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Out of place; inspired by the colab ponyfall

by TheObserver1231
My fav pony shows up out of the blue and gives someone a revamp to there life.

(Raw) = Chapter that I really need to change and fix. Don't be upset if they seem like crap. And please don't vote down off them, it's all in good context, in a way.

Clinton township Michigan,
your average suburban experience in the eastern parts of Detroit.
Just what happens when a person(or pony) from another world shows up. Things get interesting.
Let's see how Twi makes a change in one young mans rough go of life, and just what problems he can cause for himself. {First person}


**Edit: please don't vote down unless you have a valid why, I want to know.

* I will eventually go back and push chapters together so there aren't so many and they're not all short.

WARNING: Contains clop MUCH later on in marked off chapters. If you don't like it and just go on and dislike then you can just bugger off and reading something else you twat.

Complete
Sad
Romance
Comedy
Sex
Human
Gore
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
OT

69645 words: Estimated about 6 hours to read
Download:textHTMLePUB

71 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Welcome? 2012-09-21 00:16:00 UTC
    2187
  2. Chapter 2: Questions (Raw) 2012-07-22 04:57:11 UTC
    668
  3. Chapter 3: Answers, sort of (Raw) 2012-06-05 16:53:03 UTC
    956
  4. Chapter 4: Help (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:49:08 UTC
    738
  5. Chapter 5: What now? This (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:49:44 UTC
    815
  6. Chapter 6: A different route (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:50:27 UTC
    515
  7. Chapter 7: A story (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:50:45 UTC
    541
  8. Chapter 8: Condolences (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:51:04 UTC
    553
  9. Chapter 9: A drink and story time (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:51:21 UTC
    513
  10. Chaptor 10: Memories (Raw) 2012-08-24 23:00:13 UTC
    616
  11. Chapter 11: A brisk stroll (Raw) 2012-08-24 23:02:06 UTC
    1038
  12. Chapter 12: Long time, no see (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:53:38 UTC
    856
  13. Chapter 13: What to do? (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:53:52 UTC
    1266
  14. Chapter 14: Things just got interesting (Raw) 2012-05-18 21:54:08 UTC
    927
  15. Chapter 15: Discovery (Raw) 2012-08-30 05:43:10 UTC
    1083
  16. Chapter 16: "Hi, my is... 2012-05-18 21:56:10 UTC
    1392
  17. Chapter 17: A nice family dinner 2012-05-18 21:56:00 UTC
    883
  18. Chapter 18: Drive by! 2012-07-27 00:17:48 UTC
    1427
  19. Chapter 19: Holding out 2012-04-23 11:44:41 UTC
    771
  20. Chapter 20: Paying a visit 2012-04-24 01:02:53 UTC
    675
  21. Chapter 21: Intimacy 2012-06-05 18:34:15 UTC
    1325
  22. Chapter 22: "Probably should of locked it." 2012-04-26 00:55:14 UTC
    596
  23. Chapter 23: "This is nice." 2012-04-27 01:19:36 UTC
    901
  24. Chapter 24: "I do?" 2012-04-27 22:11:51 UTC
    1031
  25. Chapter 25: Manhunt 2012-04-29 12:23:37 UTC
    1003
  26. Chapter 26: Rule 63 2012-04-29 00:27:26 UTC
    868
  27. Chapter 27: Enjoying the day 2012-04-29 15:24:25 UTC
    699
  28. Chapter 28: Light reading 2012-04-29 18:32:08 UTC
    677
  29. Chapter 29: A learning experience 2012-04-30 01:34:05 UTC
    680
  30. Chapter 30: Back to the grind 2012-05-01 23:43:03 UTC
    475
  31. Chapter 31: Trying to enjoy the rest of the day 2012-05-01 23:56:31 UTC
    597
  32. Chapter 32: Breaking news 2012-05-02 21:18:29 UTC
    665
  33. Chapter 33: Plus one internet 2012-05-04 00:25:37 UTC
    638
  34. Chapter 34: Drink and forget 2012-05-06 03:14:12 UTC
    1189
  35. Chapter 35: A hellish nightmare 2012-05-05 03:26:49 UTC
    908
  36. Chapter 36: "Nice sleeve" 2012-05-05 18:35:56 UTC
    1106
  37. Chapter 37: That feeling 2012-05-06 12:46:42 UTC
    534
  38. Chapter 38: No turning back 2012-05-06 19:12:50 UTC
    1017
  39. Chapter 39: "I hate this place" 2012-05-06 20:38:12 UTC
    567
  40. Chapter 40: Stroke of luck 2012-05-07 19:19:34 UTC
    765
  41. Chapter 41: First date 2012-05-08 02:06:03 UTC
    712
  42. Chapter 42: Explanation 2012-05-08 11:29:13 UTC
    754
  43. Chapter 43: New equipment 2012-07-26 05:46:07 UTC
    710
  44. Chapter 44: Wild wastes 2012-05-09 21:55:52 UTC
    757
  45. Chapter 45: Flying a flag 2012-05-10 19:05:08 UTC
    1543
  46. Chapter 46: Forging an army 2012-05-10 20:35:48 UTC
    573
  47. Chapter 47: Spoken words 2012-07-03 00:17:43 UTC
    916
  48. Chapter 48: A real moment (WARNING: explicit) 2012-05-27 22:41:29 UTC
    3210
  49. Chapter 49: Twists and turns 2012-05-13 11:06:09 UTC
    1061
  50. Chapter 50: Retribution 2012-05-14 23:38:46 UTC
    691
  51. Chapter 51: Blind fury 2012-05-14 23:42:20 UTC
    1358
  52. Chapter 52: Going about the day 2012-05-14 02:16:02 UTC
    680
  53. Chapter 53: Cleaning up (Cloppy, sort of.) 2012-05-15 21:57:07 UTC
    914
  54. Chapter 54: Magic trick (WARNING: explicit) 2012-05-15 22:07:49 UTC
    1642
  55. Chapter 55: Family reunion 2012-05-15 19:24:25 UTC
    668
  56. Chapter 56: Gaining a friend 2012-05-16 02:08:30 UTC
    899
  57. Chapter 57: Being a brother 2012-05-16 22:17:55 UTC
    994
  58. Chapter 58: Decisions 2012-05-17 01:14:52 UTC
    786
  59. Chapter 59: Regrets 2012-05-17 19:53:30 UTC
    1042
  60. Chapter 60: Visitng 2012-05-17 22:06:06 UTC
    757
  61. Chapter 61: What I feel 2012-05-22 00:04:16 UTC
    1228
  62. Chapter 62: Taking a walk 2012-05-23 00:49:17 UTC
    820
  63. Chapter 63: Watching the sky 2012-05-24 00:24:56 UTC
    721
  64. Chapter 64 (Redo): Seeing gray. 2012-05-25 21:33:41 UTC
    885
  65. Chapter 65: Rennisance 2012-05-26 18:27:35 UTC
    1572
  66. Chapter 66: When in Florence 2012-05-27 17:15:29 UTC
    1773
  67. Chapter 67: Fight and flight. 2012-05-27 22:33:21 UTC
    933
  68. Chapter 68: "He needs work." 2012-05-28 20:13:49 UTC
    1795
  69. Chapter 69: Experimenting is magic (WARNING: explicit) 2012-05-31 10:58:39 UTC
    4530
  70. A start to something new 2012-05-29 21:31:09 UTC
    37
  71. Sequel time! 2012-06-03 13:24:13 UTC
    23