An Optimal Adventure
The journey of one brony as his values are satisfied with friendship and ponies, and his annoyed brother.
Two brothers, close as brothers can be. One a brony, having a history of playing MMO's, decides to try Equestria Online. The older brother has no interest and is instead annoyed by the whole "pony" thing.
Previous chapters are edited as well. Some minor things changed. Give 'em a look-see if you wish. Biggest change is that an ending has been added.
Author Note: After some research*, I've determined that the story takes place between 2015 and 2018, when emigration becomes free and when it becomes legal in the US.
* And by research I mean I looked at a timeline spreadsheet.
31822 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read
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10 Chapters:
- Prologue - The Unboxing 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1056
- Chapter I - Getting Started 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2369
- Chapter II - Names And Friends 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2767
- Chapter III - Teacher's Assistant 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3322
- Chapter IV - It's A Date!! 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3927
- Chapter V - Experiences And Aftermath 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC4980
- Chapter VI - Letting Go 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC4524
- Chapter VII - The Final Countdown 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3709
- Chapter VIII - Overtime 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3236
- Chapter IX - Homecoming 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC1932