Chapters I thought I was dead (rough draft).
The year is 4950 and the war is coming to an end, after 100 years, its finally over but at what cost. Not the millions of lives that had been lost on both sides, or the billions of dollars that fueled the war in the first place. No, the loss was the young 23 year old D.R.A.X-1 who in himself, was worth in total, from the augmentation of his arms and legs, Injections to make him unable to die, strength enhancers, training and more, was worth over 4.9 trillion dollars to the government and was now gone, he sacrificed himself to bring the war to an end. His last thought's were "Goodbye world, and goodbye life".
The gala was going beautifully this time. Every single guest was having fun, even Luna was walking about talking to the other pony's there. "Ah Twilight, my faithful student, how are you and your friends doing?" asked Celestia. "Princes, its an honor to be here again, and we are having a great time, Its so much better than last years gala." Celestia smiled and said "good, I hope that it will go this smoothly the rest of the night, knowing these pony's and how stuck up they can be, one wrong word and things can get pretty messy". The two pony's eventually went along their ways. Rainbow was talking to the wonderbolts, AJ was having a much better time selling her apples, Rarity had finally found a Colt that was nice and handsome. Pinkie was still shaking with excitement but she was managing and Fluttershy had found that all the animals needed to warm up to her was a simple treat. Everything was going perfectly which lasted for about another hour. Twilight had wandered over to AJ's stand and was talking to the orange mare. "Wow, I cant believe how smoothly everything is going" she said "Ah can't believe it either, compared to last year's gala, this is just amazin'." As if on cue, a black ball of light appeared directly over the VIP section and from it fell something that made Celestia and Luna's stop with mouth's agape while everyone else just stared at it. "GUARDS, SURROUND IT" shouted Celestia, and within 5 seconds, 10 of Celestia's personal guards had surrounded the new creature holding spears. One of the guards tapped it with his hoof and said "I have never seen anything like this before" The new creature was wearing some type of armor, it was a pure black with red and gold accents on the chest, arms, and legs. On its head, it wore a helmet that covered its entire face (the best way to describe what he looked like is to combined a juggnaught from MW2 and a Spartan from HALO) It looked like it was around 7.5 feet long, lying out on the floor. "Oooo what does this do?" said pinky who had broken the 4'th wall to get in the circle, and pushed a button that was on the helmet. A mechanical whirring sound was heard, and then the armor started to compact and in the end it had gone back into a jumpsuit that the creature was wearing. Pinky then poked it in the stomach "hehehe, its squishy" as she continued to poke at the creature. "Pinky Pie stop that right now, you don't know how dirty that thing could be" said Rarity. "Aw come on its not that bad' said Pinky as she poked it again, but this time a bit harder than before.
Drax's started to wake, his Black red and golden hair, which was genetically modified via injection, was covering his metallic gold eyes. He heard voices, stop...now...don't...where...been which was followed by another but this time there was a sharp pain in his abdominal where he has been previously wounded. His head twiched, which everyone else ignored except for Rarity. "PINKY PIE WHAT ARE YOU DOING??" Said Rainbow Dash, Pinky had started to take off the Jumpsuit, revealing that the new creature was wearing a T-shirt and shorts. "What, it must be super dooper hot in this suit" Pinky said. "OOO whats this" Pinky said, as a red dot was spreading from where she had poked the new creature earlier. She lifted up its shirt and gasped at what she saw. Underneath the shirt, there was an open wound which was recently stitched together but had broken. There were many other scars on its body along with a few more open cuts near the chest. Pinky's hair had gone from hot pink to a dulled pink/grey and her curled hair fell straight. "ANYPONY GET A MEDIC ITS HURT" screamed pinky. The guards who were still stunend at how the hot pink pony had been able to get past them, sprang into action, ripping on its shirt, revealing the wounds. "Holy shit, what the fuck has this guy been doing" said one of the guards. (Drax's point of view). He heard commotion, around him, and felt his reopened wound being tended to. He was finally starting to be able to comprehend what they were saying. "Come on, where is that medic, ah to the moon with him". Then another voice was heard above all the commotion "EVERYPONY SETTLE DOWN" said the new voice, it sounded like his drill sergeant's voice but amplified by 10 and more feminine. " I'm not going to be able to stay awake much longer, not in this state, I need rest" as he Drax drifted off to sleep. the last words he heard was "AFTER YOU HEAL HIM, BRING HIM TO THE DUNGEON"
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Hell of a life (rough draft)
~Death itself is not to be feared, it will come in due time. Only fear if your death will be painfull or not, or if it will be in vain or if it will have an impact on todays world.
~Unknown
Drax woke up to find himself chained to a wall in a small cell. It was completely white and his armor was no where in sight. He could now hear fine but his vision was still blurry from pure exhaustion. He heard two voices approaching his cell. One of them said "I have never seen the Princess so upset over such a creature." the first voice said. " "I know, its not like her at all. She is usually so calm and composed, I have only heard her use the RCV (royal canterlot voice) one time in my life, which was when the griffons were insulting her. Bad mistake on their part." said the second voice. They continued on in a chatter which Drax blocked out, all he was thinking about was how his vision was finally returning to him and he decided to look around the room. It looked like the best prison cell you could ever be in.. except for the fact that he was chained to a wall. It had a twin bed, a non nasty looking toilet and sink. The only part that was disturbing was the fact that he was not dead. The blast that had supposedly killed him, would have been able to destroy an entire city, so how in the FUCK was he still alive, but that didnt matter now, All he needed to do was to get out of these chains and get to the bed. Drax then disconnected his augmented arms, and worked them out of the chains, and then did the same with the feet. He then made his way to the bed and passed out
Back in the princess' rooms, the two allicorns were pacing back and forth, waiting on any information. A knock at Luna's door was all she needed to get excited. "Is there any news on the new creature?" asked luna, with obvious anticipation on her face. "Yes your highness, its somehow been able to get out of the chains and is now sleeping on the bed. I have no Idea how it got out but its not hurting anypony. If you would like to see him, we can take you to his cell" the pony said. "That would be wonderful" said Luna. They headed down to Drax's cell. when they arrived, the pony said to Luna "OK, from what we have found out about it so far, is all the information on this" as he held up a chain with two ovalish shaped tags on it. one had a button, which Luna pushed with her horn. It then projected an image on the nearest wall saying:
PROJECT ALPHA: NAME: D.R.A.X-VERSION 1.
STRENGTH: BENCH PRESS: 1/2 TON ONE ARM
SQUAT: 3 TON
CURL 1/4 TON
PUSHUPS: 500 IN 3 MIN WITH 1/8 TON ON BACK
CRUNCHES: 700 IN 2 MIN WITH 1/8 TON ON CHEST
AUGMENTED ABILITIES:
1-50(CLASSIFIED)
51: MINI HEAT SEAKING MISTLES
52-64(CLASSIFIED)
63: HIDDEN ARM BLADE/CHAINSAW
64-103(CLASSIFIED)
104: SUPER HEALING
105: IMMORTAITY (unable to die by old age)
106-150 (CLASSIFIED)
TRAINING:
MILITARY
S.E.A.L TRAINING
SPEC OPS
SUPER SOLDIER GRADE 1-50
SUPER SOLDIER ADVANCED 51-100
SUPER SOLDIER WALKING TANK 101-125
SUPER SOLDIER EXPERIMENTAL 126-150
SUPER SOLDIER GOVERMENT CLASSIFIED 151-248
AUGMENTATION BASIC
AUGMENTATION ACVANCED
AUGMENTATION COMBAT
AUGMENTATION DEFENCE
AUGMENTATION GUARD
(CLASSIFIED)
(CLASSIFIED)
(CLASSIFIED)
(TOP SECRET)
ORBITAL DROP TRAINING ADVANCED
ORBITAL DROP TRAINING W/O POD
INJECTIONS:
MUSSEL ENHANCER
INTELLECT ENHANCER
DNA ALTERATION
MENTALITY ENHANCER
The list went on and on, and then it got to something interesting
FAMILY:
MOTHER: DEAD
FATHER: DEAD
BROTHER: ASSASSINATED
SISTER: RAPED AND MURDERED
PAST: TO VIOLENT TO ACCOUNT FOR
MILITARY SERVICE: JOINED AT AGE OF 15
D.R.A.X'S MISSION: SEARCH, FIND, EXTERMINATE ALL HOSTILE FORCES, NO MATTER THE COST
ANY MORE INFROMATON DISCLOSIER WITHOUT D.R.A.X'S PERMISSION IS CONSIDERED A FELONY PUNISHABLE BY DEATH.
Luna and the pony could only say one word to what they just heard which they said in perfect sync, "damn'', as Luna looked into the cell and saw the creature with its Black, red, and gold hair, looking so peaceful, but with such a violent and troubled past. Luna then used her magic to pull the blanked back up and tuck Drax in as she said "sleep tight, your going to have on hell of a day with Tia tomorrow"
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The grand reveal (rough draft)
Drax woke up again, this time fully rested. He tried to move, but found he was restrained by some invisible force. He then blew his hair out of his eyes but still could not see anything and he began to worry if he had been blinded. He was just about to accept the fact that he was blind but when he squinted he realized that he was in a containment cell. His theroy was proved true when he felt the compartment that he was in move. He still unable to move decided not to struggle, he would need his energy later. It was about 20 min later that his cell was placed back down and then it began to move again. This was confusing, even to Drax. In all his traning they had never prepared him for any situation like this. Usually, he would have been able to break free of any metal cuffs that had been put on him, however this force was strong, unlike any other. It took another 50 min until his cell was finally put down for good. Then he heard a voice that sounded familiar... but where... LAST NIGHT. It was the voice that had sounded like his drill instructor but this time, it was... gentler to say the least.
The voice said "Fillies and gentelcolts, we have discovered a new species. It seems to walk on two legs, and this one has a very... interesting past. We have used our magic to restrain him in this cell here. Now we are going to open it up and attempt to communicate with this new species"
Cracks of light appeared around the corners of Drax's cell and then the front of it fell off. Drax squinted his eyes due to the sudden burst of light. He was then pulled out of the cell and into broad daylight. He was wearing his shorts that he had arrived in, but no shirt revealing his many scars on his chest along with a tribal tattoo that covered his back and reached to his right bicep. His vision started to return to normal, and to his huge surprise, was looking down at a very colorful array of ponys, some with an emblem on there flanks. What surprised him the most was that some of them were pegasi and others were unicorns and the fact that they could talk...WAIT FUCKING TALKING PEGASI AND UNICORNS!!!
Then a pink mare appeared right beside Drax, which was followed by a few swears and one of the ponys yelling "DAMMIT PINKY STOP BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL, FOR ALL THE HELL WE KNOW IS THATS THE REASON THAT THINGS HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE" the pony yelled.
"Oh be quiet you silly willie, I cant bring any other creature here" said Pinky, "HI my name is Pinky Pie and WELCOME TO PONYVILL"
"Pinky, at the moment he is not able to talk, it took all of our best unicorns to put this spell on him that is prohibiting him from moving any major mussels. I am about to allow all of its facial mussels to move." said the voice. It sounded like it was coming directly to the right of him, but because he could not move his neck, he could not see who the voice belonged too.
Then a warming sensation started to spread across Drax's face and he could now finally blink, which he did multiple times and then he finally spoke.
"Ok first of all, I have no idea how I got here in the first place. I am supposed to be dead. I manually detonated 10 atomic bombs. If I somehow survived, I should have sever radiation poisoning. Secondly, where the hell am I?
"Whats an atom bomb?" asked Pinky? Then a purple mare with a lighter purple highlight in her hair spoke up and said
"Your in equestria, and how can you speak our language?"
Normally any other human would have taken offense at this. It was OUR language, but Drax was a bit too smart
"I dont know, it is very strange how our languages are almost the same." said Drax
"Well, now that you can communicate with us, we have a few questions we would like to ask of you." said the voice off to Drax's right.
"What do you want to know?" said Drax.
Time travel? (rough draft)
"Well, the first thing I think that we all are wondering, is what are you anyways?" said the voice that Drax STILL couldnt put with a face which was starting to annoy him.
"I myself am what is known as a Homo Sapien more commonly known as Human." said Drax.
All of the pony's mouths fell agape except for one lime green mare who was yelling something to the extent of
"I TOLD YOU THEY WERE REAL, BUT NONE OF YOU BELIEVED ME. WELL TELL ME THAT IM CRAZY NOW!" said the lime green mare.
"sorry we doubted you Lyra." said many of the ponys.
The lime green pony named Lyra was still besides herself with excitement and had made herself to the front of the croud.
"Oh come on, you know that that things not real, besides even if they did exist, that was over 15,000 years ago, there's no WAY they could be as advanced as you say they are Lyra" said a small pony with a spoon depicted on her flank. "It's probably just an illusion"
"Silver spoon, get back here this instant, if that is a human, I dont want you anywhere near it if the stories that we have heard of them are true." Said another mare, who was apparently her mother
Drax began to chuckle to himself, causing the cloud to look back at him.
"Now what in tarnation is so funny?" asked an orange mare who had apples depicted on her flank.
"I was just wondering what in the world you have heard about my kind." said Drax
The ponys in the crowd exchanged nervous glances with one and other and a shudder went through the crowd.
"Well, the most popular story, is one of this human, who had put himself through huge amounts of training, who sacrificed himself to end a war that had been going on for many years. Its one of the most popular stories ever written, at least 3 copies are in the library" said the purple mare.
"Really, does the human have a name?" asked Drax, knowing that the story was about him.
"Well, in most of the stories, he has no name. But I was once able to go to the royal library and read the unabridged version there. In that one, his name is Drax."
"Twilight, I thought I told you to not read that" the voice said.
"Im sorry Princess, but I couldn't resist" said Twilight.
"Twilight, there was a good reason I told you not to read that" said the princess
"but"
"no buts Twilight"
They went on like this for a good 5 min until Drax spoke up
"Do you want to hear the true, unabridged version?
"What?" asked Twilight?
"Well do you?" said Drax
"How would you know what happened" said the princess, with an obvious skeptical tone in her voice.
"Well first off, I am what is known as a AMSS, which stands for Augmented Mecha Super Soldier. I was the only one out of the 10 who were picked to survive the training they put us through. Before I went into the training, I was known in my unit as Shadow. After the training, I was given a new name." Said Drax
"And that is?" asked Twilight
"Drax, I am the one that that story is talking about" said Drax
At this point every single pony seemed to be awestruck but at the same time, scared for their lifes.
"Well then lets get rid of you heartless killing son of a bitch" yelled a Rainbow mained pegasus who then took off, grabbed Drax and began to haul him higher and higher in the sky. She then took him, and with all of her last remaining strength, threw him into the sky, and then she returned to the ground.
"Rainbow what the hell was that for" said Twilight
"You know how many things he killed, Im not letting him get near any of my friends" said rainbow.
"But that impact will kill him" Said a timid yellow mare
"I don't care, If I kill one who has killed hundreds, I don't think that's to bad" said Rainbow
Drax at this point could still hear the pony's conversation, despite how high up he was, and he started to fall
"Heh, just like OD (orbital drop) training all over again" Drax said to himself as he plummeted towards the ground.
That all you got? (rough draft)
Drax had now reached terminal velocity and was falling fast, Rainbow dash was watching her work as it fell through the sky.
She was about to congratulate herself when she realized that Drax was going to hit her if she didn't move out of the way, fast.
"SHIT" exclaimed rainbow as she got out of the way right as Drax had passed her in the sky.
The ponys who had gathered had now spread out away from where Drax was about to hit. Twilight and the Princess were desperately trying to slow him down while every other pony was in shock at what Rainbow had just done, condemned another living being do death.
"Rainbow, what in the HELL were you thinking?" shouted the princess "he may have valuable information!"
"I don't want any killer in the same town as my friends!" Rainbow retorted.
An argument was just about to break out but then Drax hit the ground. Sending a small shock wave through the plaza that everyone was gathered in.
"Oh no oh no oh no" said Fluttershy, who was now hovering over Drax.
"Somepony get Nurse Redheart" said one of the ponys who had started to move in around the crash site, to see the extent of the damage.
"Hm, not that bad, bloody nose, a few new cuts, and... not much else" Drax thought to himself.
He felt the invisible bonds that had been put on him dissipate and he could finally move freely again and with that he got up and dusted himself off.
"HOW IN THE FUCKING HELL ARE YOU STILL ALIVE!!!" yelled Rainbow.
"Is that seriously all you got? That was only a 2000 foot drop, I'v been through much worse.
"Is that so, well then tough guy, tell us whats the worst drop you have survived?" said Rainbow, who was obviously irritated that she was not able to kill him.
"Lets see, the worst drop... AH, it was my 7'th NPOD and..."
"Whats a NPOD" said Rainbow
"No Pod Orbital drop" said Drax
"whats orbital drop? asked Rainbow
"ill explain later" answered Drax
Rainbow still obviously irritated, sat down with a look of confusion and anger on her face.
"As I was saying, It was my 7'th NPOD, and every time we have a drop, we each get to choose the speed that we are ejected out at the planet at. Usual speed is around 10 MPH. Anyways, I asked for 10 mph, the guy slipped up and put 50 mph." Said Drax. "You see, when we eject, the amount of speed that we have depends on how hot our armor gets due to friction. At 10 mph, you usually feel a bit warm, 20 your sweating a heck of a lot. 50, it feels like a damn oven in there. Thankfully the planet was covered in snow, so that made the burning go away fairly quickly."
"Ok I see that's impressive, but why? Why send yourself on such a dangerous process?" asked Twilight
"Well, you see. When an AMSS shows up via NPOD, of any rank that means one of three things: 1: The mission that the regular soldiers are on is much higher importance than they originally thought, 2: When over 10,000 troops are facing immanent destruction and they have very important information that the enemy can not get a hold of.
"Thats still interesting but what do you mean troops and stuff. I know that your joking about you being the Drax from the story and besides, War is only a concept, it would never happen, not in a million years." Said Rainbow
"I have to agree with Rainbow on this one. There is no way your Drax and war is... its just a concept, not reality" Said Twilight
Many of the other ponys who were still watching this muttered in agreement, except for Lyra, she was still excited that humans DID exist and she was NOT crazy.
"Princess, what do you think of the matter of war?" Asked Twilight.
"Its a horrible concept and I thought that you were crazy, whatever your name is, but now, you have just confirmed my suspicions. GUARDS Take him back to his cell, I think he is still in a daze from randomly transporting here." Said the Princess
The guards started to approach Drax, but then something happened. The skin on Drax's right arm started to retract back to the top revealing a metal augmented arm, attached at the shoulder that had engraved into it D.R.A.X-1.
"Princess, if you think that I would sacrifice my true arm, and get this augmented one, just because I wanted to, your the crazy one. The reason I got this was so that I could always be armed with a backup weapon if I needed one, like this little gadget here." said Drax. As soon as he had stopped talking, two small metal cylinders popped out of where the top of the wrist would have been.
"What... what are those things" asked the Princess.
"These are barrels to a .50 cal pistol. The tech has not changed much in pistols themselves, but the ammo has. It used to be that there was only a small variety of bullets to use, now there are over 1000 types, for a single gun, at the moment, I have C13 rounds in here, which on contact explodes just like the C4 bullets would, but this explodes at a much greater force and with around 10 times the power." said Drax.
The guards had started backing up away from Drax, they had gone from a slow walk to a all out run away from him.
"The government that I came from, would have never given this to anyone who was not in the military." said Drax.
"For you, war may be just a concept but for us, it was real. I have seen good men come and go, live and die. A hard day for you all may be that things just don't go your way, for us on the battlefield, a bad day means loosing a limb or even dying." he said.
Now all the pony's mouths were once again agape at the realization that this was in fact the Drax from the story, the ruthless killer, the one who had slaughtered entire villages, the one who supposedly gave his life to stop the war, the legendary human general who had put himself through training like no other, the one who "gave his life" to stop the war.
"So, does anyone still believe that I am not who I say I am, or that I am not Drax?" asked Drax
No one moved, spoke, or even breathed out of the pure shock of who they were looking at.
Drax chuckled to himself "ha, I didn't think so"
I spoke the truth (VERY rough draft)
Twilight was sitting looking astonished at what had just happened. The royal guard, the toughest in all of equestria had just been defeated through pure intimidation. These guys were supposed to never back down, never run, and never NEVER leave the princess which they had just done. The look on Twilights face, was shared by the entire crowd, including Celestia who had a look that showed fear, rage, and what in the hell just happened.
"How could they just leave me like that, those were my two personal guards. They had the toughest of all the training, but they still ran away." Celsetia thought
"I just dont understand, It..it just can't be. How could you actually be real? You were just supposed to be a fictional character, just fiction not real" said Twilight, who's eyes suddenly got wider as she realized the gruesome truth "Wait, if your real that...that means that y..you...you really did..." she trailed off, not able to say the last few words.
"I really did what? Oh, you mean kill... or should I say slaughter? The answer to that is yes." answered Drax who's face sshowed no emotion at all. When I was ordered to fight, I fought, to assassinate, I either poisoned, shanked, sniped, or planed an explosive. When I was ordered to kill, I killed. When I was ordered to wipe out a entire city, I took the time to only kill, not destroy" Said Drax
"What do you mean not destroy? You destroyed families and friends!" shouted Rarity
"I mean not destroy the buildings that could be of use to set up a base in. Besides, that's one of the ways how we got got our income. The banks would always have tons of cash in them, we sent it back to base and they gave everyone a share of the money. Also it provided places for our influence to spread to" answered Drax.
"You, you are below anything I have ever set eyes on, You listen to orders just because someone tells you to? You take away lives just because you are told to? What ever happened to your sense or right and wrong? You... you are below any living thing. At least the Hydra's only attack when one is in their territory. To make matters even worse, you still can't use magic, or fly by yourselves. You are just a sad little being that is trying to show yourself off." said one of the pony's in the crowd.
At this, Drax stopped turned around and addressed the pony who hat spoken to him. He was very tall, red with a blond mane, and had a halved apple as a cutie mark.
"I had no idea that Big Mac could say more than a few words at a time, and to criticize like that, is just unheard of" Whispered Twilight to Rainbow who was standing besides her.
"I blame your kind for losing out tech, everything we made, gone, destroyed. Everything we did was to advance out species, but I only see fragments of our society here. Doorhandles, and chariots. Both which are old for even us. The funny thing is, you say that I was trying to show myself up. I don't have to. The fact is that we overcame out defects to not use magic and be able to fly by ourselves. Our society was much more advanced than yours, and the reason that we fought, is due to partially to out desire to be on top, be the best. And also due to one reflex, the Fight of flight reflex. Either we run from fights, or we charge head first in. Also I can tell that you still think we fight for nothing, we fight over land, power, wealth... and most ironically peace."
"WHAT" the entire crowd yelled, ignoring his entire speech except for his last few words.
"How in the hell do you fight for peace? You make agreements for peace not fight." said a young filly.
"Thats how it is in your society. For us, we don't back down after agreements, or not usually. In order to get a small period of peace, we need to crush and destroy the enemy. Show them our power and show them that we are not to be messed with. Thats why they created me, the strongest of all, the final weapon to show that my nation, is the strongest, and we will not hold back when attacked, and that's actually the last mission that I was on before I got here."
"Well now that we are back on that topic, of how you got here" said the mayor, who had been trembling through every word that Drax had spoken. "Can you tell us... the mission itself, and how you got here in the first place."
Drax laughed a bit and then said "I'll tell you, but you are not going to like it."
Best left untold part 1 (rough draft)
(srry for the wall-o-text ish look, 2 pre readers found getting this story to them ASAP)
"So you actually want to know my story" said Drax.
"Yes" answered the mayor.
Drax sighed and shook his head. "Fine, my story starting, starting at the age of 8"
I was about 8 years old, very scrawny kid, got bullied a lot in school but every time I tried to get anger out, the bullies would just find that as a weakness and pounce. Then I snapped, beat the shit out of one of them. I was never bothered by them again. Then the government barged into my school and took me away. I was knocked out and when I woke up, I was strapped into a surgery bed. Then they put 5 needles into my veins and injected me with what I later found out was strength increasing compound. At the time, I thought it was liquid fire. It felt like someone had taken a bonfire, condensed all the heat into a liquid, and then shoved it into my bloodstream. What it was actually doing was constantly shredding my muscle fibers, then healing them, and shredding them again. This process built up muscle tissue and for the same reason it was very dangerous. Mainly because It would shred my heart up at the same time. About three days later, I was still in pure agony and then they shoved me into the toughest military training. First day we had to run 10 miles, then 600 pushups, 900 sit ups, 200 pull ups, plank for 20 min. We had to do this 5 times each day and this does not count our other training. Usually, most people can go through this for 1 month max and then they come out the toughest of the tough. I was kept in this for 5 years. I was 13 years old when they finally put me into the Spec Ops unit: F.T.L.D.B. I forget what the true name of it was but to all the other troops it was known as Fight 'till your last dying breath. This training made the last unit's seem easy. It was the same thing, but only while wearing suits that made gravity effect us about 5x more than normal while wearing 150 pounds of gear. I stayed in this Unit, but every two days, I was taken out and I had more Injections. The normal muscle stuff was a neon blue color. They started to inject this new stuff which was this nasty red color. Apparently it was a pain solution which made my body 20x more resistant to pain. They proved this to me by taking a Nail, putting it to my hand and driving it through. It still hurt but not nearly as bad.
"Wait, they drove a NAIL THROUGH YOUR HAND" Fluttershy said, with a look of pure horror on her face. "How can you use your... hand anymore?".
"I am actually just about to get to that, which is pretty interesting" said Drax, who then continued on with his story.
So, this went on for another 3 years and then on my 16'th birthday, I was taken out again and then my entire body scanned. They found that my family had some type of bone defect which made them a bit more brittle than others. This raised the question of surgery which I at the time didn't really care about. They told me that I was going to get my bones replaced with these new kinds of fake bones made of this stuff called : SC:9543 which is about 60 times harder than diamond, and due to its molecular structure, its one of the sturdiest things ever. Only problem was that putting all of that In my body would be to expensive and augmentation would be cheaper. So when they replaced my body with the new bones, they only replaced my head, spine, chest, and pelvic area. My legs and arms were cut off and replaced with these new mechanical appendages.
A few of the ponys had fainted upon hearing that he had his entire body opened and had all of his bones replaced and a few threw up at the arm and leg cutting off part. It was obvious that surgery in this land was a last ditch effort to save lives, not to alter appearances or change any physical structure.
"Oh trust me, we aren't even at the the bad part yet" said Drax.
So then at age 18, I was thrown into the NPOD training. That was a real bitch, that day, 5 out of 15 people died that day during training. NPOD as I have said before is falling through the atmosphere without any protection excluding your armor. This consisted of jumping off of 50 feet buildings without any armor. This helped us figure out how to land correctly. Then more injections and stuff. This is the pace where the true pain training actually stared. They had computers that would hook up to our heads and make us experience the pain of unspeakable things. The most painful was when it simulated a grenade being thrown at our crotch and then exploding. After that, we went into true Super Soldier training. I had told myself it could not get any worse, hell was I wrong. Here is our daily workout: 30 mile run, pain training, breakfast, 1000 pushups, pain training, Injections, 1500 sit ups, pain training, plank for 1 hour, pain training, late lunch, jog 5 miles to digest food, 500 pull ups. Rifle training, assault training, hand to hand training, water training, interrogation training, vehicle training, and finally dinner.
"This was my life for a long time but then something happened" said Drax
There were a few scientists who had just made a new injection and slipped it into the daily injections. It was realized that this was not supposed to be there but not before one guy was already dead, another two were very ill, but for some reason. It had no effect on me. I didn't think much of it, but it made me partially immortal. I could not die of old age or unless there was some true huge impact or force, my body would heal any life threatening wounds but would not stop scar tissue from building up. Then I did missions for the government, dangerous yes, but I didn't care, but my last one was different. It was supposed to be just a simple infiltration mission but then... well shit happened.
Hey guys, just got the pre-reader and editor on (same guy, very badass) This is the edited version of the backstory to Drax. Tell me what you think :D
"You know, I think it would be better if I were to just show you what happened." said Drax
"What do you mean" asked Twilight
"Watch" Drax said as a light shown from his palm, projecting one of his memories on the ground.
The image flickered into life.
“Explosives armed,” reported DRAX-1, securing the final block of plastic explosive to the ship’s environment control system. “Ready to blow at any time.”
His commander replied over the radio. “Okay. Now get the hell out of there!”
Wrenching open the door and sprinting up a staircase to the bridge with artificial strength, Drax fired a few rounds from his assault rifle at the command crew. The explosive shells wounded a few, but more importantly, they instilled fear.
Screams filled the bridge as the helmeted, well-muscled soldier took a few steps in, slowed by his heavy armor. Fléchettes and plasma rounds were fired, but merely bounced off Drax’s breastplate.
With a slow, lumbering gait, Drax strode up to the captain’s chair. “Get me an escape pod.”
His unfortunate quarry’s hands shook. “The Confederacy’s ships will be here– you cannot hold this position–”
“I am not concerned about holding the position. Get me an escape pod.”
“I–” The captain reached for his pistol, but Drax was far faster than he. An explosive round blew his head apart.
Drax turned to the petrified bridge crew. “Anyone else going to try and stop me?”
Nobody replied. Then a woman sitting to the side of the door through which Drax had entered stabbed a button.
Immediately, a quiet alarm began to beep on her console, shortly followed by a macabre chorus of caution and warning alerts originating from every computer on the bridge. The lighting dimmed and was replaced with emergency red.
Drax spoke again, still angrily, but this time his voice carried a slight tint of fear. “You stupid bitch! What did you do?”
She did not reply, and in spite of her blanched face and trembling fingers, smiled. She had nothing left to fear anymore.
And Drax stared in horror as a recorded voice spoke over the intercom. “Warning. Tokamak magnetic containment bottle has been disabled. Safety systems offline. Reactor confinement vessel integrity compromised. Repeat, tokamak magnetic con–”
The world burst into a flare of ravenous white, then sank into blackness.
"Princess Luna wait!" exclaimed the pegasus.
"Yes? What is it?" said Luna.
"It appears that his arm and legs won't work, but everything else does. We may be able to salvage some of the tech from the arms and legs and learn from it" said the pegasus.
"Hmm, well then, take them" said Luna, as she used her magic to disconnect Drax's arms and legs. "Now take them and learn as much as you can about them." said Luna
"yes your highness" said the pegasus,
Luna turned and looked at Drax, who was passed out due to pure exhaustion, the past few days had been pretty rough on him to say the least.
"Hmm, I wonder what you'll look like as a pony?" Luna said to herself as she walked back to where Celestia was wating for her.
When she arrrived 10 min later, Celestia was sitting, reading an article on... how to find the colt of your dreams.
"Tia, Im back" said Luna.
Celestia was very startled when her sister entered a room. She was very stealthy and was able to enter rooms without anypony else knowing.
"Dang it Luna, you know that always startles me."
"And that's why I do it"
"Well any news on Drax?"
Luna looked over at Drax, who was still passed out.
"Yes actually, his arms and legs wont move, but somehow the weapons in them still work. The research division is looking at them now, but they can not make them moveable arms or legs again"
"Hmm, well I guess we will have to turn him into a pony" Celestia said.
"Yes we will" said Luna, a wide grin now appearing on her face.
Celestia had seen that look before, the year before when the mares went into heat, she wore the exact same expression.
"Well, what are you waiting for? Lets start the transformation." said Luna very impatiently.
"Fine, we might as well get this over with" said Celestia, who then proceeded with Luna to lift Drax up into the air, and encase him in a magic aura. It flickered and glowed a pure metallic gold, and they could see Drax's body start to change.
Once the actual transformation started to take place, not much could be seen, due to the blinding light that was coming from his body.
The light finally started to fade away, Celestia who was too tired from her daily work plus this, passed out. While Luna who was very tired, looked at what they had made.
Lying there infront of them, was a metallic golden allicorn, who's hair was thee color of ruby's and onyx.
"It worked" said Luna, who using her last remaining strength, lifted up Drax and teleported both of them to her room.
Sorry for the delay. I don't know when the next update will be but I will try to make it take less time than it took for me to make this chapter
Luna arrived in her royal chamber, and laid Drax's new body down on the bed and looked him over. Even if she was tired, she still longed for a stallion to call her own. Unlike her sister, she wanted a relationship to last and not just a one night stand.
Luna sighed a long sigh, remembering what could have been.
The flashback started in her head, the vision was one that still caused the same pain that she had felt over 1000 years ago.
"It had started 4 years before her transformation into nightmare moon. She had met a stallion named Starlight watcher, he had been the perfect match for her. He loved her and she had loved him back. They had been a perfect couple, they both loved the night, they both had the same interests, and above all, they both loved each other for who they were.
The only problem was that he was a simple earth pony, not from a rich family or one to even be considered worthy of being married to royalty and Celestia always gave Luna a hard time about that. Her words hurt more than she would ever know. Her rude comments on how "she was stooping down just to make a common pony feel important" and "Thats so cute, what's going to happen next, your wings and horn fall off and stain the royal family's name?". Celestia never knew true love, while she may not seem like it now, when she was a young filly, she was very rebellious and hated her parents.
Back on with the flashback. Luna told Starlight about how angry she was at her sister, and of course he comforted her. But her verbal assaults continued, and only got worse. The day before Luna had turned into nightmare moon, Luna saw Starlight half limping, half dragging his back legs along, leaving a trail of blood showing where he had walked. It had turned out that Celestia had beaten him, and abused him. Not because of any crime, but just for fun. That was when Luna snapped. She had called upon the nightmare, but her plan failed and she was ripped away from her lover."
Luna shook her head, trying to get the painful memory out of her head, and saw the tapestry of celestia banishing her, it was placed in her room as a reminder as what happened before. Luna walked over to look at it. A red circle was drawn on it, in the background. This is where Starlight would have been standing when he saw Luna being defeated by Celestia and sent to the moon.
Luna turned around to look at Drax, who was still knocked out and laying on her bed. Luna levitated him up and tucked him under the covers, and she followed. Getting into the bed, facing away from Drax she started to fall into sleeps comforting grasp. It was then she the sky was shattered by a huge bolt of lightning that had come from the Canterlot weather production center. This was followed by huge ear shattering cracks of thunder. She had always been a bit weary of thunder and lightning, but after being on the moon, she was deathly afraid of it. The thunder reminded her of the constant meteor impacts that rockd the moon's surface, which had almost killed her a good 500 times.
The lightning ripped across the sky, looking as if the sun had used its fiery rays of light as whips to crack the very sky. The thunder blasted and its echo reverberated within her royal bedroom.
Luna could take no more of this alone, she turner onto her other side and found Drax, still passed out and she wrapped her fore legs, hind legs and wings around him, puling him as close to her as she could. She placed her head in a position that her horn would not harm Drax if either of them were to move.
Tears running down her eyes from fear she began to feel relaxed again, even if she had not known Drax for more than a few hours, she felt a type of connection that she could not explain. It felt like the same bond that she and Starlight had shared those many years ago.
Luna, now fully relaxed, was able to put aside her fear and indulge herself in this new confidence that she had found within herself.
"Please let this one work out" Luna said, and then let the sweet relaxing touch of sleep engulf her and carry her off to the magical land of dreams.
Drax woke up, upon looking around he found himself in a bedroom decorated with images of the night sky and the moon. Charts of the stars were on a desk and the phases and position of the moon on another.
Drax glanced down to see Luna, the princess of the night hugging a pony while she was sleeping peacefully, but if she was hugging a pony, why did It look like she was hugging him? It didn't make sense, what was going on? Was he placed in a spell to be forced to see Luna's sex life for the rest of eternity? No that couldn't be it, if he was just to be seeing it, then why could he feel her body and wings wrapped around him? What kind of spell was this!?
Then the realization hit Drax. "You have got to be fucking kidding me." Drax looked down to see that this was no spell, or curse for that matter. His body which had lost the use of all arms and legs, had been transformed. His body was now of a pony, and was in bed with one of the rulers of Equestria.
"Hm, all things considered not too bad for being here one day" Drax thought to himself.
Drax then realized something, he could actually feel his arms and legs again. Unlike the prosthetic limbs that had been attached to him which did not include any sensory receptors because the government thought that was "unnecessary and unneeded" which was their way of saying that they were too cheap to pay the extra 100 dollars to allow people to feel again. He now had true to life, original arms and legs.
"Well, their different especially because of no hands, but ill make due." Drax thought to himself.
He was about to try to move and explore when Luna must have hit a scary part in her dream because her wings tightened like a vice around Drax, squeezing him against Luna's body.
Drax was still weak and tired, so he decided that it would be for the best if he were to take this as a sign that said get your ass back to sleep. He closed his eyes and as he was slipping into sleep, he the soft touch of Luna's muzzle press against his.
Luna pulled her lips away from Drax's. She had known that he was special, normally most pony's thought that she was the same as her sister, craving only one night stands and not a true loving relationship. That was why she never brought other stallions over, they only craved to fulfill their natural urges for sex, but ignore the urge for a loving relationship.
"Just like the sun and the moon, the sun hot, exciting, unpredictable, and is only their and goes away in the night. While the moon is cool, composed, and may not be seen that much in the day but is always there and shines when the sun is away. No wonder Tia represents the sun and I the moon" said Luna.
Luna never liked to go out in the day, she stood out among the light colors with her dark midnight blue coat. Most pony's thought that she slept in the day and stayed up at night, while really she just preferred to stay in the royal library, finding out what advances pony-kind had made while she was away.
Luna slowly got out of the bed, without disturbing Drax from his much needed sleep she got up and proceed to exit her room and go to the royal library. She arrived to find that it was mostly empty, only a few librarians stood around, with the occasional royal guard patrolling the area, bowing to Luna as she passed.
She came to the myth's and legends section and found the exact book she was looking for: Mythical Creatures, A reference guide. She opened it and flipped to the H section, and started to look around for the term: Human.
She found the word and the entry, which was relatively short, it read
"Human: A tall bi-pedal creature that can have skin ranging from a pale tan, to a very deep brown and in some rare cases, white skin. These creatures range in height from an average of 5' to 6'4". They have no magical ability, and in some rare specimens, promote disharmony however mostly they will not attack unless provolked. Some may have a more "colorful" vocabulary than others. They are mammals and evolved from chimpanzee's giving them a high curiosity level, fingers and opposable thumbs, high endurance, high pain tolerance, very high intelagance, full emotinal range, a fully aware conscious, and the fight of flight reflex. If found, approach slowly and try to become friends with this species if they actually exist. If angered, they will not stop untill they get what they want which is usually revenger. When it comes to love, this species like ponys, is capable of having a single night relationship souly for sexual interactions, or a long term close bond relaitonship. Overall on a scale from 1 to 10, these rate in at a danger level of 9.5 due to their ability to think of stratigies to get what they want when they want, and their ability to throw out morals and turn back to their primal violence to solve problems. With their endurance and strength as high as it is, they make very very dangerous enemies. If one is angered at you, run"
Luna placed the book back on the shelf and proceded back to her room, but took a detour to check up on her sister in where she had passed out the night before. She found her still their, sprawled out on the floor with her rump in the air
Luna giggled and said "Well it looks like the troll has been trolled"
She then walked back up to her room to check on Drax, still chuckeling about her sister's very emberassing possition which was now open for the world to see.
Hey guys, very sorry for the late update. ATM depression came back but some epic brony's came and helped out.They are: Killjoy , NightBeat , Mental_Zero , and Ferote . ENORMOUS props to Killjoy, you rock bro. I'm pretty sure that this time will be the final battle with depression and thanks to all the brony's above who have helped me so far (seriously, a simple comment does help). I'm sorry if the grammar's not too good here but I really wanted to get this out. Ok guys, hope you like the chapter
Luna entered her royal room, still laughing softly at the very public display which many pony's had now begin to notice and a few brave souls (stupid, but brave) decided to get a closer look to simply find they could not because the royal guard was already there.
"That's what you get for sending me to the moon tia" Luna said softly to herself.
Luna walked over to Drax and looked him over. He had a pure black coat, gold black and red hair, and his cutie mark was of weights which was not uncommon but there was one thing that caught Luna's eye. The colors of the cutie mark were off. Instead of the typical black barbells and silver bar between the two, this was different. The barbells were golden and the bar itself was a deep scarlet.
"I've heard of discoloration of cutie marks but this is unheard of!" Luna exclaimed.
Luna rushed to the royal library and searched high and low until she found the book she was looking for titled: Pony defects, causes, effects, and explanations. Luna opened the book and flipped to the cutie mark section and looked for the discoloration section.
Upon finding it, it read "Cutie mark discoloration is a unusual but not unheard of defect that happens in the earning of a cutie mark. Some say that its just because they have a mastery in that field, and others say its because they are cursed. Whatever the reason is, we do know some statistics on this: for every 1000 cutie marks earned, one of them had a color that is a slight shade either lighter or darker than it is supposed to be. For every 10000 cutie marks, a color in the cutie mark is such of a different shade that is is very obvious that there is a mistake. But for every 100000 cutie marks, the color itself is completely different.
This is the usual outcome of either inbreeding, which would also distort the cutie mark greatly, or the cause of a very strong potential in either physical strength, or magic. Because there is no known Allicorn to have any discoloration there is no proven information on the concept of ACD (Allicorn cutie mark discoloration) .
What we believe the discoloration means, is a way of showing how the pony with this defect's personality and temperament differ from the majority of others with the same or similar cutie mark.
Here is what we have found.
The the lighting of the shade of color is on a 10 through -10 scale, with 10 being almost white, and -10 being almost black. The lighter the color, the more optimistic the pony is expected to be as well as being more obliged to have an extroverted personality. The exact opposite goes for the the darker colors. Darker colors represent usually more pessimistic and be introverted.
When the change of a color does occur, we found that most color's have specific meanings"
Luna then looked at the list of colors and wanted to facehoof. "Great, just great. This is one of those books that lists everything in exact detail. This is going to take forever." said Luna, who then let out a great sigh.
14 minute's later after looking through many colors that looked very similar
Luna had finally been able to determine that according to the book's enormous color chart, Drax's cutie mark's colors were classified as Blood ruby red and Gleaming royal gold. To paraphrase what the book described the two colors meanings, the first one meant: the pony would do anything for those they cared the most about, even shed their own blood for them, and the second one, was unidentified. They just had it listed as "This color has never been seen before, it is only mentioned here if an occurrence of it does happen so it may be documented and confirmed by Celestia.."
"Gold's never been confirmed" said Luna, a smile growing upon her face, "I guess that Celestia may just have to confirm another one".
Luna's then remembered what she had heard Celestia heard two weeks beforehand. She had said that she had been the one to confirm every single color so far in cutie marks, which of course was just another one of her private bragging points.
"Well Celestia, I guess i may just have to pull a combo breaker" said Luna who had walked up to a window of the library to see a line of pony's forming to see Celestia in her "exposed state". The line stretched all the way to the middle of Canterlot.
"Hmm, that explains why there's so few pony's around the castle. Sorry tia, but I must get back to Drax."
Back in Luna's bedroom, Drax's eyes began to open. He yawned and stretched. "oh man, what a dream that was" Drax said, as he brought his hand to his face, only to be met by a black hoof jabbing him directly in his now over-sized eye.
His scream of pain was loud enough to wake Celestia, make Phillomena prematurely burn up, the animals in the garden to all hide, and for the line of pony's who were lined up to see Celestia, run like it was their last day alive as the princess of equestria awoke.
Drax woke up again, his body feeling rested and ready to take on this new world that he had been thrown into. He walked over to the window, and gazed upon the vast city that Luna's room was overlooking. There were two main residential districts within the city. The upper class, and the middle class districts. The upper class was closer to the main gate of the palace, while the middle class area was farther away. Between the two, was the market, where ponies were running about. Gathering goods that they needed. Some of them were conversing while others keeping their foals from running too far and getting lost in the crowd.
"Looks like NYC with all the shops and people, just not as many idiot's driving like maniacs" Drax said to himself.
Then Drax noticed train tracks in the distance, following them with his eyes, he saw that they led to a station in Canterlot.
"I wonder where that train leads to?" Drax said to himself. The train then started to pull out of the station, on the train in big gold letters, was written "Ponyvill Express".
"Well, I guess that answers that" said Drax with a light chuckle. He turned around, and examined the room that he was in again. The room's main color was blue, and a dark blue at that. The walls were the exact color of the night, with stars that twinkled which gave the room an interesting glow. Some of the stars had a lighter blue outline, that connected them to other stars. Upon looking at thet outlines that the stars had made, it was apparent that these lighter blue outlines were not there just for looks, they showed where the constellations were. On the bed's headboard, there was a moon, which was in a full moon stage. There were a few bookshelves packed full with books.
Drax was about to get a better look at the books, when Luna herself walked into the room.
"Luna! Im sorry, I should have tried to tell you that I was awake but I" said Drax who was cut off by Luna
"Dont worry Drax. Its fine, Im just glad your awake." she said, looking at his new, fully authentic body "and 100 % natural this time"
Drax let out a light laugh and said "Im still getting used to it, Im not really used to using fully biotic legs, and on top of that, I never walked on all four's... well not for the past 20 or so years I didn't, In fact in my old body, it was practically imposable to walk on all fours efficiently at all, so this just might take a while."
Luna smiled and walked towards the door, "come on, I'll show you around".
Drax clumsily waddled towards the door, trying his best to keep up with Luna's pace as she meandered around the castle, explaining all of its history and what historical significance it represented to the history of Equestria.
Drax, who was now starting to get the hang of walking in his new body, was now able to keep up with Luna and ask her questions about things and creatures that were unknown to him. Such as changelings, and manticores which Drax had never heard of.
The history lesson continued until a loud and clear clang of a bell was heard echoing throughout the castle.
"Uh oh" said Luna, "this may pose a problem."
"What is it, it docent sound like any alarm bell, or anything of that sort, whats the big deal?"
"Thats the dinner bell, and tonight its a royal feast. I don't know exactly how either Celestia or the rest of the castle staff is going to react to having a third allicorn in the castle"
"Why is that so bad, I mean your one of the royal sisters, why is having me here such a big deal?
"Well you see, this isn't any normal feast, this is the one where my parents and other relatives come in along with there most famous hero's of there nation. Its even more exclusive that the grand galloping gala, and my dad is well... overprotective".
"Wait a second, so your telling me, that your parents are still that overprotective of you?" said Drax
"Yes, and they are especially more protective of me than Celestia because I was banished to the moon for 1000 years and they feared that I would be hurt or something like that." said Luna
"That's just being a good parent Luna, anyone who's child was away for 1000 years would be concerned about them when they got back."
Luna facehoofed, and said "no no no you dont understand. He literally kept me in my own private hospital room for 5 days, running every test that they could possibly think of just to see if I had somehow caught a strange and unusual alien desease, and thats just the beginning of it. When I was a filly I could never have anypony over without papa going frantic and looking at there parents background. If even a single little thing came up about a criminal activity, he wouldn't allow them to come over."
"I know that that sounds bad, but don't you think he may have come to his senses now. I mean you are much older than you used to be, and he shouldn't have to rule your life." said Drax, who put his wing around Luna.
"I mean the only thing that I'm worrying about is where I'm going to hide when you go to this thing" said Drax
Luna turned to Drax with a quizzical look on her face "What do you mean, hide while I go to this thing, You are going too."
"What!, why? I mean I know I am an allicorn, but that doesn't really automatically classify me as a hero of equestria or royalty. Why in the world would I go?
Luna started to blush deeply, the deep red blush showing up like stars in the night sky upon her navy blue face.
"What is it Luna? said Drax,
"Well... I... you see....I...you..."
"What?"
"I kinda...well...."
Drax cocked and eyebrow, and tried to withdraw his wing from around the royal princess.
"WAIT!" exclaimed Luna, who promptly brought Drax's wing back around her, and brought herself closer to drax.
Drax was now really confused. "Ok what the hell is going on" he thought, "Luna, the younger sister of the two royal sisters of equestria is hitting on me after only knowing me for about 1 day. This cant be normal"
Luna took a deep breath in and said, "Ok Drax, first off I bet you think this to be very very odd, for you not knowing me for very long, but in actuality, I know you much more than you would expect. Only a very few non ponies are ever brought into equestria, and almost none of them survive the process of transforming into a pony that you wen through."
"Ok, I guess that means Im special or something, but what does that have to do with you knowing about me?"
"Well, remember how I was still awake after tia and I turned you into a pony?"
"Barley, but yeah"
That's the sign. There has been only one other time, when I was the one who was awake and tia was not. That stallion was the one who I loved over 2 thousand years ago. He was taken away from me... and It still hurts to this day. But then you came along. Almost exactly the same, just simply stronger and a bit taller. Other than that, the exact same pony.
"Hold on a second, are you saying that Im the reincarnation of an ancient pony?
"Well yes, that sums it up quite well, actually. said Luna, her blush turning even redder.
"Luna, why didnt you tell me this earlier?'
"Well, I... I honestly dont know. I guess I didnt wan you to get obsessed with your quest."
"Quest? What quest?" said drax, now even more confused than ever.
"I cant explaine now, but we need to get you dressed up for the feast.
sorry about the short chapters guys, I will try to update faster than I have been, and im really sorry for not updating more frequently.
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"So thats what happend." said Drax.
"Is that so?" said Celestia, with a sketpical look on her face. "Well if your so powerfull, I have a small test for you."
With that, a white glow enveloped both Celestia and Drax. When the light faded, he saw that he was being held up by magic tendrills which were the only think keeping him from falling into the lake... that was over 1000 yards away.
"you have got to be shitting me" said Drax, as the magical tendrils wove around his legs, lifting him up into the air and moving him above the cliff.
"Well, if you can survive those "nuke" things, than I don't think this will be a problem" Celestia said as she let him fall over the cliff.
Drax then began to plunge towards the ground, but it wasn't ground it was a lake... wait WHAT!!!
"fuck fuck fuck fuck FUCK" screamed Drax in obvious pain as his body smashed into the lake, the water flooding his augmentations.
14 min later
"Tia, I thing somethings wrong, He hasn't come back up yet" Luna said to her Sister.
"What, that's imposable." Celestia said as she looked over the cliff to see bubbles floating to the top of the lake's surface.
Celestia used her magic to grope around (click ) untill she found the body. She then teleported it back up and was shocked at what she saw. Drax, but his arms and legs were hainging limp, no movement, no mechanical whirring, nothing at all.
"GAHHH what the fuck was that about!" shouted Drax
"What just happened" said Celestia, a look of confusion on her face.
"Well you just FUCKED ME OVER!" said Drax
"What do you mean" said Celestia
"I told you, my arms and legs are augmented, they are not real, they use electricity to operate. When you threw me into that lake, that fried teh circuits. I'll be lucky if I can even move again." said Drax
really sorry for the freaking tiny chapter, Just wanted to let you know that there will be updates however they will be less common, but just wanted to let you all know that there will be some more updates soon (hopefully)
I made a few changes to chapters 8 and 9, be sure to check them out :D
"I thought that they would be able to survive water." said Celestia.
"Well, usually I can HOWEVER that damn lake is fucking deep, at least 2000 yards deep, these augmentations are only ment to withstand 1500 meters underwater."
"Is there anything we can do to help?" asked Luna
"I don't know, I have no idea how much damage my arms and legs have taken, if they are irreparable, the only option left is for me to not be able to walk or pick up anything again.
Luna turned and glared at her sister, with a look that pretty much said "what the fuck is wrong with you"
"The only other thing that I could see would be that you turn me into a pony." said Drax, jokingly.
Luna perked up at this "What a wonderful idea"
"Luna, you know that his arms and legs may still work" said Celestia.
"Well then what are we waiting for, lets check them" said Luna, as she levatated Drax up and started to carry him out of the main hall, and towards the research portion of the castle.
"Ok, so all we have to do Is put this solution, in this potion, and we should get a reaciton, but remember it will be violent so only put in one drop" said a researcher unicorn.
"steady, steady" said a researcher pegasus as he started to pour the solution into the other.
It was just at this moment when Luna barged into the room making the pegasus flinch, pouring the entire solution into the other.
"OH HORSEAPPLES! GET DOWN!" shouted the unicorn.
The following explosion left a cloud of green smoke in the room, and two coughing researchers who were now about to burst out in rage at the idiot who had just interrupted their experiment, when they looked up to see Princess Luna.
"What the bu... OH princess, I'm sorry, I thought you were some pony else, What do you need?" said the pegasus
"I need you to take a look at some things for me and tell me if they will work, Ok?
"Whatever you need" said the unicorn.
With that, Luna brought out Drax, opened up his augmented arms which operated via small hydraulic cylinders. The design was simple enough, however the researchers looked as if they saw Celestia's plot. They were in awe.
"WELL WILL THESE LIMBS WORK?"demanded luna in her royal canterlot voice.
"I...I wha... OH sorry Princess, however no, they will not work, you see these broken tubes here and here? With those broken, they will not work.
"Ok, thank you good sirs." said Luna. as she levitated Drax up and carried him away with her.
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Luna burst into her royal bedroom to find Drax still in bed but with both his hooves over one of his eyes which was very swollen and bloodshot.
"Where am I?" asked Drax when he saw that Luna had entered
"Equestria" she answered
"What in the hell is that?"
"Where you are right now"
Drax rolled his eyes flinching at the pain rolled out of bed and took one step and fell flat
"What the fuck is this shit!" screamed Drax
Luna who was now laughing uncontrollably at the sight in front of her collapsed and started to roll in a fit of laughter.
'Why can't I walk properly! What is this madness!"said Drax, in obvious distress.
"Well first of all you might want to get down on all four's instead of your hind legs, your a pony now not a human. When you try and walk like you used to you look like a mental ill clown who is on a bad acid trip." said Luna, who was trying to contain her laughter.
Drax took a few steps, now realizing that he needed to use all four legs instead of his usual two.
"Hey I think I'm getting the hang of this" said Drax.
"Great!" said Luna.
"Well, I can tell you don't want to hurt me, but Im just wondering, how in the hell did I get into this form. Its kinda concerning when one day your a human next day your a pony."
Luna chuckled and said "Well because of your injuries, the only options were to let you stay a human but lose the use of your arms and legs which were damaged beyond full operation, or transform you into a pony. Being that if you stayed a human you would probably die and also have a miserable life, my sister and I chose to change you into a pony."
"Well thank you for that... oh I'm very sorry, I forgot to ask what yoru name was"
"Its Luna, and thank you for asking, and I can assume yours is Drax?
"Correct, and you also mentioned your sister? What is her name?"
"She is Celestia, but I don't think she's in the mood to talk to anyone at the moment?"
"Why is that"
"Well long story made short, pretty much half the entire nation just saw her "royal" pussy."
"Um...I...ok then"
Luna laughed and said, "come on, you still need your rest, but I am very glad that I was able to talk to you"
"The pleasure is mine to be able to talk to you"
Luna blushed slightly and placed her horn on Drax's head and began to cast a relaxation spell.
"Don't resist, its a relaxation spell, it should help you get to sleep"
"Thank you" said Drax who once again slipped into unconsciousness.
Luna then levitated him up and placed him in her bed. "Now to go check on Celestia, and see how she's doing after the royal indecent" Luna said to herself.
Sorry for short chapter, wrote this during my free period at school :D