. Well… I had told the school that only Ms. Kindknicker could teach biology and sex-ed. But apparently they’ve forgotten that little rule.” Flurry threw her head back with frustration. “There was a reason for that. She knew about the issues that could arise, and taught accordingly .”
Shining swallowed nervously. “I-issues?”
Flurry grunted her nostrils flaring. “Yes. I’m the daughter of the Princess of Love. I have Alicorn powers beyond your comprehension.” She poked him in the chest again with frustration.
“Ow!”
Flurry paused, then withdrew her hoof. Letting out a sigh and sagging. “S-sorry. It’s not your fault. It’s that damn principal’s fault. He’s always way too accommodating.” She looked up at him with ears folded back. “Can you… keep this secret?”
Shining nodded, using every inch of his resolve not to call Flurry sweetie, or wrap her in a hug, blowing his cover.
“I’m… w-well… I don’t know yet… but my alicorn power might be the Princess of lust .”
“Lust?”
“Like I said! I don’t know yet!” Flurry hissed. “I just… what I do know is that if ponies start to get… switched on … around me… I get switched on too…”
“Ah,” Shining noted. He was racing to try to understand just what this really meant for his daughter. He knew that Cadence had experienced something similar, but with the forces of love. She could sense when ponies around her were in love, would feel more affectionate when near couples and families… and also spread that love out from herself as well. “D-do you also… spread those feelings out from you?”
FLurry blushed, her wings shuffling slightly on her back, and her tail flicking slightly in annoyance. “H-how did you know that!?”
“Just a guess!”
“Well… yes. Maybe. I don’t know.” She groaned. “I’m still trying to figure this out. It’s a new thing, and my mom is helping me to understand how to control it.”
Shining nodded, somewhat relieved that Flurry was at least sharing this with Cadence.
“But … I’m not that good at it yet.” She sighed. “And in a class filled with teens… talking about bucking… if they affect me and I affect them… it becomes a loop. It can get out of hoof very quickly.” Flurry took a step back and made a small motion with her hoof. “Ms. Kindknicker knew about this, and she was always very careful to keep the class under tight control when she was teaching any subjects that could get… uh… interesting .”
Shining nodded. “I… see.”
“Do you?” Flurry accused. “Are you sure that you can handle this?”
“O-of course!” Shining nodded. “I’ve been teaching these classes for years!”
Flurry leaned in closer, her eyes narrowing. “Hmm… something seems. Familiar about you.”
Shining slid back, pressing up against the lockers once again. “O-oh?”
Flurry’s nostrils flared slightly. “You smell... just like… hm…”
“OK! Time to get back to class!” Shining dodged out and opened up the classroom door. “I assure you, there won’t be a single problem!”
‘I hope .’
Shining returned to the front of the class and cleared his throat. As Flurry took her seat near the back of the classroom, he began to speak.
“Good afternoon class! My name is Sh-... Sparkling Shield.” He pointed at the name on the whiteboard. “But you can call me Mr. Shield, or sir. I’ll be teaching sexual education today in place of Ms. Kindknicker. Show of hooves, any questions?”
No hooves moved. He nodded and turned around. A bunch of shocked gasps and chuckles filled the class. He turned back.
Everypony quieted down again. But he could see that a number of the fillies in the first row where blushing slightly. He waited a few moments, then turned back one more time.
“Holy buck, would you look at those!”
“Nice pair, teach!” A female voice giggled. “Rawr!”
He swung back around, capping the dry-erase marker in his magical field with an audible click. “Does somepony want to tell me what is going on here?”
A voice in the second row spoke up - it sounded suspiciously like the one that had just cat-called him. “Hey teach, you know your tail’s up in a bun, right?”
Shining glowered at the filly. She was one of the few pegasi in the class, an athletic-looking dark blue mare with a silver ponytail and a pair of silver stud earrings - Shining could tell she was an alpha-type personality. He’d need to make sure he kept her under control.
“The name is Mr. Shield , or Sir. ” Shining reiterated with a calm menacing authority. “Not teach . And what is your name?”
“Uh, Silver Gust, sir.”
“Well Silver… I do know my tail is in a bun - what of it.”
“Well… I uh… we.. can see your balls, sir.”
Shining swallowed. “I… see. What about them?” Shining grunted. “I assume it’s not the first time you’ve seen a pair?” He turned back to the whiteboard.
Silver blushed and shook her head, then whispered under her breath. “...never two as big and black as those though.”
Shining spoke over his shoulder. “Thanks for the compliment Ms. Gust. I’ll have you all know that tail-buns are very much in right now. So if you can please focus on today’s lesson… or you can continue to ask questions about my superior fashion sense.”
He waited for a moment but heard nothing else from the fillies or colts but a few nervous swallows and throat-clears.
“Good! Now, I know that many of you probably think that foals come from a stork or are grown out of the ground… but who can tell me where babies actually come from?”
There was a little bit of muttering confusion through the class. Shining crossed his arms with satisfaction. He obviously knew far more than all these teens combined. Teaching this class would be a piece of cake.
One hand tentatively shot up. A mint-green filly unicorn with a light-yellow mane.”
“Yes you, your name is?”
“Emerald Streak, sir. Do you mean you want to know about how two haploid gametes can undergo fusion to create a unique diploid zygote with its own chromosomal phenotype?”
Shining stared blankly at the filly for a few seconds. He wasn’t even sure if the filly had just spoken in standard ponish to him. The whole class shifted nervously as he continued to attempt to decipher the terms Emerald had easily rattled off.
Finally, he spoke. “Incorrect. Babies come from a vagina .”
The whole class stared at him, wide-eyed. ‘I must be blowing their minds right now. ’ Shining realised. ‘Maybe they don’t even know what a vagina is! ’
He picked up a marker and began to draw a rough approximation of a mare’s plot from behind. He paid particular attention to the tailhole, redrawing it a couple of times. He always had trouble making it quite puffy enough.
“You see… the slit here where you pee from is actually called a vagina… and-”
Emerald Streak’s hoof shot up.
“Yes?”
“Excuse me sir, but that’s incorrect. Urine comes from the urethra… that’s actually the orifice just above the vagina.”
Shining swallowed, a little bit of sweat forming on his forehead. “A-are you sure-”
Silver Gust spoke up. “Um… Mr. Shield, I mean no disrespect… but you know that we’re in junior year right? We learned about sex and marehoods and stallionhoods in kindergarten.”
“O-oh… I see.” He nervously started to erase the crude diagram. “Just w-what do you kids know, then?”
One of the three colts in the class spoke up. “I’ve watched just about every video there is on pornStable.com!”
Another filly scoffed. “pornStable is awful, all the stallionhoods on there are made to look huge with magic-fakery!”
“Not if you go to the amateur section!” Emerald chuckled. “My favorite is amateur thestral bondage…”
“Me too!”
“I like enhanced crotch-teats. I tried to find the spells they use but they keep them restricted.”
“Only natural for me!”
The whole class seemed to be piping up about their various kinks and fetishes. Shining could feel a pair of eyes burning into him with a furious anger. He saw that Flurry was watching him with a steely growl, tapping her hoof on her desktop angrily.
‘I’m blowing this! ’
“Silence! Class, pipe down!” Shining shouted, stopping all the teenagers in their tracks. “Tell you what… why don’t I take questions - I’m happy to answer any calm , collected , questions that you guys might have about sex.”
A smaller filly put her hoof up. She was a unicorn with a messy mop of hair and a pair of thick glasses.
“Yes?” Shining pointed at her. “What’s your name?”
“Um, Quartz… is it possible to get pregnant if the colt cums inside your tailhole?”
The lone pegasus colt near the back of the class hopped to all fours, his shaggy mane bobbing about. “I told you that it couldn’t Quartzy! It wouldn’t even make sense .”
“My plot is still sore, Feather.” The little filly grunted back. “I told you we should have just gone to the store to get a condom!”
Shining cleared his throat. “Calm down, calm down!” He chuckled. “Don’t worry you two, it’s one-hundred percent impossible for a mare to get pregnant from a creampie in her behind. There’s nothing to worry about.”
Emerald’s hoof shot up.
“Yes?”
“Actually sir, according to our textbook, there is still a risk of accidental pregnancy: it would only take some of Feather’s drippings to make their way to Quartz’s vagina and she could theoretically be impregnated.”
“I knew it!” Quartz shouted. “You’re such a jerk, Feather!”
“I didn’t know that .” Feather protested, standing u, his wings twitching. “You didn’t complain that much at the time, Quartz! Besides, you weren’t on your heat - you’re just making a big scene to embarrass me!”
“Embarrass you !?” Quartz pushed herself up and whirled on him. “What about me ? I’m the one who’s been worried sick all morning because my estrus will start shortly, and I have no idea if I’m going to get pregnant because somepony couldn’t wait ten-freaking minutes to go to the corner store!”
“Why don’t you ask the teacher then!”
Quartz whirled back to Shining, frustration and embarrassment on her face. “Mr. Shield, should I be worried? Can I get pregnant even if I’m out of cycle?”
“Uhhhh…..” Shining had no idea . He looked plaintively over at Emerald Streak, questioningly.
The filly sighed and rolled her eyes. “Yes. There’s a small risk she could be early.”
Shining coughed slightly. “You should probably go see the nurse, Quartz. Although, if you two were bucking stomach-to-stomach when he came in your butt you’d think he’d leak down away from your-”
“Mr. Sparkling Shield .” A voice from the back of the class growled.
Shining gulped.
Flurry Heart was tapping her hoof on the desk with frustration. Shining could see a small pink glow building up around her, tinging the air ever so slightly with a hazy hue of energy. The teenage filly’s wings were slightly extended, her horn throbbed with magical excitement - signs mimicked by the alicorn’s nearby classmates.
“Did you intend… aside from all this description of anal sex and creampies and heat… to teach us anything today?”
Shining chuckled nervously. “Of course! Of course…” He nervously turned to the now completely forgotten lesson plan, scrambling through Ms. Kindknicker’s yellow folder looking for something, anything, to help!
A condom fell from the folder, landing on the floor below.
‘That’s it! A demo! ’
He snagged the little piece of metallic foil and levitated it up into the air. “Ah… here! You see class… if you’d used one of these then you wouldn’t even need to be worried, Quartz.” He gestured back at Feather. “And even if you prefer the ‘backdoor’...” Shining grinned, “...and I can’t blame you there, it can be a lot of fun fellas… a condom really makes the clean-up much easier.”
“Ahem!” Flurry’s throat clear cut through the air. The pink glow was building up in the back of the classroom ominously.
“Right… so… condom… all you need to-”
“But Mr. Shield, I didn’t have any condoms.” Quartz groaned. “And we… uh... didn’t want to wait… he was… pretty horny.” Quartz had a bit of a goofy grin on her face as she looked happily back at her boyfriend. The edges of the pink field were just reaching her desk. “He’s… such a… handsome… colt… I didn’t want to wait either.” The filly licked her lips as she batted her eyes at Feather.
The colt was fully in the pink field, and his wings snapped outward. At the same time, his desk seemed to jump up with a small *thunk* sound filling the classroom. The same sound was repeated two seconds later at the desks of the other two colts… and a number of fillies seemed to suddenly be biting their lips or nervously shifting their legs together.
The pink field was throbbing out every second now.
“Ohh Kay!” Shining quickly interjected. “Well in that case… all you need to do is cast the protection spell - you’re a unicorn Quartz, so you should have been able to do that.”
Everypony in the class cocked their heads at that. The pink field reduced ever so slightly...
Until a filly inside the field moaned out, and her head struck the desk with a thump - she was burying her face in the wood and groaning… both her hooves could not be seen - they were doing something under the desk.
“Yes! The protection spell.” Shining gulped. “It basically creates a thing magical field around your stallionhood.” Shining started to charge up his horn. “You have to get it just right so the field adheres to the organ snugly, but with a little practice, you can summon a magical sheath that is custom fit for your size and shape out of memory… here I’ll show you.”
Shining cast the well-practiced spell, one that Cadence had taught him long ago when they were teens.
“W-wait!” Flurry groaned from the back of the classroom. A crimson blush on her cheeks, her wings twitching wider and wider.
But it was too late.
Hovering there, in the middle of the air, was a clear force-field of sparkling magical energy. The throbbing large shape was instantly recognizable - having been perfectly molded so that it showed off every vein and bump, the thick medial ridge, the throbbing fat flare… all nineteen inches of fat, masculine horsecock.
It was an outline of Shining’s dick.
All around the class fillies stiffened and swallowed. Tails flicked and wagged. A few even flagged up. Another filly’s head dropped to her desk - and Emerald slowly moved one of her hooves under the edge of her desk surreptitiously.
“There’s no way that’s real, right?”
“That’s bucking huge. ”
“Will mine get that big?”
“Makes pornStable studs look like colts!”
The pink field grew instantly, reaching out to cover each student in the class. The hue at the center of the field was a visibly rosy pink, deep enough to actually occlude some of the back wall behind Flurry. The poor filly was sweating profusely, her mane starting to look slightly disheveled… her wings fully extended… she was clenching the sides of her desk with her hooves, desperately trying to maintain control.
Shining wasn’t sure what to do next! How was this getting out of control so quickly?
Maybe it was the spell? When he’d been just describing protection options the field had reduced… maybe he had to get back to that!
He picked up the condom. “B-but it’s still very important to know how to put a regular condom on.” He tore open the package and brought the small circle of rolled up latex out with his magic. No effect on the pink field, which still thrummed with energy.
Maybe getting the class to participate would help. “Why don’t I… get somepony to come up here and try to put it on this field here: the field should maintain its shape...“ He looked out at the class, trying to decide who to pick.
1) UNKNOWN RISK / REWARD: Have the athletic pegasus filly come up and do the demo. It’s important for non-magical ponies to know how to manipulate delicate things as well as unicorns. Plus, Shining’s always been a bit curious how earth ponies and pegasi put condoms on anyway.
2) UNKNOWN RISK / REWARD: Have Emerald Streak come up and do the demo. She’s obviously the class know-it-all… if she wants to be the teacher’s pet so bad, why don’t we let her? A part of Shining would like to see the little filly get a little flustered - and she definitely looks like she’s already working up a bit of a flush.
3) High Risk / High Reward: Have Flurry come up and do the demo. Maybe if we can get whatever that pink field is away from the other students it will decrease the feedback effect and let us get everything back on track! Maybe it could even help Flurry to understand how she can manage her power by taking her so close to losing control and giving her an opportunity to try to deal with this? Then again, we have no idea what we’re doing… and we would be letting that field get closer to us. (60% Chance of something going wrong - rewards are quadrupled)
4) LOW RISK / NO REWARD: Dismiss the class. NOW. Flee. We’re about two hoofsteps away from a teenage high-school orgy, and we have no idea what we’re doing. If we shout: “Class dismissed!” and teleport enough of the students away from one another we just might be able to avert this disaster! (Will lock in the loss of Flurry Meter from this chapter but end the encounter.)
Author's Note
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Unfortunately, Shining failed the roll on the high-risk class, which cost us a point on the Flurry Meter. But all is not lost... we're still in the encounter: there's a chance we could make it back out of this with a positive, or even a neutral!
OR WE COULD LOSE EVEN MORE
We're in a precarious spot right now... we don't even have full information because of the effects of the field - we can't gauge whether the choice of Silver or Emerald would be Low, Medium, or High!
GOOD LUCK!
As always, commented suggestions are also welcome and can end up becoming a new choice/outcome if good enough!
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Flurry goes prompt critical
Let’s call Flurry Heart up to the front of the class!
FYI Readers have asked for the effect of the choice to be displayed at the end of the chapter to avoid spoiling! Look for the impact there!
Shining swallowed nervously, then pointed with his hoof toward the back of the class… right into the center of the pink-tinged black-hole-like vortex… right at Flurry Heart.
“Flurry - would you like to come up to the front of the class please?”
A chair squeaked loudly - its feet dragging against the crystal floor as Flurry Heart pushed herself backward.
Shining watched as the filly slowly walked forward, bringing her field along with her. As she passed the filly who had slammed her head against her desk earlier, she paused and reached out a hoof.
As soon as Flurry touched the small of the unicorn-teen’s hunched-over back, her muffled moans became a whining scream.
“Hnnnnmgggggh!”
Sparks flew from the teen’s horn, silvery showers of magical energy spurting in little gushes that sparked and fizzled as they twinkled down to the floor. At the same time, Shining could hear a sloshing spatter - liquid spilling over the edge of the filly’s seat.
Flurry Heart’s wings extended even further - reaching nearly full extension - and the field of pink grew dangerously deep. All around the young alicorn teen, her classmates began to writhe and groan in discomfort. Feather - the vocal colt from earlier - had a hoof under his desk, pumping furiously… there was no doubt as to what he was doing.
And other students were getting swept away too - many fillies either had their hooves jammed between their thighs or had their horns casting not-so-surreptitious telekinesis spells. Little grunts, moans, and squeaks punctuated the sounds of teenage flesh being played with.
As Flurry passed Silver Gust, the pegasus fell out of her chair, sticking her plot right up into the air and flagging her tail up. “Oh Gods… I-...I’m…” She squeaked and put her head down.
Shining could see the clear spatter of teen-filly nectar as it shot from the winking pegasus. One of the unicorn colts stood up from his seat, dipping his nose to the puddle of potent pussy-juice… even lapping some of it up.
He let out a nicker, stomping the ground and walking forward - his teenage erection bobbing underneath his chest. He mounted Silver without a word, humping wildly, the head of his cock bouncing against the groaning pega-filly’s belly.
“Hnnggg… y-yes!”
The pink field slammed against the walls of the classroom, knocking books and papers off the walls. ‘This is getting out of control! ’
Shining lit up his horn, quickly separating the two nearly-rutting teens and returning them to their seats. “Settle down class! Hooves on desktops! Magic off!”
The drill sergeant bark was only partially successful. Near the edges of the lust-field, some students slowed their clopping, writhing masturbatory acts… but nopony put their hooves back in plain sight - their urges… their pleasures… were all far too strong.
Shining didn’t have time to repeat himself though: the pink field was upon him.
The edges of the field passed over him like a warm wave. At first, it was just a pleasant sensation - like a sensual back massage. Then it was a smell… a musk .
A rich aroma - as if his favorite meal was being prepared by a chef… except it wasn’t the smell of savory food: it was pure, dripping, sticky sex .
Flurry continued to approach him, passing the last of her classmates now.
The sensual back massage became something much more erotic - pleasurable touches and sensations sprouting all over his body - nerves were firing like he’d just been kissed, or like he’d just gotten a deft rub in a sensitive area, or like something had licked him…
The scent roiled over him and through him. Where it had been a musk before… now it was a stench . His every pore and strand of fur was saturated with the smell of ripe, fertile fillyhood . The sensation dripped from the roof of his mouth onto his tongue. He could taste dripping fillyhood in his mouth...
The fillyhood of the alicorn in front of him…
Gods she looked sexy. How had he never seen it before!? The way her sweaty mane tumbled over her face - those big innocent blue eyes, her cute little muzzle… those plump sexy lips!
And her tight little ass!
Shining felt his stallionhood spill from his sheath as he ogled his daughter. That white rump, so small… so athletic… her flagging tail… the way she stared up at him… he wanted nothing more than to turn her around... press her up against the teacher’s desk… mount her… press her cute little head into the table-top… and…
‘N-no! ’ Shining shook his head, trying to banish the thought of taking his beloved little girl from behind. What the hell was wrong with him!? This was Flurry ! His Flurry! Not some… incredibly sexy… fertile… moaning… dripping…
Shining swallowed as he watched Flurry cross the last few steps toward him. She definitely was dripping. The small puddles she’d left behind her were proof of that. Her half-lidded eyes batted at him sensually, a moan was cut-off by the filly’s chewing of her lip… causing a trickle of drool to slip from the corner of Flurry’s mouth. Shining’s thoughts instantly imagined those little lips wrapped around his stallionhood - flaring and gushing spurt after spurt into her thr-
‘NO! RESIST! THIS IS FLURRY! YOU CHANGED HER DIAPERS! YOU BOUNCED HER ON YOUR KNEE! ’
‘I wouldn’t mind bouncing her on something else right now! ’
“I-I… t-told y-you…” Flurry pouted, staring right up at Shining Armor. The filly leaned in, nuzzling Shining’s neck playfully as she craned up to put her mouth near his left ear. “Mmnng… n-now… I’ve got it… sooo bad… ”
Shining swallowed, trying to stand stock still. The only things moving were his pounding, racing heart - and his fat stallionhood spilling all the way down to the floor as it engorged with blood.
“And… I w-was saving myself for somepony special t-too…” Flurry whined, licking the lobe of Shining’s ear. “N-now… you’re going to have to… take…” She turned around bending forward and sticking her plot up in the air.
“Responsibility. ”
Shining’s cock sprang up to his belly - immediately fully erect - all nineteen inches so filled with blood it felt like he would burst . A fat glob of pre-ejaculate shot from his tip: so much that he almost thought he’d popped prematurely….
Right in front of him was Flurry’s tight, teenage, plot .
Her well-toned athletic legs flowed up to her gorgeous, athletic rear. She definitely took after her mother - her butt looked like you could bounce a bit off of it, it was so tight. And nestled between those heavenly white buns was her dripping, winking, filly-cunt .
Two plump, juvenile lips framed the hint of her pink inner-lips, only interrupted by the fat bulb of her teen-lovebud. Steaming sticky strands of nectar dripped from the twitching clit, trailing gossamer threads to the floor below.
Sitting just above Flurry’s teen snatch was her tight little asshole: a puffy ponut pucker of delectable, quivering flesh - perched just beneath her upright dock, which wiggled left and right invitingly.
“Mmmnf!”
As he watched, Flurry gave out a little mewl, a shiver running through her body. She flexed her back, straining - then her pussy flexed - peeking open. All fifteen years of tender teenage flesh squeezed and flowered, displaying the hot, twisting filly flesh within - shooting her clit out in a small spasm… and sending a splash of her nectar flying backwards.
She winked at him.
The splash hit Shining right in his chin - flooding his nose with that rich vanilla-spice scent. His stallionhood bucked and jumped again, flexing involuntarily at the instinctive desire to RUT this hot little filly in front of him… to pump her full of his batter.
‘Flurry’s… cum is all over… my face… this is so… wrong… r-right? ; Shining struggled with the thought - his mind was should a muddle: so fuzzy, everything seemed all mixed together. Those feelings of love that he held so deeply for his little girl, mixing with this overpowering… desire … he didn’t even know that this was in him! Looking at his special little girl's ass up in the air - his thoughts filled with nothing but fucking the horseapples out of her… until she cried out his name!
‘NO! ’
Flurry backed toward him, her ass still stuck up in the air, her sweaty tail hairs up in his face. He could feel his heart pounding in his ears, could feel his cock bouncing against his belly - could feel the heat coming off his little-filly’s cunt. It would be so easy to simply step over her now, to mount her… to take her… how could he stop himself?
“What’s this?” Flurry picked up the condom wrapper off the floor. She brought the little piece of foil to her mouth, biting the edge and peeling open the package, exposing the disc of silicone. “Ribbed for her pleasure?” She giggled, turning to the thrumming shield outline of Shining Armor’s cock, still hovering in mid-air.
“I guess I should do the demo… hmm, Mr. Shield?” Flurry grinned, still looking at Shining through half-lidded eyes. “Wouldn’t want the class to be left… unsatisfied ?”
Shining couldn’t give two bucks about the rest of the class. He was only dimly aware of the sounds of wet slaps and splats coming from the background - but it was all outside of his focus - lost in the deepening haze of pink… as he continued to feed Flurry with lust energy.
The filly ignited her horn, sending a magical field stroking up and down the semi-transparent penis. Shining swallowed, imagining the field around his actual cock. He flexed the organ in question. Suddenly, Flurry squeezed her magical field incredibly tight, easily ripping through the forcefield spell… dissipating it and making the whole conjuration vanish into thin air.
“Ooops.” Flurry giggled naughtily, still wagging her ass in the air playfully. “I’ll have to be more delicate … if only there were something else I could practice on…” She stood up and turned around to face Shining.
A part of Shining was relieved that his daughter’s irresistible plot was out of his face. A part was sad to see it go. But another part quickly overrode any thoughts, as it was gripped by a tender, filly hoof.
“Ah! I found a replacement, Mr. Shield…”
‘FluRRy’s hOoF is oN mY DicK! ’ The impossible thought raced through his mind.
His little girl’s hoof, the same one that had gripped his after she’d been handed to him by the midwife. The same one that had gripped his neck when he’d given her piggyback rides, had clenched his back when he wrapped her up in bearhugs… was now wrapped around the fat shaft of his jet-black cock .
“Mmm… it’s so much hotter than I thought it would be.” She smiled into his face sultrily. “But I guess we should put this thing on, hmm?” She held the condom up in front of Shining’s awestruck face.
“So quiet now, aren’t you, Mr. Shield?” Flurry giggled, squeezing the end of Shining’s dick playfully. She brought her hoof forward, dragging her frog over the drippingly-slick glans of his massive cockhead. “Hmm… I think this size won’t fit you, Mr. Shield. I think you’re as big as my… as the stallion I was waiting for…” She licked her lips, parting her mouth and leaning closer.
‘Oh bUck, wE’re goNNa kIsS! ’ Shining’s mind was a complete mess. A well-timed squeeze from his daughter’s playfully squeezing hoof made him moan - parting his lips and providing the teen with a perfect target…
But she giggled and turned away, teasing him. “Well… I should watch what I’m doing to make sure I put this little thing on right, shouldn’t I?” Flurry giggled, ducking under his chest.
Shining lost sight of his daughter as she stepped to one side and ducked under his chest - getting what must have been a close-up view of his giant, nineteen-inch, fat, throbbing, meaty, stallioncock glory. His lust-disturbed mind wondered whether his little filly would be proud of her daddy’s size - what she would think when she saw hi-
“DAD!?”
***1200 KM SOUTH - JUST OUTSIDE PONYVILLE*** ***NORAM HQ (North Equestria Anti-Magic HQ)***
A tired staff sergeant of the Royal Guard sat at her monitoring station. Her hooves kicked up on the desk. She wasn’t sure how she’d ended up here. A dead-end job in what had once been a promising career in the armed services, staring at a giant computerized map of Equestria… which would never change.
There was only ever a skeleton staff at the facility, and everypony knew that it was a one-way ticket to obscurity. Watching paint dry was more exciting - sometimes the paint would drip, or dry in a spotty way.
Her particular hobby was to see how many digits of pi she could memorize. Over the years she’d gotten up to three hundred. Might as well try to get that three hundred and one.
Three point one f-
*WAAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAA*
A klaxon, which had never gone off, blared to life, shaking the dust from the ceiling.
“Sergeant!? Report!” The colonel, who had been napping in the back, shouted tugging his hat onto his head.
“ M-megaspell charge detected, sir!” Her hooves flew over the keys, bringing up the point in question on the map of Equestria. “Center of charge is in the Crystal Empire!”
“What!? Where’s the casting energy coming from? Stalliongrad? North Ponea? Tartarus?” The colonel jumped, as all of his phones began ringing and blaring.
“N-negative sir!! Looks like the cast is coming… from the same location as the spell destination! Center of the Crystal Empire!!!”
“A suicide attack!?” The colonel threw his hat down. “It must be the Saddle Arabians! What’s the yield?”
“Looks like a few kilothaums - a city-killer!”
The colonel’s face scrunched in confusion. “That’s… that’s impossible! That much casting power from one caster… it could only be someone of… the Princesses! Quick! Where are the Princesses located!?”
The sergeant slammed a few more keys, quickly showing the bright dots of the princesses’ thaumic signatures, two halfway between Canterlot and the Crystal Empire, one halfway between Ponyville and the empire… and two right in the middle of the alert signature… all of them racing toward the single dot.
“I-it’s a Princess, sir!” The sergeant turned and faced the colonel. “She’s… going critical!”
The colonel swallowed hard, watching the dots converge. “Let’s just pray they get there in time.”
“Oh… Dad …” Flurry’s voice groaned. Her face nuzzled against his cock.
Shining’s eyes shut, and he grit his teeth. His daughter was snuggling with his cock - and she knew it was his cock! This fact seemed very important to him - he could feel the lust and love absolutely coursing through the contact of the delicate, short-hairs of his daughter’s muzzle. He barely noticed the blown-out classroom windows… the lightning-like static electricity discharging through the completely pink energized air… the cracking floor-tiles and hovering objects all around them.
Flurry stopped her nuzzle, stepping back up to his chest - still keeping her hoof on his cock as she stared dreamily into his eyes. “I-is th-this a dream? Daddy… I’ve w-wanted this…. so bad …”
Flurry leaned in toward him, her eyes shut mouth opening, tongue parting to make way for a deep Prench-kiss her hoof pumping her daddy’s cock.
Shining could sense everything was wrong… that they were all in great danger… that he had to...screw it… why shouldn’t he just enjoy this… enjoy… rutting his daughter… fucking her… he’d never realized just how sexy the little filly truly was.
He leaned forward. Oblivion awaiting him… and a good portion of the Crystal Empire’s capital city.
Does Shining Armor manage to avoid catastrophe (50% chance of failure)? Shining Rolls… CRITICAL SUCCESS!
Shining’s mouth slipped over Flurry’s horn. Instantly all of the pink energy and swirling lust all around them dissipated.
All the books, paper, floor-tiles and other debris hanging in the air fell, clattering to the ground.
...
The students in the class, more than half of them involved in desperate group sex - with all three colts hilted deeply in one of their classmates… everypony’s uniforms torn and covered in splotchy stains… all paused and came to their senses. Awkward apologies and embarrassing, sticky withdrawals quickly following afterward.
Flurry blinked, staring up through her mane her father’s dopey, grinning face, currently latched around her horn.
“D-d… dad?” She blinked. “Wh-what? What’s in my h-hoof?”
Shining’s eyes rolled back as he groaned, releasing all of the built-up energy he’d just absorbed into his body. He felt his penis throb, flaring wide and releasing the mother of all orgasms.
Heavy splotches of ejaculate splattered out from him, coating Flurry’s hoof with thick rope after rope, some going so far as to land on her arm and chest. Great, steaming gouts of cum splattering against the crystal floor as he unloaded what felt like an ocean of his virile stallion batter, pooling around his front hooves.
“Flurry! Honey! Are you OK?” Shining could swear he heard Cadence’s voice from just outside the classroom. But the sound quickly faded as dark tunnels surrounded him, his vision fading out as the last of his orgasm emptied him, his rigid stallionhood still bucking and firing blanks as his muscles gave out.
The last thing he saw was Flurry staring at her cum-covered hoof with a look of confusion before he passed out in a puddle of his own juices on the classroom floor.
Shining’s eyes gently blinked open. He looked up at the ceiling - his ceiling… in his own bedroom.
‘Oh thank Celestia, it was just a crazy dream !’ Shining sighed, slowly trying to get up.
“Oh! Shhh shhh shh Shiney - don’t move too fast… you lost a lot of fluids.” Cadence’s voice from beside him soothed him, as she pressed him back softly, keeping him in bed.
Shining groaned, looking over to his left. His wife was sitting next to the bedside, carefully checking an IV drip, her horn humming with healing energy.
“C-cadie…” Shining croaked, letting out a little chuckle. “I… h-had the strangest dream…”
Cadence looked at him with a cocked eyebrow. “Uh-huh?”
“I went to Flurry’s school as a substitute teacher and tried to teach se-”
“Shiney, that wasn’t a dream. That was yesterday morning.” Cadence blinked.
Shining blinked back. “What?”
“Yes. Your crazy antics nearly resulted in half of the Empire being engulfed in a lust spell that probably would have overflowed all the maternity wards in Equestria.” Cadence chuckled, patting Shining’s hoof.
“What!?”
“Flurry got into a feedback-loop… quite a dangerous thing. She’s been struggling to control her newfound Princess Power and the class quickly proved to be too much for her abilities.” Cadence sighed, then adjusted the drip rate of the IV stand. “You’re fine, by the way… this is just for dehydration - when you clamped your big dumb mouth around her horn, it cut off the feedback loop… but you caught a good amount of the energy flying through that loop… and then uh… expelled it.” She giggled, covering her mouth.
“Huh?”
“Let’s just say it took about three mops to clean up the classroom floor.” Cadence giggled. “Though that was partially due to the other students’... reactions as well. The doctors said you lost almost a third of your body weight though… I’ve been refilling you bit by bit for almost a day now… how do you feel?”
“N-never mind me! How’s Flurry?” Shining groaned, trying to get up again - only for Cadence to pin him down. “Why didn’t you tell me that she was going through this with her princess abilities?”
“Because she asked me not to tell you.” Cadence sighed. “She didn’t want you to know she had… pure, unbridled lust magic flowing through her twenty-four seven.” Cadence grinned slightly. “It’s not exactly something a filly likes to admit.”
“B-but… she was in danger ! This whole time!” Shining frowned at his wife. “She could have been hurt!”
“She was doing fine until you meddled, Shining.” Cadence frowned at her husband, scolding him. “Princesses learn how to deal with their abilities in different ways - you can go through a big catastrophic one-time event... like your sister did during the Tirek fiasco… or you can slowly learn to control your power safely… like I did through my high-school years.”
“But…”
“But…” Cadence interrupted, continuing. “That safe-choice was taken away from Flurry by a certain somepony … when he created a crisis situation for her… nearly blowing up half the Empire.”
“Is… is she OK?” Shining asked softly.
“She’s fine Shining.” Cadence smiled. “In a way, it’s probably better that she went through it like this… like peeling off a band-aid… according to Celestia, Luna, and Twilight, she’s got 100% control of her ability now - no more feedback loops.”
“That’s good… I’m glad she’s alright, at least.”
“Well…” Cadence sighed. “She’s still a bit… embarrassed .”
“Are the kids in her class teasing her!?” Shining pushed himself up, once again he was easily shoved back down by Cadence.
“Easy there, hero.” Cadence chuckled. “No . The kids in her class pretty enthusiastically proclaimed the event as the ‘best sex-ed class ever ’... it was a minor miracle that none of the fillies got pregnant.”
“Then… why is she embarrassed?”
“Shining, honey… I love you…” Cadence shook her head. “But sometimes you can be a bit… of a moron, you know that?”
Shining shot his wife a look.
“She had your cock in her hooves. If any filly suddenly realized that she had her crush-... I mean her dad’s stallionhood in their hooves I think they might be a bit mortified…”
“B-but… It was all… the spell’s fault… there’s… nothing to be embarrassed about!” Shining protested.
“Just the spell’s fault? Well… I don’t know about that… but I agree… there’s nothing to be embarrassed about.” Cadence giggled. “Love is love!”
Shining paused. He looked at his wife. “...Cadence… I… I was going to… the thoughts in my head… I wanted to…” Shining sagged his head down, chin resting ashamedly against his chest. “I’m a horrible father…”
Cadence gripped her husband’s chin and lifted his head back up. “As I said, Shining. There is nothing to be embarrassed about. I know how much you love Flurry. Completely love her.” The alicorn princess’s eyes bore directly into his. “And I know what an amazing dad you can be… that you are… if you don’t let silly… things get in the way. Understand?”
Shining nodded. “I have to make things right with Flurry.”
“Shining you… goshdarn moron…” Cadence groaned. “You don’t understand.”
“I’ll go see her right now!” Shining started to get up, pulling the IV lines out of his arm, “I don’t want her feeling bad about this for a millisecond longer than she has to… I should be the one apologizing.”
This time, Cadence didn’t stop him. “Shining, my love. I won’t stop you… but I wish you would listen to my advice - just wait! Flurry’s birthday is only a couple of weeks away now! She’s a mature filly! Let her come to you! ”
Shining grunted. “Cadie… you know… you know I can’t just sit back on these things! It’s just… not in my personality!”
Cadence sighed. “I know. How about… instead… how about this: wait until tomorrow… take her out on a nice walk - grab some lunch, see a show… try to bond naturally with her.” Cadence suggested, putting a hoof on her husband’s leg. “You can’t solve every problem right away !”
Shining shook his head, kicking his legs over the side of the bed with a snort. “But she’s feeling bad right now Cadie! I could just walk over there and at least try !”
The FLURRY HEART METER goes UP by 4!
Currently the meter is at 8 / 10 !
1) Low Risk / Low Reward: Sit back and recover. Let Flurry come to us! She’s just had pretty much the most mortifyingly embarrassing experience that it is possible for a teen to experience through the entirety of all universes and space-times ever… maybe it’s not too much to ask to let the filly have some space and clear her head? (10% chance of failure - low reward)[/color}
2) Medium Risk / Medium Reward: Let’s take Flurry out on a nice, relaxing, daddy-date tomorrow. Sure she’ll probably find it really annoying to spend a day with her dad… but maybe Cadence is right: this could be a good casual way to reconnect with the filly - talk to her and show her a good time… show her that we can be friends as well as family! (25% chance of something going wrong - medium reward)
3) High Risk / High Reward: We shouldn’t wait a single second longer than necessary. She’s miserable right now, moping in her room about something that was totally not her fault! And we have the ability to make her feel better about it… maybe. We have to at least try, right? What could go wrong!? (33% chance of something going wrong - medium reward)
Author's Note
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Vote for your choice! Once we hit 200 votes I'll write the next chapter!
Holy crap.
I was fully ready to turn the Crystal Empire into a giant lake of lust-spell energy, with some kind of abomination of estrus gang-sex mega-orgy that would have been a complete game over (maybe).
I couldn't believe you guys were going to mess with that lust field! Admittedly, you didn't know just how powerful alicorn Flurry is... though the show does make note of how much power she has, even as an infant!
BUT
Shining rolled a CRITICAL high number! When I saw that, I knew that it had to be a sign - he had to take this right to the brink, then rescue Flurry (albeit by accident)!
Even better, the even ended up teaching her how to control that power! A full win!
A major hurdle is now out of the way... but another one has cropped up! We still need to reach Flurry Heart before the end of the month!
Now, somepony was being very naughty and likely using a bot or something else to spam up the poll. The vote jumped from about 180 to 400 over the course of only a few hours...
To avoid this I'm turning on the CAPTCHA function - apologies for the additional annoyance. Hopefully, it doesn't impact the numbers too much... I promise if we don't hit the vote count within a few days I'll either lower it or just write the next chapter.
As always, commented suggestions are also welcome and can end up becoming a new choice/outcome if good enough!
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
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(146 votes - 67%) Let’s take Flurry on a daddy-date!
Shining nervously waited at the base of the Crystal Palace.
He wasn’t used to feeling this anxious over something as trivial as a date - he hadn’t had to go on a date for decades . He checked his mane in the reflection of the nearby reflective surfaces - one thing nopony ever needed in the crystal empire was a mirror - practically everything, even the ground, acted like giant reflective surfaces in the Empire. It was something ponies had to be careful about during bright summer days - it would be easy to get too much sun exposure under the bouncing rays of the sun.
Luckily it was only mid-morning, so he wouldn’t have to worry about needing any sunscreen.
“Hi Shiny!”
Shining Armor whirled around, seeing his wife smiling and waving at him. Beside her was Flurry Heart, who reluctantly trotted behind her mother, a blush on her face and a look of clear annoyance.
Shining Armor smiled at Cadence, embracing her with a warm hug as she approached. He turned to do the same with Flurry - but she stuck out her hoof for a hoof-shake instead. Awkwardly, Shining accepted the proferred hoof, chuckling nervously.
“OK then, I’ll leave you two to go have fun.” She prodded Flurry, pushing her forward so that she’d be nearer to Shining. “Promise me you’ll take it easy, Shiny… no ridiculous plans or schemes, OK?”
Shining chuckled with embarrassment but nodded solemnly.
“Alright then! Have fun with your dad, Flurry… but not too much fun!”
“Mom!” Flurry gaped with mortified embarrassment.
“Don’t worry about her, Flurry,” Shining laughed, misunderstanding the context, as usual, “we’ll have so much fun that you’ll pop with excitement!”
“Gah. Just… this is your fault.” Flurry pointed at a giggling Cadence with fury, before trotting away.
“Was it something I said?” Shining asked, perplexed as to why Flurry would already be annoyed with him.
“Don’t worry about it Shiny.” Cadence sighed, “Just be gentle with her, OK?”
Shining nodded, then ran after his little girl. Catching up to her quickly, he trotted alongside the smaller alicorn.
“I’m not happy about this, dad.” Flurry growled, gritting her teeth and looking off to the side with quiet anger. “I can’t believe you thought that this would be a good idea… although I guess I am talking to the same pony who thought it would be a good idea to disguise himself as my substitute teacher and teach my class about sex-ed!” The alicorn’s wings shot out in anger. “The last thing I wanted to do was spend time with you, dad… I’m doing everything I can to forget you even exist ! I can’t get the feel of your… your…” Flurry dipped her head down with embarrassment.
“S-sorry,” Shining mumbled.
“I had your dick in my hooves!” Flurry squeaked with embarrassment. Her wings quivering. “And then you… you…”
“Sorry.” He cringed, there was really nothing else he could say.
“All over me! Everywhere! There was so bucking much!” Flurry stuck her tongue out. “I could bucking taste it in the air ! A daughter shouldn’t know what her father… tastes like!? It’s just wrong… right?” She looked over at Shining.
It seemed to Shining that she was asking as much as she was telling. He thought for a moment and shrugged. “It- it was a crazy time, Flurry… it wasn’t your fault - just your power overloading and having crazy effects. You shouldn’t feel embarrassed about it - it’s not like you or I wanted that to happen.”
Flurry groaned, hanging her head. Shining had a weird feeling that she was disappointed in his answer. “I… I know it wasn’t anypony’s fault dad. It’s just… it’s all so weird .”
“Yeah.”
“And I was hoping to just let some time pass until it wouldn’t be so weird. Like maybe a thousand years. Not go on a date!” She grunted and shuffled her wings against her back.
Well this certainly wasn’t going very well. But he couldn’t go back now . He had to give this his best shot!
“S-so, I got you something, Flurry.” Shining mumbled - completely unsure of himself. He felt like he was a fresh-faced private addressing his senior officer after failing to make muster for morning roll call.
“Seriously?” Flurry groaned, rolling her eyes, “Dad, if you got me flowers or chocolates or something… sorry but I’m not gonna accept it.”
Does Shining screw up the beginning of the daddy-date (25% chance of failure)? Shining rolls… SUCCESS! Shining doesn’t screw up!
Shining let out a little sigh of relief. He’d actually gotten her chocolates and flowers, but Cadence had quickly confiscated them from him that morning. His clever wife had provided him with a different strategy to get the date off on the right hoof.
“Actually… I got you this.” Shining passed over his gift.
“A… hat?” Flurry inspected the small piece of fabric, a light blue beret.
“Yeah. I know how much you hate drawing attention.” Shining rubbed the back of his mane. “I figured that it would be better if today we were just a pair of regular old crystal ponies… not royalty.”
Flurry blushed ever so slightly, inspecting the beret suspiciously, then eyeing her father with skepticism. “You can’t seriously believe that ponies will not notice me simply because I’m wearing a hat .”
Shining laughed. “Actually, you’d be surprised! I’ve always found that ponies can be tricked by the smallest of changes. It’s why changeling infiltrators can be so effective, even without getting the details perfect .” Shining gestured with a hoof at Flurry’s horn, “Throw a hat on and you’re no longer the alicorn Princess Flurry Heart… you’re simply the visiting pegasus tourist from Canterlot, Skyla!”
Flurry chuckled slightly, still looking at her father with an arched eyebrow… but her features had softened slightly. “That’s actually pretty clever, Dad.” She relaxed slightly, her wings shuffling on her back. “It would be nice to relax like a normal pony for a day… thanks.”
Shining reached into his saddlebag and pulled out a pair of aviator’s sunglasses, donning them quickly with a smile. “...and I’m her tourist father, Stormageddon!”
“What.”
“Yeah! I’ve got a whole backstory for Stormageddon too - I’m a changeling super-spy, deep undercover on a mission to save all of Equestria from… uh…” Shining paused from his excited commentary-track like recitation, as he realized that his daughter was staring at him.
“That is the dumbest name I’ve ever heard, dad.” Flurry deadpanned.
“What! No!” Shining stomped his hoof. “Cadence said the same thing!”
Flurry chuckled, then slipped the beret on. “Well, I’ll cut you some slack - at least you did get the hat in my favorite color… so many ponies think I love everything in that puke-pink. Bleh.” Flurry checked her reflection in the crystal roadway, making sure the beret covered her horn just right.
“That looks cute on you, Skyla .” Shining winked.
Flurry blinked, her blush growing deeper. She looked off to one side with embarrassment, a spot on the ground suddenly seeming extremely important - anything not to look at her father’s eyes. “Th-thanks…” Flurry suddenly looked up with a start, her eyes lit up like she’d just gotten a great idea. “Although, if I’m going to be Skyla… why do I need to be your daughter,Stormageddon… ugh… Stormy?”
Shining chuckled and pumped his hoof, prancing in front of his little girl with delight. Shaking his tail with happiness that Flurry had accepted his Stormageddon backstory. “Sure! You could be my niece, or my sister, or even my-”
“Marefriend?” The whispered word came out of Flurry mouth as she watched him.
Shining turned to look at his little girl, who was blushing beet red now. “I m-mean… sure. It’s just a cover story if somepony asks - though I doubt anypony would believe a guy like me could land a filly like you.” Shining joked playfully - he couldn’t help but notice that Flurry seemed distracted… focused way more on his rear end then the words coming out of his mouth.
“Ahem?”
“H-huh? Oh!” Flurry’s eyes darted back to her father’s face and a frown re-appeared quickly - once again she was too embarrassed to look him in his eyes.
“On second thought, maybe we should stick to the father-daughter cover story. Also…” Flurry’s horn glowed from underneath her beret. She took hold of her father’s tail-bun, quickly undoing the clip that kept the hairs up in their neat little ball, revealing his junk to anypony walking behind him… like Flurry. “...tail buns are out now, Dad.”
“What? Already? It was just like, a few days ago that you told me-”
“Fashion is fickle!” Flurry exclaimed. Huffing and stomping her hoof. “So, what did you wanna do today, anyway?”
The FLURRY HEART METER is UNCHANGED!
Currently the meter is at 8 / 10 !
1) Low Risk / Low Reward: Go for a walk in the Crystal highlands. You’ll be far away from other ponies, so you won’t end up needing to use your awesome cover stories as much. This will let you have a real heart to heart with Flurry - you’ll be able to discuss all the things that she went through a couple of days ago, all the things that she’s been experiencing… maybe even tell her about how sorry you are for all the time you’ve spent away from her. (10% chance of failure - low reward)
2) Medium Risk / Medium Reward: Take Flurry to Crystal Central Park. You’ll be able to chat a bit on the way there about the things that have happened over the past few days, but it won’t take you long to get there. There’s supposed to be a big beach volleyball competition at the park today - all those young athletic mares bouncing and sweating in the sun? Should be a ton of fun, and you can use your cover stories to hang out as the father-daughter undercover duo of Skyla and Stormageddon! Plus you might be able to have Flurry use her abilities to scope out which spectators are getting a little too excited… show her that her power can be fun!(35% chance of something going wrong - medium reward)
3) High Risk / High Reward: Let’s go to Chez Amour, the famously romantic Prench restaurant. We’ll have to insist on using the cover story where Skyla is Stormageddon’s marefriend to get in, but the food is supposed to be positively orgasmic! We won’t get to talk much about the past few days, but I’m sure that she will love the atmosphere - it could be fun to see other lovey-dovey couples and show Flurry how she can enjoy her power! (60% chance of something going wrong - high reward)
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(133 votes - 53%) Let’s take Flurry to Central Park to watch the volleyball tournament!
“I was thinking that we could go to the park. It’s such a lovely day out, and it would be so nice to get away from the boiling sun… it really seems like it bounces off of everything .”
“Seriously… you and mom must spend, like, millions of bits on skin cancer treatment for the Empire.”
Shining chuckled. “Actually, it’s not so bad, Crystal ponies actually seem to let most of the radiation pass through them… and we’re pretty insistent on tourists making sure they were plenty of protection.”
“Wearing protection is important.” Flurry agreed, before smacking a hoof against her face. “Bleh, there’s just no way for me to avoid remembering what happened, is there?”
“I still don’t know what the big deal is, Flurry.” Shining sighed. It certainly was strange, but it wasn’t anypony’s fault. “If anything, we should be able to laugh it off.”
“Dad… I... “ Flurry groaned, hanging her head as they trotted along toward the park. “I was basically asking you to… mount me. I can’t just laugh that off.”
“Let’s make a deal then - if you can’t laugh it off, let’s pull it off.”
“What!?” Flurry’s head snapped to him, a blush forming on her face.
“Pull it off like a band-aid.”
“Oh thank Celestia.” Flurry let out a breath she’d been holding.
“ It’s always way worse to anticipate these sorts of things.” Shining smiled. “It’s way better to just get it over with.”
Flurry sighed, shuffling her wings with a groan. “Do we have to?”
“Yep, So tell me the most embarrassing thing that’s bothering you right now… then I’ll tell you the most embarrassing thing bothering me. Deal?”
Flurry stiffened again. Shining could see her big blue eyes racing back and forth in thought. “...h-how about the most embarrassing thing from that whole sex-ed class debacle? I don’t know if I can share the most most embarrassing thing bugging me.”
“OK, sure.” Shining shrugged.
Flurry sighed again. “Actually… that isn’t much better either.”
“C’mon, just spill. You’ll feel better after you do.” Shining prodded, cloyingly.
“Fine!” Flurry grunted, then turned her head away from Shining and mumbled something under her breath.
“What did you say, Flurry? It won’t work if I can’t understand you.” Shining craned in closer, directing one of his ears at his daughter.
“I said : it’s really embarrassing that I thought my dad… you… had a really… big…” Flurry stared at the ground again and mumbled the last word.
“Huh?”
“I thought you had a hot stallionhood, OK!?” Flurry covered her boiling face with a wing. “Celestia please strike me dead with a lightning bolt. I can’t believe I just said that. I can’t believe I think my dad’s dick is attractive.” She threw up a hoof in frustration. “I shouldn’t even know what my dad’s dick looks like!”
“Actually, about that…” Shining cocked his head, as he remembered some of the events of the incident a few days ago. “It actually did seem kind of like you recognized me when you saw my… uh… junk.”
Flurry’s hackles raised slightly and she straightened her back, stiffening with anxiety. “O-oh?”
“Am I just crazy or did you somehow recognize my… uh… me ?”
“There’s actually a perfectly reasonable explanation.” Flurry seemed to be sweating nervously. “S-see, remember when you gave mom that clone-a-willy kit a few Heathswarmings ago?”
“Yeah. Hey, how did you know about that?” Shining asked.
“Well… mom told me about it after she caught me borrowing … uh… it … from her tiara drawer.” Flurry blushed and shook her head, as though trying to clear it from her head. “So it kind of… popped out, when I saw it.”
“Ah…” Shining grunted. The cogs in his head were turning slowly. “But why did you need to borrow tha -”
“SO!” Flurry coughed, cutting him off. “I told you about my most embarrassing moment. Now you’ve gotta tell me yours.”
Shining put a hoof up to his chin and thought for a long minute. “I think I farted when I passed that poindexter at the start of the lecture… and I’m pretty sure she noticed.”
“DAD!” Flurry stomped a hoof, nearly making her trip and fall head over hooves. “First off, gross. Second: that was the most embarrassing thing from the whole afternoon?”
“I guess… yeah...”
“Dad! I… squirted on your face.” Flurry held out a feather for each event, as she listed off one by one the things that had occurred. “You came all over your daughter… your daughter actually grabbed you…” Flurry looked more stunned then upset. “Dad… I winked at you - and not with an eye.”
Shining shrugged with a chuckle. “It’s not anything I hadn’t seen before, Flurry.” He laughed aloud. “I changed your diapers for years you know.”
“This isn’t like that! Not at ALL!” Flurry groaned. “I’m not some cute little baby foal anymore!”
“Don’t worry Flurry, you still have a very nice tush.” Shining grinned.
Flurry was blushing now. “Y-you mean that? Did you think I had a nice... butt?”
Shining paused, thinking back to the vision of Flurry’s tight, teen-filly ass in his face, her plot winking and drooling with juices. He swallowed anxiously. She really had been a hot, fuckable mare… at that moment.
“Hey!” Flurry grunted, poking him. “I told you the truth about your … y’know. You have to tell me the truth too!”
“Y-yes… there was definitely a moment there… where you looked… very sexy.”
“A moment?”
“Well, maybe more than a moment. But yes… if you weren’t my daughter… *ahem* ” Shining cleared his throat with a cough, then looked off to one side. There was just no way he could complete that thought.
Flurry blushed, looking the other direction. “Th-thanks… y-you too… I can… uh… see what mom saw in you.”
Shining laughed. “Y’know that she didn’t see me naked until after we were engaged, right? Believe it or not I actually won her over without the use of my incredible equipment.” Shining joked, sending a wink back at Flurry.
“Pfft, easy there dad. No mare likes a stallion who is always boasting about his junk. Even if it is worth boasting about.” She rolled her eyes.
“Do you know how I met your mother, actually?” Shining asked with a grin.
“Yes.” Flurry groaned. “She’s told me, like, a hundred times about how you came up with a goofy float for the homecoming parade, then you sang her an awful love-song on it with your gang of Ogres and Oubliettes nerd friends in front of the whole school.”
“Hey! She always tells it to make me look like a gigantic dork - I’ll have you know that’s not how it went down!” Shining protested, tapping a hoof against his chest. “I was a pretty cool cat.”
“Uh-huh.” Flurry deadpanned. “So how did it go down then?”
“Well… I… uh…” Shining tried to think up a cool story - preferably one that involved sharks, laser beams, and rockets.
“You… were a gigantic dork…?” Flurry offered, seeing that her father was struggling to come up with an alternate history.
Shining sighed, slumping slightly. “I mean… yeah… I guess .”
Flurry giggled, covering her muzzle. “That’s cool though, dad. I like dorks.”
“Oh hey, here’s the tournament I was hoping we could watch!” Shining pointed over at the sports field area of the park.
They’d made their way through much of the park as they’d chatted, eventually reaching the heart of the gorgeous green gardens. With the amount of foliage and the sprawling, myriad dirt pathways, it was easy to enjoy the beautiful trot without having run into even a single other pony.
The sports-area was different though. A single large pond marked the exact centre of the large park, which would often itself be used for Crystal sporting competitions… like swimming, sailing or rowing races. Today, however, it sat empty… populated only by a few noisy waterfowl. Instead, a large group of ponies had gathered to watch the beach volleyball competition.
The sport had rapidly been gaining in popularity since its breakout in the west coast cities of Las Pegasus and Vanhoofer. The fun of being able to dive into soft sand to prevent a ball from being grounded and the two versus two format made it much easier for amateurs to get into the sport.
It also helped that the professionals tended to be very attractive mares, who wore skimpy bikinis that somehow made them more attractive than if they had been wearing nothing at all.
Some enterprising ponies had managed to import a couple of cartloads of sand to the Empire, enough to set up two courts, and today was an exhibition of some of Equestria’s top talent. On the Eastern court was the Appleloosan Dustdevils (a pair of cute earth-mares who wore cowboy hats in addition to their bikinis) versus the Baltimare Sentinels (twin unicorn sisters who seemed to amply fill their bikinis).
On the Western court was the Las Pegasus Cloud-clobberers… which included the former star Wonderbolt, Cloudkicker. The silvery-haired superstar had retired from the Wonderbolts the previous year and had been doing a whirlwind tour of various sports and races… most of which she was easily dominating in. She had a celebrity status second to none - with most of the tabloids speculating wildly on whether she would settle down in a herd soon… or even snag a superstar stallion husband of her own! She was playing with a lithe, little yellow pegasus, she looked like a rookie compared to the more experienced athlete… but the fire in her eyes showed that she was more than willing to keep up with her partner.
They were playing against two crystal ponies, a filly and colt unicorn, both of whom were clearly outmatched. It quickly became apparent from the spectacle that part of the competition included the opportunity for locals to try their skills against the best in the country… with predictable results. Even worse, these two seemed to be a younger pair - closer in age to Flurry Heart. The pegasi were playing to the crowd, toying with their opponent in a good-natured way and making them dive out into the sand over and over. From the growling between the two after each lost rally, it seemed like they were brother and sister… and neither seemed happy with their sibling’s performance in front of such a big crowd.
Shining turned back from the fields with a dopey grin on his face. But what he saw wiped that smile instantly: Flurry did not look happy.
“This was your idea?” Flurry asked with skepticism. Looking at the raucous crowds, her eyes lingered over the assortment of males, colts and stallions alike, who all seemed very excited every time one of the cute fillies or mares made a stretch or dive that would end with their string-bikinied plots sticking up in the air. “Dad… half of the colts there are sporting half-chubs… er… I mean… are over-excited… do you remember what my power lets me sense?”
Shining chewed his lip and cocked his head. “But… Cadence said that you’d have better control over your power ever since the classroom incident.”
Flurry sighed and pawed the ground. “I mean… yes… I feel better about it since then… but I still feel it… the uh… lust … all around me.”
“So? What’s the big deal then?” Shining shrugged, genuinely curious.
“What’s the big deal!?” Flurry crossed her arms. “It’s… lust ! Like… y’know… lewd stuff, it’s bad!”
Shining clicked his tongue and shushed his daughter. “Hey now… I might be an idiot - but a wise mare once told me that there’s no such thing as bad love. And lust is just passionate love.” Shining looked right into Flurry’s eyes. He didn’t do it often, but he liked to think that he could pull off a sincere stare when he needed to. “Y’know Flurry, the hippogriffs have a bunch of different words for love… and one of them - eros, is the term for sexual love. It’s not bad just because we ponies have gotten a bit stodgy over the last few hundred years.”
Flurry cocked an eyebrow at him. “Wow, so mom has given you that little speech too, huh?
“Like a million times.” Shining rolled his eyes, muttering. “Usually before she tries to convince me to put something in my butt.”
“What?”
“Nothing!” Shining shook his head and snapped his mouth shut, quickly changing the subject. “I was just thinking, about this tournament. One of the things your mom and I used to do when we first started dating was to go around and use her love power to stop ponies from fighting, or to bring two lovers closer together, or to get a shy pony to finally confess his love to his crush.” Shining smiled as he remembered all the good times he’d had with his wife. “I remember her saying that it helped her to see the positive side of her power… how it made her realize how much good she could do.”
Flurry seemed suspicious, doubtful. But she as listening, drawing a circle in the turf with a hoof as she considered. “I… I guess…”
“I thought it might be fun if we tried it out!” Shining laughed. “You never know, we could be helping two passionately in love ponies finally get over their fears - you coming to the volleyball tournament might be the best day of their lives!”
Does Shining’s suggestion of watching volleyball with Flurry go over well (25% chance of failure)? Shining rolls… success! Flurry likes the idea!
Flurry grinned slightly. “I mean… it might be fun to do with you… you said you and mom used to do it together all the time, right?”
Shining nodded happily. “Sure! And the worst thing that could happen is we get to watch some awesome beach volleyball players… I used to be pretty good myself, you know?”
Flurry arched an eyebrow at that. “Oh really? You probably don’t know, but you’re in the presence of Crystal High’s top blocker.”
“Heh, maybe instead of watching we should go line up for a shot against those two pegasi hot-shots?” Shining joked. “Stormageddon and Skyla, the dynamic duo!”
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by half a point!
Currently the meter is at 8.5 / 10!
1) Unknown/Unknown: Let’s go line up for a chance to face off against the pegasi. We can take them! Talk about father-daughter bonding: what could be better than taking home the challenger’s championship cup. (??? chance of failure - ??? reward)
2) Unknown/Unknown: Let’s go watch the two superstars from Las Pegasus! One’s a freaking celebrity! How cool would it be for Flurry to perhaps glean some insight as to who Cloudkicker was really into? Surely that would make her love her newfound abilities! (??? chance of failure - ??? reward)
3) Unknown/Unknown: Let’s go watch the siblings from the Crystal Empire. Sure they’re arguing with one another… but maybe there’s something Flurry could do to help them? Who knows what feelings they might have for each other? (??? chance of failure - ??? reward)
4) Unknown/Unknown: Let’s go watch those two cowgirls from Appaloosa! They say that girls from the south really know how to get worked up, especially once they get a good sweat going! And those hats are pretty darn tootin’ cute!(??? chance of failure - ??? reward)
Unknown/Unknown: What could be sexier than an athletic unicorn-mare who has bountiful, bouncing, big… prospects of winning? How about an identical twin sister!(??? chance of failure - ??? reward)
Author's Note
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So you guys chose the park and the volleyball tournament... not a bad choice at all! But now you gotta choose who you wanna turn that powerful lust power on - or whether you should turn it onto anypony at all!
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(122 votes - 47%) Let’s use Flurry Heart’s power to have some fun with the two Crystal Empire siblings who are playing!
Shining and Flurry heart found their way onto the bleachers near the volleyball field with Fleetfoot and the yellow pegasus. The two were almost clowning around now, using their butts to set up volleys for the other to spike with ferocious intensity… lazily toying with their opponents for the mirth of the crowd, easily outmatching the two amateurs from the Crystal Empire… who seemed none too pleased.
“Dammit, Saffy! I told you to watch out for that serve!” The green-furred unicorn colt snarled backward at his sister after one of Fleetfoot’s serves took a particularly incredible twist, sending the blue unicorn-filly sprawling into the sand.
“I heard you the first time, Topaz.” The filly spat out sand, before dragging herself to all four hooves, “It’s not like we really ever stood a chance against these two, you plot-head! ”
“Still! If we don’t try our hardest we’re going to look like a couple of yokels!” The colt reached a hoof out to the filly on the sand, offering to help her get back up, “C’mon sis, we should be able to score at least one point!”
“Well, maybe we could if you stopped shouting at me and focused on your own play, big bro.” The filly spat with derision into the sand, refusing the hoof and standing up on her own.
Shining watched his little girl, who herself was intently staring at the siblings that were still grousing at each other as they picked themselves up and prepared for the final volleyball rally to begin. Flurry was on the edge of her seat, chewing her bottom lip, clearly focused on the duo way more than the action of the volleyball game.
“Something interesting to you?” Shining whispered in Flurry’s left ear.
“Huh? Oh, uh… well, I mean… sort of…” She seemed a bit startled by her father’s intrusion.
“What is it?” Shining grinned. “You can tell me…”
“Dad! I…” Flurry looked left and right, no ponies were in earshot as long as she kept her voice down. “...I dunno, I don’t like to… share what I can see, it doesn’t fell… right .”
“Hmm…” Shining nodded, crossing his arms, “That’s a very wise position to take - you’re respecting the privacy of other ponies. Your mom definitely does the same thing… but…”
“But…?”
“But, she always made an exception for me. ” Shining chuckled, scratching the back of his head. “C’mon Flurry, half of the point is for you to feel like you can have fun with your power - being able to share what you see with one or two other ponies won’t hurt anyone. Plus…” Shining leaned in with a grin, “I really wanna know, now!”
Flurry frowned. For a moment Shining thought that this wouldn’t work, that he’d gone too far.
Does Flurry successfully play with and enjoy her power (chance of failure - 40%)? Shining Rolls… success!
“Well… OK…” Flurry’s wings shuffled slightly, staying a bit extended as she leaned in against him. “That green colt there is Topaz Torque… and that blue filly is his little sister, Sapphire Sprinkle.” She pointed with a hoof to each pony as she pointed them out. “There’s something that I’m finding pretty interesting about these two…”
“Yeah?” Shining arched an eyebrow conspiratorially.
“Yeah… I mean.. They’re both outwardly barking and angry at one another…”
“Saffy! Get set , already!” Topaz barked at that exact moment, “Dig your hooves in so you can jump either way!”
“Shut your mouth, Topaz! More like tohp-ass !”
Flurry smirked slightly as the siblings proved her point for her. “But actually… deep down inside… those two love each other a lot.”
“Well… sure…” Shining grinned, “They’re brother and sister… of course, they’re gonna love each other.”
“No, it’s not just that, Dad.” Flurry interjected, “The two of them are so angry at each other because they love the other so much! Topaz thinks his little sister is one of the most capable ponies in the Empire - and he wants her to succeed more than anything… and Sapphire loves her older brother so much - she wants his approval more than any other pony on Equus!”
“You can tell all that with your power?” Shining looked at Flurry with wonder. She simply nodded back at him, with a little blush. “Wow - you’re as good as your mom was when she was in University! It took her a long time before she could decipher those odd feelings into actual thoughts and intentions…”
Flurry blushed slightly, embarrassed at her father’s effusive pride. “Well… uh, thanks… there’s…a little more to my power than mom’s too.”
“More?”
“Well…” Flurry swallowed nervously, tapping her two forehooves together. “Um… Topaz has… uh… well… sometimes he - imagines his little sister when he’s… uh… being private .”
“Being private? ” Shining cocked his head. “It’s not unusual for a brother to think about his sister when he’s got some free-time to himse-”
“Hoofing off .” Flurry coughed out. “He’s jerking himself off to thoughts of Sapphire every other night.”
Shining stiffened slightly, a blush of his own forming as he surveyed the two arguing siblings. “Uh… huh… well… y’know Flurry… I hate to admit this but when a colt is about fourteen or fifteen they’re pretty horny - sometimes they can have some pretty crazy fantasies…”
Flurry looked at her father with a wry grin, arching an eyebrow of her own. “Are you telling me that you used to beat off while thinking of Aunty-Twilight when you were a colt?”
“pffffft!” Shining’s ridiculous spit-take was matched only by the ridiculousness of his obvious guilt. Of course there had been those few nights where he’d been desperate for some good clop material, and Twilight had been just so cute at the beach… it hadn’t been his proudest clop, to be sure but… wait… couldn’t Flurry read his emotions!? Oh no…
“N-n-no! Never!” Shining desperately waved his arms in front of him.
“Uh-huh.” Flurry deadpanned, clearly already seeing through her father’s antics. “So you did. Don’t worry, I won’t tell her.”
“S-sorry… colts are… a strange bunch.” Shining hung his head in shame. He hadn’t thought about Twilight like that for… years!
“Well… actually .” Flurry blushed. “I don’t think you should discount just how we fillies can get. I know one particular filly who… uh…” Flurry stammered slightly, her confidence faltering, “Who… clops to the… uh… mental image … of a family member.”
Shining noticed that Flurry seemed to be avoiding his gaze once again, tapping her two front hooves nervously together as she inspected the ground in front of them.
“Who? Sapphire Sprinkle?” Shining asked with a curious look, pointing at the filly as she lunged out in an attempt to return Fleetfoot’s serve, completely failing as she bowled into her brother, causing them both to lose the match as they ended up in a messy pile of tangled limbs, tails, and shouted invectives.
“Who? Oh yeah! Yeah she does… too .”
“Really? That little filly?” Shining asked incredulously. “She looks like she’s barely fourteen!”
“Older than I was…” Flurry muttered.
“Huh?” Shining craned in closer.
“I said: she’s got it worse than her brother…” Flurry blushed and grinned. “That little filly imagines her brother plowing her every night, though she’d never admit it.”
“Huh.” Shining chuckled, looking at the two siblings, who cordially shook the hooves of their competitors and waved to the crowd, before leaving the field with clear displeasure at one another.
“It’s too bad…” Flurry sighed. “With my power, it almost feels like a coiled up rubber band. There’s so much energy there, poised to unwind - like an itch that the universe wants to scratch: those two were meant for each other.”
Shining chewed the inside of his cheek slightly as he considered what he should do next. He knew what Cadence would do in these sorts of situation…
“Well… why don’t you help them to scratch that itch?”
“W-what? D-dad, they’re… brother and sister!” Flurry’s wings had pomf’d out in surprise.
“So what?” Shining considered, doing his best to channel his wife. “You know what your mom always says… love is love. ”
Flurry straightened up slightly, looking directly into her father’s eyes as she did so. “Y-you… really mean that, Dad?”
Shining nodded.
Flurry grinned… and began to charge her horn with pink energy.
“I can’t believe you had four service return errors, Saff! That’s three more than you’ve ever had before! EVER!” Topaz growled, stomping ahead of his little sister as they made their way toward the changing room tent that had been set up for the event.
“Maybe that has something to do with the fact we were playing the top-ranked team on the planet ?” The filly groaned, swishing her green tail with frustration. “I swear… you just… you’re always such a jerk to me, Topaz!”
She followed behind her brother as he entered the small changing tent. Not noticing the pinkish hue that suddenly enveloped the two of them.
Topaz’s tail flicked up with frustration in front of her. “I’m a jerk!?” She barely heard his shout, stunned instead by the pair of bouncing dark green orbs in front of her. She’d seen her brother’s sack a thousand times before as they’d trained and played together - it was the kind of thing that a pair of loose gym shorts did a poor job of concealing. But sometime about them seemed… juicier than normal.
“You’re the one calling me an ass in front of half the city!” Topaz pulled off his sweaty headband, tossing it to the ground. “How do you think that made me feel?”
Sapphire walked past the headband, her brother’s musky colt-scent tickling her nostrils. Why did he always have to be… so stubborn !? She peeled off her tight athletic top and her spandex bottoms - she didn’t have much in the way of teats yet, so the bikinis that many of the older mares wore were entirely unnecessary for her.
As soon as the wet, black fabric was peeled down her blue legs, the tent was filled with her scent. Like a cloudy fog of sticky filly-juice had erupted from her rear. She felt strands of hot sticky slickness that felt suspiciously unlike sweat. Her mind briefly flashed to the thought that she might be going into heat early… and a worry that her brother might smell her.
But those thoughts were quickly swept away.
‘Let him smell me! ’ She sniffed. ‘Maybe then he’ll understand just how badly I want… his… approval.’
“Topaz… I just… I get so… angry when… you…”
“Wh-what’s that smell?” Her brother was sniffing the air, his nostrils flaring wider and wider.
‘Celestia he is so handsome… why doesn’t he understand… just how much I love him?’ Sapphire stumbled forward.
“I-is th-that… you, sis?” Topaz walked forward, grabbing her by the shoulders wıth his big, strong hooves as he looked down at her. “Y-you… smell… amazing….”
“W-why…. Why do you always… yell at me, Topy?” She stared up into her brother’s sparkling blue eyes, his rugged and handsome coltish face… he lips seemed so full… his breath washed over her in waves… she could feel her vision misting up. Something sticky dropped from behind her, slipping out of her fillyhood… but all her attention was now locked on her brother.
“B-because… I love you Saffy… I love you so much…” Her brother embraced her, wrapping his arms tightly around her in a hug. “You are so special… the most special little filly in all of Equestria… and you’re going to do amazing things… I want to help you do those things… not drag you down with a loser like me…” He sniffled, pulling back and looking at her with full intensity.
“T-topy… I… I l-love you so much!” She sniffled, her tongue dropping slightly out of her mouth. “I - I d-do everything I do… j-just to impress you… big brother… I want you to love me…” she closed her eyes, leaning forward… it just felt so… right .
Topaz didn’t resist at all, his lips met hers as the two siblings locked in a passionate kiss.
It was her first ever kiss, and she could only groan as her brother’s tongue slipped inside her teeth, wrestling with hers even as his forehoof gripped the back of her head with passion. It felt like he was sucking all the emotional energy out of her… while also giving her all of his… creating a sum that was more than the parts.
Once again the two siblings collapsed into a heap of limbs, tails, hooves and invectives… though a much sexier heap this time.
She felt like she was burning with thirst, an unquenchable need that throbbed out from her throat and her aching fillyhood. That could only be sated with the pure and complete love of her brother’s emotion. She moaned out as the two tumbled, their passionate kiss finally being broken as their two sweaty bodies wrestled for position against one another.
Her muzzle was her main sensory organ, her rolling eyes far too unfocused and blurry to give her anything meaningful. Instead she relied on the cacophony of interesting smells and sensations as she rolled against her brother’s body on the floor of the tent, a lewd wrestling sprawl that finally ended with her on top of his chest, facing the opposite direction from him, eyes shut tightly as she took in deep draws through her over-excited nostrils.
Her nose was bumped up against something slick, hot, and throbbing . A press of something wet and wriggling against her clenching fillyhood made her mewl and straighten with sensation.
‘Topaz’s tongue is in my pussy! ’ The thought alone made her eyes shoot open with happy surprise… and that’s when she saw it.
Her brother’s proud, bouncing colthood… a thick, throbbing black shaft at its base… rising and tapering to an angry mottled-pink and black medial ring… and towering to a pink, drooling flare… that simply dripped with the siren call of pure sexual satisfaction.
“Oh… big brother… ”
Flurry and Shining watched from the tent’s entrance silently as the two siblings tumbled against one another, their mouths suckling at each other’s sex, like thirsty dogs lapping at an open garden hose. It was clear that the two were clumsily inexperienced, but Shining couldn’t remember seeing a more intense scene of love-making.
“W-would this kind of thing… happen when you played with mom’s power?” Flurry whispered from his side. From Shining’s perspective, it felt like she was far too close to him, the top of her mane basically nuzzling against the underside of his chin. And yet, despite what would be an uncomfortable situation to be nuzzling his daughter… it felt… right.
Shining returned Flurry’s nuzzle.
“MMm… s-sometimes…” He chuckled awkwardly. “Though… n-never so… young… or… so related….”
“Dad, it feels…. So goood…” Flurry mewled, leaning even harder into him. He could smell Flurry’s scent again… the same musk that had sprayed all over his face in Flurry’s classroom… that spicy vanilla freshness… the scent of his daughter’s cunt .
He swallowed nervously, feeling his cock spill from his sheath. How could he be reacting… like this ?
“It’s like… the whole universe is clicking into place…. D-daddy…”Flurry mewled contentedly from beside him. He could feel her tail flick playfully under his body, brushing against his inner thigh on the first swat… then against his stiffening hardness on the second.
“O-oh! S-sorry!” Flurry blushed, taking a step to the side away from him, her eyes looking under his body and probably seeing his half-erect monster.
He stumbled away as well, looking at Flurry, seeing her dock stuck high up in the air, tail flagged. “N-no… th-that’s… m-my fault I…”
A splish sound made him look backward between Flurry’s legs. A small puddle had already formed there. Even as he looked a second streaming splatter shot from his daughter’s backside and splashed on the ground.
“Oh C-Celestia that-that’s embarrassing…” Flurry squeaked, her wings fully outstretched and her face as red as a beet.
“That-that’s OK s-sweetie… it’s just the result of the-”
“Y-YES! BIG BROTHER…. YES!!!”
A nicker twisted both of their heads to look back into the tent.
“R-RUT ME TOPE-Y! RUT ME!”
Sapphire’s little butt was up high in the air, her chest down on the tent floor. Her brother had mounted her with wild abandon, placing one of his green hooves right between her shoulder-blades., pressing her down into the ground with a lusty lack of inhibition that would have made his feral horse-ancestors proud.
“S-Saffy…Y-you're…. So… bucking… y-yes!” Topaz groaned out from between his little sister’s tail, clenched tightly in his teeth.
The hard yank on the filly’s silvery tail perfectly exposed her tight little ass just as her brother pulled out on another outstroke. The little blue filly-pussy was strained to its limit to accept her brother’s colthood. Sapphire’s pink clit winked in and out with excitement as her brother rutted her without much skill… but plenty of youthful exuberance.
“Y-yes! YES! YES!’ The filly squeaked out, tongue darting in and out of her gaping mouth as she clenched and squirted against her brother, his colt-sized ballsack having sent her over the edge as he slapped against her plot with thrust after thrust.
Shining watched with amazement as the filly went transparent before his eyes, not unlike what had happened during FLurry’s crystalling all those years ago. Her whole body sparkled with blue sapphire magic, the clear view letting Shining see the pink end of her brother’s cock driving in and out of the little filly’s vagina, kissing against her womb time and time again.
“S-SAFFY! I’M… I’M GONNA!” Her big brother moaned, his thrusts coming slow and more powerfully, driving deep into his sister’s snatch.
“Inside! Insiiiiiiiiiideunnnghhh……” Sapphire’s command became a long drawn out groan as her brother went transparent as well, his flare expanding deep inside his little sister’s clenching fillyhood, firmly rooting himself in place as he dumped his virile, creamy batter into her fertile womb, filling her transparent uterus up with seed.
“W-w-woah…” Shining mumbled in awe as the two teens collapsed in a heaving heap of contented breathing.
Another impact filled his ears just to his side, and he turned to see his daughter, Flurry, collapsed to the ground herself, her wings twitching and a dopey grin on her face.
“I...I… uhm…. F-finished… d-dad…” She mumbled drunkenly, a dopey, euphoric smile on her face.
Shining chuckled. ‘LIke mother like daughter! ’ He powered up his horn, lifting his exhausted daughter in his magical field.’
“Let’s get you home, sweetie.”
Shining placed Flurry gently on her bead. The teen had insisted that she was fine to walk by the time that they had reached the castle, but Shining had insisted, asking for Flurry to humor him since he hadn’t gotten a chance to carry her to bed since she was a wee-foal.
Flurry had giggled and made some joke about how he could carry her to bed more often if it meant so much to him, but by then he’d already deposited her on her freshly made bed.
“There you go, sweetie… I mean… Flurry…”
“Th-that’s ok, dad.” Flurry blushed. “You can call me sweetie, if you really want.” After a quick bluish, he frowned then looked away from Shining, holding her head up with pride. “I mean… I prefer Flurry… but Sweetie is ok… once in a while.”
“Alright then… I had a lot of fun today, Flurry… you’re growing up to be such a clever and wonderful young mare… you really make me proud, you know that?” Shining smiled at his daughter.
“D-dad!” Flurry squeaked, waving a hoof at him with an embarrassed huff. “All I did was get two siblings into a world of trouble… that filly might even be pre-”
“What you did , Flurry… was use your magic for good…. To restore the harmony in Equestria… the harmony that you can feel in your heart. You have no idea how proud that makes me….” Shining smiled once again, before walking to the door. He would never have thought that little Flurry would be so far along in her growth as a princess to be doing the things that her mother hadn’t been able to do until she was almost twice Flurry’s age. As a unicorn that had grown up around princesses, been a brother to a princess, worked with princesses… he understood just how much control and maturity that required.
He was a proud poppa.
“I… I guess…” Flurry mumbled, tracing a hoof on the top of her bed. “I guess… I had fun too… dad….” She smiled ever so slightly. “If you want… you can call that my birthday present…”
BIRTHDAY PRESENT?
A chill went up Shining’s spine.
Flurry’s birthday was in only a couple of days… and he hadn’t gotten her a birthday present! She was an alicorn princess ! You can’t just get birthday presents for alicorn princesses at the corner-store the day before… they could take moons of preparation.
“Dad? You’ve got a weird look on your face.” Flurry had a cocked eyebrow. “I mean it… don’t go all crazy trying to do something for my birthday, OK? Just… having you there is enough for me…”
“AHahahahahah! Whatever do you mean, honey?”
“Flurry. ” Flurry reminded her father.
“Flurry….? I already have a wonderful and amazing present for you!”
“Uh-huh… Ooookay, dad… just… don’t hurt yourself… OK?”
“Ahahahahahha!” Shining shut the door behind him wit ha sigh. ‘She sounds more like her mother with every passing day .’
Think think think!
Think Shining, think!
What could you get as a present for Flurry!? There’s only one day before her actual birthday party! That’s barely any time to get her a present!
Shining stomped around in his royal bedroom, his face completely terrified. He knew how devious mares were… particularly teenage-filly mares!
If they said that they didn’t want anything for a present… that means that they actually wanted something amazing and unique and expensive and incredibly valuable!!!!
He was doomed !
A note caught the corner of his eye, a small scrap of parchment on Cadence’s nightstand. He trotted over and picked it up… it was a list of things to pick up for Flurry’s birthday.
PERECT! He could get the items on this list and convince his wife to let him give them to their daughter… that would really save his bacon! Let’s see… he recognized his wife’s hoofwriting immediately.
FOR FLURRY ON HER BIRTHDAY:
Shining flinched back as he read the note. It was the moment that all fathers dreaded. Confirmation that their little girl was about to become sexually active .
He stomped the floor, his nostrils flaring with anger. Just who the hell did this colt think he was, getting this far along with his daughter, without even meeting her father! He’d put this little punk through his paces… daring to even touch his little girl before they were married an….
Shining sighed.
He knew he wasn’t being a cool dad. Reacting like this would be the exact way to drive Flurry away from him… just as he was making such wonderful progress!
It pained him… physically hurt him to consider this…. But maybe he should actually get the presents on the list for Flurry. Maybe that would be the final bridge to convince his daughter that he was a cool dad?
He sighed again.
Then again, maybe it was creepy for your dad to give you a bunch of sex-related gifts and tell you to go nuts? He certainly wouldn’t mind the excuse to not have to even imagine that some colt that wasn’t him would be touching his little girl…
Maybe he’d be better off trying to get in touch with Twilight Sparkle… seeing if there was a cool archaic and rare spellbook on alicorn power he could give to Flurry…. Or something that she could remember Night Light giving her on her won sixteenth birthday?
Decisions… decisions…
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by half a point!
Currently the meter is at 9 / 10!
1) LOW/LOW: Let’s just wait until Flurry’s birthday! She told us that we should simply be there for her on her birthday and that the gift of showing her how to use her power for good was our real birthday present to her. We should trust her... (15% chance of failure - VERY LOW reward)
2) MEDIUM/MEDIUM: Let’s go ask Twilight Sparkle what would be a good gift for Flurry Heart. She’s a fantastic aunt…and an alicorn! Surely she must have some idea! Maybe she got something special on her sixteenth birthday? It’s Twilight, what possible risk is there of her doing something silly or unexpected that would have negative ramifications? (30% chance of failure - MED reward)
3) HIGH/HIGH: Cadence is also somepony who knows Flurry really well… and she’s also an alicorn! Even better… she’s already got a list of presents that she’d like to get for Flurry. Sure, it will be tough as a father to give your little girl something that is essentially giving her the green light to have sex with a boy… but maybe that’s what we need to do to show her how much we respect her maturity level? (40% chance of failure - VERY HIGH reward)
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Author's Note
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Sorry for the early technical issues... there was a bug with fimfic and it required re-posting the chapter!
I'm dipping the voting requirement ever so slightly. It was about three days of time in order to hit the level we needed, which is just a touch longer than I was hoping for. So in terms of tuning it feels pretty much right.
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I hope you all enjoyed the little teaser in this chapter... there was a little bit of sexy-times... but most of it was occurring offscreen. This is a departure from my usual, hyper-detailed approach... but I figured that this would be appropriate given that the focus of the story is Flurry and Shining... not two random crystal ponies I dreamed up. (Note to self: ask readers if they want their OCs in your fic instead of dreaming up names next time.)
I'll also note that nobody correctly guessed that Fleetfoot's partner in the volleyball tournament was Apogee from the Space Ponyo universe. A little cameo (which might have been something more if you'd gone with the Fleetfoot route!)
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(167 votes - 55%) Ask Twilight Sparkle what we should get her for her birthday - surely she knows what a 16-year old should get from her dad!!
Shining wrapped up the communication scroll addressed to his sister, invoking that spell she had taught him all those years ago, reserved for only those who were closest to her, friends and family that she wanted to be able to converse with at a moment’s notice.
A green flame consumed the sealed scrolled, dissolving the premium papyrus into a magical wisp of nothingness. Shining knew that sat this moment, Spike the dragon would be coughing the message up in a burst of his own green dragonfire, before finding a way to get the message to Twilight as soon as possible.
Knowing his little sister, and just how quickly she prioritized such things, Shining knew it would not be long before she would reply with a message of her own, which would appear before him in a si-
POP
Shining blinked, finding himself just outside the map room of the Castle of Friendship in Ponyville.
His knees shook slightly and he managed to quell a strange and overpowering wave of nausea… effects that he always found himself hit by after teleportation, something that he was never comfortable with even when he knew that it was about to occur.
The massive crystalline doors in front of him cracked open, slowly creaking wider and a voice from within, which he recognized as Spike’s, called out to him.
“ENTER.”
Shining walked in, immediately seeing Twilight sitting on her high central chair. All about her were mares of Ponyville, lavisciously languishing on divans as they were given fruit, drink, and food from a number of burly guardsmen. Slightly more distant from the bacchanalian debauch were Twilight’s friends, each wearing robes that befit their status as friendship lords of Equestria. Each laughed raucously with one another, toasting each other with frothy ciders.
“Uh… Hello?” Shining cocked his head in confusion as he walked toward the center of the room, looking up at the bored alicorn princess, sitting back on her throne with a lazy, surveying gaze as she looked over the myriad revelers about her. The air crackled about her with the fiercely constrained power of her unfathomable magical power.
Spike spoke up from beside Twilight’s throne, cutting him off.
“Twilight! Prince Shining Armor from the Crystal Empire has arrived in amity, showing that once again we have triumphed on the battlefield of friendship!”
A loud and bawdy cheer erupted from all the ponies in the room, save Twilight, who sat motionlessly. Ponies slapped each other’s backs and spilled their drink in mirth before a cutting voice silenced the entire crowd.
“THIS IS GOOD ” Pinkie Pie held a hoof out, pointing at the friendship lords, “BUT WHAT IS BEST IN LIFE?”
Applejack spoke up immediately. “The open orchard… a fleet canter… a dog at your side… and the wind in your mane.”
“WRONG! ” Pinkie cut her off, then pointed at the bored friendship princess. “TWILIGHT - WHAT IS BEST IN LIFE? ”
Twilight barked aloud quickly with intensity, all while not flinching from her intent stare, making a clear proselytization from her throne.
“To hug your friends … to see them dancing before you… and to hear the exultations of their stallions!”
Another rumbling cheer went up around the whole room as Pinkie confirmed that this was the correct answer.
“Ummm… just what the hay is going on here?” Shining asked unsure of whether the entirety of Ponyville had gone insane.
Twilight’s stern face broke into chuckling mirth as she looked at her brother. “What hasn’t Ponan the Barmare-ian come out in the Crystal Empire yet? We were all watching that movie last night and thought it would be fun to act out that royal court scene…”
All the ponies around her chuckled and sat up, laughing with one another. Out of the corner of his eye, Shining could see the other elements beginning to laugh and chuckle about the role-playing they had just been doing. Rarity seemed particularly pleased about the war-pony like accouterments that she had designed for all of them as a part of the act,
“Uh… no… I haven’t seen that movie yet…” Shining shrugged.
“Oh.” Twilight seemed a bit surprised, a blush on her face. She sat up in her throne, then gingerly stepped down, walking toward her brother. “Then you must have thought that I was…”
“Crazy … Yes. I was thinking that.”
“Haha… oh, sorry about that. Court can get pretty boring, you know.” Twilight chuckled and waved at her friends as she stepped up to him and extended one of her wide, purple wings over his back, shepherding him toward the antechamber. “Hey girls, I’m just going to take Shining aside for a minute.”
“Sure Twi… don’t worry, Warlord Dash will take care of things!” Rainbow dash puffed her chest up, making the other elements chuckle.
“Sorry about that Shining…” Twilight’s ears splayed back slightly, embarrassed. “It’s really easy to get carried away when you can make all the rules - it’s just way more fun to have roleplay and acting days instead of the royal pomp and procedure day after day after day… I didn’t mean to freak you out.”
The two walked into the more secluded room that Twilight liked to use for her private audiences, quickly motioning to her brother toward a comfortable recliner before turning back to the door behind.
Shining sighed, slumping into the proffered chair as Twilight closed the door behind her, shutting out the din of the still playful group of ponies in the map room. “It’s… it’s fine… I just haven’t been able to have much fun these days.”
Twilight trotted over to him, pulling up a chair next to his and giving him a welcoming smile. “I’m sorry to hear that… I did read your letter.”
“And…? What should I do? If I don’t get Flurry Heart to love me by the time her birthday is over then-”
‘Pfft …” Twilight cut him off with a laugh. “Flurry loves you now… and you know that she does, you big goof…”
“B-but… why is she acting so weird around me, then? Why does it feel like there’s still so much distance between the two of us?”
Twilight hummed slightly, tapping her chin with deep consideration. “Well… Flurry’s growing up. It’s a weird time in a filly’s life, you know. You’re becoming an adult… getting all these new feelings and impulses…”
“How did you handle it?” Shining asked, looking over at his little sister. “I don’t remember you ever having a bad relationship with dad.”
“Oh, you have no idea! You were already off at officer school by that time… but I was just… the worst .” Twilight chuckled at herself, shaking her head softly. “Dad would ask if I wanted to go for a walk, or have a chat… and I would just roll my eyes at him and stuff my nose deeper into one of my books. It was awful .”
“Really?” Shining arched an eyebrow at his little sister. “Why would you do that? You love spending time with Dad now!”
Twilight thought back to that time, then blushed a little bit. “Well… it’s… not so easy. I was a bit of a… late bloomer . And it wasn’t like I had a lot of friends who were colts… so… dad was really the only stallion around.”
“So?” Shining tried to understand why that would matter.
“So…. um… Shining do you know anything about socio-dynamics of equine reproductive biology?”
“...y-yes?”
Twilight looked disbelievingly at him, a deadpan expression on her face. “You… don’t know what any of those words even mean, do you?”
“...yes?”
Twilight groaned, dragging her hoof down her face. “Well… it’s a bit of a holdover from our ancient biology… what with how many fewer males we have running around as well… see back when we were all feral ancient ponies, trotting about on the primal steppes, sometimes a herd of ponies would all end up being from one family…”
“Uh-huh…”
“... and then you know how when mares go into estrus they suddenly think that the stallions around them smell amazing ?” Twilight motioned with her hoof in a circular motion, trying to prod along her brother’s comprehension.
“They do ?”
“Uh… yeah … hasn’t Cadence ever told you this?” Twilight asked with an arched eyebrow.
“Well… most of the time she complains that I smell like sweat and butts … but every once in a while she really likes when I come in all sweaty.”
“Exactly . And sometimes that smell would only come from an ancient filly's sire… and that would be what she would get… aroused by. So we kind of have it built into us that if there’s nopony else around… we can get a bit aroused by our family members.”
“W-what does this have to do with you treating Dad like a jerk?”
Twilight groaned, staring at her hooves in surrender before looking up at her brother. “I… I had a thing for dad.”
“What kind of thing… a gift?”
“Shining… I was sexually attracted to Night Light.” Twilight enunciated her words as clearly as possible, carefully looking into her brother’s eyes to make sure that he hadn't misunderstood once again. “The reason I was so snarky to him is that I was embarrassed… you know how sometimes you stallions get awkward erections for no reason at all?”
Shining blushed, squirming nervously as he checked his own body unconsciously to make sure that he wasn’t sporting one himself at that moment. Awkward boners are the worst . “Y-yeah… those are awful.”
“Well, imagine if you got one of those every time you got a hug from mom… or you saw mom’s butt… or you walked past mom… or you simply smelled mom’s scent in a room she’d been in.”
“Oof.” Shining gulped. He almost wanted to admit to Twilight that there had been a couple of times when he’d popped a chubby - not a full erection -after accidentally catching sight of his mother’s heavenly behind. “That would suck.”
“It’s even worse.” Twilight groaned, shuffling her wings to make them more comfortable on her back. “Fillies don’t get erections… they wink . And let me tell you, unlike erections, winks can get… drippy .”
Shining grinned a bit sheepishly at this. “Actually… I wouldn’t be so sure about that Twily… my uh… ‘erections’ can get pretty drippy too.” Shining folded his ears back - just how had he gotten into yet another one of these ridiculous conversations with a family member?
“Shiney Gross!” Twilight blushed at the revealed information. “Although… I guess that makes sense… dad is the same way…” Twilight pawed at the floor.
“Oh? Did mom tell you that?”
“Ahhh hahaha… y-yeah… sure she did…” Twilight nervously replied.
“So… you’re saying that Flurry might be weird around me because she… has the hots for me?” Shining asked, head askew.
Twilight nodded slightly. “Well… maybe… I don’t want to make any assumptions or anything. It might just be that she is going through another of the thousands of teenage related melodramas that they all seem to go through. But… from my chats with Cadence… and with Flurry Heart herself…”
“What the heck! Do all you mares have some sort of secret gossip network?” Shining threw his hooves up in frustration.
“Shining… she’s my goddaughter , and I’m her aunt ! ... Also yes we have a scroll network…” Twilight laughed. “But to sum it up…” Twilight paused looking up at him with some gravity. “Yes , I think she is attracted to you.”
Shining slumped back against the seat of his chair, trying to process the enormity of what he’d just heard. His little girl, the baby filly that he’d snuggled, kissed goodnight, told bedtime stories to, changed the diapers of, given stuffed animals to… she wanted to… have sex with him ?”
The thought sat uncomfortably in his mind, his gut… making him feel almost nauseous with the implications - the impact feeling almost like a punch to his body.
And yet… there was something inside him that made him feel a little excited… proud even… A mare other than his wife found him sexy… wanted to do that with him! And she really was a beautiful filly… If he was a younger stallion, who had just met Flurry at high school - he would have been so turned on by the thought that she might…
No! This was his daughter ! What was he thinking! Shining blinked hard and shook his head as if trying to banish the thoughts from even forming in his mind.
“Uh… are you… OK?” Twilight asked. She was looking at him with concern.
“Yes! Yes... “ Shining coughed. “I just… wow… I had never thought… that she… you know…” Shining coughed, rubbing his eyes.
“It’s perfectly normal, Shining.” Twilight smiled, patting his hoof reassuringly. “I asked Cadence about it back in the day… but as Princess of friendship, I can now confirm that relationships inside families are not only a lot more common than you think… but they’re usually quite healthy!”
“R-really?” Shining asked.
“Yep! And not just parental relationships - uncles, cousins… brother and sister…” She chuckled nervously. “...Y’know… I even had a crush on you for a little while…”
Shining’s eyes darted to his sister’s face. Scanning over her with disbelief. “Huh?”
“Sure! Don’t you remember how clingy I was with you? Especially when you got back from all that time away in training… you were like my big, cuddly teddy bear - and you never noticed just how much I’d sneak looks at your butt, or smell your hair, or sneak into your room….”
“W-woah!” Shining scooched back in his chair.
“Relax! It was just a phase!” Twilight giggled patting her brother’s hoof wit ha blush.
“Y-yeah? W-would… Flurry just be having a phase with me?”
Twilight stiffened slightly. “W-well…. I don’t think so… if I’m being really honest… with myself...” Twilight nervously looked left and right. “I don’t think that phases really exist… those emotions will always be there…” Twilight’s ears splayed back.
Luckily Shining completely missed the implication. “Crap - so I really gotta be careful about how I deal with this… What do you think I should do, sis? What did dad do for you on your birthday?”
Twilight’s eyes shot wide open, and her face blushed an even brighter shade of red. Her wings snapped wide and she swallowed some of the drool from her lips before it slipped out of her lips. “Wh-wh-what dad did on my birthday?”
“Yeah! I mean - I remember that you got really exhausted with the flu the day after your party, and dad said you needed to rest for a few days… but you seemed pretty happy with him even then….”
“Shining….” Twilight blushed, “Did you… did you not hear what happened that birthday night? Don’t you remember the screams - the loud thumps? Mom bringing in water and refreshments?”
“Sure!” Shining nodded. “I thought you and dad were having a dance party with heavy bass music - man I remember how the whole house was practically jumping that night…”
“....uh-huh…” Twilight’s mouth was halfway-open in what looked like disbelief at him, “...y’know what? Maybe it’s best if you find out what kind of party we were having by having a similar one with Flurry, big bro.”
“Do you think… do you think she’d like that? Should that be my present?” Shining asked with an excited look. “Do you think that kind of private after-party would help her to get over her weird attraction?”
“Oh, buck yeah…” Twilight grinned, wiggling her eyebrows. “She’ll get over it if you’re even half the stallion dad was…” Twilight bit her lip. “...I was so stuffed I was still dripping a week afterward…”
“Huh?”
“Nothing! Nothing… dripping sweat … I was dripping sweat a week afterward… now you head on back Shiny - you need to get some rest before the party tomorrow… I’ll see you there! I’ll even bring you a stamina spell so you can… uh… dance all night…” Twilight pointed toward the door with her hoof.
“That’s great Twiley! Thanks so much!” Shining trotted toward the door, reaching out to grab the large crystal doors, he stopped then looked over his shoulder back at his sister, who was watching him from across the room. “W-wait… why did you need me to walk over here just for you to teleport me back to-”
POP
Shining disappeared in a flash of light.
Twilight chuckled to herself, fluttering her large, excitedly extended wings. “Because I love looking at that cute rear end of yours, BBBFF…” Twilight chuckled to herself aloud, “... you big hopeless dope, Flurry’s going to have a fun time with you.”
Shining found himself back in his bedroom, blinking carefully to avoid that feeling of nauseous discomfort from overwhelming him again. He brought a hoof to his mouth quickly, doing everything he could to avoid losing his lunch all over the floor.
At least he had a plan for tomorrow and the party… a private, intimate afterparty, one in which he could address Flurry’s ill-advised attraction to him… in the same way that Night Light had done so with Twilight Sparkle... but how to execute it?
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by half a point!
Currently the meter is at 9.5 / 10!
1)Simply wait for Flurry Heart in her room and let her have a fun time alone at the party with her friends and family. We finally know why Flurry is so uncomfortable around us, and hanging out with her at the party will simply make her nervous, unsettled… agitated. Let’s just meet her after the party to give her our gift of a more private interaction! - (This will make Flurry less aggressive/more submissive through the final scene)
2) Let’s go to the party but stay on the outskirts of the events as they unfold. We’re Flurry’s dad, we have to be present at the party! Not even showing up would probably make Flurry even more nervous than hanging out by her side all night. So what if we make her sexually uncomfortable? It won’t affect her mood that much before the private party. ( This option will make Flurry neutrally aggressive / neutrally dominant/submissive through the final scene)
3) Let’s go to the party and really get into the swing of things! Drinking, dancing, hanging out and chatting with Flurry - make her feel like the special little princess she really is! It’s a party! Everything has a bit of sexual charge to it! Plus, Flurry is hot to trot - that means she must enjoy being around us… why deny her that? It’ll be a good ‘last gasp’ before we deal with her at the after-party! ( This option will make Flurry very sexually aggressive and worked up / dominant through the final scene)
Author's Note
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Shining Armor fixed the bandoliers on his ceremonial uniform, the white crisscrossing straps boldly contrasting against the crimson red of his blazer as he checked himself one last time in the mirror before he headed down to the party.
“Are you sure that you want to go?” Cadence asked from behind him, helping set a part of his mane in place. “You know how Flurry can get with you around, I’m sure if you just waited up here she would be…”
“No… no I’m not sure.” he sighed, puffing his chest up in the mirror. “Hay, even a couple of hours ago I was convinced that I was going to stay in this room until the whole party was over… but I’ve changed my mind.”
“Oh really?” She looked at him with a smirk.
“Yeah… but Flurry would enjoy my being there - and don’t underestimate her, honey. She’s gotten a lot more control over her powers the last few weeks.” Shining winked at her.
“Hah! Listen to you!” she giggled, embracing him. “You’ve gotten to know Flurry so well over such a short period of time - now you’re teaching me things about our daughter.”
Shining blushed slightly. “Stop teasing me!”
“I’m not!” Cadence prodded him with a hoof. “I’m being serious - and I’m not the only mare around the castle that has noticed either…”
“Oh? Did some of the maids notice too? Or some of the female guardsmares?”
“...and then you remind me that you can be a goddamn moron sometimes…” Cadence groaned, smacking her face with her hoof.
“What?”
“Nothing, nothing…” she sighed. “Let’s just head down to the party - we should be there before Flurry makes her entrance…”
As was the case with most of the royal fetes, the atmosphere was a quiet and dignified affair. As Cadence and Shining descended the stairs, a servant called out with a loud thump of his staff: “The Crystal Princess and her consort! Mi Amore Cadenza and Shining Armor!”
Shining chuckled and whispered into Cadence’s ear, “...best consort ever, am I right?”
Cadence rolled her eyes. “You make that joke every time… I don’t think you even know what consort means, Shiny.”
Despite their antics, the crowd all turned to look at them as they descended the stairs into the grand ballroom. Shining instantly noticed the group of younger ponies off to the left side of the room, nearer to the refreshments… Flurry’s invited classmates.
Most of them had attended Shining’s… lecture … a few weeks prior.
He couldn’t help but blush as several of the fillies giggled and tittered amongst themselves as he walked down the steps. He could only imagine what they were saying, but his keen eyes discerned at least one or two of them mouthing the word cock .
He waved and smiled at the group, who waved and smiled back, before his hoof was brought down by his wife.
“Decorum please, dear.”
“Oh give me a break, this is a family party.” Shining groaned. “There are barely any dignitaries visiting, anyway.”
“Fine - but behave, please .” Cadence sighed as they reached the bottom of the stairs and began to mingle. “I know how you can get when you drink too much punch…”
Shining stuck his tongue out at his wife with a wink, then made his way over to some of the guests. After making his way through some old acquaintances and friends of the Empire, he saw his family congregated near one corner of the grand ballroom.
“Shining! Over here!” Twilight Velvet waved him over. Standing in a group were his father, mother, and ‘not-so-little’ sister.
“Hi, mom!” Shining squeezed her with a hug. “Dad.” He gave his father a nod.
“Hey, son, good to see you here!” Night Light chuckled and slapped him on the back. “Twilight here was saying that you might decide to spend the evening up in your own room - I’m glad you didn’t do that!”
Twilight harumphed, shooting a glare at her father. “Well, we’ll see if that was the right call, Dad. You’d think Shining would learn to take a mare’s advice when it came to things regarding mares.”
“Oh, please, it’s not like you have to be a mare to understand such things.” Night Light chuckled giving a little hip check to his wife. “I managed to bang the cutest mare in town.”
“D-dad!” Both siblings protested vocally.
Velvet giggled slightly, playfully swatting her husband. “Oh, dear , stop! But you needed my advice when it came to getting the cutest filly in town.” She raised an eyebrow and flashed her eyes at her husband, motioning toward Twilight.
“Uh… uhm…” Night Light stammered, sweat forming on his forehead.
“That’s right, daddy .” Twilight growled throatily. “Maybe we should share some stories of my sixteenth birthday?” She flicked her tail over to swat her father.
Shining noticed that his sister missed her target with her swat: generally ponies tried to aim for the recipient’s backside… but she had actually delivered her swat to their father’s under-belly, smacking into what would have been his groin.
“Hahaha…” Night Light laughed nervously before taking a deep swig of his cup. “I, uh… I don’t know what you mean.”
Velvet sidled up to the other side of Night Light, trapping him between his daughter and herself. “Oh really?” She blew into his ear. “I seem to remember somepony re-enacting the event in exquisite detail last night on the train in our sleeper car from Ponyville…”
Twilight’s eyes flashed wide at this, then narrowed with intent. “Oh really ? You know, Dad…” Both Twilight and Velvet’s tails were flicking under Night Light’s belly, they both really had terrible aim - their swats seemed to make Night Light incredibly flustered!
Twilight growled playfully into his other ear, “...it has been a while since you ‘celebrated my birthday’ with me.”
“No, it hasn’t,” Shining interjected. “Your birthday was just two months ago, we all got together at that hay-burger place you like so much.”
All three of the ponies stopped and stared at him with a deadpan expression.
“Shining Armor…” Velvet began, shaking her head with what seemed like disappointment.
“...you really are…” Night Light groaned, still blushingly sandwiched between his daughter and wife.
“...a goddamn moron.” Twilight finished with a chuckle.
“H-hey!” Shining stomped a hoof, “what are you guys all ganging up on m-”
A loud thump of staff bottom on marble cut him off.
“THE GUEST OF HONOR - THE PRINCESS FLURRY HEART!”
All eyes were drawn to the lovely vision of the sixteen-year-old filly descending the stairs.
Shining’s breath was taken away.
Flurry hadn’t changed her manestyle or make-up… and though the blue-pink slip of a dress she wore was fantastic… there was something else about her.
She was growing up so fast.
Her smile as she spotted her friends and came to the landing at the bottom of the stairs lit up the entire ballroom.
“Hello everypony! I’ve never been much for, uh… speeches… but I just wanted to say thank you! Thank you for coming, thank you for being my friends, my family! Your presence is the greatest gift I could have ever asked for…”
A chorus of “d’awws ” and polite applause filled the room.
“Now, with all due respect to the fantastic chamber music quartet who have been doing a wonderful job so far…” She motioned over to the stage at the far end of the hall where a few musician ponies sat, dutifully playing. “Let’s get this PARTY started!”
A booming club beat throbbed out of the speakers in the ceiling, all directed by a blue-haired unicorn wearing large purple sunglasses behind a DJ’s sound-mixer table that had hitherto gone unnoticed in one corner.
As the electric rhythms poured through the hall, most of the regal and stuffy ponies sat for a moment, stunned, unsure what to do next.
Then a certain pink pony jumped up in the air with a hearty cheer: “Come on everypony, LET’S PARTY!”
Half a moment later, everyone, from baron to serving-mare, was dancing and laughing to the beat.
It was two hours later, while Shining was bouncing up and down to the beat with Cadence, camped out in a slightly quieter area near the corner of the dance floor that the two finally ran into each other.
Emerging from a group of dancing revelers, Flurry Heart appeared with a joyful laugh on her lips and a light sheen of sweat from the night’s revelry. She looked so gorgeous in her dress and in such a happy state - Shining could feel the blush running to his cheeks instantly as she emerged in front of him.
Her eyes sparkled and lit up, recognition blossoming like a rose opening to the sun.
“D-dad? You came !?” Flurry remarked, dumbfounded.
Shining struggled for words, unsure how he could get himself out of this one. “Uh… y-yeah… I, uh… Sorry, b-”
“Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankou!” Flurry stepped in close, pressing her sweaty forehead right under his chin and nuzzling him affectionately. “I was so worried before, but now I’m so glad that you did.” Flurry looked up at him with a slight smile.
“I… uh… I wouldn’t have missed it for the world.” Shining grinned. “You look… stunning , Flurry.”
Flurry blushed, looking down at herself. “M-mom helped me to pick it out.”
Cadence grinned. “Oh no you don’t, missy; the only pony who gets credit for this is you. Take your father’s compliment. Celestia knows how hard it is to drag one out of him.”
“Hey!” Shining protested, looking at with a stomp. “I said that your hair looked nice tonight!”
“Yes, but it’s the same hairstyle that I’ve always worn, Shiny.”
“Oh… No way, really?”
Flurry, who had been staring at her hooves this time while blushing, looked up through her bangs at her father. “D-dad… you really think I look pretty?”
Shining nodded vigorously down at his little filly. “Flurry, you look… beautiful .”
Flurry bit her lip, her cheeks rosy with desire. Her eyes flashed over to her mother. “Mom… can I…?”
Shining saw his wife shoot their daughter a knowing look before nodding. “Of course, sweetie, it’s your birthday, and you’ve been very patient.”
Shining watched Flurry’s eyes sparkle and grow wider, like a child on Hearthswarming Eve that had just seen the present-laden tree.
“Wait… can she what ?” Shining asked Cadence, before suddenly being jerked by his bandolier with Flurry’s magic toward the dance floor.
“C’ mon dad,” Flurry licked her lips as she jerked him toward the throng of dancing ponies, “I wanna dance!”
Cadence waved with a predatory grin at Shining as he was dragged away. “Have fun you two! Remember to be gentle Shiny - it’s her first time~!”
‘Her first time dancing? I’m sure that I’ve seen her dan- ’ Shining’s thoughts were cut off as Flurry whirled around on him, stepping right up to him so they were chest to chest. Her eyes were burning with fiery excitement. Just as she grabbed his hoof the music paused and switched to a new track altogether.
The song was an intense, upbeat anthem.
Shining tried to bounce along, but was quickly aware that he couldn’t hold a candle to his daughter, who dipped and dived, popped and shot, spun and jumped with perfect timing and enthusiastic energy… not that it mattered how good he was, his rule was always simply not to be the worst on the dance floor… something that he clearly was not.
Twilight Sparkle had already knocked several ponies down with her rather… unique style.
Shining’s attention was quickly drawn back to his daughter as she spun away from him, sticking her plot up in the air and wagging it left and right in time with the bumping club beat. He couldn’t see anything - the fabric of her dress got in the way of that… but the sight was simply too exciting and erotic not to imagine that his little filly’s butt was on display right in front of him.
A crowd gathered around the pair, enthusiastically cheering the two on - mostly, Shining suspected, because of his daughter’s fantastic performance.
With her gyrating, tight-little butt still up in the air, Flurry began to waggle her way backward to Shining, until she was pressing her fabric-covered rear against his chest, grinding against him in a way that could only be described as erotic.
The crowd hooted and hollered.
Shining looked down at Flurry’s pressing bottom. With a wry and naughty grin, the filly pressed her rear right up into his face, burying his nose in her tail hairs, all the way down to her wagging little dock. Shining’s blush grew twice as bright instantly as he took in a whiff of his daughter’s tail. Though the fabric of her dress might protect her body from his gaze, it could only partially prevent his nose from smelling her arousal… especially through the purpose cut slit meant for her dock… which seemed to also be tantalizingly larger and lower than it ought to be.
She must not be wearing any undergarments!
Just as quickly as he caught that snuffle of her musk, the filly brought the side of her tail with a light *thwap * against the side of his head, making an overly playful shocked gesture at the crowd before swirling away.
The crowd loved it. All around him the ponies cheered - especially Flurry’s classmates, with many a “You go, filly!” and “Get’im girl!” jeered at them.
Flurry loved it.
Whirling on him with a predatory smile, she began shuffle-walking toward him, dancing up to his side as he nervously bobbed to the beat. Then suddenly the rhythm stopped a pause just before one of the song’s signature bass drops.
The whole crowd went silent.
Then the beat resumed with twice as much intensity.
Flurry slipped under him, lithe as a cat, pressing her back up against the underside of his belly and scooching backward, snuggling her rump up against the inside of his hips… then beginning to tilt her hips up and down wildly - twerking better than even the professional dancing mares on Sapphire Shores’s musical tours ever could.
The crowd erupted with excitement, the little princess filly doing a sexy breakdown that was explicit enough to be more appropriate in an X-rated movie.
Shining groaned, stumbling, trying his best to maintain the pathetically inadequate bobbing of his hooves to the beat… as his daughter practically simulated vigorous pony-style sex with him. Her silk-covered plot ground up against his sheath… not just bouncing against him but rubbing, dragging, pressing into him. There could be no doubt what Flurry’s aim was.
And she was succeeding.
His black appendage began to spill from himself, throbbing painfully into the pink-blue silk of his daughter’s dress as he became more and more erect.
“Y-yeah! I can feel it!” Flurry shouted out, an innocuous statement to all but him and her.
The tip of his half-erect penis bounced off the back of her silk covered butt, right in the area that would have resulted in penetration, had her dress not been in the way. He winced as his stiffening cockhead slid downward, between her legs, so that it was pointing toward the ground.
“Oops!” Flurry grinned, then began to walk backward.
Shining groaned, stumbling back as his little girl’s plot pushed against his cock… until he found himself bumping against a chair and falling back into a seated position - with his daughter sitting right on his lap.
The whole crowd erupted with a cheer. Flurry looked over his shoulder at him with a wild, toothy smile; she’d planned this little development!
With the beat still pumping out, his little Flurry Heart began to ‘dance’ on top of him. Her rear hooves were still on the ground, and her forehooves were balanced on his knees, as she bounced her tight plot up and down, left and right, twerking and grinding.
This wasn’t just a dance.
It was a lap dance.
Shining gripped the edges of his chair intensely moaning out and throwing his head back. His cock was bouncing fuller and fuller now. He wasn’t sure why he hadn’t already heard the shocked gasps of the crowd at being fully exposed. He looked down…
And only saw Flurry’s sweaty lower back.
The filly was sitting on top of his stallionhood. Which mean that his erect shaft was concealed in her dress folds from everyone’s vision. Out of the corner of his eye, he could see that Flurry was even holding up the hem away in front of her, lest the obvious log-sized tent in front of her give it away.
Shining let out a sigh of relief before he felt another grinding impact against the base of his stallionhood. Only this time… it was wet .
‘Wait. If she’s holding her dress up and out… and she’s not wearing panties… that means that what’s currently grinding against me is… ’
The wet, sticky heat pressed against his lower abdomen again, grinding and leaving a slick trail in his fur as it pressed against his now fully rigid cock-base.
‘ThaT’s FluRry’S fiLlyhOod oN mY dIcK! ’
His mind swirled with overwhelming emotion as the filly continued to bounce and grind on him, pressing her pussy against his lower body, sometimes rising up his shaft, trailing a wet kiss from her cunt against his shaft before sliding agonizingly down his shaft.
Flurry was biting her lip extra hard now, and her eyes were shut tightly. She was really having a good time now.
Shining clenched his eyes shut as well, his hooves digging into the wood of the chair, audibly creaking the material as he resisted the raw pleasure he was feeling - every once in a while Flurry would bounce forward, sending the tip of his rigid cockhead bouncing off the bottom of his daughter’s ribcage and sending a shuddering pleasurable tremor through the both of them.
“D-dad… s-stop with the hover hands… j-just grab m-my ass!” Flurry whispered through clenched teeth.
Shining obliged.
He pressed down on his Filly’s hips, mashing her wetness against his steel erection, grinding her erect clitty against his obsidian horseflesh.
“D-dad!” Flurry groaned out, her words only reaching his ears through the thumping, hypnotic beat.
Shining quickly looked around them, worried that her sexually flushed face might betray what was really happening under her dress.
All around them, the ponies that had been watching and cheering had devolved into sexually charged dances of their own. Any couples that had been dancing before were now passionately making out on the floor, groping with hooves and magic. One pair had even started to simply outright buck - a duke outright pounding into his date… who Shining noticed was not the duchess.
He even spied Twilight Sparkle and Night Light embracing, walking toward one of the side rooms, the pink-colored glow of Twilight’s horn matched by a glow that was between Night Light’s legs doing… something .
His mother, Twilight Velvet, was not far behind the duo.
“D-daddy!” Flurry’s whisper reached his ears, as she began to lose her rhythm, spasming in little jerks against the hot, thick, base of Shining’s fat black shaft. Then he felt a hot, winking, wetness…
It started on the bottom of his cock, then over his balls, spilling over the inside of his legs, then over the edge of the chair and down to his hooves.
Flurry had just climaxed… on him ?
“Oh, d-daddy…” Flurry hunched forward, shuddering.
Shining reached up to pat her back, comfortingly, but before he could the filly’s hooves took hold of his erection through the fabric of her dress… and began to pump .
Shining could only moan out again, clenching down on the girl’s rump as she brought him even closer to the edge that he had already been trotting upon. The feel of sopping-wet silk against his glans, pumped and squeezed by the excited and unskilled hooves of his daughter, his little-filly had him shuddering and moaning.
“G-give it to me… d-dad…!” Flurry groaned over her shoulder at him. Her horn snapped alight, and Shining could feel a comforting warmth envelop the bottom of his shaft and his balls, pulsing more than pumping, and not enough to hurt or arouse… just the gentle tentativeness of an amateur.
But it was more than enough.
“Un-ungh….!” Shining leaned against his daughter’s back, his hips awkwardly trying to thrust, even though they were pinned between the chair and Flurry’s plot. Underneath the fabric of the dress, he felt his flare fatten and expand, jerking and throbbing as pulses of hot virility raced up his fat pipe.
Then he exploded .
Great, messy gouts of steaming cum shot from him, messily splattering against the inside of his daughter’s birthday dress with rope after rope of thick batter.
“Y-yes! Yes… daddy!” Flurry enthusiastically encouraged him, her hoof still pumping, coaxing his white hot seed from him.
Shining could only hold on, overwhelmed by the emotions, the tension leaving him, his own debauched wetness covering him, splattering against the dress, his daughter’s belly, his own thighs.
Rope after rope. Throb after throb.
Until he lost count.
Until it finally trickled out of him.
Until he collapsed into a puddle against the back of his chair. Panting.
“W-woah…” Flurry breathed, shocked. “W-wow…”
“Unghh….” Shining wanted to say so much more… so much more . But this was all he could manage.
“D-daddy… uh… I think we’ve both made a bit of a mess…” Flurry giggled, lifting a sticky hoof from her soaked dress. “I think maybe… we should go to my room to change?” Flurry looked around.
Shining tried to look at what she was looking at, but in his state could only sense dim shapes and groans, thrusting and panting ponies all around them.
“I… uh… don’t think anypony will miss us…” Flurry giggled, charging her horn.
*POP*
And just like that. They were alone. In Flurry’s room.
On her bed.
Shining groaned and rolled, accidentally squishing his soaking stallionhood against his daughter’s body as he did so, a sticky mess of a dogpile as he tried to keep his weight off of his little giggling girl.
“Dad! W-wait! Just… hang on!” Flurry protested, making him pause. With careful use of her hooves, she began to peel off her soaked dress, rolling inch after inch of the slick, now-transparent fabric off both of their bodies, revealing her matted chest hair fur and his slimy, half-erect penis.
“And… there .” She slid the last of her dress off, slinging the bundle behind her shoulder, where it landed in a wet pile with an audible *PLAP*. Flurry turned to look at the wet splat on the ground and covered her mouth before she laughed.
“I guess getting a little wet , runs in the family huh?” She grinned, sitting up - then looked down at Shining’s stallionhood. Her once predatory glance faltered a little bit - the cocksure attitude that she’d sported just a moment before dissolving. Suddenly she was a little girl again. “W-wow… this… this is really happening, isn’t it?”
Shining felt his emotions rush back to him at the sight of his scared little girl, who was swallowing nervously while eyeing his semi-tumescent erection, ears splayed back in trepidation.
“W-what? No… no Flurry, it doesn’t have to happen if you don’t want it to - in fact… it really shouldn’t happen!” Shining began to pick himself up. This was when he had to be strong - to do the right thing… to resist these animalistic urges and be the father that he knew he could be.
“W-wait! Dad!” Flurry’s hoof reached out to snag one of his, keeping him from standing up and leaving his bed. “I… do want this. I want this so badly… you have no idea how bad I want this.” Flurry couldn’t meet his eyes.
“I… I don’t think you do Flurry.” Shining sighed sitting back down and wrapping a hoof around his filly. “I think this is just… your powers… your hormones… and I don’t want you to make a big mistake about something so special - I love you, Flurry… but there’s going to be somepony, some colt who will make you so happy.”
“Dad.” Flurry sighed, gripping his hoof even tighter. “I know all this stuff - I know what my power is trying to tell me to do - I know what my body is trying to tell me to do - what my head is saying… what society is saying… but most importantly, what my heart is saying…”
“Flurry, sweetie… I… I worry that you don’t r-”
“Shush dad, just… give me a minute OK?” Flurry stared at him fiercely. “I do understand. I know it’s crazy, that it’s taboo… but I don’t care. I’ve known how I felt about you since… forever... “
“Flurry, that kind of love and the love for your father can be-”
“I said shush .” Flurry extended her wing, covering his mouth. “I know that too dad. Don’t you think that one of the first things I did was to consult the foremost expert on love in the history of Equestria? It was tough - but I spilled the beans to mom… and she helped me sort through things.” Flurry looked up at him with a meek smile, “...and it turns out that I really do love you, Dad… completely.”
Shining swallowed, his brows knitting together.
“I… I don’t understand. All those years of you being grumpy and moody, of ignoring me and keeping me at a distance.”
Flurry chuckled a bit, then looked at him with an accusatory glance. “Are you implying that I was anything but the picture of pleasant happiness?”
“Uh… n-no not… not at all!” Shining stammered, only to be cut off by Flurry again.
“That's OK dad… I was a bit of a… well… a brat.” She sighed. “But you have no idea how hard it is to control those emotions swirling around inside you - to be so close to the person you love and not be able to do anything. To have the person you love leave you for work week after week, only being with you for a short period of time, time and again.”
“S-sorry…”
“Every time you hugged me I wanted to jump you, dad.” Flurry sniffled. “Every time you said you loved me, I wanted to confess to you… it was killing me. I guess all I could do was act out - to keep you away so that you wouldn’t drive me crazy by being close to me.”
“But why wouldn’t you tell me, sweetie? If you were hurting so bad…?”
“Mom made me promise.” Flurry grinned, clearing her nose with another sniffle. “She wanted to be sure. She told me if I could wait until my sixteenth birthday, and if I still felt the same way - it would be certain…” Flurry grinned a little bit, “I guess it would also be legal…”
“So, that’s why she changed the age of consent laws three years ago to sixteen!” Shining confirmed by pounding a hoof into the other with realization.
“I was so pissed when she did that! I had only a couple of days to go until I turned thirteen, and she moved the goal posts out a whole ‘nother three years! Totally unfair!” Flurry rolled her eyes and flopped backward on to the bed.
“Well… thirteen is pretty young.”
“Not if you’re an Alicorn princess who specializes in lust.” FLurry groaned from the bed, waving her arms up and down on her sheets.
“So you love-loved me… even three years ago?” Shining asked.
“Longer than that, Dad… since… forever.” Flurry softly spoke up at her ceiling.
“But… why?”
Flurry pushed herself up onto her elbows to look at him. “Who knows? Mom thought at first it might be because of how close I was with her when I was in the womb - a magical power like an alicorn’s, wrapped all around a tiny, still-forming soul? Maybe there was bleed over and I got some of her type of love in my own heart. Celestia knows she loves you dearly.”
The filly sighed then went on.
“...but it’s not I'm the only filly who wants to make love to her father… from what I can tell, half the mares walking around out there have a daddy complex - and a good number of them want it as bad as aunt Twilight does.”
“H-huh?”
“...but …” Flurry cut Shining off before he could even begin, “I think it’s because you’re… you. You’re… amazing dad. You care about me so much . And all of your family. And your friends. And the whole kingdom. You’ve always been there for me - your love has always been like… a warm hug - there to embrace me no matter how I feel.” She was drawing circles in her bedsheets with her hoof now, an embarrassed blush plastered across her face.
“…but the why doesn’t even matter, now. All that matters is here and now.” She looked up at him, hopefully. “And I hope… I pray that you’ll say… you love me too - that way.”
Shining’s mouth dropped open, his little girl had just bared her heart to him. Animalistic? Wrong? Needing to be strong?
What the hell was he thinking?
He did love her. She was beautiful, smart, cute, affectionate… she was everything. If the only thing stopping him was the fact that she was his daughter … was that really the right thing to do?
“I-I…” he opened his mouth but his tongue felt heavy in his jaw, slow to move… what had Cadence always told him? When you’re unsure of what to do, you can always trust your heart…
“I… love you too. Completely.”
Flurry brought her hooves to her mouth, covering it to hide her smile as small tears of joy formed at the edges of her eyes. “D-dad…”
“...b-but! ” Shining interjected, holding up a hoof, “I… I’m ashamed to admit this… but… I... I’m having trouble getting over the… wrongness of it… I want to do this for you Flurry, but…”
Flurry wilted a little bit.
“... I was hoping that you could maybe help me a bit, with your power?” Shining sighed.
Flurry let out a little squee of happiness behind her hooves. “O-of course! No problem! I was hoping you might ask that.”
“I hate that I have to… I wish I could make love to you without needing any magic… but I guess I’m too much of a coward.”
“Shush dad, taboos can be a big mental blocker… that’s why I have this power, anyway!” Flurry began to charge up her horn, though it seemed to be more of a rosy red than her usual pink energy.
Shining winced away from the glow. “Not too much, just enough so I can get over it… I want to be with you Flurry - not be some animal with you.”
Flurry simply smiled in response, letting the red aura expand and fill the room before it slowly dissipated away.
Shining blinked.
“Th-that was it?”
Flurry nodded.
He didn’t… feel any different. Maybe that lingering uncertainty in his gut really, was gone. He looked down at himself with a half-grin then up at his daughter.
“So was this your plan all along?”
“It… was what I had hoped for.”
“So are you telling me… all these years… all the stress I went through… all I ever had to do was sit back and you were going to come after me on your sixteenth birthday?”
Flurry grinned. “Sorry, dad… you always were a bit of a…”
“Goddamn moron.” Shining shook his head at himself.
Flurry giggled and leaned forward, giving him a little peck on the cheek. “... I was going to say ‘a goofy cutie-butt.”
She slunk back, and her face fell again a little bit. She looked nervously up at him.
“Uh… d-dad… I have to say… even though I am the princess of lust…” she stared down at his groin, where Shining’s staff was already starting to spring back to life, “...I’ve… uh… never done this before… and you’re freakin’ huge . Can you… uhm… help?”
Shining smiled and nodded.
He knew just how to choose what to do next.
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by half a point!
Currently the meter is FULL FULL FULL!!!
1)Eat Flurry Heart out. The stallion should take the lead in these things. If Flurry is feeling unsure about things, it’s probably best to start things off by showing her just how talented we are with our tongues. That’ll help to get the filly loosened up and having a fantastic time.
2)Help Flurry Heart to give you a blowjob. Show her how to please a stallion - her dad specifically. Gently coach her on how to lick and suck, when to swirl and when to pump. This will stiffen you right back up and give the filly a full dose of vitamin D before the main event.
3) Push her down and rut her. Love and foreplay can come later. If this filly is anything like her mother she needs a good dicking before the really passionate sex can start. Once she’s squealing you can do some slower things, like making out or oral… but a true stud takes his mare, pony-style, right away.
4) Let’s slow things down a little bit. Pour the filly a glass of wine, get her comfortable, and start off with some nice, slow smooching and massaging. If she’s frightened or has totally cooled off since her little dance number… we need to work her up slowly.
Author's Note
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We're actually literally there!
I was writing this epic of a final scene out, hoping to get the whole thing done before the end of the month, and the deadline for the father's day contest, which had been the driving force for the whole fic from the start.
Then as I passed 4000 words I realized I was losing energy... I just flew back from Hong Kong yesterday... and I really didn't want to do anything other than my very God damn best on this fic, which has really grown on me.
So I did a quick check of the contest rules and... guess what!? It got extended to July 8th!
So we have a little more time together! Instantly my thoughts turned to how to extend... should I just hold back? Write a multi-parter and update with the bits that I had just finished? Then it hit me like a ton of bricks: why not let you guys decide just how the clop will unfold?
A true CHOOSE YOUR OWN CLOPVENTURE! Just like in your hentai games!
That said... I want to wrap this story up tomorrow , July 1st Canada Day. That means that I'll check in tomorrow morning, see what option is winning, close the poll and write that scene out. Once that quick little bit is done, I'll throw up the option for the next progression, give you a half-hour or an hour... then move to the next one, and on and on... a whole day of CLOP!
By the end of the day we should (hopefully) be all wrapped up!
I'm thinking we'll probably get through three, or four scenes... otherwise poor Shining and Flurry will probably start to get sore!
So make them good ones!
And feel free, as always, to suggest different ideas for what should happen next... now your comments may really get incorporated!
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Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Eat Flurry Out...
“Lie back, Flurry…”
Shining smiled at his daughter, who was looking up at him with unsure eyes.
“L-like this?”
“Mmhmm…” Shining grabbed his daughter’s hips and pulled her toward the edge of her bed so that her rear legs were hanging off into space. “Just like that…”
“Woah. You’re uh, pretty strong…” Flurry remarked, “A-are you going to… eat me out now? Mom said you were pretty good at that…”
Shining looked up at Flurry with a cocked eyebrow and a wry grin. “Is there anything you two - don’t talk about?”
That got a chuckle out of Flurry. Good, he wanted her to be relaxed and have fun. He quickly slid a pillow in behind the filly’s back, propping her up so that she was comfortable. He wanted her to feel like the princess she truly was.
“Flurry, if you feel uncomfortable or want to st-”
“Dad .” Flurry rolled her eyes. “Please, I know what oral sex is…”
He eyed her carefully, and he could tell right away - though she wanted to project an air of being confident and sophisticated, there were several tells that gave away just how excited and scared this filly really was. The way she clutched her chest, the nervous little trembles… but most importantly her eyes, which sparkled with apprehensive excitement.
“Oh really?” Shining grinned as he slid down and into position, sitting on the floor between her rear legs, looking up at her. “So are there some boys or girls … from your class that I should be giving my dad talk to?”
“Wh-what? No! I didn’t mean I’d done it before… just that I know what it is…” Flurry mumbled.
“Well doing and knowing are two different things, Flurry…” Shining paused for a second to consider. “Tell you what… I want you to grab my mane…”
“Like this?”
“Yeah.” Shining smiled, his daughter having gently grabbed a magical hoofful of his hair. “If it gets too intense - you just need to pull me away.”
Flurry nodded, her smile becoming more confident.
“Alright then… I’m gonna start… I love you, Flurry…”
“I love you too, Dad.”
Shining glanced down at his target, his breath being taken away at just how beautiful his daughter was. If she was really the Princess of Lust, the forces of creation had chosen well to make her their vessel.
Below the sweaty, sticky, matted fur of her chest… below her cute little belly and tight lower-abdomen… nestled between her athletic inner thighs… was Flurry’s dripping, drooling fillyhood.
A tiny tuft of cute, white, pubic fur rested atop a set of plump white-furred lips which throbbed with desire. With each beat of the filly’s racing heart, the outer lips trembled and opened, revealing a twisting pink within, showing little hints of the hot interior awaiting him.
Even as he inspected his prey, a wink from the filly sent her lovebud racing out from between her plump lips, a fat little nub of engorged flesh announcing its presence with a terrifyingly powerful clenching of the tight filly-snatch. Less than a moment later, the wink was followed by a burble of clear, fragrant juice spilling out onto the floor beneath her.
“S-sorry Dad!”
“Shhh,” now it was Shining’s turn to shush her , “I love that I turned you on… now let me really turn you on…”
Shining ducked down between the filly’s legs, his eyes taking in the remainder of her tight snatch and sexy nethers - nestled just above her cute dock and soaked tail, was her tight little ponut, currently slathered in the clear trickle of juice that seemed to pour unendingly from her fillyhood.
But that wasn’t going to be where he started.
Instead, he began with a kiss on the inside of her left knee… just a peck… which made her giggle.
Perfect.
He laid another kiss and another. Very slowly making his way up the inside of her thighs - which spread wider and wider as he moved up toward his final target, and as the teen became more and more comfortable with the situation. He could feel the magic gripping his hair slowly directing him toward Flurry’s honeypot.
“D-dad…”
As he reached the delicate crevice between her leg and her pussy, he let his tongue dart out from between his lips, prench-kissing the tender flesh.
“Dad, that… tickles!” She laughed.
Just as she giggled, Shining plunged inwards, drawing a long, shallow lick across his daughter’s dripping slit, from bottom to top, taking in the unique taste of her aromatic juices.
“Oh!” Flurry trembled with a start. But by the end of his first lick, she was already pressing him harder against her, already wanting more sensation.
Shining started a second lick. Then a third. Each time pressing a little deeper against the plump folds, each time delving into that hot interior flesh.
“Mmmm…” Flurry’s magical pressure was keeping him in a rhythm now, helping him to keep licking at a steady rate that matched the hidden thrum of the filly’s internal desires.
All Shining wanted to do was make her happy. Forgotten were any thoughts of taboo or fears of wrongness - he just wanted to make his little girl experience nirvana, to make her as happy as possible.
On his next lick, he slid his tongue into her folds as he crested her lips, darting into find that hot, fat, bud of throbbing filly-flesh.
“Unnnf!” He heard Flurry moan out from the exponential increase in sensation, as he wrapped his tongue around the exposed part of her clitoris.
She was not unlike her mother - who had a powerful little nub of her own… one that Shining always made sure to take great care with. He did the same now, exploring the virgin territory of his daughter’s clit - probing each bump, each fold… coaxing it out… then pressing it back.
“D-dad!” Flurry’s magic began to push him harder against her cunt, burying his muzzle against her pubic mound. He could feel her legs closing around his head, clenching him tighter and tighter as her muscles coiled up, like powerful springs, winding and tensing with built up energy.
He tickled the bud. He slathered it. Swirled it. Pressed it. Boxed it. Always shifting strategy, again and again, not letting Flurry find a rhythm, keeping her gasping with pleasure but unable to settle into comfort.
“P-please!” She whined. He felt one of her hooves clasp his mane, along with her magic, thrusting him even stronger against her.
It was time.
He pursed his lips and took the engorged lovebud in, suckling and fellating the filly-flesh, drawing it into the vacuum of his mouth while still assaulting it with his adroit tongue.
The tension became spasms, the coils sprang.
A choking, whining gasp moaned out from Flurry, deeper and more animalistic, like it was coming from her gut. The death-grip of her magic and hoof lessened… letting him pull back from her ever so slightly.
“Mmnnnnnnggggg…….!!!”
Shining felt his daughter’s clitoris spasm and throb inside his mouth, felt the winking spasms against his chin as she went through the death-throes of her orgasm.
And then the flood . She really was like her mother.
Squirt after squirt. Hot, splashing, rich fillycum.
He could only manage a single swallow before the rest poured down his chest, splattering against him like a gushing, out of control fountain of lust.
Then… just as soon as he felt the first contractions lessening, Shining made his move: he plunged his tongue into Flurry’s tight pussy.
“Mnnn-OH! OH FUCK! FUCK! D-DAAaaaaaaaaaad…..” Flurry whined, rocking her hips against the first male appendage to enter her.
The small hole was quivering and pulsing, the tight muscular ring barely accepting his wide tongue, and he was careful to probe gently, only exploring the first few inches inside his daughter’s velvet-fleshed love tunnel.
The lessening contractions built up into a cresting wave, his delicate probing sending the filly spiraling straight from her first climax into a second.
“I-... *hic* ... I’m c-cu- *hic* ... cumming again!” The poor filly managed to squeak out between shudders.
Shining simply kept up his delicate licking as spasms wracked his daughter’s body for a second time, curling his tongue skillfully to stimulate the clitoral shaft in the roof of her vagina - riding out the storm of her humping, spasming gyrations.
“D-daddeeee….” Flurry could only whine, pressing him weakly against her, strength sapped by her second orgasm in under a minute.
He kept tongue-fucking his daughter. Sometimes making little hums or vibrations to stimulate her, always keeping her in that cacophony of orgasm. He felt what seemed like a third wave of spasms roil through her, weaker and less organized than the first two, less intensity but more sensation.
Flurry’s magic lost grip, and her hooves slumped down, before she fell back onto her bed, exhausted… but still twitching and writhing against her father’s delicate tongue-thrusts, as she rode out her third orgasm happily.
Shining waited until the quivers became a consistent tremble, before pausing. He knew that he could keep going, could work her back up into a frenzy… but he had promised that her grip was her control on him, and with her unable to hold on - he would slow and stop…
Leaving her a messy puddle of fur, sweat, juice and happy exhaustion on her back.
Shining stood up and looked down at the contentedly glowing little filly, whose half-lidded eyes and dopey grin betrayed the state she was in.
“Woooow…. M-mom wasn’t kidding…” She happily mewled up at him. Shining winked at her with a chuckle. “Y-you were amazing , daddy…”
Shining pet her mane, brushing some of her sweaty bangs out of her face. “You too, Flurry…”
But what to do next?
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by three points!
Currently the meter is WARNING!!!!OVERFLOW OVERFLOW OVERFLOW WARNING!!!!
1)Help Flurry Heart to give you a blowjob. You took her to oral heaven, now she can take you. Show her how to please a stallion - her dad specifically. Gently coach her on how to lick and suck, when to swirl and when to pump. This will stiffen you right back up and give the filly a full dose of vitamin D before the main event.
2) Flip her over and rut her. Flurry’s in a state of delirious pleasure right now, she’s primed and ready to be mounted and dominated… pump a load into her with our big throbbing stallionhood like a true stud… once she’s plugged up with daddy-batter… we can do things a bit more sensual.
3) Let’s slow things down a little bit. Pour the filly a glass of wine, get her comfortable, and start off with some nice, slow smooching and massaging… let’s go slow and romantic - let her make the next move.
4) You know - that tight little tailhole looked pretty inviting. Sure it’s really only for more advanced sexual techniques… but maybe Flurry really likes butt-stuff? With a little tongue work and some magical stretching… we could probably even fit in there!
5)End the evening. This is good for now. Flurry’s happy. You can go rub one out later on your own. Let’s just tuck the filly in and let her sleep. You don’t want to take things too far! (THIS ENDS THE FIC)
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE
Vote for your choice! Unlike usual, these scenes are going to come rapid-fire so vote quickly! I'll announce in the comments once the poll is closed - it may only be 50 votes or it may be more or less!
A true CHOOSE YOUR OWN CLOPVENTURE! Just like in your hentai games!
Sorry for the late start.
That said, I'm still going to keep the updates rapid-fire, so stay tuned in!
I'm thinking we'll probably get through three, or four scenes... otherwise poor Shining and Flurry will probably start to get sore!
And feel free, as always, to suggest different ideas for what should happen next... now your comments may really get incorporated!
You guys are awesome and I hope this shows just how awesome I think you guys are: I'm trusting YOU with the ultimate clop-scene! The money-shots! They're yours !
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Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
(97 votes - 45%) Coach Flurry through her very first BJ - time to have her demonstrate what she can do… on her dear old daddy!
Shining pet his daughter gently as she mewled contentedly on the bed, huffing and gasping on her back as she rode out the little shivers of the end of her third orgasm. Fourth, if you counted the one on the dance floor earlier.
It felt like minutes before the filly sighed happily, wriggling her little bum and stretching her back. “Mmm… dad…” she glanced up at him with a smile.
“Welcome back, Flurry.”
“That was… wow… mom’s a lucky mare.”
Shining puffed his chest out a little bit. “Well, now I know Cadence wasn’t just blowing smoke up my tail hole…”
“She wasn’t ! Wow… I guess I’m a lucky mare now, too!” Flurry chuckled.
“Mmmhmm… so… wanna repay the favor?” Shining arched his eyebrows invitingly, playfully. Cadence always liked sucking him off after he’d lavished her with oral attention - maybe… wait, this was Flurry , he couldn’t be selfish or pushy! “Uh… I mean… you don’t have to if”
“Hay yeah, I do!” Flurry’s wings spread out from under her and she rolled over onto her belly. “I’ve always wanted to know what your actual, real -...” Flurry noticed his grin and blushed, “...I mean… I wouldn’t mind doing that… for you … dad.”
“Uh-huh…” Shining chuckled, sliding up onto the bed and leaning back on his haunches. “Well as long as you’re up for it…”
“Y-yeah…” Flurry nodded, rolling around so that she was facing her father’s spread hips, her head still resting tiredly on her bed
Shining let his hips fall open, his big semi-erect stallionhood flopping forward, landing with a meaty *THWAP* across his little girl’s muzzle, completely covering her vision.
“W-woah…” Flurry pulled back, shaking her head and scrunching her nose. “That… uh… wow, that’s bigger when it’s right in your face.”
“S-sorry!” Shining chuckled, cringing, “Didn’t quite mean to, uh, flop it on you like that.”
“It’s… uh… b-big.”
“Heh, it gets bigger too.” Shining grinned. “Why don’t you try-”
Shining was cut off as Flurry dove forward, her mouth spread as wide as she could possibly manage, almost comically so. The filly’s forehooves scrambled forward to take her father’s big, black cock in their grasp, clenching the base so that she could steady the semi-tumescent head for engulfment.
“Flurry, wait!”
But the filly had already crammed part of his hoof-sized head into her mouth, scraping her teeth painfully against his flare, making him wince. With far too much speed, the teen began to try bobbing up and down on his shaft, mashing his spongy head against the sides of her mouth and the back of her throat.
Immediately, tears began to form in her eyes, and she began to cough and gag.
“Stop, stop!” Shining used a combination of his magic and his hooves to gently extract the teen-filly from her rigorous, choking assault. “What the hay were you trying to do?”
Flurry coughed, wiping her chin and her eyes. “Bleh… *huf*... that’s a lot harder than it looked on those pornStable.com videos…”
Ah, there was the problem. Shining rolled his eyes and shook his head. “Yeah, I’ve seen those… you know half of those mares use magic to relax their throat? And the other half use stand-in stallions with… uh… smaller equipment ?”
“Seriously?” Flurry asked, her eyes darting from his cockhead to his face.
“Yeah, one of my sergeants did a little time in porn.” Shining chuckled. “She saw me in the showers and said I’d never cut it in the industry - way too big… I took it as a compliment.”
“B-but… Mom said that she was able to take you all the way down her thr-”
“Your mom’s a very special mare, Flurry. And it took us a lot of practice.” Shining chuckled, brushing Flurry’s mane out of her face.
“Pfft…” Flurry smirked, “But I practiced a bunch too!”
Shining arched an eyebrow.
“Not like that, dad . On that clone-a-willy replica mom made of your… uh…” she pointed her hoof at his groin, “... your dick .”
“Oh.” Shining opened his mouth. “Oh… that one. I think we made that before I first went to officer school… I was only like… well, I was your age: sixteen. I’ve, uh… grown a bit since then.”
“Seriously? You got even bigger ?” Flurry looked like she was in disbelief. “I… that was the biggest toy I’ve ever seen! I actually checked some of the different stores .”
Shining blushed, scratching the back of his mane with embarrassed pride. “What can I say…?”
Flurry prodded his stiffening rod with her hoof and giggled. “So… what should I… do? ”
Shining smiled, sitting back so he got even more comfortable. “Well… I always love it when your mom licked me… lick she was licking a lollipop.”
Even as he said it, Flurry leaned forward and planted a long lick from right underneath his glans, dragging her cute pink tongue over the front of his head, slurping up a dollop of his juices as they leaked from his cockslit.
“Mmm! That’s it!”
Flurry giggled and swallowed, then looked up at him. “Kinda salty… and smelly…”
“Yeah… sorry.”
“No… I… like it.” Flurry took another lick of her stallion-flavored lollipop. “I really like it… ” Another lick and swallow, then she took in a deep sniff of the tip of his dick. “And the way it smells… I love it… I want more…”
Shining shivered as his little girl’s tongue darted around under his fattening ridge. She wasn’t nearly as skilled as her mother, obviously, but something about her excited little laps was even more erotic, sending pulsing blood throbbing up through his shaft, bulging him wider and wider with each heartbeat, as he rose more and more erect.
Flurry giggled again, having to crane her neck upwards to stay at the level of his cockhead as he towered to full height. “You weren’t kidding… this is bigger!” Flurry’s moved her head back, her wide eyes sparkling as she took in the whole, towering nineteen inches of her father’s penis.
Shining gripped the top of his cock with a smile, pulling it back toward his belly and away from his daughter’s face, exposing the steely underside of his obsidian shaft, pulsing with throbbing veins, bisected by a terrifyingly thick medial ring, before descending and thickening to a fat base.
“You know, it’s not just my tip that needs attention.” Shining smiled. “The other parts feel good for me too.”
Flurry arched a naughty eyebrow at him. “Oh yeah?” She giggled, prodding his two, orange-sized black balls gently with a hoof-tip. “Like here?”
Shining’s smile turned a little bit, as he nervously replied. “Y-yes… but I haven’t uh, cleaned… I mean I just came and it dripped down there so it might be a little bit… musky …”
Flurry didn’t listen to him, leaning in and burying her cute little teen-filly nose right into the soft skin between the two bulges in his sack, before taking in a deep snuffle. “Mmmm… oh, dad… ”
Shining ran a hoof through his filly’s sweaty mane. He could see her eyes fluttering and rolling with happiness. That love of his smell must be genetic - Cadence would react the exact same way… actually… maybe not even as positively as this sexy little filly.
“Dad it smells…” Shining could see Flurry’s thighs grinding against one another, her tail flagging and wagging happily as she writhed on her belly, nose buried in his sack. “...so good! ”
Shining’s head tilted back as he felt the wet heat drag over his balls. His daughter was licking his testicles. The tongue slid under and around them, seeking out the dried juices and sweat from the night’s earlier encounter.
It wrapped around the base of his cock clockwise, only being able to make it about a third of the way around before she had to reposition herself to get the rest of the way around. She giggled and flashed her pretty eyes at him as she did so - clearly impressed by her father’s thickness.
Up and up she went, leaving a slick coating of saliva around his black flesh. That same little mouth that he had heard sing nursery rhymes, that he had played ‘here comes the airplane’ with to get her to eat her food, that had kissed him innocently on the cheek… was now slurping and wrapping around his stallionhood with a clear thirst for his essence.
Flurry pulled off him with a smacking of her lips once she reached the fat ring of his medial ridge. She paused, looking up at him with her big eyes, replacing her mouth with her right hoof, pumping the bottom part of his shaft slowly. “Am I… doing it right…”
“F-fuck!” Shining groaned, his hooves clenching the bedsheets. She was clumsy, inexperienced, innocent, eager. She was perfect . “It feels so bucking good, sweetie…” His tip throbbed and pumped. Already he could feel that tightness building up in his lower gut.
“I… can see that.” Flurry grinned, realization coming across her face that she could wield that much complete control over her father. “Though I don’t see how I’m gonna fit this …” Flurry leaned in and planted a sensual kiss on his medial ring, “...in my pussy.”
“Holy, fuck !” Shining groaned. He had to close his eyes now. That kiss combined with the steady pumping was driving him crazy.
He heard chuckling, then felt the filly’s tongue quickly go back to work, dancing and tracing its way up his sex, tracing the same path, in reverse, that the thick globules of cum likely followed when he’d popped under her dress earlier that night.
Then she reached his head. Instead of repeating the ice cream cone licks she’d done earlier, she blew over the top of his head, her hot breath washing over the top in a wave. He opened his eyes to see why she’d do such a thing, just in time to see the filly spreading her jaw wide again to slip his fat cockhead between her lips.
“F-flurry!”
Shining groaned out, as his flare disappeared into her muzzle. Unlike before, she wasn’t trying to jam it down her throat, instead letting it rest in her open mouth, his obscene girth puffing out the little filly’s cheeks.
The last thing he saw before he shut his eyes again in abject pleasure was his daughter’s big beautiful eyes staring at his cock as she fellated him, pumping him with both of her hooves as she suckled his head, thirsty for his release.
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“S-sweetie…!” Shining groaned, totally at the mercy of his little filly’s actions.
She might be a novice… but she seemed to be a natural bobbing ever so slightly in time with her pumping hooves, her tongue darting and exploring his dome-shaped head, never letting him get too deep into her mouth like before, instead perfectly in range of her playful tongue.
It felt like he was in a hot furnace of wet, sticky heaven. The pumping hooves and sucking draws of his filly’s eager mouth was almost as good as Cadence’s marehood. And then she found his sweet spot.
The filly-tongue found its way to the sensitive glans under his drooling, burbling cockslit. He let out an almost feminine squeak and stiffened, a throb recoiling through his whole being… the tremor making a squirt of pre splash out of him and down his filly’s gullet.
And once she’d found it, she didn’t stop playing with it.
Tickling, swirling, suckling, darting, thrusting.
That pink tongue teased and coaxed him, all while the filly’s clenching hooves raced up and down her father’s throbbing, jerking stallionhood.
Shining felt that knot growing tighter. Tighter. Tighter! Coiling!
His balls began to throb, clenching and tightening up to his belly.
His eyes shot open and he moaned out while reaching for his daughter’s head, hoping to dislodge her from his cock. “F-f-flurry! I’m… I’m c-cumming!!!”
But his dislodging hoof was easily swatted away by the teen, her fierce eyes glowing with determination as she looked back up at him: she knew what she wanted.
She kept looking at him as the first animalistic throb sent his haunches jerking upward, a pulse that rocketed through his black shaft, thickening his flare to the size of a saucer plate in his daughter’s muzzle, lodging it against the roof of her mouth, just before the first heavy pulse fired out of his cock.
Flurry shut her lips as tightly as she could, swallowing deeply with each pulse, each heavy rope of her father’s batter spilling into her in gush after gush of virile, masculine, stud-loads.
“F-f-fuck baby! Yes!” Shining’s moan escaped from deep inside him, his eyes rolling in his head, his hooves grasping wildly as he dumped load after load into his daughter’s mouth, her cheeks filling like an obscene chipmunk: she couldn’t swallow nearly fast enough.
Cum bubbled and spurted from the side of her face, peeping out from between her lips… Shining even heard her cough and gag slightly, a bubble of cum slipping out of her left nostril as he overloaded the girl’s capacity to ingest his thick, heavy seed.
But the cough let him finally withdraw from her suckling mouth.
With a loud, smacking, *POP* he came free, still firing heavy ropes of cum.
A heavy waterfall of his white, jelly-like cum poured from her mouth - almost a whole half-pint of steaming batter that she had been unable to swallow fast enough. She drew a great breath of fresh air.
Without even thinking, he aimed his bouncing black cock at Flurry’s face, sending long, dense ribbons of stud-load over her mane, her ears, onto her back.
He was growling as he pumped his hips with his last few spasms. “Y-yeah! YEAH! F-FUCK!”
He wanted to coat her. Mark her. Make the little sex-filly his . Conquer her with the damn cum she wanted so much.
His last desperate thrusts sent a smaller trickle over her snout before a final drip slid down his shaft… and the euphoria and exhaustion caught up with him, he groaned and fell backward, bouncing with a heavy thump against the soft cushion of the bed, gasping and sweating.
He was there for a moment, his thoughts a jumble of chaos before they began to sort themselves out.
What had he just done!? He’d facefucked his little girl! Before spraying her down like she was some slutty mare in heat? Would she ever forgive him? What did she even think of him right n-”
His worries were instantly interrupted by the feel of a hoof on his tired, still-hard stallion hood, gently massaging him… before the soft bouncing fall of the filly as she fell down next to him, on his left arm, lying side by side and looking into his face with a smile.
“I guess I’m pretty amazing too, huh?” Flurry giggled, wiping some of his cum out of her bangs.
Shining stared dumbfounded for a second… before he laughed as well.
“Nope - you’re incredible , baby.”
Flurry’s eyes narrowed slightly, a naughty smile crossing her lips. “So… what are we gonna do on the bed, dad?”
Shining grinned back.
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by 8 points!
Currently the meter is 34.2737 / 10
WARNING!!!!
1) Flip her over and rut her. Flurry’s looking a little naughty… time to show her who daddy is. She’s primed and ready to be mounted and dominated… pump a load into her with our big throbbing stallionhood like a true stud… once she’s plugged up with daddy-batter… maybe we can do things a bit more sensual..
2)Start slow with some passionate missionary style sex. Sure it’s not the norm for ponies, but maybe some slow face-to-face eye contact, while we make love to Flurry, will be sweet and lovely for the teen’s first time. After we’ve taken her to snuggle town for a bit if we have anything left we can try a different position.
3) Flurry was looking pretty confident. Maybe we should let HER ride? Get her to hop on top and see how far down daddy’s pole she can slide. Let’s let her ride us cow-girl style!
4) You know - that tight little tailhole looked pretty inviting. Sure it’s really only for more advanced sexual techniques… but maybe Flurry really likes butt-stuff? With a little tongue work and some magical stretching… we could probably even fit in there!
5)End the evening. This is good for now. Flurry’s happy. You can go rub one out later on your own. Let’s just tuck the filly in and let her sleep. You don’t want to take things too far! (THIS ENDS THE FIC)
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE
Vote for your choice! Unlike usual, these scenes are going to come rapid-fire so vote quickly! I'll announce in the comments once the poll is closed - it may only be 50 votes or it may be more or less!
The art in the intentionally broken link was from pokefound - an awesome artist! Not used with permission, hopefully he doesn't mind (if he does I'll remove).
A true CHOOSE YOUR OWN CLOPVENTURE! Just like in your hentai games!
Sorry for the really really late start. I've had family over for the past two days - no time to write AT ALL.
As it stands, it might be one or two scenes a day, max... not the rapid fire I'd hoped for... sorry!
I'm still thinking we'll probably get through three, or four scenes... otherwise poor Shining and Flurry will probably start to get sore! Don't think you're gonna get to do everything on the list... eventually, your only option will be to shut it down!
And feel free, as always, to suggest different ideas for what should happen next... now your comments may really get incorporated!
You guys are awesome and I hope this shows just how awesome I think you guys are: I'm trusting YOU with the ultimate clop-scene! The money-shots! They're yours !
You get to choose!
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
BEST ENDING ACHIEVED: GIGANUT
(167 votes - 71%) Utilize the dangerous stamina boosting vitality spell!!
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by 122.5 points!
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Shining pushed himself up onto one hoof with a wry grin. He was still buried in his daughter, his cockhead pressing against the entrance to her womb - apparently more than enough to sate the little filly.
But he knew he could give her more.
“It was amazing, baby… but I’m not done yet.” He summoned up all of the magical energy he could muster, a blue aura of considerable energy pulsing up from his cutie-mark, wrapping around his horn in a field of considerable thaumic energy.
“D-dad?” Flurry groaned, feeling the magic pulsing around her. She shifted, her insides coiling around her father as she did so.
Shining felt the spell - completely ready to cast… it felt even more powerful, more potent than the last time he had dared to use it, all those years ago. There was a small moment of doubt in his mind about whether he should release the pent up spell… but it quickly passed when he felt his little filly clench on his still-hard member.
He cast it. Starswirl’s Vanquishing Vanguard of Vaunted Virile Vastness.
The blue glow rushed under his chest, swirling around his lower abdomen and then into his groin. He felt a warmth building there - then a heat… a burning fiery flame .
It pulsed into his shaft, making his veins pop out and become more vascular, throbbing with menacing thickness as they pumped potent magic-laden stallion blood into his shaft causing it to swell and lengthen inside his little girl.
“D-d-daddy...!?” Flurry groaned her body stiffening with alarm as the penis inside her thickened and lengthened beyond its already monstrous state - expanding a full inch and cramming itself against the entrance to her womb.
“F-fuck! F-flurry!” Shining groaned through clenched teeth. “H-hang on!” Shining resumed his position from moments earlier, his two hooves on either side of his daughter’s sweaty mane, dug into the bed… as the expansion of his cock pushed him into Flurry’s cervix.
Even crazier - he felt his balls sag, falling away from his body… felt the warmth sending the factories inside them into overdrive, felt the prostatic glands inside him refilling and swelling. Within mere moments the heavy black sack was back in its former glory - as full and swinging as they had been at the beginning of the evening.
Starswirl was a horny old genius - he had to remember to send the guy a thank you card.
Fuck Flurry felt amazing right now - what had already seemed like an indescribable experience mere moments before seemed like a dull reflection of what he currently felt. And it wasn’t just the additional tightness from his size - every nerve ending, every pleasure spot, every twitch and motion was heightened in his perception. His mind was blurring with the sensation of pleasure. Thoughts were becoming hazy… sapient and rational decisions evaporating in clouds of magical-dopamine… burning away and leaving only the raw instinct of his more ancient, feral stallion-mind.
‘I’vE gOt to… be carefuLllL tO fUcK my litTle broOdMare - daughter, she’s so smAlL and tIgHT… ” His chain of thoughts flipped between concerned father and desperate stud… but it seemed suddenly extremely necessary to cram more of his newfound girth into the struggling, moaning girl.
His hips agreed - happy that the halting nervousness was giving way to the lustful instinct… and they drove forward.
“Oh - OH, D-DAD!!!” Flurry’s body pushed up off the bed in shock as the huge, flared cock started to press into her needy cervix, magical blue tendrils assisting the tiny aperture in sliding open and permitting her father to slide into her deepest of sanctuaries. “W-wait!”
She leaned forward, instinctively moving away from the huge force threatening to batter into her very soul. She wanted him there - badly… but it was so sudden, so forceful .
Shining felt his brood-filly moving away from him, and his feral reaction was instant. She needed to be bred . It was for her own good. She needed this! His hooves slid to Flurry’s upper back, right over the spot between her outstretched wings, the middle of her shoulder blades… and he pressed down with force, pinning her into the bed and sticking her ass up in the air… with full leverage to take his thrusts.
And for the first time that night… he pulled his hips back and then drove them forward.
The passionate kisses between Flurry’s womb and Shining’s cockslit were no more. He wasn’t just touching the essence of her femininity… he was entering it… capturing it...
His cockhead slid deep into her womb, driving a further four inches into his little teen filly’s cunt… leaving only an inch of terrifyingly thick cock between her drooling plot and his abdomen.
Flurry’s pupils sparkled, rolling over and turning heart-shaped, her cutie-mark exploding in color and her whole being shaking and convulsing… she’d orgasmed several times that night already… but this wasn’t just an orgasm of the body or even of the mind… this was a climax of her very soul .
Shining felt little - there was only so much that his senses could process, and they had long since been overloaded. He dimly registered the wracking, vise-like contractions around his huge member as he finished his thrust, driving the bell-end of his cock all the way against the far wall of Flurry’s womb.
But he did notice her horn glowing a bright, throbbing pink - flashing with magical energy so powerfully that it almost hurt to look at. Even worse - a second stream of pink energy shot out from the direction of the entrance way.
His left ear flicked slightly toward a sound, which he could barely hear over the humming, throbbing power. “Shining! I’m using all my power to control her output, hurry up an-”
This glow was annoying - the animalistic instinct of Shining groaned. He just wanted to rut the hell out of his broodmare. This stupid thing was too bright.
Keeping one hoof planted firmly on his filly’s back to pin her in place, he used his other hoof to pull her mane back, making the orgasmically screaming mare tilt her head up… moving her horn right into range of his mouth.
*GULP*
“N-no! That’s my energy and hers!” The strange whinnies and nickers of unintelligible language shouted from the doorway.
But immediately the light was gone… in its place, the blue from his horn surged, sparkling and sending static-electricity dancing across the room. The blue glow around his balls throbbed and thrummed… and he felt his two fat orbs grow, sinking in their heavy pouch as they expanded from the size of large eggs to that of a grapefruit.
He felt the various plumbing and prostatic glands inside him swell, pressing uncomfortably against his internal organs.
He felt his massive cock strain and stretch - pulling at the very skin that surrounded it, tearing through the protective barrier he had cast earlier, as he grew another inch inside his brood-filly’s body.
But most of all he felt… the desire .
Releasing the pink horn, he whinnied loudly, snorting and stomping… then took a mouthful of the filly’s thrashing tail, yanking it to find every possible bit of purchase that he could… before he began to buck .
Hard.
He pulled back, as far as his hips could go, pulling the delicate and obscenely stretched filly-snatch backward as he did so until the lips were finally forced to let his length slide from her carnal furnace, her whole body prevented from sliding backward by his powerful, pinning muscles. He slid four, five, six inches out of her… before not being able to draw back any further…
Then he used all his strength to drive back into her…
His heavy, massive balls swung forward, slamming against the filly’s plot like two massive wrecking balls, the slick black skin sending juices splattering everywhere as it impacted the filly’s behind with an audible -
*PLAP*
He smashed into the far end of the filly’s womb, driving down with his weight into her, slamming her into the bed as she groaned out, air being driven from her lungs and making her squeak like a pet’s toy as he finished his first stroke, her head still thrown back, tongue rolling out of her mouth as her heart-shaped pupils flared with each impact.
“DAhD!”
But he wasn’t done. Not even close. With an increasing tempo, he began to repeat the motion. Pounding his daughter with heavy, rapid strokes, twice every second… filling the room with the sounds of an obscene metronome.
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
He’d driven her hips up into the edge of the bed now, her hooves fully off the floor, lifted by the force of his impacts, the two dripping wet hooves kicking idly in the air pathetically as she was dominated by the larger, bucking stud fucking her.
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAhD!” DAhD!” “DAhDeeeeeee!”
Flurry groaned out a staccato moan, her clit throbbing and winking as she roiled suddenly, her pussy clenching and spreading - her body instinctively submitting to the alpha-stud… doing everything it could to take all of him in.
And then it happened.
The last inch of Shining slipped into her. Whether the filly’s womb shifted forward… or some other magically-induced event occurred is a question for the historians… but Shining’s spear, his monstrous log of horsecock fully hilted in his daughter - her swollen labia finally kissing the base of her precious daddy’s dick.
But as soon as it touched… it was pulled back.
Shining wasn’t done.
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAhD!”
*PLAP* “DAh!”
*PLAP* “Duh!”
*PLAP* “Unh!”
*PLAP* “Uh!”
*PLAP*
*PLAP*
Flurry had gone silent, unable to muster any spare air for her instinctive groans - her mind boiling as it struggled for oxygen, overheating in a sea of magical and hormonal pleasure.
The Flurry Meter… was broken .
*PLAP*
*PLAP*
As the spasming filly body finally began to relax around him, reaching a state of pure ecstatic release… Shining felt his own meter begin to break.
With his last ounce of strength before he was lost to the inevitable, crashing orgasm, he drove forward - slamming his hilt as deep as possible, sliding his broodfilly along the bedtop.
When he was younger, Shining’s first orgasm had been a powerful one - the sudden pounding fear… the painful, aching knot… the rush of excitement… and then the release. Like a kitchen faucet he’d burst forth - barely having enough time to enjoy his spurting fountain before his mother embarrassingly opened the door and interrupted him… but still… all other ejaculations were measured off of that event.
This.
This was not a faucet.
This was an emergency dam release .
The painful knot in his guts that had been driving his hips so insistently snapped. He could feel his flare spread to the bursting point, digging its knobby ridges into Flurry’s tender uterine wall, embedding itself firmly in preparation of the flood to come.
His heavy balls clenched and shot to his groin. A noticeable clenching bulge raced down his tremendous shaft squeezing past his Filly’s tight pink opening and down her love tunnel… deep into her body… before erupting out of his cockslit.
“Guhhhhh! Raaaaaaaagh!” Shining whinnied out as the first steaming blast pumped out of him.
Just the release of such a huge dollop of thick, glue-like batter from his urethra, shooting a cup’s worth of virile semen in the first jerking pump, would have been enough sensation to make any mere stallion pass out… let alone the ridiculous release of pleasure that fried his synapses.
But the next pump was even bigger - blasting from him like an unkinked garden hose, scarcely tapering before being followed by the next pump.
And the next.
His hips quivered and jerked with each pulse, as the tight knot in his body slowly unwound, the magical buildup of semen inside him emptying out into his filly.
Another blast. Sloshing and burbling inside his broodfilly’s sex-oven, boiling upwards as the thick, virile cream engulfed his member and filled her up.
All she could do was mewl and moan - her body still lost in a sea of pleasure, her filly-cunt calmly milking her daddy’s pulsing cock, coaxing it to unload entirely.
Another blast, and another.
Flurry’s womb was stuffed full now, the pressure of the expelled fluid having no place to escape - the fat flare had plugged her womb… and now the pressure of the thick ropes of his very fertile seed pushed her belly outwards
Another clenching shot - and another!
Shining’s ass-cheeks were aching from the clenching drives his orgasm was demanding of them. But there was nothing he could do - he kept filling Flurry, his tightness slowly unwinding inside him, melting away.
The filly’s belly was swollen now… a bulge having appeared in her lower abdomen as her father’s ridiculous amount of ejaculate throbbed into her.
More! More!
The filly’s belly strained outward, her belly-button popping from an innie to an outie, as she began to look like she was four months into a pregnancy…
Shining was unable to notice the pink strand of energy from the doorway slither out, touching Flurry’s expanding belly - but he did feel a warm, thaumic sensation over his aching, spurting flare, shrinking it - compressing it ever so slightly.
Again! Again!
Suddenly there was a rushing sensation. He popped out of the filly’s womb with a rush, his flare slipping past the milking confines of her cervix… and no clenching, coaxing grip could withstand the pressure that had built up inside her poor baby-factory.
Shining felt himself forced backward, slipping out as a rush of his own semen pushed his erect cock out of his daughter.
*POP! SCHLORP!*
The sound filled the room as Shining fell backward onto his ass, a fire-hydrant stream of thick white cum flowing in an impossible waterfall from Flurry’s rapidly shrinking vaginal opening.
He weakly tried to steady himself, as his big black rod still fired off spurt after spurt, messily flying up into the air - like an obscene fountain… hanging there for a moment before raining down on his writhing daughter in thick splats, painting the whole bed.
Empty! Empty!
Shining felt his tension completely unwound, his balls completely emptied… his sexual glands shrinking and decreasing…
But still he kept firing.
Not done! Not done!
Gooey cream continued to rain down on Flurry, frosting her with good, dripping off her wings, her tail, her ass, her bed, her floor… her ceiling … in messy, thick strands of hanging batter.
Shining felt his eyes rolling back as his body started to sag - his muscles shrinking, his fat deposits converting, his body dehydrating… everything converting into reproductive fluids - still firing out of his cock, even as it shrank in size, blasting out in heavy streams of slinging white slime.
“SHINEY! Shiney you HAVE TO STOP! STOP!” A confused nickering pink horse had appeared in front of him. Shaking him - she didn’t seem to be concerned at all with the fat ropes landing across her face as she tried to hold his jerking cock, trying to plug it with her hoof with little success. “DAMMIT!”
The strange pink horse leaned forward and engulfed his horn in her mouth. A moment later a bright pink flash filled the room, and she fell backward, wings fully extended and her tongue hanging out of her mouth. She landed with a splash in the flood of his semen, which coated even pink’s body, now… as she drooled happily, a leg kicking and twitching in the air, her mare parts flashing and parting - winking pink through the white creaming frosting that covered it.
But it didn’t matter.
He’d stopped .
Finally.
With blissful and complete nirvana across his dopey face, Shining Armor fell backward… having completed the only known GIGA-NUT ever recorded in the history of Equestria.
Five Months Later…
“Hey, sweetie!” Shining smiled, nuzzling his daughter as she walked into the palace’s private living room. “Careful there!”
“I got it, daddy…” Flurry grinned, steadying her fairly large bump with one wing as she pressed through the doorway. “Skyla’s getting pretty big, but I can still manage her.” The sixteen-year-old contentedly patted her growing lower belly, nestled above her swollen teats. With a pacific smile, she looked up at her father… and her baby’s father… her entire face beaming with love.
“Skyla!?” Shining Armor’s eyes shot open in delight. “Does this mean that it’s a-”
“No. Or at least, I don’t know yet.” Flurry grinned as she looked down at her swell. “I’ve got a connection - but I can’t quite feel if the baby is a boy or a girl yet.”
“Ah…” Shining grinned. “So if you’re naming the girl Skyla… does that mean you’ll name a boy Stormageddo-”
“No. ” Flurry deadpanned at her father. “Skyla is a beautiful name. Stormageddon is just… no .”
“Awww.”
“Still… I’m a little sad to be giving the baby up, though.” Flurry sighed, patting herself. “I really appreciate Aunt Twilight researching precision teleportation to the extent that she can move Skyla into mom… but - I can already feel the connection with the foal’s soul inside me.”
“Well…” Shining sighed giving his daughter another nuzzle. “You know it’s for the best… you’ve got to finish schooling… and you always loved your athletics so much… the bump is just going to get bigger and bigger now.” Shining hopped up and sat on the comfortable sofa that sat in the middle of the cozy room, stretching his legs out and sinking into the cushions.
Flurry sagged a bit. “I guess.” She grinned and hopped up onto her father’s lap, rolling over on her belly, not even having to ask her dad to give her belly rubs. She closed her eyes and happily cooed as Shining spoiled her, gently rubbing her fluffy floof before caressing her belly.
“Still - a part of me thinks that mom’s insisting on me doing the teleport-transplant just so she can have an excuse for that belly she’s getting.” Flurry quickly squeaked before chewing her lip and guiltily avoiding her father’s glaring eyes.
“Flurry Heart.” Shining sternly scolded. “Your mom has been working extra hard in the gym and dieting really diligently to prepare for the procedure. She wants to be in the best shape possible.”
“I know.” Flurry rolled her eyes. “But you can’t deny she’s gotten a little pudgy daddy…” A naughty grin crossed her face. “...although maybe you like your mares a little pudgy? I noticed you gave mom extra attention at our weekly ‘special-time’ session last night… you almost knocked me off the bed!” She booped his testicles playfully.
“Flurry!” Shining blushed, coughing. He always tried to keep the usual father-daughter dynamic outside of the trio’s regular weekly sessions… but his daughter and wife loved teasing him to no end about his insistence on being a normal family out of the bedroom - apparently it was just ‘too much fun’ to goose him and grope him and see his reactions. “I… I only went… harder with your mom because of the baby, that’s all…”
“Uh-huh… if you s-”
*POP*
A flash of light blinded them both momentarily. When their vision cleared, Twilight Sparkle and Cadence stood across from them.
“Twily!” Shining smiled.
“Aunt-Twi!” Flurry tottered up from the couch, embracing her beloved aunt.
“Hey, you two!” Twilight grinned. “All rested up from last night’s fun? Cadence said that it was a pretty intense session.”
Shining blushed red and eyed his wife with a frown. “Y-you… you told Twilight!?”
Cadence looked at him deadpan. “Shiney… you told her, the day after it happened … when she had to use half her magic to re-inflate you.”
Shining stomped a hoof. “I mean… you told her that we’re still … having… family-time special-sessions !? She’s my little sister! What’s she gonna think!?”
“Oh, don’t worry, don’t worry!” Twilight laughed, blushing slightly. “I… uh… I’m… all in favor of these bonding sessions…” The alicorn stammered slightly, her usual poise and regality replaced with the awkward filly Shining had known in his youth, as she carefully inspected the circle her hoof was drawing on the floor.
“Uh-huh?” Shining tilted his head.
Cadence suddenly nudged Twilight with an elbow and coughed.
“Huh? Oh… yeah… actually… I was thinking it might be worth a research paper… confidential and anonymized of course.” Twilight looked up hopefully. “We’d need an observer to watch the sensual family bonds being established… up close .” Twilight meekly looked up at her brother, ears splayed back, eyes twinkling with hope.
Shining looked at his blushing sister, considering. “Sure… I guess… but you know my writing sucks - and I’ve never even written anything with a proper bibliography before… would I submit it to you?”
Flurry and Cadence smacked each smacked a hoof to their face in unison.
“Wh-what? N-no…” Twilight twitched. “I… meant… no… AUGH!”
Cadence sighed and took Twilight by her shoulders. “Next time, Twilight, we’ll get him next time.”
“Get who?” Shining chuckled, looking around him.
“Dad, you’re a goddamn moron.” Flurry blinked.
“What? No, I’m not!”
Cadence chuckled and nodded. “You are most definitely a goddamn moron.” Twilight nodded primly at the assertion.
“H-hey… why are you mares always bullying me?” Shining slumped. He felt a nuzzle come under his neck, pressing his head back up to an upright position. Flurry grinned at him.
“Hey daddy, if being a goddamn moron got you three of the most beautiful mares in Equestria… maybe being oblivious isn’t so bad a strategy after all.”
“Three? You mean two.”
“Anyway,” Twilight groaned, rolling her eyes. “I’m ready to do the transfer, and I’ve got to get back to day-court as quickly as possible.”
Shining tilted his head. “As quickly as possible? Won’t you need hours of charging up?”
“No.”
“Won’t you need to get Flurry and Cadence in a perfectly motionless, exactly calibrated position?”
“Nope.”
“Won’t they both need weeks of post-operative monitoring for complications?”
“Nuh-uh.”
“Won’t you need to insert a speculum into Cadence and inflate her uterus with a balloon or something so that the baby won’t appear inside her intestines and make her explode like that scene from Alien: Maresurrection?”
“Shining!”
“Dad!”
“Shiny!”
“But… how?” The nervous father and father-father to be asked.
“Magic, of course!” Twilight grinned. “I’ve perfected the spell-work… all I have to do is release the energy I’ve already charged up…” Twilight’s horn began to glow and pulse. “...and we’re done !”
The horn flashed and fizzled, little sparks tinkling down to the crystal floor and extinguishing with hissing squeaks.
Nopony moved.
Cadence and FLurry cautiously looked at their bellies, both unchanged, then looked back up at Twilight.
Shining coughed. “Should I… should I get a speculum?”
“I don’t understand!” Twilight’s wings extended in frustration. “The spell is literally foolproof - even you could cast it!” She pointed a hoof at her brother.
“Hey!” Shining stuck his tongue out at her. “Don’t get snarky just ‘cuz you messed up a spell.”
Twilight ignored him. “The only thing that could explain it is... “ She turned to Cadence her eyes opening wider, “...is if the womb… is already occupied .”
Cadence and Flurry’s jaws dropped open.
“The… the weight…” Cadence looked down at her belly, not as big as her daughter’s bump, but still noticeable.
“Mom!” Flurry squee’d, covering her mouth. “I’m so happy - I’ll get to carry daddy’s little Stormaggedon or Skyla to term!” She planted a big kiss on her father’s cheek. “I love this family!”
Cadence still looked like she was processing everything. “From… the… puddle? It was that potent?”
“Congratulations Cadence!” Twilight squeaked, engulfing her sister-in-law in a happy hug.
Flurry quickly crossed over, wrapping her mother in another big hug. “Mom! I love you so much!” The mess of limbs and alicorn wings wrapped the three happy mares together.
“Wait…” Shining tapped his chin, interrupting the little celebration. “...you’re saying that you three confused Cadence being pregnant with her getting fat ?” He threw his head back and let out a laugh. “Hah! Now who’s the goddamn morons?”
Three angry mares turned on him, their faces glowing with anger, electricity sparking from their horns. Spells charging up from the aggrieved wife, the teased daughter, and the embarrassed little sister - primed to destroy the foolish stallion.
As one, they answered.
“You are.”
The scream could be heard from Canterlot’s throne room. Prompting Celestia and Luna to nod at one another over their tea-cups.
Just as planned.
~End~
Last poll and this one is just for me.
Last month I entered a fic into the Mother’s Day Incest Contest. I got really worked up over it and a bit disappointed when it didn’t do very well. After that experience, I was considering not entering into any contests ever again.
But I really trust you readers: do you I should enter this fic into the Father’s Incest Monthly Contest:?
1) Heck yeah, enter! I had a lot of fun reading your fic and think that it is good enough to be a contender!
2)Ehhh… probably best not to enter this one. It isn’t contest-grade, sorry!
I’ll honor the crowd’s decision as to whether to go in or not.
Author's Note
Is it good enough to enter into the contest? That's your call.
STRAW POLL HERE!
Well, guys, this has been an insane journey over the last month.
I started this thing thinking - hey, here's a fun concept from Starscribe's style, let's give it a whirl and write a few short poll-driven chapters... 8,000 words max .
Annnnnd... I have now written my longest story on fimfiction.
That's because of you . I loved hearing your comments, seeing your votes, and reading how excited and involved you all were.
Please, please please please please leave me a comment letting me know your experience. It really keeps me writing! I can't wait to read about your journey in the comments below!
That said, this is a dangerously addictive writing style. I'm switching back to a more conventional style for my next fic, slated for July (can you say, Trixie?)
This style is a double-edged sword... it is fantastic because of how much enjoyment I get from writing it, and how much interaction I get with all of you!
It sucks because the update system on Fimfic means fewer people see the story after the initial post, as updates get pushed out of featured very quickly. I don't care about stats or popularity in this case... I just care about more people seeing the story so that the community participating can be large!
Don't fret though... I'm definitely going to do this type of story again! (Probably with Space Ponyo!)
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
READ THIS FIRST:
Hey Readers! This is a really quick note to explain how this story works, and how you can participate! You will help Shining Armor in his quest to win back the love of his teenage daughter before the end of the month (and the end of the contest).
At the end of each chapter will be a number of choices which you, the reader, will be able to vote on in a strawpoll. Once a sufficient number of votes have been received, I'll proceed to write the next quick chapter showing the results of your choices, and creating all new avenues for you to chase.
Your speculation and suggestions in the comments can help too!
Let's all try to get Shining Armor to successfully reconnect with his daughter before the end of June!
“You’re firing me!?”
The only thing lower than the sinking feeling in Shining Armor’s stomach was his lower jaw, which nearly touched the floor as he stared in disbelief at his longtime employer.
“Not at all! Not at all!” Princess Celestia shook her head. “You really mustn’t jump to conclusions…”
“I was the one who wanted to fire you.” Luna sniffed, not moving even a single muscle as she sat with a deadpan expression next to her sister’s throne. “Your replacement of the alarm-swans with alarm-frogs was the final straw for me.”
Shining gesticulated with his hooves frantically. “B-but they leave less of a mess… and they keep the mosquito population down in the summertime and-”
A particularly wart-covered bullfrog hopped onto Princess Luna’s head, perfectly perched against her silver crown. Already well-accustomed to such events, Luna didn’t even flinch, simply maintaining her deadpan stare at the flustered captain of the guard.
“It’s a moot point anyway Prince Shining Armor.” Celestia sighed. “We are not firing you… merely suggesting that you take some time to be with your family. The kingdom has been safe under the protection of your sister for nearly a decade. Surely you have considered retiremen-”
“Uh-uh… nope! No way!” Shining Armor puffed his chest out. He’d been the leader of his country’s military force for so long that it was a part of him. Overseeing the new recruits, organizing the defense of Equestria, being a leader of the best and brightest stallions and mares on the planet was not something somepony could just… step away from. Certainly not while he was in the best shape of his life! “You can’t ask me to turn in my sword and shield!”
“A sabbatical then…” Celestia sighed.
Shining Armor’s eyebrows pinched together and he cocked his head in confusion. His brain was having trouble parsing the unfamiliar word. “I mean… I like heavy metal Princess, but what does Rockhoof’s band have to do with this?”
“Not Rainbow Sabbath… a sabbatical .” Celestia groaned, rubbing her temple. “A short break from your career to take care of other things… say… six moons?”
“Oh.” Shining chewed his cheek, running the idea through his head. “I… could do that… but can I ask... why ?”
Celestia stood up and walked down from the dais, extending a friendly wing. He’d been her captain for so many years and though he’d gotten a few chewing-out sessions, usually after some super-villain found yet another way to subvert all of his carefully planned defenses, she’d never suggested he take time off.
“I’m concerned about your family, Shining.” Celestia smiled. “I worry that I am depriving my niece and grand-niece of your steady and reassuring hoof. It is selfish of me to keep you here when the nation is experiencing such a stretch of peace.”
Shining’s shoulders slumped. It was the one reason that he had trouble arguing against. He constantly felt guilty about how much time he spent away from his wife and daughter. The commute from the Crystal Empire to Canterlot took the better part of a day, and though he dutifully made it at the beginning and end of every week to spend weekends in the north… there were so many family dinners, playful afternoons, snuggling evenings… that he had surely missed out on.
“Go be with them Shining. Be with Cadence.” Celestia had calmly turned him around with her wing, directing him toward the door to her throne room. “But more importantly, be with Flurry Heart. She needs you!”
Shining sadly started to trot toward the door, hanging his head. But the Princess lifted his chin up with one of her hooves and stared into his eyes with the fierce, burning energy that he had long known her to possess.
“Captain, make no mistake. ‘Tis a far more difficult and noble task to be a great father than to micromanage a well-maintained army at peace.” Celestia nodded. “My order is not without reason: your daughter’s upbringing could impact the fate of Equestria for untold generations - I want that childhood to be filled with as much love and affection as possible.”
Shining stiffened slightly. He hadn’t really thought of it that way. This was almost like… a mission! A challenge! He wasn’t failing the Princess or his country - he was helping them! And even better, he could help his daughter too! He nodded to the Princess and saluted, his pride restored.
“We’ll still be here when she is grown, Shining Armor.” Celestia smiled, “Don’t worry!”
“Yes. Don’t.” Luna deadpanned, the frog on her crown croaking.
Shining Armor stopped by his home before heading back to the train station.
The small flame of enthusiasm that had started to grow in his breast upon leaving the throne room was in danger of being snuffed out entirely. While walking through the paved streets of Canterlot, thinking about how best to approach his new ‘mission’ he started to remember just how soured his relationship with young flurry heart had become.
Thinking back, it was quite hard to place a hoof on just when his little girl had grown up. She’d been such an ‘energetic’ little foal, sure… always blowing up the castle playrooms when she threw a tantrum… but other than that, she was really a sweet little child, who had lots of love for her aunt, mother… and for her father.
That bond had lasted into her toddler and grade school years. Shining smiled as he replayed some of his favorite memories: wrestling with little Flurry Heart playfully out in the lush springtime fields of the Crystal Empire. The way she’d drawn him crayon-scratches and made him little arts and crafts figurines - each one a treasure that he had proudly displayed to the chagrin of all his subordinates.
He missed his little Flurry, her bright cheerful smile. Her pure, innocent and unembarrassed love for her papa. At some point, his little girl had grown up.
It had happened so quickly - too quickly.
All of a sudden, his goofy jokes were only met with eye-rolls and scoffs. His attempts to start impromptu tickle-fights got him a death stare that could have made a cockatrice jealous. Any outing with her quickly resulted in the teen pulling out her phone and treating him with about as much attention as a fica plant.
And it wasn’t that Flurry Heart was a bad teenager. Sure, she was what you would normally expect from your average fifteen-year-old filly: angsty and emotional, convinced that at her young age she’d already solved the mysteries of the universe… but she was not a bad apple. She still got along great with her mother: the two mares in his life were as close as sisters - giggling and sharing heart to heart chats all the time.
Every attempt he made to participate resulted in cold rebuffs from his daughter and sympathetic shrugs from his wife. He definitely felt left out.
That’s why all he could do was turn to his own father for advice. Maybe Night Light would know what to do? With a deep breath, Shining walked into his childhood home, closing the door behind him.
“Hello?”
“Well hey there! Come on in - what’s the matter?” Night Light waved at him from his study. “You’ve got the look of a stallion with the weight of Equus on his withers.” Night Light chuckled, putting down his pipe. “Want me to get your mom?”
“No, Dad…” Shining slumped into the comfy armchair opposite his father’s beaten-up old recliner. “I wanted to talk to you, actually. I’m… I’m lost.”
“Well hey there Lost, I’m Night Light.”
‘Heh, good one! ’ Shining thought with a grin - he wondered why he’d never appreciated his father’s brand of humor when he was younger. “I’ll remember that one, pop. But I wanted to ask your advice - I’m heading back to the Crystal Empire for a few moons to be with the family.”
“Oh great!” Night Light smiled, closing his book. “Velvet and I have been meaning to get out there more often to see our grand-daughter, this will be a great excuse to make more trips.”
“Well that’s the thing Dad, it’s Flurry Heart.” Shining grunted. Seeing his father’s face shift into one of concern he quickly followed up his statement. “Oh, nothing’s wrong… she’s totally fine… I’m not going back because she’s sick or anything like that. If anything it’s something wrong with me. ”
Night Light removed his reading spectacles in his somber, fatherly way. Shining hoped that one day he’d be able to act with half as much gravitas as his father seemed able to do. “Tell me what’s up.”
“Dad… did you ever… have trouble with Twilight?”
“Well, your mother was a hoofful and a half to handle in bed when we first m-”
“LALALALA CAN’T HEAR YOU!” Shining shouted, blocking his ears and shaking his head. “No! First off, way way too much information Dad… second I was asking about Twilight Sparkle , your daughter.”
The mischievous older stallion didn’t even miss a beat. “Well, she wasn’t as much trouble in bed, but I-”
“DAD!” Shining stomped his hoof. “That’s gross - can you stop kidding around? I’m being serious here! Flurry has become a teenager, and it’s like she’s an entirely different pony! You always had such a good relationship with Twily… but I feel like I can’t relate to her at all… and I have no idea how to reconnect with her. I-I just want my little girl back.”
Night Light stood up and strode over to his son, placing a hoof on his shoulder. “Hey kid, she’s still your little girl. Always will be, no matter what. That’s what it means to be a dad.”
Night Light chuckled and turned away from Shining, picking up an old photo that rested in a copper frame on one of his bookshelves. In it was a family portrait from many years back, the two proud parents standing next to Shining still in his fresh cadet uniform from the day he’d entered the academy. Off to one side was a disinterested looking teenage Twilight, her nose buried in a book.
“You may remember things differently Shining, but your little sister was quite an independent teenager herself.” He chuckled. “I remember when going star-spotting with her poppa suddenly became far less important than reading a book about the constellations instead. Nearly broke my heart.”
“So… what did you do?”
Night Light considered for a few moments, deep in thought. His eyes flashed to his son then back to the picture in his hooves a few time. It seemed to Shining like he was considering how much he should say, rather than how to say it. “Nothing.”
“Nothing?”
“Well…” Night Light sighed, “I did a lot of stupid things. Tried to pull her out of her shell. Tried to treat her like a kid. Then to treat her like an adult. I got mad, I got sad, I tried everything .” He chuckled. “In the end, it was her who came back to me.”
“I don’t understand.”
“Son, there is no way to understand teenage fillies.” Night Light laughed, mussing his son’s hair. “They’re a little girl wrapped up in a woman, mixed with a conundrum and befuddled by puberty.”
“Puberty!?” Shining groaned. He did not want to think about little Flurry Heart going through… that .
“Sure.” Night Light laughed. “Suddenly all that affection is mixed up with all sorts of biology and hormones… things can get confusing for them.” He scratched the back of his head, pausing again in consideration. “If Flurry is anything like your little sister was, she still loves you… maybe more than you know . You just have to trust her to come back to you.”
Shining grimaced. It wasn’t really an easy answer to hear. He was a stallion of action. “B-but…”
“No buts, kid… well…” Night Light paused again, a vacant gaze crossing his face. “Some butts.”
“Huh?”
Night Light quickly coughed and walked back toward his pipe and spectacles. “Trust me Shining… if Flurry Heart is anything like your little sister - just let her do her thing… and she’ll come to daddy.” He coughed. “I mean come back to daddy.”
Shining nodded, standing up. “I think I hear you, pop. I just have to clear the way of any obstacles, and my little girl will find her way back to me, and I can be her dad again.”
“Mmm.” Night Light grunted, though his eyes lingered on the photo he held in his hoof, his mind clearly someplace else.
“Well, I’m off!” Shining trotted toward the door. “I have to catch the night train to get back home by tomorrow. Tell mom I love her and come to visit soon… and Dad?”
“Yes?” Night Light looked up his attention back on his son, his breath drawing in a small puff of smoke from his pipe.
“Please don’t joke about you and Twilight having trouble in bed… that’s just… ick .” Shining stuck his tongue out with disgust. “I know it was just a dad-joke but… mom and Twily would kick your flank.” He chuckled and gave a wink, closing the front door behind him.
Night Light shook his head, blowing smoke out of his clenched teeth and clicking his tongue. “Shining Armor you poor, oblivious, goddamn moron. Who said I was joking?”
The train ride has been uneventful.
Unfortunately, the welcome home had been even more uneventful. He’d arrived just around supper time, and though Cadence had showered him with affection and concern, pampering him as she always did when he came back and making him feel like the king of a castle (which, to be fair, was not far from the actual truth)... Flurry had given him a cold shrug and had even asked why she should accept his proferred hug, as this was the exact same as when he’d returned home from work the previous week.
The next half-hour had been a blur.
Shining had asked for dinner to be served and even offered to Flurry to get her favorite pizza. But the plan to resume conversation over the family dinner table was quickly scuttled by the young teen-filly taking her meal back to her room.
It was not the start he’d been looking for.
Cadence had given him a sympathetic smile. “She’s studying for a test at school tomorrow. And she’s feeling a bit grumpy about her upcoming birthday.”
Her birthday! Shining slammed one hoof into another, it was only a month away! She’d be turning sixteen. A critical year for any young filly, a chance for her to really move into adulthood. He had to win her back over by then. It was critical! The fate of Equestria’s future might depend on his actions over the next month!
“Uh oh.” Cadence sighed, cleaning up the empty pizza boxes herself, waving away the overly helpful servants. “I know that look. Just what are you scheming Shining Armor?”
“Nothing!” Shining Armor sat stock upright, trying and failing to look casual.
“Yeah, right.” Cadence was always able to see right through him. “Just, don’t annoy Flurry heart too much with whatever you’re planning, OK? Despite how she acts around you, she’s sensitive Shining.”
“O-oh… OK.”
“I mean it. No stupid Shining Armor strategies.” Cadence crossed her arms and looked at him with a skeptical frown. “No alarm-swan type plans. Understood?”
:”Wh-what? Of course!” Shining laughed. “I… I was actually just thinking about a new training regimen that I could implement with the troops in the Empire. Now that I’m going to be home full-time I can make sure that our arctic strategies are fully developed. In fact… I think I’m going to go drop down to the barracks right now!” He sweated nervously, clearing his brow.
“...Uh-huh.” Cadence shook her head. “I keep telling you, just give Flurry space.” Cadence had a strange grin on her face. “I bet that you’ll find you two will be best friends by the time her birthday rolls around if you do.” She trotted toward their bedroom, waving her hoof at him playfully.
‘Best friends by her birthday? That’s the plan! ’ Shining chuckled to himself… leaving the table with a thankful nod to the servants as he headed toward the barracks.
With the inspection finished (the guards were in tip-top shape, as always), Shining found himself at the main junction of the Crystal Palace corridors.
It was time to put his plan into action. He had only one month before Flurry’s birthday. The decisions he made, right here and now could determine the ultimate success of this, his most critical and daring mission yet… with the fate of Equestria in his hooves.
In front of him were three paths:
1) Should he go to the left, toward his bedchambers and speak with Cadence, attempting to get more information about Flurry Heart and her interests, her concerns, the background about what really mattered to her.
2) Should he go to the right, toward Flurry Heart’s bedroom? Why wait to tackle the heart of the problem? Beating around the bush would only waste time - maybe with a solid heart-to-heart and some good old fashioned dad-jokes he could even win the prickly teen over this evening ?
3) Should he go straight ahead, to his study? Scotch and a book in front of a roaring fire might seem like he was just lazing around. But it had been a very long day. Plus, both Night Light and Cadence suggested sitting back and not doing anything to make the situation worse. Perhaps a defensive strategy was in order?
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE !
Vote for your choice! Once we hit 50 votes I'll write the next chapter!
Things aren't looking so good from the outset with our hapless, goofy, unicorn-dad. He's got a long road ahead of him, there's going to be lots of twists, turns and struggle to go through... and Flurry's birthday part at the end of June is coming up fast!
Let's get him there... together!
Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
(125 votes - 40%) Flip that little filly over and rut her! Buck her like the breeding stud you are!
Shining Armor rolled onto his stomach and snorted out of his nostrils.
Something was rising in him, bubbling deep inside. This little filly had been toying with him - grinding against him, hoofing him off, sucking him, kissing him… tesaing him. And Gods was it ever apparent just how bad the little-sexpot wanted it. Even now he could smell the pure musky fog of lust emanating from her backside, wafted by her flagging, wagging tail… begging for even more attention.
And he’d already done everything he could with his mouth .
There was only so much a stallion could take, especially a stud like Shining Armor, from a long line of breeding males. Even if he was her father… his instincts were screaming at him to take care of her very poignant and pressing needs - fast . With a small whinny, he stood up off the side of Flurry’s bed, stomping his hoof and snorting.
His jet-black stallionhood, still throbbing at its painfully full nineteen-inch stiffness, slapped against his belly, spurting a squirt of pre that was as thick as a lesser stallion’s ejaculation. Shining knew he was going into rut , a frenzied state of sexual desire that he wouldn’t be able to sate until he was buried hilt-deep in a marehood, filling her with his load. Up until now, that had always been his wife - a mare who knew not toy with the Captain of the guard when he got into such a state - you don’t tickle the dragon’s tail… you bend over and wait for him to melt you.
Flurry wasn’t so experienced.
She groaned, rolling back onto her belly so she was looking right at her snorting father. “Mmm… where are you going, dad? Wh-what should I d-” Flurry was cut off as Shining Armor’s blue magical field enveloped her hips dragging her to the edge of the bed and spinning her around, leaving the filly’s upper body and belly resting on her already sweat-stained sheets, while her rear legs dangled off the edge, her hooftips barely touching the crystal floor.
“D-dad?” Flurry squeaked, her voice a mixture of fear… and sexual excitement.
Shining surveyed his little brood-filly, his precious daughter - her sumptuous white plot stuck up in the air, drooling clear gossamer stands of filly-juice from her winking, swollen pussy - plump pink libs throbbing with arousal… all nestled beneath her twitching, tight ponut and swishing, flagged tail.
Shining snorted again with a stamp, pulling the magical field off of his little girl as he did so - making sure that one of the tendrils of his field slid right over Flurry’s dripping lips, squeezing her swollen mons as it did so.
“Mmmnghh….. Oh… d-dad!” Flurry groaned out, grinding her muzzle against the bed at the new sensation. Half a heartbeat later her tight filly-sex pursed its lips, sending her swollen pink clit shooting out in excitement - as well as a thick splatter of fragrant fillycum that noisily sprayed off the crystal floor below.
“Fuck me.” Shining groaned through his teeth as his daughter’s smell hit his senses - the unmistakable musk of a female that needed to be bred .
“N-no… f-fuck me !” Flurry groaned in response, twisting her athletic rear upwards, as she did her utmost to tilt her pelvis into the optimal position.
SHining needed no further coaxing, he clattered forward, mounting his little girl, big heavy hooves slamming down on either side of her head, eliciting a small squeak of fear from her as they pressed into the bedspread deeply, leaving deep craters from Shining’s weight as he shifted forward.
Shining felt his daughter’s tail hairs brushing against the head of his cock as he moved forward, his massive organ sliding over the top of his daughter’s muscle rump landing against the curve of the filly’s spine, dragging a trail of his lubricating juices up her lower back as he completed mounting her.
He felt his glans resting against her quivering back - and peered down quickly, looking underneath him to see that he was reaching at least halfway up her body. Flurry groaned and turned her head too - looking back to see just how far along her spine her father’s monstrous cock stretched.
She waggled her hips and gave out a half-whispered, half-mewled exhortation, “H-holy… fuck… th-that’s huge…”
Shining felt the weight of his instinct drive his hips forward, grinding his cock along the fillies spine until his heavy, swinging balls slapped against her plot with a wet slap. He could dimly sense the wet kiss of the filly’s cunt kissing his scrotum as she winked into his sack, complete with a whining, backward groan, and another begging mewl.
“P-please dad…. I’m aching ….”
Shining stopped his grinding, shifting backward in combination awkwardly while carefully using his magic to direct his phallus. His hooves took hold of either side of Flurry’s pert ass-cheeks, squeezing the tight teen muscle under her white fur, as he aligned himself.
Does Shining remember to use protection (50/50 chance)? Shining rolls…. Success! Shining remembers that knocking up his daughter would be a bad thing!
Some part of Shining’s mind screamed out from the depths of his state of rut. ‘The protection spell! Don’t forget! Decades of practice with many an impromptu session of love-making saved Shining, the reflexive muscle-memory of his spell-work making him capable of casting the delicate magical condom spell without needing too much conscious thought or concentration.
A light shimmer slid over his stallionhood - the field clinging around his big, black member all the way to his belly - specially crafted the spell was a field of energy that only prevented stallion-fluids from passing through... perfect for a married couple that didn’t want to lose any of the fun of going bareback, but didn’t want to spawn a whole brood of alicorns accidentally. Apparently, it would also be useful for fucking your teenage daughter without making her teen-pregnant.
The protection spell in place, Shining looked down at his drooling cockflare as it rested atop his little girl’s snatch.
It seemed absurd .
His flare had barely diminished from when he’d exploded in his daughter’s muzzle - and, as engorged as the filly’s aroused, plumps lips were, she was still tiny compared to the saucer plate sized cockhead just outside her entrance. His whole hoof-sized with covered her sex entirely, easily wider than even the outer reaches of her swollen labia.
“Mmm… y-yes…” Flurry whined, her sex dripping and squelching against the heat of her father’s cock, drooling a sloppy kiss as the teen filly-snatch got its first taste of stallion.
Shining grit his teeth and began to push forward, his huge bulge stuffing itself against the tight, slick lips, compressing as the force of his powerful hips slowly ground his horsecock into the diminutive teen pussy.
“F-fuuuuuuck!” Flurry groaned, clenching her teeth and bowing her head in concentration as she braced herself against the onslaught, her lower lips doing their utmost to slowly spread and accept the intruder - straining and stretching inch by agonizing inch as they slowly parted. “I-it’s…. S-so… much bigger… than my…. Mmmngh!”
Shining wanted to whisper encouragement, to tell his daughter how great she was doing - to be the supportive father he was… but when he opened his mouth only a hoarse growl and a nicker came out - his mind still dominated by the need to rut .
And still, he slid in - bit by tantalizing bit, obscene squelching sounds filling the room as the tiny teen-pussylips rolled around spread to the limit of her father’s ridge.
“It...It’s...t-tooo big!”
Shining clenched the filly’s ass-cheeks even tighter, pulling them apart, then took her thrashing tail in his mouth yanking upwards, eliciting a yelp from the writhing girl - anything to help fit himself inside her.
“D-d-daaaaaaaaddddd-Hngggh…….” Flurry screamed out, throwing her head back, as her lips finally let the edge of his wide flare into her twisting pink love tunnel. In a single swift moment, as soon as the fat cockhead passed her entrance, the next five inches of Shining Armor slid deep inside her, penetrating her wriggling body deeply.
Shining groaned out as he fell forward. The pressure was almost unimaginable . His wife had a powerful set of pelvic muscles, and had reduced him to a puddle of groaning stallion on many an occasion… but this… this wasbeyond tight . It felt like he’d put his cock in between two armorer’s anvils - like he’d stuck himself in a shop vise and twisted the lever… like he was threading a salami through a garden hose!
And that was before she came.
The crushing tightness became a rippling massaging, rolling over his intruding cockhead and the additional five inches of dick in powerful, clenching waves, again and again. He could feel the sliding heat of Flurry’s winking clitoris sliding along his shaft, her vagina parting and grasping again and again as she came on him.
Half a moment later, the filly threw back her head in a plaintive groan, her wings flaring out wide on either side of her, “D-daaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhd……!” Her hips shook twice more, then a fat splurt of liquid sprayed backward, coating the remaining length still outside her and spattering against his inner thighs.
As she drained out the last of her breath on her cry to her father, the filly slumped forward with a moan, burying her head into the bed, panting and shuddering with exhaustion.
Shining fell forward as well, his hooves landing on either side of Flurry’s gasping face. He leaned down and nuzzled her ear - finally finding words through the haze of his mind’s pounding desire to RUT and BREED.
“G-g-good girl…”He cooed, then began pressing his hips forward, sending more cockmeat sliding into his little girl’s cunt.
Flurry moaned with a blush, turning and glancing at her father through rolling, lust-drunk eyes, “D-dad… *huf* ... y-your’re… s-so… *huf* ... b-bucking… BIG! ”
Shining grinned, sliding more and more of himself into the little girl, stepping forward with little hoofsteps as he stuffed inch after inch of himself inside her. His fat knob stretching her out, deep inside, opening her in a way she’d never been opened, a fat bulge visible through the filly’s lower abdomen as the stud took her.
Flurry’s tongue fell out of her mouth, drool rolling out of her gasping muzzle, every other exhale coming with a whine as Shining rocked his hips to get more of himself inside her. Shining guessed that the little pony had probably never thought that fucking would be like this . So intense , so filling. He knew that no toy could compare to him - there might only be a hoof-ful of stallions of his… prominence on all of Equus.
Her open-mouthed,tongue-hanging, drooling face shot up again as she raised her head off the bed - her father’s fat medial ring had just jammed itself against her stretched little fillyhood, bumping and catching against her fat, winking clit. Her rear squirmed and jittered, accompanied by her plaintive groans - she couldn’t possibly take any more of him, could she?
Does Shining decide to give his little girl ‘the whole package’ or does he only give her half (50/50 chance)? Shining Rolls… Success! Shining will stuff her completely.
Shining leaned down and nipped at Flurry’s ear, licking the inside of her delicate ear fluff as he cooed encouragingly, “You’ve got this, baby…” He blew another breath of warm air against her neck, then nipped her again.
And slipped in.
With a strong little jerk of his hips - Shining went deep into little Princess Flurry Heart. Below his medial ring, his girth only expanded at a terrifying rate - all that thickness needed to pump blood up to his long stallionhood, like the trunk of a mighty tree… within a few inches, it quickly surpassed even the dimensions of his cockhead.
But somehow, the teen was able to take it - her cunt spreading so wide that it pressed against her inner thighs, her lovebud crushed against her father’s thick cock-shaft. A low rumbling moan came out of the filly’s mouth as she stared straight forward, a wildly aroused, drunken, inebriated look on her face as the dick inside her slid right up to her cervix, the fat flare pressing against the mouth of her womb, delivering a kiss between cock-slit and uterus that sent her body wild with instinctual reaction.
Shining felt the filly’s breathing become labored, her back arching up and down in spasms, wing fluttering in and out again - obscene sounds of squirting squelches escaped from their union as she clenched and massaged his stallionhood inside her.
She was cumming on his dick.
Hard .
“D-daddy!?” Flurry’s voice was scared - almost like she was afraid of the amount of pleasure she was experiencing - terrified of her own body’s reaction to being stuffed with stallion, of having her inner marehood kissed by the stallion that had been imprinted on her, destined for her, since she was a filly in her own mother’s womb. Her horn exploded with sparkling pink pleasure sparks - then her eyes rolled back in her head as she was lost to the potent was hof hormones and neurochemical melting the pleasure circuits of her brain.
Shining moaned out, his hips moving of their own accord - partly from the instinct of wanting to finish in his broodmare… but even more so wanting to sustain that pleasure of his baby-girl, his cherished Flurry Heart, his little-filly… his daughter .
He pivoted his hips back and forth, knocking against the quivering squishy gate of Flurry’s womb with gentle thrusts, fifteen of his nineteen inches currently engulfed in milking, coaxing, twisting clenching filly-cunt muscles.
He felt the rising knot within him as he continued, careful not to push too hard and hurt the delicate, smaller pony underneath him, but he couldn’t help his rear hoof stomping with a loud clack on the crystal floor - covering up the creak of a door opening slightly.
His hips began to buck, completely out of his control now and he bent forward to bite Flurry’s neck as his heavy balls swung forward one last time and rocketed up to his body.
“F-Fl-Fluuuuurrreeeeee…..”
“Mnghghhhh….. Y-yesh…..”
The two gyrating ponies groaned at each other in the course of their climaxes - Shining releasing his spunk in heavy splurts that raced down his stallionhood in thick throbs… exploding out of his cockslit...
..then splattering messily outside the tight junction of filly-snatch and stallionhood, being squeezed out by the protective spell and spraying out harmlessly in a messy fountain of cum, coating the base of his cock and Flurry’s ass with spray after spray of his third ejaculation of the evening… the protection spell straining, expanding… and finally….
Holding . Not letting a single drop of his virile batter into Flurry’s fertile womb.
And then… a last dripping trickle squelched out of them. And he was done.
He slumped forward, resting his weight against the top of the bed with a panting, gasping sigh. Flurry did the same - both ponies drinking in oxygen as if it were sweet, refreshing cider… desperate for respite from the agony of sensation they had just endured.
Shining felt his girl wiggle on him - he was still rock hard, still buried inside her teen-cunt. It was… bizarre and thrilling to think about.
They stayed there for a few minutes, enjoying each other’s bodies, sometimes with a twitch or a clench, eliciting little giggles or chuckles… before both finally had regained their wits enough to even speak .
Flurry groaned first, looking up at her father’s sweating face. “D-dad...d-did you… cum?”
Shining nodded.
She looked surprised...- “O-oh… I didn’t feel any uh… warmth… in there… mom said that the squirt feels incrediblei…”
“I… *huf* used the protection spell….”
“Oh!” Flurry’s eyes sparkled. “Oh… but… th-that… that was… un-buck ing believable.”
Shining smiled back at her. “Y-you too…”
You’re not sure if you have anything left.
The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by 122.5 points!
Currently the meter is 422 / 10
WARNING!!!!
1) You do have one spell. You’ve only ever used it once. Sixteen years ago actually. It casts directly into your stallionbits and sends them into overdrive for about ten minutes. The last time you used it… well, let’s just say that Cadence had to sleep on her back for a week - and you had to use a mop and bucket… ok, three buckets to clean up. Cadence was pregnant not long after that little event (maybe even because of it?) so you didn’t have a chance to use it again… but maybe you could remember it if you tried? Plus Flurry seems like she might even want… more…? Maybe even… harder? (Warning! HIGH chance (95%+) of breaking through any protection spells… but guarantees you will be able to perform - leads to END of FIC)
2)Attempt some passionate missionary style sex. Sure it’s not the norm for ponies, but maybe some slow face-to-face eye contact, while we make love to Flurry, will be sweet and lovely for the teen’s first time. Let’s finish off snuggling! (Warning! 50% of erection failure - leads to END of FIC)
3) Flurry looks like she still has some energy… sort of… Maybe we should let HER ride it out? Get her to hop on top and see how far down daddy’s pole she can slide. Let’s let her ride us cow-girl style! (Warning! 50% chance of Flurry passing out tired - leads to END of FIC)(
4) You know - that tailhole is still there. Sure it’s really only for more advanced sexy-times… but maybe Flurry really likes butt-stuff? We don’t have enough stamina to get it warmed up anymore, but when there’s a hole, there's a hope! (Warning! 75% chance of not being able to fit - leads to END of FIC)
5)End the evening. This is good for now. Flurry’s happy. Let’s snuggle our little Flurry-pumpkin and slowly withdraw from her once we finally soften in a bit. This was an amazing night - let’s tuck her in! (No further sex - no chance of pregnancy -THIS ENDS THE FIC)
Author's Note
STRAW POLL HERE
THIS IS IT! THE LAST VOTE!
What do you want? There are some risks to go for a different scene... or you can take a pregnancy or non-pregnancy ending!
The pregnancy ending may be a bit... wet !
Well, we're finally there.
Just to explain how this last one works - we're heading into the final chapter regardless of what wins.
If you want to try to get a new, different position/orifice... you'll need to take a high-risk roll. If you fail that roll... the both of you are just slipping into sleep and the wrap-up/conclusion.
Or you can choose to take the non-pregnancy ending with a snuggle sleeping finish.
Or if you want... Shining can cast a spell that he hasn't used since Cadence got pregnant... a brief, virility super-charge... he'll finish off in that mounted position and you'll get a little more fun before he absolutely fills his little filly... but beware: this is pretty much a guaranteed impregnation!
It's been such a fun journey guys, I hope you've enjoyed it as well.
And, as always, your comments can make it in too!
